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Make me feel alive emotions edit This edit is just lines I’d keep and lines I’d trash, or needs work Make me feel alive, make me feel alive a little now(x2) When the liquor stops, yeah the liver starts make me feel alive make me feel alive right now (x2) When the alcohol it hits so hard right now , But the confidence doesn't hit right like right now I break glasses on my skull, Can't make more Can't pay stones to the painted whore I'll pay the whore tomorrow Make me feel alive make me feel alive a little now (x2) When the liquor stops yeah the liver starts, make me feel alive make me feel alive right now (x2) Highlight the flaws, my friend Highlight the sun, the shadow and the end . Seed the neon lights and the cigarette smoke And the billboard shines to take me, but no I won't Cos friend this how we lose our confidence this is selfishness in a bottle This is how we lose our confidence This is selfishness in a bottle Make me feel alive make me feel alive a little now (x2) When the liquor stops yeah the liver starts, make me feel alive make me feel alive right now (x2) Make me feel alive make me feel alive a little now (x2) When the liquor stops yeah the liver starts, make me feel alive make me feel alive right now (x2)

Make Me Feel Alive

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This is an original song with lyrics. Its still a work in progress but I feel confident enough in it that it will please some of you poetically. It is my best work I must say, but I think it's pretty alright

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Page 1: Make Me Feel Alive

Make me feel alive emotions edit

This edit is just lines I’d keep and lines I’d trash, or needs work

Make me feel alive, make me feel alive a little now(x2) When the liquor stops, yeah the liver starts make me feel alive make me feel alive right now (x2)

When the alcohol it hits so hard right now, But the confidence doesn't hit right like right now I break glasses on my skull, Can't make more Can't pay stones to the painted whore I'll pay the whore tomorrow

Make me feel alive make me feel alive a little now (x2) When the liquor stops yeah the liver starts, make me feel alive make me feel alive right now (x2)

Highlight the flaws, my friend Highlight the sun, the shadow and the end. Seed the neon lights and the cigarette smoke And the billboard shines to take me, but no I won't

Cos friend this how we lose our confidence this is selfishness in a bottle This is how we lose our confidence This is selfishness in a bottle

Make me feel alive make me feel alive a little now (x2) When the liquor stops yeah the liver starts, make me feel alive make me feel alive right now (x2)

Make me feel alive make me feel alive a little now (x2) When the liquor stops yeah the liver starts, make me feel alive make me feel alive right now (x2)

Kiva, 07/11/15,
Needs work
Kiva, 07/11/15,
Almost but not there yet
Kiva, 07/11/15,
Best stanza so far
Kiva, 07/11/15,
Needs work but almost there
Kiva, 07/11/15,
This line ruffles my jimmies its really good
Kiva, 07/11/15,
This has some nice imagery and there is a nice idea here but ultimately just kind of a bad lyric