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Division of Language Arts/Reading READING COACH November 2010 Participant Packet

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Division of Language Arts/Reading

READING COACH

November 2010

Participant Packet

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Table of Content

Power Point – Reading

Power Point – Writing

Reading Handouts:

- New FCAT Content Focus

- Fall Interim Item Analysis

o Grade 3

o Grade 4

o Grade 5

Writing Handouts:

- Anchor Set

- Calibration Set

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Reading Coach Meeting

Division of Language Arts/Reading

November 2010

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Monitor student progress of the Next Generation Sunshine State Standards (NGSSS) and the Sunshine State Standards (SSS).

Provide valid and reliable information regarding content mastery and/or instructional focus.

Utilize the data to make meaningful and timely curricular decisions.

Progress reporting tool for School Improvement Plans.

Purpose of InterimsPurpose of Interims

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Collaborative debriefings (administration, department heads, and classroom teachers): should take place in a timely manner to identify strengths and weaknesses in order to effectively target instruction.

Classroom debriefings (classroom teacher with students): provide students with the opportunity to review their responses and teachers with teachable moments toidentify and address concepts not initially understood.

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Provide students with their test and answer sheet.

Discuss any items you found to be problematic for the class as a whole.

Listen to students’ comments and reactions.

Make notes of any deficient or problematic areasduring this process.

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Help teachers analyze grade level trends & specific classroom trends

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Interpreting Proficiency Levelsfor the NGSSS, 2010-11

For the Interims…

The Edusoft

default levels are preset:

Proficient set at 70%

Non-Proficient set at 69% and below

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So let’s get this straight…

ProficientSatisfactory Progress

70-100%

HighlightGREEN

Limited Progress 50-69%

HighlightYELLOW

Non-ProficientInsufficient Progress

0-49%

HighlightPINK

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Biddlemyer

Elementary School

Biddlemyer

Elementary School

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Biddlemyer

Elementary School

Biddlemyer

Elementary School

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Biddlemyer

Elementary School

Biddelmyer

Elementary School

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Grade: ____ Trends:

Levels Benchmarks

% of Students at

each Benchmark

Proficient/Satisfactory(70%-100%)

Limited Progress(50%-69%)

Non-Proficient/Insufficient

(0-49%)

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Ms. Z

Bibblemyer

Elem. School

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Ms. Z

Biddlemyer

Elem. School

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Ms. Z

Biddlemyer

Elem. School

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Mr./Mrs. _________ Classroom Trends:

Levels Benchmarks

% of Students at

each Benchmark

Proficient/Satisfactory(70%-100%)

Limited Progress(50%-69%)

Non-Proficient/Insufficient

(0-49%)

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Small Group Instruction:

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FCAT WRITING for Reading Coaches

November, 2010Curriculum & Instruction

Language Arts/Reading

How comfortable are YOU

in the

STATE’S CHAIR?

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OBJECTIVES

AS A RESULT OF COMPLETING THIS SESSION, PARTICIPANTS WILL BE ABLE TO:

Analyze the new 2007 Next Generation Sunshine State Standards to understand the writing process and writing applications strands;Understand the state’s expectations of expository and narrative genres for FCAT Writing;Utilize the rubric to assist in the writing instruction;Select the appropriate strategy for revising and editing that will lead to higher student performance.

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TOP 10 WAYS TO AFFECT WRITING

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WHAT SHOULD THE WRITING ENVIRONMENT LOOK LIKE?

Student seating arranged for ease of collaboration, peer response, revision,and editingStudent folders with student writing, word lists,planners, possible topics, etc

Classroom environment should bevisually stimulating:

Categorized lists: similes, vivid verbs, transitions, other words for. . ., etc.Student friendly rubricsEditor checklistsPosters of a variety of plannersCurrent student writing

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Developmental Stages Of Writing

Characteristics Instructional Focus ExampleEmergent Writers:understands writing communicates ideasuses pictures to communicate ideasscribbles, letter‐like symbols, or random letters adding writingto picturesdoes not connect letters and soundspretends to read the textdoes not understand writing is permanent in meaning

oral language development: vocabulary and storytellingtelling stories with pictures and words letter and soundsknowing and using the language of writers

Early Writers:writes more than one detail on a topicchooses topics that are generally related to experiencehas many concepts about print  e.g. directionalitymay not understand spaces around wordsconnects letters to soundshas a small repertoire of high‐frequency words

generating several details on a topicreadable phonetic spellings representing  every sound 

in a wordconventional spelling of high‐frequency wordsconcept of “word boundaries”revision by “adding on”should be moved from writing words to sentences to 

groups of sentences

Developing Writers:writes many details on a topiccan write about topic beyond personal experiencebegins to experiment  with description and word choiceuses mostly simple and complex sentencesspells many words conventionally or uses phonetic spellinguses punctuation

organizing information and detailsplanning – beginning, middle, endexpanding descriptive languagewriting with personality and voicespelling patterns and strategiessentence combining

Pets Are FunMy pet is a puppy. Hisname is Spot. He is white

with brown and black spots. He sleeps on my bed. He islittle and soft. He comes

to he when I call him. Spot.

Fluent Writers:creates writing that has a flow and sounds fluentwrites about imaginative ideas beyond personal experienceprewrites using a variety of organizational and planning toolsaccesses a variety of text forms for different purposesuses descriptive language and complex sentencesdemonstrates a writer’s voice appropriate to purpose and 

audience.has age appropriate mastery of conventions

increasing control of conventionsincreasing sophistication of vocabulary andsentencesprecise word choice energized by powerful 

verbsfigurative languagevariety in text forms, audience, perspectiveindependent revision and editingattention to writer's craft

Mrs. Stern was the meanest

teacher in the world.  She never

let her students go on field trips 

or watch videos. Worst of all,  

while the rest of  the school had 

parties,

we sat and worked.  

Work, work, work! That’s all we 

ever did.  She was also boring 

and wore the same

jet black 

dress everyday. She was worse 

than a dragon. A dragon is 

probably better.

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PROCESSPROCESS FIRST, THEN ELEMENTSELEMENTS, THEN MODESMODES.

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SO WHAT ARE YOU SUPPOSED TO TEACH?

