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TEACHING READING USING THE “JIGSAW TECHNIQUE” SPECIAL ISSUE: THE TUNISIAN REVOLUTION English Teaching Forum The The Magazine For And By EFL Teachers In Tunisia And Abroad TUNISIAN Issue 5 April 2011 INTERVIEW Larry Ferlazzo talks about his famous “Websites of the Day” blog, the Family Literary Project, his two recent books and more... DO RULES RULE? By Steve Peha Learning to Punctuate with Real Books Not Rule Books. PRODUCT AND PROCESS WRITING By Belgacem Hamdi TEACHING VOCABULARY AND GRAMMAR THROUGH SONGS AND CHANTS By Noamen Amara READING VS THE INTERNET By Faten Romdhani PROCESS AND PRODUCT WRITING IN THE EFL CLASSROOM By Hechmi Hamdi

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Page 1: The Tunisian ELT Forum

Teaching reading using The ldquoJigsaw Techniquerdquo

SPECIAL ISSUE

THE TUNISIAN REVOLUTION

English Teaching Forum

The

T h e M a g a z i n e F o r A n d B y E F L T e a c h e r s I n T u n i s i a A n d A b r o a d

TUNISIAN

I s s u e 5 A p r i l 2 0 1 1

inTerviewLarry Ferlazzo talks about hisfamous ldquoWebsites of the Dayrdquo blog the Family Literary Projecthis two recent books and more

do ruLes ruLeBy steve PehaLearning to Punctuate with Real Books Not Rule Books

ProducT and Process wriTingBy Belgacem hamdi

Teaching vocaBuLary and grammar Through songs and chanTsBy noamen amara

reading vs The inTerneTBy Faten romdhani

Process and ProducT wriTing in The eFL cLassroomBy hechmi hamdi

Editorrsquos note

Mohamed Salah AbidiTeacher Trainer and eLT inspecTor in The area of sidi Bouzid Tunisia

Tunisians have struggled for their dignity and liberty and the spark of the revolution which started in the area of Sidi Bouzid has opened doors for human beings in the Arab countries and all over the world to dethrone the dictators who deprive them from elementary rights Like everybody in the country we have been concerned with what has been going on in our country and we postponed the publishing of this issue to a more appropriate time Now we think it a happy moment for the magazine to reappear and open its pages to free pens and help in the development of critical thinking which we believe is the corner stone of any reliable teaching In this issue we read two articles on product and process writing one by an ELT Inspector Belgacem HAMDI and the other is by a Senior EFL Teacher Hachmi HAMDI Steve PEHA president of TTMS focuses on one of the mechanical aspects of writing punctuation and suggests a new approach how to teach it The contribution of Noaman AMARA a Tunisian teacher in the Gulf is an article on teaching grammar and vocabulary through songs and chants Added to all this wealth of ideas Tarek BRAHMIrsquos special guest in this issue is Larry FERLAZZO who will necessarily make an addition to the pedagogical valise of any reflective teacher Tarek has also considered the teaching of reading and shares ideas on the technique of ldquoJigsaw readingrdquo with the readers of this issueMme Faten ROMDHANI EFL Teacher in the area of Nabeul and a friend of the forum and the magazine writes an elegant article about the importance of reading in an era when the reign is for the Internet rather than the paper book We havenrsquot forgotten to include some visuals in this issue to show the beauty of Tunisia and illustrate some demonstrations of our people during the revolution of December 17th 2010

Mohamed Salah Abidi

Contents

Editorial Review Board

Mohamed Salah AbidiGraphic Design

Tarak BrahmiThe Tunisian English Teaching Forum is a free quarterly magazine

Any copyrighted articles appearing in The Tunisian English Teaching Forum are reprinted with permission of the copyright ownersTo be considered for publication manuscripts should be typed on a floppy disk or CD that has been virus-checked

Letters floppy disks or CDs should be sent to Mohammed Salah AbidiLrsquoInspecteur drsquoAnglaisLycee Tahar HaddadRegueb 9170Sidi BouzidTunisie

or e-mailed to medsahagmailcom

For guidelines for writing articles and the latest news and notifications please visit our blog herehttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

TUNISIANEnglish Teaching Forum

The

Meet our special guest Larry Ferlazzo on page 18

14Process and Product writing in the efl classesA practical application of process writing inside the EFL classroom

HECHMI HAMDI

30

tarak brAHMI

teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquoHow to teach reading using the jigsaw technique

BELGaCEM HAMDI

Product and Process writingContrasting two popular approaches and examining how both can be used in the classroom

4

interViewLarry Ferlazzo talks about his great blog ldquoWebsites of the Dayrdquo the Family Literary Project and his two new books

18

StEVE PEHA

do rules ruleThinking about whether we should follow rules or follow language toward meaning when learning or teaching punctuation

12NoaMEN AMArA

teaching Vocabulary and grammar through songs and chantsAdvantages and limitations

8

22 reading Versus the internetIs the internet ldquokillingrdquo or boosting reading

FatEN rOMDHANI

4 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 January 2011

TEACHING WRITING

By Belgacem Hamdi ELT Inspector

There have been several approaches to teaching writing They have evolved with the development of different approaches to language teaching in general In spite of methodological changes writing continues to be an extremely challenging task for the teacher and learner of English As a basic language skill for EFL learners writing should be well thought of In this article I will describe and contrast two popular approaches and examine how both can be used in the classroom hoping this can help our students to develop their writing competence

Product aPProach

THE PRoDuCT APPRoACH is a traditional approach to teaching writing in which students are provided (with) a model and encouraged to mimic it in order to produce a similar productFor various reasons the product approach usually appears an extremely daunting task The main focus of this approach has always been on the final product writing is a tool for the practice and reinforcement of specific grammatical and lexical patterns accuracy being all-important whereas content and self-expression given little if any priority Basically students were lsquowriting to learnrsquo and not lsquolearning to writersquo

Process aPProach

It is clear that the process approach evolved in an era of change in which

conventions were challenged and reliance on form and conventions questioned Vanessa Steele defines the process approach as focusing more on the varied classroom activities which promote the development of language use brainstorming group discussion re-writinghellip Tribble defines the lsquoprocess approachrsquo as lsquoan approach to the teaching of writing which stresses the creativity of the individual writer and which pays attention to the development of good writing practices rather than the imitation of modelsrsquo (Tribble 1996 p160) The process approach considers writing as a creative act which requires time and positive feedback to be done well In this model the teacher needs to move away from being a marker to a reader responding to the content of studentrsquos writing more than the form

Product and Process WritingWHICH APPRoACH To usE

ldquostudents were lsquowriting to learnrsquo and not

lsquolearning to writersquo rdquo

ldquoThe process approach considers writing as

a creative act which requires time and positive

feedback to be done wellrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

In process writing the focus shifts from the final product itself to the different stages the writer goes through in order to achieve this outcome By breaking down the task as a whole into its constituent parts writing becomes less daunting and more manageable to the EFL studentStage 1First students generate ideas by brainstorming and discussion second they extend ideas into note form Then they organize ideas into a mind map spidergram or linear form This stage helps to make the relationship of ideas more immediately obvious which helps students with the structure of their texts At this phase the teacher provides only language supportStage 2Students write the first draft This is done in class and frequently in pairs or groups Stage 3Drafts are exchanged students become the readers of each otherrsquos work By responding as readers students develop an awareness of the fact that a writer is producing something to be read by someone else and thus can improve their own draftsStage 4Drafts are returned and improvements are made based upon peer feedback Stage 5A final draft is written Stage 6students once again exchange and read each otherrsquos work and perhaps even write a response or reply

The process in lsquonot linearrsquo but lsquorecursiversquo as in Tribblersquos words lsquoat any point in the preparation of a text writers can loop backwards or forwards to whichever of the activities involved in text composition

they may find usefulrsquo (Tribble 1996 p 59) Therefore it allows for great flexibility Writing is no longer a laborious activity if process-writing approach is adopted in the language classroom This model alleviates most of the problems associated with this skill and turns the writing class into an interesting and communicative experience Furthermore using this approach at lower levels is not only feasible but also backs the language learner up to become a talented writer in English There is a clear distinction between process-oriented and product-oriented writingNunan (2001) clearly states how very different this ldquoprocessrdquo approach is from the traditional product-oriented approach Whereas the product approach focuses on writing tasks in which the learner imitates copies and transforms teacher supplied models the process approach focuses on the steps involved in creating a piece of work The primary goal of product writing is an error-free coherent text Process writing allows for the fact that no text can be perfect but that a writer will get closer to perfection by producing reflecting on discussing and reworking successive drafts of a text James Mccrimmon sees it as the difference between writing as a way of knowing (process) and wring as a way of telling (product) donald Murray sees it as the difference between internal and external revision (revising in order to clarify meaning for oneself vs revising in order to clarify meaning for the reader) Linda Flower sees it as the difference between writer-based and reader-based prose

a coMParisoN oF Product aNd Process aPProaches

ldquoProcess writing allows for the

fact that no text can be perfect

but that a writer will get closer to perfection

by producing reflecting on

discussing and reworking

successive drafts of a textrdquo

Product Processbull Model text to be imitatedbull Emphasis on organization of ideasbull one draftbull Emphasis on end productbull Teacher as audiencebull Teacher as authoritybull Importance of teacher-corrected papers

bull Model text as resource for comparisonbull Emphasis on ideas and idea development bull Multiple draftsbull Emphasis on processbull Various audiences according to type of

writingbull Peer feedback as valuable toolbull Importance of conferencing and interactive

feedback

6 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

TEACHING WRITING

Which aPProach to use

The approach to use will depend on you the teacher and on the students and the genre of the text Certain genres such as formal letters and postcards in which the features (layout style organization and grammar) are fixed lend themselves most often to a product-driven approach The other genres such as discursive essays and narrative lend themselves to process-driven approaches

coNcLusioN

I believe that the two approaches are not necessarily incompatible Like the product approach the Process-centred one

does not repudiate all interest in the product (ie the final draft) Both aim at achieving the best product possible Consequently it is obvious that using aspects of both models may be the most effective approach in teaching writing as Nunan (1999) reaffirms ldquothere is no reason why a writing program should not contain elements of both approachesrdquo

ldquoThe approach to use will

depend on you the teacher

and on the students and

the genre of the textrdquo

What are the Pros aNd coNs oF each aPProach

Prosbull Easy to use with large classesbull Easier to grade because emphasis is on

formbull useful approach when form is importantconsbull Does not teach how to write independentlybull Does not teach how to thinkbull Does not make writing a manageable and

intentional activitybull Limits creativity and demotivates the

learner

Prosbull Helps novice writers develop skills to write

on their ownbull Encourages a thoughtful approach to

writingbull Helps develop thinking skills and learning

strategiesbull Helps writers to own their writing processcons bull Can take more time to teach bull Need to be sure that writer does not make

process explicit in writing itselfbull Can make classroom more challenging for

the teacher

ldquousing aspects of both models

may be the most effective

approach in teaching

writingrdquo

8 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

IN VARIous CouNTRIEs IN THE WoRLD the curricular of teaching English to young learners often emphasize the use of songs and chants This is simply because children love them and they can be both used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a very funny and engaging way Besides they can help children improve their oral skills However some researchers believe that listening and repeating a number of words or sentences are not enough for the learner to acquire a new language Thus it important for us to know how a teacher can make sure that language acquisition is taking place in hisher young learnersrsquo classroom particularly with respect to oral communication As teachers of young learners we are often advised or trained to integrate songs or chants in our teaching Besides our studentsrsquo books usually contain listening scripts either of songs or chants Thus according to scott and Ytreberg (1990) the majority of English teachers

throughout this world have used songs for one teaching purpose or another What makes chants and especially songs frequently used is that they have specific features First of all ldquosongs are highly memorablerdquo and ldquohighly motivatingrdquo (Davanellos 1999 13) as they create a joyful and interesting classroom atmosphere and they break up with the routines of the daily lesson secondly I have myself realized quite often that my third year primary students became very motivated while repeating the same introductory part of the ldquoHappy streetrdquo song at the beginning of each unit Thirdly I noticed that even weaker students enjoyed repeating the highly rhythmical verses while the CD player was on In addition they feel they are participating with their best peers at least in one activity of the lesson- that is the warming up- while smiling and tapping on their desks

By Noamen Amara Teacher of English

Young learner classes often have fun songs and chants that are repeated Children love them and they can be used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a fun and engaging way These can be very useful for improving studentsrsquo oral skills however ldquoWhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo (Slatterly amp Willis)

ldquoAs teachers of young learners we

are often advised or trained to integrate

songs or chants in our teachingrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

ADVANTAGEs AND LIMITATIoNs

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Hence you can see that children enjoy the funny and merry atmosphere of songs and chants as they can learn by listening and repeating chunks of language Also songs can be useful for improving the learnersrsquo oral skills by listening and repeating what they hear

on the contrary slatterly and Willis emphasize that ldquowhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo This is in part true since when students just repeat chunks of language in a mechanical way without being aware of what they pronounce we can not say that learning is taking place In other words students in this case are just like parrots repeating sounds that they hear while being unaware of the message implied in the sounds that they utter Besides we can not talk about language acquisition or learning without necessarily referring to the mind So according to Arnold (2005) listening turns out to be ldquoan active processrdquo only if ldquothe mind actively engages in making meaningrdquo Thus as teachers we have to make sure that the listening material that we use in our lessons matches the studentsrsquo level because according to Krashenrsquos view acquisition canrsquot take place unless the input is ldquocomprehensiblerdquo(1981 6-7) In this context Brewster Ellis and Girard (2002) point out that ldquoif someone is giving you a message or opinion then of course you have to be able to understand it in order to respondrdquo Thus decoding the message into a ldquocomprehensible inputrdquo is vital in the acquisition or learning process Whenever there is a listening activity I usually make my best to ensure that my students manage to understand the listening passage through various ways and extra material that you will see The foreign language acquisition can take place through various ways during the teachinglearning process For example I often guide my pupils in the pre-listening activity to understand the keywords either through realia or flashcards or visuals Also scott and Ytreberg suggest (1990 34) ldquousing puppets or a class mascotrdquo as useful materials because they can be of great help

while ldquopresenting new language orallyrdquo For instance a parrot puppet can whisper into a studentrsquos ear give instructions or tell a story to the whole class Besides I always advise my young learners to use their background knowledge of any subject at hand in order to understand what the listening passage is about For instance my fourth-year students rely on their pre-requisite knowledge of science andor social studies to listen to the song entitled ldquoAmazing Animalsrdquo and match each section with the right ldquomilieurdquo where each animal lives Thus by relying on the teacherrsquos extra material and their background knowledge of the subject matter young learners often manage to understand the listening passage which they use later either for memorizing new vocabulary answering questions or consolidating pronunciation of new phonetic sounds While implementing the lesson plan songs and chants as listening materials can be used for various purposes and in any of the three stages of a lesson pre-stage while stage and post-stage As a good example of using a chant in the pre-stage in my junior class my young learners listened to and repeated a chant entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo so as to be familiar with the body parts while I was showing them the flash card of each member at the appropriate section So using the flash cards helped my pupils better understand the new lexical items of the body parts while listening to the chant In the while stage my students were asked to listen to a song about the same topic and act The song was centered on a set of activities based on Total Physical Response (TPR) where children listen and touch the body part(s) At this stage the teacher should make sure that hisher students understand the new vocabulary by responding appropriately to the song and touching the right body member(s) At this point I need to mention that before each listening activity the teacher should ldquoguidehellip[hisher studentsrsquo] attention to specific parts of the spoken textrsquo so that the learners will be aware of the purpose of and the rationale behind the listening activity as I did

ldquoWe have to make sure that the

listening material that we use in our

lessons matches the studentsrsquo

levelrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

Noamen AmaraTeacher of English since 2001bull 2001-2006 teaching in Tunisian schoolsbull 2006-2010 teaching in the Kingdom of

Bahrainbull teacher trainer for the CAPEs trainees

in the school years 2004-2005 2005-2006

bull Participation in an e-teacher scholarship Program at the university of Maryland Baltimore County usA entitled ldquoTeaching English to Young Learnersrdquo from January the 14th to March 24th 2010

For a more detailed profile of Noamen Amarahttpteachingenglish-alexenoamenblogspotcom200901noamen-mahfoudh-amara-curriculum-vitaehtml

10 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

In this framework Donaldson (1978) says that children need to know the lsquopurposes and intentionsrsquo which they can recognise and respond to This is simply because if the students are not aware of the reasons behind the listening activity they will not pay much attention to the content and if they try to do so their focus will be shattered by the lack of a reasonable motiveListening can also take place at the post-stage For example at the end of the first lesson entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo my students were asked to listen to the child talking about his body parts in detail while they have to point to each part whenever it is mentioned and then say it again At this stage the teacher should monitor and see whether hisher students are pointing to the right member and naming it appropriately or not If not she can help the weaker students by listening again and repeating until she makes sure that the students master thatIn the follow up activity each student was asked to come in front of his peers and identify each of his following body parts eye nose hair ear and mouth Before the activity takes place I gave a model for my students to follow by pointing to and naming each of my body parts Thus students became more motivated and were enough confident to speak in front of their peers and refer to themselves In case of errors the other students were willing to correct their classmate(s) in a very funny and tolerant atmosphere To sum up I can say that songs and chants are very useful materials in the classroom of young learners since they create a cheerful and amusing atmosphere Besides children love to learn while playing or listening to music Yet as slatterly and Willis emphasize listening to chants or songs and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo are not enough to say that language acquisition is taking place Thus the teacher should make sure that herhis students really understand what they are saying otherwise they will be just repeating mechanically chunks of language without involving their minds and feelings

references

Arnold W (2005) Listening for Young Learners httpblackboardumbceduwebappsportalframesetjsptab_id=_2_1ampurl=2fwebapps2fblackboard2fexecute2flauncher3ftype3dCourse26id3d_52891_126url3dBrewster J Ellis G amp Girard D (2002) The Primary English Teacherrsquos Guide New Edition England Pearson Education Limited cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Davanellos Akis (1999) Songs ENGLISH TEACHING professional Issue Thirteen httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedSongs20Akis20DavanellospdfDonaldson M (1978) Childrenrsquos Minds LondonFontana Press cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Krashen Stephen D (1981) Principles and Practice in Second Language Acquisition English Language Teaching series London Prentice-Hall International (UK) Ltd 202 pagesScott WA amp Ytreberg LH (1990) Teaching English to children (Chapter 4) New York Longman httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedScott20Ytreberg20Oral20Workpdf

ldquoListening to chants or songs

and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo

are not enough to say that

language acquisition is

taking placerdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 11

12 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

14 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 15

TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

16 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

18 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 2: The Tunisian ELT Forum

