tableau by elena lie

neutral position

soft focus & eyes looking forward

feet apart

chin brought up high

shoulders apartthe width from one person to another is not the same

first and second person from the left should switch to make it easier to change to the neXt position

first frame

good demonstration of depthshows levels

focus point of the frameuneven width from one

person to another

hair covers face = no face

eXpressions shown

looking at the camera = not convincinggood attempt to create depth

could have been a more unique posture

second frame

good use of levels

contact point

facial eXpression is not convincing

hidden facial eXpressionmust turn 45 degrees to the

camera

could have added a lower level

actions of lower body part too repetitive

great choice of position of pointing to prevent masking

last frame

interesting use of contact pointgood facial eXpressionsi wish the hair would

not cover the face

good contrast and levelsIt would make the tableau more interesting with weight taking

this should move 45 degrees to the right to prevent masking

focus point