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KEY ELEMENTS OF WRITING

What to teach!Fluency/IdeasOrganizationAwareness of Audience, VoicePrecise Word ChoiceSentence Fluency/Sentence VarietyConventions

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Process Elements ModesPrewriting

Drafting 

Revising

Editing

Publishing

FocusFluency/Ideas

OrganizationBeginning/Middle/EndTransitional Devices

SupportSupporting IdeasPrecise word ChoiceVoice

ConventionsSentence VarietyMechanics/Punctuation

Narrative

Expository

Persuasive

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CHARACTERISTICS OF: PERSONAL NARRATIVE

PERSONAL EXPOSITORY

PERSUASIVE

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Tells a personal story

Focused on one event that appears to be significant to the writer

Can be fictional

Needs to include the elements of a story (characters, setting, plot, movement through time and change)

Uses sensory details

Uses feelings

Is reflective

Explains why, how or whatFocused on one topic that is significant to the writer (personal or class thematic unit)

Includes clusters of information that explain and supportMay include comparing factsMay include a mini-story that supports the topicUses sensory details

Is reflective

States an opinion or position

Gives reasons why with facts and details about the topic that prove their opinion/position

Includes telling who said so

Support by using a number

Makes the reader want to be on their side

Uses feelingsIs reflective

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Format of the 30 Minute Writing BlockFRAMEWORK FORMAT ACTIVITY

Opening Activity/ Lesson Stimulus

5 Minutes

Teacher Directed/Whole Group Explicit Instruction

Introduction to Mentor Text and Targeted Writing Element/Minilesson

Teacher explicit demonstration through writing aloud AND/OR shared writing

During Activity 20 MinutesApplication

Teacher Directed/Whole Group Instruction OR Small Group Instruction

Teacher Modeling, Guided Writing, or Review of Key Learning Objective/Targeted Writing Element

Teacher and class may examine writer’s craft using mentor text, student generated writing, or teacher created example; OR compose a piece of writing collaboratively through shared writing

Independent Practice OR Teacher Guided/ Small Group Practice

Students transfer & apply knowledge gained to a new piece of writing OR As students write the teacher further guides through mini- lessons & conferencing

Student writes alone OR Student writes and teacher guides in the form of mini-lessons, choosing craft lessons that relate to the students’

needs

Lesson Review/ Closure5 Minutes

Whole Group Teacher facilitates closing activity and assigns follow-up

Students share with each other AND/OR with class

Walk-By or Stop & Go

Conferences

Stop & StayConferences

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FOUR COMPONENTS OF A WRITING LESSON

WRITING ALOUD

I’ll Show You

SHARED 

WRITING

You Help Me

GUIDED 

WRITING

I’ll Help You

INDEPENDENT 

WRITING

Now You Do It 

Yourself

Teacher 

demonstration in 

mini‐lessons:

Teacher has all the 

responsibility for the 

writing

Class participation in 

mini‐lessons:

The teacher has the 

most responsibility 

for the writing and 

the children 

contribute as they are 

able

At‐the‐elbow 

conferences: The 

child has the most 

responsibility for the 

writing and the 

teacher provides 

support as needed.

Independent writing:

The child has all the 

responsibility for the 

writing

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“State of the Class”You as a teacher need to beaware of the needs of your students to decide what your future minilessons will be!

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Teacher Responsibility Student Responsibility

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GIVING A MINI-LESSON MARVELOUS MINILESSONS P. 22-24

1. Give the lesson a catchy name.2. Keep it brief.3. Focus on 1

key learning concept.

4. Let the student know

up front what they will belearning.

5. Start by connecting the lesson

with what they alreadyknow or are already doing.

6. Be explicit

and direct.7. Expect students to be accountable

for their

learning.8. Plan mini-lessons

based on what your students

need to know.9. Once is never enough!

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Focus includes planning for writing by grouping related ideas and identifying the purpose for writing and refers to how clearly a central idea (topic), theme, or unifying point is presented and maintained.Organization refers to the structure or plan of development and the relationship of one point to another to provide a logical progression of ideas. It also refers to the use of transitional devices to signal both the relationship of the supporting ideas to the central idea, theme, or unifying point and the connections between and among sentences.Support refers to the quality of details used to explain, clarify, or define. The quality of the support depends on word choice, specificity, depth, relevance, and thoroughness. It may be developed through the use of additional details, anecdotes, illustrations, and examples that further clarify meaning.Conventions refer to punctuation, capitalization, spelling, usage, and sentence structure/variety.

So What Is The Accountability For Writing Instruction?

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Bare - simple listing or events or reason"I like to go to school because it is fun.“Extension - information that begins to clarify meaning"I like to go to school because it is fun when the teacher allows us to do experiments with frogs.“Layered - use of a series of informational statements that collectively help to clarify meaning. “I like to go to school because it is fun when the teacher allows us to do experiments with frogs. We learned what kinds of foods frogs like to eat by offering them flies, worms, and seeds. We observed the frogs during the morning and afternoon to determine when they were more active. We also compared frogs to other amphibians to see what characteristics they share.”Elaboration – use of additional details, anecdotes, illustrations, and examples that further clarify meaning. Information that answers the question, " What do you mean?”“I like to go to school because it is fun when the teacher allows us to do experiments with frogs instead of just reading about frogs in books. Experiments allow us to have the fun of discovering for ourselves how far and fast frogs can jump and what kinds of food frogs like to eat.”The elaboration could also provide a detailed description of the experiments.

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FOCUS

may only minimally 

address topic, may lose 

focus with  unrelated 

ideas

is slightly related to 

topic, may offer  little 

relevant information

is generally focused 

but may include 

extraneous or loosely 

related information

is generally focused 

but may include 

extraneous or loosely 

related information

writing is focused writing is focused on the 

topic

ORGANIZATION

does not exhibit 

organizational pattern; 

few, if any transitional 

devices

little evidence of 

organizational pattern  

or use of transitional 

devices

organizational pattern 

is attempted, although 

transitional device are 

used, lapses may occur 

but  may lack sense of 

completeness of 

wholeness 

organizational pattern 

is evident, although 

some lapses may 

occur,

demonstrates a sense 

of completeness or 

wholeness.

has organizational 

pattern; although 

lapse may occur; 

demonstrates a sense 

of completeness or 

wholeness

organizational pattern 

provides for a logical 

progression of ideas; 

(beginning, middle, 

conclusion & transitional 

devices);  sense of 

completeness

SUPPORT

little, if any  supporting 

ideas; may consist of lists 

or clichés 

limited  or immature 

word choice 

development of 

support may be 

inadequate or illogical 

with few supporting 

ideas or examples

word choice is limited 

or immature

some support is 

included;

development lacks 

specifics and details;  

adequate word choice 

but limited, 

predictable and 

sometimes vague

some supporting ideas 

may contain specific 

and details although 

development  is 

uneven; adequate 

word choice

adequate 

development of 

supporting ideas or 

examples; word choice 

is adequate but may 

lack precision

ample development of 

supporting ideas , mature 

command of language;  

precision in word choice

CONVENTIONS

frequent errors in 

sentence structure and 

usage may impede 

communication, common 

words may be misspelled,

simple sentence 

construction

errors may occur in 

basic conventions 

including simple 

sentence structure, 

mechanics, usage, and 

punctuation; common 

words are spelled 

correctly

attempts to use 

variation in sentence 

structure, although 

many are simple; 

conventions  and 

usage are generally 

followed.

commonly used words 

are spelled correctly

attempt to use 

variation in sentence 

structure, though 

many are simple; 

conventions are 

generally followed 

(mechanics, usage, 

punctuation, spelling)

various sentence 

structures used; 

sentences complete, 

few fragments may 

occur; conventions 

generally followed 

(mechanics, usage, 

punctuation, spelling)

various sentence structure; 

sentences complete (except 

for purposeful fragments);

subject/verb agreement & 

noun/verb forms are 

generally correct.

