Mother's Days - Draft 03

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    Mothers Days (NO LIP-SYNC REQUIRED)

    Autumn - Raining : Colour palette reds, browns

    Long shot of a car driving along the seaside - model car along the coast (CG).

    Car : Son driving, Mother in passenger seat. We see them from the front (as if the camerais attached to the bonnet) We see him normally with a concentration on his face for driving,and we just see her eyes and hair as she is short. He pulls over (parks) and they sit therefor a moment.

    Camera cuts to the sea / beach while sound effects give the impression they are strugglingto get out of the car - son unfolding wheelchair etc

    They sit under one of the beachs sheltered benches (typical seaside bench - light blue,metal), its raining, the mother happy and the son blank. We hear the rain stop, then after amoment has passed the son then gets up and walks off camera, he comes back with 2 ice-creams. As he stands giving one to his mother, his ice-cream is held out slightly to the sideof him, out of his peripheral vision, a seagull which is sitting on the canopy to the benchpoos on the ice-cream without him seeing. We continue to see him sit down next to hismother (in her wheelchair) he stares into the sea (off camera) for a moment, then withoutlooking at the ice-cream goes to lick it. CUT.

    Winter - Icy / Snowy : Colour palette blues, whites

    Shot of a shop sign with snow and icicles, its clearly winter and cold, baron. Sound effectsof a car stopping and them struggling to get out again.

    The mother wrapped up in her winter clothes with a blanket on her legs, Tinsel around herhead and flashing christmas lights on her somewhere, looking happy, and a cup of teafrom a flask (steam). The son wrapped up and looking unhappy out at the sea. They are

    sat on the same light blue seaside bench.

    The mother suddenly gives signals to the son indicating she needs the bathroom.Next shot - Outside the public toilet cubicle with sound effects (he has to help her go to thebathroom) and the metal seat is cold. (Teeth chattering, running wee sounds)

    CUT back to her back at the bench and the son walks back into frame with some nice hotfish and chips. They sit there quietly enjoying their meal - representing quiet peacefulmoments of time together.

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    Spring - Still a bit chilly : Colour palette Greens - spring colours

    Daffodils in some borders, with the car sound effects (Cut a bit shorter)

    They are both sitting on the bench, with her empty wheelchair to the side. They sit therelooking at the scenery in front of them for a little while. Theres a carrier bag on the bench

    next to him, he pulls out a stick of rock, unwraps it and gives it to his mother. We cut to ashot of him sitting there, then his mother passes the stick of rock back to him, he goes toput it in his mouth then just before he does looks down and jumps once he sees hismothers dentures clamped around it. CUT

    Summer - Sunny : Colour palette oranges, yellows

    Usual sound of the car pulling up, camera focused on a beach windmill stuck in the sand.

    CUT to the son sat on the bench, usual established shot. He sits on the bench thinking fora while, we see all the very subtle gestures of somebody thinking, lots of sound effects ofpeople around him enjoying the beach and the weather while he sits there basking in thesun with his eyes closed, then he looks to his side (off camera) where his mum sits andsmiles faintly. He gets up from the bench, the camera cuts to further away, revealing hismum isn't there with him. He walks off, then cut to the view of a shiny In Memory Plaqueon the bench that was not there in the previous seasons.

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    Mothers Days

    Simple Scene Breakdown

    Autumn- Seagull poo on ice-cream

    Winter- Flask with tea (Calm content moments)- Toilet : Cold seat- Fish and Chips (Calm content moments)

    Spring- Stick of Rock : Dentures

    Summer- Son visits alone. Sits on the same bench thinking, remembering....

    - When he gets up there is an In Memory Plaque[Sound effects of a lot of people around, yet this guy is so alone. These people dont knowabout all of the moments we have just seen.]