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Searching for Words:
The Writing Process of a Child with High-Functioning Autism
Children are not first and foremost learners; they are first and foremost people living the
complexities of their day-to-day lives. (Dyson, 1995, p. 36)
Sam Crossing is a twelve-year-old boy in the eighth grade at a private school in southern
California. He is a freckle-faced, blue-eyed redhead, nearly six feet tall and built like a football
player. He is also my son. Recently, Sam designed a personal web page; on the page, he described
himself as ―a normal, everyday kid.‖ In many ways, I would tend to agree. He likes riding his bike,
playing video games and listening to the Beatles. He plays with friends on the weekends, fights
with his little sister and gives me big bear hugs every day when he comes home from school.
Normal, everyday stuff.
Sam‘s developmental and educational history is another story altogether. This is not to say
that, within his own perception, and within the relatively safe haven of his home and family life, his
development and his learning have not been accepted as fully normal. Within the realm of
schooling and age-segregated classrooms and state-defined, graded curricula, though, the need to
define ―normal‖ is immense and my son sits outside those boundaries. Sam was identified as
―gifted‖ by our school district at the age of nine. That same year, Sam was also diagnosed with
autism.
Autism is a neurological disorder that occurs across a spectrum, with what Lorna Wing
(1991) refers to as the ―triad‖ of social, communicative and imaginative impairments ranging in
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severity from mild to severe. The syndrome also affects movement, sensory response and executive
functions such as organization and cognitive flexibility. When autism is paired with normal to
above-normal intelligence levels, the diagnosis is often termed Asperger Syndrome (AS) or, as in
my son‘s case, high-functioning autism (HFA). Many of the children with AS and HFA are not
placed in special classes, but rather attend class with their ―neurotypical‖ peers and a significant
number of them attend college. Their social challenges are often easily noticeable, however they
also often struggle significantly with the academic demands of the classroom. This struggle almost
always extends to writing. In this paper, my professional interest in writing is coupled with my
personal commitment to my son‘s needs, leading me to explore how AS and HFA affect the writing
process and to then question the prevailing composition pedagogies which I believe devalue, if not
ignore, learning difference.
Review of Literature
The literature in the field of education concerning the development of writing abilities is not
nearly as massive as the literature concerning development of skills in reading and math. Clearly,
the skill of writing is highly valued in our information-based culture and yet how it is that children
learn to write has managed to escape much intense scrutiny. In their article, ―Navigating the writing
process: Strategies for young children,‖ Poindexter & Oliver (1998/1999) point out that ―while
elementary school teachers have always been concerned with children's literacy, in the past most
[research] efforts were devoted to helping children read rather than to write (Chomsky, 1971;
Sealey, Sealey, & Millmore, 1979).‖ They point to curricular developments during the mid-1950's
to the late 1970's that introduced ‗creative writing‘ into elementary schools in order to expose
children to systematic writing before high school. It was also during the 1970's that the notion of
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writing as a process gained a foothold in the research and teaching of writing (Graves, 1983). The
process approach recognized that most writers move through three general stages in writing:
prewriting, writing, and postwriting that involves editing and revising. The assumptions were-–and
continue to be--that direct instruction in prewriting exercises (for example, brainstorming, use of
graphic organizers, mapping, outlining and freewriting) will lead children to the development of
meaningful texts and that further direct instruction in postwriting strategies will lead them to the
completion of more refined, readable texts (Poindexter & Oliver, 1998/1999). These assumptions
naturally target the skills and abilities of the ―normally‖ developing child who is progressing at a
grade-level-appropriate rate, not to mention the cognitively ―normal‖ child that responds naturally
to such educational efforts and prompts.
A body of literature exists, created largely in the 1980's and early 1990's, addressing the
development of literacy skills including reading and writing at the earliest stages of life prior to
school termed ―emergent literacy.‖ In a synthesis of research on emergent literacy, Gunn, Simmons
& Kameenui (1995) found that researchers in this field agreed that emergent literacy:
(a) begins during the period before children receive formal reading instruction, (Stahl &
Miller, 1989; Teale & Sulzby, 1987; van Kleeck, 1990), (b) encompasses learning about
reading, writing and print prior to schooling (Sulzby & Teale, 1991), (c) is acquired through
informal as well as adult-directed home and school activities, and (d) facilitates acquisition
of specific knowledge of reading (p.2).
Study of emergent literacy attempts to determine how various environmental and experiential
variables in the pre-school years affect the later development of literacy in the classroom and, while
most of the findings address development of reading skills, according to Gunn, Simmons &
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Kameenui (1995), early experiences with print and interaction with adults modeling literate
activities strongly influence a child‘s later success in writing (p. 16).
In 1975, in the book, The Development of Writing Abilities (11-18), Britton et al. argued for
a developmental continuum in later development of writing abilities with a body of data gathered
from the study of 11-18 year olds. Britton‘s approach to writing was purely curricular, however,
and did not really address the development of writing abilities on an individual level. Rather, a
child‘s development of writing abilities is driven by a move from expressive language towards
differentiations in language use which entail writing in various genres or ―audience categories.‖
This developmental model rests firmly on a curricular foundation which emphasizes writing for
either ―transactional‖ or ―poetic‖ purposes. Utilizing this model, Britton asserts that, in general,
students develop along this curricular trajectory, from expressive to narrative to analytical to
theoretical, from concrete to abstract.
As Patricia Dunn points out in her book, Learning Re-Abled: The Learning Disability
Controversy and Composition Studies (1995), the dearth of writing research which is genuinely
developmentally based is especially evident when considering the development of writing abilities
in children who possess various learning and developmental disabilities. While Dunn‘s interest in
such research lies primarily in the field of college composition, the sad reality is that research on
writing development in children with disabilities is limited in the K-12 world as well. Newcomer &
Barenbaum (1991) reviewed the literature related to the writing ability of children with learning
disabilities and stated that the body of research is ―small‖ and quite young, with nearly all research
coming after 1980 (p. 578). Of the studies they reviewed, most fell into the following five
categories: 1) focus on syntactic and mechanical error; 2) focus on genres of writing (following the
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Britton‘s model of development); 3) focus on story-composing ability with particular attention to
the various components of story schema; 4) focus on knowledge of text structures; 5) focus on idea
generation and knowledge transformation; or 6) focus on metacognitive processes or self-talk in the
writing process (p. 578-9). Newcomer & Barenbaum praise the existing body of research, but
lament that most of the research has yet to be replicated or extended, and that longitudinal studies
are all but nonexistent (p. 591).
Writing is obviously a physical act, first and foremost. In his influential book, Mind in
Society: The Development of Higher Psychological Processes (1978), however, Vygotsky (1978)
points out, ―Such a complex sign system cannot be accomplished in a purely mechanical and
external manner; rather it is the culmination of a long process of development of complex
behavioral functions in the child‖ (p. 106). He argues for a ―natural‖ rather than ―artificial‖
teaching of writing, allowing the child to view writing not on a curricular continuum, but rather on a
social continuum in which the child is given tools to express thought and language in a form other
than speech when the time and situation call for written language (p. 118). The perspectives
detailed by Vygotsky (1978, 1986), Wertsch (1998), and Lave and Wenger (1991) point to the
social and cultural origins of that development. Dyson (1995) insists that we now view written
language as ―inextricably tied to learning to interpret–-and, potentially, to reinterpret–-the social
world and one‘s place in it‖ (p. 6). This sociocultural theory that dominates current writing research
highlights the interactional nature of learning on both inter- and intrapersonal levels, a reality which
places tremendous roadblocks on the path of language learning for the child with AS or HFA.
The act of writing is a terrifically complex process, encompassing a broad range of physical,
cognitive and social skills: handwriting and the attendant fine motor skills, spelling, planning and
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organization, sentence formation, paragraph formation, consideration of purpose and audience, and
increasingly elaborate instances of meaning-making that require sophisticated and usually invisible
social negotiations on the part of the writer. We probably cannot even imagine all the points of
possible difficulty in written communication for children that deviate from what is widely accepted
as a normal trajectory of development in the areas that affect the writing process.
Asperger Syndrome, High-functioning Autism and Composition
A Los Angeles Times headline announced in May of 2003 that ―California autism cases
nearly double in 4 years‖ (Mestel, 2003). The California Department of Developmental Services
had just released a report, Autism Spectrum Disorders: Changes in the California Caseload; An
Update: 1999 through 2002 (2003), and the news was shocking. The prevalence of autism in
California had risen from 7.5 per 10,000 persons to 20.2 per 10,000 between 1985 and 1995, an
increase of 269 percent (p. 2). The increase in prevalence of higher-functioning diagnoses of
autism, including AS and HFA, during that same period was staggering: 3081 percent. From 1998
to 2002, those diagnoses increased 79 percent (p. 6). The Department of Developmental Services
indicated that other populations outside California had found similar increases. According to a
2002 Time cover story on autism, the problem is five times as common as Down‘s Syndrome and
three times as common as juvenile diabetes (Nash, p. 28). Researchers in the field of autism have
estimated the prevalence of AS to be between 10 and 26 per 10,000 persons (Frith, 1991; Gillberg,
1989; Bashe & Kirby, 2001; Bauer, 1996; Safran, 2001).
Why do these numbers matter? They matter to educators from early childhood through
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college because an increasing and significant prevalence of a serious developmental disorder affects
mainstream classrooms where disabled students are more often than not included thanks to changes
in special education law in the past two decades (see Siegel, 2001, chapter 2). Children with special
needs are entitled to a free and appropriate education in the least restrictive environment directed by
a document called an Individualized Education Program (or IEP) under current law known as the
Individuals with Disabilities Education Act (or IDEA) (Siegel, 2001). That ―least restrictive
environment,‖ for students with AS and HFA, often translates into a mainstream education with
accommodations and helps. Bauer (1996) claims that a significant number of AS students are able
to complete college ―and even graduate school‖ (p. 8). Extending understanding, acceptance and
assistance to these students is our responsibility and the chances of such a responsibility presenting
itself in any given classroom is on the rise.
In the writing classroom, this responsibility is highlighted by the importance of creating
learning environments that value the language, lives and identities of students. While this valuing
has been at the heart of discussions of race, class, gender and language difference in composition, a
critical awareness must also be developed in the area of disability. Dunn (1995), in discussing
learning disabilities in composition, alludes to the need for this increased awareness: ―We need a
theory to account for those few students whose writing problems cannot be fully explained by
environmental factors. Granted, we may not find an ideal way to test, teach or even name such
students, but we owe it to them to track down every clue available about learning‖ (p. 57). In their
edited volume, Asperger Syndrome (2000), autism researchers Klin, Volkmar and Sparrow issue a
similar, compelling challenge, stating, ―The neurotypical world needs to value diversity, allowing
for special people with behaviors and views different from the mainstream to contribute to and
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enjoy the resources of the larger society. Not only is there room for difference, but it should be
valued‖ (p. 10).
