Make the criminals more horrible so the cold …Psyche Female psy-ops Catacomb Enterance 1, avenue du Colonel Henri Rol-Tanguy (place Denfert-Rochereau) 75014 Paris Chinese Type 85

Characters Plot points

Emma Kidnapee hires Emma and Chloe to kill his kidnappers from when he was a kid

Chloe They find the kidnapees and take them out

Kidnapee Discover that the leader escaped and is planning a big terror attack

Kidnappers Go after the terrorists

Big Terrorist Encounter SF team also going after terrorist

2nd in command

Spec Forc Leader

Plot Summary

Emma is hired to wipe out a kidnapping ring only to discover that they've moved on to much greater crimes.

With the United States government also chasing the criminals, Emma and Chloe race to stop the terrorists before

an entire city is destroyed.

Notable scenes

Kidnappers moved on to bigger jobs using money from original take Kidnapper 1 - US Meth lab

Catch the main kidnapper team fairly quickly but some get away Kidnapper 2 -

Kidnappee kidnapped again? Kidnapper 3 - dead in jail

One member of terrorist cell is informant Kidnapper 4 - Piatro

Bump into SF team hunting terrorists, confusion for a while

Exposed to nerve agent, have to take atropine

Drone strike wipes out next lead

Emma and Chloe are in a room searching for clues when the SF burst in, surrounded by bright lights.

Emma contacts an old flame in London for help finding the bomb. He works for Interpol

During date, flame points out the illegality of her job, wants her to work with him

Locations

Cayman - start

US / Mexico - terrorists cell

Afghanistan/Pakistan? - SF team

European City - Climax (Paris?)

Thoughts Writing notes

Short chapters Make the criminals more horrible so the cold-blooded killing is more justified?

Combat or action in at least every other chapter

Need action in beginning, or false expectation action?

How big is a Delta squad in action? As big as they need to be

Track the kidnappers by money transfers?

Chloe needs to be rescued?

Hunt kidnappers 1 by 1

Weapon is thermobaric (Fueled Air Explosive) in the catacombs under Paris

Final terrorist group is Paitro - Emad - Nicu - and four others

What are British arrest procedures?

Use Twitter for communication?

What ranks in a DF squad?

Look up catacombs in paris

Who are the French anti-terrorists? GIGN?

Thermobaric blast wave travels at 2 miles per second

New Recruits Meet in Pakistan

Hancock Dave Striker

Pudding Pat Bulldog

Psyche Female psy-ops

Catacomb Enterance

1, avenue du Colonel Henri Rol-Tanguy (place Denfert-Rochereau) 75014 Paris

Chinese Type 85 SMG uses 7.62x25mm

Make the criminals more horrible so the cold-blooded killing is more justified?

Character Sketch

Character Name: Emma Chapel

Nickname: "Frost Queen"

Birth Date/Place: London/UK

Character Role: Protagonist

Physical Descriptions

Age: 31

Race: Caucasian

Eye Color: Brown

Hair Color/Style: Brown, short

Build (Height/Weight): Athletic

Skin Tone: Pale

Style of Dress: Military, pants

Characteristics/ Cold, a little aloof

Mannerisms

Personality Traits: Calculating, determined to complete job, finds romance

distracting

Background: Grew up in London, started off as police officer, went

to special branch. Eventually became PMC. Was a

"Baghdad Babe" and escorted many high profile clients.

Single-handedly saved an oil-exec and destroyed the terrorist

cell trying to kidnap him. Recently grabbed a person of interest

in Afghanistan and nabbed larged bounty. Now off on her own

Internal Conflicts:

External Conflicts:

Occupation/Education: Business degree, trained in hostage negotiation/rescue

Notes: SAS training

Company name is Acute Completion

HQ is in a business park in Turks and Caicos

Uses Spartan Nyx combat knife

Used to work for Tactical Considerations

Shoots Glock 22 .40 S&W

Character Sketch

Character Name: Chloe Robinson

Nickname:

Birth Date/Place: Sydney Australia

Character Role: Support


Age: 29

Race: Caucasian

Eye Color: Green

Hair Color/Style: Dark red/Short

Build (Height/Weight): Athletic, slightly tall

Skin Tone: Pale, freckled

Style of Dress: Comfortable

Characteristics/ Outgoing, cheery to an extreme

Mannerisms

Personality Traits: Likes to look on the bright side, loves puzzles, tries to

bring out the fun side of Merc. Makes bad decisions on

occasion in regards to having fun

Outgoing and makes friends easily

Background: Started in the Australian army in intelligence. Met Merc in

Afghanistan and hit up a friendship. When Merc went to PMC,

she joined her as her handler/support. Now is her partner

in their new venture

Internal Conflicts:

External Conflicts:

Occupation/Education: Hacker, tech, and communications expert.