Editorrsquos note

Mohamed Salah AbidiTeacher Trainer and eLT inspecTor in The area of sidi Bouzid Tunisia

Tunisians have struggled for their dignity and liberty and the spark of the revolution which started in the area of Sidi Bouzid has opened doors for human beings in the Arab countries and all over the world to dethrone the dictators who deprive them from elementary rights Like everybody in the country we have been concerned with what has been going on in our country and we postponed the publishing of this issue to a more appropriate time Now we think it a happy moment for the magazine to reappear and open its pages to free pens and help in the development of critical thinking which we believe is the corner stone of any reliable teaching In this issue we read two articles on product and process writing one by an ELT Inspector Belgacem HAMDI and the other is by a Senior EFL Teacher Hachmi HAMDI Steve PEHA president of TTMS focuses on one of the mechanical aspects of writing punctuation and suggests a new approach how to teach it The contribution of Noaman AMARA a Tunisian teacher in the Gulf is an article on teaching grammar and vocabulary through songs and chants Added to all this wealth of ideas Tarek BRAHMIrsquos special guest in this issue is Larry FERLAZZO who will necessarily make an addition to the pedagogical valise of any reflective teacher Tarek has also considered the teaching of reading and shares ideas on the technique of ldquoJigsaw readingrdquo with the readers of this issueMme Faten ROMDHANI EFL Teacher in the area of Nabeul and a friend of the forum and the magazine writes an elegant article about the importance of reading in an era when the reign is for the Internet rather than the paper book We havenrsquot forgotten to include some visuals in this issue to show the beauty of Tunisia and illustrate some demonstrations of our people during the revolution of December 17th 2010

Mohamed Salah Abidi

Contents

Editorial Review Board

Mohamed Salah AbidiGraphic Design

Tarak BrahmiThe Tunisian English Teaching Forum is a free quarterly magazine

Any copyrighted articles appearing in The Tunisian English Teaching Forum are reprinted with permission of the copyright ownersTo be considered for publication manuscripts should be typed on a floppy disk or CD that has been virus-checked

Letters floppy disks or CDs should be sent to Mohammed Salah AbidiLrsquoInspecteur drsquoAnglaisLycee Tahar HaddadRegueb 9170Sidi BouzidTunisie

or e-mailed to medsahagmailcom

For guidelines for writing articles and the latest news and notifications please visit our blog herehttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

TUNISIANEnglish Teaching Forum

The

Meet our special guest Larry Ferlazzo on page 18

14Process and Product writing in the efl classesA practical application of process writing inside the EFL classroom

HECHMI HAMDI

30

tarak brAHMI

teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquoHow to teach reading using the jigsaw technique

BELGaCEM HAMDI

Product and Process writingContrasting two popular approaches and examining how both can be used in the classroom

4

interViewLarry Ferlazzo talks about his great blog ldquoWebsites of the Dayrdquo the Family Literary Project and his two new books

18

StEVE PEHA

do rules ruleThinking about whether we should follow rules or follow language toward meaning when learning or teaching punctuation

12NoaMEN AMArA

teaching Vocabulary and grammar through songs and chantsAdvantages and limitations

8

22 reading Versus the internetIs the internet ldquokillingrdquo or boosting reading

FatEN rOMDHANI

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TEACHING WRITING

By Belgacem Hamdi ELT Inspector

There have been several approaches to teaching writing They have evolved with the development of different approaches to language teaching in general In spite of methodological changes writing continues to be an extremely challenging task for the teacher and learner of English As a basic language skill for EFL learners writing should be well thought of In this article I will describe and contrast two popular approaches and examine how both can be used in the classroom hoping this can help our students to develop their writing competence

Product aPProach

THE PRoDuCT APPRoACH is a traditional approach to teaching writing in which students are provided (with) a model and encouraged to mimic it in order to produce a similar productFor various reasons the product approach usually appears an extremely daunting task The main focus of this approach has always been on the final product writing is a tool for the practice and reinforcement of specific grammatical and lexical patterns accuracy being all-important whereas content and self-expression given little if any priority Basically students were lsquowriting to learnrsquo and not lsquolearning to writersquo

Process aPProach

It is clear that the process approach evolved in an era of change in which

conventions were challenged and reliance on form and conventions questioned Vanessa Steele defines the process approach as focusing more on the varied classroom activities which promote the development of language use brainstorming group discussion re-writinghellip Tribble defines the lsquoprocess approachrsquo as lsquoan approach to the teaching of writing which stresses the creativity of the individual writer and which pays attention to the development of good writing practices rather than the imitation of modelsrsquo (Tribble 1996 p160) The process approach considers writing as a creative act which requires time and positive feedback to be done well In this model the teacher needs to move away from being a marker to a reader responding to the content of studentrsquos writing more than the form

Product and Process WritingWHICH APPRoACH To usE

ldquostudents were lsquowriting to learnrsquo and not

lsquolearning to writersquo rdquo

ldquoThe process approach considers writing as

a creative act which requires time and positive

feedback to be done wellrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

In process writing the focus shifts from the final product itself to the different stages the writer goes through in order to achieve this outcome By breaking down the task as a whole into its constituent parts writing becomes less daunting and more manageable to the EFL studentStage 1First students generate ideas by brainstorming and discussion second they extend ideas into note form Then they organize ideas into a mind map spidergram or linear form This stage helps to make the relationship of ideas more immediately obvious which helps students with the structure of their texts At this phase the teacher provides only language supportStage 2Students write the first draft This is done in class and frequently in pairs or groups Stage 3Drafts are exchanged students become the readers of each otherrsquos work By responding as readers students develop an awareness of the fact that a writer is producing something to be read by someone else and thus can improve their own draftsStage 4Drafts are returned and improvements are made based upon peer feedback Stage 5A final draft is written Stage 6students once again exchange and read each otherrsquos work and perhaps even write a response or reply

The process in lsquonot linearrsquo but lsquorecursiversquo as in Tribblersquos words lsquoat any point in the preparation of a text writers can loop backwards or forwards to whichever of the activities involved in text composition

they may find usefulrsquo (Tribble 1996 p 59) Therefore it allows for great flexibility Writing is no longer a laborious activity if process-writing approach is adopted in the language classroom This model alleviates most of the problems associated with this skill and turns the writing class into an interesting and communicative experience Furthermore using this approach at lower levels is not only feasible but also backs the language learner up to become a talented writer in English There is a clear distinction between process-oriented and product-oriented writingNunan (2001) clearly states how very different this ldquoprocessrdquo approach is from the traditional product-oriented approach Whereas the product approach focuses on writing tasks in which the learner imitates copies and transforms teacher supplied models the process approach focuses on the steps involved in creating a piece of work The primary goal of product writing is an error-free coherent text Process writing allows for the fact that no text can be perfect but that a writer will get closer to perfection by producing reflecting on discussing and reworking successive drafts of a text James Mccrimmon sees it as the difference between writing as a way of knowing (process) and wring as a way of telling (product) donald Murray sees it as the difference between internal and external revision (revising in order to clarify meaning for oneself vs revising in order to clarify meaning for the reader) Linda Flower sees it as the difference between writer-based and reader-based prose

a coMParisoN oF Product aNd Process aPProaches

ldquoProcess writing allows for the

fact that no text can be perfect

but that a writer will get closer to perfection

by producing reflecting on

discussing and reworking

successive drafts of a textrdquo

Product Processbull Model text to be imitatedbull Emphasis on organization of ideasbull one draftbull Emphasis on end productbull Teacher as audiencebull Teacher as authoritybull Importance of teacher-corrected papers

bull Model text as resource for comparisonbull Emphasis on ideas and idea development bull Multiple draftsbull Emphasis on processbull Various audiences according to type of

writingbull Peer feedback as valuable toolbull Importance of conferencing and interactive

feedback

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TEACHING WRITING

Which aPProach to use

The approach to use will depend on you the teacher and on the students and the genre of the text Certain genres such as formal letters and postcards in which the features (layout style organization and grammar) are fixed lend themselves most often to a product-driven approach The other genres such as discursive essays and narrative lend themselves to process-driven approaches

coNcLusioN

I believe that the two approaches are not necessarily incompatible Like the product approach the Process-centred one

does not repudiate all interest in the product (ie the final draft) Both aim at achieving the best product possible Consequently it is obvious that using aspects of both models may be the most effective approach in teaching writing as Nunan (1999) reaffirms ldquothere is no reason why a writing program should not contain elements of both approachesrdquo

ldquoThe approach to use will

depend on you the teacher

and on the students and

the genre of the textrdquo

What are the Pros aNd coNs oF each aPProach

Prosbull Easy to use with large classesbull Easier to grade because emphasis is on

formbull useful approach when form is importantconsbull Does not teach how to write independentlybull Does not teach how to thinkbull Does not make writing a manageable and

intentional activitybull Limits creativity and demotivates the

learner

Prosbull Helps novice writers develop skills to write

on their ownbull Encourages a thoughtful approach to

writingbull Helps develop thinking skills and learning

strategiesbull Helps writers to own their writing processcons bull Can take more time to teach bull Need to be sure that writer does not make

process explicit in writing itselfbull Can make classroom more challenging for

the teacher

ldquousing aspects of both models

may be the most effective

approach in teaching

writingrdquo

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IN VARIous CouNTRIEs IN THE WoRLD the curricular of teaching English to young learners often emphasize the use of songs and chants This is simply because children love them and they can be both used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a very funny and engaging way Besides they can help children improve their oral skills However some researchers believe that listening and repeating a number of words or sentences are not enough for the learner to acquire a new language Thus it important for us to know how a teacher can make sure that language acquisition is taking place in hisher young learnersrsquo classroom particularly with respect to oral communication As teachers of young learners we are often advised or trained to integrate songs or chants in our teaching Besides our studentsrsquo books usually contain listening scripts either of songs or chants Thus according to scott and Ytreberg (1990) the majority of English teachers

throughout this world have used songs for one teaching purpose or another What makes chants and especially songs frequently used is that they have specific features First of all ldquosongs are highly memorablerdquo and ldquohighly motivatingrdquo (Davanellos 1999 13) as they create a joyful and interesting classroom atmosphere and they break up with the routines of the daily lesson secondly I have myself realized quite often that my third year primary students became very motivated while repeating the same introductory part of the ldquoHappy streetrdquo song at the beginning of each unit Thirdly I noticed that even weaker students enjoyed repeating the highly rhythmical verses while the CD player was on In addition they feel they are participating with their best peers at least in one activity of the lesson- that is the warming up- while smiling and tapping on their desks

By Noamen Amara Teacher of English

Young learner classes often have fun songs and chants that are repeated Children love them and they can be used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a fun and engaging way These can be very useful for improving studentsrsquo oral skills however ldquoWhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo (Slatterly amp Willis)

ldquoAs teachers of young learners we

are often advised or trained to integrate

songs or chants in our teachingrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

ADVANTAGEs AND LIMITATIoNs

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Hence you can see that children enjoy the funny and merry atmosphere of songs and chants as they can learn by listening and repeating chunks of language Also songs can be useful for improving the learnersrsquo oral skills by listening and repeating what they hear

on the contrary slatterly and Willis emphasize that ldquowhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo This is in part true since when students just repeat chunks of language in a mechanical way without being aware of what they pronounce we can not say that learning is taking place In other words students in this case are just like parrots repeating sounds that they hear while being unaware of the message implied in the sounds that they utter Besides we can not talk about language acquisition or learning without necessarily referring to the mind So according to Arnold (2005) listening turns out to be ldquoan active processrdquo only if ldquothe mind actively engages in making meaningrdquo Thus as teachers we have to make sure that the listening material that we use in our lessons matches the studentsrsquo level because according to Krashenrsquos view acquisition canrsquot take place unless the input is ldquocomprehensiblerdquo(1981 6-7) In this context Brewster Ellis and Girard (2002) point out that ldquoif someone is giving you a message or opinion then of course you have to be able to understand it in order to respondrdquo Thus decoding the message into a ldquocomprehensible inputrdquo is vital in the acquisition or learning process Whenever there is a listening activity I usually make my best to ensure that my students manage to understand the listening passage through various ways and extra material that you will see The foreign language acquisition can take place through various ways during the teachinglearning process For example I often guide my pupils in the pre-listening activity to understand the keywords either through realia or flashcards or visuals Also scott and Ytreberg suggest (1990 34) ldquousing puppets or a class mascotrdquo as useful materials because they can be of great help

while ldquopresenting new language orallyrdquo For instance a parrot puppet can whisper into a studentrsquos ear give instructions or tell a story to the whole class Besides I always advise my young learners to use their background knowledge of any subject at hand in order to understand what the listening passage is about For instance my fourth-year students rely on their pre-requisite knowledge of science andor social studies to listen to the song entitled ldquoAmazing Animalsrdquo and match each section with the right ldquomilieurdquo where each animal lives Thus by relying on the teacherrsquos extra material and their background knowledge of the subject matter young learners often manage to understand the listening passage which they use later either for memorizing new vocabulary answering questions or consolidating pronunciation of new phonetic sounds While implementing the lesson plan songs and chants as listening materials can be used for various purposes and in any of the three stages of a lesson pre-stage while stage and post-stage As a good example of using a chant in the pre-stage in my junior class my young learners listened to and repeated a chant entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo so as to be familiar with the body parts while I was showing them the flash card of each member at the appropriate section So using the flash cards helped my pupils better understand the new lexical items of the body parts while listening to the chant In the while stage my students were asked to listen to a song about the same topic and act The song was centered on a set of activities based on Total Physical Response (TPR) where children listen and touch the body part(s) At this stage the teacher should make sure that hisher students understand the new vocabulary by responding appropriately to the song and touching the right body member(s) At this point I need to mention that before each listening activity the teacher should ldquoguidehellip[hisher studentsrsquo] attention to specific parts of the spoken textrsquo so that the learners will be aware of the purpose of and the rationale behind the listening activity as I did

ldquoWe have to make sure that the

listening material that we use in our

lessons matches the studentsrsquo

levelrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

Noamen AmaraTeacher of English since 2001bull 2001-2006 teaching in Tunisian schoolsbull 2006-2010 teaching in the Kingdom of

Bahrainbull teacher trainer for the CAPEs trainees

in the school years 2004-2005 2005-2006

bull Participation in an e-teacher scholarship Program at the university of Maryland Baltimore County usA entitled ldquoTeaching English to Young Learnersrdquo from January the 14th to March 24th 2010

For a more detailed profile of Noamen Amarahttpteachingenglish-alexenoamenblogspotcom200901noamen-mahfoudh-amara-curriculum-vitaehtml

10 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

In this framework Donaldson (1978) says that children need to know the lsquopurposes and intentionsrsquo which they can recognise and respond to This is simply because if the students are not aware of the reasons behind the listening activity they will not pay much attention to the content and if they try to do so their focus will be shattered by the lack of a reasonable motiveListening can also take place at the post-stage For example at the end of the first lesson entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo my students were asked to listen to the child talking about his body parts in detail while they have to point to each part whenever it is mentioned and then say it again At this stage the teacher should monitor and see whether hisher students are pointing to the right member and naming it appropriately or not If not she can help the weaker students by listening again and repeating until she makes sure that the students master thatIn the follow up activity each student was asked to come in front of his peers and identify each of his following body parts eye nose hair ear and mouth Before the activity takes place I gave a model for my students to follow by pointing to and naming each of my body parts Thus students became more motivated and were enough confident to speak in front of their peers and refer to themselves In case of errors the other students were willing to correct their classmate(s) in a very funny and tolerant atmosphere To sum up I can say that songs and chants are very useful materials in the classroom of young learners since they create a cheerful and amusing atmosphere Besides children love to learn while playing or listening to music Yet as slatterly and Willis emphasize listening to chants or songs and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo are not enough to say that language acquisition is taking place Thus the teacher should make sure that herhis students really understand what they are saying otherwise they will be just repeating mechanically chunks of language without involving their minds and feelings

references

Arnold W (2005) Listening for Young Learners httpblackboardumbceduwebappsportalframesetjsptab_id=_2_1ampurl=2fwebapps2fblackboard2fexecute2flauncher3ftype3dCourse26id3d_52891_126url3dBrewster J Ellis G amp Girard D (2002) The Primary English Teacherrsquos Guide New Edition England Pearson Education Limited cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Davanellos Akis (1999) Songs ENGLISH TEACHING professional Issue Thirteen httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedSongs20Akis20DavanellospdfDonaldson M (1978) Childrenrsquos Minds LondonFontana Press cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Krashen Stephen D (1981) Principles and Practice in Second Language Acquisition English Language Teaching series London Prentice-Hall International (UK) Ltd 202 pagesScott WA amp Ytreberg LH (1990) Teaching English to children (Chapter 4) New York Longman httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedScott20Ytreberg20Oral20Workpdf

ldquoListening to chants or songs

and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo

are not enough to say that

language acquisition is

taking placerdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 11

12 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 13

WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 15

TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

16 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

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Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 3: The Tunisian ELT Forum