Finally, and perhaps most practically, the need for increased awareness and an opening up of
pedagogical theory to the differences presented by students with AS and HFA is urgent because the
challenge of written communication for these students is so acute. The social, communication,
executive function and motor skill deficits that they bring to every act of writing could effectively
hamper the development of writing abilities and consequently prevent them from participating fully
in the academic and cultural communities which demand writing proficiency. Before discussing
this challenge further, an examination of autistic spectrum disorder (ASD), and especially AS and
HFA, is clearly in order.
Autism, AS and HFA
If I could snap my fingers and be nonautistic, I would not–-because then I wouldn’t be me.
Autism is part of who I am. (Temple Grandin, in Sacks, 1995, p. 291).
Autism was first detailed in a paper published in 1943 by Dr. Leo Kanner, a Viennese
psychiatrist at Johns Hopkins, in which he described a syndrome he termed ―early infantile autism.‖
The paper differentiated children with a collection of symptoms now referred to as ―classical
autism‖ or ―Kanner‘s autism‖ from the then-current practice of diagnosing these children with
childhood psychosis. Kanner‘s autism appeared in infancy and was characterized by:
―autistic aloneness‖–-a lack of affective contact with others
lack of social language and, when language did develop, unusual linguistic behaviors (i.e.,
echolalia, the repetition of heard words, phrases or sentences)
an ―anxiously obsessive desire for sameness‖
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fascination with objects
―islets of ability‖ often linked to memory (e.g., savant abilities) (Wing, 1991, p. 93-94).
Kanner also delineated additional characteristics that were not deemed ―essential diagnostic
criteria,‖ but that often presented in children with autism, including nonverbal communication
impairment, motor clumsiness, stereotyped movements (i.e., hand flapping, finger flicking), odd
responses to sensory stimuli and negativity (Wing, 1991, p. 95).
A year after Kanner‘s paper, in 1944, Dr. Hans Asperger published his second doctoral
thesis in Vienna, a series of clinical case studies titled, ―Autistic Psychopathy in Childhood.‖
Asperger described children with ―striking similarities‖ to Kanner‘s subjects, but with significant
differences. While Asperger‘s subjects experienced social deficits, theirs was not the ―aloneness‖
described by Kanner. They were socially isolated, but not unaware or uninterested in people; their
social overtures tended to be inappropriate in various ways and they displayed a disregard for social
conventions born out of a certain obliviousness. They were, in a word, odd. Additionally,
Asperger‘s children ―developed speech before school age, typically had large vocabularies and
reasonable grammar‖ where Kanner‘s were often mute or echolalic (Wing, 1991, p. 96). Perhaps
most interestingly, the children described by Asperger each possessed an intense ―special interest‖
which consumed them. In her article, ―Asperger and His Syndrome‖ (1991), Frith states, ―Their
special interest is often their sole topic of conversation. . . .The interest may appear excessive,
abstruse and sterile to others, but not to the Asperger person‖ (p. 14). Asperger himself referred to
―autistic intelligence,‖ an intelligence Sacks (1995) describes as ―scarcely touched by tradition and
culture–unconventional, unorthodox, strangely ‗pure‘ and original‖ (p. 252).
In the decades following these published papers, Kanner‘s ideas about autism drew attention
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from clinicians and researchers while Asperger‘s languished in postwar Europe, largely forgotten.
Frith (1991) rightly points out that the word ―autism‖ tends to ―conjure up Leo Kanner‘s memory‖:
―Kanner‘s cases are so well known that they will always remain prototypes...Children who do not
talk or who parrot speech and use strange idiosyncratic phrases, who line up toys in long rows, who
are oblivious to people, who remember meaningless facts‖ (p. 11). Dustin Hoffman‘s memorable,
iconographic role in Rainman is a prime contemporary example.
An unfortunate analysis of autism developed and took hold through the 1950s and early
1960s, stemming from the Freudian theories popular at the time and widely disseminated through
the work of Bruno Bettelheim, which blamed the disorder on remote, emotionally cold ―refrigerator
mothers‖ and deemed autism a ―defensive‖ behavioral response (Sacks, 1995, p. 247). This
inaccurate and harmful idea was eventually overturned and the organic nature of autism was
established in the publication of Bernard Rimland‘s book, Infantile Autism, in 1964 (p. 303).
Asperger‘s work was rediscovered and revived in 1981 in a paper published by Lorna Wing
of the Institute of Psychiatry in London. It was Wing who coined the term ―Asperger‘s Syndrome‖
and who characterized the syndrome by a ―triad‖ of impairments affecting social interaction,
communication and imagination (Wing, 1981). Wing outlines and elaborates on Asperger‘s
accounts of his subjects‘ characteristics and behaviors which has served as a starting point for
modern diagnosis:
Speech: Relatively normal development
Pedantic, overly formal speech
Lengthy speeches on ―special interests‖
Repetition of heard words or phrases
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Some word invention
Nonverbal
Communication: Minimal facial expressions
Abnormal ―vocal intonation‖ (i.e. monotone)
Limited or inappropriate gestures
Poor comprehension of body language of others
Social
Interaction: No lack of desire for interaction with others
Lack of understanding of social norms & rules
―Naive and peculiar‖ social behavior
Apparent lack of intuitive knowledge
Lack of social adaptability
Repetitive
Behavior: Unusual attachment to things
Dislike of unfamiliar settings
Resistance to change
(Wing, 1991, p. 2-3).
The acceptance of AS as a diagnostic entity, as detailed by Wing and other researchers in the
1980s and early 1990s, was solidified by its inclusion in the Diagnostic and Statistical Manual of
Mental Disorders, 4th
Edition (DSM-IV) in 1994 (see Appendix A). Both AS and HFA are
considered to exist on the mild or higher functioning end of the autism spectrum (Frith, 1989) and
are understood to be biologically-based neurological disorders (Gillberg, 1989; Frith, 1989 & 1991;
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Koegel, Koegel, Frea & Smith, 1995; Baron-Cohen, 2003).
Writing Abilities in People with AS and HFA
The child with AS may not conform to the traditional sequence of stages in acquiring
scholastic abilities. The child appears to have a different way of thinking. (Attwood,
p. 120).
Understanding and tolerance are, philosophically, what is needed in considering the
development of writing abilities in children with AS. Practically, however, because these children
share certain characteristics, knowledge of their developmental needs and norms is very desirable so
that teaching methods and appropriate expectations and assignments can be devised–-we want them
to be able to participate and succeed in writing. Kunce & Mesibov (1998) and Hooper & Bundy
(1998) both remarked that the literature addressing learning characteristics of and educational
interventions for students with AS and HFA was ―scant.‖ According to Hooper & Bundy (1998),
―The learning characteristics of individuals with AS are just starting to be uncovered‖ (p. 318).
Unfortunately, according to a more recent synthesis of the literature on AS which appeared in the
Winter 2001 issue of Exceptional Children, ―There has been scant attention paid to AS in the
American special education literature‖ at a time when referrals are expected to ―sharply increase.‖
The author‘s plea is urgent: ―Information is desperately needed to assist educators in
screening...and to help plan effective interventions‖(Safran, 2001, p. 151). Much of what is
available even today comes in the form of teacher and parent lore, Internet sources and more
general publications (Kunce & Mesibov, 1998, p. 228).
Within the field of special education, learning disabilities and developmental disabilities in
all their infinite variety are often collapsed. Consider an article in the Journal of Learning
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Disabilities which calls for an approach to writing instruction which emphasizes peer editing and
collaborative work, and involves the discussion of ―self-talk‖ and consideration of audience with
learning disabled children (Englert, 1992, p. 154). While this approach may be helpful with certain
children struggling with other learning difficulties, the AS child could easily find this sort of
instruction both confusing and highly stressful. What is needed, clearly, is research in the area of
writing and AS, both how it affects the development of abilities and the process itself, and what
methods of instruction might assist the AS child in composing meaningful texts. This research will
hopefully move beyond early (or emergent) literacy development and address the education of older
students with AS and HFA, as ―increasing difficulty [occurs] in the upper elementary, middle and
high school years when greater emphasis is placed on application and abstraction of skills and
knowledge‖ (Kunce & Mesibov, 1998, p. 243) and writing becomes an integral part of the
curriculum.
Dyson rightly states, ―If literacy is the rendering of a relationship in graphic symbols, if the
differentiation of a symbol system is linked to the differentiation of social possibilities, then we
cannot make sense of children‘s literacy learning without making sense of children‘s interactive
lives, the who, what, where, why, and when of their language use.‖ (Dyson, 1995, p. 36). A
writer‘s consideration of audience, the choosing of appropriate language to the writing situation,
attention to the affect which is present in the text and is conveyed to the reader–-one attempt to look
at these issues through the eyes of a child with AS is enough to demonstrate that the task must be
terribly frustrating, if not overwhelming.
Based upon the characteristics of AS and HFA detailed by Klin & Volkmar (2000), I assert
that certain areas of probable difficulty in different aspects of the writing process will likely exist
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for students with these disorders. In brief, the characteristics are:
Theory of mind deficits
Theory of mind is the cognitive ability to imagine or predict the thoughts of others–-an
―other‖ awareness. A deficit in theory of mind is often referred to as a lack of empathy and
affects a person‘s ability to communicate intuitively and to effectively ―read‖ other people‘s
minds.
Pragmatic communication deficits
Pragmatic communication deficits include difficulty with nuanced, metaphorical and loaded
language (i.e., humor, irony, exaggeration); extraordinarily literal approach in both
interpretation and use of language; impaired ability to use cohesive devices; and poor
awareness of background information and conceptual links.
Perseverative behaviors
Perseverative behaviors are stereotyped behaviors, typically involving the body, that are
repetitive and self-stimulatory. Research suggests that perseveration is a stress-relieving
response that generally resists correction. These behaviors can include finger or hand
movements (e.g. finger-flicking or hand-flapping), full body movements (e.g. rocking or
spinning), or unusual interactions with objects (e.g. clicking a pen or picking at lint on
fabric).
Executive dysfunction
Deficits in the area of executive functioning lead to difficulties in planning, organizing and
self-management, and also affect cognitive flexibility or the ability to entertain alternatives,
often leading to behavior rigidity.
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Special interests
Many students with HFA or AS have an interest or interests that consume their thoughts and
motivate their behaviors. These special interests are often esoteric or unusual; they can also
be ―mainstream‖ interests, but they are taken to an extreme or continue to be interests when
other children have moved on to the next ―new‖ thing.
Motor Clumsiness
Motor clumsiness can involve either fine or gross motor skills.
General early developmental delays
AS and HFA are, at their core, developmental syndromes. The developmental delays can
occur in a number of areas and at any age or stage of life. One of the most noted is late-
developing speech and most children appear to have delays in social development, though
those delays may be attributable to other characteristics of the syndrome (especially theory
of mind deficits).
Research Design and Methodology
I combined qualitative research methods from case study design and textual analysis to
examine the writing process of Sam, a seventh grade student with high-functioning autism, as he
worked through a single, multi-draft writing assignment in a language arts class. I sought to
observe and analyze how various characteristics of HFA and AS directly and indirectly affect the
skills and behaviors a student must draw upon in order to complete a writing assignment in a
―process‖ writing classroom.