Notes: Also good at analysis

Wrote a program called Catnip that searches the worlds

intelligence databases.

Likes to snack on M&Ms

Can speak Spanish

Shoots Astra A-75 .40 S&W

Character Sketch

Character Name: Tyler Westbury

Nickname:

Birth Date/Place: Chicago, IL

Character Role:


Age: 21

Race: Caucasian

Eye Color: Brown

Hair Color/Style: Brown

Build (Height/Weight): Average

Skin Tone: Tan

Style of Dress: Expensive

Characteristics/ Has a nervous mannerism, hands always moving.

Mannerisms

Personality Traits: Used to getting his way. Not unintelligent, but not smart

Tormented by his ordeal but doesn't want to show it.

Background: Father wealthy man. He's kidnapped when he was 12. Ransom

was paid and he was returned, mostly unharmed.

Now that he is 21 and has some of his father's money, he

wants revenge

Internal Conflicts: Will killing those who kidnapped him, finally put the demons

to rest?

External Conflicts:

Occupation/Education: Business Degree from Yale.

Notes:

Character Sketch

Character Name: Piatro Kolas

Nickname:

Birth Date/Place: Belarus

Character Role:


Age: 45

Race: Eastern european

Eye Color: Gray

Hair Color/Style: Black

Build (Height/Weight):

Skin Tone: White

Style of Dress: khakis and jacket

Characteristics/

Mannerisms

Personality Traits: Methodical planner. Used to always being right. He tries

to deal with any eventuality.

No one is allowed to stand in his way and everyone is

expendable for the cause.

Background: What he saw during the fall of communism made him sick. He

feels that only he can force people to see the futility of their lives.

Created his own terrorist group and financed by kidnapping. His

first big score was the kidnapee

Internal Conflicts: No one can see the true light. No one can appreciate that he

is right.

External Conflicts: Hunted just while he ready to show the true way via chem bomb

Occupation/Education:

Notes:

Character Sketch

Character Name: Emad Ansari

Nickname: Saudi Arabia

Birth Date/Place:

Character Role:


Age: 29

Race: Arabic

Eye Color: Brown


Build (Height/Weight): Slight

Skin Tone:

Style of Dress: Western

Characteristics/

Mannerisms

Personality Traits: Doesn't believe in main guy's cause, but definitely believes

in the results. Wants to learn from him and use it

to further his religious ends

Background: Iraqi devout. Hated the double standard the leadership had

with all the western decadence behind the scenes. Wants

to turn the country to relgious rule.

Internal Conflicts: Furthering a cause he doesn't believe in.

External Conflicts: Anti-terrorist squads


Notes:

Character Sketch

Character Name: Nicu Tarus

Nickname:

Birth Date/Place: Romania

Character Role:


Age: 23

Race: Caucasian

Eye Color: Blue

Hair Color/Style: Brown

Build (Height/Weight): Skinny

Skin Tone: Pale

Style of Dress: jeans and old t-shirts

Characteristics/ Quiet, a little nerdy

Mannerisms

Personality Traits: Good with electronics, script-kiddy type hacker.

Background: Fell in with bad guy. Originally believed in the cause, but

now enjoys the pleasures money can bring. Is informing on

the bad guy, but cannot take the stree much longer

Internal Conflicts: Can he keep secret that he is an informant?

External Conflicts: Threatened from both inside the group and from others hunting

the group down.


Notes:

Character Sketch

Character Name: Hershel Jordan

Nickname:

Birth Date/Place:

Character Role:


Age: 38

Race: African American

Eye Color: Brown


Build (Height/Weight): Strong, muscley

Skin Tone:

Style of Dress: Military

Characteristics/ All business

Mannerisms

Personality Traits: The mission is paramount and whatever it takes to complete.

Kind of the "good guy" version of the bad guy

Background: Member of Delta Force. Tracking down terrorist squads around

the globe

Internal Conflicts: Trying not to become the monsters he hunts

External Conflicts: Terrorists gunning for him and his squad


Notes:

Old Flame

London police or MI5 (or is is DI5)?

Lawrence Andrews

Kidnappers

1. Jimmy Gavette Meth dealer in Miami

2. Reggie Morris Gang leader in Chicago

3. Billie Sears Dead in prison

4. Piatro Mexico

General Setting Sketch

Name of Setting:

Characters Living in the

Region/Time Period:

Year or Time Period:

Season:

City and State:

Notes:


Name of Setting: Mexican city, Villa Garcia

This is where the kidnappers/terrorist cell are tracked to

It is a small rural house attached to a farm

A small airstrip can be found nearby. This is how the main

guy gets away


Region/Time Period:


Season:

City and State:

Notes:


Name of Setting: Pakistan.

