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Learning to WRITE A GREAT THESIS STATEMENTGHSGWTSandra HurtteUnion Grove High SchoolJuly 2013To view this presentation, first, turn up your volume and second, launch the self-running slide show.2

WhatISTHESISaSTATEMENT?

Presentations are a powerful communication medium.

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The thesis is a contract between the writer and the reader. This one ruling idea that will be supported by the body paragraphs.The thesis serves as a plan for the writer.The purpose of the remainder of the essay is to prove the thesis to the reader. Presentations are a powerful communication medium.

4The thesis statement prevents the writer from just rambling on and on without a controlling purpose.Like thisBLAHBLAHBLAHBLAHBLAHBLAHBLAH

Your audience didnt show up to read your 60 page on screen dissertation.6

RULES FOR THESISSTATEMENTS4

Along the way weve discovered7

MUST restate the topicMUST BE the last sentence of the first paragraph

MUST pick a sideagree or disagree RULES4MUST be ONE sentenceIn lengthfive simple rules for creating world-changing presentations.8

MUSTBEsentence of theTHE LASTFirst Paragraph

The first rule is: Treat your audience as king.9The thesis statement is ALWAYS the LAST sentence in the introductory paragraph. This allows the writer to transition smoothly and easily from the introduction to the first body paragraph. RESTATETOPICTHE

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The next rule is: Help them see what you are saying.11FIND THE TOPIC

Writing Topic: In some countries, young persons (male and female) are required to serve two years of military service. Your state legislature is considering a similar policy in the United States that would require all high school graduates to serve two years of military service following high school graduation. What is your opinion on this issue?.YOU MUST RESTATE THE TOPIC IN YOUR THESIS STATEMENT

It is important to the safety of our country that state legislature immediately take steps to enact mandatory military service for high school seniors following graduation.

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The second rule is: Spread ideas and move people.14ASIDEPICKAnd STICK WITH IT! Dont waffle!Pick the side you believe you can BEST defendfor or against?Make sure you can come up with enough EVIDENCE to support the side you choose BEFORE you begin writing.YOU do not have to agree of disagree in REAL LIFEyou just have to convince the reader that you do.The thesis statement in a persuasive essay is ONE well-written sentence that restates the topic and chooses a side. Cell phone are used in restaurants.

The first example restates the topic but fails to choose a side AND is very weak.

The use of cell phone in restaurants must be banned immediately.

The second example restates the topic (cell phone use in restaurants), AND chooses a side (should be banned). SAMPLE THESIS STATEMENTSWriting Topic: The local school system is considering requiring high school students to wear school uniforms. They believe it will improve student attention, academic success, morale, and reduce violence. Write a persuasive letter to the local school board arguing either for or against school uniforms. Thesis (against school uniforms)BAD: Students should not have to wear them. GOOD: It is imperative that the local school system immediately dismiss current plans to force students to wear uniforms.Thesis (for school uniforms)BAD: I agree with the school system.GOOD: It is critical that the local school system take immediate steps to implement a much needed schoolwide uniforms policy for students. SAMPLE THESIS STATEMENTS

Writing Topic: Several local legislators believe that teen drivers should not receive a license before the age of eighteen. They believe that increasing the legal driving age to eighteen will reduce teen accidents and death rates. Write a persuasive newspaper article arguing either for or against increasing the legal driving age to eighteen. Thesis (against license before the age of eighteen)BAD: This idea is just ridiculous.GOOD: The local legislators must take immediate steps to ensure that a law preventing teen drivers from receiving a license until the age of eighteen is never enacted. Thesis (for license at the age of eighteen)BAD: I disagree with this opinion because students need their license.GOOD: A law preventing teen drivers from obtaining a license until the age of eighteen should be enacted as soon as possible.

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Rule number 4: Practice design, not decoration.22Do not exceed ONE sentence for your thesis statement.Begin your first body paragraph IMMEDIATELY after the thesis statement.A thesis STATEMENT is always a STATEMENTnever a question.

RULESLAST SENTENCE OF 1ST PARAGRAPHPICK A SIDEAND STICK WITH ITRESTATE THE TOPICMUST BE ONE SENTENCE IN LENGTH

RULESSo there are the rules.24

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