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Walden University
COLLEGE OF EDUCATION
This is to certify that the dissertation by
Ludmila V. Ellis
has been found to be complete and satisfactory in all respects, and that any and all revisions required by the review committee have been made.
Review Committee Dr. Peter Serdyukov, Committee Chairperson, Education Faculty Dr. Mary I. Dereshiwsky, Committee Member, Education Faculty
Dr. Amie A. Beckett, Committee Member, Education Faculty
Chief Academic Officer
Denise DeZolt, Ph.D.
Walden University 2008
ABSTRACT
Writing Instruction and Learning Strategies in a Hybrid EAP Course: A Case Study with College-Bound ESL Students
by
Ludmila Ellis
M.S., SUNY New Paltz, 1998 B.A., Rostov Pedagogical Institute, 1987
Dissertation Submitted in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Degree of
Doctor of Philosophy in Education Walden University
Walden University July 2008
ABSTRACT
This case study addressed the problem of increasing effectiveness of English for
Academic Purposes (EAP) courses by combining in-class and online writing instruction.
The purpose of this case study was to describe the changes in writing skills, evidence of
self-directedness, and the use of learning strategies in a hybrid learning format. The
research was grounded in the social learning theory perspectives of Vygotsky and
Bandura and pedagogically structured according to Scardamalia and Bereiter’s model of
computer-supported learning environments. Writing assignments, weekly self-
evaluations, and responses to biweekly questionnaires and interviews were obtained from
four participants attending evening and Saturday EAP classes. Changes in writing
performance were described based on organization and language use. Weekly and
biweekly questionnaires and interviews were analyzed for evidence of self-directedness
and use of learning strategies. Cross-case and cross-method synthesis triangulated these
data into overarching conclusions that were then discussed with the participants and
colleagues to ensure credibility. It was found that learners who consistently used the Web
site improved the organization and content of their writing, regulated their learning, and
used more strategies online than in class. The results also showed that lack of motivation
can have a negative effect on overall performance. Overall, the research demonstrated
that, for learners who seek increased engagement and higher academic performance, the
hybrid format offers more effective ways to advance writing and prepare for mainstream
programs. This study advances positive social change by informing adult education of
strategies that target new immigrant communities to develop individuals that are better
prepared for work and citizenship, thus benefiting economic prosperity of the country.
Writing Instruction and Learning Strategies in a Hybrid EAP Course: A Case Study with College-Bound ESL Students
by
Ludmila Ellis
M.S., SUNY New Paltz, 1998 B.A., Rostov Pedagogical Institute, 1987
Dissertation Submitted in Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements for the Degree of
Doctor of Philosophy in Education
Walden University July, 2008
3330384
3330384 2008
Copyright 2008 by Ellis, Ludmila All rights reserved
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ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
I am deeply grateful to all the people who have given me practical and emotional
support for the past four years while I was trying to cope with professional, academic,
and health-related challenges. As a PhD student, I had the opportunity to meet many
dedicated professionals whose influence has been truly inspirational.
I had the privilege to complete my doctoral studies under the mentorship of Dr.
Serdyukov, whose guidance helped me grow as a researcher and to whom I owe much of
the success of this project.
I am also indebted to Dr. Dereshiwsky and Dr. Beckett, who guided my research
work as members of my dissertation committee. Their expert advice and attention to all
the aspects of my research ensured the quality of my work.
I thank my friend and colleague Professor Aslanian, who had encouraged me to
start the PhD program at Walden University and provided an expert review of my data
analyses.
I am sincerely grateful to the administration of the English Language Institute at
Westchester Community College, whose involvement as the community partner made it
possible to conduct this study.
I also express my gratitude to the students in my EAP classes, who volunteered to
take part in this project and maintained their commitment to see it completed.
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TABLE OF CONTENTS LIST OF TABLES.................................................................................................................vii LIST OF FIGURES ...............................................................................................................ix CHAPTER 1: INTRODUCTION TO THE STUDY.............................................................1 Present-Day Immigrant Education.........................................................................................2 Factors Affecting Academic Success in Community College Programs...............................5 Current Trends in ESL Writing Instruction ...........................................................................9 Problem Statement .................................................................................................................11 Nature of Study......................................................................................................................12 Research Questions ...............................................................................................................13 Purpose of Study....................................................................................................................13 Conceptual Framework..........................................................................................................14 Social Learning Theory..............................................................................................14 Concept of Self-Efficacy............................................................................................15 Language Learning Strategies....................................................................................17 Concept of Computer-Supported Learning Environment..........................................19
Hybrid Learning.....................................................................................................................20 Definitions of Terms ..............................................................................................................25 Scope and Limitations............................................................................................................26 Significance of Study.............................................................................................................28 Implications for Positive Social Change................................................................................28 Transition Statement ..............................................................................................................30 CHAPTER 2: LITERATURE REVIEW ...............................................................................33 Research on Traditional Writing Instruction .........................................................................34 Characteristics of Technology as Educational Tool ..............................................................40 Research on Web-Based Writing Instruction ........................................................................43 Research on Hybrid Writing Instruction................................................................................50 Comparison of Classroom and Online Writing .....................................................................52 Summary................................................................................................................................53 CHAPTER 3: METHODOLOGY .........................................................................................55 Research Design.....................................................................................................................56 Research Paradigm and Strategy for Investigation....................................................56 Role of the Researcher ...............................................................................................57 Research Questions....................................................................................................59 Context for the Study.............................................................................................................60
Setting and Population ...............................................................................................60 Access to the Participants ..........................................................................................62
Selection Criteria .......................................................................................................64 Sample Size................................................................................................................65 Profiles of the Participants .........................................................................................65 Hybrid Course Design............................................................................................................68
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Data Collection Instruments ..................................................................................................72 Changes in the Writing Skills ....................................................................................72 Intake Questionnaire ..................................................................................................74 Weekly Self-Evaluation Questionnaire......................................................................75 Biweekly Learning Experiences Questionnaire.........................................................75 Online Reading and Writing Skills ............................................................................76 Combining Classroom and Online Experience..........................................................76 Use of Learning Strategies.........................................................................................77 Biweekly In-Person Interview ...................................................................................77 Data Collection Procedures....................................................................................................78 Treatment of the Data ............................................................................................................79 Validity and Reliability..........................................................................................................80 Summary................................................................................................................................82 CHAPTER 4: DESCRIPTION AND ANALYSIS................................................................83 Collection and Treatment of the Data....................................................................................84 Overview of the Hybrid EAP Course ....................................................................................88 First Impressions........................................................................................................88 Hybrid Course Organization ......................................................................................90 Feedback throughout the Course ...............................................................................92 Summary........................................................................................................94 Case Studies ...........................................................................................................................95 Case 1: Yana “The Team Player” ..........................................................................................95 Hybrid Course through the Eyes of the Team-Player ................................................96 Evidence and Discussion of Changes in Yana’s Writing Skills ................................99
Summary of Changes in Yana’s Writing .......................................................103 Evidence and Discussion of Yana’s Self-Directedness in Learning..........................104 Summary of Yana’s Self-Directedness..........................................................109 Evidence and Discussion of Yana’s Use of Learning Strategies ...............................110 Memory strategies..........................................................................................111
Cognitive Strategies .......................................................................................112 Compensation Strategies................................................................................114
Social Strategies.............................................................................................116 Comparison of Yana’s Use of Learning Strategies....................................................118
Summary of Case 1....................................................................................................119 Case 2: Gio “The Outsider” ...................................................................................................120 Hybrid Course through the Eyes of the Outsider.......................................................122 Evidence and Discussion of Changes in Gio’s Writing Skills...................................124 Summary of Changes in Gio’s Writing .........................................................129 Evidence and Discussion of Gio’s Self-Directedness in Learning ............................130 Summary of Gio’s Self-Directedness ............................................................135 Evidence and Discussion of Gio’s Use of Learning Strategies .................................136 Memory Strategies .........................................................................................137 Cognitive Strategies .......................................................................................138 Compensation Strategies................................................................................140
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Social Strategies.............................................................................................142 Comparison of Gio’s Use of Learning Strategies ......................................................143
Summary of Case 2....................................................................................................144 Case 3: Joe “The Leader” ......................................................................................................145
The Hybrid Course through the Eyes of the Leader ..................................................147 Evidence and Discussion of Changes in Joe’s Writing Skills ...................................150
Summary of Changes in Joe’s Writing ..........................................................155 Evidence and Discussion of Joe’s Self-Directedness in Learning.............................157
Summary of Joe’s Self-Directedness .............................................................162 Evidence and Discussion of Joe’s Use of Learning Strategies ..................................163
Memory Strategies .........................................................................................164 Cognitive Strategies .......................................................................................166 Compensation Strategies................................................................................167 Social Strategies.............................................................................................169
Comparison of Joe’s Use of Learning Strategies.......................................................171 Summary of Case 3....................................................................................................172
Case 4: Jang “The Follower” .................................................................................................173 The Hybrid Course through the Eyes of the Follower...............................................174 Evidence and Discussion of Changes in Jang’s Writing Skills .................................178
Summary of Changes in Jang’s Writing ........................................................184 Evidence and Discussion of Jang’s Self-Directedness in Learning...........................186
Summary of Jang’s Self-Directedness ...........................................................191 Evidence and Discussion of Jang’s Use of Learning Strategies ................................193
Memory Strategies .........................................................................................193 Cognitive Strategies .......................................................................................195 Compensation Strategies................................................................................197 Social Strategies.............................................................................................199
Comparison of Jang’s use of learning strategies........................................................201 Summary of Case 4....................................................................................................203
Cross-Case Examination........................................................................................................205 Research Question 1 ..................................................................................................205
Case 1: Yana “The Team Player” ..................................................................208 Case 2: Gio “The Outsider” ...........................................................................209 Case 3: Joe “The Leader” ..............................................................................210 Case 4: Jang “The Follower” .........................................................................210
Research Question 2 ..................................................................................................211 Case 1: Yana “The Team Player” ..................................................................212 Case 2: Gio “The Outsider” ...........................................................................213 Case 3: Joe “The Leader” ..............................................................................214 Case 4: Jang “The Follower” .........................................................................215
Research Question 3 ..................................................................................................216 Case 1: Yana “The Team Player” ..................................................................217 Case 2: Gio “The Outsider” ...........................................................................218 Case 3: Joe “The Leader” ..............................................................................219 Case 4: Jang “The Follower” .........................................................................219
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Results of Cross-Case Examination.......................................................................................220 Evidence of Quality ...............................................................................................................220 Summary................................................................................................................................222
CHAPTER 5: DISCUSSION.................................................................................................224 Interpretations of the Findings ...............................................................................................226
Role of the Conceptual Framework ...........................................................................226 Research Questions................................................................................................................229
Changes in the Writing Skills ....................................................................................229 Evidence of Self-Directedness...................................................................................232 Use of Learning Strategies.........................................................................................233 Summary of Findings.................................................................................................236
Limitations of the Study.........................................................................................................236 Implications for Social Change..............................................................................................239 Recommendations for Actions...............................................................................................241 Recommendations for Further Study.....................................................................................244 Reflections on the Teaching and Research Experiences........................................................247
Teaching Experience..................................................................................................247 Research Experience..................................................................................................252
Conclusion .............................................................................................................................256
REFERENCES ......................................................................................................................258
APPENDICES .......................................................................................................................267 APPENDIX A: Hybrid Course Documents...........................................................................267 APPENDIX B: Data Collection Tools...................................................................................270 APPENDIX C: Participants’ Writing Samples......................................................................281 APPENDIX D: Samples of Participants’ Weekly Self-Evaluations......................................301 APPENDIX E: Letter of Cooperation from a Community Research Partner........................305 CURRICULUM VITAE........................................................................................................306
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LIST OF TABLES
Table 1. Comparison of the Use of Technology in Traditional and Web-based Instruction ..............................................................................................................................41 Table 2. Relation of Data Collection Tools to Research Questions ......................................74 Table 3. Comparison of Yana’s Writing in First and Last Quarters......................................100 Table 4. Changes in Yana’s Writing throughout the Course .................................................103 Table 5. Summary of Yana’s Experiences, Self-Evaluation, and Writing Progress..............108 Table 6. Yana’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Memory Strategies ..........................111 Table 7. Yana’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Cognitive Strategies ........................113 Table 8. Yana’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Compensation Strategies .................114 Table 9. Yana’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Social Strategies ..............................116 Table 10. Comparison of Gio’s Writing in First and Last Quarter........................................125 Table 11. Changes in Gio’s Writing throughout the Course .................................................129 Table 12. Summary of Gio’s Experiences, Self-Evaluation, and Writing Progress ..............134 Table 13. Gio’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Memory Strategies...........................137 Table 14. Gio’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Cognitive Strategies.........................139 Table 15. Gio’s Bi-weekly Evaluations of the Use of Compensation Strategies ..................140 Table 16. Gio’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Social Strategies...............................142 Table 17. Comparison of Joe’s Writing in First and Last Quarters .......................................151 Table 18. Changes in Joe’s Writing throughout the Course ..................................................156 Table 19. Summary of Joe’s Experiences, Self-Evaluation, and Writing Progress...............161 Table 20. Joe’s Bi-weekly Evaluations of the Use of Memory Strategies ............................164 Table 21. Joe’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Cognitive Strategies .........................166 Table 22. Joe’s Bi-weekly Evaluations of the Use of Compensation Strategies ...................168
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Table 23. Joe’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Social Strategies ...............................170 Table 24. Comparison of Jang’s Writing in First and Last Quarters .....................................179 Table 25. Changes in Jang’s Writing throughout the Course ................................................185 Table 26. Summary of Jang’s Experiences, Self-Evaluation, and Writing Progress.............190 Table 27. Jang’s Bi-weekly Evaluations of the Use of Memory Strategies ..........................194 Table 28. Jang’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Cognitive Strategies .......................196 Table 29. Jang’s Bi-weekly Evaluations of the Use of Compensation Strategies .................198 Table 30. Jang’s Bi-Weekly Evaluations of the Use of Social Strategies .............................200 Table 31. Summary of Changes in the Participants’ Writing at the End of the Semester .....206 Table 32. Summary of the Differences in Average Writing Volume and Grades throughout the Semester ........................................................................................................208 Table 33. Summary of Evidence of Self-Directedness Found in the Hybrid Course ............211 Table 34. Comparison of the Use of Individual Strategies in Class and Online ...................217
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LIST OF FIGURES Figure 1. Diagram showing organization of the hybrid EAP course.....................................91 Figure 2. Line graph showing changes in Yana’s weekly self-evaluations during the hybrid course....................................................................................................................107 Figure 3. Bar graph showing changes in Yana’s use of memory strategies in class and online......................................................................................................................................112 Figure 4. Bar graph showing changes in Yana’s use of cognitive strategies in class and online......................................................................................................................................113 Figure 5. Bar graph showing changes in Yana’s use of compensation strategies in class and online...............................................................................................................................115 Figure 6. Bar graph showing changes in Yana’s use of social strategies ..............................117 Figure 7. Bar graph showing differences in Yana’s use of strategies in the hybrid format.....................................................................................................................................118 Figure 8. Line graph showing changes in Gio’s weekly self-evaluations during the hybrid course....................................................................................................................133 Figure 9. Bar graph showing changes in Gio’s use of memory strategies in class and online......................................................................................................................................138 Figure 10. Bar graph showing changes in Gio’s use of cognitive strategies in class and online......................................................................................................................................140 Figure 11. Bar graph showing changes in Gio’s use of compensation strategies in class and online...............................................................................................................................141 Figure 12. Bar graph showing changes in Gio’s use of social strategies in class and online......................................................................................................................................143 Figure 13. Bar graph showing differences in Gio’s use of strategies in the hybrid format.....................................................................................................................................144 Figure 14. Line graph showing changes in Joe’s weekly self-evaluations during the hybrid course....................................................................................................................160 Figure 15. Bar graph showing changes in Joe’s use of memory strategies in class and Online.....................................................................................................................................165 Figure 16. Bar graph showing changes in Joe’s use of cognitive strategies in class and
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online......................................................................................................................................167 Figure 17. Bar graph showing changes in Joe’s use of compensation strategies in class and online...............................................................................................................................169 Figure 18. Bar graph showing changes in Joe’s use of social strategies in class and online......................................................................................................................................171 Figure 19. Bar graph showing differences in Joe’s use of strategies in the hybrid format.....................................................................................................................................172 Figure 20. Line graph showing changes in Jang’s weekly self-evaluations during the hybrid course....................................................................................................................189 Figure 21. Bar graph showing changes in Jang’s use of memory strategies in class and online......................................................................................................................................195 Figure 22. Bar graph showing changes in Jang’s use of cognitive strategies in class and online......................................................................................................................................197 Figure 23. Bar graph showing changes in Jang’s use of compensation strategies in class and online...............................................................................................................................199 Figure 24. Bar graph showing changes in Jang’s use of social strategies in class and online......................................................................................................................................201 Figure 25. Bar graph showing differences in Jang’s use of strategies in the hybrid format.....................................................................................................................................202 Figure 26. Bar graph showing differences in the average writing volume and grades..........207 Figure 27. Bar graph showing comparison of overall use of strategies by the participants ..216 Figure 28. Diagram of conceptual framework.......................................................................227
CHAPTER 1:
INTRODUCTION TO THE STUDY
Implementing a hybrid course design in English as a Second Language (ESL)
writing instruction was called for by three main factors: the analysis of the present-day
state of immigrant education in the US, the instructional practices and needs analysis of
the adult college-bound learners at Westchester Community College, and the review of
the current literature in the area of writing skills development. All three factors indicate
that preparing students for academic study in American colleges is a laborious task whose
success and failure depend on specific resources and methodology. By giving learners a
chance to receive professional training, success of the ESL programs ultimately benefits
both the learners and the nation.
The issue boils down to the difficulties in writing skills development which are
partially due to the students’ lack of time and experiences allowed by the traditional ESL
instruction. This situation can be amended by the use of educational technology,
particularly Web-based instructional tools which offer ample opportunities for
developing these skills through text-based communication. One of the perspective
paradigms in the technology-based instruction is a combination of the traditional
classroom learning with online components (Dziuban, Hartman, & Moskal, 2004).
Therefore, it was the intention of this study to investigate the hybrid or blended format of
course design which would combine in-class and online writing instruction and increase
the amount of time and writing practice within a regular semester time. Specifically, the
study focused on the features which characterize changes in the writing skills acquired in
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this format. Other areas of investigation included learners’ positive and negative
experiences, the evidence of self-efficacy, and the use of learning strategies.
Present-Day Immigrant Education
A growing influx of immigrants into the American society constitutes one of the
most urgent social issues. As a social phenomenon, multiculturalism is not simply a
matter of ethnic diversity but a serious cultural and linguistic challenge for educators. The
complexity of social and educational problems associated with immigration is based on
such common traits as lack of general education and vocational training received in the
home country, low work skills, and low income. This problem can be illustrated by the
statistics revealed by the US Census Bureau (2002) for the year of 2000, which show
that, compared to the native population, foreign-born adults of 25 years old and over fell
behind in high school completion by 20%. Likewise, the average poverty rate was six
percent higher among the immigrant families than among native families. With
immigrants accounting for 10% of the nation’s population in the year 2000 (US Census
Bureau, 2002), these figures present a serious cause for concern. Moreover, the
projections of the US Census Bureau indicate that the Hispanic population alone will
increase more than twice by the year 2050 (US Census Bureau, 2004).
As the immigrant population continues to grow, the need for adult English
language and vocational training will inevitably require more social efforts. Given the
large number of second language learners in the country and the projected rapid growth
of immigration in the nearest future, it is important to search for the optimal educational
solutions in order to maintain the nation’s social and economic sustainability. With this
respect, the issue of accelerated English learning and faster assimilation of immigrants
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into the society is of great importance to successful implementing positive social change
in this country.
At first glance, the decision of adult ESL students to continue education in credit
programs often comes as a result of the need for personal and occupational changes.
However, since education and economy are closely related, there is no doubt that having
a better-trained workforce is of great advantage form the economic point of view.
Statistics shows that low education and work skills cannot provide sufficient income for
the immigrant families; as a result, they increase the number of welfare recipients. Rector
(2006) quotes $89,000 as an average government expense for each immigrant without a
high school diploma. Given that among the poor population 8.7 million were first
generation immigrants, it leaves no doubt that education is in the best economic interests
for the new residents as well as for the country.
Although the challenges of educating immigrants may lie heavily on the country’s
economy, they are greatly outweighed by the long-term social benefits which are
twofold: on the one hand, an educated population can strengthen economic and cultural
assets of local communities (De Baca et al., 2006); on the other, a stronger economy will
raise more capital for developing an educational base. Last but not least, one cannot
underestimate the significance of education for immigrant families. Just as uneducated
immigrant parents are likely to be poor, children in immigrant families are likely to lack
education and live in poverty too. Educating adults will be beneficial for children not
only from the economic perspective but also through parent involvement in their school
and extracurricular activities.
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Education of immigrant adults often begins with the English language instruction.
At present, a number of schools and government institutions offer ESL classes, which are
focused on a variety of skills. However, most of them are designed for the traditional
classroom instruction and cannot accommodate those working adult students who are
pressed for time in reaching their academic and professional goals due to multiple job and
family responsibilities. This situation is exacerbated by the fact that learning is often
slowed down due to low literacy and general education levels of the students. As a result,
many programs, particularly government-funded ones, limit their educational efforts to
providing basic second language literacy instruction to immigrant adults. For instance,
among the most common programs reviewed at the National Symposium on Adult ESL
Research and Practice initial literacy, functional literacy, media literacy, and social
literacy received the most attention (Condelli & Wrigley, 2001).
However, even the above-mentioned respectable forum admitted that few adult
ESL programs were successful. Not surprisingly though, since focusing on a single aspect
of ESL instruction—literacy—does not meet the growing needs of the adult ESL
learners. Additionally, unlike regular adult basic education classes, ESL instruction is
expected to pursue more than providing literacy skills. Specific needs of ESL students
include both oral and written communication skills, as well as information processing
skills applied in a variety of social contexts. Evidently, the complexity of issues involved
in educating immigrant population requires a search for new and more effective
approaches and methodologies that could increase second language acquisition.
Social factor is another significant barrier that prevents successful second
language acquisition. In the past, education was not only the measure of success in the
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new land but also the conduit for acculturation. In contrast, nowadays immigrants are
able “to maintain greater linguistic and cultural ties with their countries of origin, and
thus they may not seek assimilation as it historically been understood” (Curry, 2004, p.
51). Minority cultures tend to be socially cohesive, which is evident in the life of many
ethnic communities around the country. The natural tendency to gravitate toward familiar
language, values, and social interactions limits learners’ opportunities for meaningful use
of English. Leaving the classroom, most students find themselves surrounded by their
families and ethnic communities where the English language is not spoken. As a result,
the new skills and knowledge have little use and support in real life.