Contents

Editorial Review Board

Mohamed Salah AbidiGraphic Design

Tarak BrahmiThe Tunisian English Teaching Forum is a free quarterly magazine

Any copyrighted articles appearing in The Tunisian English Teaching Forum are reprinted with permission of the copyright ownersTo be considered for publication manuscripts should be typed on a floppy disk or CD that has been virus-checked

Letters floppy disks or CDs should be sent to Mohammed Salah AbidiLrsquoInspecteur drsquoAnglaisLycee Tahar HaddadRegueb 9170Sidi BouzidTunisie

or e-mailed to medsahagmailcom

For guidelines for writing articles and the latest news and notifications please visit our blog herehttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

TUNISIANEnglish Teaching Forum

The

Meet our special guest Larry Ferlazzo on page 18

14Process and Product writing in the efl classesA practical application of process writing inside the EFL classroom

HECHMI HAMDI

30

tarak brAHMI

teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquoHow to teach reading using the jigsaw technique

BELGaCEM HAMDI

Product and Process writingContrasting two popular approaches and examining how both can be used in the classroom

4

interViewLarry Ferlazzo talks about his great blog ldquoWebsites of the Dayrdquo the Family Literary Project and his two new books

18

StEVE PEHA

do rules ruleThinking about whether we should follow rules or follow language toward meaning when learning or teaching punctuation

12NoaMEN AMArA

teaching Vocabulary and grammar through songs and chantsAdvantages and limitations

8

22 reading Versus the internetIs the internet ldquokillingrdquo or boosting reading

FatEN rOMDHANI

4 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 January 2011

TEACHING WRITING

By Belgacem Hamdi ELT Inspector

There have been several approaches to teaching writing They have evolved with the development of different approaches to language teaching in general In spite of methodological changes writing continues to be an extremely challenging task for the teacher and learner of English As a basic language skill for EFL learners writing should be well thought of In this article I will describe and contrast two popular approaches and examine how both can be used in the classroom hoping this can help our students to develop their writing competence

Product aPProach

THE PRoDuCT APPRoACH is a traditional approach to teaching writing in which students are provided (with) a model and encouraged to mimic it in order to produce a similar productFor various reasons the product approach usually appears an extremely daunting task The main focus of this approach has always been on the final product writing is a tool for the practice and reinforcement of specific grammatical and lexical patterns accuracy being all-important whereas content and self-expression given little if any priority Basically students were lsquowriting to learnrsquo and not lsquolearning to writersquo

Process aPProach

It is clear that the process approach evolved in an era of change in which

conventions were challenged and reliance on form and conventions questioned Vanessa Steele defines the process approach as focusing more on the varied classroom activities which promote the development of language use brainstorming group discussion re-writinghellip Tribble defines the lsquoprocess approachrsquo as lsquoan approach to the teaching of writing which stresses the creativity of the individual writer and which pays attention to the development of good writing practices rather than the imitation of modelsrsquo (Tribble 1996 p160) The process approach considers writing as a creative act which requires time and positive feedback to be done well In this model the teacher needs to move away from being a marker to a reader responding to the content of studentrsquos writing more than the form

Product and Process WritingWHICH APPRoACH To usE

ldquostudents were lsquowriting to learnrsquo and not

lsquolearning to writersquo rdquo

ldquoThe process approach considers writing as

a creative act which requires time and positive

feedback to be done wellrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

In process writing the focus shifts from the final product itself to the different stages the writer goes through in order to achieve this outcome By breaking down the task as a whole into its constituent parts writing becomes less daunting and more manageable to the EFL studentStage 1First students generate ideas by brainstorming and discussion second they extend ideas into note form Then they organize ideas into a mind map spidergram or linear form This stage helps to make the relationship of ideas more immediately obvious which helps students with the structure of their texts At this phase the teacher provides only language supportStage 2Students write the first draft This is done in class and frequently in pairs or groups Stage 3Drafts are exchanged students become the readers of each otherrsquos work By responding as readers students develop an awareness of the fact that a writer is producing something to be read by someone else and thus can improve their own draftsStage 4Drafts are returned and improvements are made based upon peer feedback Stage 5A final draft is written Stage 6students once again exchange and read each otherrsquos work and perhaps even write a response or reply

The process in lsquonot linearrsquo but lsquorecursiversquo as in Tribblersquos words lsquoat any point in the preparation of a text writers can loop backwards or forwards to whichever of the activities involved in text composition

they may find usefulrsquo (Tribble 1996 p 59) Therefore it allows for great flexibility Writing is no longer a laborious activity if process-writing approach is adopted in the language classroom This model alleviates most of the problems associated with this skill and turns the writing class into an interesting and communicative experience Furthermore using this approach at lower levels is not only feasible but also backs the language learner up to become a talented writer in English There is a clear distinction between process-oriented and product-oriented writingNunan (2001) clearly states how very different this ldquoprocessrdquo approach is from the traditional product-oriented approach Whereas the product approach focuses on writing tasks in which the learner imitates copies and transforms teacher supplied models the process approach focuses on the steps involved in creating a piece of work The primary goal of product writing is an error-free coherent text Process writing allows for the fact that no text can be perfect but that a writer will get closer to perfection by producing reflecting on discussing and reworking successive drafts of a text James Mccrimmon sees it as the difference between writing as a way of knowing (process) and wring as a way of telling (product) donald Murray sees it as the difference between internal and external revision (revising in order to clarify meaning for oneself vs revising in order to clarify meaning for the reader) Linda Flower sees it as the difference between writer-based and reader-based prose

a coMParisoN oF Product aNd Process aPProaches

ldquoProcess writing allows for the

fact that no text can be perfect

but that a writer will get closer to perfection

by producing reflecting on

discussing and reworking

successive drafts of a textrdquo

Product Processbull Model text to be imitatedbull Emphasis on organization of ideasbull one draftbull Emphasis on end productbull Teacher as audiencebull Teacher as authoritybull Importance of teacher-corrected papers

bull Model text as resource for comparisonbull Emphasis on ideas and idea development bull Multiple draftsbull Emphasis on processbull Various audiences according to type of

writingbull Peer feedback as valuable toolbull Importance of conferencing and interactive

feedback

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TEACHING WRITING

Which aPProach to use

The approach to use will depend on you the teacher and on the students and the genre of the text Certain genres such as formal letters and postcards in which the features (layout style organization and grammar) are fixed lend themselves most often to a product-driven approach The other genres such as discursive essays and narrative lend themselves to process-driven approaches

coNcLusioN

I believe that the two approaches are not necessarily incompatible Like the product approach the Process-centred one

does not repudiate all interest in the product (ie the final draft) Both aim at achieving the best product possible Consequently it is obvious that using aspects of both models may be the most effective approach in teaching writing as Nunan (1999) reaffirms ldquothere is no reason why a writing program should not contain elements of both approachesrdquo

ldquoThe approach to use will

depend on you the teacher

and on the students and

the genre of the textrdquo

What are the Pros aNd coNs oF each aPProach

Prosbull Easy to use with large classesbull Easier to grade because emphasis is on

formbull useful approach when form is importantconsbull Does not teach how to write independentlybull Does not teach how to thinkbull Does not make writing a manageable and

intentional activitybull Limits creativity and demotivates the

learner

Prosbull Helps novice writers develop skills to write

on their ownbull Encourages a thoughtful approach to

writingbull Helps develop thinking skills and learning

strategiesbull Helps writers to own their writing processcons bull Can take more time to teach bull Need to be sure that writer does not make

process explicit in writing itselfbull Can make classroom more challenging for

the teacher

ldquousing aspects of both models

may be the most effective

approach in teaching

writingrdquo

8 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

IN VARIous CouNTRIEs IN THE WoRLD the curricular of teaching English to young learners often emphasize the use of songs and chants This is simply because children love them and they can be both used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a very funny and engaging way Besides they can help children improve their oral skills However some researchers believe that listening and repeating a number of words or sentences are not enough for the learner to acquire a new language Thus it important for us to know how a teacher can make sure that language acquisition is taking place in hisher young learnersrsquo classroom particularly with respect to oral communication As teachers of young learners we are often advised or trained to integrate songs or chants in our teaching Besides our studentsrsquo books usually contain listening scripts either of songs or chants Thus according to scott and Ytreberg (1990) the majority of English teachers

throughout this world have used songs for one teaching purpose or another What makes chants and especially songs frequently used is that they have specific features First of all ldquosongs are highly memorablerdquo and ldquohighly motivatingrdquo (Davanellos 1999 13) as they create a joyful and interesting classroom atmosphere and they break up with the routines of the daily lesson secondly I have myself realized quite often that my third year primary students became very motivated while repeating the same introductory part of the ldquoHappy streetrdquo song at the beginning of each unit Thirdly I noticed that even weaker students enjoyed repeating the highly rhythmical verses while the CD player was on In addition they feel they are participating with their best peers at least in one activity of the lesson- that is the warming up- while smiling and tapping on their desks

By Noamen Amara Teacher of English

Young learner classes often have fun songs and chants that are repeated Children love them and they can be used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a fun and engaging way These can be very useful for improving studentsrsquo oral skills however ldquoWhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo (Slatterly amp Willis)

ldquoAs teachers of young learners we

are often advised or trained to integrate

songs or chants in our teachingrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

ADVANTAGEs AND LIMITATIoNs

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Hence you can see that children enjoy the funny and merry atmosphere of songs and chants as they can learn by listening and repeating chunks of language Also songs can be useful for improving the learnersrsquo oral skills by listening and repeating what they hear

on the contrary slatterly and Willis emphasize that ldquowhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo This is in part true since when students just repeat chunks of language in a mechanical way without being aware of what they pronounce we can not say that learning is taking place In other words students in this case are just like parrots repeating sounds that they hear while being unaware of the message implied in the sounds that they utter Besides we can not talk about language acquisition or learning without necessarily referring to the mind So according to Arnold (2005) listening turns out to be ldquoan active processrdquo only if ldquothe mind actively engages in making meaningrdquo Thus as teachers we have to make sure that the listening material that we use in our lessons matches the studentsrsquo level because according to Krashenrsquos view acquisition canrsquot take place unless the input is ldquocomprehensiblerdquo(1981 6-7) In this context Brewster Ellis and Girard (2002) point out that ldquoif someone is giving you a message or opinion then of course you have to be able to understand it in order to respondrdquo Thus decoding the message into a ldquocomprehensible inputrdquo is vital in the acquisition or learning process Whenever there is a listening activity I usually make my best to ensure that my students manage to understand the listening passage through various ways and extra material that you will see The foreign language acquisition can take place through various ways during the teachinglearning process For example I often guide my pupils in the pre-listening activity to understand the keywords either through realia or flashcards or visuals Also scott and Ytreberg suggest (1990 34) ldquousing puppets or a class mascotrdquo as useful materials because they can be of great help

while ldquopresenting new language orallyrdquo For instance a parrot puppet can whisper into a studentrsquos ear give instructions or tell a story to the whole class Besides I always advise my young learners to use their background knowledge of any subject at hand in order to understand what the listening passage is about For instance my fourth-year students rely on their pre-requisite knowledge of science andor social studies to listen to the song entitled ldquoAmazing Animalsrdquo and match each section with the right ldquomilieurdquo where each animal lives Thus by relying on the teacherrsquos extra material and their background knowledge of the subject matter young learners often manage to understand the listening passage which they use later either for memorizing new vocabulary answering questions or consolidating pronunciation of new phonetic sounds While implementing the lesson plan songs and chants as listening materials can be used for various purposes and in any of the three stages of a lesson pre-stage while stage and post-stage As a good example of using a chant in the pre-stage in my junior class my young learners listened to and repeated a chant entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo so as to be familiar with the body parts while I was showing them the flash card of each member at the appropriate section So using the flash cards helped my pupils better understand the new lexical items of the body parts while listening to the chant In the while stage my students were asked to listen to a song about the same topic and act The song was centered on a set of activities based on Total Physical Response (TPR) where children listen and touch the body part(s) At this stage the teacher should make sure that hisher students understand the new vocabulary by responding appropriately to the song and touching the right body member(s) At this point I need to mention that before each listening activity the teacher should ldquoguidehellip[hisher studentsrsquo] attention to specific parts of the spoken textrsquo so that the learners will be aware of the purpose of and the rationale behind the listening activity as I did

ldquoWe have to make sure that the

listening material that we use in our

lessons matches the studentsrsquo

levelrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

Noamen AmaraTeacher of English since 2001bull 2001-2006 teaching in Tunisian schoolsbull 2006-2010 teaching in the Kingdom of

Bahrainbull teacher trainer for the CAPEs trainees

in the school years 2004-2005 2005-2006

bull Participation in an e-teacher scholarship Program at the university of Maryland Baltimore County usA entitled ldquoTeaching English to Young Learnersrdquo from January the 14th to March 24th 2010

For a more detailed profile of Noamen Amarahttpteachingenglish-alexenoamenblogspotcom200901noamen-mahfoudh-amara-curriculum-vitaehtml

10 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

In this framework Donaldson (1978) says that children need to know the lsquopurposes and intentionsrsquo which they can recognise and respond to This is simply because if the students are not aware of the reasons behind the listening activity they will not pay much attention to the content and if they try to do so their focus will be shattered by the lack of a reasonable motiveListening can also take place at the post-stage For example at the end of the first lesson entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo my students were asked to listen to the child talking about his body parts in detail while they have to point to each part whenever it is mentioned and then say it again At this stage the teacher should monitor and see whether hisher students are pointing to the right member and naming it appropriately or not If not she can help the weaker students by listening again and repeating until she makes sure that the students master thatIn the follow up activity each student was asked to come in front of his peers and identify each of his following body parts eye nose hair ear and mouth Before the activity takes place I gave a model for my students to follow by pointing to and naming each of my body parts Thus students became more motivated and were enough confident to speak in front of their peers and refer to themselves In case of errors the other students were willing to correct their classmate(s) in a very funny and tolerant atmosphere To sum up I can say that songs and chants are very useful materials in the classroom of young learners since they create a cheerful and amusing atmosphere Besides children love to learn while playing or listening to music Yet as slatterly and Willis emphasize listening to chants or songs and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo are not enough to say that language acquisition is taking place Thus the teacher should make sure that herhis students really understand what they are saying otherwise they will be just repeating mechanically chunks of language without involving their minds and feelings

references

Arnold W (2005) Listening for Young Learners httpblackboardumbceduwebappsportalframesetjsptab_id=_2_1ampurl=2fwebapps2fblackboard2fexecute2flauncher3ftype3dCourse26id3d_52891_126url3dBrewster J Ellis G amp Girard D (2002) The Primary English Teacherrsquos Guide New Edition England Pearson Education Limited cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Davanellos Akis (1999) Songs ENGLISH TEACHING professional Issue Thirteen httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedSongs20Akis20DavanellospdfDonaldson M (1978) Childrenrsquos Minds LondonFontana Press cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Krashen Stephen D (1981) Principles and Practice in Second Language Acquisition English Language Teaching series London Prentice-Hall International (UK) Ltd 202 pagesScott WA amp Ytreberg LH (1990) Teaching English to children (Chapter 4) New York Longman httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedScott20Ytreberg20Oral20Workpdf

ldquoListening to chants or songs

and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo

are not enough to say that

language acquisition is

taking placerdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

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12 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

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TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

18 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 4: The Tunisian ELT Forum

4 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 January 2011

TEACHING WRITING

By Belgacem Hamdi ELT Inspector

There have been several approaches to teaching writing They have evolved with the development of different approaches to language teaching in general In spite of methodological changes writing continues to be an extremely challenging task for the teacher and learner of English As a basic language skill for EFL learners writing should be well thought of In this article I will describe and contrast two popular approaches and examine how both can be used in the classroom hoping this can help our students to develop their writing competence

Product aPProach

THE PRoDuCT APPRoACH is a traditional approach to teaching writing in which students are provided (with) a model and encouraged to mimic it in order to produce a similar productFor various reasons the product approach usually appears an extremely daunting task The main focus of this approach has always been on the final product writing is a tool for the practice and reinforcement of specific grammatical and lexical patterns accuracy being all-important whereas content and self-expression given little if any priority Basically students were lsquowriting to learnrsquo and not lsquolearning to writersquo

Process aPProach

It is clear that the process approach evolved in an era of change in which

conventions were challenged and reliance on form and conventions questioned Vanessa Steele defines the process approach as focusing more on the varied classroom activities which promote the development of language use brainstorming group discussion re-writinghellip Tribble defines the lsquoprocess approachrsquo as lsquoan approach to the teaching of writing which stresses the creativity of the individual writer and which pays attention to the development of good writing practices rather than the imitation of modelsrsquo (Tribble 1996 p160) The process approach considers writing as a creative act which requires time and positive feedback to be done well In this model the teacher needs to move away from being a marker to a reader responding to the content of studentrsquos writing more than the form

Product and Process WritingWHICH APPRoACH To usE

ldquostudents were lsquowriting to learnrsquo and not

lsquolearning to writersquo rdquo

ldquoThe process approach considers writing as

a creative act which requires time and positive

feedback to be done wellrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

In process writing the focus shifts from the final product itself to the different stages the writer goes through in order to achieve this outcome By breaking down the task as a whole into its constituent parts writing becomes less daunting and more manageable to the EFL studentStage 1First students generate ideas by brainstorming and discussion second they extend ideas into note form Then they organize ideas into a mind map spidergram or linear form This stage helps to make the relationship of ideas more immediately obvious which helps students with the structure of their texts At this phase the teacher provides only language supportStage 2Students write the first draft This is done in class and frequently in pairs or groups Stage 3Drafts are exchanged students become the readers of each otherrsquos work By responding as readers students develop an awareness of the fact that a writer is producing something to be read by someone else and thus can improve their own draftsStage 4Drafts are returned and improvements are made based upon peer feedback Stage 5A final draft is written Stage 6students once again exchange and read each otherrsquos work and perhaps even write a response or reply

