It’s All About Phrasing

Job Application Letter Tips

Avoid NegativityI haven’t found it difficult to follow the school’s strict dress code and always present myself well.Problems with the above?

Alternate Version: I have always presented myself professionally, wearing my school uniform with pride.Successes of the above?

Avoid NegativityUntil now I have only had intermittent casual work.Problems with the above?

Alternate Version: I have had a number of casual positions in which I have learnt valuable skills.Successes of the above?

Avoid NegativityI’m not afraid of the challenge presented by Hair Care and I really enjoy working with one.Problems with the above?

Alternate Version: It is a fantastic opportunity to develop excellent hairdressing skills.Successes of the above?

Be 100% ConfidentI try to have a balanced life with school work, exercise and social activities.Problems with the above? (As Yoda would say, “Do or do not. There is no try.”)Alternate Version: I have a balanced life, giving my best to school work, exercise, and social activities.Successes of the above?

Don’t Sound DesperateI am really looking for a more permanent position as an apprentice hairdresser, and I hope your salon will help me start my career.Problems with the above?

Alternate Version: I am looking forward to embarking on a career in hairdressing, and your salon is a great starting point.Successes of the above?

Turn Negatives (that have to be stated) Into Positives

Often in Job interviews you are asked, “What’s one of your weaknesses?”Quality: Never gets work in on time.Answer: When I'm working on a project, if I’m forced to choose between meeting a deadline and delivering quality work I will always choose quality.Quality: Disorganised.Answer: Being organised isn't my strongest point, but I implement management systems that help my organisation skills.

Turn Negatives (that have to be stated) Into Positives

Quality: Control freak.Answer: I tend to be a perfectionist and take on tasks personally that could easily be delegated to someone else. Although I've never missed a deadline, I am teaching myself to know when to move on to the next task, and to assign work to others when necessary.Quality: Can only cope with one assignment per subject.Answer: I used to work on one project to its completion before starting on another, but I've learned I can be more creative and effective if I have multiple projects running at the same time.