The Naughty List#researchpaper2015

Do not have floating quotations

INCORRECT: On Johnny’s first night away from his home, he is frightened. “He had to survive, had

to be hard, had to watch, had to plot and plan, had to study each person he met”(Meyers 57).

CORRECT: On Johnny’s first night away from his

home, he realizes “to survive [he] had to be hard, had to watch, had to plot and plan, had to study

each person he met”(Meyers 57).

Practice Practice: Imbed the following quote……

“I do not know the man” (123). –Said by John Smith

Do not announce This proves the thesis… This quotes says….

Please capitalize your words Capitalize the first words of sentences and lines of

traditional poetry. Capitalize the first word of a direct quotation, if it is a

complete sentence. Do not capitalize a direct quotation if it is a sentence fragment.

Capitalize the pronoun I. Capitalize the first, last and all other important words

in titles, including verbs; but not conjunctions, articles, or prepositions with fewer than five letters.

Capitalize North, South, East, and West when used as sections of the country, but not as compass directions.

Do not capitalize names of seasons.

Practice

1. my friend asked, “when are you leaving?”

2. we are driving north to canada this spring.

3. on the nightstand, i saw a copy of a book called

traveling to the end of time.

Don’t Use Contractions Can’t= can not Wouldn’t= would not He’s= He is Shouldn’t= should notThere’s= There is

Practice I can’t think about what he’s doing.

Don’t use 1st or second person I, you, my, we, our shouldn’t be in this

paper at all! Use: the reader, one, etc.

Punctuating In-text citations

Thoreau believes that "a true patriot would resist a tyrannical majority" (23).

Eisenhower admits in retrospect that Sputnik created two problems: the "near hysteria" of the American people and the need "to accelerate missile and satellite perspectives" (211).

Have a Works Cited page-This should be the last page of your essay, on it’s own page.-You should have 4 sources listed on this in alphabetical order.-This should be Times New Roman 12, double-spaced.

Have a hanging indent for the works cited page

Bradbury, Ray. “The Veldt.” The Illustrated

Man. New York: Random House

Publishing. 1951. Web. 12 Jan. 2010.

Have a thesis statement (Please) Your thesis should be well constructed

and have your author, title, theme, and devices included in it.

It should be the last sentence in your introduction!

Have enough quotes Minimum amount of quotes for this

essay:

3 from your primary source6 from secondary sources (3 separate sources total, you can break them up however you want)

Spell my name correctly It’s on your schedule….and on

turnitin.com where you are turning it in. Wyllie (not Whylie, Willie, Wylie, Wiley,

etc)

Do not start sentences like this: And Because But

Do not summarize the plot You need to write your essay under the

assumption that the reader (me) has read your novel. Do not regurgitate what happens in the novel, analyze why it happens and how it depicts the theme you are discussing.

Titles of books should be italicized, articles should be in quotations “Analysis of The Scarlet Letter” The Scarlet Letter

Be sure to reference texts appropriately, i.e. do not call Hamlet a novel. Literary criticism articles are articles, not novels.