The process in lsquonot linearrsquo but lsquorecursiversquo as in Tribblersquos words lsquoat any point in the preparation of a text writers can loop backwards or forwards to whichever of the activities involved in text composition

they may find usefulrsquo (Tribble 1996 p 59) Therefore it allows for great flexibility Writing is no longer a laborious activity if process-writing approach is adopted in the language classroom This model alleviates most of the problems associated with this skill and turns the writing class into an interesting and communicative experience Furthermore using this approach at lower levels is not only feasible but also backs the language learner up to become a talented writer in English There is a clear distinction between process-oriented and product-oriented writingNunan (2001) clearly states how very different this ldquoprocessrdquo approach is from the traditional product-oriented approach Whereas the product approach focuses on writing tasks in which the learner imitates copies and transforms teacher supplied models the process approach focuses on the steps involved in creating a piece of work The primary goal of product writing is an error-free coherent text Process writing allows for the fact that no text can be perfect but that a writer will get closer to perfection by producing reflecting on discussing and reworking successive drafts of a text James Mccrimmon sees it as the difference between writing as a way of knowing (process) and wring as a way of telling (product) donald Murray sees it as the difference between internal and external revision (revising in order to clarify meaning for oneself vs revising in order to clarify meaning for the reader) Linda Flower sees it as the difference between writer-based and reader-based prose

a coMParisoN oF Product aNd Process aPProaches

ldquoProcess writing allows for the

fact that no text can be perfect

but that a writer will get closer to perfection

by producing reflecting on

discussing and reworking

successive drafts of a textrdquo

Product Processbull Model text to be imitatedbull Emphasis on organization of ideasbull one draftbull Emphasis on end productbull Teacher as audiencebull Teacher as authoritybull Importance of teacher-corrected papers

bull Model text as resource for comparisonbull Emphasis on ideas and idea development bull Multiple draftsbull Emphasis on processbull Various audiences according to type of

writingbull Peer feedback as valuable toolbull Importance of conferencing and interactive

feedback

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TEACHING WRITING

Which aPProach to use

The approach to use will depend on you the teacher and on the students and the genre of the text Certain genres such as formal letters and postcards in which the features (layout style organization and grammar) are fixed lend themselves most often to a product-driven approach The other genres such as discursive essays and narrative lend themselves to process-driven approaches

coNcLusioN

I believe that the two approaches are not necessarily incompatible Like the product approach the Process-centred one

does not repudiate all interest in the product (ie the final draft) Both aim at achieving the best product possible Consequently it is obvious that using aspects of both models may be the most effective approach in teaching writing as Nunan (1999) reaffirms ldquothere is no reason why a writing program should not contain elements of both approachesrdquo

ldquoThe approach to use will

depend on you the teacher

and on the students and

the genre of the textrdquo

What are the Pros aNd coNs oF each aPProach

Prosbull Easy to use with large classesbull Easier to grade because emphasis is on

formbull useful approach when form is importantconsbull Does not teach how to write independentlybull Does not teach how to thinkbull Does not make writing a manageable and

intentional activitybull Limits creativity and demotivates the

learner

Prosbull Helps novice writers develop skills to write

on their ownbull Encourages a thoughtful approach to

writingbull Helps develop thinking skills and learning

strategiesbull Helps writers to own their writing processcons bull Can take more time to teach bull Need to be sure that writer does not make

process explicit in writing itselfbull Can make classroom more challenging for

the teacher

ldquousing aspects of both models

may be the most effective

approach in teaching

writingrdquo

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IN VARIous CouNTRIEs IN THE WoRLD the curricular of teaching English to young learners often emphasize the use of songs and chants This is simply because children love them and they can be both used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a very funny and engaging way Besides they can help children improve their oral skills However some researchers believe that listening and repeating a number of words or sentences are not enough for the learner to acquire a new language Thus it important for us to know how a teacher can make sure that language acquisition is taking place in hisher young learnersrsquo classroom particularly with respect to oral communication As teachers of young learners we are often advised or trained to integrate songs or chants in our teaching Besides our studentsrsquo books usually contain listening scripts either of songs or chants Thus according to scott and Ytreberg (1990) the majority of English teachers

throughout this world have used songs for one teaching purpose or another What makes chants and especially songs frequently used is that they have specific features First of all ldquosongs are highly memorablerdquo and ldquohighly motivatingrdquo (Davanellos 1999 13) as they create a joyful and interesting classroom atmosphere and they break up with the routines of the daily lesson secondly I have myself realized quite often that my third year primary students became very motivated while repeating the same introductory part of the ldquoHappy streetrdquo song at the beginning of each unit Thirdly I noticed that even weaker students enjoyed repeating the highly rhythmical verses while the CD player was on In addition they feel they are participating with their best peers at least in one activity of the lesson- that is the warming up- while smiling and tapping on their desks

By Noamen Amara Teacher of English

Young learner classes often have fun songs and chants that are repeated Children love them and they can be used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a fun and engaging way These can be very useful for improving studentsrsquo oral skills however ldquoWhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo (Slatterly amp Willis)

ldquoAs teachers of young learners we

are often advised or trained to integrate

songs or chants in our teachingrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

ADVANTAGEs AND LIMITATIoNs

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Hence you can see that children enjoy the funny and merry atmosphere of songs and chants as they can learn by listening and repeating chunks of language Also songs can be useful for improving the learnersrsquo oral skills by listening and repeating what they hear

on the contrary slatterly and Willis emphasize that ldquowhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo This is in part true since when students just repeat chunks of language in a mechanical way without being aware of what they pronounce we can not say that learning is taking place In other words students in this case are just like parrots repeating sounds that they hear while being unaware of the message implied in the sounds that they utter Besides we can not talk about language acquisition or learning without necessarily referring to the mind So according to Arnold (2005) listening turns out to be ldquoan active processrdquo only if ldquothe mind actively engages in making meaningrdquo Thus as teachers we have to make sure that the listening material that we use in our lessons matches the studentsrsquo level because according to Krashenrsquos view acquisition canrsquot take place unless the input is ldquocomprehensiblerdquo(1981 6-7) In this context Brewster Ellis and Girard (2002) point out that ldquoif someone is giving you a message or opinion then of course you have to be able to understand it in order to respondrdquo Thus decoding the message into a ldquocomprehensible inputrdquo is vital in the acquisition or learning process Whenever there is a listening activity I usually make my best to ensure that my students manage to understand the listening passage through various ways and extra material that you will see The foreign language acquisition can take place through various ways during the teachinglearning process For example I often guide my pupils in the pre-listening activity to understand the keywords either through realia or flashcards or visuals Also scott and Ytreberg suggest (1990 34) ldquousing puppets or a class mascotrdquo as useful materials because they can be of great help

while ldquopresenting new language orallyrdquo For instance a parrot puppet can whisper into a studentrsquos ear give instructions or tell a story to the whole class Besides I always advise my young learners to use their background knowledge of any subject at hand in order to understand what the listening passage is about For instance my fourth-year students rely on their pre-requisite knowledge of science andor social studies to listen to the song entitled ldquoAmazing Animalsrdquo and match each section with the right ldquomilieurdquo where each animal lives Thus by relying on the teacherrsquos extra material and their background knowledge of the subject matter young learners often manage to understand the listening passage which they use later either for memorizing new vocabulary answering questions or consolidating pronunciation of new phonetic sounds While implementing the lesson plan songs and chants as listening materials can be used for various purposes and in any of the three stages of a lesson pre-stage while stage and post-stage As a good example of using a chant in the pre-stage in my junior class my young learners listened to and repeated a chant entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo so as to be familiar with the body parts while I was showing them the flash card of each member at the appropriate section So using the flash cards helped my pupils better understand the new lexical items of the body parts while listening to the chant In the while stage my students were asked to listen to a song about the same topic and act The song was centered on a set of activities based on Total Physical Response (TPR) where children listen and touch the body part(s) At this stage the teacher should make sure that hisher students understand the new vocabulary by responding appropriately to the song and touching the right body member(s) At this point I need to mention that before each listening activity the teacher should ldquoguidehellip[hisher studentsrsquo] attention to specific parts of the spoken textrsquo so that the learners will be aware of the purpose of and the rationale behind the listening activity as I did

ldquoWe have to make sure that the

listening material that we use in our

lessons matches the studentsrsquo

levelrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

Noamen AmaraTeacher of English since 2001bull 2001-2006 teaching in Tunisian schoolsbull 2006-2010 teaching in the Kingdom of

Bahrainbull teacher trainer for the CAPEs trainees

in the school years 2004-2005 2005-2006

bull Participation in an e-teacher scholarship Program at the university of Maryland Baltimore County usA entitled ldquoTeaching English to Young Learnersrdquo from January the 14th to March 24th 2010

For a more detailed profile of Noamen Amarahttpteachingenglish-alexenoamenblogspotcom200901noamen-mahfoudh-amara-curriculum-vitaehtml

10 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

In this framework Donaldson (1978) says that children need to know the lsquopurposes and intentionsrsquo which they can recognise and respond to This is simply because if the students are not aware of the reasons behind the listening activity they will not pay much attention to the content and if they try to do so their focus will be shattered by the lack of a reasonable motiveListening can also take place at the post-stage For example at the end of the first lesson entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo my students were asked to listen to the child talking about his body parts in detail while they have to point to each part whenever it is mentioned and then say it again At this stage the teacher should monitor and see whether hisher students are pointing to the right member and naming it appropriately or not If not she can help the weaker students by listening again and repeating until she makes sure that the students master thatIn the follow up activity each student was asked to come in front of his peers and identify each of his following body parts eye nose hair ear and mouth Before the activity takes place I gave a model for my students to follow by pointing to and naming each of my body parts Thus students became more motivated and were enough confident to speak in front of their peers and refer to themselves In case of errors the other students were willing to correct their classmate(s) in a very funny and tolerant atmosphere To sum up I can say that songs and chants are very useful materials in the classroom of young learners since they create a cheerful and amusing atmosphere Besides children love to learn while playing or listening to music Yet as slatterly and Willis emphasize listening to chants or songs and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo are not enough to say that language acquisition is taking place Thus the teacher should make sure that herhis students really understand what they are saying otherwise they will be just repeating mechanically chunks of language without involving their minds and feelings

references

Arnold W (2005) Listening for Young Learners httpblackboardumbceduwebappsportalframesetjsptab_id=_2_1ampurl=2fwebapps2fblackboard2fexecute2flauncher3ftype3dCourse26id3d_52891_126url3dBrewster J Ellis G amp Girard D (2002) The Primary English Teacherrsquos Guide New Edition England Pearson Education Limited cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Davanellos Akis (1999) Songs ENGLISH TEACHING professional Issue Thirteen httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedSongs20Akis20DavanellospdfDonaldson M (1978) Childrenrsquos Minds LondonFontana Press cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Krashen Stephen D (1981) Principles and Practice in Second Language Acquisition English Language Teaching series London Prentice-Hall International (UK) Ltd 202 pagesScott WA amp Ytreberg LH (1990) Teaching English to children (Chapter 4) New York Longman httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedScott20Ytreberg20Oral20Workpdf

ldquoListening to chants or songs

and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo

are not enough to say that

language acquisition is

taking placerdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

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12 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

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TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

18 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

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Page 5: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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TEACHING WRITING

In process writing the focus shifts from the final product itself to the different stages the writer goes through in order to achieve this outcome By breaking down the task as a whole into its constituent parts writing becomes less daunting and more manageable to the EFL studentStage 1First students generate ideas by brainstorming and discussion second they extend ideas into note form Then they organize ideas into a mind map spidergram or linear form This stage helps to make the relationship of ideas more immediately obvious which helps students with the structure of their texts At this phase the teacher provides only language supportStage 2Students write the first draft This is done in class and frequently in pairs or groups Stage 3Drafts are exchanged students become the readers of each otherrsquos work By responding as readers students develop an awareness of the fact that a writer is producing something to be read by someone else and thus can improve their own draftsStage 4Drafts are returned and improvements are made based upon peer feedback Stage 5A final draft is written Stage 6students once again exchange and read each otherrsquos work and perhaps even write a response or reply

The process in lsquonot linearrsquo but lsquorecursiversquo as in Tribblersquos words lsquoat any point in the preparation of a text writers can loop backwards or forwards to whichever of the activities involved in text composition

they may find usefulrsquo (Tribble 1996 p 59) Therefore it allows for great flexibility Writing is no longer a laborious activity if process-writing approach is adopted in the language classroom This model alleviates most of the problems associated with this skill and turns the writing class into an interesting and communicative experience Furthermore using this approach at lower levels is not only feasible but also backs the language learner up to become a talented writer in English There is a clear distinction between process-oriented and product-oriented writingNunan (2001) clearly states how very different this ldquoprocessrdquo approach is from the traditional product-oriented approach Whereas the product approach focuses on writing tasks in which the learner imitates copies and transforms teacher supplied models the process approach focuses on the steps involved in creating a piece of work The primary goal of product writing is an error-free coherent text Process writing allows for the fact that no text can be perfect but that a writer will get closer to perfection by producing reflecting on discussing and reworking successive drafts of a text James Mccrimmon sees it as the difference between writing as a way of knowing (process) and wring as a way of telling (product) donald Murray sees it as the difference between internal and external revision (revising in order to clarify meaning for oneself vs revising in order to clarify meaning for the reader) Linda Flower sees it as the difference between writer-based and reader-based prose

a coMParisoN oF Product aNd Process aPProaches

ldquoProcess writing allows for the

fact that no text can be perfect

but that a writer will get closer to perfection

by producing reflecting on

discussing and reworking

successive drafts of a textrdquo

Product Processbull Model text to be imitatedbull Emphasis on organization of ideasbull one draftbull Emphasis on end productbull Teacher as audiencebull Teacher as authoritybull Importance of teacher-corrected papers

bull Model text as resource for comparisonbull Emphasis on ideas and idea development bull Multiple draftsbull Emphasis on processbull Various audiences according to type of

writingbull Peer feedback as valuable toolbull Importance of conferencing and interactive

feedback

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TEACHING WRITING

Which aPProach to use

The approach to use will depend on you the teacher and on the students and the genre of the text Certain genres such as formal letters and postcards in which the features (layout style organization and grammar) are fixed lend themselves most often to a product-driven approach The other genres such as discursive essays and narrative lend themselves to process-driven approaches

coNcLusioN

I believe that the two approaches are not necessarily incompatible Like the product approach the Process-centred one

does not repudiate all interest in the product (ie the final draft) Both aim at achieving the best product possible Consequently it is obvious that using aspects of both models may be the most effective approach in teaching writing as Nunan (1999) reaffirms ldquothere is no reason why a writing program should not contain elements of both approachesrdquo

ldquoThe approach to use will

depend on you the teacher

and on the students and

the genre of the textrdquo

What are the Pros aNd coNs oF each aPProach

Prosbull Easy to use with large classesbull Easier to grade because emphasis is on

formbull useful approach when form is importantconsbull Does not teach how to write independentlybull Does not teach how to thinkbull Does not make writing a manageable and

intentional activitybull Limits creativity and demotivates the

learner

Prosbull Helps novice writers develop skills to write

on their ownbull Encourages a thoughtful approach to

writingbull Helps develop thinking skills and learning

strategiesbull Helps writers to own their writing processcons bull Can take more time to teach bull Need to be sure that writer does not make

process explicit in writing itselfbull Can make classroom more challenging for

the teacher

ldquousing aspects of both models

may be the most effective

approach in teaching

writingrdquo

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IN VARIous CouNTRIEs IN THE WoRLD the curricular of teaching English to young learners often emphasize the use of songs and chants This is simply because children love them and they can be both used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a very funny and engaging way Besides they can help children improve their oral skills However some researchers believe that listening and repeating a number of words or sentences are not enough for the learner to acquire a new language Thus it important for us to know how a teacher can make sure that language acquisition is taking place in hisher young learnersrsquo classroom particularly with respect to oral communication As teachers of young learners we are often advised or trained to integrate songs or chants in our teaching Besides our studentsrsquo books usually contain listening scripts either of songs or chants Thus according to scott and Ytreberg (1990) the majority of English teachers

throughout this world have used songs for one teaching purpose or another What makes chants and especially songs frequently used is that they have specific features First of all ldquosongs are highly memorablerdquo and ldquohighly motivatingrdquo (Davanellos 1999 13) as they create a joyful and interesting classroom atmosphere and they break up with the routines of the daily lesson secondly I have myself realized quite often that my third year primary students became very motivated while repeating the same introductory part of the ldquoHappy streetrdquo song at the beginning of each unit Thirdly I noticed that even weaker students enjoyed repeating the highly rhythmical verses while the CD player was on In addition they feel they are participating with their best peers at least in one activity of the lesson- that is the warming up- while smiling and tapping on their desks

By Noamen Amara Teacher of English

Young learner classes often have fun songs and chants that are repeated Children love them and they can be used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a fun and engaging way These can be very useful for improving studentsrsquo oral skills however ldquoWhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo (Slatterly amp Willis)

ldquoAs teachers of young learners we

are often advised or trained to integrate

songs or chants in our teachingrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