Terrorists base of operations. Protected by village.

Building among the mountains.


Region/Time Period:


Season:

City and State:

Notes:


Name of Setting: London

Piatro heads here to capture Emma and Chloe and learn

why they are after him.


Region/Time Period:


Season:

City and State:

Notes:


Name of Setting: Paris

Head terrorist and 2nd in command will detonate a chemical

bomb here. Have to run around Paris trying to find it and

deactivate it.


Region/Time Period:


Season:

City and State:

Notes:

Plot Sketch

Story Goal: To avenge the kidnapping of Tyler. Discover larger plot against

the city of Paris.

Romance Thread: Emma had to confront an old flame for help in Paris

Subplot Threads 1: Kidnapee finds revenge doesn't help him

2 Informant tries to get out

3 Piatro trying to get others to see he can "help"

4 Emad struggles with helping Piatro, a cause he doesn't believe in

5 SF leader fears becoming what he is hunting

6 Chloe gets in the field, needs to expand company

7

8

9

10

Additional:

Plot Tension:

Romantic/Sexual Tension:

Release:

Downtime:

Black Moment:

Resolution:

Aftereffects of Resolution:

82 Main Subplot A Subplot B Subplot C Subplot D Subplot E Subplot F Subplot G Subplot H Subplot I 75-80

Scenes

Find kidnappers

/ discover plot

Stop chemical

attack

Emma deals

with her

romantic past

Kidnapee finds

revenge doesn't

quiet his demons

Piatro trying to

get others to

understand his

motives

Emad struggles

with helping

Piatro

Informant tries to

leave terrorist

group

DF Leader fears

becoming what

he is hunting

Chloe gets in

the field and

realizes they

need to expand

Put terrorist

plan together

Compl X X X X X X X X X X

1Hired to find

kidnappers 1

Get out of jail

52

Contacts flame

in London for

help 38

Tyler visits grave

of kidnapper 3 4

Emad comes to

Piatro for

training 3

Emad tries to

gather Piatro's

contacts for

himself 13

Chloe contacts

him 18

Harsh

interrogation of

Emma 29

Convince Emma

to let her enter

field to find

kidnappers 6

Contact

Russians for

bomb parts 16

2Research case

file. Kidnapper 3

dead 2

Try to

determine what

the plan is 55

He wants to

rekindle

romance, she

doesn't 39

Tyler posts

message on

facebook

threatening

Piatro 11

Piatro describes

his motives,

debates Emad

9

Emad confesses

to his superior

his

respect/disgust

with Piatro 31

Befriends/flirts

with him 24

Harsh

interrogation of

Chloe 30

Chloe helps out,

saving Emma 8

collect parts,

attacked by DF,

escape 20

3track kidnapper

1 (meth head in

Miami) 5

Informant tells

Chloe plan 57

He tries to

convince her to

get out of the

business 41

Facebook post

discovered by

informant 15

Piatro shows his

plans to Emad

(impressed) 25

Emad walks

away from

Piatro 69

Gets information

from him 26

DF member

points out that

leader is

becoming bad

32

Emma helps

Chloe

escape/deal

with DF 34

Discover Emma

and Chloe are

after him 21

4track kidnapper

2 7

Discover the

target is Paris

58

Emma starts to

fall for him

again 43

Kidnapped in

Paris 66

Piatro tracks

down Emma

in London 40

Pinpoints the

target as Paris 54

Hershel decides

to trust Emma

and Chloe, even

though he

shouldn't 35

Chloe takes out

terrorists who

kidnap her,

Tyler, and Nicu

78

Use unrelated

terrorist cell to

attack them 45

5

Track Piatro to

mexico 10

Piatro lures

Tyler to Paris

59

They go on a

date 44

Flashbacks from

kidnapping.

Chloe snaps him

out of it 72

Piatro tries to

explain to Chloe

49

Chloe gets him to

meet her 60

Emma points DF

team towards

remaining

terrorists in

CDG 68

Chloe tells

Emma they

need to expand

their personnel

82

Visits Chloe in

holding cell

threatens her

50

6Piatro escapes

with help of

Emad 12

Emad attacks

them, terrorists

chase 62

Piatro sets her

up 47

Tyler realizes

that he must get

over it internally

74

Piatro tries to

explain to

Emma 51

Emad follows

them 61

DF attacks

terrorists, no

bomb 75

Move team to

Paris begins to

execute plan 56

7Research Emad

14

Car chase in

Paris 63

He arrests her

48

Captures

informant 64

Discover Emad

is missing,

corner him 76

8Get a hit in

Pakistan 17

Terrorists

captured, Emad

triggers car

bomb 65

Emma walks

away from him

53

Rescued.

