Writing 1IECP

Summer 2013Nikki Mattson

Would you rather…

• Sleep every night in a human-sized nest

• OR

• Sleep every night in an underground tunnel?

Agenda

• “because”

• Editing picture descriptions

“Because”

Race

• Example

Editing Picture Descriptions

• Edit picture descriptions

• Comment on other student writings

HW

• Final draft and Editing Log for picture description