ADVANTAGEs AND LIMITATIoNs

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Hence you can see that children enjoy the funny and merry atmosphere of songs and chants as they can learn by listening and repeating chunks of language Also songs can be useful for improving the learnersrsquo oral skills by listening and repeating what they hear

on the contrary slatterly and Willis emphasize that ldquowhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo This is in part true since when students just repeat chunks of language in a mechanical way without being aware of what they pronounce we can not say that learning is taking place In other words students in this case are just like parrots repeating sounds that they hear while being unaware of the message implied in the sounds that they utter Besides we can not talk about language acquisition or learning without necessarily referring to the mind So according to Arnold (2005) listening turns out to be ldquoan active processrdquo only if ldquothe mind actively engages in making meaningrdquo Thus as teachers we have to make sure that the listening material that we use in our lessons matches the studentsrsquo level because according to Krashenrsquos view acquisition canrsquot take place unless the input is ldquocomprehensiblerdquo(1981 6-7) In this context Brewster Ellis and Girard (2002) point out that ldquoif someone is giving you a message or opinion then of course you have to be able to understand it in order to respondrdquo Thus decoding the message into a ldquocomprehensible inputrdquo is vital in the acquisition or learning process Whenever there is a listening activity I usually make my best to ensure that my students manage to understand the listening passage through various ways and extra material that you will see The foreign language acquisition can take place through various ways during the teachinglearning process For example I often guide my pupils in the pre-listening activity to understand the keywords either through realia or flashcards or visuals Also scott and Ytreberg suggest (1990 34) ldquousing puppets or a class mascotrdquo as useful materials because they can be of great help

while ldquopresenting new language orallyrdquo For instance a parrot puppet can whisper into a studentrsquos ear give instructions or tell a story to the whole class Besides I always advise my young learners to use their background knowledge of any subject at hand in order to understand what the listening passage is about For instance my fourth-year students rely on their pre-requisite knowledge of science andor social studies to listen to the song entitled ldquoAmazing Animalsrdquo and match each section with the right ldquomilieurdquo where each animal lives Thus by relying on the teacherrsquos extra material and their background knowledge of the subject matter young learners often manage to understand the listening passage which they use later either for memorizing new vocabulary answering questions or consolidating pronunciation of new phonetic sounds While implementing the lesson plan songs and chants as listening materials can be used for various purposes and in any of the three stages of a lesson pre-stage while stage and post-stage As a good example of using a chant in the pre-stage in my junior class my young learners listened to and repeated a chant entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo so as to be familiar with the body parts while I was showing them the flash card of each member at the appropriate section So using the flash cards helped my pupils better understand the new lexical items of the body parts while listening to the chant In the while stage my students were asked to listen to a song about the same topic and act The song was centered on a set of activities based on Total Physical Response (TPR) where children listen and touch the body part(s) At this stage the teacher should make sure that hisher students understand the new vocabulary by responding appropriately to the song and touching the right body member(s) At this point I need to mention that before each listening activity the teacher should ldquoguidehellip[hisher studentsrsquo] attention to specific parts of the spoken textrsquo so that the learners will be aware of the purpose of and the rationale behind the listening activity as I did

ldquoWe have to make sure that the

listening material that we use in our

lessons matches the studentsrsquo

levelrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

Noamen AmaraTeacher of English since 2001bull 2001-2006 teaching in Tunisian schoolsbull 2006-2010 teaching in the Kingdom of

Bahrainbull teacher trainer for the CAPEs trainees

in the school years 2004-2005 2005-2006

bull Participation in an e-teacher scholarship Program at the university of Maryland Baltimore County usA entitled ldquoTeaching English to Young Learnersrdquo from January the 14th to March 24th 2010

For a more detailed profile of Noamen Amarahttpteachingenglish-alexenoamenblogspotcom200901noamen-mahfoudh-amara-curriculum-vitaehtml

10 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

In this framework Donaldson (1978) says that children need to know the lsquopurposes and intentionsrsquo which they can recognise and respond to This is simply because if the students are not aware of the reasons behind the listening activity they will not pay much attention to the content and if they try to do so their focus will be shattered by the lack of a reasonable motiveListening can also take place at the post-stage For example at the end of the first lesson entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo my students were asked to listen to the child talking about his body parts in detail while they have to point to each part whenever it is mentioned and then say it again At this stage the teacher should monitor and see whether hisher students are pointing to the right member and naming it appropriately or not If not she can help the weaker students by listening again and repeating until she makes sure that the students master thatIn the follow up activity each student was asked to come in front of his peers and identify each of his following body parts eye nose hair ear and mouth Before the activity takes place I gave a model for my students to follow by pointing to and naming each of my body parts Thus students became more motivated and were enough confident to speak in front of their peers and refer to themselves In case of errors the other students were willing to correct their classmate(s) in a very funny and tolerant atmosphere To sum up I can say that songs and chants are very useful materials in the classroom of young learners since they create a cheerful and amusing atmosphere Besides children love to learn while playing or listening to music Yet as slatterly and Willis emphasize listening to chants or songs and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo are not enough to say that language acquisition is taking place Thus the teacher should make sure that herhis students really understand what they are saying otherwise they will be just repeating mechanically chunks of language without involving their minds and feelings

references

Arnold W (2005) Listening for Young Learners httpblackboardumbceduwebappsportalframesetjsptab_id=_2_1ampurl=2fwebapps2fblackboard2fexecute2flauncher3ftype3dCourse26id3d_52891_126url3dBrewster J Ellis G amp Girard D (2002) The Primary English Teacherrsquos Guide New Edition England Pearson Education Limited cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Davanellos Akis (1999) Songs ENGLISH TEACHING professional Issue Thirteen httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedSongs20Akis20DavanellospdfDonaldson M (1978) Childrenrsquos Minds LondonFontana Press cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Krashen Stephen D (1981) Principles and Practice in Second Language Acquisition English Language Teaching series London Prentice-Hall International (UK) Ltd 202 pagesScott WA amp Ytreberg LH (1990) Teaching English to children (Chapter 4) New York Longman httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedScott20Ytreberg20Oral20Workpdf

ldquoListening to chants or songs

and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo

are not enough to say that

language acquisition is

taking placerdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

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12 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

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TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

18 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 19

INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 27

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 6: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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TEACHING WRITING

Which aPProach to use

The approach to use will depend on you the teacher and on the students and the genre of the text Certain genres such as formal letters and postcards in which the features (layout style organization and grammar) are fixed lend themselves most often to a product-driven approach The other genres such as discursive essays and narrative lend themselves to process-driven approaches

coNcLusioN

I believe that the two approaches are not necessarily incompatible Like the product approach the Process-centred one

does not repudiate all interest in the product (ie the final draft) Both aim at achieving the best product possible Consequently it is obvious that using aspects of both models may be the most effective approach in teaching writing as Nunan (1999) reaffirms ldquothere is no reason why a writing program should not contain elements of both approachesrdquo

ldquoThe approach to use will

depend on you the teacher

and on the students and

the genre of the textrdquo

What are the Pros aNd coNs oF each aPProach

Prosbull Easy to use with large classesbull Easier to grade because emphasis is on

formbull useful approach when form is importantconsbull Does not teach how to write independentlybull Does not teach how to thinkbull Does not make writing a manageable and

intentional activitybull Limits creativity and demotivates the

learner

Prosbull Helps novice writers develop skills to write

on their ownbull Encourages a thoughtful approach to

writingbull Helps develop thinking skills and learning

strategiesbull Helps writers to own their writing processcons bull Can take more time to teach bull Need to be sure that writer does not make

process explicit in writing itselfbull Can make classroom more challenging for

the teacher

ldquousing aspects of both models

may be the most effective

approach in teaching

writingrdquo

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IN VARIous CouNTRIEs IN THE WoRLD the curricular of teaching English to young learners often emphasize the use of songs and chants This is simply because children love them and they can be both used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a very funny and engaging way Besides they can help children improve their oral skills However some researchers believe that listening and repeating a number of words or sentences are not enough for the learner to acquire a new language Thus it important for us to know how a teacher can make sure that language acquisition is taking place in hisher young learnersrsquo classroom particularly with respect to oral communication As teachers of young learners we are often advised or trained to integrate songs or chants in our teaching Besides our studentsrsquo books usually contain listening scripts either of songs or chants Thus according to scott and Ytreberg (1990) the majority of English teachers

throughout this world have used songs for one teaching purpose or another What makes chants and especially songs frequently used is that they have specific features First of all ldquosongs are highly memorablerdquo and ldquohighly motivatingrdquo (Davanellos 1999 13) as they create a joyful and interesting classroom atmosphere and they break up with the routines of the daily lesson secondly I have myself realized quite often that my third year primary students became very motivated while repeating the same introductory part of the ldquoHappy streetrdquo song at the beginning of each unit Thirdly I noticed that even weaker students enjoyed repeating the highly rhythmical verses while the CD player was on In addition they feel they are participating with their best peers at least in one activity of the lesson- that is the warming up- while smiling and tapping on their desks

By Noamen Amara Teacher of English

Young learner classes often have fun songs and chants that are repeated Children love them and they can be used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a fun and engaging way These can be very useful for improving studentsrsquo oral skills however ldquoWhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo (Slatterly amp Willis)

ldquoAs teachers of young learners we

are often advised or trained to integrate

songs or chants in our teachingrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

ADVANTAGEs AND LIMITATIoNs

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Hence you can see that children enjoy the funny and merry atmosphere of songs and chants as they can learn by listening and repeating chunks of language Also songs can be useful for improving the learnersrsquo oral skills by listening and repeating what they hear

on the contrary slatterly and Willis emphasize that ldquowhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo This is in part true since when students just repeat chunks of language in a mechanical way without being aware of what they pronounce we can not say that learning is taking place In other words students in this case are just like parrots repeating sounds that they hear while being unaware of the message implied in the sounds that they utter Besides we can not talk about language acquisition or learning without necessarily referring to the mind So according to Arnold (2005) listening turns out to be ldquoan active processrdquo only if ldquothe mind actively engages in making meaningrdquo Thus as teachers we have to make sure that the listening material that we use in our lessons matches the studentsrsquo level because according to Krashenrsquos view acquisition canrsquot take place unless the input is ldquocomprehensiblerdquo(1981 6-7) In this context Brewster Ellis and Girard (2002) point out that ldquoif someone is giving you a message or opinion then of course you have to be able to understand it in order to respondrdquo Thus decoding the message into a ldquocomprehensible inputrdquo is vital in the acquisition or learning process Whenever there is a listening activity I usually make my best to ensure that my students manage to understand the listening passage through various ways and extra material that you will see The foreign language acquisition can take place through various ways during the teachinglearning process For example I often guide my pupils in the pre-listening activity to understand the keywords either through realia or flashcards or visuals Also scott and Ytreberg suggest (1990 34) ldquousing puppets or a class mascotrdquo as useful materials because they can be of great help

while ldquopresenting new language orallyrdquo For instance a parrot puppet can whisper into a studentrsquos ear give instructions or tell a story to the whole class Besides I always advise my young learners to use their background knowledge of any subject at hand in order to understand what the listening passage is about For instance my fourth-year students rely on their pre-requisite knowledge of science andor social studies to listen to the song entitled ldquoAmazing Animalsrdquo and match each section with the right ldquomilieurdquo where each animal lives Thus by relying on the teacherrsquos extra material and their background knowledge of the subject matter young learners often manage to understand the listening passage which they use later either for memorizing new vocabulary answering questions or consolidating pronunciation of new phonetic sounds While implementing the lesson plan songs and chants as listening materials can be used for various purposes and in any of the three stages of a lesson pre-stage while stage and post-stage As a good example of using a chant in the pre-stage in my junior class my young learners listened to and repeated a chant entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo so as to be familiar with the body parts while I was showing them the flash card of each member at the appropriate section So using the flash cards helped my pupils better understand the new lexical items of the body parts while listening to the chant In the while stage my students were asked to listen to a song about the same topic and act The song was centered on a set of activities based on Total Physical Response (TPR) where children listen and touch the body part(s) At this stage the teacher should make sure that hisher students understand the new vocabulary by responding appropriately to the song and touching the right body member(s) At this point I need to mention that before each listening activity the teacher should ldquoguidehellip[hisher studentsrsquo] attention to specific parts of the spoken textrsquo so that the learners will be aware of the purpose of and the rationale behind the listening activity as I did

ldquoWe have to make sure that the

listening material that we use in our

lessons matches the studentsrsquo

levelrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

Noamen AmaraTeacher of English since 2001bull 2001-2006 teaching in Tunisian schoolsbull 2006-2010 teaching in the Kingdom of

Bahrainbull teacher trainer for the CAPEs trainees

in the school years 2004-2005 2005-2006

bull Participation in an e-teacher scholarship Program at the university of Maryland Baltimore County usA entitled ldquoTeaching English to Young Learnersrdquo from January the 14th to March 24th 2010

For a more detailed profile of Noamen Amarahttpteachingenglish-alexenoamenblogspotcom200901noamen-mahfoudh-amara-curriculum-vitaehtml

10 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

In this framework Donaldson (1978) says that children need to know the lsquopurposes and intentionsrsquo which they can recognise and respond to This is simply because if the students are not aware of the reasons behind the listening activity they will not pay much attention to the content and if they try to do so their focus will be shattered by the lack of a reasonable motiveListening can also take place at the post-stage For example at the end of the first lesson entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo my students were asked to listen to the child talking about his body parts in detail while they have to point to each part whenever it is mentioned and then say it again At this stage the teacher should monitor and see whether hisher students are pointing to the right member and naming it appropriately or not If not she can help the weaker students by listening again and repeating until she makes sure that the students master thatIn the follow up activity each student was asked to come in front of his peers and identify each of his following body parts eye nose hair ear and mouth Before the activity takes place I gave a model for my students to follow by pointing to and naming each of my body parts Thus students became more motivated and were enough confident to speak in front of their peers and refer to themselves In case of errors the other students were willing to correct their classmate(s) in a very funny and tolerant atmosphere To sum up I can say that songs and chants are very useful materials in the classroom of young learners since they create a cheerful and amusing atmosphere Besides children love to learn while playing or listening to music Yet as slatterly and Willis emphasize listening to chants or songs and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo are not enough to say that language acquisition is taking place Thus the teacher should make sure that herhis students really understand what they are saying otherwise they will be just repeating mechanically chunks of language without involving their minds and feelings

references

Arnold W (2005) Listening for Young Learners httpblackboardumbceduwebappsportalframesetjsptab_id=_2_1ampurl=2fwebapps2fblackboard2fexecute2flauncher3ftype3dCourse26id3d_52891_126url3dBrewster J Ellis G amp Girard D (2002) The Primary English Teacherrsquos Guide New Edition England Pearson Education Limited cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Davanellos Akis (1999) Songs ENGLISH TEACHING professional Issue Thirteen httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedSongs20Akis20DavanellospdfDonaldson M (1978) Childrenrsquos Minds LondonFontana Press cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Krashen Stephen D (1981) Principles and Practice in Second Language Acquisition English Language Teaching series London Prentice-Hall International (UK) Ltd 202 pagesScott WA amp Ytreberg LH (1990) Teaching English to children (Chapter 4) New York Longman httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedScott20Ytreberg20Oral20Workpdf

ldquoListening to chants or songs

and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo

are not enough to say that

language acquisition is

taking placerdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

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12 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

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TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

18 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 7: The Tunisian ELT Forum

8 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

IN VARIous CouNTRIEs IN THE WoRLD the curricular of teaching English to young learners often emphasize the use of songs and chants This is simply because children love them and they can be both used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a very funny and engaging way Besides they can help children improve their oral skills However some researchers believe that listening and repeating a number of words or sentences are not enough for the learner to acquire a new language Thus it important for us to know how a teacher can make sure that language acquisition is taking place in hisher young learnersrsquo classroom particularly with respect to oral communication As teachers of young learners we are often advised or trained to integrate songs or chants in our teaching Besides our studentsrsquo books usually contain listening scripts either of songs or chants Thus according to scott and Ytreberg (1990) the majority of English teachers

throughout this world have used songs for one teaching purpose or another What makes chants and especially songs frequently used is that they have specific features First of all ldquosongs are highly memorablerdquo and ldquohighly motivatingrdquo (Davanellos 1999 13) as they create a joyful and interesting classroom atmosphere and they break up with the routines of the daily lesson secondly I have myself realized quite often that my third year primary students became very motivated while repeating the same introductory part of the ldquoHappy streetrdquo song at the beginning of each unit Thirdly I noticed that even weaker students enjoyed repeating the highly rhythmical verses while the CD player was on In addition they feel they are participating with their best peers at least in one activity of the lesson- that is the warming up- while smiling and tapping on their desks

By Noamen Amara Teacher of English

Young learner classes often have fun songs and chants that are repeated Children love them and they can be used to teach vocabulary and grammar in a fun and engaging way These can be very useful for improving studentsrsquo oral skills however ldquoWhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo (Slatterly amp Willis)

ldquoAs teachers of young learners we

are often advised or trained to integrate

songs or chants in our teachingrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

ADVANTAGEs AND LIMITATIoNs

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Hence you can see that children enjoy the funny and merry atmosphere of songs and chants as they can learn by listening and repeating chunks of language Also songs can be useful for improving the learnersrsquo oral skills by listening and repeating what they hear

on the contrary slatterly and Willis emphasize that ldquowhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo This is in part true since when students just repeat chunks of language in a mechanical way without being aware of what they pronounce we can not say that learning is taking place In other words students in this case are just like parrots repeating sounds that they hear while being unaware of the message implied in the sounds that they utter Besides we can not talk about language acquisition or learning without necessarily referring to the mind So according to Arnold (2005) listening turns out to be ldquoan active processrdquo only if ldquothe mind actively engages in making meaningrdquo Thus as teachers we have to make sure that the listening material that we use in our lessons matches the studentsrsquo level because according to Krashenrsquos view acquisition canrsquot take place unless the input is ldquocomprehensiblerdquo(1981 6-7) In this context Brewster Ellis and Girard (2002) point out that ldquoif someone is giving you a message or opinion then of course you have to be able to understand it in order to respondrdquo Thus decoding the message into a ldquocomprehensible inputrdquo is vital in the acquisition or learning process Whenever there is a listening activity I usually make my best to ensure that my students manage to understand the listening passage through various ways and extra material that you will see The foreign language acquisition can take place through various ways during the teachinglearning process For example I often guide my pupils in the pre-listening activity to understand the keywords either through realia or flashcards or visuals Also scott and Ytreberg suggest (1990 34) ldquousing puppets or a class mascotrdquo as useful materials because they can be of great help

while ldquopresenting new language orallyrdquo For instance a parrot puppet can whisper into a studentrsquos ear give instructions or tell a story to the whole class Besides I always advise my young learners to use their background knowledge of any subject at hand in order to understand what the listening passage is about For instance my fourth-year students rely on their pre-requisite knowledge of science andor social studies to listen to the song entitled ldquoAmazing Animalsrdquo and match each section with the right ldquomilieurdquo where each animal lives Thus by relying on the teacherrsquos extra material and their background knowledge of the subject matter young learners often manage to understand the listening passage which they use later either for memorizing new vocabulary answering questions or consolidating pronunciation of new phonetic sounds While implementing the lesson plan songs and chants as listening materials can be used for various purposes and in any of the three stages of a lesson pre-stage while stage and post-stage As a good example of using a chant in the pre-stage in my junior class my young learners listened to and repeated a chant entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo so as to be familiar with the body parts while I was showing them the flash card of each member at the appropriate section So using the flash cards helped my pupils better understand the new lexical items of the body parts while listening to the chant In the while stage my students were asked to listen to a song about the same topic and act The song was centered on a set of activities based on Total Physical Response (TPR) where children listen and touch the body part(s) At this stage the teacher should make sure that hisher students understand the new vocabulary by responding appropriately to the song and touching the right body member(s) At this point I need to mention that before each listening activity the teacher should ldquoguidehellip[hisher studentsrsquo] attention to specific parts of the spoken textrsquo so that the learners will be aware of the purpose of and the rationale behind the listening activity as I did

ldquoWe have to make sure that the

listening material that we use in our

lessons matches the studentsrsquo

levelrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

Noamen AmaraTeacher of English since 2001bull 2001-2006 teaching in Tunisian schoolsbull 2006-2010 teaching in the Kingdom of