Qualitative Case Study Design
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The study described in this article draws on a four-week study in which I examined Sam‘s
work on a single writing assignment. Methods for this case study included:
A thorough developmental and educational history of Sam, compiled from my own memory;
comments from teachers recollected from meetings and discussions, as well as written
comments on schoolwork, progress reports and report cards; and expert reports, test scores
and transcripts of meetings involving the Special Education Assessment leading up to Sam‘s
Individual Educational Plan (IEP).
Observations of Sam while planning the paper, writing the first draft of the paper, analyzing
the written comments from the teacher on the first draft, typing the second draft of the paper,
and analyzing the written comments from the teacher on the second draft. All of these
observations took place in the home where the assignment was being done for homework.
These observations were documented in a log which included transcriptions of conversations
with Sam.
Interview with Lisa Kirk, Sam‘s language arts teacher. Lisa‘s interview addressed Sam‘s
work on the paper in class, including discussions between Lisa and Sam regarding writing in
general as well as writing for the present assignment.
Textual analysis of both drafts of Sam‘s paper as well as both sets of teacher comments on
those drafts. I examined the drafts for patterns of error and analyzed them both for content
and fluency in response to the writing prompt. I examined the teacher comments in light of
HFA/AS characteristics, seeking those comments that might point to the effects of those
characteristics in the written product.
A single case study approach allowed me to view one subject in depth and provide a
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snapshot of the skills, behaviors, strengths and weaknesses involved in the writing process from
beginning to end. MacNealy (1999) points out in Strategies for Empirical Research in Writing that
case study research provides ―rich description‖ of an individual which can provide insights into
events and behaviors and can lead to the development of research questions and hypotheses to be
tested in future research. The findings are not findings in the traditional sense, but rather the
observations lead to richly detailed descriptions of an individual‘s behaviors in a context, providing
a more holistic view of the subject that cannot generally be obtained from traditional research
methods involving the testing of predetermined variables in double-blind experiments. As Bissex
(1987) asserts, in case study research, ―researchers can attend to information that is humanly
significant though not mathematically measurable‖ (p. 11). She admits, as do I, that case study
research is not necessarily generalizable, but the holistic picture that is created in a case study can
contribute greatly to a discipline‘s understanding of what is happening when individuals learn
within certain contexts. Its exploratory nature can be viewed as limiting; however, exploration is an
important first step in an uncharted area such as the development of writing abilities in children
with disabilities. The case study literature in the broad field of writing has contributed
tremendously to the development of theory and practice in composition studies–-witness the seeds
of process theory planted in Emig‘s (1971) pioneering case studies of twelfth grade writers or the
development of cognitive research in writing that started in the case study research of Flower &
Hayes (1981) or more recent developments in theories of situated learning that grew out of the case
study research on writing in the workplace done by Odell & Goswami (1985), and Selzer (1983),
and in higher education by McCarthy (1987).
Subject Selection
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My interest in the development of writing abilities in children with HFA and AS grew out of
my personal experiences with a child with HFA and my commitment to his educational
development. As a college writing instructor for four years and a doctoral student in education with
an emphasis in writing research, my interest in my son‘s development in writing was acute and
served as motivation for my study in this area. Watching my son struggle with writing assignments
led me to question: How is his HFA affecting this process? What can be done to accommodate any
needs arising during the writing process that his disability presents? The questioning was personal
at first, as I longed to ease his struggles and help him to excel in an area that had been my passion
all of my life. It was painful to know that I had helped many students in my classes to improve their
writing abilities and nevertheless felt completely powerless to help my son with his own writing.
His problems with the process seemed so foreign to me, so unusual, so untouchable. And yet,
because of his intelligence, the expectations placed on him as a student writer were not much
different from those placed on neurotypical students at the same level. I had to wonder: were other
children with HFA and AS experiencing similar struggles? Could research in this area uncover
something important? Something helpful? My tentative answers were hopeful.
When I began designing a study of the writing process of children with HFA/AS, I knew
that I wanted as close-up a view as I could get. I wanted to try to ―get inside,‖ to take my
knowledge of HFA/AS and use it as a lens through which I could look at the writing process. I also
knew that children with HFA/AS, as pointed out earlier in this paper, can be very uncomfortable in
socially charged situations and the researcher-subject relationship seemed unusually charged and
fraught with many slippery negotiations that I knew could likely be misunderstood, misinterpreted
or, worse, harmful to potential subjects due to the stress that they might create. Finally, I hoped to
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overcome, even if only partially, the very act of observation affecting the observed behaviors, a
phenomenon that I thought might be especially problematic in a close-up observation. These
considerations led me to choose my own son as my initial research subject.
One advantage to conducting parent research is that I have full access to my subject‘s
history, both in documents and in recollection of actual occurrences. Another advantage is that I
was able to observe my subject in a completely naturalistic setting without needing to worry about
how my presence might affect the observed behaviors. In this particular study, another perceived
advantage that proved very valuable in the course of the data collection was that I have knowledge
of my subject‘s unique collection of autistic characteristics and typical behaviors. That lens I spoke
of earlier was clearer and more readily available to me in my analysis of data than it might have
been with a subject I‘d just met or didn‘t know as well. The benefits are undeniable and, in fact,
there is a history of parents observing their own children for research purposes. Even educational
research pioneer Piaget observed the behavior of his own three children in his initial case studies
(Bissex, 1987, p. 10).
This personal knowledge available to a parent researcher, of course, presents potential
problems. The most obvious potential problem is bias. A parent‘s love and concern for a child is
assumed, and usually rightfully so, and these feelings will no doubt color the observations and
conclusions in any research situation. There is no adequate defense to this assertion. The data is
tainted by personal feelings–-and while personal feelings surely taint all qualitative data, the
personal feelings between a parent and child are going to be stronger than those between a
researcher and subjects that were strangers when the project began. My only response is that it is
those feelings that have prompted and motivated my research and the drive to understand the effects
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of high-functioning autism on the writing process is strong and sustaining. I have taught scores of
―strangers‖ about the writing process in college composition courses and the helplessness I feel in
the face of the challenges my son must endure in writing makes the research questions I ask that
much more urgent. I don‘t just wonder. I‘m not just curious. I need to know. For my child‘s sake.
How do I combat the legitimate problems of bias in my research? I lean heavily on the
research in the field of autism and call upon it to guide me in my understanding of the disconnect
between writer and writing when HFA or AS are a factor. I ask for input from the classroom
teacher. And I incorporate methods from textual analysis to provide a more objective view of this
writing process I‘m trying to study.
Context
The context of this study is twofold: first, the study‘s subject attends a nonpublic school in
the Los Angeles Unified School District that is, in its own literature, ―for children with challenges
in the areas of socialization, communication, language development, peer relations, learning
disabilities and academic performance without significant behavior problems. Many of the students
served...experience special needs related to Asperger Syndrome and high-functioning autism‖ (The
H.E.L.P. Group pamphlet). Teachers at the school are trained to work with students with social and
communicative challenges including AS and HFA. The administration, staff, and faculty are
expected to provide accommodations necessary to help the students at the school succeed in spite of
their disabilities. This context is understandably questionable in light of the present climate in
educational research favoring inclusion and mainstreaming of disabled students. As is often the
case in qualitative research, however, the context came with the subject. I, as researcher,
understand the favored philosophy in special education at this time, however I choose not to judge
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the educational environment of my subject, but rather acknowledge its characteristics and note that
especially in my assessment of the parameters of the assignment and in my interview with the
classroom teacher, the accommodations built into the context affected the outcomes.
I did not enter the classroom at the school in order to study the subject at work. This
decision was purposeful. I strove to keep the stress of the research situation on my subject to an
absolute minimum during the course of the study. When I asked my son if he would mind if I
observed him in the classroom while working on a writing assignment, he was emphatic in his
request that I not observe him in school. I respected his wish-–I felt strongly that any research
conducted at the expense of the researched subject is not ethical.
The second context for the study was the home of the subject which, of course, happens to
be the home of me as the researcher. The likelihood of gaining access into the home of a child with
HFA or AS for the purposes of observing that child seemed rather remote and yet this environment
is rich with information that I felt would help me answer my questions. Most significantly, I
believed that the home environment would provide me with the opportunity to observe a subject at
work on a writing assignment free from the potential stressors and distractions of the classroom. I
found the study of my own child to be advantageous in this regard as I was able to observe my
―subject‖ in a naturalistic setting and in a manner that would not be available to a non-familial
researcher. The trade-off was worth it to me in that I had a close-up view that did not stress the
subject as I believe such close observation would cause to a non-familial subject.
The Case of Sam
Early Childhood
The fact that Sam did not speak a word other than the occasional yes until his second
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birthday was worrisome, not because he was unable to relate or communicate with others-–he had
developed an elaborate sign language all his own which usually made his thoughts and desires fairly
clear–-but rather because lore in the form of parenting books and magazines indicated that this was
a little late. According to the child development experts, this self-styled sign language wasn‘t
normal–-it wasn‘t even mentioned, but I managed to gloss over this presumed abnormality and
assured myself and others that my son was simply independent and would talk when he was ready.
Other developmental abnormalities were similarly dismissed during Sam‘s early childhood. The
fact that he was (and is) reluctant to play with other children was attributed to acute shyness and his
penchant for order and symmetry were intelligent little quirks of personality. His poor fine motor
skills were attributed to left-handedness and a sharp growth curve that perhaps left his muscles
lagging behind development in other areas. The fact that he would not look at interesting objects I
would point out to him and that he often did not respond when his name was called led his
pediatrician to test his hearing; the hearing checked out and the lack of responsiveness was ignored.
His very literal interpretations of everything he heard and read were often frustrating for both of us,
but not considered a serious problem. Each minor, or even major, deviation from what ―the rest of
the kids were doing,‖ a common topic of conversation and personal reflection for many mothers,
was always met by my explanations and justifications-- my doubts and fears were simply
internalized. Dyson‘s (1995) assertion that ―visions of the ‗normal‘ developing child traditionally
have carried socially hierarchical messages‖ is a painful reality for a mother who watches as her
child is placed low in that social hierarchy based on criteria which so clearly degrades difference (p.
5).
Schooling
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A move from Missouri to southern California caused Sam to be caught between conflicting
cut-off dates for kindergarten so his schooling began in the first grade class of Mrs. Jackson. While
Sam took to new concepts quickly and confidently, his ability to learn handwriting and to copy
words and sentences from the board was hindered by an eyesight problem (corrected with glasses
once the problem became apparent) and by poor motor coordination. His writing process was
consequently very slow. Mrs. Jackson assured me that his difficulty with writing would probably
pass with time. ―He‘ll grow out of it,‖ she said. Sam‘s social development was also a concern
during first grade; he was spending recess time alone on the playground and was having difficulties
cooperating with other children when required to work in a group setting. In her report card
comments, she said that Sam was ―very rule oriented and is having some trouble with those who
don‘t follow the rules.‖ No particular remedies were suggested, though; again, the teacher was
confident that the problems would pass as he ―worked on‖ getting along better with peers.