Adequate Word

Choice

Just The Right

Shade Of Meaning

Fourth Grade RubricFourth Grade Rubric

Examination of Criteria by Score PointExamination of Criteria by Score Point

Every idea developed, extended, elaborated

U: Unscorable. The writing is unscorable because it is unrelated to the assigned topic or cannot be read.•U-A Blank Response•U-B Off-topic•U-C Illegible, Incomprehensible or Insufficient•U-D Foreign Language

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FOCUS

may only minimally 

address topic, may lose 

focus with  unrelated 

ideas

is slightly related to 

topic, may offer  little 

relevant information

is generally focused 

but may include 

extraneous or loosely 

related information

is generally focused 

but may include 

extraneous or loosely 

related information

writing is focused writing is focused on the 

topic

ORGANIZATION

does not exhibit 

organizational pattern; 

few, if any transitional 

devices

little evidence of 

organizational pattern  

or use of transitional 

devices

organizational pattern 

is attempted, although 

transitional device are 

used, lapses may occur 

but  may lack sense of 

completeness of 

wholeness 

organizational pattern 

is evident, although 

some lapses may 

occur,

demonstrates a sense 

of completeness or 

wholeness.

has organizational 

pattern; although 

lapse may occur; 

demonstrates a sense 

of completeness or 

wholeness

organizational pattern 

provides for a logical 

progression of ideas; 

(beginning, middle, 

conclusion & transitional 

devices);  sense of 

completeness

SUPPORT

little, if any  supporting 

ideas; may consist of lists 

or clichés 

limited  or immature 

word choice 

development of 

support may be 

inadequate or illogical 

with few supporting 

ideas or examples

word choice is limited 

or immature

some support is 

included;

development lacks 

specifics and details;  

adequate word choice 

but limited, 

predictable and 

sometimes vague

some supporting ideas 

may contain specific 

and details although 

development  is 

uneven; adequate 

word choice

adequate 

development of 

supporting ideas or 

examples; word choice 

is adequate but may 

lack precision

ample development of 

supporting ideas , mature 

command of language;  

precision in word choice

CONVENTIONS

frequent errors in 

sentence structure and 

usage may impede 

communication, common 

words may be misspelled,

simple sentence 

construction

errors may occur in 

basic conventions 

including simple 

sentence structure, 

mechanics, usage, and 

punctuation; common 

words are spelled 

correctly

attempts to use 

variation in sentence 

structure, although 

many are simple; 

conventions  and 

usage are generally 

followed.

commonly used words 

are spelled correctly

attempt to use 

variation in sentence 

structure, though 

many are simple; 

conventions are 

generally followed 

(mechanics, usage, 

punctuation, spelling)

various sentence 

structures used; 

sentences complete, 

few fragments may 

occur; conventions 

generally followed 

(mechanics, usage, 

punctuation, spelling)

various sentence structure; 

sentences complete (except 

for purposeful fragments);

subject/verb agreement & 

noun/verb forms are 

generally correct.

Fourth Grade RubricFourth Grade Rubric

Examination of Criteria by Score PointExamination of Criteria by Score Point

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INTERPRETATIONS IN A NUTSHELL

The words in the prompt may be broadly defined.It may be fact or fantasy.The student may present information as “factual” even if the information is not based on fact.The story may include or be limited to the time period before, during, or after the event(s).Singular words in prompt changed to plural in response? ABSOLUTELY SCORABLE!“Atypical” or non-traditional ideas? SCORABLE if related to the topic

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ALLOWABLE INTERPRETATIONS CONTINUED. . .

The writer may cite one or more things that happened during the event(s) suggested by the prompt. The writer may write about all the things that happened or may write about one aspect.The writer may tell about the + or –

aspects

of the time/event, the consequences of the time/event, and /or reactions to the time/event.Description and exposition “work”

if it is part

of a story line.The response can be in various formats including a letter.The main character in the story may be the student or someone else.

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Scorer Bias-

the scorer’s perception of a student’s response.

1.Reaction to writing criteria for other assessments.

2.Appearance of response3. Knowledge of topic.4. Reaction to style.5. Reaction to content.6.Transference in scoring-Is your scoring prejudices by previous papers you have scored.7. Well-being of scorer.

Great job

as always!

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Comments from the Field about FCAT Writing:

They score too easy.They score easier than they used to.Just copy the prompt to get a 1.I don’t know what they want!They grab people off the streets to score the papers!

Just Kidding!

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When bankers trainto identify counterfeitmoney, they studyauthentic bills. For it isknowing intimately thegenuine, that one is ableto identify the false.

Deanna Eaton

The truth about FCAT Writing:

A committee of Florida educators meet to establish the rangefinders for each prompt using the field tested papers

BUTnot before studying the calibration set from the first year of Florida Writes!

The scorers then study AUTHENTIC rangefinders so that they can easily identify the characteristics of each score point.

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SO LET

S TRAIN WITH THE CALIBRATION SETState Prompt: EXPOSITORY

Your class will have a classroom pet.

Think about one pet that would be a good pet for your classroom.

Write to explain why you think this pet would be good for your classroom.

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Qualifying Set: Expository

# My Score

ConsensusScore

Comments

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PREVIOUS EXPOSITORY PROMPTS _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Now write about something that is special and explain why it is special to you.Write, to explain to the reader, why this one thing is important to you.Explain to your reader why you like to do this special thing.Write to explain why this one place is your favorite.

Write to tell about something you do outside for fun and explain what makes it fun.Write to tell about the favorite thing you like to do after school and explain why you like to do it.Write to explain why you enjoy playing a particular game.

Write to explain why that one time of year is your favorite. Write to explain why a certain day is your favorite day of the week.

Write to tell about the person you like and explain why you like this person.

Write to explain why you choose a particular person to be the teacher for a day.Write to explain why this person is special to you.

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“State of the Your Class”

You as a teacher need to beaware of the needs of your students to decide what your future minilessons will be!

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Teacher Responsibility Student Responsibility

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CREATING A WRITER'S TOOLBOX

Students need to be able to bring the tools of revision to their writing the way a carpenter comes equipped for the job with a toolbox full of tools.

Georgia Heard, The Revision ToolboxMINI-LESSONS

Our Writer’s Toolbox

ConventionsSupport

Organization 

Focus

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Collecting a handful of mentor books and keeping them as a resource for students, is really like gathering a multitude of teachers in the room rather than just having one teacher.

Georgia Heard

The

Power of Mentor Text…

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Cover -to-Cover

•What do I see?•What feelings do I notice?•I think that…

•Read the story

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What do I see? What feelings do I notice?

I think that… Words from the story…

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Using Author’s Craft to develop an

Instant Print Rich EnvironmentAll effective writing employs literary devices to create images, even in informational texts.

Teachers should take advantage of the descriptive “Book Language” in all genres and have students collect it to display around the room. Then there is a natural transfer into their writing.

