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Workshop on Citations and Audience
Workshop on Use of Sources
• Step 1: Mark quote or paraphrase in your essay (underline, highlight in yellow, whatever works for you). • Step 2: Mark all of the places where you INTRODUCE
your quotes or paraphrases, or give context for them, in a different way (different color, dotted underline, etc). • Step 3: Highlight all of the places where you
RESPOND to quotes by explaining, giving an additional example, or agreeing/disagreeing, in a THIRD way.
Look at your highlighting.
• Are there any places where you have a lot of quote, but not a lot introduction and explanation? • Do you need to remove some of the quote?
Remove any bits of the quote that aren’t relevant to your response. • Do you need to add more to your introduction or
response? • Make sure that your response addresses any important
issues the quote brings up.
Double check for in text citations.
• Look back at your yellow quotes/paraphrases. Highlight or mark the place where you give credit to the author (or, if you don’t know the author, the article/source). Every quote should have SOME marking. • You might give credit in an in-text citation (the
author or article name in parentheses).• You might give credit in a “signal phrase.” (The
author’s name mentioned in the introduction of the quote.)
Digging Deeper…
• Each introduction of a quote should:• Connect the quote to the point you are currently making.• Prepare your readers to notice what you want them to take away from the
quote. • Give your readers any context that they need in order to understand the
quote.
• Each response to a quote should: • Deal specifically with the issues that are raised in the quote. It might also… • Explain an idea from the quote further. (Not just repeating the ideas from
the quote in new words.) • Give a new example of an idea from the quote. • Agree or disagree with an opinion displayed in the quote and explain your
agreement/disagreement. • Connect the quote to a point your have made somewhere else on the
paper, or to another quote.
Revising for Audience
• Remember, your audience for this essay is other college-educated students, professors, and members of the college community. • Based on that very broad audience, read through
your essay and make sure that you have addressed the needs that this audience will have. • Do you use logos to appeal to reason? • Do you avoid logical fallacies and broad generalizations
about your audience? • Do you make clear to your audience what is at stake in
regards to the issue your paper is about?
Revising for Style
• Examine your introduction and the beginnings of your paragraphs. Do you have any “throat clearing”? • “Throat clearing” usually takes the form of sentences
you wrote to get your ideas flowing that are extremely general and not appropriate for a paper at this level for this audience. For example, “Every day all over the world people see pop culture.” This sentence is so broad that it does nothing to indicate what about pop culture you are going to be discussing, nor does it say anything beyond the obvious about how pop culture functions on a global scale.
Revising for Style
• Read your essay quietly to yourself OUT LOUD. Are your sentences smooth and easy to read? Are there places you stumble? If so, your reader will probably stumble as well. • Are there places where the connections between
your ideas are unclear? Decide HOW ideas are connected and use templates from the appropriate chapters of They Say, I Say to make the connection clearer. • Review lesson on quality introductions and
conclusions and improve these areas of your paper.