Since language is fundamental for the development of new concepts and cognitive
skills, such educationally restricted environment is detrimental not only for the English
acquisition but also for learning the new culture and integrating into the American
society. Often, these problems are accompanied by negative attitude towards learning
English which comes as a result of socially constructed belief about the importance of
education. Brittain (2005) points out that although being part of the familiar environment
is safe and accepting, it creates peer pressure to conform to the standards and values of
the majority of co-natives. This involves views on education and academic achievements.
Thus, in addition to being isolated from meaningful interactions with native speakers of
English, immigrants continue to be influenced by their cultural views on education and
fail to achieve significant level of English proficiency and life standards.
Factors Affecting Academic Success in Community College Programs
It would not be an exaggeration to point out the fact that community colleges with
their low-cost continuing education programs and public-oriented services carry a large
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part of ESL instruction. According to the National Center for Educational Statistics, 9.6%
of student body enrolled in credit classes at two-year colleges in the fall of 2005
consisted of Hispanic, Asian, and other foreign-born minorities (Knapp, Kelly-Reid,
Whitmore, & Miller, 2007). It is necessary to bear in mind that this figure reflects only
the result of transition from skill development classes to degree programs. It is impossible
to estimate the total number of students attending noncredit classes across the country
due to lack of statistical data. However, it has been reported that the annual noncredit
ESL enrollment can vary from a few hundred to a few thousand per college averaging 1.2
million in publicly funded programs nationwide (Chrisman & Crandall, 2007). Only 10-
15% of noncredit enrollees attempt to enter credit programs when they reach sufficient
level of English proficiency (Chrisman & Crandall). Compared with the number of those
students who successfully move on to academic study, noncredit enrollees present a
sizable group. This indicates that noncredit ESL learners require a serious educational
effort.
Trying to tailor to the different needs of the ESL population, community colleges
face a number of challenges. Unlike adult literacy programs, they typically offer ESL
life-skill instruction focused on speaking, listening, reading, and writing in beginning
through advanced levels of proficiency. Although many students progress in the
proficiency level, their actual mastery of the language, particularly written
communication skills and information processing, leaves a reason for concern. Chrisman
and Crandall (2007) point out an alarming fact that low levels present an overwhelming
majority of noncredit enrollees while the proficiency of students who are placed in the
advanced classed is not sufficient either.
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To remedy this situation, the ESL services are often augmented by a few
specialized academic courses such as English for Academic Purposes (EAP), which help
advanced learners in transition from noncredit to credit programs. However, the fact that
the proportion of students who continue education in credit programs is rather small
indicates that there may be a number of issues hindering their learning progress. One of
them is the number of the semesters spent in the noncredit ESL: most students do not
continue attending classes after the first two semesters. Moreover, there is a serious class
time deficit. As Chrisman and Crandall (2007) report, an average person requires 100
hours of instruction to move to the next level of proficiency and up to 1000 hours to learn
basic communication provided that the native language literacy had been acquired earlier.
Therefore, a typical 12-week course that meets three to six hours per week cannot satisfy
the need for faster language acquisition, particularly in those programs that are designed
to develop academic language skills.
Another issue is the difference in academic standards between ESL and credit
courses. Placed in the ESL writing course, students are evaluated by the progress they
make in grammar, style, and general language use. Although their English language
proficiency may be sufficient to proceed to the highest level in the ESL program, it does
not guarantee success when the students are judged by the mainstream standards. As a
result, students fail and have to return to the ESL programs (Valdes, 1992). Thus,
increasing the number of class hours per semester may prove to be an inadequate measure
without raising the course requirements.
Arguably, lack of English literacy is one of the main factors contributing to
academic failure. However, there are a number of other problems that prevent students
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from completing the course or making sufficient improvements and being placed in the
mainstream courses. Socioeconomic and affective factors are among the most common
ones. Song (2006, p. 417) points out that these factors intertwined with internal problems
such as “lack of interest, effort or motivation, insufficient target-language use, and
deficient first-language literacy” lead to failure in the course. These issues are further
compounded by lack of support system for ESL students who have to face the language
barrier along with different academic requirements on their own. Following their cultural
expectations of education and teacher-student relationships, they find it difficult to adjust
to the American academic standards which emphasize constructive learning and student
initiative (Rubenstein, 2006).
From the point of view of instructional design, the traditional classroom
instruction has a number of limitations which negatively affect the academic success of
adult learners who have to attend to numerous personal and professional obligations
besides course requirements. In addition to the insufficient class time, there is no
opportunity for self-management and flexibility in the use of material and acquisition of
knowledge. Students are required to be present in class in order to work on their English
skills. Although student-centered instruction and real-life application of skills are
emphasized in some approaches, the process of language acquisition remains slow due to
the class time boundaries and dependence on the instructor and the textbooks. This issue
made some researchers look for new forms of instruction (e.g., accelerated, intensive,
compressed or short-term) where online technologies could be utilized to enhance and
accelerated learning (Serdyukov & Serdyukova, 2006). Moreover, the traditional design
of the ESL instruction is focused on skills rather than learners and does not take into
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account the most essential principles of adult education learning: self-directedness,
learners’ experiences, the need to learn, and immediate application of knowledge
(Knowles, 1980). Due to the fact that students’ learning experiences are limited to
classroom interactions, it is very difficult to incorporate these aspects into the traditional
instruction.
In addition to a more learner-centered instruction, preparing students for academic
study requires a pedagogy that goes beyond the traditional grammar-oriented activities
and describing personal experiences fit for a regular 3-hour session (Curry, 2004).
Although personal experiences and prior knowledge are undeniably important in using
reading and writing as teaching strategies (Skinner, 1994), they are of little value where
formal language and writing conventions are concerned. Not only these conventions may
be different from those in the students’ native languages (Beckett, Gonzalez, & Schwartz,
2004), they may also be unknown to learners due to insufficient prior education. Thus,
acquiring the use of formal language is not simply a matter of a different content but also
a different social environment which immigrants typically have little exposure to.
Current Trends in ESL Writing Instruction
In more detail, the review of literature is presented in the following chapter.
However, it is necessary to introduce some recent issues and findings which point to the
benefits of using an online component in the traditional instruction. Most of them directly
relate to the challenges of specialized ESL courses in creating the curricula that could
embrace various socio-cultural realia and academic disciplines. According to Curry
(2004), developing academic literacy includes linguistic, content, and cognitive
knowledge. This position is supported by Beckett, Gonzalez, and Schwartz (2004), who
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place content knowledge, conceptual understanding, and critical thinking skills among
the priorities of ESL writing curriculum design. In order to achieve this goal, these
authors propose to merge the EAP course with one of the credit courses taught in college.
This option appears to be promising even though it is difficult to design due to
organizational differences in continuing education and degree programs. As a
department, the ESL writing is viewed as a remedial discipline and is placed outside the
mainstream courses (Blumenthal, 2002). This creates “ghettoization” of ESL students
which contributes to the difficulties in student preparation for academic study since one
cannot become a better writer without expanding conceptual framework and content
knowledge (Melles, Millar, Morton, & Fegan, 2005).
Although the above-mentioned issue is not directly related to the presented study,
it certainly points to the need for exploring other possibilities of improving academic
ESL courses. Among the approaches to expanding learning opportunities for ESL
students, some researchers propose workplace and industry training, cooperative
programs, and community learning (Kinberg & Serdyukov, 2006; Elwell & Bean, 2001).
Adding an online component which offers reading and discussion in the typically
required college disciplines deserves attention as a better alternative to skills-oriented
ESL classes, which do not provide sufficient support in subject areas and writing skills
development. Some possibilities include adding content material to the topics suggested
by the course textbook; internalizing content-specific vocabulary; utilizing hyperlinks
connections (Chen Wang & Sutton, 2002) and negotiation techniques (De la Fuente,
2003); providing guidance and monitoring learning progress (Salomon, Globerson, &
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Guterman, 1989); improving computer skills and research strategies which are an asset
for any college student (Goodfellow, 2004).
The nature of the online learning environment promotes language acquisition
through immersion in subject-related context which stimulates language processing and
engages students in a continuous writing discourse. Among the most important features
of online knowledge construction, Serdyukov and Hill (2004, para. 5) mention “academic
depth, length of postings (volume of written products), expressiveness, collaboration,
self-management, retention, and use of resources.” Undoubtedly, using discipline-
oriented approach requires a close collaboration between college faculty and ESL
instructors (Melles, Millar, Morton, & Fegan, 2005). Online environment makes it
possible to bring content and EAP staff together and promote a professional exchange
that can be greatly beneficial to the students.
Problem Statement
The problem of the study originates from the need to raise effectiveness of the
traditional classroom instruction in providing optimal conditions for writing skills
development. The attempts to find the best way to improve writing skills have resulted in
a number of teaching methods which vary from the traditional ones with emphasis on
conceptual knowledge, coding/decoding skills, and knowledge of specific writing and
grammar conventions, to innovative techniques which view writing as the extension of
speaking and are not concerned with grammatical accuracy, spelling, and punctuation
(Jarvis, 2002). However, neither of them seems to be fast and efficient enough to
adequately prepare learners for the challenges of academic study in a reasonably short
time. These models are designed for traditional learners based on the American
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educational values, which stress learner responsibility and presume that learning
continues outside of classroom.
For adult ESL learners, there are several pitfalls in this design. First of all, many
of them come from cultures with a strong oral tradition. This creates lack of coding and
decoding skills that could be transferred onto the second language. In addition to failing
in reading and writing, there is typically inadequate educational background, which
results in lack of general knowledge and understanding of concepts necessary to create
internal speech and produce it in writing, as well as various learning skills. Embedded in
the problem of writing skills development, there is grammar deficiency which also
complicates learning process. Overall, these issues make writing instruction a strenuous,
time-consuming effort and need constant reinforcement which in-class instruction cannot
provide. Unaccustomed to writing discourse and grammatical system of the language,
learners often require additional resources, support, and a more flexible class schedule.
Failure to achieve affects their motivation and decision to continue education.
Current research on combining traditional and online instruction indicates that a
hybrid course design can be beneficial for the development of writing skills of adult ESL
students (Al-Jarf, 2002; Diamond, 2000). However, success depends on a number of
factors including collaborative knowledge construction (Bender 2003; Serdyukov & Hill,
2003; Milam, 2001); functionality of the software and interface design (Deubel, 2003;
Kitto & Higgins, 2003); and self-directedness of students (Partee, 2002). Most of these
studies investigate effectiveness of computer-mediated communication (CMC) in
educational settings in general. Yet little research has been done concerning hybrid
course design specifically in the area of ESL writing instruction. Specifically, current
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research literature does not explain the changes in writing skills that may occur as a result
of hybrid learning and students’ needs to adjust their learning and self-directive
strategies.
Nature of the Study
This research project was designed as a semester-long case study with multiple
participants. The choice of a qualitative study design was dictated by the goal of the study
to carry out an in-depth investigation of individual learning experiences in a hybrid
course environment. This tradition best allows for conducting an investigation within a
specific context and applying various research strategies (Yin, 2003). Therefore, it was
chosen as best serving the purpose of studying the changes in the participants’ writing
progress, their self-directedness, and the use of learning strategies in an in-depth manner.
Personal interviews, questionnaires, and writing samples of compositions and online
posts were used to collect the data. Necessary adjustments in the instructional design and
procedures are recommended based on the results of the study.
Research Questions
In order to fulfill the purpose of the study, the investigation was seeking answers
to the following research questions: (a) What features characterize changes in the writing
of ESL students in hybrid courses? (b) What evidence of self-directedness is present in
the hybrid program? (c) Which learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, or
social) do students prefer to use more in this type of environment?
Purpose of the Study
The purpose of this study was to investigate individual learning experiences in
hybrid instructional design, which combines classroom and online learning formats. The
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primary goal of the study was to follow the changes in writing skills development and the
overall improvement in composition skills through creating and applying new concepts in
online reading and discussion. The specific nature of the hybrid learning also called for
investigating the growth of self-directedness as a result of offering students the tools for
setting academic goals and performing self-evaluation. Last but not least, the study
compared the use of learning strategies in-class and online. The results of the study
contribute to better understanding of the pedagogical and social factors that contribute to
creating a successful hybrid course, as well as developing new methodological
approaches and instructional means to improve ESL writing skills. The application of the
results of the study in teaching academic ESL courses at community colleges as well as
other schools and environments will hopefully increase learning outcomes.
Conceptual Framework
Social Learning Theory
In order to address the above-mentioned aspects in one study, it is essential to
view writing in its connection with the learner’s conceptual structure, most of which has
been created in a different cultural and linguistic reality and is expressed through
different communication patterns. This requires a theoretical foundation that allows for
approaching writing from social, psychological, and cognitive perspectives. Vygotsky’s
(1962; 1978) social learning theory, particularly its aspect of thought and language
formation, was used as the background for investigating the process of development of
inner speech through acquiring new concepts and its reflection in writing. The main
premise of this theory is that writing requires a highly developed inner speech
representing the person’s thought pattern and level of abstraction. Importantly, according
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to Vygotsky (1962, p. 51), “thought development is determined by language…and by the
socio-cultural experience.” Thus, success in mastering writing in a second language
depends on the amount of linguistic, cultural, and overall learning experience which
students have been exposed to.
Following this premise, the hybrid writing course was designed to provide
opportunities for expanding general knowledge through supplementary reading and
academic modules along with instruction in specific language forms and writing
conventions. The social aspect of Vygotsky’s theory provided an opportunity to view
writing as a collaborative experience of constructing knowledge through continuing
written exchange which required highly developed skills in processing and producing the
language. This was accomplished by using the blog section of the course Web site, where
reading and writing topics were changed weekly in order to maintain constant peer
interaction. As a form of social software, the blog also allowed for proximal
development, which, according to Vygotsky, refers to observing the use of new models
and learning from more experienced peers. Since interaction and thought expression are
important aspects of online learning, Vygotsky’s theory played a foundational role in the
study.
Concept of Self-Efficacy
Designed as a case study, this research project focused on individual learning
experiences in the hybrid course. In order to receive a complete account of positive and
negative factors of the hybrid model, it was necessary to reflect learners’ needs, goals,
and learning skills in the purpose and design of the course. Therefore, in addition to
studying the process of writing skills development, learners’ self-directedness and the use
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of learning strategies were specifically addressed throughout the investigation. Although
these are important factors in any form of education, they become strongly emphasized in
blended learning due to the amount of time allocated for independent work. This aspect
of research was based on Bandura’s (1986) theory of social cognition—namely its
concept of self-efficacy in determining the course of action—and Oxford’s (1990)
Strategy Inventory for Language Learning (SILL).
Bandura (1986) defined self-efficacy as the human ability to determine the course
of actions based on their convictions, values, and perception of the upcoming experience.
Being able to judge their own abilities and to make decisions based on their self-beliefs,
people create programs of “self-development, adaptation, and change at different stages
of life” (Bandura, Caprara, Barbarnelli, Gerbino, & Pastorelli, 2003, p. 769). This
involves not only self-awareness and realization of one’s potential and limitation, but also
the capacity for self-regulation, which refers to willing to act, knowing how to act, and
having skills and resources to act. Bandura identified three main processes involved in
the self-regulatory mechanism: self-monitoring, self-judging, and self-evaluation. Each
process requires an objective look at one’s own performance and critical analysis of the
action, the situation in which the action takes place, and the result of the action.
As a psychological construct, self-efficacy is not an inborn quality; it develops
throughout lifetime and can be affected by such factors as “performance
accomplishments, vicarious experience, verbal persuasion, and psychological states”
(Bandura, 1977, p. 191). Therefore, all mechanisms involved in self-efficacy are products
of learning, whether it is learning from observations or from personal experiences. From
the educational perspective, self-efficacy determines the level of student achievement:
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students who see themselves as high-achievers usually get better results than those who
doubt their abilities (Bandura 1986). This is possible due to the strong connection
between self-efficacy and self-directedness which enables learners to set goals and
estimate the effort and perseverance necessary to perform the task.
Language Learning Strategies
The self-regulatory mechanism implies that learners reflect on their learning
progress and plan their learning activities. According to Oxford (1990), these actions
represent metacognitive strategies—organizing, evaluating, and planning—which allow
learners to exercise control over their learning. Therefore, there is a strong connection
between self-directedness and learning strategies. However, a specific learning
environment may require different practical skills and resources. Thus, in addition to
metacognitive strategies, learners have to resort to strategies that “directly involve the
target language” (Oxford, 1990, p.37) in manipulating the information, processing and
producing new language, making inferences, and interacting. The four groups of
strategies, which were addressed in this study, were borrowed from Oxford’s (1990)
strategy classification system and modified for the given learning format.
1. Cognitive strategies involve learning activities which help internalize new
material through critical thinking skills such as analyzing, summarizing, and
recognizing patterns.
2. Memory strategies allow for the retention of the new material by associating,
reviewing, and using imagery, symbols, and keywords.
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3. Compensation strategies help overcome limitations in understanding the material
by using clues, switching to the native language, and using communication in
order to get help or adjust the message.
4. Social strategies involve direct interaction with peers while pursuing a learning
task and include asking for clarification and correction, cooperating,
communicating, and developing cultural awareness.
Hybrid learning requires a well-developed sense of self-directedness and learning
strategy inventory. Assuming that up to 79% of the study time is spent in the online
environment, these constructs play a decisive role in learners’ academic success. While
the former maintains the vision of the result of the learning task and the motivation to
perform it well, the latter allows for the choice of the tools to accomplish it. One might
argue that these elements apply to face-to-face and hybrid learning alike. However,
studying in the traditional classroom environment, learners are able to see the model of
the performance and receive feedback to their actions immediately; they are required to
follow directions, but they are not responsible for planning their performance. In the
online environment, they function as co-participants of knowledge construction, which
requires self-discipline, time-management skills, and the ability to carry out the task
without the immediate feedback from the instructor. Therefore, it is impossible to make
progress without being in control of one’s own learning and applying the most effective
strategies to approach the assignment. Through its online component, the hybrid learning
format provides opportunities for developing self-directedness and learning strategies by
encouraging learners to become independent and take responsibility for their success.
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Concept of Computer-Supported Learning Environment
Equally important for this study is the place of technology in the acquisition of
writing skills. Since it is impossible to isolate writing from overall language acquisition
and knowledge-building discourse, a modified version of Scardamalia and Bereiter’s
(1994) model of computer-supported intentional learning environment (CSILE) was used
as the framework for the hybrid course design. In this model, the authors emphasize that
learners must be “actively trying to achieve cognitive objectives—as distinct from simply
trying to do well on school tasks and activities” (Scardamalia and Bereiter, para. 4)).
Intentional learning is characterized by utilizing learners’ entire potential, thus leading to
gaining expertise which the authors view as a process rather than an accomplished state.
Both intentional learning and process expertise require the presence of a supportive social
environment; hence, the authors point to the necessity to transform schools into
knowledge-building communities. However, they rightly state that once the initial stage
of adaptation to a new learning situation is over, the progress slows down and individuals
simply follow a routine. A true knowledge-building community should continuously
present new challenges and focus on collective knowledge which comes from
contributions of all members. This is congruent with the idea of social learning which
was implemented in the presented study through the hybrid design allowing for
collaboration and team work in class and online.
The first two components of Scardamalia and Bereiter’s model have a natural fit
with the hybrid course as they require learners’ active involvement in processing and
producing the language which can lead to a higher level of proficiency and writing
expertise. However, since this research project did not involve the entire organization, the
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concept of the knowledge-building community was restricted to the group of students
taking the course. The concept of the hybrid learning format is explained in detail further.
Hybrid Learning
Although the term hybrid (blended) learning or mixed-mode instruction is fairly
new in research literature, this instructional model has been used for a few decades. In
practice, it refers to combining traditional classes with various forms of out-of-class
course delivery (Dziuban, Hartman, & Moskal, 2004). However, it is with the
proliferation of student-centered teaching approach and the online technologies that
hybrid learning was noticed by researchers and classified as a unique educational
phenomenon. Presently, blended learning is known as “a hybrid of traditional face-to-
face and online learning so that instruction occurs both in the classroom and online, and
where the online component becomes a natural extension of traditional classroom
learning” (Rovai & Jordan, 2004, Blended learning section, para. 1). Some researchers
distinguish blended learning from other types of web-enhanced or online instruction by
the proportion of content delivered online. According to Allen, Seaman, and Garrett
(2007), a blended program is one where between 30% and 79% of the program content is
delivered online.
Due to its face-to-face and online characteristics, there is no agreement as to
whether hybrid learning should be viewed as “Web-enhanced classroom instruction or
classroom-enhanced online instruction” (Dziuban, Hartman, & Moskal, 2004, p. 2). Some
researchers reject the very concept of blending applied to instructional format as poorly
conveying what actually takes places from the point of view of pedagogy (Oliver &
Trigwell, 2005). They claim that academic improvements as a result of the hybrid method
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can be explained from the position of the variation theory, according to which “for
learning to occur, variation must be experienced by the learner” (Oliver & Trigwell, p.
22). In other words, it is not the format that makes a difference in students’ learning
progress, but the increase in choice of the learning activities and the novelty of the
experience. Since the hybrid method is still a developing phenomenon in education, it
would be too soon to take sides on this issue. The fact remains that each model—face-to-
face and online—makes a significant addition to the other by providing learning
opportunities which its counterpart cannot offer alone. Specifically, the characteristics of
hybrid learning can be summarized as follows:
1) Convenience and flexibility of delivery
2) Variety of learning experiences
3) Student-centered instruction
4) Reduction of time spent in-class or online when necessary
5) Increased student participation and interaction
6) Increased student learning outcomes
In spite of the great advantages of the hybrid format, it does not come without
challenges. First of all, there is a misconception about the place of blended learning
among academic courses. Some educators erroneously view it as the transitional stage
from the traditional to fully online programs (Allen, Seaman, & Garrett, 2007). This
approach does not allow for a truly creative combination of the face-to-face and online
formats. The second problem involves the school infrastructure since blended learning
requires a technology base and skills in instructional design and online technologies. This
indicates that schools should be prepared to allocate funds and resources to create the
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necessary conditions and implement hybrid courses successfully. It also places new
requirements on the faculty whose responsibilities will include facilitating learning in and
out of class, as well as meeting the challenge of designing their courses in “active
learning environments” (Dziuban, Hartman, & Moskal, 2004, p. 10). Two things are
critical in the hybrid method: the time necessary to design and maintain the course and
understanding of ways to bring the best of the traditional and online models into one.
Both are impossible without commitment from the faculty. Perhaps this is the reason why
hybrid learning is not growing as fast as fully online course offerings. In fact, Allen,
Seaman, and Garrett (2007) report that the number of blended courses decreased slightly
between 2003 and 2005 while online course offerings grew.
