Josh-“They need more costume changes.”

Harry-“They should fill in the blank spaces and add more locations.”

Josh-”The editing on the beat is really good.”

John-“You could develop the storyline a bit more.”

“We decided to add some lip syncing parts to complete the video and add a wider variety of costumes and locations.” – Conor Smithson

“We used more on beat editing and we think that it was really effective. We did this by zooming in on the mask on the beat and with lights flashing on beats.” – Dale Lawrence

We added another layer to the storyline by involving the singer with the mask, as he finds it at the end off the video and wears it and this makes the video more interesting.” –Andy Williams

“We re-edited the establishing shot of the train tracks to make it cut on the beat, this vastly improved the video.” – Conor Smithson

“We added in a lead singer who varied up the contents of the shots a bit more.” – Dale Lawrence

“We decided to take some shots in a forest to add variety to the background imagery, hooking the viewer.” – Andy Williams

Josh-“I think it could have been clearer who the main character was because it wasn’t really clear and it could have been clearer.”

Rufus-“I think the on beat editing looked really good and was really effective.”

Josh-“I think the lip syncing looked really professional.”

Sam-“Yeah there was a large variety of shot types, which kept the video interesting.”