Students should constantly be looking for:Vivid VerbsTransitional DevicesPrecise Word Choice/AdjectivesAlliterationPersonificationAnadiplosis

Descriptive PhrasesSimiles/MetaphorsWords That Show

MovementOnomatopoeiaIdioms

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Animal WordsCharacter Traits

Descriptions

Comparisons

Verbs

ContractionsWould you change this box?

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+ (Alex) - (Mom)Save it from Stinky ‘s dog

LurchWon’t happen

Cute & quiet Tarantula is quiet, too & uglier than Godzilla

Never have to see it; in cage next to trophy

Will grow 6 feet long; not enough space in your whole room

Takes 15 years to grow; Will be married

No girl will marry you

Lonely; Need a friend NOW! Can be brother I never had

You have a brother

Brother only burps & poops Are you ready? Remember the class fish

Learned my lesson; Iguanas don’t like spaghetti

Trial basis; How would you care for it?

Feed every day, water, clean cage

2-week trial; have to clean better than your room

Will clean better; pay for lettuce; BEGS

Look on your dresser

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WRITE A LETTER TO EXPLAIN TO YOUR TEACHER WHY SHE/HE SHOULD CHOOSE YOUR CHOICE FOR THE CLASSROOM PET…

I think we should get a hamster as a classroom pet because…

Why?

It is time to generate ideas , plan and draft!

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WRITING FLOATS ON A SEA OF TALK…

Sharing is not only motivating but it helpsstudents develop a sense of audience.

It’s important for students to get lots of practice just talking through narrative or expository pieces.

Listening to other writers is just as important as sharing as students sharing their own.

“Beg, borrow, or steal”

good ideas.

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Strategies to Use: Examples:

What do you want?

People who are on your side

Give your BEST reasons

What you will do if you get it If I get ________, then

I will______________.Tell them why you should have it NOW!

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Grabber -Beginning -Introduce us to your choice for classroom pet.Describe the pet.(sensory details, character traits)

Explain one reason it is special.

Explain another reason it is special. What might having this pet in the classroom mean to you?

Ending – What’s the most important thing I want my reader to know about this pet?

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YOUR TURN TO PLAN…

Crystallize your ideas

Complete the plan using a planner for your essay.

Remember to use words & phrases only.

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Word Bankfor pets

Attributes of good pets

Feeling words

Melissa Forney

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EVERYONE NEEDS TO BE HEARD! EVEN BEFORE THEY WRITE!

P

= PraiseI like the way you…I heard you say…

Q

= QuestionWhat did you mean when you said…What happened before…or after…

S

= SuggestShow me how you felt when…Maybe move this part/ sentence to…

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ComplimentsSome Positive Things to Do or Say

•Your reader will like the way you have…•Your reader can picture…•This piece is easy for me to read.•How did you learn that?•I do the same thing…•Tell me again what happened.  Did you put it downthat way?•What else do you want your reader to know?•How did you select the topic?•I see you have included some words from the wordwalls.

•I see you used…

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Writing Elements

Writing Elements Evident in Student

Writing

Instructional Implications

(Needs)

Grade Level Resources/ Strategies

Focus Ideas

Organization Transitions Beginning Middle End

Support Ideas Voice Word choice Elaboration Dialogue Comparisons Incidents

Conventions Sentence Fluency Purposeful Fragments *Conventions

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Our Writer’s Toolbox

ConventionsSupport

Organization 

Focus

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Listen to This: Writing Features to Listen forWhat is the function of the writing?

What is the organizational structure?

BEGINNINGHook:Introduction:

MIDDLE:Supporting Details:Narrative Example

(incident):Concrete Examples:

LIVELY WRITING Writer talks to you,

engages you:Active voice:Figurative Language:(e.g. alliteration, simile,

personification…)

TRANSITIONSTime TransitionsTransitional Technique

ENDING

Adapted from: Freeman, M.S. (1997) Listen to this: Developing an ear for expository. Gainesville, FL: Maupin House.

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REVISION: THE OVERLOOKED STEP IN THE WRITING PROCESS

Revision is a way of:seeing and re-seeing words training our eyes and ears to what good writing sounds likelearning and practicing strategies that will make a difference in writing

Ultimately, the point of learning about revision is to learn how to help our writing match more accurately what’s in our hearts.

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THE POWER OF CONFERENCING

Conferences are not a part of the writing process, however, they are very much a part of the writer’s workshop.

Some of the most effective conferences occur when a teacher stops to speak with a student to ask “How’s it going?” or “What are you planning to do next?”

A conference is a one-on-one discussion between a student and a teacher, or between peers.

The purpose of a conference is to help the student regroup, solve writing problems, plan for the next step, and sometimes, see his or her writing from a slightly different perspective.

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CONFERRING WITH STUDENT WRITERSThis list will help you in thinking about what to do and say in your teacher-student conferences.

Begin a conference with an open-ended question that invites a student to talk about his writing work (“What are you doing as a writer today?”)

Look at the student’s writing to help you gain a deeper understanding of what the student is doing.

While speaking with the student, assess how well the student’s writing is going.

Based on the conference, make a decision about what to teach the student to help him/her be a better writer.

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CONFERENCE CHARTStudent Name Date Comments

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CONFERRING WITH STUDENT WRITERSDuring some conferences, you may talk with a student about a

technique he/she is already using, but sometimes you’ll decide to teach a new strategy or technique.

Give the student some feedback about how well he’s doing with his writing.

Teach by giving an explanation, looking at a piece of literaturetogether, or referring back to a mini-lesson.

During the conference, you may have the student talk through what he/she is going to do in his writing after the conference.

End the conference by letting the student know you expect him to follow through with what you’ve just talked about.

Write notes on what you taught in the conference and what you learned about the student.

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When bankers trainto identify counterfeitmoney, they studyauthentic bills. For it isknowing intimately thegenuine, that one is ableto identify the false.

Deanna Eaton

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SENTENCE STALKING AND IMITATINGTarantula are quiet too, but I wouldn’t want one as a pet. By the way, that iguana is uglier than Godzilla.Snakes are quiet too, but I wouldn’t want one as a class pet. By the way, that hamster is scruffier than a dirty dust mop.___ are ___ too, but I wouldn’t want one as a _____. By the way, that ___ is ____ than ______ .

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EXPOSITORY WRITING THE OPENING PARAGRAPH SERVES TWO PURPOSES:

Hooks: the first line of a piece has to lure an audience to read on.

QuestionExclamationNoise (onomatopoeia)Description of SettingTalk directly to the readerRiddleIdiom AnecdoteDefinitionQuotationExaggeration (hyperbole) Alliterative phrase

Beginning paragraph has to reveal the topic. It may:

Give background information Tell how the author feels about the subjectTell why the topic is of importance to the reader.

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BEGINNINGS VS. HOOKSA Beginning should be short and to the point.It should let the reader know your purpose

for writing.Mr. Suarez is the world’s coolest math

teacher, hands down.A Hook is an opening sentence that immediately captures the reader’s attention.He’s tall, he does magic tricks with numbers.

He is the best thing that ever happened at Sawgrass Elementary.