An integral part of the hybrid course design is the type of online communication.
Based on the purpose of the instruction and the technical base of the program, the
electronic discourse can take place synchronously or asynchronously (Sotillo, 2000).
Synchronous interaction allows all participants to collaborate simultaneously in real time.
Some examples are live chats and video conferences. Asynchronous interactions occur in
a delayed manner as, for example, in threaded discussions and Web logs. Each has a
specific effect on learning. Although collaboration and teacher facilitation are present in
both types, asynchronous discussions allow for deeper analyses and integration of
material, which is evident in the length of postings and expressiveness of the language
(Serdyukov & Hill, 2004). This can be explained by the principal differences between the
two types of online interaction. Synchronous discussions require fast responses thus
limiting the time “to search for information, to produce extended explanations, to
evaluate information thoroughly, to ask elaborated questions and so on” (Veerman &
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Veldhuis-Diermanse, n.d.). Therefore, asynchronous mode appears to be more suitable
for the purpose of time management and quality of responses.
One of the most challenging aspects of blended learning is embracing the dialectic
nature of computer-mediated learning community which implies a different role
distribution among students and teachers; a different view on learning as phenomenon
situated in a particular time and space; and a different communication style. In order to
successfully combine online and classroom instruction, hybrid learning requires a
pedagogy that is based on co-construction of knowledge and makes learners equal
participants in the process. Thus, the hybrid model, as a partially online model, limits
teacher-control and emphasizes facilitation rather than direct instruction. Finally, like any
online language-based community, hybrid learning requires a specific form of electronic
or computer-mediated communication (CMC), which has evolved as a result of
technological advances. Although CMC has developed its own features, it should not be
confused with a linguistic phenomenon. Defining CMC, one has to refer to a mode of
communication, either synchronous or asynchronous, used specifically in the online
environment. Examples of CMC are discussion forums, chat room, e-mail
correspondence, Web logs (blogs), etc. In more detail, the use of CMC in the ESL field
will be discussed in chapter 2.
The fact that many educational institutions are cautious about introducing hybrid
learning in their programs indicates that more research is needed in order to explore the
possibilities of its use in education. Currently, its situation appears to be in flux even
though research has shown that blending instructional formats has a great potential in
content delivery and student-centered pedagogy. Therefore, the present study was based
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on the assumption that the use of hybrid learning in an EAP course would allow for
improvement in students’ writing skills by enhancing conceptual structure and fluency of
written expression achieved through intensive online reading and communication
activities. The hybrid EAP course was designed to offer six hours of traditional class
instruction and unlimited access to the course Web site www.esl-page.com, which
provided additional resources in reading, writing, and grammar, as well as supplementary
materials in content areas used throughout the course. The asynchronous CMC ensured
learner control of the time and resources necessary to internalize the new information.
The most essential part of the hybrid course design is the choice of the
communication software that can allow for ongoing text-based interaction conducted
asynchronously with maximum learner control. Online self-organizing social systems
(OSOSS) appear to best serve these purposes (Wiley & Edwards, n.d.). One of the forms
of OSOSS, blogs, has gained popularity as the form of social software providing easy
access and interaction. It was chosen as the online communication platform for this study.
The infrastructure of the blog was instrumental in facilitating collaborative online
learning. Each week students were required to complete the reading selection and
participate in the blog discussion at least four times during the week, which included
responses to the discussion questions and comments on peers’ posts. The blogging
technique allowed students to become familiar with the topic and collect ideas for the
weekly writing assignments. A second blog site was used to provide access to peer
editing section, where students were required to post their first drafts of compositions for
group review. Thus, the hybrid design of the course created opportunities for social
learning through continuing online communication.
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Definitions of Terms
Asynchronous interaction or asynchronous discussion: an online discussion that
takes place in a delayed manner; it does not require simulatenious interaction of all
participants.
Blended (hybrid) learning: a type of learning that combines both classroom-based
and online instructional components.
Blog: a type of social software which is used for online reading and discussion.
Blogging: text-based online interaction using the blog space and format.
Computer-mediated communication (CMC): text-based communication via
telecommunication networks which can happen synchronously or asynchronously.
Course Web site: online class component which serves as an extension of the in-
class activities and contains additional grammar and writing resources and home
assignments.
Hybrid course: a course in which class intsruction is complemented by an online
component which provides additional content material, a blog discussion forum, and self-
study resources for students’ independent learning and online interactions with the class.
Learning strategies: specific “techniques that [people] employ to solve
“problems” posed by second language input and output” (Brown, 1994, p. 114) which
include memory, cognitive, compensation, or social activities.
Level of English proficiency: a degree of fluency in producing and processing the
language which is based on a combination of practical language skills and understanding
of grammar.
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Online instruction: instructional format which involves Web-based instructor-
students and students-students interactions and uses online resources and communication.
Self-efficacy: the ability to determine the course of actions based on personal
convictions, values, and perception of the upcoming experience which involves self-
awareness, self-realization, and self-regulation (Bandura, 1986).
Self-directedness: the ability to set and achieve goals based on motivation, self-
management, and critical evaluation of one’s own needs and skills in the learning
progress (Knowles, 1984).
Social software: Web-based software used for communication among people
which is characterized by self-organizing infrastructure and open user access.
Synchronous interaction or synchronous discussion: online discussion that takes
place simulateniously among all participants.
Traditional instruction: teaching method which takes place in class and requires
the presence on both the instructor and the students.
Scope and Limitations
The investigation was limited to the target population of college-bound ESL
students attending EAP course at Westchester Community College. Although the scope
of the study involved this particular setting, the results can be applicable to EAP courses
offered at any post-secondary institution due to similarities in ESL instructional
methodology and academic requirements of the mainstream programs.
Central to this study was the investigation of the development of writing skills,
associated learning strategies, and self-directedness in learning. Reading was included as
supporting factor but was not reflected in the results of the study. The study did not
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pursue the purpose of comparing the whole wide variety of course delivery systems
available at the present time; therefore, a Web site with two blog components for
discussion and first draft demonstration was designed specifically for this study. The
blogs were linked to the Web site from the outside providers www.blogger.com and
www.blog.com.
Other limitations of the study included participants’ cultural inhibitions toward
the use of technology for educational purposes as well as their cultural bias to sharing
thoughts and opinions with a group of peers. Another area where limitations were
expected to occur was prior exposure to academic language and familiarity with the
English grammar.
The participants were selected for this study based on the following criteria:
1. Students had Level 6 or higher of English proficiency based on the Combined
English Language Skills Assessment test (CELSA).
2. Students’ minimal educational background was high school level.
3. Students had at least basic familiarity with computers (elementary keyboarding,
basic Internet searches and navigation skills).
These criteria created the basis for the assumptions of the study regarding the
participants’ skills and general knowledge. It was assumed that Level 6 proficiency
would be sufficient to fulfill communicative and writing requirements of the course. The
vocabulary and reading skills at this level were expected to provide the necessary
foundation for the academic growth. The course assignments were given based on the
assumption that the participants had at least high school education and, therefore, their
general knowledge would allow them to understand the concepts included in the course
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reading, writing, and discussion assignments. Since the participants were not tested for
computer skills, it was assumed from their responses on the intake questionnaire that they
knew how to perform basic operations on the computer. These included keyboarding
skills and the use of the Internet and e-mail.
Significance of the Study
The study continued the current research on writing instruction while focusing on
the improvement of writing skills of the participants through hybrid learning and
positively affecting their overall ESL learning progress. Guided by the lifelong learning
principle, this study emphasized the importance of knowledge construction through CMC
as a tool of self-directed learning. The significance of the study is enhanced by the fact
that it allows for understanding of learners’ experiences in the hybrid learning format and
learning strategies associated with the use of CMC. From the practical perspective, the
study is beneficial to ESL college-bound students and helpful to the faculty in increasing
the efficiency of instruction through technology applications which promote student-
centered learning. The results of the study will hopefully help interested ESL
professionals to address the issues which adult students typically deal with when entering
academic programs. As an innovative approach to teaching and learning, it offers a valid
contribution to the development of the ESL writing and research methodology and
demonstrates a practical application of the underlying theories of social learning and
thought and language formation.
Implications for Positive Social Change
New immigrants to the United States constitute inalienable part of human capital.
Their education, work skills, and general wellbeing are linked to the economic prosperity
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of the nation. Higher levels of education allow individuals to become more self-reliant as
employees and members of society. Better professional skills help them become more
competitive in the job market, maintain higher living standards, and contribute more to
social development. As was discussed earlier, the majority of immigrants find themselves
among the poorest strata. Confined to their ethnic communities and low-paid jobs, they
lack many social, cultural, and economic benefits that education has to offer. However,
for the immigrant population, education begins with acquiring the English language
skills. The faster they master the language, the better their chances are at improving their
education and obtaining professional employment. The hybrid format of learning is
designed to provide opportunities for accelerated language learning and, therefore, faster
transition to academic study. The present research deserves additional attention as it
includes a course which targets the development of academic skills which most ESL
courses do not offer.
Besides the economic aspect, positive social change addresses the issue of equal
rights and opportunities for all members of society. This democratic principle must be
maintained in order for the country to function as a multicultural union. Based on this
principle, it is wrong to regard education as the privilege of the elite; it must be accessible
to any willing member who has the potential and the motivation for self-improvement.
Providing educational opportunities to the minorities is the first step to bridging the social
divide. It is also an important act toward ensuring the country’s future since education is
not only necessary for economic stability of individuals but also for their understanding
of true democracy. Given that the ethnic map of the U.S. will continue to grow as a result
of immigration, social processes involving both economic and political aspects will be
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impossible without educating immigrants. Thus, ESL programs, especially the ones that
lead to academic study, give a tremendous contribution to positive social change.
Transition Statement
The discussion presented in this chapter indicates that the multitude of problems
in educating immigrant adults involves the following spheres:
1. The social problems include cultural cohesiveness; cultural isolation; and beliefs
about the importance of education.
2. The economic problems include low work skills and income among the majority
of immigrants; lack of government funds for adult education; and rapidly
increasing immigrant population requiring welfare and work training.
3. The educational problems include low literacy and general education level among
immigrants; ineffectiveness of government-funded adult literacy programs;
insufficient number of class hours in the ESL programs; and limitations of
traditional classroom instruction.
The first step to resolution of these problems can be made by providing ESL
learners with tools for self-efficacy. This issue suggests the need for more accessible,
flexible, and efficient second language instruction which would enable learners to
continue their academic and professional development. Creating such instruction implies
expanding learning beyond classroom and providing opportunities for meaningful
language use regardless of the community restrictions. From this perspective, the blended
or hybrid method, which allows for a combination of the traditional and online
instruction, deserves close attention due to its capacity to bring ESL instruction to a
higher level. Specifically for college-bound adult ESL students, it offers such important
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aspects as flexibility in scheduling learning and content delivery, time management, and
environment conducive to social learning. However, it remains largely unexplored at
present, and is, therefore, uncommon in the ESL profession. The problem lies in the lack
of research data that could guide practitioners in their efforts to implement the hybrid
method. Combining face-to-face and online formats raises many questions regarding this
type of learning and its compatibility with the traditional ESL writing methodology. The
questions that were raised at the beginning of the study and became central to this
investigation were as follows:
1. Are writing skills which are acquired throught hybrid learning characterized by
specific features?
2. Is there evidence of self-directedness in the hybrid learning format?
3. Do learners use the same learning strategies in both learning environments?
In order to present a full account of the investigation of these aspects of the hybrid
learning model, the rest of the discussion contains the following sections:
Chapter 2, Literature Review, discusses current research in the area of ESL
writing. Since the current ESL methodology has been based on the traditional format of
instruction, this chapter highlights the differences between ESL writing in class and
online. A special section provides an overview of technological tools that are used in both
learning environments. This chapter also presents the most recent studies investigating
the development of writing skills in the hybrid format and specific forms of CMC used to
facilitate learning.
Chapter 3, Methodology, addresses the methodology of the study. It begins with
an overview of research design which includes the explanation of the choice of
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qualitative paradigm and justification of the case study as a research strategy. The role of
the research and the research questions are also given in this section. The target
population, the program, and the method of selection of the participants and their profiles
are described as part of the context of the study. This chapter also presents the data
collections instruments and procedures involved in collecting and treating the data.
Finally, there is a discussion of the strategies that were used to ensure validity and
reliability of the study.
Chapter 4, Description and Analysis, gives a detailed account of data collection
and treatment. It includes an overview of the hybrid EAP course and presents its design
and organization. The major part of this chapter is given to the discussion of the evidence
obtained in response to the research questions. Each case study is presented individually
and in cross-case analysis. The chapter ends with the conclusions drawn from the
discussion of the data and a shor summary of the chapter.
Chapter 5, Discussion, includes interpretations of the findings pertaining to the
research questions and their practical implications. It also addresses limitations of the
conducted case study and gives recommendations for further research. The reflections on
teaching the hybrid course while conducting research complete the discussion of this case
study.
CHAPTER 2:
LITERATURE REVIEW
This research project was called for by the growing need for developing new
teaching methods in the field of ESL writing instruction that could enhance writing skills
acquisition and prepare learners for the challenges of academic study. Because traditional
classroom ESL instruction does not fully satisfy the growing requirements for essential
academic skills, more and more educators resort to technology in order to augment the
traditional methodology. This situation justified the primary purpose of the present study
to investigate the hybrid design of an EAP course and the changes in writing skills of
students in this learning format. In order to identify the current trends in research on ESL
writing within the chosen conceptual framework and understand the principal differences
between traditional and online writing instruction, it was necessary to address the areas
embracing both learning formats in this literature review. Furthermore, it was important
to follow the transition from separating these instructional formats to blending them in
the form of hybrid instruction. Thus, each section of the literature review shows current
views on writing from different pedagogical perspectives and addresses the areas that are
pertinent to both technology and development of writing skills:
1. Research on traditional writing instruction
2. Characteristics of technology as an educational tool
3. Research on Web-based writing instruction
4. Research on hybrid writing instruction
5. The comparison of classroom and online writing
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Research on Traditional Writing Instruction
Teaching ESL writing varies according to the purpose and the overarching
approach of the instruction. Although a large body of research literature points to the
importance of writing in the second language instruction, there is no unanimous approach
to writing as a mode of language acquisition. Cumming (1990, p. 483) suggests that
“composing might function broadly as a psycholinguistic output condition wherein
learners analyze and consolidate second language knowledge that they have
previously…acquired.” Since writing becomes possible upon acquiring vocabulary and
grammar rules that are sufficent for self-expression and requires utilizing all the language
structures known to the learner, it can be viewed as both a means and a product of
language learning. As such, it allows for distinguishing between two different purposes of
writing instruction: writing as a learning process and writing as a demonstration of the
result of learning. The process-oriented approach regards writing as a socio-cognitive
activity and is, therefore, concerned with psychological and cognitive processes that take
place during writing skills acquisition. The product writing approach targets the
acquisition of language forms and uses writing practice as an instructional tool to achieve
the mastery of the language use.
From the psycholinguistic perspective, writing offers an opportunity to analyze
learners’ language skills and cognitive development. In both cases, writing functions as a
productive learning mode (Williams, 2005). It is important to mention that the success in
writing in the second language is often based on the level of writing skills in the first
language. This notion is part of the broader schema theory, which states that a person’s
knowledge base makes it possible “to relate incoming information to already known
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information” (Singhal, 1998, Types of schema section, para. 1). However, as Gagnè
(1965, p. 235) rightly points out, “something must first be learned before it can be
transferred.” Since writing requires highly developed cognitive constructs, this implies
far more than writing mechanics. Teich (1987) argues that even advanced writing skills
do not automatically transfer to situations that involve unfamiliar content.
Writing as a cognitive activity involves generating ideas and internal speech
based on familiarity with various content areas. For ESL students, this signifies the
ability to generalize and apply previously acquired knowledge using the forms and
structures of a second language. According to Singhal (1998, Types of schema section,
para. 3), this process requires “formal schemata [which] cover discourse level items [and]
linguistic or language schemata [which] include the decoding features needed to
recognize words and how they fit together in a sentence.” Therefore, when investigating
the process of composing in English, it is necessary to keep in mind that writing skills do
not always transfer in a mirror-reflection manner; they require formal and language
schemata in both languages. Moreover, in situations that involve specific knowledge, the
transfer requires content schemata and higher-order thinking skills.
Referrring to writing as a critical thinking activity, it is important to mention its
connection with reading. As Heaney (2006) points out, critical thinking skills become
first internalized through reading, and are later reflected in writing. This connection sheds
light on the difficulties with academic writing which requires analysis of the problem and
developing argumentation. If the habit of reading was not formed prior to entering a
college program, writing presents a tremendous challenge. This is especially obvious in
case of adult ESL students who come from low-literacy backgrounds. Another important
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aspect of reading and writing connection is the transfer of one skill onto the other.
Brooks-Harper and Shelton (2003) indicate that writing and reading are two sides of the
same process and, while practicing writing, learners acquire reading skills and vice versa.
Thus, on the one hand, reading gives support to writing by developing conceptual
knowledge and setting standards of writing conventions. On the other, by composing
messages, learners perform a transactional activity involving both reading and writing
and enhance both skills.
The two approaches to writing—process vs. product—have been in the center of a
debate for a number of years. The proponents of product writing see it as another way of
improving grammar skills, which explains their focus on grammar and syntax forms. On
the other hand, process writing is more concerned with the meaning and thought
expression than with the form thus leading “to a more authentic learning experience for
second language learners” (Smith, 2003, p. 3). The aspect of self-analysis mentioned by
Cumming (1990) bears significance for both approaches to writing. Whether applied in
the process of writing or in its revising stage, self-analysis indicates that the learner is
capable of making decisions regarding the correctness of the written text and thus allows
for establishing his or her actual language knowledge. Thus while process writing targets
what is being communicated, product writing is oriented at how the message is presented
in language forms. This suggests that the two approaches are mutually supportive;
therefore, it is more beneficial to use elements of product and process writing together in
order to achieve higher academic standards.
Process-oriented studies appear to dominate the current field of ESL writing
research. Since it promotes learner autonomy and self-expression, process writing is
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congruent with the student-centered principles of constructive learning (Jones, 2004).
This approach allows for investigating learners’ perspective on their academic process as
well as finding new teaching methodologies. Thus, the view on writing as a process
raised interest in learners’ experiences which revealed that writing follows a recursive
pattern and not a linear one as was traditionally assumed by the product writing approach
(Witte, 1985). Quesada’s (2004) study of revising strategies of ESL writing students
showed that the revision stage does not happen when the essay is completed but
interrupts the writing process as often as learners find necessary. It was also clear that the
focus of revision is selected by the learners according to their understanding of the task
and their perception of writing standards and their own weaknesses as writers. This
aspect of the study is especially important in the field of ESL academic writing since it
suggests that similar language proficiency of students does not guarantee similar levels of
writing skills or awareness of academic demands.
Although writing is mainly an individual enterprise, process writing research
brought evidence that learners achieve better results when writing is accompanied by
conversational interaction which has “the capacity to advance, broaden, and clarify our
understandings” (Strauss & Xiang, 2006, p. 359). The interactions in this study were
conducted in the form of writing conferences where students of an ESL basic writing
course were involved in group analyses of their compositions at the stage of planning,
drafting, and revising. The dialogic format of these conferences resulted in better clarity
of thought expression and essay organization, which allowed the authors to conclude that
verbal interaction in the writing discourse increases understanding of the task and the
steps involved in its completion as well as the ability to locate and solve problems by
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choosing appropriate strategies. Importantly, this study demonstrates the close
relationship between thoughts expressed in writing and speaking and indicates
that“language is central to the mediation of cognition and thought” (Strauss & Xiang, p.
359).
Interestingly, the same practice is viewed differently from the perspective of
situated learning theory (Lave & Wenger, 1991), which presents second language
acquisition as a matter of social interaction rather than cognitive processes of the mind.
Young and Miller (2004) conducted a similar study to investigate the role of verbal
interaction in writing conferences. Maintaining that learning is “a…co-constructed
process, distributed among participants”, they focused on the changes in participation
itself and the consequent improvement in the language skills (Young & Miller, p. 519). In
this study, the student and the instructor were involved in a series of weekly writing
conferences which resulted in higher interactional and writing competence. Although it is
questionable that verbal discourse took place outside of cognitive structure, the fact that
these researchers achieved similar results to those of Strauss and Xiang’s (2006) shows
that the act of composing becomes more efficient when it is accompanied by discussion.
The tendency to incorporate verbal interaction into writing instruction coincides
with the shift to approaching writing as a process rather than a product. As a teaching
method, process writing provides better opportunities for discovering meaning as
opposed to product writing, which is more concerned with modeling grammar forms and
writing organization (Baroudy, 2007; Smith, 2003). Process writing includes prewriting,
writing, and rewriting. Each of these stages allows for intervention (e.g., peer review)
which promotes student participation, encourages interaction, and develops critical
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thinking skills (Gousseva, 1998; Jones, 2004). Through oral interaction, students receive
comments that help them find flaws in their writing and thus improve its quality (Daiute,
1985). More deeply, combining writing with interaction, thinking, and analysis develops
self-monitoring skills and should be looked upon as a metacognitive rather than cognitive
or social learning process. According to Wong Mei Ha and Storey (2006), metacognitive
strategies used in peer-editing and other forms of writing conferences include self-
appraisal and self-management which require both knowledge and the ability to translate
knowledge into action. Their study demonstrated that interactive and reflective activities
allowed for a significant improvement in the students’ declarative and procedural
knowledge as well as overall writing performance.
Combining process writing with oral discourse is also viewed as an important step
in acquiring content knowledge. According to Huang (2004), it is especially important
when preparing second language learners to study specific academic disciplines. This
view is based on the premise that verbal expression reflects thinking which is inseparable
from human activities. This allows Huang to argue that teaching any academic discipline
requires integrating it with the language specific for that content area. By using process
writing, this researcher was able to design science instruction through the use of oral and
written language. Throughout the five weeks of the study, the students were involved in a
continuing interaction where writing and discussion served as the basis for knowledge
construction and resulted in improvement of content knowledge as well as argumentation
and analysis skills.
All these approaches to ESL writing instruction have several important
similarities. First of all, they all emphasize the role of conceptual structure represented by
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schema which allows learners to build the connection between the new linguistic
environment and the previous learning experiences. This is especially significant since
written speech is in essence the verbalization of inner thoughts. Neither process nor
product writing is possible without this factor. As a result, educators attempt to improve
students’ writing by using constructive learning methods such as conferences and peer-
editing. Thus, even though communication skills are not the main goal of instruction in a
writing class, they are conducive to writing skills development.