In second and third grades, as writing became a larger part of the curriculum, Sam‘s ability
to fully participate in the classroom and show his mastery were increasingly compromised.
Problems with orthography were no longer attributed to being ―new to the task‖ and they began to
significantly interfere with assignment completion. As Jones and Christensen (1999) point out,
―The multiple attentional demands of generating written text may mean that students who
experience difficulty in the orthographic-motor demands of writing letters and words are likely to
have difficulty expressing their ideas in the form of written text‖ (p. 45). Sam was expected to
construct paragraphs at this stage, but his paragraphs were deemed underdeveloped, lacking
appropriate detail. His spelling was often poor. In reading, however, he was excelling; he clearly
comprehended what he read because he was able to explain the content thoroughly and accurately–
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if allowed to do so in speech rather than writing. Vygotsky (1978) claims that ―written symbols
function as designations for verbal ones. Understanding of written language is first effected through
spoken language, but gradually this path is curtailed and spoken language disappears as the
intermediate link‖ (p. 116). For some reason, this path between spoken and written language was
not disappearing for Sam at the point when it was disappearing for other children his age. In fact,
Sam began talking to himself at this point, at times repeating his own words and at other times, in
the privacy of his bedroom or the hall bathroom, he seemed to be rehearsing for potential
conversations in the future. It was as if the egocentric speech discussed by Vygotsky (1986) which
was supposed to have ―gone underground‖ and turned into ―inner speech‖ (p. 33) at this age was not
only not going underground, but was reasserting itself in new ways instead.
Socially, Sam‘s struggles were intensifying. His third grade teacher, Mrs. Barry, wrote on
his report card, in the euphemistic register of teacher comments, that he was ―working on refining
peer relationships;‖ in conference, however, Mrs. Barry made it very clear that Sam was not ―fitting
in‖ and was speaking to other children in ways that were ―rude‖ and ―insensitive.‖ He was the class
policeman, as he had been labeled by previous teachers, however at this age, the other children were
beginning to expect a certain code of silence among schoolchildren. Due to the incessant teasing
and bullying of other children in the class and the teacher‘s insistence that Sam was the one who
needed to change, I moved Sam to another third grade class. The new teacher, Mrs. Kreis, echoed
Mrs. Barry‘s assessments: Sam was lacking tact and didn‘t seem to be picking up on the social cues
of his peers. He much preferred to converse with adults. On the playground and during P.E., his
inability to catch, throw or kick a ball made him increasingly prone to teasing by the boys who
ruthlessly judged others based on these skills. He would wander away and walk in small circles on
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the pavement, alone.
In his fourth grade class, Sam encountered, for the first time, a rigorous schedule of readings
and corresponding short-answer tests along with a regular stream of writing assignments that were
to follow the five paragraph essay format. Homework assignments were no longer sent home on
photocopied sheets, but were to be copied down from the board each morning into a notebook.
Early in the school year, handwritten progress reports from the teacher, Mrs. Yasuhara, were sent
home indicating that Sam was quickly falling behind in his written assignments, he was failing tests
in subjects that were usually his strong suit (science and history) and he was not demonstrating the
level of organizational ability this teacher required. Sam reported that he was not able to go out to
recess anymore because he had to stay in and ―write standards;‖ the teacher‘s method of punishing
students for misbehaving in class, not turning in homework or not keeping their school materials
properly organized was to have them sit in at recess and write sentences over and over: ―I will keep
my desk neat and orderly. I will keep my desk neat and orderly. I will keep my desk...‖ Sam‘s
excruciatingly slow writing process was now more of a handicap than ever before.
At home, I began to observe, as a researcher might, Sam‘s writing process. I had begun to
wonder if he might simply be distracted, a daydreamer, maybe. He was, in fact, quite fidgety, but
he kept himself on task as he wrote. I could hear him speaking the words softly to himself as he
wrote. I saw him painstakingly form each word in jagged cursive letters, often stopping to erase
and rewrite words because he‘d left out letters, or erase and rewrite sentences because he‘d left out
entire words. He spoke to me about the assignments, focusing almost singularly on the number of
sentences he needed per paragraph, the number of paragraphs needed to complete the paper and the
need to follow various procedural rules: writing on every other line, spacing items properly on a
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title page, including page numbers at the bottom of each page in the correct format. The subject
matter seemed, to him, immaterial. Interestingly, he never once said he hated writing or didn‘t want
to do it, even when he‘d spend up to two hours in the composing of just two or three paragraphs.
His patience with the tasks was astounding.
Conferences with the teacher led to a few changes which improved Sam‘s outlook on going
to school: he would no longer be writing standards (the writing instructor in me could not bear to
see writing used as a punishment with my child) which freed him to go out to recess, and the
teacher promised to assist Sam in getting the homework assignments written down each morning.
The tests remained a puzzle–-how was it that Sam could fail a test on magnetism when our entire
family is well aware of his encyclopedic knowledge on the topic and has witnessed his various
experiments with magnets and their power? Sam didn‘t get the answers wrong on classroom tests.
He simply didn‘t answer all the questions. Sometimes he wouldn‘t answer any of the questions. No
amount of encouragement to answer all items on a test made a difference and the teacher claimed
she was unable to give him extra time unless Sam was identified as having a learning disability.
The negative progress reports continued. It was time to find out just why Sam, a child who was
recently identified as gifted by the school district, was floundering.
The Special Education Assessment
At the suggestion of the school principal, my husband and I signed an authorization for the
Los Angeles Unified School District to begin what they term ―the special education process,‖ the
first step of which is an assessment. According to the district‘s official special education literature,
―An assessment involves gathering information about your child to determine whether your child
has a disability and, if he or she is eligible, the nature and extent of special education services that
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your child may need‖ (A Parent’s Guide, 2000, p. 4). In Sam‘s case, a battery of assessments were
ordered:
Social/Emotional Development
Cognitive Development
Academic Achievement
Perceptual Development
Motor Development
Communications/Language Functioning
Health
The assessments were conducted by a team consisting of the school psychologist, two special
education teachers (called ―resource specialists‖) and the school nurse.
Once the assessments were completed, the team of assessors, along with myself and my
husband, Sam‘s classroom teacher and the school principal all convened for an Individualized
Education Program (IEP) meeting. We were there with the express purpose of discussing the
assessment results and making a determination whether my son would be eligible for special
education services, and, if eligible, just what services would be made available.
The meeting entailed each member of the assessment team reading their written reports
about Sam. The resource specialists had found no significant deficits in Sam‘s academic
achievement, including in the area of writing–-as part of their assessment, Sam had sat down with
the specialists, chosen a topic (his Beanie Baby collection–-his ―special interest‖ at the time) and
written a full page of well-constructed paragraphs. They detected difficulties in his ability to ―copy
work accurately and using legible cursive.‖ The nurse noted some of Sam‘s developmental delays
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(information gleaned from an interview with me). The school psychologist reported that Sam had
scored in the ―above average‖ range in auditory thinking and reasoning skills, and had scored
―below average‖ in the auditory-perceptual and non-verbal visual channels. The classroom teacher
emphasized that Sam ―relates positively with me, but not with his peers. Other students find it
difficult to work with [him] and his playground conduct is not always appropriate.‖ She also
indicated that Sam really doesn‘t participate in the activities of the classroom, usually choosing to
pursue things on his own terms. ―I don‘t really see the point of him being in the classroom at all,‖
she said simply.
The consensus was that Sam has a ―specific learning disability‖ (this is an actual term for a
particular disability–the indications are that a child shows ―a severe discrepancy between ability and
achievement due to psychological processing deficits‖). The concrete result of this meeting was the
formation of an IEP. Sam‘s IEP allowed him assistance in getting his homework assignments (an
aide writes them down and places them in a notebook for Sam, then assists him in getting the
notebook in his backpack) and also allowed him to take his tests in the learning resource room
where he could be away from distractions and, hopefully, better concentrate on actually answering
the questions. Finally, the school nurse, at the prompting of the rest of the assessment team, filed a
request for counseling through the district in order to address Sam‘s problems with socialization
which they determined, based on no empirical evidence, were attributable to him being ―an
emotionally troubled little boy.‖
In the final moments of the IEP meeting, however, as I was talking to the IEP team about
Sam‘s various sensory sensitivities (tags in shirts, certain sounds), the school psychologist stopped
me and began to ask some questions. How does Sam respond to change? (Horribly.) Does he
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remember things he‘s read? (Like an elephant.) Is he especially literal? (I could only laugh.) The
psychologist responded that, after piecing together her own findings with the discussion of Sam‘s
characteristics and behaviors, she believed he may have something called Asperger Syndrome. I
had never heard of it. ―I‘ll send you some materials on it,‖ she said. ―We should have your son
evaluated.‖
The Diagnosis of High-Functioning Autism
People with Asperger’s syndrome perceive the world differently from everyone else. They
find the rest of us strange and baffling. (Attwood, 1998, p. 9)
I did not wait for the materials from the school psychologist. I immediately searched the
Internet for information on AS, identified the current experts in the field and got their books. What
I read both amazed and relieved me. I found Sam in nearly every passage, every description, from
the early childhood developmental abnormalities through the unusual social behaviors, the
classroom difficulties through the intense, sustained special interests. No parent wants to hear that
their child has a disability, but that pain is far less than the pain of not knowing, of never having
questions answered, of self-blame and helplessness. I had Sam privately evaluated by a clinician at
UCLA. She administered the Autism Diagnostic Observation Schedule-General (ADOS-G), the
standard protocol for observation of autistic behaviors (Klin, Sparrow, Marans, Carter & Volkmar,
2000, p. 330), and the official diagnosis of autism was given.
At that point, Sam was nearing the end of fourth grade in a mainstream public school
classroom. My husband and I researched all possible interventions to help Sam both socially and
academically. We learned of a private school in our city geared directly towards meeting the unique
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needs of children with AS and HFA and after a visit and a difficult decision-making process, we
pursued a placement at the school for Sam and our school district agreed. He is presently in his
third year at this school and his social and academic transformations have been amazing. He no
longer sits at his desk, disconnected from the class, but is an enthusiastic participant. His academic
performance is at or above grade level and his work habits are much improved. He has friends that
he sees both at school and on weekends. Most significantly, he feels accepted for who he is.
Writing
While most of Sam‘s academic problems were helped by the accommodations and
interventions built into the everyday policies and routines at his new school, his troubles with
writing were still–and continue to be–serious. The written portion of a recent statewide
standardized test placed Sam well below average in writing abilities and a school-administered
academic performance test placed him two grade levels lower in writing. His composing process
is slow, his frustration is high and the products of his efforts seldom reach the goals for length,
depth and correctness outlined by his teachers.