Mr. Suarez is the world’s

coolest math teacher, hands down.

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ENDINGS –

THE FINAL WORDAn ending is a powerful thing –

it leaves the

reader with the last thought of the piece. So often, children forget how powerful these words can be.

It shows the reader that the author has control of his writing!

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ENDINGS THAT WORK!1.

Circle back to the hook.-

repeat the form of the hook.

2.

Make a comparison.3.

Use a universal word:, . . . .

all , everyone, every day, each of us, everything, every time, everybody, always, the world

4.

The last step or directions in process.5.

Invite the reader to learn more: reference where.6.

Offer the reader advice.7.

Make a prediction.

Reading takes you places you’d never go ……. Reading brings you friends you’d never know!

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The difference between the almost-right word and the right word is the difference between the lightning bug and the lightning.

Mark Twain

Words Of Wisdom From A Master. . .

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larvae, aphids, 

isomorphism,

photosynthesis 

polygon, peninsula, 

cholesterol

Low frequency

Limited to specific domains (Content area studies)

Tier Three 

coincidence,  absurd, fortunate, 

maintain,  performed

Have powerful  

impact on verbal 

functional and 

comprehension

Found across a 

variety of domains

Tier Two

baby, clock, happy, 

jump, hop, slide, girl, 

boy, dog

Basic WordsRarely require   

instructional attention

Tier One

Word Choice: Teaching Tiered Words

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WORD CHOICE: TIER WORDS

Go back to your planner and put Tier 2 Words into your Word Bank that are appropriate for your topic

Are these words you could see your students using?

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SENSORY DETAILSSound Sight Taste Touch Smell

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THE SOUND OF GOOD WRITING

Writing like speaking, has voice in the sense that both are language going out from a person. . . In written voice punctuation, sentence structure and word selection do most of the work to give the writing its sound, its voice. And the sound of that voice that goes out, whether it’s crafted through air waves or with ink, is a learned

thing.

Katie Wood Ray Wondrous Words

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KIND OF EMOTION OR REACTION IN THE READER THROUGH VOICE…

Voice is accomplished through precise word choice…choice that is identified with the writer, the situation, and the purpose

Lets the reader know the mood, the tone

Lets the reader be “in the moment” with the writer

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A MINILESSON: SHOW DON’T TELLGuided Writing

LessonWalk into your classroom

and yell, “I can’t believe it! This isn’t fair!”

Wave

your arms about and pace across the room with your eyes squinted.

In a normal voice ask students how they thought you were feeling when you came into the room? How did they know?

Record their responses on a chart

What did you see?

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SHOW DON’T TELLMr. R marched into the classroom with a stormy look on his face. He waved his arms and shouted, “You won’t believe what just happened!”

Someone

had just run into his car in the parking lot.

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SHOW NOT TELL:

Telling SentenceIt was an unusual cat.

Showing SentenceWith yellow eyes glowing red, long, black fur that stood on end, a mouth full of sharp pointed teeth that emitted a yowl like a tiger, I knew that the small animal before me was no ordinary cat.

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Shared Writing

ANOTHER WAY TO SHOW DON’T TELLMy room is very messy.What makes the room a

mess?•Dirty socks•Yesterday’s clothes•Unmade bed•Snickers wrappers under the covers and on the floor•Dried-up PBJ crust stuck to the blanket•Crumbled-up homework assignments all over the room

Dirty socks are hanging over the sides of the trash can. Yesterday’s clothes are in a trail from the door to the unmade bed. Snicker wrappers peak out of the covers and on the floor. A PBJ crust is stuck onto the blanket and invites ants to march around and munch. Lost homework papers crunch under my feet as I walk across the floor…

Example of Guided Writing

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YOUR TURN –

TRY IT INDEPENDENTLY…

Telling SentenceI know how to take care of it.

Show me!

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Show, Not Tell is the precursor to Magnified Moments…

Magnified Moment is a complete series of Show, Not Tells…

Sensory wordsDescriptive and Figurative Language

Elaborating ideas:

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MAGNIFIED MOMENTSFirst Sentence:

When I was 7 years old, I got my first bike.

Magnified Moment:When I was 7 years old, I got my first bike. I had been begging for it for at least two years. All I heard was wait until your birthday. Wait! Wait! Wait! I didn’t think that day would ever come. Finally my day arrived and so did my Ready Rider!

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YOUR TURN!Each table will select a 1,2,3, or 4 paper to analyze and decide the instructional implications!Come to consensus at your table about what the paper needs to improve. Note the order of where you would begin as a teacher or coach.Plan a model lesson for the most deficient area.Present your lesson to the group.

We can’t wait to see it!

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REFERENCES:Anderson, Jeff. 2005. Mechanically Inclined. Portland, Maine:

Stenhouse Publishers.

Calkins, Lucy. 2005. Units of Study for Intermediate Writing: A Yearlong Curriculum. Portsmouth, NH: Heinemann.

Freeman, Marcia S. 1999. Building a Writing Community . Gainesville, FL: Maupin House

Forney, Melissa. 2008. Writing Superstars.

Miami-Dade County Public Schools. Florida WritingAssessment: A Practice Book for Grades K-5.

Proven Instructional Practices for High-Quality Writing.

Rog, Lori J. 2007. Marvelous Minilessons for Teaching Beginning Writing, K-3. Newark, DE: International Reading Association.

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Making the Grade with the Next Generation Sunshine State Standards! FCAT 2.0 Grades 3-5

Benchmark New Content Focus Instructional Support Materials

Category 1: Vocabulary LA.3-5.1.6.3 Context Clues Context Clues Context Clue Chart

LA.3-5.1.6.7 Base Words and Affixes Base Words Prefixes/Suffixes Roots (5th grade only)

Common Morpheme Chart Spectrum of a Word

LA.3-5.1.6.8 Antonyms, Synonyms, Homographs, Homophones

Antonyms Synonyms

Concept of definition map Word Arrays,

LA.3-5.1.6.9 Multiple Meanings in Context *Includes LA.3-5.1.6.6 Shades of Meaning

Multiple Meanings Analyze Words in Text Shades of meaning

Word Arrays, Tiered Vocabulary

Category 2: Reading Application LA.3-5.1.7.2 Identify Author’s Purpose in text and how Author’s Perspective influences text

Author’s Purpose Author’s Perspective

Author’s Purpose Chart

LA.3-5.1.7.3 Main Idea, Relevant Supporting Details, Strongly Implied Message, Inference, Chronological Order

Main idea/message (stated or implied) Relevant Details Chronological order *Conclusions/Inferences

Two Column Notes: Main Idea/ Details Conclusion/Support Main Idea Table, Gist, Summary Pyramid, Time Line, Sequence Chain Power Notes QAR’s

LA.3-5.1.7.4 Cause and Effect Relationships Cause and Effect Two Column Notes, Cause/Effect Chain

LA.3-5.1.7.5 Identify text structure and explain how it impacts meaning in text.

