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Personal Narratives Page 1
The Balance Rope At Jozi-X
Alex Bade
21st September
We were walking around jozi-x when we saw the balance rope. Jozi-X is a place with a lot of
jumping castles and with fun rides. The weather was a bit cold but the sun was shining. We
went to the balance rope and waited in line I told my brother and cousin that I was nervous “I
am nervous “when it was my turn my brother and cousin told me good luck “good luck Alex”
so I climbed up a ladder and onto a platform. I felt nervous because it was pretty high up.
When I started I knew I wouldn’t make to the end. My brother and cousin looked nervous for
me.
There were cushions at the bottom so if you fall off you wouldn’t hurt yourself. When I was
half way I fell off into the soft cushions. The cushions felt soft and they were made out of
rubber and blown up, they felt a bit sticky. The jumping castle was big and had a ladder going
up and then a platform on the right and then another platform on left so if you made it you
would be on the platform but the other side had no ladder going down so you would have to
jump off or go to the other platform.
When I got out of the cushions my brother Niklas and my cousin Fabian were waiting for me
at the bottom then my brother went up the ladder and onto the platform and my cousin and I
were waiting for him at the bottom when my brother was half way he also fell off into the
cushions when my brother got out of the cushions my cousin went up then my cousin started
walking. When my cousin was half way he fell off. We all made it half way! At the end I
congratulated them “good job guys”. We met someone that was German and he was really
good at balancing he made it to the end with first facing forward and the rest backwards!
Then he went on the rope again but this time doing lunges but he only made it half way .It
was fun going on the balance rope.