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TAKING NOTICE
They were known throughout the school to be extremely close friends. The crew
consisted of James, Peter, Morris, Mark and Derrick Altman. They had all met their
freshman year and since then, they rarely went anywhere without one another. They looked
out for each other as though they were family and they allowed no one to come between
them.
Rose came into the picture at the beginning of their sophomore year. She met
Morris in his science class, the two bonded and he brought her to the crew so she could be
included into the fold. Morris thought they would be excited about having a girl in the
group, especially since she shared a lot of the same interests as them.
The boys had mixed feelings immediately. While Morris and Derrick didn’t have
an issue, Peter, Mark and James brought up the fact that it would look suspicious around
school that there was one girl in a group of boys. High school gossip was the worst and
they wanted to be sure that should they bring Rose in, her reputation would not be
tarnished or dragged through the mud.
Mark was the most vocal about it, stating that there was more than just gossip to
worry about. He felt that it wasn’t a good idea to have their resolve tested by having a girl
in the crew. Should anyone of them become attracted to her and attempt to date her it
would lead to the crew breaking up. But the other guys didn’t feel that would happen. None
of them looked at Rose as a potential girlfriend but they understood Mark’s concern. So
they decided to let Rose hang out with them for a week to see if anything around school or
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“Yea, I just felt like coming in early.” Rose took her book bag off, then her coat
before taking a seat next to him. “Hungry?”
“Yea,” he said as he put the book down. “This will be a first that I get a chocolate
donut before Mark grabs them all up.”
“I bought extras of those,” Rose said as she opened the box and let him take one.
“Catching up on some reading?”
“Mhm.” Derrick nodded as he chewed and Rose opened an orange juice for him. “I
didn’t quite understand the chapter on. . . . What is that smell?”
Rose looked at him curiously. “What smell?”
Derrick turned in her direction and looked at her. He sniffed the air, then leaned in
and sniffed at her neck.
“Are you wearing perfume?”
“Yea. I borrowed some from my older sister,” Rose said.
Derrick sniffed again. “You don’t usually wear perfume do you?”
“No. I just thought I would try some. I liked the smell of it.”
Derrick smelled her again. “It’s nice.”
Rose smiled and scooted closer to him. She watched him eat a little more before she
leaned on him shoulder to shoulder.
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“That was crazy what happened yesterday,” she said.
Derrick looked at her curiously. “What happened yesterday?”
“That incident with Justin Kramer at lunch.” Rose looked at him. “What you said to
him and how you almost got into a fight.”
Derrick swallowed. “He disrespected you so I had to put him in his place.” He
wiped the donuts crumbs off his hands. “You’re one of the crew. I was looking out for
you.”
“Yeah, but you got up in his face about it.”
Derrick took a swig from the juice bottle. “Damn right I got up in his face. Well he
called you a –”
“Want another donut?”
“Sure.” Derrick took another donut from the box. “He had no business calling you a
heifer. It’s not polite and you’re not even fat.”
Rosa sat up and turned her body slightly to him. She tucked her long black hair
behind her ear and smiled.
“You don’t think so, huh?”
“No way you’re fat,” Derrick said before eating the donut. “You got a nice shape
on you. He’s an idiot.”
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Derrick was very nonchalant in his statement about her figure. He was simply
complimenting her, but Rose was sure it also meant that he had been checking her out. He
didn’t notice that Rose was smiling big at him. Derrick kept eating the donut.
Rose put the box of donuts down and stood up. “I’ll be right back.”
As Rose started to walk away she put a little switch in her step hoping he would
notice. Derrick watched her walking away. She looked back, smiling. Derrick was
watching her but he wasn’t noticing that she was switching. He was actually enjoying the
smell of her perfume that was now lingering and he smiled back.
Rose turned the corner and covered her mouth as she started to giggle. She jumped
up and down with excitement, then she quickly calmed herself down. She took a deep
breath, exhaled slowly, then walked back around the corner with a simple smile on her
face. She sat back down closer to Derrick and put the donut box in his lap.
Derrick smiled and started to take another donut when Rose put her head on his
shoulder and nuzzled him. Derrick turned to look at her and caught a whiff of her hair. It
smelled like the beach; a combination of the sea and coconuts.
“Your hair smells nice. Smells like the beach,” he said.
“Thanks,” Rose said, smiling.
“You okay?” he asked.
“Mhm,” she said. “You know I thought you were going to hit him.”
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“Hit who? Oh, na, I mean it didn’t call for that.” Derrick started to take a bite of the
donut. “Okay maybe I should have slapped him.”
“Lemme see your hand for a minute,” Rose said.
Derrick held out his hand and Rose put her hand in his. His hand saw just slightly
bigger than hers and she admired that. Derrick looked at her hand.
“You have small hands,” he said.
“Not that small.”
“Lemme see something.” Derrick took his fingers and closed them in-between hers.
“My hand is pretty big, huh?”
“Yep,” Rose replied, then she closed her fingers around his hand and held it.
They kept their hands in that position for a moment, then Derrick dropped his hand
to his side. Rose didn’t let go. He could feel her tighten her grip and he didn’t protest. Rose
nuzzled him a little more. Derrick finished the donut and turned to her again.
“Your hair really smells nice,” he said as he smelled it again.
“Glad you like it,” she said softly. She moved her body closer to him. “It’s so quiet
right now.”
“That’s why I come in early. I just like to sit alone and either read or take time to
think.”
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“Oh,” Rose said. “So, I’m not bothering you by being here am I?”
“No.” Derrick shook his head. “Why would you think that?”