Bahrainbull teacher trainer for the CAPEs trainees

in the school years 2004-2005 2005-2006

bull Participation in an e-teacher scholarship Program at the university of Maryland Baltimore County usA entitled ldquoTeaching English to Young Learnersrdquo from January the 14th to March 24th 2010

For a more detailed profile of Noamen Amarahttpteachingenglish-alexenoamenblogspotcom200901noamen-mahfoudh-amara-curriculum-vitaehtml

10 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

In this framework Donaldson (1978) says that children need to know the lsquopurposes and intentionsrsquo which they can recognise and respond to This is simply because if the students are not aware of the reasons behind the listening activity they will not pay much attention to the content and if they try to do so their focus will be shattered by the lack of a reasonable motiveListening can also take place at the post-stage For example at the end of the first lesson entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo my students were asked to listen to the child talking about his body parts in detail while they have to point to each part whenever it is mentioned and then say it again At this stage the teacher should monitor and see whether hisher students are pointing to the right member and naming it appropriately or not If not she can help the weaker students by listening again and repeating until she makes sure that the students master thatIn the follow up activity each student was asked to come in front of his peers and identify each of his following body parts eye nose hair ear and mouth Before the activity takes place I gave a model for my students to follow by pointing to and naming each of my body parts Thus students became more motivated and were enough confident to speak in front of their peers and refer to themselves In case of errors the other students were willing to correct their classmate(s) in a very funny and tolerant atmosphere To sum up I can say that songs and chants are very useful materials in the classroom of young learners since they create a cheerful and amusing atmosphere Besides children love to learn while playing or listening to music Yet as slatterly and Willis emphasize listening to chants or songs and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo are not enough to say that language acquisition is taking place Thus the teacher should make sure that herhis students really understand what they are saying otherwise they will be just repeating mechanically chunks of language without involving their minds and feelings

references

Arnold W (2005) Listening for Young Learners httpblackboardumbceduwebappsportalframesetjsptab_id=_2_1ampurl=2fwebapps2fblackboard2fexecute2flauncher3ftype3dCourse26id3d_52891_126url3dBrewster J Ellis G amp Girard D (2002) The Primary English Teacherrsquos Guide New Edition England Pearson Education Limited cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Davanellos Akis (1999) Songs ENGLISH TEACHING professional Issue Thirteen httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedSongs20Akis20DavanellospdfDonaldson M (1978) Childrenrsquos Minds LondonFontana Press cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Krashen Stephen D (1981) Principles and Practice in Second Language Acquisition English Language Teaching series London Prentice-Hall International (UK) Ltd 202 pagesScott WA amp Ytreberg LH (1990) Teaching English to children (Chapter 4) New York Longman httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedScott20Ytreberg20Oral20Workpdf

ldquoListening to chants or songs

and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo

are not enough to say that

language acquisition is

taking placerdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

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12 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

14 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

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TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

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Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

26 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 8: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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Hence you can see that children enjoy the funny and merry atmosphere of songs and chants as they can learn by listening and repeating chunks of language Also songs can be useful for improving the learnersrsquo oral skills by listening and repeating what they hear

on the contrary slatterly and Willis emphasize that ldquowhen children repeat set phrases it does not necessarily mean language acquisition is taking placerdquo This is in part true since when students just repeat chunks of language in a mechanical way without being aware of what they pronounce we can not say that learning is taking place In other words students in this case are just like parrots repeating sounds that they hear while being unaware of the message implied in the sounds that they utter Besides we can not talk about language acquisition or learning without necessarily referring to the mind So according to Arnold (2005) listening turns out to be ldquoan active processrdquo only if ldquothe mind actively engages in making meaningrdquo Thus as teachers we have to make sure that the listening material that we use in our lessons matches the studentsrsquo level because according to Krashenrsquos view acquisition canrsquot take place unless the input is ldquocomprehensiblerdquo(1981 6-7) In this context Brewster Ellis and Girard (2002) point out that ldquoif someone is giving you a message or opinion then of course you have to be able to understand it in order to respondrdquo Thus decoding the message into a ldquocomprehensible inputrdquo is vital in the acquisition or learning process Whenever there is a listening activity I usually make my best to ensure that my students manage to understand the listening passage through various ways and extra material that you will see The foreign language acquisition can take place through various ways during the teachinglearning process For example I often guide my pupils in the pre-listening activity to understand the keywords either through realia or flashcards or visuals Also scott and Ytreberg suggest (1990 34) ldquousing puppets or a class mascotrdquo as useful materials because they can be of great help

while ldquopresenting new language orallyrdquo For instance a parrot puppet can whisper into a studentrsquos ear give instructions or tell a story to the whole class Besides I always advise my young learners to use their background knowledge of any subject at hand in order to understand what the listening passage is about For instance my fourth-year students rely on their pre-requisite knowledge of science andor social studies to listen to the song entitled ldquoAmazing Animalsrdquo and match each section with the right ldquomilieurdquo where each animal lives Thus by relying on the teacherrsquos extra material and their background knowledge of the subject matter young learners often manage to understand the listening passage which they use later either for memorizing new vocabulary answering questions or consolidating pronunciation of new phonetic sounds While implementing the lesson plan songs and chants as listening materials can be used for various purposes and in any of the three stages of a lesson pre-stage while stage and post-stage As a good example of using a chant in the pre-stage in my junior class my young learners listened to and repeated a chant entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo so as to be familiar with the body parts while I was showing them the flash card of each member at the appropriate section So using the flash cards helped my pupils better understand the new lexical items of the body parts while listening to the chant In the while stage my students were asked to listen to a song about the same topic and act The song was centered on a set of activities based on Total Physical Response (TPR) where children listen and touch the body part(s) At this stage the teacher should make sure that hisher students understand the new vocabulary by responding appropriately to the song and touching the right body member(s) At this point I need to mention that before each listening activity the teacher should ldquoguidehellip[hisher studentsrsquo] attention to specific parts of the spoken textrsquo so that the learners will be aware of the purpose of and the rationale behind the listening activity as I did

ldquoWe have to make sure that the

listening material that we use in our

lessons matches the studentsrsquo

levelrdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

Noamen AmaraTeacher of English since 2001bull 2001-2006 teaching in Tunisian schoolsbull 2006-2010 teaching in the Kingdom of

Bahrainbull teacher trainer for the CAPEs trainees

in the school years 2004-2005 2005-2006

bull Participation in an e-teacher scholarship Program at the university of Maryland Baltimore County usA entitled ldquoTeaching English to Young Learnersrdquo from January the 14th to March 24th 2010

For a more detailed profile of Noamen Amarahttpteachingenglish-alexenoamenblogspotcom200901noamen-mahfoudh-amara-curriculum-vitaehtml

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In this framework Donaldson (1978) says that children need to know the lsquopurposes and intentionsrsquo which they can recognise and respond to This is simply because if the students are not aware of the reasons behind the listening activity they will not pay much attention to the content and if they try to do so their focus will be shattered by the lack of a reasonable motiveListening can also take place at the post-stage For example at the end of the first lesson entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo my students were asked to listen to the child talking about his body parts in detail while they have to point to each part whenever it is mentioned and then say it again At this stage the teacher should monitor and see whether hisher students are pointing to the right member and naming it appropriately or not If not she can help the weaker students by listening again and repeating until she makes sure that the students master thatIn the follow up activity each student was asked to come in front of his peers and identify each of his following body parts eye nose hair ear and mouth Before the activity takes place I gave a model for my students to follow by pointing to and naming each of my body parts Thus students became more motivated and were enough confident to speak in front of their peers and refer to themselves In case of errors the other students were willing to correct their classmate(s) in a very funny and tolerant atmosphere To sum up I can say that songs and chants are very useful materials in the classroom of young learners since they create a cheerful and amusing atmosphere Besides children love to learn while playing or listening to music Yet as slatterly and Willis emphasize listening to chants or songs and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo are not enough to say that language acquisition is taking place Thus the teacher should make sure that herhis students really understand what they are saying otherwise they will be just repeating mechanically chunks of language without involving their minds and feelings

references

Arnold W (2005) Listening for Young Learners httpblackboardumbceduwebappsportalframesetjsptab_id=_2_1ampurl=2fwebapps2fblackboard2fexecute2flauncher3ftype3dCourse26id3d_52891_126url3dBrewster J Ellis G amp Girard D (2002) The Primary English Teacherrsquos Guide New Edition England Pearson Education Limited cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Davanellos Akis (1999) Songs ENGLISH TEACHING professional Issue Thirteen httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedSongs20Akis20DavanellospdfDonaldson M (1978) Childrenrsquos Minds LondonFontana Press cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Krashen Stephen D (1981) Principles and Practice in Second Language Acquisition English Language Teaching series London Prentice-Hall International (UK) Ltd 202 pagesScott WA amp Ytreberg LH (1990) Teaching English to children (Chapter 4) New York Longman httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedScott20Ytreberg20Oral20Workpdf

ldquoListening to chants or songs

and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo

are not enough to say that

language acquisition is

taking placerdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

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Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 15

TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

18 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 9: The Tunisian ELT Forum

Noamen AmaraTeacher of English since 2001bull 2001-2006 teaching in Tunisian schoolsbull 2006-2010 teaching in the Kingdom of

Bahrainbull teacher trainer for the CAPEs trainees

in the school years 2004-2005 2005-2006

bull Participation in an e-teacher scholarship Program at the university of Maryland Baltimore County usA entitled ldquoTeaching English to Young Learnersrdquo from January the 14th to March 24th 2010

For a more detailed profile of Noamen Amarahttpteachingenglish-alexenoamenblogspotcom200901noamen-mahfoudh-amara-curriculum-vitaehtml

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In this framework Donaldson (1978) says that children need to know the lsquopurposes and intentionsrsquo which they can recognise and respond to This is simply because if the students are not aware of the reasons behind the listening activity they will not pay much attention to the content and if they try to do so their focus will be shattered by the lack of a reasonable motiveListening can also take place at the post-stage For example at the end of the first lesson entitled ldquoMy Bodyrdquo my students were asked to listen to the child talking about his body parts in detail while they have to point to each part whenever it is mentioned and then say it again At this stage the teacher should monitor and see whether hisher students are pointing to the right member and naming it appropriately or not If not she can help the weaker students by listening again and repeating until she makes sure that the students master thatIn the follow up activity each student was asked to come in front of his peers and identify each of his following body parts eye nose hair ear and mouth Before the activity takes place I gave a model for my students to follow by pointing to and naming each of my body parts Thus students became more motivated and were enough confident to speak in front of their peers and refer to themselves In case of errors the other students were willing to correct their classmate(s) in a very funny and tolerant atmosphere To sum up I can say that songs and chants are very useful materials in the classroom of young learners since they create a cheerful and amusing atmosphere Besides children love to learn while playing or listening to music Yet as slatterly and Willis emphasize listening to chants or songs and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo are not enough to say that language acquisition is taking place Thus the teacher should make sure that herhis students really understand what they are saying otherwise they will be just repeating mechanically chunks of language without involving their minds and feelings

references

Arnold W (2005) Listening for Young Learners httpblackboardumbceduwebappsportalframesetjsptab_id=_2_1ampurl=2fwebapps2fblackboard2fexecute2flauncher3ftype3dCourse26id3d_52891_126url3dBrewster J Ellis G amp Girard D (2002) The Primary English Teacherrsquos Guide New Edition England Pearson Education Limited cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Davanellos Akis (1999) Songs ENGLISH TEACHING professional Issue Thirteen httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedSongs20Akis20DavanellospdfDonaldson M (1978) Childrenrsquos Minds LondonFontana Press cited in Wendy Arnold (2005) Listening for Young Learners Krashen Stephen D (1981) Principles and Practice in Second Language Acquisition English Language Teaching series London Prentice-Hall International (UK) Ltd 202 pagesScott WA amp Ytreberg LH (1990) Teaching English to children (Chapter 4) New York Longman httpblackboardumbceduF5EBF8DF028637D3696FCDF9CABC6816courses1ELC688YL_8030_WT2010content_1187527_1embeddedScott20Ytreberg20Oral20Workpdf

ldquoListening to chants or songs

and repeating ldquoset phrasesrdquo

are not enough to say that

language acquisition is

taking placerdquo

TEACHING VoCABuLARY

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Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

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TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

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Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 10: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 15

TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

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Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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12 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Do Rules RuleLEARNING To PuNCTuATE WITH REAL BooKs NoT RuLE BooKs

WRITING DYNAMICs

BECAusE PuNCTuATIoN is so problematic and even people who know the rules have problems applying them I think it makes more sense to talk about how punctuation works in real books rather than in rule books In fact I think rule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first place

thiNkiNg ruLes

so how are we going to punctuate our writing if we donrsquot follow rules Wersquore going to take the advice of Pulitzer Prize-winning writer and writing coach donald Murray

The writer should not follow rules but follow language toward meaning always seeking to understand what is appearing on the page to see it clearly to evaluate it clearly for clear thinking will produce clear writing

Rather than memorizing rules and

then relying on them to tell us whether our writing is right wersquore going to rely on our brains and evaluate our writing for ourselves Wersquore going to read our writing carefully ask ourselves what we think it means and think clearly about whether or not it will mean the same thing to our readers

Any time you want you can put this article down and grab a rule book Therersquos certainly no shortage of them thatrsquos for sure I think I have twelve And I do look at them when Irsquom curious about something But when I write I take Mr Murrayrsquos advice and instead of following rules I follow language toward meaningI also follow Mr Murrayrsquos advice when I teach writing Thatrsquos why Irsquom more inclined to rely on real books than rule books when I want students to learn something new

By Steve Peha President of TTMS

(Teaching That Makes Sense) wwwttmsorg

Many people have problems with punctuation Regular people have problems because they feel that they never learned the rules well in school Writers have problems because they feel the rules donrsquot always apply to them Editors have problems (even though they know the rules) because the publishers they work for have additional rules of their own And publishers have problems because they canrsquot get the regular people the writers and the editors to follow their rules consistentlySo if punctuation is a problem for you or your students relaxmdashyoursquore in great company

ldquoRule books might be why so many of us have so many problems with punctuation in the first

placerdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

14 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

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TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

18 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 12: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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WRITING DYNAMICs

As we read in class we look closely at how writers and publishers punctuate their work When we see something that confuses us we donrsquot ask ldquoWhat is the rulerdquo we ask ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo

By looking at all the different ways punctuation is used we develop a real-world rather than a rule-world sense of how punctuation works occasionally when wersquore curious about something in particular we may use a rule book to look it up But we always come back to real books to complete our understanding of how rules are applied

Reading is all about getting meaning from text But meaning isnrsquot created on the page itrsquos created in the minds of our readers Because the rules of writing arenrsquot always in our readersrsquo minds we canrsquot count on rules to help us communicate effectively Readers will be using their brains to figure out what wersquore trying to say So wersquore better off using our brains to say it as well as we can

Let me be clear rule books are useful references Every writer should own several and consult them when they have specific questions Every writing teacher should have at least one But rule books are hard to learn from because their rules are numerous and often hard to understand

Thatrsquos why I supplement rule books with the real books students read every day Not only do we learn the rules we discover unusual things from time to time even things that break the rules Wersquoll also discover what writing really ismdashcommunication between a writer sharing ideas through language and a reader following language toward meaning

MeaNiNg ruLes

since most of us are trained in school to follow the rules approach to punctuation we might not know how to go about it any other way Whatrsquos all this ldquoclear thinkingrdquo wersquore supposed to do And what could be clearer than a rule

Take a look at this sentenceHe felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Now compare that one with this one

He felt the first blow on his back causing him to stumble and drop his bag which was promptly kicked into the bushes by another of the three

Notice the difference The top one has no commas the bottom one has two Which one is correct Whatrsquos the rule about commas Hold on a second Irsquoll get one of my twelve rule books Heck maybe Irsquoll get rsquoem all