Writing and the development of writing abilities in Sam is clearly and inextricably linked to
the fact that he has HFA. The motor clumsiness described in the literature is the most visible
characteristic which affects writing ability and accounts, at least in part, for the slowness of the
process and the sloppiness of the product. The social difficulties displayed by children on the high-
functioning end of the autism spectrum such as Sam are also deeply linked to his difficulties in
writing. Ultimately, it is his ―different way of thinking‖ which dictates how Sam creates and
utilizes written language. In that regard, he may very well be developing along a developmental
trajectory that makes perfect sense for a child with a mind such as his, and is in no way ―delayed‖ or
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indicative of some inability or deficit. Vygotsky (1993), in his writings concerning learning
disabilities, points out that ―a child whose development is impeded by a defect is not simply a child
less developed than his peers, but is a child who has developed differently‖ (p. 30). His description
of blindness is instructive as an analogy to AS, HFA or any other disability that would affect
learning:
Blindness is not a disease, but the normal condition for a blind child; he senses his
uniqueness only indirectly and secondarily as a result of his social experience. A blind
person does not directly sense the dark and in no way feels submerged in darkness. . .and
generally speaking, in no way senses his blindness. A blind person‘s failure to see light
does not correspond with the sensation that a seeing person has when wearing a blindfold.
Blindness becomes a tragedy only as a social phenomenon (Vygotsky, 1993, p. 81).
A 7th
Grade Writing Assignment
Sam attended a nonpublic school for children with AS and HFA during the 7th
grade. At this
school, 7th
grade marked the first year of ―middle school‖ and consequently the first year of
departmentalization and multiple teachers. Sam‘s academic progress was directed by an IEP
prepared by the school‘s director, Sam‘s homeroom teacher, a school district psychologist, my
husband and myself.
Writing instruction at the school was taught utilizing a specialized instructional program
called ―Inspiration.‖ The program emphasizes the use of visual organization prompts that
encourage students to ―brainstorm‖ and ―outline.‖ Sam‘s writing instruction was further directed by
annual goals in the ―Written Fluency‖ and ―Written Expression‖ performance areas of his IEP
which stated: ―Sam will write or type a one paragraph critical response [to literature read in class]
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with a main idea, supporting points and conclusion in a 15 minute period with 80% accuracy,‖ and
―Sam will write or type a four paragraph essay with a clear thesis, supporting points, transitions and
conclusion with 80% accuracy, 4/5 times.‖ Finally, the school, in order to maintain funding from
local school districts for attending students placed there, had to adhere to the English-Language Arts
Content Standards (1997) published by the California State Board of Education. In general, the
state called for the development of ―skilled writers.‖ The published standards state:
Reading and writing technical materials. . .are critical life skills. Participation in society–
filling out forms, voting, understanding the daily newspaper–requires solid reading and
writing competencies. Similarly, most jobs demand the abilities to read and write well.
Collegiate and technical courses generally require a high level of proficiency in both
abilities. In an emergency, reading and writing with speed and accuracy may literally mean
the difference between life and death (p. v).
In order to fulfill these lofty ideals, seventh graders in California were to aspire to ―write clear,
coherent, and focused essays‖ with ―awareness of audience and purpose.‖ The essays were to
―contain formal introductions, supporting evidence, and conclusions.‖ Vaguely, the students were
to ―progress through the stages of the writing process as needed‖ (p. 44).
Sam received a writing assignment from his language arts teacher in February, the middle of
the school year. The assignment was to write an essay on the topic, ―3 wishes.‖ The writing
prompt was divided into three parts, ―Introduction,‖ ―Bodies‖ [sic], and ―Conclusion.‖ Each part
was followed by multiple heuristics:
Introduction: What are your three wishes? Why have you picked these three wishes? Do you
think they will make your life better, more satisfying, longer?
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Bodies [sic]: Write a new paragraph for each wish. Wishes 1-3, explain in detail why you want
this wish. What is it? What can it do for you? Is this wish for your gain or for
somebody else? How will it change you and/or your life? Will it be for the better?
Conclusion: What was the result of your wishes? How did they make an impact on you? Were
you happy in the end? If you could really have three wishes, do you think the choices
you made were good choices? Why or why not? (See Appendix B).
The students in the language arts class were given the prompt at the beginning of the class
period and the teacher read the prompt aloud. The prewriting exercise consisting of a drawn
conceptual map was done in class. The students were then asked to get out notebook paper and a
pencil and begin writing.
Sam printed the first paragraph of the paper in pencil during class. Sam had abandoned
cursive writing earlier that school year for printing which he claimed was ―easier.‖ His cursive
handwriting had been somewhat shaky though generally legible, but the time required to write
perfectly (in his opinion)-–with all of the attendant erasing-–was extraordinary. Sam could easily
spend an hour writing four sentences. Sam always wrote with a pencil, allowing him the
opportunity to perfect his writing by immediately erasing any letters, words or even sentences that
seemed wrong.
Sam brought the assignment home to complete as homework and, when I asked him if he
had any homework, he told me he had to write a report. ―It‘s five paragraphs,‖ he said, then
groaned. ―It‘s going to take too long.‖ I looked at the assignment sheet and suggested that it might
not be too hard because he could write about things he liked. My suggestion was met with another
groan. ―Can I do it later?‖ he asked. I told him he could take some time to relax and then he
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needed to get to work. I knew from past experience that completing a writing assignment could fill
an entire night.
The writing session that night was limited to one hour after discussing the parameters with
Sam. We set a timer for sixty minutes. ―I‘ll never finish,‖ Sam said. ―It doesn‘t matter,‖ I said. ―I
told your teachers that I wasn‘t going to make you work on homework longer than an hour.‖ Sam
started repeating the words ―five paragraphs.‖ He sat in the swiveling desk chair in our home office
and began to spin it around. He was clearly overwhelmed by the expectations of the assignment
and was perseverating, performing repetitive behaviors–-saying ―five paragraphs‖ and spinning
around on the chair–-to calm himself. I talked to him while he spun. ―Sam, let‘s start with the next
paragraph. Don‘t worry about how many paragraphs you need in all,‖ I said. Sam did not respond.
―Let‘s go out to the kitchen. You‘ll have more room to write at the table out there.‖ I thought that
the clutter of the office might be over-stimulating and the temptation to spin in the swiveling chair
was just too great. We took the timer and moved to the kitchen.
―Okay,‖ I said, sitting at the table with Sam. ―How do you start a paragraph?‖ I hoped for
the ―topic sentence‖ answer that seemed to be built into past writing assignment prompts from
school. ―Indentation,‖ Sam replied. ―Ah, yes,‖ I said with a smile. ―But then you have to start with
one sentence. After one, then you‘ll think of another one.‖ Sam moaned and began to talk about
the four paragraphs he had yet to write. ―You only have to write for one hour. Stop worrying about
how long the essay needs to be.‖ Sam finally began to write. Even while printing, the physical
writing process was still painstakingly slow for Sam. Sam‘s three wishes were for ―all the money I
would ever need,‖ to be ―so smart I would need to go to school‖ [the word ―not‖ was accidentally
omitted by Sam], and that ―I could fly‖ (see Appendix C). When Sam completed his first body
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paragraph on ―all the money,‖ he stopped writing and came to me to ask a question. ―What are
some other good things about not going to school?‖ I reminded him that I couldn‘t know about the
things he‘d already thought of since I hadn‘t read what he wrote–a sign of his pragmatic difficulty.
He said he had already thought of ―no homework‖–-an understandable wish under the
circumstances.
T: Well, let‘s brainstorm.
N: Why don‘t you just tell me?
T: Because it‘s your paper.
N: [groan] I‘m never going to finish.
T: What would be good about not going to school?
N: I don‘t remember.
T: Do you like waking up early to get ready for school?
N: No.
T: Well, there‘s one thing.
N: Okay.
Sam returned to his paper and added ―(2) no waking up in the morning to go on the bus or
being driven by our parents, (3) no class work‖ to the draft. He talked out loud as he wrote.
N: I need one more thing.
T: Why don‘t you think of things you don‘t like about school?
N: I already put ―no class work.‖
T: What about something you can’t do or have because you‘re at school?
N: Good lunches!
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Sam returned once again to the paper and wrote ―and, (4) no crumby (bad) lunches.‖ He
went on to detail the ―bad things‖ about this wish, explaining that ―this wish is althou [sic] very
good it has some down qualities.‖
After this apparent success in getting down some details, the groans started again and Sam
stood up and began to pace on his toes, first in small back-and-forth steps, then in small circles, with
head hung down. ―I want to change my last wish,‖ he said. He had originally chosen ―three more
wishes,‖ but he said he couldn‘t think of enough to say about this wish to fill a paragraph. I
checked the timer. ―Sam, only eight minutes left. Plenty of time to think of something new and
write it down,‖ I said cheerfully. ―Actually, seven minutes and fifty-three seconds,‖ he responded
sharply. ―Yes. Yes, that‘s true,‖ I said with a nod. I then suggested he think for a few minutes
about the change he wanted to make. Sam became very agitated, saying, ―Never mind. Can‘t
change it. Then I‘ll have to go back and change the introduction.‖ I explained that this was just a
first draft and that he could always erase or just change the introduction in the next draft. This was
unacceptable. At this point, Sam asked for a hug and I said, ―Sure.‖ The timer went off soon after
and I called an end to the writing session.
The remainder of this first handwritten draft was completed in class (see Appendix A for a
copy of the draft). At this point in the research, I contacted the classroom teacher, Lisa Kirk, by
phone to interview her regarding Sam‘s progress with this assignment. Lisa explained that Sam was
―stalling‖ because he was afraid to get something wrong. In her opinion, Sam found generating
ideas ―hard‖ and struggled with any writing tasks that required interpretation or ―critical thinking.‖
His language and approach to tasks was very literal, in her observation, and he hated writing
because there was ―no right answer.‖ I asked her what strategies she had employed to assist him in
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completing the writing assignment. She responded that she had suggested brainstorming both out
loud and on paper, but ―efforts, so far, have been futile.‖ Sam was very resistant to offers of help or
to direction of any kind. I asked if any classroom activities involved other students, perhaps in peer
workshops or other interactional activities. Lisa explained, with some laughter, that ―the students
did not generally do well in groups.‖ She said that Sam was easily frustrated by what he perceived
as ―stupidity‖ on the part of other students and he was not anxious in any way to assist other
students-–and he was not alone in this attitude among the students. She then said that she had tried
having all the students in the class ―visualize, to make movies in their minds‖ which she thought
would help them develop their ideas, but that the students seemed unable to ―go beyond the
confines of what‘s there.‖ I asked what she felt Sam‘s greatest problems with writing were in the
classroom and she said, emphatically, ―getting started and development.‖ That, in a nutshell,
sounded to me like the writing process in general. According to the language arts teacher, trouble
was at every turn.
Sam received his first draft back from his teacher with comments and corrections (see
Appendix B for the first draft with teacher comments). Most of the corrections involved calling for
word or phrase clarification and pointing out spelling and punctuation errors. Comments centered
on the lack of details, with the end comment imploring Sam to ―explore each wish thoroughly.‖
And as Sam suspected, Lisa caught the unchanged mention of the third wish as ―three more wishes‖
even though later in the paragraph, the third wish is ―that I could fly.‖ Sam wanted to abandon the
assignment at this point, but I told him part of the writing process is revision and that he needed to
at least make the corrections suggested by the teacher. I also mentioned that he now had an
opportunity to write the last body paragraph about his third wish and add a conclusion paragraph.