Informant goes

clean (or goes to

jail)? 79

9

Travel to

Pakistan. Do

they continue?

19

Tyler,

Informant,

Chloe all

captured 67

Emma pleads

with him to

save Tyler and

Chloe 71

10Find hut/village

where Emad is

22

Piatro contacts

Emma (save

friends or city)

70

11Drone strike

wipes out

village 23

Gas pumped

into catacombs

73

12Get another

lead 27

Emma tells

Piatro she's

disabled his

bomb 77

13

Emad's gone

but DF storms

and captures

Emma 28

Enraged they

meet in

catacombs.

Knife fight 80

14Gain trust of DF

33

Emma wins

fight. Saves

Paris 81

15

Questioned by

DF, learn there

is a bigger plot.

36

16Ping on Piatro

in London 37

17Chloe tracks

Piatro in

London 42

18Attacked by

terrorist cells in

London 46

80 Scene Subplot

1 Hired to find kidnappers

2 Research case file (kidnapper 3 dead)

3 Emad comes to Piatro for training

4 Tyler visits grave of kidnapper 3

5 track kidnapper 1 (meth head in Miami)

6 Convince Emma to let her enter field to find kidnappers

7 track kidnapper 2

8 Chloe helps out, saving Emma

9 Piatro describes his motives, debates Emad

10 Track Piatro to mexico

11 Tyler posts message on facebook threatening Piatro

12 Piatro escapes with help of Emad

13 Emad tries to gather Piatro's contacts for himself

14 Research Emad

15 Facebook post discovered by informant

16 Contact Russians for bomb parts

17 Get a hit in Pakistan

18 Chloe contacts him

19 Travel to Pakistan. Do they continue?

20 collect parts, attacked by DF, escape

21 Discover Emma and Chloe are after him

22 Find hut/village where Emad is

23 Drone strike wipes out village

24 Befriends/flirts with him

25 Piatro shows his plans to Emad (impressed)

26 Gets information from him Get another lead

27 Emad's gone but DF storms and captures Emma

28 Harsh interrogation of Chloe

29 Harsh interrogation of Emma

30 Emad confesses to his superior his respect/disgust with Piatro

31 DF member points out that leader is becoming bad

32 Emma helps Chloe escape/deal with DF

33 Gain trust of DF

34 Hershel decides to trust Emma and Chloe, even though he shouldn't

35 Questioned by DF, learn there is a bigger plot.

36 Ping on Piatro in London

37 Contacts flame in London for help

38 He wants to rekindle romance, she doesn't

39 Piatro tracks down Emma in London

40 He tries to convince her to get out of the business

41 They go on a date

42 Emma starts to fall for him again

43 Chloe tracks Piatro in London

44 Use unrelated terrorist cell to attack them

45 Attacked by terrorist cells in London

46 Piatro sets her up

47 He arrests her

48 Piatro tries to explain to Chloe

49 Visits Chloe in holding cell threatens her

50 Piatro tries to explain to Emma

51 Get out of jail

52 Emma walks away from him

53 Pinpoints the target as Paris

54 Try to determine what the plan is

55 Move team to Paris begins to execute plan

56 Informant tells Chloe plan

57 Piatro lures Tyler to Paris

58 Chloe gets him to meet her

59 Emad follows them

60 Emad attacks them, terrorists chase

61 Car chase in Paris

62 Captures informant

63 Terrorists captured, Emad triggers car bomb

64 Kidnapped in Paris

65 Emma points DF team towards remaining terrorists in CDG ??

66 Tyler, Informant, Chloe all captured

67 Piatro contacts Emma (save friends or city)

68 Emma pleads with him to save Tyler and Chloe

69 Flashbacks from kidnapping. Chloe snaps him out of it

70 Gas pumped into catacombs

71 Emad walks away from Piatro

72 Tyler realizes that he must get over it internally

73 DF attacks terrorists, no bomb ??

74 Discover Emad is missing, corner him ??

75 Emma tells Piatro she's disabled his bomb

76 Chloe takes out terrorists who kidnap her, Tyler, and Nicu

77 Rescued. Informant goes clean (or goes to jail)?

78 Enraged they meet in catacombs. Knife fight

79 Emma wins fight. Saves Paris

80 Chloe tells Emma they need to expand their personnel

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Make the criminals more horrible so the cold …Psyche Female psy-ops Catacomb Enterance 1, avenue du Colonel Henri Rol-Tanguy (place Denfert-Rochereau) 75014 Paris Chinese Type 85