Reasons for changes on storyboard

Some changes were due to our audience feedback

We decided to keep this scene, however, change it a little bit. Instead of the pictures falling, we decided to show a point of view shot of the artist taking the pictures off .. Showing that when it came to ‘the boyfriend’ she would touch the picture, which would reinforce her emotion.

After showing our audience, the feedback that we received made it clear the audience would like this scene to be taken elsewhere within the house and so we decided to show this scene in the living room with the singer picking up the frame. In order to cut from the previous scene we decided to use an effect which is like a peel which fits in when she takes the picture off.

We stuck with the stop motion, as our audience thought this was very effective and a good effect.

We still decided to go into a picture, however, this time while she was working, as the school scene was proving to be difficult.

Again the audience feedback received pointed out the bedroom scene wasn't effective and therefore, we changed it to a point of view shot of her doing some written work.

As the school scene was proving to be difficult for the stop motion because of the lighting issues, we decided to carry on with stop motion, however, change it to a park scene but have the same concept of the main female seeing her boyfriend cheating on her with another girl.

As we was no longer using the school scene, the door idea had to be put aside and therefore, we decided to dip into black before it changes to the next scene. This would allow the audience to know there’s a change of scene.

From our audience feedback, majority said instead of showing a text, show that he is calling and then show a spilt screen showing them talking on the phone as this will have a more effective outcome.

We decided to cut the scene of the artist singing and simply just show her throwing the stuff out the window.

We decided to cut these two scenes out as our target audience suggested it would be more effective to cut to the male walking away from the house once the stuff from the box had been thrown down. This would allow the audience to see more emotion and will show the break up has come to an end as the male is seen to be walking off.