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Sam groaned at the thought of more writing, but said, ―At least now I can type it.‖
Sam worked independently on the typed second draft, inputting the paper into our home
computer and making changes as he typed. The revision took several hours, with many points
along the way where Sam spun in his chair or repetitively moved the cursor back and forth on the
screen. His only question to me was how many sentences a paragraph had to have. I told him that
most teachers want at least three sentences in a paragraph. The end result was a five paragraph
essay including his completely new paragraph about being able to fly, with the good and bad things
about this wish pointed out, and a three sentence conclusion. Interestingly, one major change
involved the wish to be ―VERY smart‖ that he struggled over during our work together on his first
draft. In the first draft, Sam stated that he wanted to be ―so smart so I could not go to school
anymore, also to prove I‘m better than my brother.‖ In the revised second draft, Sam wrote, ―I
would want to be that smart so that I would never have to go to school again and that so nobody
would think I was stupid because I had autisum (sic).‖ This comment from Sam naturally led to
some discussion between him and me, but he decided to leave it in the paper.
The second draft was returned to Sam by the teacher with corrections of mechanical errors
in each paragraph and a couple sentences crossed out, one to omit it completely and one with a
rewritten sentence given. The end comment was a simple ―very good‖ and no calls for further
elaboration were given. In one paragraph, Sam‘s numbering of the good things about his wish is
left alone and in another, the numbering is crossed out. Sam took this draft to the computer at home
without comment or complaint. He corrected most of the mechanical errors, added sentences or
phrases that summed up each paragraph (generally, assertions that the wish had its good and bad
points, but wasn‘t perfect). In the paragraph where the numbering was left alone, Sam left it alone;
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in the paragraph where the numbering was crossed out, Sam rewrote the good and bad points about
the wish into sentences. He added three exclamation points to his concern that being able to fly
might lead to ―crash[ing] into power lines or crash land[ing]!!!‖–-an unusual show of emotional
emphasis for Sam (see Appendix C for a copy of the third draft).
The third draft was also returned to Sam by the teacher and this draft had, by far, the most
corrections, comments and requests for elaboration and additional details (see Appendix D for the
third draft with comments). Transitions are suggested, the first sentence of each body paragraph is
crossed out, questions are asked to elicit more details and an extensive end comment suggests ways
to extend the conclusion which is clearly underdeveloped. The autism comment is crossed out in
this draft with a comment, ―This is NOT true,‖ and two of the three emphatic exclamation points are
crossed out. Sam was completely disheartened by the comments and corrections on this draft. As
he said to me, ―I changed all the stuff she wanted me to change and now she says it‘s still wrong.‖
Sam absolutely refused to make further changes and abandoned the assignment at that point.
Discussion
In analyzing the data collected through observations, interview and textual analyses, I
attempted to filter the information through the lens of characteristics of HFA and AS as detailed
earlier in this paper and manifested in my subject Sam's behaviors. Based upon the evidence I've
gathered and the readings and the theories they provide as a frame for understanding HFA and AS, I
have created an analytical table (see Table 1 on following page) detailing the ways I believe HFA
and AS affect the writing process. My hope is that this presentation of the evidence and my
hypotheses drawn from both theory and data will provide a snapshot, so to speak, of what happens
when a child writes in an educational setting while dealing with the differences in mind and
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behavior that we have labeled HFA and AS.
The evidence and theory informing the analytical table and my elaboration of the material
presented in the table necessarily reflect the parameters of the project–some of the evidence was
observed while some of it was inferred from observations or from extensions of theory. Some of
the inferences also rise from potential cross-cell interactions where one characteristic of HFA or AS
influences or leads to changes in another characteristic's effects on the writing process. Finally,
while the writing process has been neatly divided into six stages, from pre-writing to revision, as a
writing instructor and a student of composition theory, I am aware that the process is not so neatly
divided in reality and is, in fact, a recursive process with its own "cross-cell interactions" and I hope
to provide explanation of the analytical table's contents that takes this reality into account.
Table 1
Theory of
Mind Deficits
Pragmatic
Deficits
Perseverative
Behaviors
Writing
Workshops
w/ Peers
Social skills
in groups are poor Lack of
empathy impairs
feedback
Overly
literal communication impairs peer
interaction
Behaviors
can interefere with peer interaction &
cause annoyance
Feedback
from
Teacher
Difficulty in
―reading‖ what
teacher means unless very
direct
Possible lack
of understanding of
written feedback
Revision
Activities
Revision for
an audience‘s increased understanding
seems foreign
General
linguistic difficulty and inflexibility
Difficulty in
getting to and staying on task due to distraction
Pre-Writing
Activities
Difficulty in
interpreting the intent of the assignment
Conceptual
links are often weak General linguistic difficulty
Difficulty in
getting to and staying on task due to distraction
Physical Act
of Writing
Behaviors
involving hands or fingers can interfere Perfectionism
Drafting—
Audience &
Purpose
Sense of
audience is distorted or nonexistent
Difficulty
with metaphorical language Impaired
cohensiveness
Difficulty in
getting to and staying on task due to distraction
Executive
Dysfunction
Planning
abilities often severely impaired
Getting
materials
organized is difficult
Finding
needed materials (pencil, papers) can be
difficult
Impaired
self-monitoring & management affect time &
fluency
Deficits in
cognitive flexibility impacts ability to
entertain alternatives
Special
Interests
Student may
insist on special interest in writing or steer
subject to that
interest
Student may
insist on special interest in writing
Tendency to
steer conversations to special interest
Lack of
motivation if paper is not related to interest
Motor
Clumsiness
Coordination
needed for writing can be quite poor
Frustration
can cause student to abandon the
assignment
Developmental
Delays
Speech delays
can contribute to linguistic immaturity or lack
of confidence
Fine motor
skills needed for writing often delayed
Social skills
may be age-delayed & affect peer relations
Student may
not be ready to
reach teacher‘s expectations for
grade level
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In preface to the presentation of my explanations of and elaborations on the information
outlined in the table, I concede that my evidence and the picture it paints are limited. I lack
observations of the writing process in the classroom due to Sam's privacy wishes. I lack knowledge
of my subject's internal states as he moves through the writing process. Because many of the
characteristics of autism are internal and therefore invisible, making them visible is going to involve
a certain amount of guesswork and is going to reflect the biases and preconceptions of the person
doing the revealing. And as with all ethnographic studies, I am limited by the material realities of
my subject and his surroundings–in this case, a child diagnosed with HFA at age nine with a well-
educated parent researcher who is a composition instructor and a writing assignment given by a
special education-trained teacher in a nonpublic school that has policies, curriculum and an
environment specially geared towards accommodating the unique needs of students with HFA and
AS. The variables in any human study are seemingly infinite and they all surely act on the data
gathered and the presentation thereof.
My explanations of and elaborations on the analytical table will be presented so that I may
tell "the horizontal story." I will move with my subject through the six stages of the writing process
and, along the way, detail the observed evidence during each stage and present my inferences and
hypotheses that spring from the data and from extension of theories of HFA and AS. I will also
outline potential problems and questions as they arise–problems and questions that will hopefully
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lead to further inquiry and, ultimately, to answers that can help ease the difficulties writers with
HFA and AS experience
Pre-writing Activities
In this study, the pre-writing activities included evaluation of the printed writing prompt from the
teacher, drawing a conceptual map, choosing subjects and details and planning the writing of the
assignment.
Theory of Mind Deficits
Sam showed no concern for determining what the teacher wanted from him in completing this
assignment. He believed that the key to success in this assignment was writing the correct number
of paragraphs with the correct number of sentences. This obsession with rules is not uncommon in
children with HFA/AS. It is theorized to stem from an inability to read other people's minds and is
a defensive response manifesting in rigidity and a rule-oriented attitude that can serve to lessen the
chaos and seeming randomness of others' behaviors. have strong reason to expect, from my
observations and from theory, that writers with HFA/AS will have difficulty in interpreting the
intent of an assignment and ascertaining what responses to a writing prompt will be received
positively by the reader/teacher.
Pragmatic Deficits
Sam had difficulty with expansion of ideas and with the notion of choosing subjects for writing that
would lend themselves to fuller development. He repeatedly said, "I'm already putting down what I
think" in expressing his frustration with coming up with more ideas. He also showed difficulty in
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choosing words and those that he did choose lacked sophistication–his pre-writing tended to be
brief, direct and composed largely of short, simple words. It is also reasonable to expect, based
upon our knowledge of deficits in pragmatics and the attendant weakness of conceptual links, that a
student with HFA/AS is going to have a hard time creating a plan for writing that would lead to a
cohesive, unified whole.
Perseveration
During pre-writing activites, Sam had a tendency to spin in his chair. The repetitive behaviors
captured under the heading of perseveration vary broadly from person to person, however most of
them involve the body (as in spinning), body parts (as in hand-flapping) or vision (as in staring at
lights or moving objects). Clearly, any of these behaviors are going to interfere with pre-writing
activities as they will distract the student from the task at hand.
Executive Dysfunction
Executive dysfunction might be the most serious obstacle to the pre-writing stage of the writing
process for a student with HFA/AS. The ability to plan, to break a task down into meaningful and
achievable parts is severely limited. Sam displayed genuine distress in the pre-writing stage of
writing this assignment because he couldn't see the "process" and expressed worry that he would
never be able to write five paragraphs. Even when the process was broken down for him, he still
fixated on the final product and expressed a lack of confidence in ever reaching that end. Executive
dysfunction also involves disorganization and difficulty with keeping track of materials and of time.
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Sam took a lot of extra time finding the assignment sheet, tracking down the pre-writing work he
had done in class and finding a pencil.
Special Interests
In asking the students to write about three wishes and why they'd choose them, Sam's teacher gave a
writing prompt that provided the students creative freedom and allowed them to write about
subjects that they found interesting. The teacher actually accommodated the students by
acknowledging that they have special interests and giving an assignment that would work with the
interests rather than against them. According to the teacher, this sort of accommodation is common
in the writing classrooms at the school as it is a suggested teaching strategy in teacher training. In
theory, if an assignment was more restrictive, based upon our knowledge of the persistence some
people with HFA/AS display in steering everything towards their special interest, we might expect
that these students would struggle with planning to write on a topic completely unrelated to their
special interest or possibly incorporate their special interest into the assignment inappropriately or,
at least, ineffectively.
General Developmental Delays
While some debate still exists, most autism experts agree that children on the high-functioning end
of the autism spectrum with delayed development of speech should be diagnosed with HFA and
those without such a delay should be diagnosed with AS. Sam was delayed in his speech
development and is also not especially verbal–another common characteristic of children with
HFA–and consequently, he often displays linguistic immaturity. This, in turn, affects linguistic
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confidence. We have good reason to believe that this linguistic immaturity and lack of confidence
will affect the writing process, including in the pre-writing stage when the building blocks of
language are set in place to serve as a foundation for the actual written product.