Text Structure Organizational Patterns (e.g., compare/contrast, cause/effect, sequence of events)

Informational Text Structure Chart One Sentence Summarizers Pattern Puzzles

LA.3-5 1.7.6 The student will identify themes or topics across a variety of fiction or nonfiction

*Theme *Topics (Grade 3 within one text; only, Grades 4-5 within/ across texts)

Theme Definition, Common Themes in Literature

LA.3-5.1.7.7 Compare/Contrast Elements, Topics, Settings, Characters, Problems in Single or Multiple Texts

Compare (similarities: Grade 3 within one text; Grades 4-5 within/across texts)

Contrast (differences: Grade 3 within one text; Grades 4-5 within/across texts)

Venn Diagram, One Sentence Summarizers, Content Frame

Category 3:Literary Analysis/ Fiction/Nonfiction LA.3-5.2.1.2 Elements Of Story Structure-Character, Character Development, Setting, Plot, Problem/Solution

Character Development Character Point Of View Setting Plot Development Problem/Resolution

Story Map, Narrative Arch, Author’s Toolbox for Bringing a Character to Life Somebody/Wanted/But/So Split Open Mind, Turning Point Graphic, Character Chart, Events and Reactions Chart

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LA.3-5.2.1.7 Identify and explain the use of descriptive, idiomatic, and figurative language to describe people, feelings, and objects

*Descriptive Language (e.g. mood, imagery) *Figurative Language (e.g. simile, metaphor, personification)

Mood Words, Tools Authors Use: Literary Devices and Figurative Language,

LA.3-5.2.2.1 Explain and identify the purpose of text features (In Literary Texts)

Text features (e.g., charts , headings, charts , graphs, diagrams, illustrations ,captions, maps, titles, subtitles, keys/legends, stanzas)

Text Feature Chart,

Category 4 : Informational Text/Research Process LA.3-5.6.1.1 Read and organize informational text and text features to perform a task

Locate, Interpret, Organize Information Text Features (e.g., titles, subtitles, headings text boxes, subheadings, charts, graphs, diagrams, illustrations, captions, maps, key/legends)

Texts with ample charts, graphs, pictures, or bullets

LA.5.6.2.2 Determine the Validity and Reliability of information in text

*Determine the Validity and Reliability Of Information (within/across texts)

Conclusion Support -Two Column Notes Texts such as editorials, scientific articles or current events

Curriculum & Instruction Division of Language Arts/Reading, 2010 Adapted from FCAT 2.0 Reading Item Specifications, Grades 3-5, FLDOE 2010

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NGSSS Interim Assessment Test – Form A Item Analysis Grade 3 

# Content Focus  Genre  Question Stem  

MDCPS – Division of Language Arts/Reading, Fall 2010 

 

Vocabulary 5  Context Clues  Literary  The word ____means the water was _____ 8  Context Clues  Literary  Read the sentence, What does the word ___ mean? 13   Context Clues  Informational  What does ____mean in the sentence above? 39  Context Clues  Literary  What does the word ____ mean? 46  Context Clues  Literary  The word _____ means  6  Base Words  Literary  Which word has the SAME base word as ___________ 29  Base Words  Literary  Which word has the SAME base word as ______? 60  Base Words  Literary  Which word from the story has the base word that means _____? 61  Base Words  Literary  Which word has the SAME base word as _____? 17  Affix  Informational  If _(base word) means ______ what does base (word +suffix) mean? 9  Synonyms  Literary  Which word has almost the SAME meaning as _______ 45  Synonyms  Literary  Which word means the SAME as _____? 19  Antonyms  Informational  Which words from the article have the most OPPOSITE meaning? 47  Antonyms  Literary  Which words from the story are the most OPPOSITE in meaning? 27  Multiple Meaning  Literary  Which sentences uses the word ____ in the SAME way as it is used in the sentence 

above? 28  Multiple Meaning  Literary   What does the word ___ mean in the sentence? 40  Multiple Meaning  Literary  Which meaning of the word ____ is the SAME as the one used in the 

sentence above? 53  Multiple Meaning  Informational  What is the definition of ____ as it is used in the sentence? 

Author’s Purpose/Perspective 20  Author’s Purpose  Informational  What is the author’s MAIN purpose for writing this article? 24  Author’s Purpose  Literary  The MAIN purpose of this story is to ___________. 32  Author’s Purpose  Poem  The author PROBABLY wrote ________ to ________. 33  Author’s Purpose  Poem  At the beginning of the poem, the author wants the reader to think that   

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NGSSS Interim Assessment Test – Form A Item Analysis Grade 3 

# Content Focus  Genre  Question Stem  

MDCPS – Division of Language Arts/Reading, Fall 2010 

 

Main Idea, Relevant Supporting Details, Strongly Implied Message, Inference, & Chronological Order 10  Main Idea  Literary  In the story, what is the main idea? 34  Main Idea  Poem  Which is the BEST new title for the poem? 51  Main Idea  Informational  The first part of the article tells readers about ________. 58  Relevant Supporting Details  Literary  In the beginning of the story, the _________. 59  Chronological Order  Literary  What happened BEFORE ________. 

Cause & Effect 7  Cause  Literary  What makes ____decide to ______? 36   Cause  Poem  How is _______ able to ________? 48  Cause   Literary  Why do _____ plan to _______. 54  Effect  Informational  Which sentence tells the effect of_____ on ______? 

Text Structure/Organizational Patterns 1  Text Structure   Literary  How does the author MOSTLY present the information in the story? 12  Text Structure  Informational  How does the author MOSTLY present the information in the article? 37  Text Structure  Literary  How does the author tell the story? 44  Text Structure  Literary  How does the author MOSTLY describe ______? 52  Text Structure  Informational  How does the author MOSTLY present the information in the article? 

Theme/Topic 11  Topic  Informational  Which phrase BEST describes the topic of the article? 26  Topic  Literary  Which topic is covered in the story? 57  Topic  Informational  Which topic is covered in the article? 41  Theme  Literary  What is the theme of the story? 49  Theme  Literary  What is the theme of the story? 

Compare/Contrast 3  Compare  Literary  In the story ____ and ______ are ALIKE because both _______. 14  Compare  Informational  How are ______ and _______ ALIKE? 16  Contrast  Informational  How are _________ DIFFERENT from ________? 42  Contrast  Literary  How is ______ DIFFERENT from ______?  

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NGSSS Interim Assessment Test – Form A Item Analysis Grade 3 

# Content Focus  Genre  Question Stem  

MDCPS – Division of Language Arts/Reading, Fall 2010 

 

Elements of Story Structure 2  Plot Development  Literary  At the beginning of the tale, how does ____ survive _____? 4  Plot Development  Literary  What happens when _____ does ______? 35  Plot Development  Poem  Which line gives the reader a surprise and changes the meaning of the 

poem? 38  Plot Development  Literary  How is _______ able to ______________. 43   Plot Development  Literary  What happens when ____? 25  Character 

Development Literary  How do ______’s feelings change? 

