Audience Feedback (Draft Layouts)
Q1) What do you think about the layout on my front cover?
Respondent 1 Respondent 2
It works really well! I also think that the detail is cool.
It's informative and clear to understand. The layout is also very conventional which could appeal to your target audience.
Q2) What do you think about the layout of my contents page?
Respondent 1 Respondent 2
I think that it works nicely. It’s alsoeasily visible.
Again it is also informative and understandable for readers to identify. It is also (again) conventional for a contents page in a music magazine.
Q3) What do you think about the layout on my double page spread?
Respondent 1 Respondent 2
Also nicely visible, not muddled, very mainstream.
Apart from being clear and informative, I like the fact that is very bold and ''in your face'' which is what it should be as you want to attract your demographic audience of 16-30 year old. I like how you have carefully set out where certain elements are going to placed which makes it clear for readers to read. It is also quite sophisticated and classy due its simple design but its effect on the viewers.
Q4) What is your opinion on my pitch?
Respondent 1 Respondent 2
Nothing, just added information to improve on detail and maybe language.
I think it is detailed, informative and well set out. I like how you detailed your specific target audience, its demographics and what appeals to them. I like how you added all the things you are including in the magazine and how you mentioned the use of ''colloquial'' language, as your main target audience are at a young age. It is also appealing to read and very understandable, Overall the pitch is good and it is detailed to points you are making, I'm sure there are things you can add but I think you've pretty much covered the whole basis.
What have I learnt?
• From this research I have learnt that my draft layouts are conventional and will appeal to my target audience.
• I have also learnt that I possibly need to alter the language used and include that into my pitch.
