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Privacy and disclosure issues o Ask yourself whether or not to release such information o Whether to put the mentors against the mentees Ethics in communication o Whether or not you can be responsible Headings in business messages o In serifs or san serif fonts. There must be a distinction. Font for headings must be bigger than current font size, always choose to bold it. o Try not to use italic fonts (read corp comm style guide) Terms of address: employees versus colleagues etc o Colleagues: usually flat (in assesment 1) o Employees: top down Short sentences o Dangerous to use often o Have a mix of short and long sentences o Stop yourself from overusing a noun o Connect short sentences with “and” or “but” o Might be too choppy Subordinate clauses Misspelling o Commonly misspelled words: embarassment, occasion, government, judgement. o Misspelling diminishes your credibility (ethos) Tone o Avoid words with negative connotation Modal verbs

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Privacy and disclosure issues

o Ask yourself whether or not to release such information

o Whether to put the mentors against the mentees

Ethics in communication

o Whether or not you can be responsible

Headings in business messages

o In serifs or san serif fonts. There must be a distinction. Font for headings must be bigger than current font size, always choose to bold it.

o Try not to use italic fonts (read corp comm style guide)

Terms of address: employees versus colleagues etc

o Colleagues: usually flat (in assesment 1)

o Employees: top down

Short sentences

o Dangerous to use often

o Have a mix of short and long sentences

o Stop yourself from overusing a noun

o Connect short sentences with “and” or “but”

o Might be too choppy

Subordinate clauses

Misspelling

o Commonly misspelled words: embarassment, occasion, government, judgement.

o Misspelling diminishes your credibility (ethos)

Tone

o Avoid words with negative connotation

Modal verbs

Grammatical parallelism

o List that you use must start with the same form of word

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o For example, live life, play hard.

o Has got to be a pattern.

“You” to start every sentence

Wrong sender

o Affects credibility

o Check

Conciseness

o Remove clauses, reduce the length

o Free up space for more important things

o Eliminate redundancies and cliches (for example, I hope this email finds you well) too commonly used

o Use simple words, remove “love”, “very”, “really”

Prepositions

o Use appropriately

Singular and plural

o Look out for irregular plural forms as well as uncountable nouns

o Feedback is a noun not a verb

Using nouns and noun phrases to start a sentence too often

o Begin with adverbs

o Use conjunctions to connect your sentences

o Use cohesive devices, transition markers

o Try not to begin with a noun too often

o Vary sentence structure