Descriptive, Idiomatic &  Figurative Language 22  Descriptive Language  Poem   The author MOST LIKELY uses the words ____ to show that the ____ is? 23  Descriptive Language  Poem  The author uses the word ____ to help show that ___________. 62  Figurative Language  Literary  Which sentence contains an example of a simile? *64  Figurative Language  Literary  *What is the symbol for ______ in the story? 

TEXT FEATURES in Literary Text 21  Text Features   Poem  What does the picture help readers understand about _____? 30  Text Features   Literary  What is the MAIN purpose for the drawing that is included in the story? 31  Text Features   Literary  Most of the _____ on ____ are arranged ______. 63  Text Features   Literary  The caption for the picture is based on ______. 

TEXT FEATURES in Informational Text 15  Text Features   Informational  Look at the chart, ______ that are MOST different in size are ______. 18  Text Features   Informational  What is the MOST LIKELY reason the author included a chart at the top of 

the article? 50  Text Features   Informational  What does the title of the article _____ tell? 55  Text Features   Informational  The ______ on the FIRST drawing shows _______. 56  Text Features   Informational  What is the purpose of _____ used in the article? *In SSS but NOT TESTED on FCAT  

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NGSSS Interim Assessment Test – Form A Item Analysis Grade 4 

# Content Focus  Genre  Question Stem  

MDCPS – Division of Language Arts/Reading, Fall 2010  

Vocabulary 10   Context Clues  Poem   Read these lines from poem. What does the word ______ mean? 20  Context Clues  Article  Read these sentences from the article.  What does the word ______ mean? 31  Context Clues  Article  Read this sentence from the article. What does the word _______ mean? 42  Context Clues  Literary  Read these sentences from thepassage.  What does the word __________ mean? 62  Context Clues  Poem  Read the line.  What is the meaning of the word _______? 3  Base Words  Literary  Which word has the SAME base word as___________? 57  Base Words  Literary  Read this sentence from the _________.   Which word has the SAME base word as__________? 50  Affix  Literary  Read this sentence from thepassage. If (word___) is ________, what does (word+ affix) mean? 4  Synonyms  Literary  Which word means the SAME as ___________? 11  Antonyms  Poem  Which words from the ________ mean the OPPOSITE of each other? 21   Antonyms  Article  Read this sentence.  Which word is the OPPOSITE of __________? 32  Antonyms  Article  Read this sentence from the article.  Which word means the OPPOSITE of the word ______? 37  Antonyms  Article  Read this sentence from the article.  Which word means nearly the OPPOSITE of the word _____? 12  Multiple Meanings  Poem  Read these lines from the poem. Which sentence uses the word _____ the same way it is used above? 23  Multiple Meanings  Article  Read this sentence from the article. Which sentence uses the word _______ the SAME way it is used in 

the sentence above? 34  Multiple Meanings  Article  Read the sentence from “____________”.  In which sentence does the word _________ have the same 

meaning as in the sentence above? 35  Multiple Meanings  Article  Read the sentence from “____________”.  In which sentence does the word _________ have the same 

meaning as in the sentence above? 43  Multiple Meanings  Literary  Read this sentence from the passage.  Which sentence uses the word _______ the SAME way it is used in 

the sentence above? Author’s Purpose/Perspective 

1  Author’s Purpose  Literary  What is the MAIN purpose of the (genre)?18  Author’s Purpose  Article  Why did the author write the article “___________________”? 40  Author’s Purpose  Literary  Why did the author write “___________________”?  

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NGSSS Interim Assessment Test – Form A Item Analysis Grade 4 

# Content Focus  Genre  Question Stem  

MDCPS – Division of Language Arts/Reading, Fall 2010  

 

Main Idea, Relevant Supporting Details, Implied Message, Inferences, Chronological Order 19  Main Idea  Article  Which sentence BEST tells what the article is about? 29  Main Idea  Article  The title “____________” gives the reader a clue that the _______ in this article _________. 46  Main Idea  Article  Which statement describes why __________ experiences _________________? 38  Details  Article  According to the article “_________”, _________ were once ________to __________. 13  Inference  Poem  Read the lines from the poem. Based on these lines, what might people wonder about______? 9  Chronological Order  Poem  What happens at the beginning of the poem? 

Cause & Effect 2  Cause  Literary  __________agrees to ___________when_________. 30   Cause  Article  Why is the ____________________________? 44   Cause   Article  Why did _____________________________? 45   Cause   Article  The ________________ talked to ____________________because_______________. 

Text Structure/Organizational Patterns 8  Text Structure  Poem  How does the author organize the ideas in the poem? 28  Text Structure  Article  The author MOSTLY organizes the article by _____________. 41  Text Structure  Article  How does the author MAINLY present the information in the ___________? 55  Text Structure  Literary  How did the author MAINLY organize the events in the_____________? 

Theme/Topic 5  Theme  Literary  Which is the BEST theme of the ____________? 14  Theme   Poem  What is the theme of the poem? 25  Topic  Article  Which topic is covered in the ___________? 39  Topic  Articles  Which topic is covered in BOTH ____________? 47  Topic  Literary  Which topic is covered in the _____________? 

Compare/Contrast 15  Compare  Poem  In the poem how are _________________ALIKE? 16  Compare (characters)  Poem  The ____________and _______________ are BOTH _____________. 26  Compare  Article  How are __________ and __________ ALIKE? 6  Contrast  Literary  How does _____________change at the end of the ___________? 24  Contrast   Article  Which sentence describes the DIFFERENCES between ___________ and _____________? 

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NGSSS Interim Assessment Test – Form A Item Analysis Grade 4 

# Content Focus  Genre  Question Stem  

MDCPS – Division of Language Arts/Reading, Fall 2010  

 

Elements of Story Structure 7  Character Point of View  Literary  ___________’s actions show that she________________. 49  Problem/Resolution  Literary  What is one conflict in the _________________? 53  Character Development  Literary  How does ___________feel towards ____________ at the end of the passage? 58  Character Point of View  Literary  Which sentence from the story shows that (how the character feels)? 59  Character Development  Literary  Read the sentence from the ______.  The words ___________ tell the reader that __________. 

Descriptive, Idiomatic &  Figurative Language 51  Figurative Language  Literary  Read the sentence. The sentence is an example of _____________________.*52  Figurative Language  Literary  *What does the title MOSTLY symbolize? 56  Figurative Language  Literary  The author uses the words “________________”  in the story title to ________________. 61  Figurative Language  Poem  Which element of poetry does the author use in mentioning_______________? 63  Figurative Language  Poem  Read the line. Which element of poetry does the speaker use in the line? 

TEXT FEATURES in Literary Text 17  Text Features  Poem  Which stanza from the poem would provide the BEST caption for____________? 