And thatrsquos the problem When we punctuate by rule we stop following language toward meaning and we start following a rule bookmdashor twelve

so instead of asking questions like ldquoWhich one is correctrdquo or ldquoWhatrsquos the rule about commasrdquo letrsquos try questions like thesebull how does it look At first glance both

sentences look fine to me What I notice as I look more closely however is that in the version with the commas itrsquos easier to see the three-part structure of the sentence Without the commas I canrsquot tell until reading through it what the structure is so Irsquom thinking that a reader might find the commas helpful if he or she is not used to reading sentences that are so long

bull how does it sound Both sentences sound good to my ear But when I read the first one I find that I move along just a bit faster That makes sense because the commas in the second sentence cue me to slow down just a bit at the end of each part

bull how does it feel The first sentence feels slightly better to me Without the commas it reads like a single uninterrupted event I also notice that itrsquos a surprise action sequence Apparently someone has suffered a sneak attack at the hands of an enemy and his evil henchmen It happens fast and I think thatrsquos why I want it to feel fast as I read it

(Continued on page 24)

ldquoWriting is communication

between a writer sharing ideas through

language and a reader following

language toward meaningrdquo

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

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TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

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Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 19

INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 13: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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TEACHING WRITING

Process and Product writing in EFL classes

soMe ProbLeMs reLated to WritiNg iN eFL cLassesbull Pupils are not prompted to read

regularly outside their textbooks Good readers are good writers The more we read the better we write The actual picture in EFL classes is characterized by pupilsrsquo utter dependence on textbook literature this is not enough to activate writing skills within learners

bull In EFL classes writing are generally a follow-up activity or a homework that comes at the end of the session and sometimes delayed

bull Writing assignments are unrealistic unmotivating and lacking fun

bull Focus on form and grammatical

accuracy at the expense of meaning

bull Focus on the product-oriented writing assignments under the pretext of national exam urgencies and time constraints Writing is thus merely an exam- oriented activity performed in a mechanical way with a weighty stress on structure sometimes pupils are driven to memorize whole chunks of writing pieces to be incorporated in their writing pieces

soMe coMMoN diFFereNces between Product-oriented writing and Process-oriented WritiNg

By Hechmi HamdiTeacher of English

ldquoWriting assignments are unrealistic

unmotivating and lacking funrdquo

Product-oriented writing Process-oriented writing-It is a kind of a test- Audience is not important-It is meant to be corrected -It is individual -organizing of ideas is more important than ideas themselves -The focus is on the finished correct product-The focus on structure It stresses the mechanical aspects of writing (grammatical and syntactical structures and imitating models and moulds) -It is writer- based-It is seen as part of authoritative models of teaching

- It is a skill-It is purposeful and directed to an audience-Ideas are the starting point- It focuses on the complexity of thought-It is based on collaboration and cooperation-Writing is a way of knowing-It is the outcome of more than one draft-It is a true to life assignment based on motivation and audience awareness-It is a developmental process that creates self-discovery and meaning-It is reader-based - Emphasis on the creative process

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 15

TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

18 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 14: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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TEACHING WRITING

stePs followed in Process-oriented writing

Pre-writing

Preparing to write1drafting

Putting thoughts on paper2

revising

Taking another look3

editingProofreading

carefully examining a paper to see that it contains no errors of grammar spelling or punctuation

4

Publication

The final draft5samPle Process-oriented writing assignment

I tried to apply the process-oriented writing to deal with the topic below The topic is excerpted from lesson 12ldquoPerform to learn rdquo second Year secondary Education studentrsquos Book Text Money and evil page 73 paragraph 3

topic Develop the following statement into a small paragraph laquo Money is a good servant and a bad master raquo

steps Procedures1-Pre-writing ( PlanningPreparing to write)

bull Pupils Make decision Read think gather information generate ideas about the matterBrainstorm with a peer or a group

bull Pupils decide number of paragraphs Topic sentence relevant ideas Type of organization sequence in which ideas will be presented Narrowing the topic

bull Pupils outline diagram bull Pupils work in small groups at this stage

to share ideasGroup members write an outline of their composition and a list of relevant words (nouns adjectives verbs adverbs linkersetc) that they anticipated useful for the topic

-Pupils decide how money can be a master and a servant at the same time 2 main parts in the paragraph and a concluding one-Servant a blessing (advantages) Master a curse (disadvantages)advantages-Achieve dreams-Be rich-Help oneself and others-Feel happy-Enjoy oneselfhellip-set up businesshellip-Etc-Learners can provide instances of good use of money (charities philanthropyetc)

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

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Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 15: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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TEACHING WRITING

disadvantages-Evilcorruptionrich poor wealth-The strong appeal of money -Money has a magic powerappeal (values use misuse corrupt principles teachings law crime powerdominate scorn evil happiness worryetc)-Etc-Learners provide instances of bad use of money (misuse of money)hellipconclusionBlessing +curse Money is a double-edged weapon-Money must not be misused We should(not)must (not)etc hellip LinkersFirst second third furthermorehellipon the one hand hellipon the other handhellipHowever Nevertheless

2-drafting bull Focus on content (quantity and quality to

be considered later)bull Compose freely without concern for

mechanics bull Expand notes (adding removing re-

arranging splitting or combining sections paragraphs etc)

bull Linking the different elements so that the text is clear for the reader

bull organize thoughtsexplain examplesideashellip

bull selecting the appropriate vocabulary to express meaning

Money is a good servanthellipIt is true that money is a good servant or simply Money is a good servant Or Money is blessing-Money enables us to achieve dreams-With money we can lead a decent life-Provide yourself and your family with what they need-We can stand by needy people give hope to the hopelesshellip-We can enjoy our life (Travel tour the world discover new places etchellip)-Money enables people start business-Be self-satisfaction

however money can be a bad master or simply money is bad master or money is a curse-Money leads to corruption-It is the root of all evils-People never stop reiteratingldquolife is moneyrdquo-It may lead to tyranny anarchy corruption violencehellip-Wars are waged because of moneyhellip-The rich looking down upon the poorhellip-With money the honoured dignity of people can be boughthellip-People can do the dirtiest things-It results in moral declinehellip

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

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Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 16: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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TEACHING WRITING

Hechmi Hamdi

bull EFL Teacher since 1996bull Proficiency certificate from

Brighton university 1991bull Main Interests Test construction

translation poetrybull Previous contributions in The

English Teachersrsquo Forum Lesson Plan based on Bloomrsquos Taxonomy

3-revisingbull share draft with peer groups bull Invite discussion accept response and helpful input

from peers (Add delete rearrange and revise first draft)

bull Read for global impression that is the writer places himself in the position of the reader

bull Reading for specific points (relevance to task coverage explicitness organization layout language) and making any necessary alterations

a)first part of the paragraph Money is a good servanta blessing(First second hellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip)

b)second part of my paragraph Money is a bad mastera curse(First hellipsecondhellipThirdhellip Moreoverhellip Furthermorehellip) to conclude Money is double-edged weapon We should never let it control our lives and haunt our dreams

4-editing Proofreadingbull share revised draft with peer group bull Invite correction of grammar spelling punctuation

usageetchellipbull Incorporate corrections in final draft

5-Publicationbull Polish your compositionbull share the product with peersbull Submit for final evaluation by teacher

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Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 17: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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Larry Ferlazzo is a former community organizer (for about twenty years) and an ELL teacher at Luther Burbank High School in Sacramento CA He is also a TechLEARNING Educatorsrsquo eZine writer He was named the 2007 Grand Prize Winner of the International Reading Association Presidential Award For Reading Technology He won and was nominated for many other awards as a community organizer a teacher and a bloggerLarry also writes regularly about ideas for the ELL classroom and provides lists comprising links to various educational resources and Web20 tools in his blog Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites of the Day

Could you tell our readers more about Larry Ferlazzo

WELL oN THE PERsoNAL level Irsquom married have three children and two grandchildren I enjoy playing basketball though my skills at it peaked at mediocre many years ago In terms of additional professional information Irsquove written two books ldquoBuilding Parent Engagement In schoolsrdquo and ldquoEnglish Language Learners Teaching strategies That Workrdquo A third one will be published in May

very tentatively titled ldquostudent self-Motivationrdquo

Your blog ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo provides thousands of links to educational resources and Web20 tools which are verified on a regular basis More than 150 links are added monthly (about 5 everyday) Managing such a blog needs a lot of effort and time Knowing that you are also an active teacher how do you manage to maintain such a full-scale blog

Interviewed by Tarak Brahmi

Teacher of English

Larry Ferlazzo

T his issuersquo s special guest

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 18: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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INTERVIEW

over the years Irsquove been able to identify the best places to learn about new resources so that streamlines the process A supportive family helps as does getting energy from playing basketball and from teaching at a great school

Many bloggers know you as a teacher who is particularly interested in providing lists of educational resources and tools on the web Your ldquoWebsites of The Dayrdquo is a great success not only judging by the number of awards and nominations but also in terms of the number of visits to your blog and the number of blogs that use your lists as a reference But in one of your interviews you stated that ldquo[technology] has to be kept in its placerdquo Where should the boundaries be drawn when using technology in the classroom

I think tech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo If something can be done just as well with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to have students use a computer The key in my mind is looking at what increased learning value is generated by using tech If there is one use it If there isnrsquot donrsquotThat said especially for English Language Learners there are huge benefits to using tech especially with all the new and free sites out there that provide audiovisual support for text ones that evaluate individual pronunciation and interactives that give a student plenty of opportunities to risk and learn from mistakes in private

In another interview you talked about ldquoleading by the ear rather than by the mouthrdquo Could you tell us more about your teaching philosophy

Listening to what students want to learn and why they want to learn it using inductive techniques that help guide students towards learning what they need instead of telling them and inviting them to share their personal stories so we can

connect those stories to new knowledge -- all those are examples of leading with the ear rather than the mouth

The Family Literary Project that you initiated proved so successful that the school district decided to provide $80000 to triple the size of the project Could you tell our readers more about the FLP and what accounts for its success

That Project which unfortunately has had to recently been scaled back because of cuts resulting from the California budget crisis has provided computers and home internet access to immigrant families so they could use the Internet to develop their English skills students and parents in the program have had a four times greater increase in their assessment scores than those in a control groupIt has been successful I think for several reasons one it was an idea that came from immigrant parents who helped design the program Two it was designed to use tech to help build and strengthen face-to-face relationships instead of just creating a relationship with the computer screen -- families sat around the computer together reading and practicing together And three the school and families developed a system of accountability ensuring that most members of each household spent at least one hour each night on our website

It seems that your background as a community organizer is helping a lot in your success as a teacher Do you think that the strategies that you used during years of community organizing should be part of teachersrsquo training programs

Community organizing is just another word for relationship-building and yes I think you can never over-estimate its importance in good teaching

ldquoTech is a tool not a panacea Itrsquos just one of many tools

for a teacher to keep in their ldquotoolboxrdquo

If something can be done just as well

with paper pen and a whiteboard I see no reason to

have students use a computerrdquo

ldquoThe FLP has provided

computers and home internet

access to immigrant families

so they could use the Internet to develop their

English skillsrdquo

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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22 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 19: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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INTERVIEW

Larry Ferlazzorsquos Websites Of the Dayhttplarryferlazzoedublogsorg

The FLP involves parents in the learning process Does this imply that you believe in a more vigorous role for parents in general Or does it apply to foreign-born families in particular

Tons of studies show that having parents strongly connected to the school and to what their children are learning there results in huge benefits towards student achievement This holds true for all studentsThe key division I think is not between foreign-born and native parents but rather between parent ldquoinvolvementrdquo and parent ldquoengagementrdquo Involvement means schools are leading with their mouths instead of their ears not taking the initiative to build parent relationships Engagement on the other hand means that wersquore learning the hopes and dreams of the entire family looking at ways we can connect parents with other parents who have similar concerns and figuring out ways schools can look beyond the four walls of the classroom

The Education Week talking about your recent book English Language Learners Teaching Strategies that Work says that ldquoWhat stands out about Larry Ferlazzorsquos new book[hellip]from others that describe strategies to engage high school ELLs are his suggestions for how to encourage such students to be leadersrdquo Could you tell us more about your book

The book lays-out how I have applied community organizing methodology in the classroom using a five step ldquoorganizing processrdquo1 Building strong relationships with students2 Accessing prior knowledge through student stories3 Identifying and mentoring studentsrsquo leadership potential4 Learning by doing5 Reflectionso often we look at students through a ldquolensrdquo of deficits The book describes how instead it can be more fruitful to look

through a ldquolensrdquo of the countless assets that they and their families can bring Itrsquos a very practical book filled with lesson plans and ideas

With the plethora of online resources and materials teachers may sometimes find it difficult to choose the right application or material Could you give us some tips on how to select the right tools

The criteria I use includesIs it freeCan I figure out how to use it in less than one minute and can a student do the same with a little guidance from meDoes it bring some value-added benefit over doing the activity with paper and penCan it be used in some way to develop and deep face-to-face relationships

ldquoThe key division I think is not between

foreign-born and native parents

but rather between parent

lsquoinvolvementrsquo and parent

lsquoengagementrsquordquo

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Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

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ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 27

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

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Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 20: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 23

ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 25

WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 27

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

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When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

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section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

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section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

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Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

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4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 21: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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Reading VERSuS

The inTeRneT

ITrsquos TRuE THAT THE INTERNET as a revolutionary means of communication has turned this world into a village and has promoted to a large extent the proliferation of video-based projects and has put more stress on visualizing many aspects of our life via catchy appealing and well-designed animations But this does not exclude the fact that technology can enhance the learnerrsquos the teacherrsquos avid eagerness to read During my short experience in teaching the web has added a lot to my experience in ldquoreadingrdquo and not only has it revived my habit of reading but has also made me feel more nostalgic to turning more and more pages As a matter of fact I used to read a lot before becoming a teacher but after that my readings were constrained to reading documents related to our professional development as teachers However now I feel that I am fonder and fonder of reading whether online (e-books articles poems etc) or reading forlorn books on the shelves

Thus with more and more resources available my eagerness has grown into an addiction Itrsquos true that reading for me now is intertwined with reading as a teacher looking for more tips to self-develop But itrsquos reading after all isnrsquot it I really donrsquot agree with those who claim that the internet has killed books And the proof is that more sites are encouraging members to read and boost their reading skills Many decades ago it was said that TV has killed reading and now itrsquos the turn of the internet to be blamed for so Reading is a nice habit that we can instill in our kids and in our learners from the youngest age And we as teachers are having a responsibility as all parents to make our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well- planned or enhanced in our curriculums concerning teaching English as a foreign language We can teach passages from literary books to our learners and create in them an avid passion to read more amp more

By Faten Romdhani Teacher of English

Reading keeps us alive It refreshes our mind and fosters our lexical grammatical logical and analytical skills Without reading one is amongst the dead It is said that this digital era has extinguished the flames of love for reading and has directly or indirectly led to the death of the book and consequently the death of Reading as a hobby People everywhere are so engrossed in being online that they forget about reading

ldquoWe as teachers have a responsibility to make

our learners grow fonder and fonder of reading though this is not well-

planned or enhanced in our curriculumsrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 23

ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 29

A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 22: The Tunisian ELT Forum

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 23

ldquoKids who grow fond of reading

from an early age tend to keep

the flame alive but those whose

parents did not instill this

habit in them suffer from very

poor grades in readingrdquo

We should not I think as teachers put the blame on any technological facility as hindering or blocking a lively hobby that can never die from the hearts and minds of those who really care for And this is clearly depicted in the behavior of our learners kids who grow fond of reading from an early age tend to keep the flame alive but those whose parents did not instill this habit in them suffer from very poor grades in reading because they think reading is really outmoded and does not have any benefit for themI must feel grateful towards the net because it has been a must to read each day at least some pages from any chapter of any e- book or any interesting article in any online magazine Besides I think a book is a book whatever is its shape an electronic book or a book in print This is not a huge discrepancy It is essential that we read more each day whether virtually or reallyI hope I convinced some of my colleagues that technology is never meant to harm the enhancement of reading It is rather in accordance with it There are in fact so many websites that enhance reading and writing and develop as a community who share with each other their passion and love for reading literary passages of all types poems etchellipThese sites involve readers on many various levels and reach them on a weekly basis to send them chapters of books to read and comment upon All in all Reading as a hobby amongst our learners is facing nowadays many challenges and it needs really extra attention from all of us to make it thrive and become an inherent part of our teenagerrsquos and kidsrsquo free time

Some links that I suggest to you dear colleagueswwwbookrikscomhttpwwwpoemhuntercomhttpwwwpromonetpghttpwwwbartlebycomfictionhttpwwwbibliomaniacomhttpdigitallibraryupennedubooksindexhtmlhttpwwwseekoncomArtsOnline_Fiction

a short biographyFaten RomdhaniI have been teaching English for 12 years now I taught in different towns of Tunisia Sidi Bouzid was my first hometown of teaching There I was well- assisted and that added a lot to my enthusiasm for teaching Great values such as hard work truthfulness and positive reinforcement were the key words that made me long for being a better teacher In fact Irsquove been safely guided to the shore of enthusiasm and collaboration When in Nabeul area my dear colleagues and supervisors have been of great inspiration and help I may say that Irsquove been very lucky that during my short experience of teaching Irsquove been inspired by Great people everywhere I taught I am forever grateful for them2009 Mr Hadji Abdelmalek our ICT Trainer in Nabeul started TEIT on facebook (The token is sharing is caring) I belong to the group and I like the experience because we feel we are one communityMy websites http mypupilslettersblogspotcomhttpmypupilsessaysblogspotcomhttpissuucomromdhanifaten

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 25

WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

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WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

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WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 23: The Tunisian ELT Forum

24 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThere arenrsquot always clear

right and wrong answers in

the world of punctuation

especially when commas are

involvedrdquo

bull how does it mean (Normally we say ldquoWhat does it meanrdquo but here we want to know how the punctuation affects what the sentence means and how the meaning of the sentence is conveyed to the reader as a result) Neither approach to punctuation changes the meaning in my opinion But therersquos a subtle difference in emphasis using the two commas to separate the three parts makes me feel as though they are of equal importance Because of this I tend to focus more on the last part where the bag goes under the bushes In the sentence without commas I pay a little more attention to the front of the sentence and come away with a memory of victim being pushed from behind In either case the difference is so subtle itrsquos probably not worth worrying about

so which way would I choose Irsquod choose the no-comma approach for the reason I gave about wanting the speed of the sentence to match the speed of the action However at twenty-eight words this is a fairly long stretch of language If my readers werenrsquot used to reading sentences this long they might have some trouble Irsquom thinking of kids as young as maybe third grade You wonrsquot find a lot of twenty-eight-word sentences in third grade books And if you do theyrsquoll probably have commas in them so if Irsquom writing for young readers or for anyone who might lose their way in a long sentence Irsquoll take the two-comma approach