Educational technology has created opportunities for computer-mediated
communication which requires both reading and writing skills and, therefore, works as a
bridge between the two skills and leads to a more intensive language processing and
production. Importantly, by expanding the reading practice, students acquire background
knowledge which is essential for further learning, critical thinking, and writing skills
development (Karchmer, 2004). The following section discusses the way technology is
used for these purposes.
Characteristics of Technology as an Educational Tool
As an educational tool, technology finds a number of applications in and outside
the classroom. Many researchers (McCrory, 2006; Oliver & Herrington, 2003; Tu, 2005)
observe that the development of online technologies has brought new ways of learning
and teaching. Whereas the traditional use of technology included presenting and storing
information, Web-based learning emphasizes communication and knowledge
construction. The strongest distinction between the two is the linear approach of the
former, which makes learners dependent on the information received from the instructor,
and the recursive approach of the latter, which views learners as co-participants in the
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learning process (see Table 1). These differences are explained by the fact that the
traditional technologies can only perform the functions they are programmed to do while
the online ones offer a variety of resources and means of communication.
Table 1 Comparison of the Use of Technology in Traditional and Web-based Instruction
Use of technology Traditional Web-based (includes all the traditional
elements)
Information Demonstrating, processing, storing Searching, analyzing, evaluating, decision
making
Text Word-processing, editing, spell-
check
Text-based communication
Learning
Drills, questions/answers,
comprehension check
Social learning, knowledge construction,
problem solving, simulations
Communication none Synchronous & asynchronous discussion,
blogging, e-mail, chat, video-conferencing
Evaluation Demonstrating knowledge through
tests & quizzes
Validating knowledge through group
interaction, teams work, & collaborative
projects
Many features of online technologies make learning a social experience which
agrees with Vygotsky’s (1962) theory. Approaching online learning as a social
phenomenon, Tu (2005, p. 194) emphasizes that “instructional communication does not
occur solely in a classroom.” This researcher points out that integrating emerging
technologies increases possibilities for meaningful learning through the following modes:
Personalization: individualizing content, communication style, and delivery
format.
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Digitization: easier access to information; better quality and higher speed of
information retrieval and presentation; higher efficiency of communication.
Interactivity: two-way communication which allows every participant to
contribute to knowledge construction thus creating a learning community.
These characteristics allow for creating a constructive learning environment
where “students…contribute their knowledge in addition to looking for existing
knowledge” (Tu, 2005, p. 199). The result of such active learning surpasses not only
knowledge acquisition and skill development which take place in the traditional linear
format of learning, but also the sense of community and togetherness which develops
through on-going exchange and negotiation. Tu argues that the concept of online learning
community is too narrow to present the true nature of online collaboration. Although the
term learning community does apply to the social phenomenon which learners create
while interacting online, there is also community learning that takes place among
individual members and involves the entire community.
The shift to interactive learning is also noted by McCrory (2006), who points to
representation, information, transformation, and collaboration as the most important
characteristics of computers and the Internet that help engage students in meaningful
knowledge construction. True, representation of new ideas and concepts can be done
easily using computers due to their ability to carry graphics. Information is another aspect
since access to online data is practically unlimited. Transformation refers to changing the
way students learn in traditional classrooms by adding the elements of exploration and
creativity which employ critical thinking skills. Finally, the most essential factor of
learning with online technologies is collaboration which becomes enhanced with due to
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maintaning constant communication among. Importantly, all these aspects allow learners
to be independent and share responsibilities for their academic progress.
Research on Web-Based Writing Instruction
The above-mentioned characteristics of technology create opportunities for its
effective use in language learning. As a tool of academic study, online technologies can
help ESL students to acquire new language skills and enhance their cognitive potential
through continuous reading and writing discourse. As was mentioned earlier, the two
skills support each other, which makes text-based online communication especially
beneficial for the development of both. However, since ESL writing embraces a large
number of skills, notions, and processes, it is essential to look at it as an inherently
complex phenomenon.
Distance or online form of delivery and the use of social software created a new
learning format which emphasizes the communicative function of writing. At the same
time, there appeared the need for research that would lead to developing instructional
methods appropriate for this learning format. Since written communication replaces oral
communication in the online environment, some researchers find it essential to
understand the specific nature of its communicative function. For instance, Goodfellow
(2004) draws attention to text-as-interaction from the point of view of learners and their
experiences which can be investigated by means of surveys and interviews. This
researcher also points out the importance of analyzing the form of the message in additon
to the content. Comparing writing as composing with writing as an act of communication
reveals that the two modes involve different psycholonguistic processing. According to
Cumming (1990, p. 487), composing is a “self-controlled and mentally situated” process,
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while writing for communication involves at least two communicators whose information
exchange “can be accounted for by comprehensible input.” This adds another point of
interest to online writing research, namely the extent of internal speech formation,
expression, and monitoring present in text-based interactions.
Thus, writing as an act of interaction may include elements of both composition
and conversation. However, due to the differences between synchronous and
asynchronous interaction, the former may contain more conversational features than the
latter, while the latter has a potential for more content depth and language complexity.
Although writing fits naturally in the context of online learning, it does not appear to be
exclussively an online learning phenomenon. Many researchers find interaction beneficial
for traditional writing practices due to the fact that verbalization of internal speech helps
to internalize new concepts and improve both oral and written language production. This
is reflected in introducing peer editing and writing conferences into ESL writing
instrustion.
Both peer editing in class and text-based interaction online involve a large amount
of reading which further faciliates writing skills development. Research on reading and
writing connection shows that these two processes are interrelated (Smith, 2001;
Esmaeili, 2002; Krashen & Lee, 2004). This relationship is based on such commonalities
as transferring information; interacting with the text; constructing meaning and images;
using multiple language skills and logical thinking; and evaluating the text.
Smith (2001) emphasizes the importance of understanding the parallels between
reading and writing:
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The concept that writing is a multi-step process involving preparation and reflection, and not just the act of putting words down on paper, can be reinforced by learning about the multi-step process of reading, which also involves preparation and reflection and is not simply the act of decoding words and hoping their meaning becomes clear. (p. 2) Thus, improvement in reading leads to improvement in writing. Learners can
apply skills and strategies developed through one modality to the other, which, in turn,
promotes their intellectual development (Krashen & Lee, 2004). The fact that both
modalities are involved in online interaction stresses its benefits for second language
learners.
Broadly, text-based online communication can be referred to as computer-
mediated communication (CMC). Much of the current literature in the field of CMC is
dedicated to the two formats: synchronous and asynchronous. Although researchers agree
that each format has its advantages and disadvantages, they admit that they differ
significantly with regard to course design and instructional tools. Synchronous learning
uses traditional instructional tools, such as lectures, demonstrations, and quizzes, placed
in the Web environment and used in real time. Therefore, the instructor continues to be in
control of the learning process. In contrast, asynchronous learning emphasizes activities
that promote sharing knowledge through text-based interaction and independent learning
(Sankaran, Sankaran, & Bui, 2000). This allows every participant to contribute to
knowledge construction. The slow pace of asynchronous communication promotes
collecting information, reflection, and constructing deeper messages. Research has also
shown that if the online course component merely duplicates the material used in class, it
lowers students’ motivation and interest in the course and negatively affects learning
outcomes (Sankaran, Sankaran, & Bui, 2000). On the other hand, the format that
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promotes interaction and collaborative learning allows for better achievements (Veerman
& Veldhuis-Diermanse, 2000). Thus, synchronous or asynchronous formats should be
chosen based on the course content, instructional goals, and learning objectives.
One particular form of asynchronous communication, blogging, is becoming a
major area of interest in education. As a type of social software, blogs are highly
interactive and promote reading, writing, thinking, and discussion. The communicative
function of blogs is similar to that of open dialogue journals (Orem, 2001) on the one
hand and personal journals on the other. Their resemblance to the former allows for an
informal exchange of information and ideas, whereas as a traditional journal writing
genre, they promote inner speech production which leads to better written expression (de
Guerrero, 2004). As asynchronous format of communication, they have highly dynamic,
interactive nature and the capacity for personalization of information and ways of
presenting it. Moreover, since blogs are open to everyone in class (and in cyberspace),
they encourage participation.
Blogs are also flexible enough to be adapted to any content area. Ferdig and
Trammell (2004) point out that blogs, unlike other discussion forums, give an opportunity
to create content rather than simply deliver it. Hyperlinks add more content presenting a
powerful tool of scaffolding and establishing relationships between concepts.
Importantly, blogs allow students to use newly acquired concepts and vocabulary
immediately in a social context, which increases their content knowledge and
communicative competence through meaningful exchange of life-related information.
Thus, they are conducive to knowledge construction. Jones (2007) also reports that
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blogging helped the participants of her case study to improve quality of writing and
facilitated critical thinking skills and meaningful learning.
This review suggests that CMC in education has a distinct purpose of creating a
continuing writing discourse (Al-Jarf, 2002; Black, 2005; Zha, Kelly, Park, & Fitzgerald,
2006) which facilitates constructive learning (Mohd Bee, 2005/2006; Veerman &
Veldhuis-Diermanse, 2000). Other studies indicate that online interaction changes the
roles of the teachers and students as well as the class learning environment (Gousseva,
1998; Cunningham, 2000). Indeed, working online, students function independently and
have more freedom to be in control of their learning, while teachers serve as experts
proving facilitation, organization, and support.
The interactive nature of the online environment opens possibilities for group
projects, peer review, and class discussions. These activities do not match the traditional
teacher-controlled instruction. However, they are congruent with the contemporary
learner-centered and constructive approaches which place a great importance on learner
outcomes among which critical thinking skills occupy a prominent place. Therefore,
facilitation of learning in the Web-based environment should target critical thinking
development (Mohd Bee, 2005/2006). From this perspective, online format presents
challenges to both students and instructors. Gousseva (1998, Electronic interaction
section, para. 4) comes to the conclusion that “teachers…need to be aware that electronic
conferences change the power balance in the classroom.” This statement points to the
importance of embracing the principles of social construction of knowledge in order to
successfully integrate CMC in instructional practices.
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Many researchers are interested in the effect of CMC on second language
acquisition. Writing skills development was central to Al-Jarf’s (2002) study, which
resulted in significantly higher scores for those students who were taught using the hybrid
method compared to those in the traditional class. Similar findings were reported by
Carpenter, Brown, and Hickman (2004) who investigated student outcomes in the online
and traditional mainstream writing courses. The results demonstrated comparable and
higher success rates among the students enrolled in the online course. However, these
researchers discovered that face-to-face instruction ensured better student retention.
Zhang, Gao, Ring, and Zhang (2007) took a broader approach to the hybrid model. Their
study investigated the effects of online discussion on in-class discussion, reading, writing,
grammar, vocabulary, and critical thinking. They found improvements in essay
organization and critical thinking while the students did not show significant gains in
grammar, vocabulary, and reading skills. These researchers admit that the results could
have been affected by a number of external variables which had not been taken into
account during the planning stage. Possibly, the scale of the study was too wide and the
time of the experiment too short to follow each aspect in detail. These findings indicate
that more research is needed in order to explore the benefits of CMC for second language
learning.
In contrast, Chen Wong and Sutton (2002), focused specifically on the effect of
learner control through the use of hyperlinks. Their study showed that the students who
had access to glossary items through hyperlinks had significantly higher vocabulary
scores on the post-test than those who worked with the same material without hyperlinks.
Another study (de la Fuente, 2003) conducted from the interactionist perspective found
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that CMC was as effective for vocabulary acquisition as face-to-face interaction. The
differences in findings suggest that research in this area is currently in the initial stage
and needs to be continued.
The language of CMC presents a special area of research. Although the
interaction is performed in the written form, it bears the characteristics of both written
and spoken language. Some researchers (Majidi, 2006; Murray, 2000) agree that text-
based communication is developing its own specific features and becoming a new genre.
Similarities with oral communication are evident in the use of simplified speech and
greetings which are typically used in conversations, as well as emoticons and
abbreviations. These features are especially common in synchronous communication
which tends to be less strict about writing conventions and promotes a lively inter-
personal exchange (Sotillo, 2000). On the other hand, asynchronous communication
involves longer, more reflective and syntactically complex passages. Although the
language is distributed among all the participants and is, therefore, socially constructed in
both forms of online interaction, students communicating asynchronously produce a more
formal written discourse than those using the synchronous model. Sotillo (2000, p. 107)
explains this by the fact that asynchronous discussion “encourages [students] to think
critically and post carefully prepared responses to teacher and student queries.” One
aspect, however, should be taken into consideration: the language of CMC is still in the
stage of development and will be changing as technology continues to create new
methods of communication.
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Research on Hybrid Writing Instruction
Distance or online education has firmly established itself over the past decade;
however, its combination with traditional courses in the so-called hybrid or blended
format is only beginning to appear in educational programs. Positive influence of this
learning format on reflective thinking, time management, and student academic
achievements has been noticed by many researchers (Bloch, 2007; Carpenter, Brown, &
Hickman, 2004; Lowe & Williams, 2004; Rovai & Jordan, 2004). Most typically
mentioned among the improvements are creating opportunities for meaningful learning,
involving more students in collaborative activities, and developing a sense of community.
All these features are enhanced by the fact that learners have the benefits of the flexibility
of the online format while receiving regular face-to-face instruction. Thus, the concept of
hybrid learning stands in agreement with the theories of social learning (Vygotsky, 1962;
Bandura, 1986) and knowledge-building community (Scardamalia & Bereiter, 1994).
Although research and theory speak in favor of hybrid or blended learning, there
are voices of caution with regard to adding an online component to the conventional
teaching formats. In ESL writing instruction, this integration meets both technical and
professional barriers. According to Ho (2005), the main reason for slow progress in this
area is lack of methodology and teacher training courses that would prepare the ESL
instructors to work with both in-class and online formats. A general concern of most
teachers is adding technological challenges—such as technical failures and students’ lack
of computer literacy—to already existing difficulties of ESL writing. In her study on
teachers’ perspective on hybrid instruction, Ho (2005, p. 3) discovered that teachers are
uncertain “about the effectiveness of [their] instruction.” Basing student work assessment
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on online quizzes and structural essay standards, her participants were not able to realize
all the benefits of this teaching model. Although it is not clear from Ho’s findings what
approach the teachers involved in her study were using, their uncertainty about
effectiveness of their work suggests that the writing instruction was product oriented.
Had they been concerned with writing as a process, they would have evaluated their
hybrid-course experience from the point of view of creating a knowledge-constructing
online learning community rather than focusing on writing assessment.
Other researchers (Carpenter, Brown, & Hickman, 2004; Kannan & Macknish,
2000) found that inadequate motivation, feedback, self-directedness, and knowledge of
computer technology can have negative effect on the students experience in the hybrid
course. Based on their study with Chinese students enrolled in an English writing class,
Kannan and Macknish (2000) recommend offering students computer training and giving
grades for performance to raise motivation; suggesting new learning strategies in addition
to comments concerning writing improvement; consulting students one-on-one to help
develop self-directed learning skills; ensuring technical support and user-friendly
interface design. Aside from the technical issues, the above-mentioned problems can be
found in any type of instruction. However, as any form of technology-based learning, the
online component presents extra challenge from the technological perspective, which
should be taken into account by researchers and practitioners alike.
It is interesting to note that, according to some researchers, students themselves
have generally positive attitude to online interaction. Several studies (Bloch, 2007;
Cunningham, 2000; Lowe & Williams, 2004) demonstrated that students appreciate the
opportunity to collaborate with others and exchange ideas. Overall, 88% of students
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participating in Cunningham’s (2000) study responded that using the computer helped
them improve their writing, and 53% found that technology was easy to use. After a few
initial weeks of adaptation, students realized that online environment was non-threatening
and helpful in their overall learning progress. This perception is especially evident among
students who used blogging as part of their writing experience. From social learning
perspective, blogging reduces anxiety since the fear of performing in public is eliminated
(Lowe & Williams, 2004). Being placed in a social context and engaged in group
construction of knowledge, students develop a stronger sense of community, which
positively affects their decision to continue education. One example of connectedness
among students is Rovai and Jordan’s (2004) study, which compared a hybrid course
with a traditional and a fully online one. These researchers found that the students
enrolled in the hybrid course demonstrated the highest sense of community of the three.
As a result, the learners were able to reduce the typical frustration over technical issues of
the fully online course and personal issues of the traditional course.
Comparison of Classroom and Online Writing
A strong commonality between classroom and online writing instruction can be
found in their social learning elements. In traditional courses, this is especially obvious in
process writing approach, whose positive effects on learning help build stronger
connection between the learners’ linguistic knowledge and writing performance (Wong
Mei Ha & Storey, 2006). From the academic perspective, this leads to better concept
development, improved material retention, and overall language skills improvement. This
is largely achieved by practicing reading for writing which develops new schemata and
writing for reading which demonstrates the response to reading and familiarity with the
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topic (Hirvela, 2004). Socially, involving students in peer review and writing conferences
allows for creating a learning community based on sharing and knowledge construction
which sets the environment for learning experiences. The question is whether these
principles apply exclusively to the traditional instruction or can be present in Web-based
learning.
Similar to the traditional classroom approach, Web-based instruction is
characterized by the connection between reading and writing; however, the Internet
creates additional challenges to these learning modes. For instance, unlike conventional
reading, online information is presented in a layered format which requires attention to
branching links and navigational skills to retrieve appropriate documents. Additionally,
writing online differs greatly from the traditional step-by-step composing model in that it
is a highly social, interactive process which requires strong negotiation skills but can be
spontaneous and often lacks the recursive pattern of revision which is characteristic of
traditional writing. However, the fact that the interaction is performed through writing
increases clarity of thought expression and internalizing content material.
Summary
This chapter discussed the current trends in ESL writing research. One of the
aspects reflected in the current research literature is the shift from the traditional product-
oriented writing methodology to writing as a process that emphasizes thought expression.
Since the latter promotes critical thinking and generating ideas, it is widely used in
connection with reading and oral discourse. In order to enhance learning, traditional
writing instruction is supported by online technologies which offer a number of
advantages for process writing by engaging students in meaningful social context and
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thus creating opportunities for learning. Some of these opportunities involve sharing
knowledge through reading and writing. Due to the fact that online discussions are
carried out in the written form, many researchers address development of writing skills
entirely in Web-based environment. Such forms of online interaction as blogs and
discussion forums offer a number of possibilities for improving writing skills and general
knowledge. In online learning, interaction facilitates social learning and increases
language production, which helps students become more competent writers and
communicators. Another group of researchers seek ways of combining traditional and
online instruction in the hybrid format. Research on the hybrid or blended method
indicates that this form of instruction has the advantage of using the elements of both
conventional and online education which complement each other allowing learners to
improve a variety of language skills.
The following chapter makes a transition to the case study conducted for the
purpose of investigating hybrid learning as a format of ESL writing instruction. The
chapter discusses all the essential components of the design of the case study and the
hybrid course. The researcher’s role and the brief profiles of the participants are included
in order to complete the presentation of the context of the study. The questions that
guided the research are presented in their relation to the data collection tools. The
procedures of obtaining data and the treatment of data, as well as methods of ensuring
validity and reliability of the study, are also explained in this chapter.
CHAPTER 3: METHODOLOGY
The review of research literature in the area of second language writing revealed a
positive effect of blending traditional and online formats of learning. Most of the studies
found a number of benefits for learners who are able to advance their language skills
while being engaged in the process of collaborative online knowledge construction. The
presented research project attempted to continue this trend of investigation by addressing
the problems that are typically present in the traditional classroom instruction. Namely,
the hybrid EAP course used the methodology that provided students with self-study tools
and additional instructor support online; it allowed for exercising time-management and
self-directedness; it extended the opportunities for meaningful acquisition reading and
writing skills, which are required for academic study; finally, it increased the time and
practice needed to develop and internalize new concepts. In order to closely address these
areas, the project utilized the methodology of a case study, which is presented in this
chapter through the following sections:
1. Research design
2. The context for the study
3. Data collection instruments
4. Data collection procedures
5. Treatment of the data
6. Validity and reliability
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Research Design
Research Paradigm and Strategy for Investigation
This case study followed the qualitative research paradigm due to the necessity to
observe the learning behavior of the participants over a long period of time. Although
quantitative investigations, particularly experiments, have the capacity to present
convincing numerical evidence of skill improvement, they do not allow for an
understanding of learners’ perspective on the phenomenon of the investigation. Important
educational factors, such as human behavior, remain outside the context of a quantitative
study. For the present research, students’ perspective on the educational use of social
software, their learning strategies, and their growth of self-directedness in the hybrid
format were as essential as the changes in the writing skills. It was necessary, therefore,
to design this study within the qualitative paradigm.
The need to collect and process comprehensive data acquired in real-life academic
settings determined my choice of a case study as the research strategy. According to Yin
(2003, pp. 13-14), a case study is necessary when research involves “multiple sources of
evidence” and data collection techniques while being performed in a specific context that
is inseparable from the phenomenon of the study. The following conditions of the
investigation prompted a case study design:
1. The study intended to explore a phenomenon taking place at the present time in a
concrete educational institution, WCC.
2. The phenomenon of the hybrid EAP course taught at WCC was the subject of the
investigation.
3. The study involved several sources of evidence and data collection techniques.
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As a result, a case study design was chosen over other research strategies.
Experimental research had to be rejected as more appropriate for studies involving skill
assessment rather than skill development. Compared with a case study, this strategy
would not be able to provide answers to the research questions that target individual
learning progress throughout a semester. It would be impossible to integrate open-ended
data collection instruments, which were required in order to study the participants’ points
of view in hybrid learning. Longitudinal non-experimental panel study was also
considered and declined due to the relatively short period of investigation. The study was
planned for 10 weeks in the Evening EAP and 12 weeks in the Saturday EAP programs
so as to observe the progress students would demonstrate in a typical semester. Thus, the
chosen paradigm and research strategy appeared to be the best fit with the research
questions and the purpose of the study. It allowed for approaching hybrid learning from a
student’s perspective and formed the basis for an in-depth investigation of the changes in
the participants’ writing progress, self-directedness, and learning strategies as a result of
implementing a hybrid course instructional design in an EAP course.
Role of the Researcher
My role in this study involved several capacities, which gave me valuable
experiences in teaching, research work, and instructional design. As an instructor, I was
also a co-participant of the knowledge construction. This capacity required functioning as
a facilitator of weekly learning activities both in class and online, a blog discussion
mediator, and (on many occasions) a source of inspiration for the struggling ESL writers.
Being a researcher, I had to pay attention to numerous details, process and evaluate the
facts which were emerging during my work, and, most importantly, remain organized
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among the flood of data. Blending these two functions was helpful in establishing a close
contact with the participants, which was essential in understanding their experiences as
learners and interpreting their responses to the weekly and biweekly questionnaires. It
also became an important factor in creating the atmosphere of trust during the in-person
interviews so as to encourage the participants to openly share their concerns and
opinions. However, I had to put aside my involvement as a teacher when it was necessary
to evaluate the changes in my participants’ writing skills and learning behavior.