Physical Act of Writing
In this study, the physical act of writing was performed in a classroom and a home setting. Writing
was only directly observed in the home setting. The physical act of writing was of two
different types—handwriting on lined paper and typing on a keyboard of a personal computer.
Perseveration
The physical aspect of the writing process is certainly the most affected by perseveration. When
Sam was spinning round and round in his swivel chair, he was not writing, even though he sat down
with the intention to write. In addition, Sam displayed other perseverative behaviors. His
perfectionism and insistence on order make it hard for him to write by hand and he repetitively
shifted the paper slightly from side to side to center it and he erased letters and words in a
seemingly obsessive manner. When he switched to typing on the second and third drafts, he
displayed an unusual perseverative behavior of moving the cursor on the screen back and forth, over
and over again. All other typical perseverative behaviors are also going to keep the child with
HFA/AS from writing or, if not, the urge to perseverate can surely cause physical distress.
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The physicality of the writing process necessarily involves the use of tools and the management of
materials. Sam displayed difficulty in finding the necessary tools—paper, pencil—and in managing
the paperwork—assignment sheets, corrected drafts.
Motor Clumsiness
Writing takes motor coordination and the lack of coordination common in people with HFA/AS
serves to make the physical act of writing quite challenging. Typing on a keyboard is easier for
many students and is often an accommodation provided when other students might be expected to
write by hand. Sam struggled with poor fine motor skills throughout his life and his writing during
this assignment was no less of a challenge. His handwriting is shaky, though it is not as messy as
one might expect due to his perfectionism and frequent erasures. Motor clumsiness prolongs the
writing process and we can expect it to contribute to frustrated feelings during the process.
General Developmental Delays
Some of the motor clumsiness which affects the physical act of writing can be attributed to delayed
development of fine motor skills.
Drafting—Audience & Purpose
In this study, Sam wrote three drafts of the assignment. The first draft was two handwritten pages
and was incomplete—it did not include the final body paragraph planned in the introduction and it
did not have a conclusion. The second and third drafts were both five paragraphs long and were
complete. These drafts incorporated changes suggested by the written comments of the teacher.
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While consideration of audience in addition to understanding and acknowledgement of the purpose
of the writing task are a part of the pre-writing or planning stage of writing, these issues are
addressed in this drafting section. In the actual writing of the assignment, a subject‘s attention or
inattention to audience and purpose would, in my opinion, be most noticeable and would affect the
relative communicative success of the written product.
Theory of Mind Deficits
If theory of mind is, in essence, the ability to ascertain and to some extent predict the thoughts and
mental state of another person—to ―read‖ their minds and comprehend that reading—then clearly a
person with deficits in this ability are going to have a difficult time considering an audience while
writing. While a basic writer might struggle with this and employ strategies of varying
effectiveness in order to address the need to write for a reader, a student with HFA/AS and the
attendant theory of mind deficits might not even understand the concept. It is reasonable to expect,
both from theory and from observations of Sam‘s drafting process, that the sense of audience is
going to be distorted at best and can be nonexistent in some situations. Sam wrote for himself and
showed considerable confusion when prompted to include more details in his writing because it
would be more interesting. ―I think it‘s fine the way it is,‖ he‘d say.
Pragmatic Deficits
Pragmatics involve a variety of linguistic and communicative moves in writing: language use with
a clear understanding of meaning, the ability to sense nuances in language and cohesiveness to
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name a few. Sam‘s language use is highly literal and his ability to use metaphorical language is
severely limited. His writing samples show this literal language use on a word and sentence level,
as well as a fact-oriented and underdeveloped text on a global level. Difficulties with cohesiveness
are evident in the lack of meaningful transitions or over-reliance on formulaic transitions suggested
by the teacher (first…, second…) between paragraphs, and a sense of jumping from one idea to the
next. This jumping from idea to idea can also be related to the theory of mind deficits as the writer
doesn‘t consider the need for background information in order to ―bring the reader up to speed‖—
after all, the writer knows, it‘s obvious, so why explain? Sam also fixated repeatedly on how many
sentences he needed to write for each paragraph, losing sight of the ―big picture,‖ another pragmatic
deficit. From our understanding of these pragmatic deficits and from the evidence gathered in this
study, we can expect considerable problems in the drafting stage for students with HFA/AS. Some
will show up in the process itself—finding words, developing ideas—and some will appear
textually.
Perseveration
As was the case during pre-writing activites, Sam had a tendency to spin in his chair, and as
mentioned in the discussion of the physical act of writing, Sam had repetitive movements with his
paper, with erasing and with moving the cursor back and forth on the computer screen.
Perseverative behaviors are a distraction to the writing process. Unfortunately, these behaviors are
not easy to stop for a person with HFA/AS, even when they‘ve been asked (or even ordered) to
stop.
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Executive Dysfunction
The impaired self-monitoring and self-management that fall under the umbrella of executive
dysfunction can significantly impede the drafting stage of the writing process. They affect overall
project management as well as time management in particular, making the writing process take far
more time than would normally be expected. Sam‘s drafting time was very long, with him taking as
much as an hour on one brief paragraph. He often lost track of what he was intending to do. When
working steadily, he was highly focused and would lose track of time, but if his work rhythm was
interrupted, he became highly distractible and found it hard to get back to work. We can certainly
infer from our knowledge of this characteristic in HFA/AS and from the observed difficulties in this
case that executive dysfunction negatively impacts the writing process.
Special Interests
As in the pre-writing stage of the writing process, a student‘s special interest can interfere with
drafting as he or she may attempt to incorporate it into the text inappropriately. According to the
literature, some HFA/AS students will direct all verbal interactions towards their special interest
and we could reasonably infer that some students will do the same in written communication. This
inclination could certainly prove puzzling to the teacher lacking knowledge about these disabilities.
What could be made of an assigned paper about the California missions that discusses dinosaurs at
length?
Writing Workshops with Peers
In this study, writing workshops with peers did not occur. I have included this stage of the writing
process in my analysis because I believe important inferences can be made from extensions of
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theory about how HFA and AS would likely affect this common pedagogical practice in writing
classrooms.
Theory of Mind Deficits
The ability to act appropriately and effectively in social situations is largely dependent upon the
knowledge of how others will view our words and actions. Theory of mind deficits can yield social
interactions that are, at best, strained and can be downright disastrous. People with HFA/AS are
often described as lacking tact and in a workshop situation with peers, this lack could certainly lead
to hurt feelings or harmed relationships, results that could be baffling to the HFA/AS student.
Whether these students actually lack empathy or only appear to lack empathy due to their impaired
theory of mind and social skills, we could reasonably expect that unmonitored peer workshops
could lead to misunderstanding between the HFA/AS student and his or her peers and the
effectiveness of the feedback would likely be impaired.
Perseveration
Perseverative behaviors can be confusing or even disturbing to others and the inability to control
them in the face of peer rejection or judgment can be very frustrating and disheartening to the
student with HFA/AS. A close-up social interaction such as a writing workshop can highlight these
perseverations and, if unmonitored, could lead to ostracizing behaviors from peers. Conversely, the
perseverative behaviors, depending on their nature and severity, could be a distraction or, at least,
an annoyance to the others in a workshop group and negatively affect the group‘s effectiveness.
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The aforementioned tendency of some people with HFA/AS to steer conversations towards their
special interest could presumably cause some problems in a workshop situation. Off-topic
discussion is distracting, takes time away from useful interactions and could serve to ostracize the
student if it was annoying to others. Unfortunately, according to the literature, those people with
HFA/AS that have this tendency are often driven to their special interest more so in socially
stressful situations. A workshop situation, with its emotionally sensitive nature, its personal
interactions and situationally dependent expectations could prove highly stressful for the HFA/AS
student.
General Developmental Delays
Developmental delays in the area of social skills are typical in children with HFA/AS and the social
expectations in a workshop environment may be well out of the range of these children. Peer
relationships are often strained (or even nonexistent) in school and the close peer interactions
required in a workshop may prove overwhelming to the student with HFA/AS.
Feedback from the Teacher
In this study, three drafts of the assignment received written comments from the teacher, including
in-text, marginal and end comments. By way of an interview with the teacher, I also know about
incidents of direct instruction and assistance during the writing process between Sam and the
teacher. Sam read all of the written comments from the teacher.
Theory of Mind Deficits
Teacher comments are sometimes very direct, especially when addressing grammar or usage errors.
Sometimes, though, they are more nuanced, often in an attempt to gently guide the student‘s writing
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progress rather than merely impose their own words or voice on the writing. In reading the
teacher‘s comments on the three drafts of the assignment, Sam showed no interest in addressing any
of the comments that were conceptual. He completely ignored questions posed by the teacher that
were clearly intended to draw out further details in future drafts. He did respond to comments that
were direct and in places where the teacher crossed out and rewrote words, phrases or sentences, he
seemed relieved to know ―what the teacher wanted.‖ Theory and evidence point to theory of mind
deficits contributing to a genuine block in reading the meaning embedded in indirect comments,
suggestions and questions.
Pragmatic Deficits
The difficulty in understanding or interpreting teacher comments stems not just from theory of mind
deficits, but also from pragmatic deficits. As mentioned earlier, nuanced language is difficult to
comprehend for people with HFA/AS and is, in fact, often misinterpreted. The tendency to be
linguistically literal is also a hindrance to understanding when reading, especially when the text is
not purely fact-based. In Sam‘s case, the teacher‘s comments—those that were not questions—
were generally direct and free of nuanced language. This may be due to teacher training that alerts
teachers to the linguistic challenges these students face.
General Developmental Delays
Feedback from teachers comes with expectations—the teacher expects the student to understand,
comprehend, interpret and ultimately use the advice and help given. Delays in social development
and language development can place a child with HFA/AS on a different level of ability from his or
her peers and the ability to reach those expectations can be negatively impacted. It is my opinion
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that the expectations from Sam‘s teacher were appropriately gauged to his abilities to respond,
largely due to her understanding of HFA and its effects on developmental levels.
Revision Activities
In this study, Sam revised the assignment twice. He was asked to do one further revision, but he did
not. The first revision involved completion of the assignment because the first draft lacked the final
body paragraph and the conclusion and these were added in the second draft. Most other changes in
the text were responses to comments from the teacher that addressed errors.
Theory of Mind Deficits
Many of the challenges related to theory of mind deficits in the reception of feedback stage also
present themselves in the revision stage. Those teacher comments that had to be read, interpreted
and evaluated now drive the revision process for most students. The misunderstandings,
misinterpretations and outright dismissals of teacher comments can now be manifested in revisions
that are inappropriate or that simply miss the point. More importantly, though, is that revision is
targeted at a real or imagined audience. The reader has misunderstood, the reader wants more
details, the reader doesn‘t see the connections—these problems must be addressed in any
meaningful revision. What if you can‘t imagine that reader? The idea of revising or rewriting so
that a reader receives your writing more positively can seem utterly foreign to a writer with
HFA/AS. Based upon theoretical implications, the entire endeavor of revision could very likely
focus purely on error correction—getting it ―right‖ is not subject to the same frustrated
communications.