Not surprisingly an editor might differently about this than a writer Herersquos what a professional book editor had to say ldquoWhile the first sentence in the example is technically correct most writers would choose the second sentence simply because it can be read more easily and the action can be followed more clearly without getting mixed up Most editors would say the two commas are necessary because the second phrase is dependent on (or describes) the first clause and the third phrase is dependent on (or describes) the second phraserdquo

Though I havenrsquot looked it up Irsquoll bet this editor is right about the rules governing the use of commas in sentences with dependent phrases And if you understand the concept of dependency in grammar you may like that explanation too Irsquom not sure the editor is right about most writers preferring the sentence with the two commas In the first case we can look in a rule book In the second wersquod have to ask a lot of writers to know for sure As an experiment I asked five of my writer friends what they thought Three liked the no-comma sentence one liked the two-comma sentence and one said that issues like this are just silly and that they donrsquot matter to him at all

One thingrsquos for sure when it comes to questions of punctuation it seems like everyone has an answermdashand that everyone is certain their answer is correct Personally I think itrsquos great to have differences of opinion like these as long as everyone agrees that these are opinions and that opinions donrsquot become facts just because people repeat them over and over in a loud voice and bang their fist on the table

There arenrsquot always clear right and wrong answers in the world of punctuation especially when commas are involved some people think we have to play by the rules others think rules were made to be broken As for me I think we all learn more and get along better when we follow language toward meaning and leave the rules to the folks who write the rule books

WheW this is exhaustiNg

That was a lot of thinking for a couple of commas If itrsquos like that for every sentence we write maybe a rule bookrsquos not a bad idea But itrsquos not like that for every sentence we write In this particular case we just solved a huge problem one that is going to come up again and again for the rest of our writing livesThis wonrsquot cover every three-part sentence some will require commas for other reasons But itrsquos a useful bit of knowledge that wersquoll be able to apply in many future writing situations

DO RuLES RuLE by steve Peha (continued)

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 25

WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

26 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 27

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 29

A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 24: The Tunisian ELT Forum

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 25

WRITING DYNAMICs

Rather than following the words in a rule book we followed the words on the page We asked four important questions and in the process we learned something about commasmdashand about reading and readers and pacing within a sentence as well as the relationship of punctuation to meaning and probably several other thingsmdashthat we can use for the rest of our lives We can use our four questions for the rest of our lives too Thatrsquos another reason why this way of doing things is probably easier than the rule book way I know I canrsquot remember a thousand rules But itrsquos easy to remember four questions

so yes at any given moment the ldquofollow language toward meaningrdquo approach to punctuation is harder than using a rule book But if yoursquore planning to write for the rest of your life itrsquos probably more efficient in the long run

ForMaLiziNg our study With PuNctuatioN readiNg

Why is punctuation so hard to learn Because itrsquos complicated and controversial and because the way we teach it in school often makes it confusing as well We tend to make three mistakes when we introduce kids to punctuation (1) We focus on rules rather than on meaning (2) we teach the marks in isolation rather than in the context of how writers use them and (3) We teach punctuation with textbooks instead of with the real books we read every day Wersquove already dealt with the first two problems Now wersquore going to tackle the third

Take a look at this opening paragraph from a student report on American history

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George

Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

Now read this

[NEW PARAGRAPH] [INDENT] [CAPITAL] on a dark [CAPITAL] december night in 1776 [COMMA] as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy [CAPITAL] delaware [CAPITAL] river [COMMA] [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington said [COMMA] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] shift your fat behind [COMMA] [CAPITAL] har [HYPHEN] ry [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but slowly or you [APOSTROPHE] ll swamp the darn boat [PERIOD] [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] he was talk [HYPHEN] ing to [CAPITAL] general [CAPITAL] henry [CAPITAL] knox [PARENTHESIS] they called him [QUOTE] [CAPITAL] ox [QUOTE] for short [PARENTHESIS] [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] there [APOSTROPHE] s a painting of [CAPITAL] george [CAPITAL] washington where he [APOSTROPHE] s stand [HYPHEN] ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for [CAPITAL] redcoats [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] i al [HYPHEN] ways thought he just wanted a good view [PERIOD] [CAPITAL] but [CAPITAL] i guess the reason he was standing was because he didn [APOSTROPHE] t have a place to sit down [PERIOD] [END OF PARAGRAPH]

Pretty weird huh But itrsquos also pretty interesting if you ask me This is what reading is really like Even though we donrsquot say the punctuation marks out loud or even quietly in our heads we do read over these things every time we read But we donrsquot pay much attention to them and thatrsquos where we miss some valuable learning

For example in that single ninety-five-word paragraph we encounteredbull Forty-eight marks of punctuation And

that doesnrsquot include other conventions like the correct spellings of ninety-five words and the correct use of ninety-four spaces

ldquoI know I canrsquot remember a

thousand rules But itrsquos easy to

remember four questionsrdquo

ldquoWe tend to make three

mistakes when we introduce kids to

punctuationrdquo

26 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 27

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 29

A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 25: The Tunisian ELT Forum

26 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoThe next time you sit down with

a book spend the first two or three minutes

doing a little punctuation reading You

might be surprised at what

you noticerdquo

bull ten different kinds of punctuation marks New paragraph indent capital comma quote hyphen period apostrophe parenthesis and end of paragraph

bull Fifteen uses of punctuation Indent for new paragraph Period at the end of a sentence Capital at the beginning of sentence Capital for a name Capital for something that is one-of-a-kind Capital for the word ldquoIrdquo Capital for a personal title Capital for the name of a month Parentheses for an aside Quotation marks for dialog Quotation marks for a nickname Comma to separate parts of a sentence Comma to introduce a quotation Apostrophe for a contraction Hyphen to break a word at a line ending

Is punctuation reading a good way to read Hardly Itrsquos very slow and itrsquos hard to understand what yoursquore reading But itrsquos a great way to learn about punctuation It helps you learn the names of all the marks and it helps you see how real writers use them in real writing

When I teach punctuation reading in school we try to practice it several days a week But we only practice for a few minutes each day often we just read a single paragraph like we did here For a couple of weeks we concentrate on catching all the marks as we read But we donrsquot spend much energy thinking about why theyrsquore there Then when we get so good at reading punctuation that we can do it without thinking too much we start trying to figure out how writers use it So

the next time you sit down with a book spend the first two or three minutes doing a little punctuation reading You might be surprised at what you notice

PuNctuatioN iNquiry

Punctuation reading helps us learn the names of the marks and develop a sense for where theyrsquore used But it doesnrsquot tell us why theyrsquore used For that we have go to the next exercise punctuation inquiry Donrsquot worry it isnrsquot as serious as it sounds

once yoursquove read through a passage and figured out the punctuation the next thing to do is to figure out why itrsquos there Donrsquot worry about explaining every single mark Instead pick just one markmdashideally one that is used in several different waysmdashand focus on that

For example in this paragraph we might want to focus on capitalization

On a dark December night in 1776 as he led a barefoot brigade of ragged revolutionaries across the icy Delaware River George Washington said ldquoShift your fat behind Har-ry But slowly or yoursquoll swamp the darn boatrdquo He was talk-ing to General Henry Knox (they called him ldquoOxrdquo for short) Therersquos a painting of George Washington where hersquos stand-ing up in a boat scanning the riverbank for Redcoats I al-ways thought he just wanted a good view But I guess the reason he was standing was because he didnrsquot have a place to sit down

There are several different places where different kinds of words are capitalized Letrsquos see if we can figure out why

example Why itrsquos used questionscommentson Beginning of a sentence sometimes I see really big

capital letters way taller than regular size at the start of a story Whatrsquos that about

December Name of a monthDelaware River something that is one-of-a-

kind This is a specific riverWhat if therersquos another Delaware River Is that still one-of-a-kind

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 27

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 29

A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 26: The Tunisian ELT Forum

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 27

WRITING DYNAMICs

ldquoPunctuation inquiry is just

what it says it is an exercise that

involves inquiring into the use of punctuationrdquo

ldquoWhen I was in school I was taught

punctuation every year But I donrsquot

think I learned much about itrdquo

George Washington A personrsquos nameGeneral A personrsquos title sometimes I see titles

not capitalized I donrsquot understand how this works

ldquooxrdquo This is a nickname but I guess itrsquos still a name

Redcoats This is the name of a group of people

Even if you canrsquot figure out why a mark is used just trying to figure it out will help you learn This is also a good time to go to one of those rule books yoursquove probably got sitting around somewhere If you know the specific mark you want to learn about and what you want to learn about it a rule book can be useful

Punctuation inquiry is just what it says it is an exercise that involves inquiring into the use of punctuation Itrsquos the questions not the answers that are most valuable Thatrsquos why the third column in our table is there As you study punctuation yoursquoll find many situations where the way a mark is used differs from or even contradicts a way yoursquove seen it used before When that happens write down your thoughts in the form of a question or a comment and save it for later

take oWNershiP oF PuNctuatioN With your oWN ruLe book

When I was in school I was taught punctuation every year But I donrsquot think I learned much about it As a teacher the students I worked with couldnrsquot punctuate well and sadly I couldnrsquot teach them very well either Then another teacher introduced me to Donald Murrayrsquos idea

Applying Mr Murrayrsquos idea of ldquofollowing

language toward meaningrdquo put me on the path to punctuation power But I still didnrsquot know how to give that power to the students I was working with

Finally I began to use punctuation reading and punctuation inquiry Now I had students following language toward meaning and learning rules at the same time Each time we came across of new use of a mark we would add the ldquorulerdquo to a big piece of chart paper We had a chart for each mark

At the end we put all the charts into a big book From then on any time anyone wanted to look up a rule we had our own rule book to look it up in This gave students a wonderful sense of ownership It also gave me a break from having to do so much correcting all the time

The ldquoBig Bookrdquo as we came to call it served as the culmination of our study We never took a test we never filled out worksheets we never corrected fake examples We read the good books we were already reading We wrote and edited many pages of our own writing And we asked ourselves simple questions about why the work of professional writers was punctuated in certain ways

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 29

A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 27: The Tunisian ELT Forum

28 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

WRITING DYNAMICs

Steve Peha President of teaching that Makes sense Inc seattle WATTMs is a successful education consulting company with more than 100 clients nationwideSteve presented more than 250 professional development workshopsHe is author of more than 190 articles for The Seattle Timesrsquo Effective Learning seriesCreator of more than 40 original workshops in reading writing math assessment and test preparationhttpwwwttmsorg

using real books instead of rule books doing punctuation reading every day and writing down the rules we discovered for ourselves through punctuation inquiry made learning to punctuate almost as much fun as learning to write

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 29

A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 28: The Tunisian ELT Forum

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A L L F O R O n E O n E F O R A L L

A night in TunisiaBy Dizzy Gillespie The moon is the same moon above youAglow with its cool evening lightBut shining at night in TunisiaNever does it shine so bright

The stars are aglow in the heavensBut only the wise understandThat shining at night in TunisiaThey guide you through the desert sand

Words fail to tell a taleToo exotic to be toldEach nightrsquos a deeper nightIn a world ages old

The cares of the day seem to vanishThe ending of day brings releaseEach wonderful night in TunisiaWhere the nights are filled with peace

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 29: The Tunisian ELT Forum

30 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Jigsaw reading is a cooperative learning technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension skills by helping them to meaningfully interact with the reading material and to take responsibility in sharing what they have learnt with other learners The learners are therefore actively engaged as they have to share and to explain what they have learnt to their peers in the other groups How does it work The class is divided in several teams The team members work together to answer questions related to sections of a text Then the group members join a group with a different section and they share what they know from the previous activity to complete a task which pulls all the pieces together In this article I am going to show how a jigsaw reading activity can be applied in an EFL classroom

ldquoJigsaw reading is a cooperative learning

technique that aims at enhancing the learnersrsquo reading comprehension

skills by helping them to meaningfully interact

with the reading materialrdquo

TEACHING READING

Teaching reading using the ldquoJigsaw techniquerdquo

iN keePiNg With the receNt eveNts in Tunisia I chose an extract from Wikepedia (httpenwikipediaorgwikiTunisia) The text is divided into three sections the first section deals with the country and the people the second is a short history of Tunisia and the last is about the recent events which took place in December 2010 and January 2011

Pre-reading activityWarm-up Ask students to talk about their own city You can use a map to elicit the new vocabulary For example

to elicit the meaning of the words ldquo bordered byrdquo ldquolocated inrdquo ldquocomposed ofrdquo you can ask your students about which cities surround their town on the board a teacher in sidi Bouzid can write

Sidi Bouzid is bordered by Kairouan to the north Gafsa to the south etc (see map)

Then you can ask how many statesgovernorates there are in their country You may write

Tunisia consists of ( is composed of ) 24 governorates

By Tarak BrahmiTeacher of English

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 30: The Tunisian ELT Forum

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 31

When the active vocabulary has been elicited you can ask students to do the following task in pairsMatch the words with the right prepositions

Prepositional phrases

Word PrepositionConsist byDerived ofLocated fromBordered inComposed of

brainstorming activityYou can start by drawing a spidergram with the word ldquorevolutionrdquo in its center Have your students think about words that come to their minds when they see this word You can also prepare a handouttransparency beforehand with some of the letters omitted Have the students provide the missing letters see the next example

while-reading the Jigsaw activity

Ask your students to sit in groups Have each group read a section of the text (worksheets 1 2 and 3)and answer the questionsWhen they have completed this task ask the students to join a different group Hand out the worksheet ldquoall about tunisiardquo (worksheet 4)to the new groups In these groups have the students share their answers to complete the handout

protest

unrest demonstration

riot

authoritarianregime

oppressioninjustice

spark

revolution

A map of Tunisia

Welcome to Sidi Bouzid

Demonstrations in Tunis

TEACHING READING

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 31: The Tunisian ELT Forum

32 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

section a

Tunisia is the northernmost country in Africa It is a Maghreb country and is bordered by Algeria to the west Libya to the southeast and the Mediterranean Sea to the north and east Its area is almost 165000 square kilometres (64000 sq mi) with an estimated population of just over 104 million Its name is derived from the capital Tunis located in the north-eastThe south of the country is composed of the Sahara desert with much of the remainder consisting of particularly fertile soil and 1300 kilometres (810 mi) of coastline

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Is Tunisia located in Europe2 Which countries share a border with Tunisia3 Is Tunisia a big country Why4 How long is the Tunisian coastline

section b

Tunisia was occupied by Vandals during the 5th century AD Byzantines in the 6th century and Arabs in the 8th century Under the Ottoman Empire Tunisia was known as ldquoRegency of Tunisrdquo It passed under French protectorate in 1881 After obtaining independence in 1956 the country took the official name of the ldquoKingdom of Tunisiardquo at the end of the reign of Lamine Bey and the Husainid Dynasty With the proclamation of the Tunisian republic on July 25 1957 the nationalist leader Habib Bourguiba became its first president

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 What was Tunisia called under the ottoman Empire2 Was Tunisia occupied by Britain in the 19th century3 When did Tunisia become independent4 Who was the first Tunisian president

Worksheet 1

Worksheet 2

TEACHING READING

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 32: The Tunisian ELT Forum

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 33

section c

Tunisia was governed by the authoritarian regime of President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali from 1987 to 2011 before he fled following wide-ranging protests Mohamed Bouazizi (March 29 1984 ndash January 4 2011lrm) was a Tunisian street vendor from Sidi Bouzid who set himself on fire on December 17 2010 in protest of the confiscation of his wares and the humiliation that was inflicted on him by a municipal official This act became the catalyst for the 2010ndash2011 Tunisian revolution sparking deadly demonstrations and riots throughout Tunisia in protest of social and political issues in the country Anger and violence intensified following Bouazizirsquos death leading then-President Zine El Abidine Ben Ali to step down on January 14 2011 after 23 years in power

QuestionsRead the text and answer the following questions1 Who ruled Tunisia from 1987 to 20112 Who was Mohamed Bouazizi Where was he from3 Why did he set himself on fire4 When did the ex-president step down

Worksheet 3

aLL about tuNisia

Share the information you learnt in your first group to complete this worksheet about Tunisiageneral information about the countrycountrycapitalcontinentNeighboring countriesPopulationcoastline (miles)

TimelineComplete the following timeline

5th century AD

6th Century

8th century

1881

1956

1987

Dec 17th 2010

Jan 14th 2011

Worksheet 4

TEACHING READING

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 33: The Tunisian ELT Forum

34 The Tunisian English Teaching Forum | Issue 5 April 2011

Post ndash readingYou can ask your students to write a summary or to do a web quest about another country

other variations The tasks that are presented here are only some of the possibilities The texts can also be used to teach the simple past the passive voice irregular verbs word formation etc

coNcLusioN Jigsaw reading is a technique that can encourage studentsrsquo involvement and enhance their reading skills It develops their interpersonal and communication skills as well It also fits in well with the integration of the four skills as the students have to read speak listen to each other and finally write a summary or make a poster

TEACHING READING

ldquoJigsaw reading also fits in

well with the integration of the

four skills as the students have to

read speak listen to each other and

finally write a summary or make

a posterrdquo

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 34: The Tunisian ELT Forum

httptunisian-etforumblogspotcom 35

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom

Page 35: The Tunisian ELT Forum

4th issue second yearNew look new ideas

Visit our bloghttptunisian-etforumblogspotcom