Following their writing progress through in-class, online, and home assignments, I had to
separate my capacity as the course instructor from that of an unbiased observer.
My work as an instructional designer in this course was somewhat overshadowed
for my participants by the other two functions. However, it was an inalienable part of
both of them since it made it possible to create the technical and the pedagogical base for
the study. A year earlier, while planning my research work, I received the permission of
the ELI to launch a trail version of the Web site ESL Writing Extension, which was used
in the study. Based on the need analysis of EAP students, improving reading and writing
skills emerged as the priority; therefore, an online component offering computer-
mediated communication in the form of blogging seemed the most appropriate choice.
The functionality and usefulness of the Web site had been evaluated by EAP students for
three consecutive semesters prior to the study. Such formative evaluation helped me
improve the design and add other components of the site. These improvements, in
addition to updating the reading and communication functions, included augmenting the
Web site with reference sections on grammar, writing, and class handouts. Another
blogging site was added as a section for prewriting and first draft demonstration. Finally,
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having gone through a series of adjustments in content, interface layout, and navigation,
the Web site has grown into a fully functional learning resource and communication tool.
In this capacity, it was used in the study.
Besides technical skills, my work on the Web site required a deep understanding
of the ESL pedagogy in order to integrate it into a traditional EAP course. My main
guiding principle was social construction of knowledge which would allow students to
apply the targeted skills in a variety of situations. For this purpose, the in-class learning
experiences had to find continuity in the online environment. In order to allow for the
expansion of learning, each lesson on the writing style found its practical application in
various online reading, discussion, and writing assignments. Thus, the learning process
was not bound to the class schedule but proceeded in an ongoing manner.
Research Questions
The study was based on the assumption that improvement in writing skills would
depend on enhancing conceptual knowledge of the participants and fluency of written
expression through intensive online reading and communication activities. Specifically,
the investigation sought answers to the following research questions: (a) What features
characterize changes in the writing of ESL students in hybrid courses? (b) What evidence
of self-directedness is present in the hybrid program? (c) Which learning strategies
(memory, cognitive, compensation, or social) do students use more in this type of
environment?
The collected evidence can be used to create a pedagogical rationale for further
application of the hybrid learning format in ESL writing instruction based on the features
that characterize writing in this learning format. The findings in the changes in students’
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self-directedness and the use of learning strategies in this type of learning environment
allow for detecting the most common skills required for a successful transition from one
model to the other and, therefore, for providing guidelines for hybrid ESL course design.
In detail, the procedures and findings are discussed in chapter 4.
Context of the Study
Setting and Population
The English Language Institute (ELI) at Westchester Community College (WCC),
NY, served as the community partner in this study. As one of the largest noncredit
programs in New York State, it pursues the mission of giving adult ESL students
affordable language training and opportunities for further education, as well as personal
and professional improvement. The classes are held on the main campus, which occupies
218 acres in Valhalla, NY, and nine extension sites throughout Westchester County. Due
to its proximity to New York City, Westchester County is a highly populated area, where
Hispanic immigrants are the fastest growing group, and 26.7% of the population is
foreign-born (Westchester County Department of Planning Databook, 2000). This
situation reflects on the enrollment at the ELI. The classes at the ELI are attended on the
average by over 5,000 students per semester. Although they have a variety of cultural and
educational backgrounds, the majority of them are natives of South America. The
demographics determines the primary goal of the ELI to help second language students
develop skills that can lead to academic and social independence and thus sustain the
needs of the growing population and the educational requirements of the community.
However, it also creates many academic problems which are common for other ESL
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institutions. Among them, lack of proper first language schooling and learning skills has
the most negative effect on student success.
At present, the variety of classes offered by the ELI includes integrated-skills,
intensive, and specialized courses. The language proficiency is determined by the
Combined English Language Skills Assessment test (CELSA), which includes 75
multiple-choice grammar questions presented in a story format. Additionally, students
receive a 35-minute writing assignment consisting of three topics of increasing difficulty.
CELSA grades language skills by seven levels of proficiency: from low beginners (Level
0) to advanced (Level 7). More advanced students are encouraged to start taking credit
courses on a part-time basis along with ESL classes when they reach Level 6.
The EAP program serves as the transition stage to the mainstream programs for
both continuing ESL students and new enrollees of Level 6 and above. The classes meet
on a 6-hour and 3-hour a week schedule with a total of 72 and 42 hours of classroom
instruction respectively. The 6-hour schedule is offered in a 12-week course twice a week
in the evening and morning sections; the 3-hour class meets once a week on Saturday for
14 weeks. The average enrollment in each section is about 40 students who are placed in
two levels based on the latest score on the CELSA test and the results of the writing test
which they take on the first day of classes. The EAP classes are taught using traditional
methodology with the focus on grammar, reading, and writing. The main goal is to help
students achieve a passing score in these areas on the college placement test.
In spite of the similar language proficiency, a typical EAP group is far from being
a uniformed community. Learners differ greatly in levels of prior education, motivation,
and social status. It is not uncommon to find people with university degrees from their
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native countries and those who are planning to obtain a GED diploma. Some students feel
an urgent need to confirm their foreign credentials or continue their education in the US;
for others English skills are necessary for vocational training. The differences in learning
needs and goals do not change the general expectation of all students to make the best
progress in the shortest possible time. However, it is not feasible to accomplish this task
within the limits of a typical course for a number of reasons. Namely, student success in
the EAP program at the ELI is affected by the following factors:
1. The number of hours per course is not sufficient to bring the language skills to the
level that could meet the academic requirements of the mainstream programs.
2. Heavy focus on language instruction limits the students’ opportunities to develop
critical thinking skills which are essential in the mastery of writing.
3. Practicing the English language outside academic context creates difficulties in
transition to the content areas.
4. There is no academic support for noncredit ESL students.
All of these conditions made the ELI the most suitable place to implement hybrid
learning format. Even though the investigation targeted adult college-bound students
attending EAP courses at this particular school, the commonalities in the issues among
schools providing ESL services create ground for applying the findings for a wider
audience.
Access to the Participants
My position as the course instructor enabled me to recruit the participants during
the first session of the spring semester. While discussing the course syllabus and the
objectives, I also presented the Web site, explained its purpose as the course component,
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and invited volunteers to participate in my research. In order not to make the students feel
pressured to participate, I explained to them that my research was not a requirement of
the course. I emphasized that it was a noncredit course, and the only benefits they would
gain were better skills and self-efficacy as learners. Trying to avoid possible issues in the
future, I addressed the following important points of our cooperation:
1. I explained to the students that their participation was on a strictly voluntary basis
and that they were not obligated to continue if they felt overwhelmed having to
answer questions in addition to working on the class assignments.
2. I described the procedures and the purpose of the study and pointed to the
importance of learning about their experiences in it.
3. I explained what data collection tools they would have to work with and how the
results of the study would be used.
When the participants signed their letters of cooperation, we worked out a
schedule of submitting weekly and biweekly questionnaires and meeting for in-person
interviews. Some participants preferred to have the hard copies of the questionnaires;
others decided to use electronic format. The biweekly interviews with each participant
were help in private either before or after class. There were no group interviews so as not
to create peer pressure.
On the one hand, my combining multiple roles allowed for a closer investigation
of the participants’ needs and concerns, as well as social, pedagogical, and technical
issues involved in hybrid learning format. On the other, I had to be constantly aware of
the fact that as a researcher I was also responsible for preventing ethical risks that could
appear in the course of the investigation. In order to avoid the division in class, I
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discussed all the issues related to the study in private. I never referred to the results of the
study or the experiences shared by the participants while teaching the class. My
interviews were held in private and all the information I received was kept confidential.
Having worked with adult ESL learners for a number of years, I have become
aware of various barriers that can prevent me as an instructor and researcher from gaining
their trust. The most sensitive issue I could envision in the course of the investigation was
related to the participants’ educational experiences. Therefore, the questions about prior
learning on the intake questionnaire were asked in an indirect way and offered the
students to make their own evaluations of their past achievements. I also avoided
references to their personal and cultural experiences. None of my data collection tools
contained questions of that nature so as not to evoke negative emotions or the feeling of
inferiority. Both the questionnaires and the interviews focused entirely on the current
learning experiences in the hybrid course.
Selection Criteria
The criteria for selection of the participants included the following points:
1. They had to have high intermediate (minimum Level 6) English proficiency. This
level of language skills presumes sufficient amount of vocabulary and
communication skills to understand the assignments and be able to express their
ideas orally and in writing.
2. They had to know how to use a computer at least on a basic level (keyboarding,
Internet searches, and e-mail). Basic computer skills were essential for the
participants in this research as a prerequisite for the online communication.
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3. They had to have minimum high school level of education. This criterion was
necessary because of various academic content areas included in the course
material. Prior education would ensure sufficient level of learning skills and
general knowledge and would allow the students to process the material in an
unfamiliar learning environment.
Since all the students placed in the EAP program were Level 6 or higher, I only
had to make sure that my prospective participants matched the other two criteria and were
willing to commit the time to complete the questionnaire and meet for the interviews.
Sample Size
This investigation was conducted with four participants selected from willing
volunteers. The number of the participants was determined by the intention to conduct an
in-depth investigation which required a large amount of data collected by means of four
various tools. As a case study, this research project intended to maximize the
understanding of experiences (Stake, 1995) which learners may be exposed to in the
hybrid format, as well as the understanding of the benefits and flaws (Merriam, 1988) of
the hybrid format in the EAP programs. For this purpose, the investigation proceeded in
three directions: changes in writing skills, evidence of self-directedness in learning, and
the use of learning strategies. Due to the amount of data, it was not possible to engage a
larger group of participants so as to ensure the depth of inquiry per individual and not to
undermine the practicality of the project.
Profiles of the Participants
The four students I worked with volunteered to take part in the study because they
were genuinely curious about the new format of learning and believed in the benefits of
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being involved in a continuing writing practice. Two of them were enrolled in my
evening EAP class, which met twice a week. The other two students were attending the
Saturday EAP section and receiving classroom instruction once a week. Their responses
on the intake questionnaires allowed for creating the participant profiles, which are
presented in detail in Chapter 4:
Case 1: Yana is a 35-year-old woman from Russia. Due to her husband’s job, the
family has to live in different countries for extended periods of time. Before coming to
the United States last year, Yana and her family lived in England, where she took three
semesters of English. In her native country, she received two college degrees in
completely unrelated areas: early childhood education and law. She is not employed in
either field and is planning to go back to school in order to be trained for a job that is
more in demand. Yana has always been a traditional learner whose primary learning
sources were school, books, and work environment. She has a firm view on the role of
education in a person’s life. Whereas improving a job status and achieving success are
important for her, it is equally important to be a contributing member of society.
Specifically in this program, she assigned an important role to the use of technology as an
effective way of learning more things and managing her study time. She started the
course with a readiness to work hard in order to reach her goals and an understanding of
her strengths and weaknesses.
Case 2: Gio is a 32-year-old single professional woman who has been living in the
US for the past seven years. In her native country, Peru, she was studying to receive a
college degree in media and communication and is now working as a Spanish editor for
one of the local Catholic charities. She needs to improve her English skills in order to
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return to school and re-evaluate her foreign credentials. Gio had earlier completed six
semesters of ESL, but difficulties in writing slowed down her progress. Evaluating her
prior education, Gio did not see it as a significant foundation for learning English.
However, it helped her learn new things in general. Most of her knowledge comes from
school and family, whereas books and other sources of information did not appear to
provide significant learning experiences. Not reading enough, she missed an essential
part of concept development, which can explain her trouble with writing. The priority in
the purpose of her study falls entirely on improving her job, family, and social status. Her
expectations of the online component of this course included opportunities to learn more
effectively at her own pace. Overall, Gio’s intake questionnaire showed her as a person
who understands the importance of working hard on her goals but needs someone to
guide her through the process.
Case 3: Joe is a 39-year-old man from Peru, who has lived in the US for six years.
Although he is married and has two children, his family responsibilities do not stop him
from attending school. He had completed seven semesters of ESL prior to taking the EAP
course. His goal is to be able to use his business training he received in his home country.
Education plays an important role in Joe’s life. He sees formal schooling as the primary
source of his knowledge even though he admits that earlier obtained skills are not
sufficient for his current needs. Education attracts him as a way of becoming a better
person, contributing to the society, and supporting his family. The idea of using
technology in this course appealed to him as an opportunity to learn things independently
and manage his study time.
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Case 4: Jang is the youngest of the participants. She is 24 years old and has lived
in this country for less than a year working as an au pair. A native of Thailand, she
completed a four-year college and plans to continue studying business in the US. As a
traditional learner, Jang received most of her education from school. This experience
helped her to form her own learning style and understand her strengths and weaknesses.
She sees professional success and employment opportunities as the main goals of her
study. While her previous education allowed her to develop strong learning skills, it did
not prepare her to deal with a new culture and acquire a new language, especially writing
and communication skills. She realized that her own effort was the key to her success in
the EAP program. However, she did not find technology a useful tool in accelerating her
learning progress; rather, it was a means of getting more information and working at her
own pace.
Hybrid Course Design
The pedagogy of the hybrid course combined process-oriented ESL writing
methodology, which emphasizes understanding of content, revision, and collaboration,
and the components of the conceptual framework of the study.
Vygotsky’s (1962) theory of social learning, combined with the process writing
approach, allowed for developing online learning activities that involved continuing
interaction, thus creating social presence and opportunities for exchange of ideas and
revision of work. The assignments were organized by themes and given on a weekly
basis. Each week’s theme began with the traditional classroom instruction which included
an introduction to a specific writing style and supporting grammar practice. The work on
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the theme continued in the blog section of the Web site where students read and
discussed the assigned material.
Scardamalia and Bereiter’s (1994) model of computer-supported intentional
learning environment (CSILE) became an inalienable part of the course design due to its
concept of intentional learning, which presumed learners’ active role in the knowledge-
building community. The continuity of the learning process which took place to a large
degree outside of the classroom helped the students experience the sense of community
and be responsible for their own progress as well as others’. From the instructional
perspective, it enabled me to gradually increase the level of difficulty and continue to set
new challenges throughout the course.
Bandura’s (1986) theory of social cognition enforced the methodology with the
concept of self-efficacy, which emphasizes self-reflection, independent thinking, and
search for more effective ways of reaching the goals. It was an essential component of the
study since it offered the students an opportunity to set their own learning goals and
monitor their progress throughout the week, thus exercising self-directedness. This aspect
was evident in student weekly self-evaluation logs and their participation in the online
activities which required independence and self-discipline.
Such metacognitive components of self-directedness as setting goals and
objectives, planning steps in learning, self-monitoring, and self-evaluating refer to
indirect learning strategies (Oxford, 1990). However, in order to address the students’
approach to implementing their learning plans, it was also essential to investigate
strategies which involve direct language activities. Oxford’s (1990) strategy classification
system allowed for complimenting the data collection with memory, cognitive, and
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compensation strategies. Social strategies, which do not require direct manipulation of
the language, were included in the investigation as most applicable in the hybrid learning
environment. These four sets of strategies were modified from the original classification
for the purpose of study.
In order to give students the opportunity to learn independently at their own pace,
face-to-face instruction was supplemented with course information and learning
resources which were provided through the Web site ESL Writing Extension (www.esl-
page.com). The content of the Web site is outlined in Appendix A. The Web site was
hosted by a free Web space provider www.awardspace.com. All of the sections of the
Web site were interlinked for easy access. Designing the Web site, I used Dreamweaver
software and followed the interface guidelines for online educational resources (Deubel,
2003; Serdyukov & Hill, 2003):
1. Simplicity of the information layout and interaction strategies
2. Easy navigation
3. Low cognitive load
4. Relevance of information
5. Unobstructed information display
Besides the sections listed above, the site provided access to the blog and the
Writing Shop, which were added through external links and hosted by www.blogger.com
and www.blog.com. Both providers were chosen due to their easy posting procedures,
commercial-free posting areas, and a variety of administrative tools (template designs,
sidebar options, editing software, etc.). These additions to the Web site were designated
for the online interaction. Both the blog and the Writing Shop operated with the same
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type of social software, RSS feeds, and allowed for creating a database of weekly posts
throughout the course.
The purpose of the blog was to engage students in a continuing discussion based
on the assigned supplementary reading. It was an essential part of the course design
where most of the collaborative learning occurred. The reading was selected in order to
provide the learners with background information for discussion and writing. The links to
the articles and discussion questions were posted in the blog every week. Students were
required to participate in the discussion at least four times during the week. This included
one original post and three comments to other students’ messages. All weekly posts of
the participants were collected and placed chronologically in the discussion log for
further evaluation of language use and familiarity with the content.
The pedagogical function of the blog was based on the conceptual framework.
The blogging technique allowed the students to demonstrate newly acquired concepts in
writing by applying their critical thinking skills in the following learning acts:
1. Analyze the issues presented in reading and relate them to their previous cultural
experiences in writing.
2. Express their opinions and reflections on the given topics by writing comments
and responding to peers’ comments.
3. Synthesize new content material and style by writing well-organized paragraphs.
The weekly reading and discussion topics were further elaborated in writing
assignments included in the instructional plan (see Appendix A). The students were
assigned one composition per week. The Writing Shop was used for the first draft
demonstration and peer editing. The students were required to post their first drafts by the
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middle of each week and exchange comments and ideas about each other’s work. The
next stage included revising and rewriting drafts based on my feedback and the peers’
comments which finally led to the submission of the final drafts at the beginning of each
following week. Collaboration in writing assignments emphasized the concept of social
learning and constructive approach to completing educational tasks. Following the
CSILE model, it allowed for creating opportunities for intentional learning which
continued to increase with each new assignment.
Data Collection Instruments
The case study unitized several types of data collection tools in order to reveal
different aspects of learning experience (Merriam, 1998) in the hybrid environment and
provide answers to the research questions:
1. What features characterize changes in the writing of ESL students in hybrid
courses?
2. What evidence of self-directedness is present in the hybrid program?
3. Which learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, or social) do
students use more in this type of environment?
All the tools had been previously used in the pilot study and modified based on
the pilot study experience. The purpose and the use of each tool in this investigation is
described in the following section.
Changes in the Writing Skills
The main direction of the proposed research is presented in the first research
question: What features characterize changes in the writing of ESL students in a hybrid
EAP course? Since this research question targeted practical writing skills, evidence of
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changes was collected from weekly online posts and writing samples of first and final
drafts which were evaluated for language use and content. It was assumed that the
prewriting stage which included online reading and discussion would ensure a deeper
understanding of the topic and a faster incorporation of the new concepts in the active
language use. Therefore, central to this part of the investigation was the evidence of the
connection between reading and writing which was demonstrated in their compositions as
follows:
1. The controlling idea was clearly stated and focused on throughout the paragraph.
2. Each point was sufficiently developed; appropriate supporting details and
examples were to given to explain reasoning.
3. The language forms were appropriate for the writing topic and style.
4. Writing showed increasing complexity in syntax and vocabulary.
A more detailed analysis of student writing was performed following the criteria
outlined in the ESL composition profile (Jacobs, Hartfiel, Hughey, & Wormuth, 1981),
which is currently used at WCC for essay grading. Grammar precision was not targeted
in this case study since the focus was on the process of acquiring new concepts and
reflecting them in writing through various language means rather than achieving
structural perfection. However, grammar forms associated with a specific writing style
were addressed throughout the semester as part of the instruction. Grammar errors had to
be corrected by the students upon receiving the feedback on their compositions.
The two remaining research questions required specific instruments to address
each point of investigation: (2) What evidence of self-directedness is present in the
hybrid program? (3) Which learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, or
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social) do students use more in this type of environment? All relevant data were collected
by means of biweekly learning experience questionnaire, intake questionnaire, weekly
self-evaluation questionnaire, and biweekly in-person interviews. Table 2 shows the
realationship between the data collection tools and the research questions. The complete
set of data collection instruments is located in Appendix B.
Table 2 Relation of Data Collection Tools to Research Questions
Data Collection Instrument Research Question (RQ)
Table A1: Intake Questionnaire RQ 2: Self-directedness
Table A2: Weekly Self-Evaluation RQ 2: Self-directedness
Table A3: Online Reading and Writing Skills RQ 2: Self-directedness
Table A4: Combining Classroom and Online Experience RQ 2: Self-directedness
Table A5: The Use of Learning Strategies RQ 3: Learning strategies
Table A6: In-Person Interview RQ 2: Self-directedness
RQ 3: Learning strategies
Intake Questionnaire
Initially, the participants completed the intake questionnaire (see Appendix B),
which demonstrated their readiness for academic study and level of self-directedness at
the beginning of the research through questions regarding their educational background
and goals. Thus, this questionnaire addressed research question 2: What evidence of self-
directedness is present in the hybrid program? This instrument utilized the summative
rating scale of 1 (least like me) to 5 (most like me). This technique allowed the
participants to evaluate their previous learning experiences and demonstrate the purpose
they pursue through education. The concept of self-directedness in this questionnaire was
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included in the items referring to the learners’ ability to set their own goals, evaluate their
progress, and study independently.
Weekly Self-Evaluation Questionnaire
More evidence of self-directedness was obtained from the weekly self-evaluation
questionnaire (see Appendix B), the purpose of which was to help the participants set
their goals, critically estimate their own learning progress, and plan steps for
improvement. This questionnaire was divided into two sections. Section 1 was designed
in an open-ended format. It was to be completed by the participants at the beginning of
each week in order to reflect on specific learning needs and plan steps to reach them.
Section 2 had to be completed at the end of the week and demonstrated the learners’ own
perception of their progress and contained an anchored rating scale of four items:
strongly agree, agree, disagree, and strongly disagree. The reduced number of rating
options in this tool was necessary in order to motivate the participants to be more self-
critical of their progress. It also included a place for notes on specific accomplishments
and changes that might be necessary to make improvement. The purpose of self-
evaluation was to encourage the learners to set short-term learning goals, reflect on their
progress, modify learning strategies, and evaluate their outcome. According to Bandura
(1986) these skills are necessary to become self-efficient learners.
Biweekly Learning Experiences Questionnaire
An important part of this study was gaining an understanding of the learners’
perspective on the hybrid learning format and the strategies they use while combining
traditional and online learning. In particular, it was necessary to understand what changes
in their learning behavior were required while switching from the traditional to the online
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environment. Thus, this questionnaire was necessary in order to receive additional
evidence of self-directedness and answer research question 3: Which learning strategies
(memory, cognitive, compensation, or social) do students use more in this type of
environment?