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Pragmatic Deficits
Once again, pragmatic deficits affect the writing process both in the previously mentioned ways and
now additionally in the linguistic inflexibility. Rethinking the overall idea of the assignment did not
occur to Sam. He wanted to please the teacher, but he found responding to specific comments to be
an acceptable revision. ―It‘s fine the way it is,‖ was the recurring response to prompts to revise on a
more conceptual level. ―I said what I thought.‖
Perseveration
At any point in the writing process, perseveration is going to get in the way of actual composing for
all the reasons outlined above. This applies to composing in the revision stage as well.
Executive Dysfunction
Cognitive inflexibility is a hallmark of executive dysfunction—an inability to envision or entertain
alternatives. In the revision stage of the writing process, this inflexibility is devastating. At this
stage, Sam was deeply discouraged by teacher comments and felt powerless to change the core
problems in his text, namely underdevelopment and lack of cohesion. He had, in his eyes, written
the assignment and could not understand how completely changing it was either necessary or
possible considering the weight of the work on him already. He could see no other way of writing
the assignment other than what he had already done.
Special Interests
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Motivation, for all writers, ultimately stems from interest. If the special interest of a writer with
HFA/AS is not included in the writing assignment, motivation may be quite low. This is a hard
reality for these children and cannot always be accommodated, however an informed and
enlightened teacher can certainly be sensitive to this reality. Again, Sam was able to write about
things that interested him (even though they did not involve his special interests per se) and
therefore his topics for writing were not frustrated.
Motor Clumsiness
The frustrations attendant to motor clumsiness in the writing process should not be downplayed.
Skilled and successful writers—those that typically teach others how to write at all levels—can
sometimes forget the physicality of writing. That physicality, for a writer struggling with the
realities of HFA/AS on the body, can be a tremendous burden. Handwriting is precise and
responsive to the most delicate of movements. Typing requires coordination and quick reflexes.
Writing, in short, is hard—on a most elemental level. Fortunately, many children with HFA/AS
learn keyboarding skills and find it to be less of a burden, less of a tax on their motor skills and Sam
was one of these children. At the revision stage, particularly because he was not rewriting large
portions of the assignment, Sam continued until the revisions suggested on the third draft. At that
point, I believe that a combination of factors—cognitive, relational and physical—combined to lead
him to abandon the assignment. He had done what he felt he could do and then he did no more.
The “Big Picture”
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While working on this research project, I was often asked about my work. What was I
studying? What was important about it? I would respond that I was studying the development of
writing abilities in children with high-functioning autism and Asperger Syndrome. It was important
because children with these disabilities were generally above-average intelligence and were often
placed in inclusive classroom settings where they were expected to keep up with their peers, albeit
with accommodations. Because I hypothesized that writing presented a unique and very real
challenge to these children, I knew that grade levels and classrooms where writing was central had
the potential of completely frustrating the goals of both student and teacher.
The question that invariably followed was this: What is the difference for these kids?
What‘s hard about writing for them? Those questions guided my research and I would like to
address them in a global fashion now. What‘s different? What‘s hard? Language is mysterious to
a child with HFA/AS. He or she has mastered certain conventions, often on a purely intellectual
level and often employing formulas that seem to ―work‖ whether it be repeating phrases from
television shows or falling back on areas of expertise in the hopes of holding others‘ interest. If it‘s
not literal, not fact-based, emotional rather than logical, intuitive rather than scientific, well, no
one‘s quite sure what the outcome will be in an interchange. A painful reality for someone that
craves–no, needs, requires–order and certainty. What else? Writing, that physical act of pushing
pencil over paper, of moving fingers over a keyboard, is hard because the muscles and the reflexes
and the coordination of both just don‘t always work as they should. Is that it? No. Writing is, by
its very nature, a communicative act, a social interaction in almost all situations, but always in the
school setting. And social situations, social communication and the intuitive and interactional
moves that are required to be good at them are puzzling at best for a child with HFA/AS. At worst,
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they are a garbled mess. Social cues are missed, intuitive meanings are lost and the thought of
meeting a reader‘s needs is not ignored–it never enters the mind. Could there be more? Yes. The
management skills needed to orchestrate a writing project are deficient so schedules and instructions
are misplaced, pencils are yet to be found and time seems to slip away while too many minutes float
away thinking about a favorite subject or spinning clockwise in a favorite chair. Writing is hard for
these children. Not because they are lazy or slow or lacking in ideas or stubborn or just plain weird.
It‘s hard because the components of the writing process all present their unique challenges to them
and the accommodations presented, if at all, are seldom enough to address the magnitude of those
challenges.
By presenting this picture, I do not mean to say that the intersection of writing and HFA/AS
is doomed to failure. I believe that if there are ideas to be communicated, they can make their way
to paper or screen, one way or another. The questions raised by this research project and the
hypotheses asserted about the writing process of these children screams for further investigation and
the offering of meaningful and effective interventions. I haven‘t the answers. But I know answers
are needed. Children with HFA/AS are included in regular classrooms across the nation and their
numbers are growing. They are in specialized classrooms, special programs, special schools. In
every situation, every child struggling with the realities of HFA/AS is nevertheless called upon to
write. And they need teachers that understand the challenges, consider the options of
accommodations and exceptions and hopefully can provide a sympathetic audience to these writers–
even if their needs as an audience are inadvertently neglected. Because HFA/AS affects social
interaction and some of its characteristics are, in the words of AS expert Tony Atwood, ―downright
odd,‖ breakdowns in communication are not unusual. They just must not be accepted or ignored.
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Implications of This Case
Coming to literacy is an amazing process. The complexities are staggering. And that‘s just
for the so-called ―normal‖ child going through the ―normal‖ stages of development. Learning to
write involves everything–the body, soul and mind, all integrated, with each new skill learned or
acquired hopefully building on all prior skills. It‘s remarkable that most of us learn to write and to
comprehend the social implications of writing at all. The anthropologist in each of us can strip
away the conventions that blind us to the strangeness of it all and hear the invitation to written
literacy: Okay, children, take these bits of carbon, press the carbon on these thin slivers of wood,
and make lines and squiggles that will tell others what you‘re thinking.
It is, of course, the telling others what we‘re thinking that ultimately dictates so many
decisions and negotiations that occur during the writing process. It also presents the greatest
challenge. As Vygotsky (1978) so eloquently states, ―Written language becomes direct symbolism
that is perceived in the same way as spoken language. We need only try to imagine the enormous
changes in the cultural development of children that occur as a result of mastery of written language
and the ability to read–-and of thus becoming aware of everything that human genius has created in
the realm of the written word‖ (p. 116). Yes, we need only try to imagine.
Our awareness, as educators, of this challenge for every child makes the sympathy for the
child who exhibits difference in development all the more acute. Sympathy, of course, is not
enough. Different children need different tools; which tools, how to introduce them and how to
teach children to use them–these are the research questions. Different children are on different
developmental trajectories; what to expect and when, how to ascertain what is known and how to
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build on that knowledge in order to lead the child to new knowledge–-these are more research
questions. The field is immense and largely uncharted.
The Constructed Nature of Disability
This immense and uncharted field is hindered by a lack of awareness, however, or perhaps a
lack of humility. The fact is, terms ascribed to difference, terms like learning disability and the
existence of various instruments utilized by specialists to assess and detect these ―disabilities‖ argue
for a pure, scientific knowledge about differences in children‘s learning. The socially constructed
nature of learning disabilities is invisible. Nunkoosing, in his article, ―Constructing Learning
Disability‖ (2000), points out that ―the assumption [is] that the problem of learning disability is
located inside the person, and not in social arrangement‖ which then leads to ―deficit thinking‖ (p.
55). He points out that:
We take it for granted that degrees of disability can be measured or described as mild,
moderate or severe; that the causes of some intellectual impairments could be found in
people‘s genes, their physiology, anatomy, cognition, or their early life experiences. This
taken for granted knowledge allows us to postulate theories about people‘s thinking,
problem solving, behavior or other constructed concepts such as self-esteem. The meaning
that is shared...is created through language, social interaction and culture [and are] the
product of specific contexts in professions...Thus what we take to be personal understanding
has actually been learned and passed on through our education. (p. 50)
This is not to say that there are no such things as syndromes or developmental differences or
collections of characteristics that occur in small percentages of the population; obviously, as human
beings, we share certain traits and difference is noticeable and, in many cases, it is useful to identify
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it and offer special accommodation or helps. The problem, I believe, lies in embedded language that
is loaded and implies knowledge of things we simply cannot know. The prefix dis- means ―not‖;
why are we so willing to commit to a supposedly scientific, clinically proven (social) fact that
certain children are not able to learn or not able to develop? Isn‘t that what the terms learning
disability and developmental disability really mean? This sort of labeling, at its heart, is
hierarchical, culturally situated (a child unable to tie his own shoes in a culture where there are no
shoelaces is hardly ―developmentally disabled‖) and potentially harmful.
Ultimately, the term development proves to be problematic. While it can, in some cases,
capture a sense of movement that is at once recursive and fluid and rich, it is often used to describe
a linear, flat movement from point A to point B. It implies, again, a knowable, concrete thing,
something that can be described, charted, graphed and monitored. A look at any ―first years of life‖
book written for anxious parents will describe ―developmental milestones‖ and attach ages to them.
Vygotsky (1978) writes of children moving along a linear trajectory of development in writing,
from gestures to symbolism in play, in drawing and finally in writing. Britton (1975) describes a
child‘s development of writing abilities moving through various ―audience categories,‖ one after
another. These models may prove helpful when observing and teaching most children, and they
may provide a means of identifying and perhaps helping children who have specific difficulties. In
fact, though, as Applebee (2000) points out, ―within the U.S., ‗development,‘ with a few notable
exceptions (Heath, 1983; Delpit, 1995; Dyson, 1989, 1993; Gee, 1996), has meant the development
of mainstream, middle class students‖ (p. 8). Dyson concurs, adding that ―in linking narrowly
defined normality with the ethics of care, developmental visions have masked the social and cultural
diversity of developmental pathways and endgoals, made invisible their own ideological
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commitments‖ (1995, p. 5). All children are unique and their development is often fraught with
regressions and surges, relearning and unlearning, all of which contribute to genuine learning. This
realization aids not only effective teaching and classroom practice, but could foster a sense of
understanding and tolerance towards difference that is sorely lacking in our present culture.
Finally, I believe that attending to the unique needs of AS and HFA children in the teaching
of writing and the study of the development of writing abilities can perhaps open up the notion of
what is ―right‖ instruction, what is ―normal‖ development and what are ―reasonable‖ expectations.
As Russell (1999) points out, the entire foundation of the ―process‖ movement in composition rests
on assumptions of homogeneity in students‘ development, ability, and needs, and that what is
needed is a paradigm shift away from writing process and towards the concept of writing processes.
Widely held assumptions such as the positive nature of all collaborative group work, the de-
emphasizing of direct instruction in writing strategies, or even the necessity of cursive writing in
elementary school warrant examination in light of difference. We owe it to the children to attempt
to answer these questions, to open up the world of human genius to them, inviting them to
participate in the conversation with their own unique insights and approaches.
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