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Support #3
Support #2
Support #1
Conclusion Sentence
Introduction Sentence
Includes:
- Anchor Charts - Planning Pages - Rubrics for Student & Teacher
- And more!
c. 2012 Stephanie
Van Horn @ 3rd Grade Thoughts
Hamburger Paragraphs are a great way to explain to your
students how to write a clear, concise, and precise paragraph. I
have used this technique for years and think it lends itself very
well to the 5-paragraph essay they will write in later years.
Included in this packet are all of the resources you will need to
get successful paragraphing off the ground!
I begin by talking with kids all about hamburgers and their
favorite toppings. I tell them that my favorite kind is one with
lettuce, the burger and cheese (just like the illustration), and in
order to make it perfectly, I need to include all of the pieces
just right. The introduction sentence (top bun) gives readers a
“running start” into the piece, the three supports (lettuce,
burger, and cheese) are their to give strength (and flavor!) to
the paragraph, and the conclusion (bottom bun) ties the
paragraph up neatly at the end. Without the top or bottom bun,
my burger would be too messy and if it were missing anything in
the middle, it wouldn’t be tasty…. You get the idea
Included to help you are a large color and b&w anchor chart- I
post the color version and as we talk through it, I have the kids
color each layer in their b&w version.
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Conclusion Sentence
Introduction Sentence
Detail #3
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Support #3 Support #2
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Detail #3 Detail #2
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Introduction Sentence
There are three forms you can use to plan and I would
recommend using them in this way:
- Anchor Chart with titles only- This is a perfect place to
have kids gather words, phrases, feelings, and ideas
for the supports they will use in their writing.
- Anchor Chart with titles and lines- This is the place
where kids will work to construct their intro &
concluding sentences as well as the supports that their
paragraph needs. I typically model a lot using this slide
and have loads of extra copies on hand, especially at
the beginning of the unit.
- The blank hamburger is there for future needs or for
assessment purposes. I will use it to reteach when I
want kids to have an empty format to fill in, or if I want
to give a “Hamburger Quiz” and have them fill it in like
the anchor chart.
Introduction Sentence:
Conclusion Sentence:
Support #1:
Support #2:
Support #3:
Introduction Sentence:
Conclusion Sentence:
Detail #1:
Detail #2:
Detail #3:
Introduction Sentence
Conclusion Sentence
Support #1
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Detail #1
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Detail #3
The mini-hamburgers (in color and b&w) are available
for you to glue into the students’ writing folders,
notebooks, or journal. I find these are great reminders
throughout the unit and later in the year, especially
come test-prep time.
After kids have their plan in place, they can construct
their paragraph in their notebooks or journals or the
included lined page. When they finish, have them use the
included rubric to check their work to ensure all of their
planning parts made it into their final piece. A teacher
rubric is also included with a small comments section.
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Does my paragraph include:
- an introduction sentence?
- 3 strong Supports?
- a conclusion sentence?
- my best writing?
Hamburger Paragraph Rubric
Does my paragraph include:
- an introduction sentence?
- 3 strong Supports?
- a conclusion sentence?
- my best writing?
Hamburger Paragraph Rubric
Does my paragraph include:
- an introduction sentence?
- 3 strong details?
- a conclusion sentence?
- my best writing?
Hamburger Paragraph Rubric
Does my paragraph include:
- an introduction sentence?
- 3 strong details?
- a conclusion sentence?
- my best writing?
Hamburger Paragraph Rubric
Does this paragraph include:
- an introduction sentence? 4 3 2 1
- 3 strong Supports? 4 3 2 1
- a conclusion sentence? 4 3 2 1
- proper conventions? 4 3 2 1
Hamburger Paragraph Rubric
Does this paragraph include:
- an introduction sentence? 4 3 2 1
- 3 strong Supports? 4 3 2 1
- a conclusion sentence? 4 3 2 1
- proper conventions? 4 3 2 1
Hamburger Paragraph Rubric
Does this paragraph include:
- an introduction sentence? 4 3 2 1
- 3 strong details? 4 3 2 1
- a conclusion sentence? 4 3 2 1
- proper conventions? 4 3 2 1
Hamburger Paragraph Rubric
Does this paragraph include:
- an introduction sentence? 4 3 2 1
- 3 strong details? 4 3 2 1
- a conclusion sentence? 4 3 2 1
- proper conventions? 4 3 2 1
Hamburger Paragraph Rubric
Thank you so much for your purchase! I hope you and your students enjoy this activity as much as mine did
I used graphics and fonts from the following sources:
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All items are copyright protected and for single classroom use only. Thanks!
c. 2012 Stephanie Van Horn @ 3rd Grade Thoughts