Every two weeks the participants were asked to reflect on their learning
experiences in class and online and the strategies they applied in each format following
the questionnaire items which they had to rate on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). The
rating provided a precision of choice and allowed for comparison between the two types
of experiences. For convenience, the questionnaire was divided into three sections which
focused specifically on skills, experiences, and strategies. This approach helped to
receive relevant data on the above-mentioned research questions and follow the changes
in the participants’ perception of the hybrid learning format.
Online Reading and Writing Skills
The purpose of this tool was to understand if the students found working in the
online environment helpful in acquiring new material and concepts through reading and
writing (see Appendix B). This part of the questionnaire included eight items, which
specifically addressed their reading and writing experiences. Each item was formulated as
a statement in order to encourage the participants to apply evaluation on the scale of 1
(worst) to 5 (best). The participants’ choice of numerical values showed whether they
found their online experience beneficial for their reading and writing skills.
Combining Classroom and Online Experience
This eight-item section of the questionnaire was created with the purpose of
understanding how different elements of learning were reflected in each format (see
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Appendix B). It opposed the participants’ classroom experiences to those they received
from a combination of learning in class and online. Each of the eight items referred to
learning in both environments but required a separate numerical value. Evaluating each
item on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best), the participants had to place the answers parallel
to each, which helped to compare their choices and demonstrated which environment
provided better learning opportunities.
Use of Learning Strategies
This section of the biweekly questionnaire (see Appendix B) was designed to
collect information on the use of learning strategies in the traditional and Web-based
environment and targeted research question: Which learning strategies (memory,
cognitive, compensation, or social) do students use more in this type of environment? It
was adapted from Oxford’s (1994) Strategy Classification System, which is based on a
six-level taxonomy. However, only those strategies that could be applied in each type of
environment were chosen for this tool: memory, cognitive, compensation, and social.
Each group of strategies contained five items, which required evaluation of their use in
class and online on the scale from 1 (worst) to 5 (best). Unlike previously described data
collection tools, this section of the questionnaire also included the total value of each set
of strategies used in class and online, which allowed the participants to show their overall
usefulness.
Biweekly In-Person Interview
Further investigation of participants’ experiences in the hybrid format of learning
was conducted by means of biweekly personal interviews (see Appendix A) which
included open-ended questions related to the participants’ writing and overall learning
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experience in the hybrid course, as well as practical issues concerning in-class and online
learning. As an essential part of this case study, the interview helped me to build a close
relationship with the participants and understand whether they found the online
component an effective addition to the course by obtaining the information that could not
be received through the questionnaires. All interviews were conducted one-on-one so as
to give the students an opportunity to speak freely. Their answers were recorded with a
voice recorder and later transcribed for analyses.
Data Collection Procedures The participants were recruited during the first session of the semester once the
results of the placement test were received and the groups were formed. Two students
from each class, evening and Saturday, were selected at random from the number of
willing volunteers. The purpose, procedures, and possible benefits of the study were
explained to them before the letter of consent was signed. At the same time, those who
preferred to work with paper copies received the intake questionnaires in the print format;
others chose to have an electronic version and were e-mailed the questionnaire later that
day.
The forms for the weekly self-evaluation and biweekly learning experience and
strategy questionnaires were distributed to the participants in the first week of the study.
The completed forms were collected in the format that was convenient for them: either
electronic or hard copy. This procedure was repeated throughout the study.
The biweekly personal interviews were conducted individually with each
participant. The responses were recorded using a digital voice-recorder and later
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transcribed for analyses. The interviews took place in private and the data were stored in
a secured location.
Writing samples were collected on a weekly basis. They included blog posts and
writing assignments performed in and out of class. Copies of the written work were kept
for the duration of the study. The originals were returned to the participants with
feedback.
Treatment of the Data
The collected data were analyzed within the conceptual framework of the study.
The underlying concept of the hybrid learning was borrowed from Scardamalia and
Bereiter’s (1994) model of computer-supported intentional learning environment
(CSILE), which emphasizes intentional learning in socially supportive environment. This
model was chosen as the most appropriate platform for analyzing learning experiences
which take place in the hybrid course. In particular, it was used to observe the process of
achieving expertise through overcoming challenges in collaborative interactions.
Additionally, it allowed for measuring the volume of online communication and
explaining it from the point of view of knowledge-building discourse. These observations
were used to obtain the evidence of what type of communication (face-to-face or online)
prevails in the hybrid learning format. The findings also contributed to the understanding
of the role of online communication in CSILE.
Vygotsky’s theory of social learning and thought and language formation was
fundamental in interpreting the changes in writing skills development. Since the actual
composition process was preceded by the reading and blog discussion in various
academic areas, this theory helped to establish a connection between the acquisition of
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concepts and their reflection in writing. It also created the basis for observing and
interpreting the mastery of the new models through the use of social learning strategies in
online group collaboration. Writing performance was evaluated based on the ESL
composition profile (Jacobs, Hartfiel, Hughey, & Wormuth, 1981) with the emphasis on
thought reflection, organization, and language complexity. Number grades were assigned
for the purpose of comparison. Holistic evaluation of the written work was used in order
to analyze changes in concepts and acquisition of the new material.
The investigation of learners’ self-directedness was based on Bandura’s (1986)
theory of self-efficacy. As one of its integral components, self-directedness was studied
through learners’ responses to weekly self-evaluation and biweekly learning experiences
questionnaires. Following this theory, the responses to the questionnaire items were
analyzed from the point of view of learners’ ability to set goals, monitor their own
progress, evaluate their performance, and determine steps for improvement.
The rated weekly and biweekly questionnaire items demonstrated the difference
in values participants assigned to specific experiences. Responses to the same items were
compared individually and summated per stem throughout the study in order to see the
changes over the period of 12 weeks which were presented in charts and graphs. The
results of the in-person interview were entered in a log and used for an in-depth analysis
of the participants’ experiences.
Validity and Reliability
Merriam summarizes the issue of validity in qualitative research in the question
“of how one’s findings match reality” (1988, p. 166). In this study, validity was ensured
by the following strategies:
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1. Triangulation: the information was cross-checked using multiple sources of data
pertinent to the same research questions (Yin, 2003; Stake, 2006).
2. Participant feedback: the results of the questionnaires and interviews were
discussed with the participants in order to verify accuracy.
3. Peer review: the participants’ writing samples and the results of the questionnaires
and interviews were discussed with colleagues in order to receive different points
of view and reduce the possibility of researcher’s bias (Stake, 2006).
4. Reflexivity: the assumptions and conclusions concerning the processes and the
results of the study were critically re-examined throughout the study.
Since the case study did not pursue cause-and-effect relationships, reliability can
be defined as the property of the information rather than consistency of test scores
(Merriam, 1988; Stake, 1995; Yin, 2003). In addition to using the above-mentioned
strategies, reliability was strengthened by applying the same questionnaires repeatedly
over a 12-week period of time; selecting the participants with similar level of language
proficiency; matching the questionnaire items with the research objectives; and keeping
accurate records of the research findings (Yin, 2003). These techniques ensured “the
chain of evidence” which served as the basis for analytical generalization in the study
(Yin, 2003, p. 105).
Due to the nature of the case study research, the results were interpreted within
and generalized to the conceptual framework, which was developed prior to conducting
the research. In addition, several criteria of generalization were taken into consideration.
One of them is the length of the study (Stake, 1995). Therefore, in order to establish the
basis for generalization, the study was conducted for a period of 12 weeks (one semester).
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Throughout the length of the study, the participants were involved in repetitive activities,
such as blog discussions, which allowed for observing common trends in learning
behavior and language use. In addition, weekly and biweekly questionnaires and
interviews contained the same questions so as to refine the generalization (Stake).
Summary
This chapter discussed the methodology of the case study, which was conducted
for a period of 12 weeks in order to investigate the features which can be attributed to
changes in the writing of adult ESL students in a hybrid EAP course, as well as their
experiences, self-directedness, and learning strategies. In order to address these aspects of
hybrid learning from the learners’ perspective, the data were collected by means of
weekly and biweekly questionnaires and open-ended interviews. The progress in writing
performance was evaluated based on the weekly writing projects, blog posts, and samples
of in-class writing assignments. The obtained evidence was analyzed within the
conceptual framework, which included Vygotsky’s theory of social learning, Bandura’s
theory of self-efficacy, and Scardamalia and Bereiter’s CSILE model. The issues of
validity and reliability regarding this case study were also addressed in this chapter.
In more detail, the process of collecting and treating the data is described in
chapter 4, which also includes the organization of the hybrid course and discusses the
format of combining classroom and online instruction. The main section of the chapter
describes each of the four cases and provides a detailed account and analysis of the data
pertaining to the research questions. Additionally, the cross-case analysis demonstrates
commonalities and differences in the obtained data. Chapter 4 ends with conclusions
drawn from the collected evidence and a summary of the study.
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CHAPTER 4:
DESCRIPTION AND ANALYSIS
The purpose of this case study was to investigate the development of writing
skills and self-directed and learning strategies in a hybrid EAP course, which combined
classroom and online learning formats. The investigation was guided by the following
research questions:
1. What features characterize changes in the writing of ESL students in hybrid
courses?
2. What evidence of self-directedness is present in the hybrid program?
3. Which learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, or social) do
students prefer to use more in this type of environment?
This case study was conducted with four EAP students at Westchester
Community College in the spring semester of 2008. The participants were attending the
EAP course on a regular class schedule and using the Web site out of class. The purpose
of the online component was to give the students an opportunity to continue working on
the course material beyond the limits of the class time. Since developing academic skills
is of a special importance for college-bound students, the Web site was designed to
provide practice in reading, discussion, and writing.
The data obtained throughout the investigation is presented in the following
segments:
1. Collection and treatment of the data
2. Overview of the hybrid EAP course
3. Analyses of individual case studies
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4. Cross-case analysis
5. Conclusions
6. Summary of the Chapter
Collection and Treatment of the Data
The data in this study were collected by means of writing samples, questionnaires,
student self-evaluations, and interviews. The evidence received from these sources was
used to create case profiles of the participants and perform an in-depth analysis of
features that represented changes in their writing skills, self-directedness, and learning
strategies used in the hybrid learning format.
The questionnaires included the intake form (see Appendix B), which had to be
completed once at the beginning of the study, and the biweekly learning experiences
questionnaires. The purpose of the intake questionnaire was to obtain evidence of the
students’ prior learning experiences, goals in the EAP course, and self-directed learning
skills. Additional data on self-directedness was gathered from two sections of the
biweekly questionnaire (see Appendix B), which was designed to elicit the students’
feedback on reading and writing online and combining their classroom and online
experiences.
Both tools consisted of closed-ended statements that had to be rated on the scale
of 1 (least like me or worst) to 5 (most like me or best). The responses from the intake
questionnaire were used to describe the participants’ background and the initial level of
self-directedness in the case profiles. The responses from the biweekly questionnaires
were systematized in Excel spreadsheets. The average values for each set of items were
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calculated, charted, analyzed for evidence of changes, and compared with the results
from other data collection tools.
The characteristics of changes in the writing skills were determined by analyzing
the students’ compositions performed in and out of class; their first draft demonstrations
posted in Writing Shop; and their blog discussion posts. Copies of paper submissions
were kept in student files. All online posts in blog and Writing Shop were entered in the
Writing Log, where they were organized chronologically by weekly topics and placed
against each other for comparison of the writing volume, language complexity, and
demonstration of new concepts. The analysis of changes in writing was conducted every
week based on the following guidelines:
1. The controlling idea was clearly stated and focused on throughout the paragraph.
2. Each point was sufficiently developed.
3. Appropriate supporting details and examples were to given to explain reasoning.
4. The language forms were appropriate for the writing topic and style.
5. Writing showed increasing complexity in syntax and vocabulary.
For the purpose of analysis, these criteria were coded as follows:
1. CI – controlling idea
2. D – development
3. LF – language forms
4. WO – word order and syntax
In more detail, each piece of writing was evaluated and graded using the rubric
for ESL composition grading (Jacobs, Hartfiel, Hughey, & Wormuth, 1981). All students
in this course including the participants received feedback on each writing assignment
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twice: on their first draft posted in Writing Shop and on their final draft submitted in
class. The feedback included suggestions for improving the content and the organization
of their paragraphs. Some copies of the participants’ writing samples were also graded by
two colleagues at WCC in order to verify the accuracy of assessment and to confirm the
evidence of changes in the writing. The number grades in this tool were converted to
letter grades (see Appendix B).
For further analysis, an Excel writing progress file was created individually for
each student. The files contained three categories of weekly numerical data: blog word
count, paragraph word count, and grades. These measurements were used to create bar
graphs which illustrated the changes in volume and quality of writing. Additionally, each
category was divided at mid-semester point in order to calculate the average numbers for
the first and the second half of the semester. The obtained values were triangulated with
the results of other data collection instruments. Copies of these files were also sent to the
participants in the middle and at the end of the semester as evidence of their performance.
The self-evaluation questionnaires were designed to obtain the evidence of self-
directedness (see Appendix B). They were performed by the participants on a weekly
basis and consisted of the planning section, which had to be completed at the beginning
of each week, and the evaluation section, which was performed at the end of the week
using four options—strongly agree, agree, disagree, and strongly disagree—representing
scores from 1 (worst) to 4 (best). These values were used to keep records of the students’
responses in the Excel file. Then, average weekly scores were calculated and charted in
order to graphically demonstrate the changes in self-directedness. In addition to
estimating the results of the earlier planned learning tasks, the participants were asked to
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reflect on their weekly performance in order to identify the areas that required additional
attention. The answers to these open-ended items as well as the information from the
planning section were compared and analyzed for elements of self-criticism and the
ability to manage the learning progress independently. All self-evaluation data was
discussed with the participants during the interviews in order to have a better
understanding of their self-evaluation. The evidence of changes in self-directedness was
also analyzed alongside the changes in writing and overall learning progress.
The data on the use of learning strategies throughout the course were obtained
from the biweekly questionnaires (see Appendix B). The students were asked to evaluate
four categories of strategies—memory, cognitive, compensation, and social—in their
application to studying in class and online. Each category included five different
strategies which had to be rated using the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). The participants’
responses were complied in the Excel file, where the collected data were summed up
biweekly. The average biweekly values were used to create bar graphs which
demonstrated the changes in the use of specific strategies throughout the hybrid course in
class and online. This information served as the basis for the analysis of the differences in
the use of learning strategies in the traditional and online formats of learning.
The data received from the questionnaires were further discussed during the in-
person interviews which were performed biweekly. The open-ended questions of the
interview gave the participants the freedom to share their own perspective on their
writing progress, overall learning, and practical issues occurring in the hybrid course.
Their reflections on experiences were compared with the results of the biweekly
questionnaires. The interviews were recorded using a voice recorder and transcribed in
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the personal interview log. This information was essential in creating case study profiles
and gaining an understanding of the hybrid learning from the student point of view.
The data collected for each individual case of the study are further discussed in
this chapter in their application to the research questions.
Overview of the Hybrid EAP Course
First Impressions
For both students and instructors, the beginning of the semester is an exciting time
when the goals and expectations are high, and the reality of heavy workload and course
requirements has not yet affected the enthusiasm. Over the past year, my excitement has
been mixed with the anxiety of introducing my students to a new way of learning. The
hybrid EAP course is unusual in many ways. It requires a good amount of self-discipline
and dedication from the students in order to benefit from it to the fullest. Since part of the
learning takes place online, typing skills and at least basic familiarity with the Internet are
essential. However, the most challenging aspect of the hybrid format is accepting the fact
that learning continues outside of class. For ESL students who are accustomed to seeing
the teacher as the main source of knowledge, the transition to independent study is a
complicated and often painful process. The fear of doing things without direct
supervision makes the first few weeks the hardest time of the semester. Students get
confused in their assignments, due dates, posting procedures, and everything else related
to the use of the class Web site. My e-mail box is flooded with pleas for help even though
all the information is posted online. Then, little by little, the shock wave recedes and the
real work begins.
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As always, my main concern was whether the students would understand the
benefits of the hybrid format of learning and accept it. Success usually depends on what
they want to accomplish in 10-12 weeks and how soon they want to start college.
However, due to the diversity of the ESL population at WCC, it is impossible to predict
what needs motivate the students to enter the EAP program. Although most of them
intend to study in college, their plans do not always include specific time frame.
Preparation for college is not the only reason why students enroll in this program. Au
pairs, for example, usually take English courses as a contract requirement and may not be
interested in starting college in the US. As a result, they may have perfect attendance but
little progress. Some students join the program because they want to practice writing
when in fact they need spelling. Only a few of them try to adjust and finish the course
once they realize they chose the wrong program. Finally, there are those who have taken
the highest ESL level and simply want to learn more. For them, the EAP course is a
“promotion” rather than a concrete need to acquire academic skills. Knowing that I may
have a very diverse mix of needs and interests made me a little apprehensive about
presenting the Web site and the course requirements.
The first week of classes confirmed some of my fears and brought surprises as
well. The range of ages, learning needs, and personal interests was tremendous in both
groups. Regardless of the reasons that brought these students to the program, the common
theme appeared to be the goal of improving English skills. As I introduced them to the
idea of the hybrid learning and demonstrated the Web site, their reaction gradually
changed from curiosity to confusion and ended in total disbelief. This reaction was
understandable and expected. There was a sigh of relief when I reassured them that I
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would be involved in everything they do online, and they could reach me any time they
needed help. Yet some students immediately saw this learning format as an opportunity
to make faster progress. To my surprise, I had no problem finding participants for my
study.
It took a good deal of patience and optimism to go through the first few online
assignments with the students who had never used the Internet for learning before. Even
though the Web site was easy to navigate, there seemed to be an ever-present fear of
technology, especially among the older students. However, the technical aspect was not
as troublesome as the social one. This semester, my classes were especially culturally
diverse. In addition to the wide representation of countries from South and Central
America, there were several students from Eastern Europe, Asia, and Africa. Since
cultural norms affect the way people learn and interact with one another, the first few
weeks were especially challenging in creating an online community of learners. Some
were even trying to avoid using the Web site for fear of doing or saying something
wrong, but soon they realized that it was as much a part of the course as their class work
and joined in the discussion.
Hybrid Course Organization
The hybrid course was organized as a continuing cycle of introducing new
material in class, internalizing it online, reviewing it upon returning to class, and
continuing the work online. Thus, learning occurred in a cycle of initiation/revision
stages, which took place in class, and expansion through reading, discussion, and writing
activities online as shown in Figure 1. Such organization allowed each step of the cycle to
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iterate the material at a higher level by adding new information in order to “increase
learning with each cycle” (Serdyukov & Ryan, 2008, p. 90).
Figure 1. Diagram showing organization of the hybrid EAP course.
The cyclical nature of the hybrid learning made it possible to double the amount
of material and practice activities incorporated into each lesson. For instance, the
initiation stage in Week 5 included presentation of paragraphs of reasons. It was
integrated with the literature module, which was based on The Use of Force by William
Carlos Williams. Following the introduction to this writing style and practice in class, the
students discussed the story online using the questions posted on the class blog (see
Appendix A).
Students in the night program, who had two classes a week, were introduced to
the paragraphs of reasons in their first session of Week 5. They read and discussed the
story online until their second session, when they revised this topic in class. Then they
Expansion Read
Discuss Write
Revision Explain Review Practice
Expansion Read
Discuss Write
Initiation Explain
Demonstrate Practice
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continued working online the rest of the week. The Saturday group, who met only once a
week, had both revision of the previous lesson and introduction of the new one in the
same class. By the middle of the week, both groups were required to post first draft on
the topic “The Reasons for the Conflict between the Characters in the Story The Use of
Force.” When the feedback on their drafts was posted, they proceeded with making
changes and preparing their final drafts to be submitted in the first class of the following
week. An example of a typical weekly assignment can be found in Appendix B.
The primary elements of the expansion stage were blog discussions of the
assigned reading and paragraph demonstrations in Writing Shop. In addition, the students
had access to the online resources which included articles, grammar tutorials and
worksheets, writing tutorials, online dictionaries, and language reference sites.
Feedback throughout the Course
None of the four participants had been familiar with the hybrid learning format
before the study. It was especially interesting for me to see their feedback on the learning
experiences in this course. However, not all steps were easy to make. Besides the
challenge of acquiring online study skills, my participants had to learn self-evaluation
techniques and monitor their own progress. The weekly self-evaluation form, which was
the shortest and the easiest from my point of view, was initially the most difficult one
among the data collection tools the students used independently. There was some
confusion in setting goals and planning steps to reach goals. Some of the first self-
evaluation forms included goals that were too general to be completed in one week (e.g.,
“Improve my English”), and the steps did not relate to the goals. Another issue was
targeting specific skills to improve at the beginning of the week and evaluating the
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improvement when the week was over. Sometimes, these areas also showed unrelated
activities. Evidently, a demonstration was necessary, so I created a sample of a completed
self-evaluation form, e-mailed it to all four students, and thus prevented further
discrepancies.
On the other hand, the students had no difficulties completing the biweekly
learning experiences questionnaires even though they contained more items. Besides a
few questions which had to be clarified, there was no confusion either regarding the
meaning or the assessment. All participants agreed that it was easier for them to choose
the values for the items than to decide for themselves which items to include in the
weekly form and evaluate the results. Evidently, the difference can be explained by
specific skills required by each instrument. Whereas working with the questionnaires they
could approach the items within a concrete learning situation, the self-evaluation form
was based on the principles of self-directedness which presumed a higher level of
abstract and critical thinking skills. Above all, the students had to know their strengths
and weaknesses and choose the paths to achieving better results in the areas that needed
improvement. They had to be able to judge their performance and plan the necessary
changes on their way to success. These metacognitive strategies, which constitute self-
efficacy (Bandura, 1977, 1986; Oxford, 1990), require much more self-awareness than
evaluation of external sources of learning.
Besides the questionnaires, the participants attended in-person interviews, which
gave me the most important insight into their experiences during the course. The
interviews were scheduled individually with each participant with an interval of two
weeks. This allowed the students to accumulate the experiences and share their concerns
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and successes. One of the most significant areas of feedback was their online learning
experience which included communication with peers. Since none of the participants had
ever used CMC for learning before, the common issue during the first few weeks was the
fear of interacting with other students online. However, this fear was not caused by
feeling exposed on the Web but by the awareness of their language problems and the
possibility of being misunderstood. In order to simplify the posting procedure and
maintain privacy, the students were instructed not to create personal profiles. Each post
appeared under the name of the author unlinked to the e-mail address or other personal
information. Another stumbling block was the cultural diversity among their classmates.
They were reluctant to refer to other people’s post or ask questions for fear of
inadvertently upsetting someone’s cultural or religious feelings. This phase passed soon
once the students became more familiar with one another even though some of them
studied in different groups and never met in person.