48  Text Features   Literary  What information does the drawing provide? 54  Text Features   Literary  Which sentence from the ___________ would provide the BEST caption for the picture? 60  Text Features  Literary  What information does the caption below the picture provide? 64  Text Features   Poem  What does the drawing show the reader?   TEXT FEATURES in Informational Text   22  Locate/Organize/Interpret    Article  In the ___________________, what is ________________ doing to _______________? 27  Locate/Organize/Interpret   Article  Based on the caption under ______________, the reader can tell ______________. 33  Locate/Organize/Interpret    Article  Based on the photograph and the article “__________”, a ________ can be best describes as_________. 36  Locate/Organize/Interpret   Article  Based on the photograph and the article “____________”, a ________ is good for__________.  * In SSS but NOT TESTED on FCAT 

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 NGSSS Interim Assessment Test ‐Form A Item Analysis‐Grade5   #  Content Focus  Genre  Question Stem 

Vocabulary 1  Context Clues  Literary  What does the word ________ mean? 2  Context Clues (Synonyms)  Literary  What word means the SAME as ___________? 25  Context Clues  Literary  Read the following sentence from the story. 

The word ________ MOST LIKELY means _____________________. 33  Context Clues  Article  Read the following sentence from the story. 

The word ________ means _____________________. 40  Context Clues  Poem   Read these lines from the poem. 

What does the word ___ mean in the lines above? 59  Greek/Latin Roots  Literary   Which word from the passage is based on the Latin meaning _______? 26  Affixes (Suffix)  Literary  Read the following sentence from the story. 

If _ (base word)_ means______, what does (base word + suffix) mean? 50  Affixes (Prefix)  Literary  Read the sentence. 

What does the Latin prefix __________ mean in the word (prefix+base word)? 51  Affixes (Suffix)  Literary  Read the sentence. 

Which word in the sentence uses a suffix meaning _____ or _____? 10  Synonyms  Article  Which is the BEST meaning of the word __________ as used in the article? 11  Synonyms   Article  Which word is a synonym for _________? 41  Synonyms  Poem   Read these lines from the poem. Which word means almost the SAME as _____? 60  Synonyms   Literary   Read the sentence from the passage. Which word means the same as _______? 52   Multiple Meanings  Literary   Read the sentence. 

Which word uses the word ________ the SAME way it is used in the sentence above? 61  Multiple Meanings  Literary   Read the sentences from the passage. 

Which word uses the word ________ the SAME way it is used in the sentences above? 27  Analyze Words in Text  Literary   Read the following sentence from the passage. What feeling does the word ______ create? 

Author’s Purpose/Perspective 3  Author’s Perspective  Literary  With which statement about the (character ) would the author MOST likely agree? 4  Author’s Purpose  Literary  The author of this passage is trying to persuade readers to _________________. 17  Author's Purpose  Literary/Nonfiction  What is the purpose of this article? 34  Author's Purpose  Article  Why did the author write _______? 43  Author's Purpose  Poem   Why did the poet write ________? 

Main Idea/Detail 25  Main Idea  Poem  Which would be the BEST new title for the poem? 12  Relevant Supporting Details  Article  Based on the information in the article, _________spend(s)  MOST of the time ___________. 13  Relevant Supporting Details  Article  How do _________ catch ________? 18  Relevant Supporting Details  Literary/Nonfiction  Who helped ___________________? 

MDCPS – Division of Language Arts/Reading, Fall 2010   

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 NGSSS Interim Assessment Test ‐Form A Item Analysis‐Grade5   #  Content Focus  Genre  Question Stem 

Cause & Effect 19  Effect  Literary/Nonfiction  What event had the strongest effect on _______? 28  Cause   Literary  Which sentence from the story explains why ________________? 35  Cause  Article  Why must ___ be ____ before _______? 32

 

   Cause   Literary  Why do the _________________________________________? 44  Cause   Poem   Why can _____position ________ on _______? 

Text Structure/Organizational Patterns 5  Text Structure  Literary  How does the author help the reader BETTER understand the events in the passage? 14  Text Structure  Article  How does the author organize the information in the article? 36  Text Structure  Article  The author mostly organizes information by_____________. 45  Text Structure  Poem  The information in the poem is organized by_________. 

Theme/Topic 6  Theme  Literary  What is the BEST lesson that can be learned from the passage? 20  Theme  Literary/ Nonfiction  What is a positive result of _____________ in _______? 29  Theme  Literary   What is a positive result of ______'s choice in the passage? 46  Theme  Poem   What is the MAIN theme of the poem? 62  Theme  Literary   In the passage, what is the MOST important lesson the turtle learns? 

Compare/Contrast 

7  Comparison of Characters  Literary  How are the narrator and the ______ similar? 11  Compare  Article  How are ___________ and ____________ ALIKE? 14  Contrast  Article  How are __________ DIFFERENT from __________? 21  Contrast  Literary/Nonfiction  Based on the article, what is different about _______ in different countries? 30  Contrast  Literary  Unlike ___________, _______ is ___________. 47  Comparison of Characters  Poem  How is the speaker of the poem like _______? 53  Comparison of Characters  Literary  What is the difference between _____ and _____? 

Elements of Story Structure 8  Plot Development  Literary  Which statement BEST tells about the main action of the story? 

30   Resolution  Literary  What happens when _____________ says _________________? 

31   Character Point Of View  Literary  Based on the story, the reader can tell that __________? 

54  Problem  Literary  How does _________ solve his/her problem? 

63  Character Development  Literary  Which sentence from the passage shows that _____ feels _____ for  ____? 

 

MDCPS – Division of Language Arts/Reading, Fall 2010   

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 NGSSS Interim Assessment Test ‐Form A Item Analysis‐Grade5   #  Content Focus  Genre  Question Stem 

Descriptive, Idiomatic &  Figurative Language 

48  Figurative Language  Poem  Why is the speaker of the poem a/an _______? 

56  Descriptive Language  Literary   Which sentence from the passage contains the BEST example of descriptive language? 

57  Figurative Language  Literary   Which sentence from the passage contains an example of a simile? 

58  Descriptive Language  Literary   Which excerpt BEST reinforces the ____  mood at the end of the passage? 

TEXT FEATURES in Literary Text 9  Text Features  Literary  The purpose of the illustration in the passage is to show readers __________. 

23  Text Features  Literary/Nonfiction  The section titled ________ is MOST important to the article because it _______. 

32  Text Features  Literary   The illustration Is important to the passage because it shows _________. 

49  Text  Features   Poem   How is the illustration in the poem MOST helpful to the reader? 

55  Text Features  Literary  The illustration is important to the passage because it shows ___. 

64  Text Features  Literary   The illustration is important to the passage because it shows readers_________________. 

TEXT FEATURE in Informational Text 15  Text Features   Article  What The drawing is important to the article because it _______? 22  Locate, Organize, Interpret  Literary/Nonfiction  Based on the article and graphic organizer, what is the end result of __? 

37  Text Features  Article  The third illustration best shows how ________. 

38  Text Features  Article  The illustration Is important to the article because they show readers _______. Validity & Reliability 

16  Validity & Reliability  Article  Which of these is MOST effective in convincing reader the information in the article can be trusted ___________________. 

24  Validity & Reliability  Literary/Nonfiction  The information in this article could BEST be used for _______. 39  Validity & Reliability  Article  The information in this article would be MOST helpful to someone who is _______.  

 

MDCPS – Division of Language Arts/Reading, Fall 2010   

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