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Run-ons. Dr. Karen Petit. A Definition of a Run-on. A run-on is a sentence with its ideas incorrectly joined together. Readers might break up the ideas in the wrong place(s). Fixing a run-on will result in better idea connections and less confusion. Run-ons as Confusing. - PowerPoint PPT Presentation
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Run-ons
Dr. Karen Petit
A Definition of a Run-on
A run-on is a sentence with its ideas incorrectly joined together.
Readers might break up the ideas in the wrong place(s).
Fixing a run-on will result in better idea connections and less confusion.
Run-ons as Confusing
Run-ons can confuse readers and make ideas difficult to understand.
Here is an example of a run-on:A lack of correct connections is confusing readers will have to figure out where each idea begins and ends.
Here is an example of a revision:A lack of correct connections is confusing. Readers will have to figure out where each idea begins and ends.
Is a Run-on a Long Sentence?
A run-on can happen in long or short sentences.
A run-on has at least two clauses that are incorrectly attached to each other.
The length of a run-on’s clauses do not change the wrong connection between the clauses.
Two Kinds of Run-ons
1. A fused sentence is a run-on:No punctuation can be confusing to help readers who have to figure out where to pause and where to stop the punctuation should be correct.
2. A comma splice is also a run-on:When a full stop is needed, a slight pause from just a comma can still be confusing, to help readers, who have to figure out where to pause and where to stop, the punctuation should be correct.
This sentence is correct:A full stop is needed after the word “confusing.” To help readers, who have to
figure out where to pause and where to stop, the punctuation should be correct.
A Fused Sentence
A fused sentence has two independent clauses, no connecting words, and no punctuation.
Clause 1 Clause 2
Subject Verb Other word(s) Subject Verb Other word(s)
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missing connectionmissing connection
A Comma Splice
A comma splice has two independent clauses, no connecting words, and incorrect punctuation: a comma.
Clause 1 Clause 2
Subject Verb Other word(s) Subject Verb Other word(s)
Classes are interesting, learning can be fun for everyone.
wrong connectionwrong connection
Revision Methods
To revise a run-on, people can connect the two independent clauses together by using:A periodA semi-colonA semi-colon and a conjunctive adverb or a transitional phraseA comma and a coordinating conjunctionA subordinating conjunction
Revision with a Period
Run-on:
William Butler Yeats was a poet he was born in Dublin.
Revision:
William Butler Yeats was a poet. He was born in Dublin.
Revision with a Semi-colon
Run-on:
William Butler Yeats was a poet he was born in Dublin.
Revision:
William Butler Yeats was a poet; he was born in Dublin.
Revision with a Conjunctive Adverb or a Transitional Phrase
Run-on:
People like to read poetry out loud the sounds will be more noticeable.
Revision:
People like to read poetry out loud; then, the sounds will be more noticeable.
consequently finally for example however in fact moreover on the other handthen therefore thus . . .
Revision with a Comma andCoordinating Conjunction
Run-on:
People like to read poetry out loud the sounds will be more noticeable.
Revision:
People like to read poetry out loud, so the sounds will be more noticeable.
f o ra n dn o rb u to ry e ts o
Revision with a Subordinating Conjunction
Run-on:
People like to read poetry out loud the sounds will be more noticeable.
Revision:
People like to read poetry out loud because the sounds will be more noticeable.
after although as as ifbecause before even even though if since though unless until what when where while . . .
A subordinate clause can be placed at the beginning, middle, or ending of a sentence.A subordinate clause can be placed at the beginning, middle, or ending of a sentence.
Revision:
Because the sounds will be more noticeable,, people like to read poetry out loud.
Punctuation with Subordinating Conjunctions
When a subordinate clause is at the end of a sentence, most of the time, there is no punctuation.
People like to read poetry out loud because the sounds will be more noticeable.
When the subordinate clause is at the beginning of the sentence, then a comma is needed to separate the two clauses from each other.
Because the sounds will be more noticeable, people like to read poetry out loud.
More Information
The Writing Center at the Community College of Rhode Island has more online resources.
Contact Information
This presentation is the creation of
Dr. Karen Petit
Community College of Rhode Island
400 East Avenue
Warwick, RI 02886
E-mail: [email protected]
Phone: 401-825-2279