Summary. While creating this hybrid course, I considered students’ learning
needs, self-discipline, and learning skills as some of the main factors affecting a
successful integration of the online component into traditional instruction. Therefore, I
designed the online activities in this course as a continuation and expansion of the class
instruction with the focus on practical applications of the language skills.
The beginning of a hybrid course was as important as its development and
organization. In this stage, different technical and social issues became inevitable.
Therefore, all procedures had to be explained and demonstrated both in class and online.
It was also essential that the students receive enough support and encouragement during
the first two weeks of instruction.
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The English language skills of the students in an EAP course were another serious
factor of success. On the one hand, their language processing skills, particularly when
dealing with online materials, were not always adequate to ensure successful independent
study. Thus, it became crucial to provide them with clear step-by-step directions for each
assignment. On the other hand, they were not proficient enough to communicate their
ideas fluently in writing, which affected their willingness to interact with their peers
online in the beginning of the course. Since interaction was especially important in
creating a learning community, it was encouraged both in class and online.
Case Studies
Case 1: Yana—“The Team Player”
I find that it is important to learn things besides the language because it gives knowledge. Grammar is not enough to be an educated person. I go to school because I have a goal which I desire to reach, and I really enjoy learning more. The epigraph above, which was taken from one of the interviews with Yana, gives
the most precise idea of her as a person and a learner. She impressed me with her
positive, optimistic outlook on her learning experiences and her upbeat personality. Each
week, I was discovering new characteristics that helped me assemble her portrait and
understand what qualities contributed to her success. Sociable and tolerant to the
mistakes of others, Yana found that the way to reaching her own goals lay through
sharing her knowledge with those who needed support and accepting help from her more
advanced peers. In class and online, she acted as a team player willing to consider
everyone’s opinions and contribute her own.
Yana’s personal journey is intriguing. She grew up in a small town on the Black
Sea coast of Russia. It seems that her career choices had no specific plan. Upon receiving
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a degree in early childhood education, she decided to study law. With another degree in
hand, she moved abroad before she had a chance to practice her newly acquired
profession. Her marriage to a German citizen brought her first to Switzerland, then to
England, and finally to the United States. Among the diverse education she received in
her native country, foreign languages did not play a significant role. In Switzerland,
learning German became her priority. Living in London for two years, she was taking
English courses which helped her acquire some basic communication skills and grammar.
In this country, English continues to be in the center of her attention. She realizes that
neither of her Russian degrees can be used in the US. Yet she is not satisfied with a
career of a homemaker and sees returning to school as only a matter of time.
Hybrid Course through the Eyes of the Team Player
The beginning of the course was a difficult time for Yana. Along with new
language, culture, and academic requirements, she found herself surrounded by people
whose behavior often puzzled her. During her college years in Russia, she became
accustomed to viewing a class of students as a team that shared responsibilities for
everyone’s success. With her background, it was natural to have high expectations of her
classmates. Not being familiar with the typical ESL population in a continuing education
program, she was surprised to find that not all the students were as motivated and willing
to support one another as she was.
Not everybody used the blog over the past two weeks…I don’t know the reason. There wasn’t much interaction. Maybe they don’t know how to do it yet. Yana shared her disappointment with me during our first interview, and although
I could relate to her feelings, I also knew that such situations were not unusual. Making
money often takes priority for immigrant adults, and study time is sacrificed for work and
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family needs. Through my teaching experience, I became well aware of the fears and
difficulties of adult ESL students which more often than not reduce their chances for
success. I listened to Yana and thought how much passion for learning she would need to
resist the influence of the majority.
Along with some frustrations of the first two weeks, there were a few small
victories which she was happy to report. Yana couldn’t hide her excitement when she
talked about her first successful experiences in the hybrid course. It was the first time she
was combining classroom and online learning, and now her overall learning was
beginning to acquire structure and sense. She realized that the Web site continued the
work which started in class and was happy to receive support outside the classroom, “In
class I get the background, and online I can put it in practice.”
Among the difficulties of the first two weeks of hybrid learning, there were also
some personality issues. Yana felt that her blog posts were good enough for others to see.
Her low self-esteem was blocking her progress until she compared her posts with those of
her classmates.
At first, I was embarrassed to post my comments because my English is not very good. I only use it when I go to the store. Then I saw other people’s messages, and sometimes it was hard to understand them because they were poorly written, so I realized that I am not the only one who has a problem. It was interesting to see the change in Yana’s reaction to the hybrid format in later
interviews. Her impression in the first two weeks was that a combination of work in class
and online gave her more opportunities to practice writing, express her thoughts, and
learn new things in general. By the middle of the semester, Yana’s preference was given
to work online rather than work in class.
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In class, we don’t always have a chance to exchange ideas, but online I found that I was encouraged to say more and express more of my own thinking. I had to read more on my own and look for more information. When the anxiety of the first few weeks receded, she took full advantage of
studying in class and using the Web site on her own. She discovered an abundance of
grammar and writing resources which the textbook did not offer and which were much
more convenient to use.
The online resources were more effective for me because they had more information, everything was clear, and I could do practical activities. Although Yana embraced the hybrid format as an opportunity to improve her
language skills and general knowledge, she continued clinging to the traditional views on
interaction in the first part of the semester. She felt that interaction involved face-to-face
situations and found that she had more opportunities for collaboration with others in class
than online where she focused more on writing messages than communicating with
people.
I have no choice when I work in class. Using the blog is interesting and new for me, but I haven’t studied this way before, so I focus more on writing messages than on collaborating with people. At the end of the semester, however, online interaction began to show better
results than interaction in class, where the pace and knowledge sharing could be affected
by various social factors such as mood, fatigue, level of preparation, and other issues
adult students often bring to their learning environment. Online collaboration was free
and open to anyone who wanted to learn together, whereas in class the students have to
collaborate regardless of their personal desire to do so.
I feel that I have more collaboration online than in class at this point. The people come to class tired and don’t want to think. But online I see many ideas from
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many different people. I could see what other people are thinking even though it is not easy for them to say what they want. Compared to the interaction in class, the blog is getting more interesting. In one of the last interviews, Yana added a personal perspective on the course
which brought up the issue of self-esteem again. Being a wife and a stay-at-home mom,
she started to forget what it was like to discuss serious social topics and use academic
language. The hybrid course helped her to quickly restore her learning skills by
immersing her in a constant flow of reading, analyzing, discussing, and writing. Although
she continued learning the language conscientiously, she embraced every topic as an
opportunity to expand her general knowledge, which improved her feeling of self-worth.
For the past few years, I stayed at home with my baby, cooked, cleaned, took care of my husband, but now I am my old self again. I couldn’t speak about complex topics the way I could have in my native language. But now I can. It’s a very good feeling. Even my husband looks at me differently because he sees that I am not only a housewife but also an educated person. The hybrid EAP course became a turning point in Yana’s academic and personal
transformation. In addition to showing a dramatic improvement in her language skills,
she raised her confidence level as a learner and a person. By combining different
resources and modes of learning in the hybrid course, Yana was able to use her full
potential, which made her learning experience truly rewarding.
Evidence and Discussion of Changes in Yana’s Writing Skills
Collecting Yana’s weekly paragraph writing assignments and blog posts, I was
able to see positive changes in many areas. At the beginning of the semester, her writing
was dominated by errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation, and her first paragraphs
lacked structure and focus. Throughout the semester, Yana’s most noticeable
improvement occurred in the paragraph organization, development of ideas, and the use
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of language in general. Whereas in the first week of the course, she was not able to
present her controlling idea clearly in the beginning of her paragraph, her later writing
assignments are properly organized and focused on the development of the items
included in the controlling idea. Along with that, there were positive changes in syntax,
spelling, and grammar. Table 3 summarizes the most common problems at the beginning
of the semester and the changes that took place as a result of the hybrid learning.
Table 3 Comparison of Yana’s Writing in First and Last Quarters
Code Problem First quarter Last quarter
CI Controlling
idea
Wrong placement of CI; unclear CI CI is clear and stated at the beginning of
the composition
D Development D does not follow CI; ideas
disorganized & unfinished
D is thorough & follows CI; D is
supported by details & examples
LF Language
forms
Multiple problems in choice of LF
in short paragraphs; written
language production is limited
Problems in choice of LF continue, but the
paragraphs are much longer & written
language production has increased
Grammar &
spelling
Many errors in the use of articles &
agreement; multiple spelling errors
Considerable improvement in agreement
and spelling but still many errors in the
use of articles
Average grade 77.7 (C+) 95.3 (A-)
The following samples from Yana’s writing illustrate her growth in these areas.
Complete texts of these paragraphs and samples of Yana’s blog posts can be found in
Appendix C.
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Sample 1
In the last few years, in all over world, increase the problem of plagiarism which concern not just creators of any literary, musical or scientific treatise but students and scholars as well. Let try to understand (to investigate) whether is plagiarism a crime. In fact, stealing any ideas or extracts of other people with the object of profit motive definitely classify as a crime because it breaks copyright law. However, whether students how do plagiarize are a crime or they are simply cheater which violate “honor codes based on trust between students and faculty.” In this assignment from Week 1, students were supposed to answer the questions
whether plagiarism is a crime. It is difficult to identify Yana’s main idea. This passage
contains multiple errors in organization and syntax, which obscure the point she is trying
to make. Sometimes, the meaning is not clear because of misspelled or misused words:
treatise (work), object (purpose), how (who). Other major problems include word order
in the sentence and grammar forms. For instance, increase the problem shows a reversed
order and the wrong verb tense. Although these errors reappear in Yana’s later
paragraphs, they are not as frequent and do not interfere with understanding.
Sample 2
Immigration is international phenomenon, and typically for all of well-known countries. There are a number of reasons of immigration, but would like to dwell upon a following main reasons: sociel and economicel problems, economical and business cooperation between countries and an escape from political, race or religious persecutions. This paragraph from Week 4 shows a much better organization than earlier in the
semester. Even though the controlling idea is not effectively introduced, the paragraph is
unified and logically organized. This passage demonstrates that, Yana learned to
formulate a topic sentence. In this case, it is clear that she was focusing on the reasons for
immigration. There is no reversed word order in this sample; however, some sentences
are incomplete. Among grammar errors, there are problems with the use of articles and
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subject-verb agreement. This paragraph also contains many spelling errors, which may be
the result of poor revision. In spite of these problems, Yana was able to explain her points
of view and stay focused on the three factors that cause immigration, which she presented
in the topic sentence. As a result, it is much easier to follow her ideas.
Sample 3
Nowadays, using Internet makes the process of receiving any information about colleges and its courses much easier. If you are interested in some Accounting course, a good point to start is at www.sunywcc.edu/home.htm Web site, which belongs to Westchester Community College (WCC). The process of finding out about an Accounting course on their Web site will not be difficult. You only have to follow a few successive steps.
This passage from Week 7 shows considerable progress in paragraph
development and language use. The introduction and the topic sentence are much better
written than in the other examples. Her controlling idea indicates what process she is
going to describe and how she wants to present it. There is definite improvement in
syntax and spelling.
Along with grammatical and organizational changes, the content of Yana’s
writing and her involvement with the topic have also been improving throughout the
course. Her paragraphs and blog posts reflected her thinking process and analysis of the
information she received from the assigned reading and her own research. Thus, her
writing was constantly reinforced by reading (Smith, 2001). Trying to express her ideas
precisely, Yana did not limit her writing to grammar forms but embraced the new
information applying it to her personal experiences.
Another area of success was the increase in the volume of her online
communication with peers and weekly writing assignments. Throughout the semester,
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Yana was expanding her writing by including numerous supporting details and examples
to explain her reasoning. In Week 9, she was able to develop a complete essay before the
principles of the essay organization had been introduced (the evening EAP class studied
the essay format in Week 10). According to Table 4, the language production both in
blog posts and in paragraphs shows the tendency to increase until the midpoint in the
semester. Yana’s blog activity slowed down in Week 6, when she had to be hospitalized
for a minor surgical procedure, which slightly affected her grade for the writing
assignment. However, the rest of the semester, she worked seriously on all areas. Her
volume of writing remained generally higher than in the first half of the semester, and her
grades continued to improve.
Table 4 Changes in Yana’s Writing throughout the Course
Weeks 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11
Words/ blog n/a 131 243 216 624 369 679 634 479 815 No post
Words/ paragr. 271 361 370 443 440 590 676 619 850 654 1,442
Grade 64 84 85 78 92 89 90 93 93 96 97
Summary of changes in Yana’s writing. In Yana’s case, the purpose of the hybrid
EAP course to enhance learning became reality. Even though at the beginning of her
journey, she was concerned entirely about her language progress, she used the new
information to develop her mind and improved her language skills by internalizing the
new concepts, which allowed her to acquire the vocabulary and syntax necessary to
express her new knowledge. With increased confidence, she started focusing on the
informational aspect of her writing and increased her language production from a
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paragraph of 271 words in Week 1 to 619 words in Week 8 and a three-page essay in
Week 11. Yana’s grades also show a steady improvement from 64 to 97.
Overall, Yana was able to make a significant progress in the hybrid course.
Blogging was an important part of her success. It encouraged her to read more and
produce more language in order to create meaningful, informative posts. Using the blog,
Yana was expanding her writing experiences through sharing her knowledge with others.
Thus, seeking and contributing knowledge (Tu, 2005), she improved her writing skills by
integrating them with reading and grammar practice.
Based on the analysis of Yana’s written work, the features that characterize
changes in Yana’s writing include improvements in writing style and organization;
grammar, spelling, and punctuation; content; general language use; and volume of
language production.
Evidence and Discussion of Yana’s Self-Directedness in Learning
Yana’s responses on the intake questionnaire, which she completed at the
beginning of the course, helped me form a general idea of Yana’s ability to regulate her
own learning process. One thing became obvious: having graduated from two
universities, Yana started the program with a solid educational background and a vast
learning experience. However, she had received all her education in a different cultural
system where the concept of self-directedness might have been unknown. Yet many of
her answers indicated that she had high expectations of herself and believed in her
abilities to achieve success. Further analysis of Yana’s responses gave me a more positive
impression of her self-efficacy as a learner.
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The summary of the pertinent intake questionnaire items that received the highest
score on the scale of 1 (least like me) to 5 (most like me) includes the flowing items:
1. The primary purpose of my learning is (b) to get a better job; (c) to contribute to
society; and (d) to become successful.
2. The success of my learning in this program depends on (a) my study at school; (b)
my study at home; and (c) my teacher’s work.
3. The most important reason for using technology in this program is that it (a) helps
me effectively accomplish my goals in this class; (d) gives me opportunities to
learn more; and (e) allows me to learn at my own pace.
4. The following sentence describes me as a learner in this program: (b) I can reach
any goal if I work hard; (c) I know my strengths and weaknesses; and (d) I can
make and carry out decisions.
The very purpose of Yana’s returning to school showed that she not only sought
personal benefits from improving her professional status but also saw her success as an
individual an important contribution to society. As a learner, she recognized her strengths
and weaknesses and believed in her abilities to control her own learning progress. This
response explains Yana’s view on the role of technology in the hybrid course as an
effective way of regulating her own learning pace. However, trying to obtain more
knowledge, she placed equal share of responsibility for academic success on herself and
her instructor. Thus, setting a high goal of becoming a productive member of society, she
was not prepared to take all the necessary steps independently. Even though Yana’s
initial level of self-directedness was rather high, she felt it was important to have the
support of an expert in helping her reach her goals.
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Throughout the course, Yana’s weekly self-evaluations allowed me to follow her
steps in identifying the problems that needed to be addressed, planning what needed to be
done to correct the problems, implementing the plan, and evaluating the results using a
four-point scale from 4 (strongly agree) to 1 (strongly disagree). Each week, Yana’s
focus was on improving her grammar and writing organization. She was able to recognize
the areas that caused the most obstacles in her learning progress: verb tenses, spelling,
punctuation, sentence structure, and paragraph development. Her plans included a variety
of grammar exercises from different print and online sources as well as reading and
writing online in order to apply her language skills. However, it took about four weeks
for Yana to learn to be realistic about her goals.
In spite of being a generally self-efficient learner, Yana had to acquire some skills
in setting short-term goals and completing them independently. In the first few weeks,
she was not able to complete the activities she planned due to lack of clear goals and time
management skills. It affected her overall satisfaction with her weekly progress which
was reflected in low scores for reaching goals and overcoming problems. Figure 2 shows
that Yana’s self-evaluation in Week 3 averaged 2.25 and returned to the point it reached
in the first week. At that time, her weekly goals were too general to give her a sense of
direction, e.g. participate in the blog discussion, study grammar. Without a clear target,
Yana was not able to plan specific steps and see the result of her learning. The
disorientation regarding what to study and how to do it best marked Yana’s transition
period from following the teacher’s directions to setting her own achievable goals.
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Figure 2. Line graph showing changes in Yana’s weekly self-evaluations during the hybrid course.
By the middle of the semester, Yana became more focused and organized, and her
self-evaluation started showing better scores in all areas. Her growing ability to regulate
her learning caused a steady rise in self-directedness. There appeared noticeable changes
in goals which became more precisely formulated, e.g. improve knowledge of verb tenses
(Perfect), improve sentence structure. Clearer goals helped her to choose appropriate
activities. By that time, Yana had already explored the Web site self-study resources and
realized they served her learning needs better than the textbook. Knowing her
weaknesses, Yana searched for materials that would help her overcome specific
problems. Thus, using the Web site resources gave her an additional advantage in
managing her study. An example of Yana’s self-evaluation in Week 5 can be found in
Appendix D.
Additional data reflecting Yana’s growth of self-directedness came from her
evaluation of online reading and writing activities and hybrid learning experiences in
general. The novelty of completing reading and writing assignments online without direct
supervision from the instructor did not allow Yana to immediately notice the benefits
either for her skill improvement or for her self-efficiency as a learner. The average
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biweekly scores in both areas began to increase in the second half of the semester, when
her self-directedness rose considerably. At the same time, Yana became more actively
involved in the blog discussions which required more language production and,
consequently, more reading (see Table 5).
Table 5 Summary of Yana’s Experiences, Self-Evaluation, and Writing Progress
Week 2-3 Week 4-5 Week 6-7 Week 8-9 Week 10-11
Online reading 4.5 4.5 4.75 5.0 5.0
Online writing 4.5 3.75 5.0 5.0 5.0
Self-directedness 2.63 2.5 3.38 3.13 3.5
Word count Mid-term average End-of-term average
Blog
Paragraph
317
413
585
848
Grade 82 93.8
These changes were reflected in Yana’s weekly plans regarding her general
learning. Some of the topics she wanted to read about, such as the system of education in
the US, Asian cultures, and environmental problems, were not directly related to the class
assignments but were inspired by the weekly reading and Yana’s curiosity. Thus, each
week Yana was expanding her use of English following her own choice of topics and
activities. This suggests that Yana’s improving ability to manage her own study had a
positive affect on her writing skills development and overall learning. However, due to
the limitations of the study, it was impossible to verify this assumption.
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Yana’s growing ability to learn independently is also demonstrated in her
reflections on her classroom learning experiences and combining them with the online
activities. Some of her earliest responses indicated that she was learning more language
models in class, whereas the items referring to improving language skills, using her
potential, and applying knowledge were rated equally. However, by the middle of the
semester hybrid learning seriously outweighed the traditional format on all accounts.
Yana gave preference to the hybrid learning even in those areas which used to be
inseparable from the traditional ESL instruction, e.g., modeling grammar structures and
learning from both the peers and the teacher. This observation was also confirmed during
her later interviews when she remarked that the online environment gave her more
opportunities to improve her writing skills and practice the structures that were not
included in the class textbook. Thus, owing to the hybrid format of the course, Yana
gradually assumed more responsibility for her learning than she had originally planned.
Summary of Yana’s self-directedness. Yana’s progress in this course shows her
evolution as a learner. The hybrid format forced her to abandon her old views and
develop a new style of learning. In addition to her weekly assignments which she
prepared diligently, she started setting her personal learning goals that were narrow
enough to keep in focus during the week. As she was improving her planning skills and
gaining experience with the hybrid format, she became more aware of her strengths and
weaknesses and started addressing her language problems in a more orderly manner.
Having realized that it was impossible to work on objectives that were not clearly
defined, Yana started focusing on concrete problems and specific learning activities. This
strategy helped her manage her time better as well. Having the convenience of the online
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resources, she was becoming less and less dependent on the word of the instructor. The
fact that the hybrid course offered an unlimited access to online learning resources made
it possible for Yana to explore a wide variety of topics (including grammar and personal
interests) and implement her plans at her own pace. This approach made her incorporate
different learning modes which enhanced her learning in this course and allowed her to
use her full potential.
In summary, the evidence of self-directedness in Yana’s learning includes setting
achievable learning goals; planning and implementing concrete steps to reach her goals
independently; recognizing her strengths and weaknesses by evaluating the result of her
learning; expanding her learning opportunities; and having high expectations of herself as
a learner.
Evidence and Discussion of Yana’s Use of Learning Strategies
The information concerning the use of learning strategies was obtained from
Yana’s biweekly questionnaires, where the four strategies—memory, cognitive,
compensation, and social—had to be compared from the point of view of their use in
class and online on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). At the beginning of the semester,
Yana was rating most of the strategies equally in class and online. However, by the
middle of the semester her ratings showed a growing use of the four sets of strategies
online, while their use in class either remained unchanged or, in some instances,
decreased. During this investigation, Yana consistently reported doing more writing,
interaction, and overall study online than in the classroom. As she was becoming more
independent in regulating her learning and relying more on the Web site than on class
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work for her learning needs, there appeared a clear tendency to use more strategies in the
online environment.
Memory strategies. Memory strategies were the only group that Yana
immediately started using more online than in class. Table 6 shows the use of each
specific strategy in this category in the traditional and online environment and their
biweekly average.
Table 6 Yana’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Memory Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O
Associating 4 4 4 4 3 4 3 4 3 4
New words in context 3 5 3 5 3 5 3 5 3 5
Imagery 5 5 2 4 3 4 3 3 3 3
Keywords 4 4 4 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
Reviewing 2 5 2 4 3 5 3 5 3 5
Biweekly average 3.6 4.6 3 4.4 3.2 4.6 3.2 4.4 3.2 4.4
Note. The data show evaluations on the scale of 1 (worst) through 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment. In spite of the differences in the average use of these strategies in class and online,
some of them received equal evaluation at the beginning of the semester. Namely,
associating and using imagery and keywords evidently had identical use in the first two
weeks while Yana was still adjusting to the new learning format. These numbers changed
in her later reports, particularly the use of imagery which decreased in both
environments. In contrast, placing new words in context and reviewing material were
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more applicable to the online learning as indicated by their higher values which remained
stable throughout the semester.
