E-mail writingHow to go about it?
Guillermina GrondonaMaría Noel Pellizzon
E-mail writing
Download of file and student’s production
Teacher correction
Improvementof Student’s version
What do I need?
• A computer with Internet access
• An email address
• Concentration
• The error correction code printed to have at hand to correct your work
Getting startedWhat to do?
1- Go to ETOOLS4ENGLISH
http://etools4english.wikispaces.com/
Accesshttp://www.losrobles.esc.edu.ar/
Click on “Sede Buenos Aires”
Click on “ETOOLS4ENGLISH”
2- Download the file
Save the file as “Smith 6th Workbook e-mail
writing unit 1”
3- Open the file and start working
In my holidays, I did lots
4- Save changes often
5- Count the words you have written
A- Select the text
Count the words you have written
B- Go to “Herramientas/ Tools” / “Contar palabras/ Count words”
Find the mistake and correct it
Read the tips in the bubble and solve the activities.
6- Once you finish, save your work, open your email address and send
it to your teacher as attachmentAttach the file
Summing upWhat to do?
• Download the file from the 6th form e-mail writing section at “ETOOLS4ENGLISH” and save the file as “your last name + file name”• Open the file and start following the instructions• Save changes often • Count the words you have written • Once you finish, save your work, open your email address and send it to your teacher as attachment
The correction phase
Your teacher starts working
MARKING SCHEME
In my holidays, I did lots of things. On January, first, I went to Mar azul because friends of my father invited us. Then I went 15 days to Bariloche. It was very funny I went with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other cousin. It was beautifull. I do rafting too, it was so cool! I like very much Bariloche. In the future I want go there again but in winter, to skiing. Then I went to my weekend building in “San Carlos” country club where I palyed with my friends.After that we went to theatre with my family. Finally, when March started I must to go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t fell like studying but I had no option. Although, I am happy because I see my friends every day and we laugh all time.
In my holidays, I did lots of things. On prep J anuary, first, I went
to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went
15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my
family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin
pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very
much Bariloche wo. In the future I want go wp there again but in
winter, to skiing vf . Then I went to my weekend building ww in “San
Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends. After that we
went to theatre with my family. npn Finally, when March started I
must to wp/vt go to school so we came back to Buenos Aires. I didn´t
fell vf like studying but I had no option. Although ww, I am happy
because I see my friends every day and we laugh all time.
In my holidays, I did lots of things. On pr J anuary, first, I went
to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I
went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with
my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp
cousin pc. I t was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like
very much Bariloche wo. In the future I want wp go there again but in
winter, to skiing vf. Then I went to my weekend building ww in
“San Carlos” country club where I palyed sp with my friends.After
that we went to theatre with my family. Npn Finally, when March
started I must to go wp/vf to school so we came back to Buenos
Aires. I didn´t fell vf like studying but I had no option. Although ww, I
am happy because I see my friends every day and we laugh all
time.
Comment from the teacher
Very nice work on the whole. Please, correct what I ’ve pointed out and resend the fi le to me so that I see the final version. Thanks! Ms. Anne
Improving your versionWhat to do?
• Check email inbox
• Download corrected file to PC
• Save file as “your last name + name of file + 2 (number of version)”
• Start working on the corrections with your correction code at hand
In my holidays, I did lots of things. On pr J anuary, first, I went to Mar azul p because friends of my father pc invited us. Then I went 15 days to Bariloche wo / p I t was very funny p I went with my family and my cousin. Then we went to a wedding of an other sp cousin pc . It was beautifull sp. I do vt rafting too, it was so cool! I like very much Bariloche. wo
In my holidays, I did lots of things. In J anuary, first, I went to Mar Azul because my father’s friends invited us. Then I went to
Bariloche for 15 days. I t was very funny! I went there with my family and my cousin. Then we went to the wedding of an other cousin. It was beautiful. I did rafting too, it was so cool! I like Bariloche very much
Remember to:
• Respect deadlines• Write the subject and message you send in English• Have a second look at your work before sending it