“Just asking,” she said. She tilted her head back and her nose brushed his cheek. “I
can see why you like having some alone time.”
“Everyone needs it,” he replied, then he looked at her. “It’s cool that you’re here.”
“Really?”
“Yea, I never just get the chance to hang with you.”
“You think about hanging with me?”
“Yea, sometimes. Nothing major. I mean I hang with the guys all the time you
know,” he replied. “How come you’re here so early anyway?”
Rose lifted her head and looked into his eyes. “Honestly? I wanted to surprise you.”
“Me?”
“Yes.”
“With the donuts?”
“Not really.”
“So, you wanted to surprise me by showing up early?” Derrick asked.
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Rose realized at that moment that Derrick was unaware she was flirting with him.
She squeezed his hand she was holding and lowered her eyes a little.
“Maybe,” she said lowly, then she looked back into his eyes.
Derrick stared at her for a moment. He looked like a deer caught in headlights. He
could feel his entire body getting warm as Rose took her leg and placed it over his
outstretched leg and leaned in more to him. Derrick had never had a girl flirt with him
before so he wasn’t clear on what she was doing or trying to do.
He looked down at her leg on his and noticed she was wearing her skinny jeans. His
eyes traveled up to her hip, then up to her face. Rose smiled at him.
“Uh,” he swallowed hard to moisten his throat. “I um–”
“Thanks for speaking up for me yesterday,” Rose said tenderly, then she bit her
bottom lip slightly. “I appreciate it.”
“I didn’t do anything that the others wouldn’t have done,” he said nervously.
“I don’t think the other’s see me as a girl like you do,” she replied.
“They know you’re a girl.”
“Mmhm,” she said softly. “They know I’m a girl that hangs out with them. But you
notice that I’m not just one of the guys.”
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Derrick felt his body heat up from the rush of affection. Rose slowly repositioned
herself and sat on his lap. She broke the kiss briefly to look at him and caress the side of his
face. They didn’t say a word. Their eyes spoke for them. The sudden discovery of their
feelings and the realization that the connection between them was happening made Rose
kiss him again, but more passionately.
With her lips locked around just his upper lip, she slowly pushed the tip of her
tongue out and glided it across the top of his lip.
Derrick felt a huge rush in his chest, like a dam breaking and the gentle water
behind it rushing out. He slowly parted his bottom lip and pushed his tongue out and glided
it against her bottom lip.
Rose sighed, wrapped her arms back around his neck and made her tongue meet
his. Slowly rotating her tongue around his she then kissed him deeply and the hairs on the
back of his neck stood up.
Derrick pulled her closer and kept kissing. After a moment, he broke the kiss and
looked at her. Suddenly he realized that he was kissing one of the members of his crew. He
was about to let her go when she smiled. That’s when he saw Rose the girl. He was
suddenly aware of the shape of her body in his arms. The softness of her lips lingered on
his and his desire to feel them again made him lean in and kiss her again.
Rose rubbed her nose against his and smiled.
“Did you like that?” she whispered.
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“Mmhm,” she said. “You checked me out enough to know I’m not all the terrible
names I was called.”
“You’re a sweetheart. I just–”
“I’m a sweetheart?”
Derrick looked at her and smiled. “You’re beautiful, Rose. Really beautiful.”
Rose kissed him again then hugged him.
Derrick hugged her back, his eyes closed as his mind filled with visions of Rose in
the park with him and the guys a week before. They were all on the bench talking. Rose
was leaning against him laughing at a joke Morris told. He remembered how nervous he
felt with her leaning on him. No, it wasn’t nerves, it was guilt. Guilt for liking the fact she
was leaning on him. He opened his eyes and broke the embrace.
“I have to get up,” he said.
Rose stood. Derrick used the lockers to get up. His legs felt weak, but he was able
to stand up fine. He fixed his shirt at the same time Rose did, then they looked at each
other. He was only an inch taller than her. Derrick’s eyes moved down to her hips again
and he took hold of them. He pulled her into as she put her arms around his neck once
more. Without hesitation he pulled her into him and kissed her passionately.
Out of the silence came a gasp followed by the sound of a bottle breaking. Rose and
Derrick broke the kiss quickly and turned in the direction of the sounds.
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“Hey! Shut up!” James screamed.
Mark sighed, then he marched over to his locker and opened it without saying a
word. He looked at Derrick and Rose as they slowly broke their embrace.
Morris moved next. He walked over to Rose, handed her the daisies, then shuffled
over to his locker. Finally James and Peter joined them. Peter went straight for the donuts
and ate happily while James whispered something to Mark.
After several moments of silence, Morris slammed his locker door and stormed off.
James ran after him, screaming for him to stay calm.
“I didn’t know,” Rose said to Mark.
“It was inevitable,” Mark said. “I knew something was up after the whole thing in
the lunchroom. I saw it in your eyes when Derrick came to your defense.” He shook his
head. “Doesn’t matter how much we tried to deny it, I knew someone in this group was
going to fall for you. Or worse, you fall for one of us. You never let a girl come between
your boys.” Mark looked at Rose. “But if you like each other, nothing should stand in the
way of that either. Better we find out like this than through some nasty rumor. Lemme go
talk to Morris and see if I can get him to calm down.”
“Should I say something to him?” Derrick asked.
“Dude, silence is foo. Let us handle this,” Mark said.
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Mark closed his locker and walked around the corner. Rose started to follow, but
Derrick held her back and shook his head. He held her in his arms and she wrapped her
arms around his waist.
“So,” Peter said. “Does this mean no more donuts in the morning?”
©Copyright 2012 Marc L Abbott
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