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220179206 D G Tharindu(OORA200) Case study
report.pdfby Tharindu Dushyantha Dewalegama Gamacharige
Submission date: 08-Jun-2019 05:01AM (UTC+1000)Submission ID: 1141162019File name:140127_Tharindu_Dushyantha_Dewalegama_Gamacharige_220179206_D_G_Tharindu__OORA200__Case_study_report_1493901_43837586.pdf(127.39K)Word count: 2987Character count: 18379
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220179206 D G Tharindu (OORA200) Case study report.pdfGRADEMARK REPORT
GENERAL COMMENTS
Instructor
Tharindu,
You have written an excellent Case Study whichapplied the OORA200 principles very well. You alsodemonstrated deep crit ical analysis in your answer.
I'm not sure if you were experiencing technicalissues, but more proof reading was necessary priorto submission. This assessment contained f ar toomany errors f or an assessment at this level.
Overall an excellent assessment containing toomany errors.
Darin
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nor, or
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by the provision
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evaluating the above
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chronic diseases and nutrit ion related health issues.
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involving the community.
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success.
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service. A merely technical person
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conf irms the
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The organisation of this section is not always logical and sequential.
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at an optimal
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keep the
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risks the project
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ref lect on how the project chose the communities
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I'm not completely sure what you wanted to say in this sentence.
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of a projects success
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For example, the project f ocus ....
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that have
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have benef ited
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need the
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and be less costly.
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should not be a low priority in order to ensure
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Use of non-Aboriginal tradespeople could also have a lower or less posit ive ef f ect on theproject overall.
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KNOWLEDGE OF TOPIC
Demonstrate knowledge of issues identified in learning outcomes LO 1-6 - 40% of total mark
ARGUMENT AND ANALYSIS
Demonstrated ability to interpret and apply knowledge in practicalcontext LO1-6 - 40% of total mark
REFERENCING
Referencing follows the APA referencing guidelines - 10% of total mark
STRUCTURE AND PRESENTATION
GRADING FORM: CASE STUDY
THARINDU DUSHYANTHADEWALEGAMA GAMACHARIGE
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Very good knowledge of the OORA200 content wasdemonstrated
Excellent analysis throughout, although some ideascontradicted others.
Referencing was of an excellent standard overall.
Structure, Presentation and clarity of expression - 10% of total mark
Numerous errors were evident throughout.