Subject: English Primary School

Teacher: Ms Comerford

Lesson: 8

Title: The Writing Process

8.0 Learning Intentions

Today we will learn

• The steps involved in the writing process and what each one is all about.

• Revising key aspects involved in the writing process including effective brainstorm,

planning and sentence structure.

• To edit sentences and short paragraphs in your writing.

8.1 Imperative Verbs

8.2 Brainstorming Examples

8.3 Who , What , When , Where , How

8.4 Revising vs Editing

8.5 Revising Activity

8.6 Editing Marks

8.7 Ideas for Publishing

Editing Checklist

Capitalization

Did I capitalize?

● names

● I

● beginning of a sentence

Usage

Does it make sense?

She was hilly.

She was happy.

Punctuation

Did I use punctuation?

. ? ! , “ c”

Spelling

Are my words spelled correctly? Use your resources:

1. Word Wall

2. Dictionary

3. Have a Go Sheet

Spaces

Do I have spaces between my words?

8.8 Editing Checklist

8.9 Editing Activities

the gardean angle

the angle was yelow and golden it had siver wings and a prety dres it floted on a litle white clowd up in the sky the angle watchd over the girl as she sleeped in her cozy warm bed

the girl woked up suddenly and she looked at the pretty angle on the clowd I shall mak a wish the gril wisperd to herself the girl new that the angle would make it come tru

halloween is my favrit holliday it is my favrit

holliday becus i like dressing up as a sceary

creacher and scareing my family. i also enjoy the

candy i get wen I go dorr to dorr and arsk for

treets. sometimes my neighbours play scaery music

and it makes me feel fritened but I still like doing

it. what is your favrit holliday