Figure 3 illustrates the differences in Yana’s use of memory strategies. It also
indicates to what extent they were required in class and online. However, this study did
not allow for predicting whether these strategies would be used in the same amount by
other learners due to individual differences in learning styles which were not included in
this study.
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Figure 3. Bar graph showing Yana’s use of memory strategies in class and online.
Cognitive strategies. In the first two weeks, there was no difference in the use of
cognitive strategies in class and online. At that time, Yana was still expecting direct
instruction and was only beginning to discover the benefits of having the class Web site.
When the initiation stage was over, the situation began to change dramatically. Yana’s
responses showed that she was applying cognitive strategies online to a much greater
extent than in class, where their use was gradually decreasing. Based on the data in Table
7, the middle of the semester was the point when all the cognitive strategies started
receiving the highest score. At the same time, the same strategies in class were either
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rated lower or maintained the same value. However, none of them matched their online
counterparts.
Table 7 Yana’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Cognitive Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O
Repeating 4 2 3 4 2 5 2 5 3 5
Recognizing 4 3 4 4 4 5 3 5 3 5
Adding resources 3 3 2 5 3 5 3 5 3 5
Analyzing 3 5 3 4 3 5 3 5 4 5
Summarizing 4 4 4 5 3 5 3 5 3 5
Biweekly average 3.6 3.4 3.2 4.4 3 5 2.8 5 3.2 5
Note. The data show evaluations on the scale of 1 (worst) through 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment.
The middle of the semester coincided with the changes in Yana’s self-
directedness which helped her discover a number of advantages in the hybrid format. No
longer limiting her learning to class, she started using the learning opportunities provided
by the Web site and had to apply more cognitive strategies online (see Figure 4).
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Figure 4. Bar graph showing Yana’s use of cognitive strategies in class and online.
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Compensation strategies. Just as cognitive strategies, compensation strategies had
a pattern of increasing online and decreasing in class. There was a small difference in
their use until Yana’s third evaluation, when compensation strategies reached their
highest level online and began to slide in class. However, their use in the two
environments did not differ as greatly as the use of memory and cognitive strategies, and
the individual values in this category did not change as dramatically within the same
environment as in the other two sets of strategies (see Table 8).
Table 8 Yana’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Compensation Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O
Language clues 4 3 5 5 4 5 3 4 3 4
Native language 3 4 1 2 3 4 3 4 3 4
Help from experts 5 5 5 5 3 4 3 4 4 4
Communication 3 3 3 4 4 4 3 5 4 5
Message adjustment 3 4 4 4 3 4 3 4 3 4
Average 3.6 3.8 3.6 4 3.4 4.2 3 4.2 3.4 4.2
Note. The data show evaluations on the scale of 1 (worst) through 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment. A few observations can be made based on these data. The use of language clues
first grew and then decreased in both environments, while the use of the native language
showed the opposite pattern. In the last two reports, both of these strategies received
identical scores in class and online. My interviews with Yana helped to clarify this
fluctuation. Reading online required serious work with vocabulary. Initially, she was
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using her English-Russian dictionary to translate only those words that caused the most
difficulty understanding the text. At that time, using language clues was sufficient for
general understanding of the material. As complexity of the reading was increasing, this
strategy could not satisfy her needs. She started using dictionaries in both electronic and
paper formats in order to understand the reading in detail. This change was reflected in
her evaluation of the two strategies.
Another strategy that decreased over time is getting help from experts. In this
case, an expert was considered either the instructor or the peer who knew more about the
subject. The high scores in class and online in the first two reports were evidently
affected by the excitement of studying in the new environment and meeting new people.
During that time, Yana was still uncomfortable using English to communicate with
others. She felt that she did not know as much as her classmates, and everyone who had
more confidence seemed to be an expert. The situation changed when she became more
objective and confident in her abilities, which reflected in a relative stability in the use of
compensation strategies in class and online (see Figure 5).
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Figure 5. Bar graph showing Yana’s use of compensation strategies in class and online.
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Although this study did not pursue the purpose of establishing the factors
affecting different variables, it is appropriate to mention that these results might also stem
from the versatile nature of this category. Unlike memory and cognitive strategies that
require specific learning conditions, compensation strategies are commonly used in any
situation where human interaction is involved. In Yana’s case, interaction online,
especially in the second half of the semester, was obviously slightly above her interaction
in class.
Social strategies. This set of strategies showed the most diverse pattern among the
four. Both environments received identical average scores in the first two reports even
though some specific strategies were evaluated differently. Moreover, there was a
simultaneous decrease in their use in class and online in the second evaluation, following
which there was a sudden increase online, while the situation in class remained
unchanged until the last two weeks of the course (see Table 9).
Table 9 Yana’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Social Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O
Asking to clarify 4 4 3 3 2 4 2 4 3 3
Asking to correct 3 4 2 4 2 3 2 5 4 5
Cooperating 3 1 3 2 3 5 2 3 3 3
Communicating with more proficient speakers 3 3 3 2 4 5 4 4 4 4
Developing cultural understanding 2 3 3 3 2 4 4 5 4 5
Average 3 3 2.8 2.8 2.6 4.2 2.8 4.2 3.6 4
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Note. The data show evaluations on the scale of 1 (worst) through 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment.
The overall use of social strategies online increased in the course of the study. In
particular, asking for clarification showed a big change from being equally used in class
and online to being mostly used online. It occurred in the second half of the semester,
when Yana expanded her online activity. Her rates for asking for corrections online,
however, remained consistently higher throughout the course as a result of being engaged
in the blog discussions. This observation agrees with Yana’s learning philosophy, which
implies learning from her peers among other sources of knowledge. On the other hand,
cooperating online showed a slow progress from the start. It took time for Yana to
develop a sense of belonging to the online community. There were times when she did
not feel much enthusiasm for learning on the part of her classmates. As she admitted in
one of the interviews, she did not want to impose on people who did not share her
interests. A team player herself, she did not always find the team’s support.
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Figure 6. Bar graph showing changes in Yana’s use of social strategies in class and online.
Figure 6 illustrates that Yana’s use of social strategies maintained a low level in
class until the end of the semester. Mainly, this increase came as a result of higher scores
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for clarification, correction, and cooperation in the last report. Due to the limitations of
the study, it was impossible to analyze the factors that might have contributed to this
change. However, one possibility should be mentioned here. According to Yana’s
interviews, social interaction online was generally freer and less restrictive, thus creating
a platform for an open discussion. In this environment, it was easier to forget the natural
fears and intimidations of a second language learner. During this time, she increased the
use of social strategies online, which helped her gain confidence in face-to-face
situations. This confidence eventually transferred to her learning in class, where she was
able to apply more social strategies as well.
Comparison of Yana’s Use of Learning Strategies
The data indicate that all four learning strategies found more application in the
online environment than in the traditional one. Figure 7 allows for comparison of the
overall use of these learning strategies by showing the average numbers of the biweekly
sums of values in each set of strategies used in class and online. In addition, there is a
total number representing the use of each strategy in both environments.
0
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60
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Online
Both
Class 16.2 15.8 17 14.8
Online 22.4 22.8 20.4 18.2
Both 38.6 38.6 37.4 33
memory cognitive compens social
Figure 7. Bar graph showing the differences in Yana’s use of strategies in the hybrid format.
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According to these data, Yana most frequently relied on memory, cognitive, and
compensation strategies. The first two categories were especially prominent in the online
environment but had the same total of the use in class and online. Social strategies
occupied the last place; however, they should not be disregarded in this case. Given that
Yana’s level of English proficiency, especially her communication skills, was lower than
other students’, it was more effective and convenient for her to work on her English using
memory and cognitive skills. The earlier analysis mentions the increase in the use of
social strategies online which provided a safe forum for someone with limited verbal
means. However, since online communication occurred in the written form, it required
sufficient knowledge of grammar and syntax which would not have been developed
without memory and cognitive strategies.
Summary of Case 1
Yana’s experience in the hybrid course gave much evidence of personal and
academic success. The online component of the course not only increased her study time
but also provided her with the tools and information that were not included in the
syllabus. The continuing cycles of classroom and online learning activities enhanced
every aspect of her experience as a student and produced the results that exceeded even
her own expectation. For Yana, the hybrid format was the most powerful learning
mechanism in her long-time educational experience.
My collaboration with Yana allowed me to collect the data that have direct
bearing on the research questions of the study.
What features characterize changes in Yana’s writing in the hybrid EAP course?
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The most obvious feature indicating the change in Yana’s writing was style and
organization. There was also a noticeable improvement in writing mechanics –grammar,
spelling, and punctuation – and general language use. The content of her writing became
better developed and the volume of writing increased.
What evidence of Yana’s self-directedness was present in the hybrid program?
Yana’s self-directedness in this course was found in her improved ability to
regulate her learning process. The first changes occurred in setting achievable learning
goals and concrete steps to reaching them. These organizational strategies helped her
develop and carry out her plans independently. Having high expectations of herself as a
learner, she was critical in her evaluation of the results of her learning activities and
worked hard on her weaknesses. As Yana was gaining experience managing her time and
study, she began expanding her learning opportunities by seeking additional information
and resources on topics of her own choice.
Which learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, or social) did Yana
prefer to use more in this type of environment?
Yana used all four groups of strategies; however, due to her low communication
skills, she relied more on memory, cognitive, and compensation strategies and less on
social ones.
Case 2: Gio— “The Outsider”
It is interesting to read what other people post. Sometimes I see different opinions and experiences. But I would rather work on what I think I have missed before: grammar and punctuation. I just don’t see how online interaction can help me with that.
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Just as many South American immigrants, Gio came to the US seven years ago
thinking that “the land of opportunities” will have something for her too. In her country,
Peru, she was studying communication systems at the university. Not seeing many
possibilities for employment at home, she opted for the American dream. Here, however,
the reality was much harder than she imagined. Not having proper language skills, she
tried many manual jobs until she found her current employment at the Catholic charity
organization, where she works as a Spanish editor. Her use of the language outside of
class is limited to some oral communication at work. This explains the fact that even after
six semesters of ESL, she has very poor knowledge of grammar.
At first, I could not understand Gio’s personality and her approach to learning.
She seemed to be evenly pleasant and friendly with everyone, but her friendliness would
stop when learning was involved. Working in a group, she would isolate herself and not
contribute to the task. It was as if there was an invisible wall between her and her
classmates. Because she had serious gaps in the English grammar, she wanted more
attention from me in class than other students (I wonder if this was the reason why she
volunteered to participate in the study). Her questions were often unrelated to the topic of
the lesson, which would put me in a difficult position since the class time was precious.
Online, her blog posts were brief, with no reference to reading or connection with her life
experiences. This position of non-involvement either in class or online interactions made
me think of her as an outsider.
Then one day, working on her in-class writing assignment to contrast the changes
in lifestyle before and after moving to the US, Gio wrote that as a child she used to be
treated like a princess. Her hardworking parents made sure that she never had to do
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anything for herself. In her paragraph she lamented the need to take care of herself and go
to school at the same time. Whether it was the result of her upbringing or some other
reason, Gio’s exaggerated feeling of self-worth made her self-centered and uncooperative
both in class and online. However, in her position of an outsider, she excluded herself
from many learning opportunities that could come from free exchange of ideas and
collaboration.
Hybrid Course through the Eyes of the Outsider
For Gio, like for everyone else in class, combining class and online study was a
new format of learning. The first few weeks were an important period of adjusting and
developing a routine of following the weekly assignments online. I was not concerned
when I did not find many blog comments from Gio during that time. However, in spite of
the challenge of the experience, Gio had no problems understanding the organization of
the course.
We are doing things in steps, which is unusual for me. We start with reading and discussion, and then write the 1st draft and get your comments for corrections. Then we also get some corrections with the final draft.
One of the difficulties for Gio was recognizing her own weaknesses. Having
completed six semesters of ESL, she believed that she could handle the precollege
English course. The first unpleasant discovery was that speaking English fast does not
guarantee good writing.
When I started this course, I felt like I was not catching up. There were so many things to learn and review. I suddenly had to worry about grammar and writing. It’s frustrating to know that I have missed so much before and now I have to do all of it at once.
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However, Gio’s main difficulty was to accept the Web site in the capacity it was
designed for: writing extension. She realized that it was impossible to master the writing
conventions without a strong grammar foundation, “In writing I have to use all the
grammar that I normally don’t notice when I speak.” Yet it took me almost the entire
semester to convince her to start using the self-study resources where she could find all
the topics she needed. In her interview in Week 8-9, when she became frustrated with
lack of progress, she finally reported that she used the online grammar section, and (yes!)
it was helpful.
With just as much reluctance she was participating in the blog discussions.
Instead of the required four posts per week, there was usually one in which she would
briefly touch upon the discussion questions. She never addressed anyone online or
commented on someone else’s posts. Her typical explanations were having problems with
the posting procedure, which was far from reality. When I kept insisting that she send her
posts directly to me, she admitted that she simply did not know how to communicate with
other students.
I didn’t participate much because I just don’t know what to add to the discussion. When I prepare my piece, I see that most people have already answered all the questions and are discussing something else, and I don’t know how to fit in. Generally, it is easier for me to work by myself.
Although Gio herself did not participate much, she appreciated having access to
the bank of ideas where she could find something new and include it in her writing
assignment. Yet, overall, not fitting in affected much of Gio’s learning experience. Her
writing skills did not receive enough support in the limited class time, so she developed
her own approach to the blog assignments. While the intention of the blog was to give an
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opportunity for learning through interaction and acquiring new information along with
practicing writing, for Gio it became a form of writing a rough draft, “When I answer all
the discussion questions in writing, I feel better prepared to write my assignment.”
Throughout the course, Gio remained true to her philosophy of an outsider.
Although she realized that the Web site gave her more opportunities for learning, she
used only a small part of them because to do otherwise would require deep changing in
her views and learning style. In comparison with Yana, for whom hybrid learning was
exciting and joyful mainly due to the interactions with others, for Gio this experience was
alien and insignificant.
I can’t say that collaborating is really my style of learning. I have always studied by myself and for myself. I don’t know what I can get from interaction because I don’t know what to expect from other people.
Not surprisingly, in Gio’s case, the hybrid course did not yield much progress in
writing skills. Limiting her interactions with other students, she also restricted her
language production and missed the essential part of learning that comes from
collaborative construction of knowledge.
Evidence and Discussion of Changes in Gio’s Writing Skills
Gio’s writing skills were developing slowly and did not show much improvement.
Her writing assignments completed in and out of class, which I collected throughout the
semester, were full of errors that often interfered with clarity of her ideas. At the
beginning of the course, I noticed that her grammar and syntax were at the level of a
Level 3-4 student, whereas the EAP program requires minimum Level 5-6 of language
proficiency. It posed a serious problem in spite of the fact that she had sufficient
vocabulary and verbal communication skill. This course did not deal specifically with the
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English grammar. Aside from a few grammar review sections that were given as support
to certain types of paragraphs (e.g., comparative adjectives for paragraphs of comparison
and contrast), the course textbook was focused on the organizational aspect of writing. It
was obvious that Gio would have to be willing to spend many hours learning what she
had missed before. Some positive changes did take place, but at the end of the course Gio
was far from feeling victorious. Table 10 compares the features in Gio’s writing in the
first and the last quarters (see Appendix C for samples of Gio’s writing).
Table 10 Comparison of Gio’s Writing in First and Last Quarter
Code Problem First quarter Last quarter
CI Controlling
idea
CI is poorly formulated CI is generally clear but may be affected by
syntax errors
D Development D is insufficient to support CI &
lacks logical sequence
D follows CI most of the time but needs
more supporting details & examples; better
organization & logical sequence
LF Language
forms
Confusion in LF; written
language production is limited
Problems in choice of LF continue
WO Syntax Multiple problems in
punctuation & clauses; confusing
WO & sentence structure
No significant improvement in punctuation;
some improvement in sentence structure
Grammar &
spelling
Many errors in tenses,
prepositions & agreement;
multiple spelling errors
No significant improvement in grammar, but
some improvement in spelling
Average grade 65 (D) 75 (C)
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The only noticeable change in Gio’s writing was paragraph organization. At the
beginning of the course, her controlling idea was difficult to identify because of the
confusing sentence structure. Staying focused on the controlling idea and organizing the
supporting details was another problematic area. These aspects of writing improved
throughout the course. However, several problems remained. Among them, grammar and
syntax were the most serious obstacles to good writing. Many of her mistakes in the use
of tenses and punctuation were fossilized and required a strenuous effort to relearn. More
work was also needed on paragraph development. Although Gio understood the
principles of organization and learned to follow her controlling idea, her writing tended to
include too little information to provide sufficient support to the point she was making.
The following samples of Gio’s writing show some of the problems mentioned above.
Sample 1
I considered Plagiarism a crime for two reasons, one because people are not honest and two plagiarism people gain their degree with low acknowledge of their career. Students not honest are going to pass their graded with out effort. Plagiarism is a bad habit and it does help the students to be a good professional in their future. You all know classes are hard, but you need to be creative and honest with our teachers. You can always make research in the internet, but copy some job done, is be not sincere with your self and with your teacher. If you are a plagiarism in your class will show when you finish your career and be a bad professional. Also is going to be hard to work and don't have a good skills.
Sample 1 presents the entire paragraph written in Week 1. Gio’s topic sentence is
written poorly and the rest of the paragraph is difficult to follow because there is no
logical connection between sentences or conclusion. The paragraph is full of errors of all
sorts, and the meaning is obscured in some parts: to pass their graded (to pass their
courses); copy some job done, is be not sincere (copying other people’s job means not
being sincere). The grammatical mistakes are intermixed with wrong choice of words:
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plagiarism people (people who plagiarize); finish your career (finish your degree or
study). There are also multiple errors in punctuation and sentence structure. Most of these
problems remained in Gio’s writing throughout the course even though her organization
improved.
Sample 2
As an immigrant of U.S. and base in my own experience I can name three cause of immigration, political persecution, economic reasons, and lack of opportunities for professionals in our native countries. The first reason why people left their country is political persecution, in case of my country, Peru, a decade ago many people desided to run away from there because, the terrorist issue. Many families got kill, bussineses were destroyed and universities were invade for these groups. People have to move on and find other places to live, a lot of them found political asylum in united State. The second cause is economic problems, and this is one of the most important issues in my country, people don’t make enoght money to paid rent, buy their food and buy clothes, so if somebody has the chance to came here, they will definily do it. The excerpt from Gio’s paragraph in Week 4 shows improvement in presenting
the controlling idea and developing it step-by-step. Compared with the previous example,
it is easier to follow Gio’s ideas in this paragraph. However, there are still many errors,
particularly in verb forms, spelling, and punctuation. She has the tendency of overusing
commas, which sometimes makes it hard to recognize her thought pattern. In this sense,
Gio is a typical representative of South American learners. The use of prepositions is also
borrowed from her native language: base in my experience (based on my experience);
were invade for these groups (were invaded by these groups). Therefore, improvement in
the organization was only a small step compared to the overall quality of her writing.
Sample 3
Going to college is never late; if you never have the opportunity to be a traditional student you can still be a nontraditional student. Here are some differences and few similarities you need to know. Age, social and family status, experiences, and
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schedule are the differences. And the similarities are, the reason for study, previous education, and academic needs. Traditional students are 17 to 25 years old; they usually go to college when they finish high school. While, nontraditional students are older than 25 years. A lot of traditional students, have a very active social life, a lot of friends and parties. On the other hand, nontraditional students are busy working and some of them have family, wife and children, they don’t have time to socialized. Traditional students don’t have much experience about life, while nontraditional do. Sample 3, which is taken from Week 8 writing assignment, shows one of the
better examples of Gio’s writing. The controlling idea is clear from the beginning even
though it is presented in three choppy sentences. Throughout the paragraph, Gio
maintains focus on similarities and differences between two categories of students. All
her discussion points are also clear but need more supporting details. There are still many
errors in punctuation which were impossible to eliminate in one semester. However, this
paragraph differs from the ones written in the previous weeks. Gio tried to change her
way of expressing her thoughts. Instead of the usual crowded sentences, she used simple
structures and transition words to connect her ideas. Her new approach helped her
achieve a better result and eliminate some of the confusion due to poor syntax.
Unlike Gio’s paragraph writing, her blog posts did not show any improvement.
Gio herself did not consider this aspect of the course an important part of her learning
experience. My attempts to convince her otherwise were met with passive resistance. All
her responses were posted at once, carelessly written, and based mostly on her personal
opinions instead of the required reading. Without the important link between reading and
writing, her acquisition of the new concepts, vocabulary, and general language use was
slow.
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Not having sufficient practice in processing and producing the language, Gio did
not increase the volume of her writing over time, as can be seen in Table 11. Her
paragraphs were written in a skeleton-like manner, providing barely enough information
to support the controlling idea. Even her assignment for Week 11, which was the first
essay of the course, was the size of her average paragraph. This tendency to limit her
language production indicates that her writing performance suffered not only from
grammar and syntax problems but also from lack of general knowledge.
Table 11 Changes in Gio’s Writing throughout the Course
Weeks 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11
Words/ blog n/a 175 240 191 169 n/a 420 194 308 114 317
Words/ paragr. 133 206 255 312 286 320 230 216 485 270 280
Grade 65 65 65 70 68 64 69 74 78 76 69
Summary of changes in Gio’s writing. Gio approached writing as a drill that could
help her pass the test rather than an important part of learning the language. By isolating
writing from reading, she eliminated the foundation for thought development and limited
her exposure to proper language models. She also avoided using it for communication,
which would have helped her make an easier transition to using the new concepts,
vocabulary, and grammar forms in her own language production. Thus, the most
problematic areas, grammar and syntax, remained at the same level throughout the
course. Gio’s approach to learning did not allow her to make better progress either in
writing or in overall language acquisition.
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There were some positive changes in Gio’s writing which were noticed in better
paragraph organization, sentence structure, and spelling. These improvements, however,
were outweighed by the fossilized errors in grammar, punctuation, and general language
use. Overall, the changes in Gio’s writing in the hybrid course can be characterized by
better presentation of controlling idea and paragraph organization; better sentence
structure; and better spelling.
Evidence and Discussion of Gio’s Self-Directedness in Learning
My first impression of Gio’s level of self-directedness was received from her
intake questionnaire. I was surprised to see the discrepancy between the highest values
given to the purpose of learning and rather modest evaluation of the factors of academic
success and the reason for using technology. It occurred to me that Gio’s goals did not
match her understanding how to reach them. Analyzing her evaluation of self as a learner,
which directly relates to self-directedness, I noticed that all item except the one referring
to working hard were evaluated rather low. I began to realize that Gio may not have a
clear vision of her learning needs and ways of regulating her learning process.
The following items on Gio’s intake questionnaire, which received the highest
score on the scale of 1 (least like me) to 5 (most like me), referred to the purpose of
learning:
1. The primary purpose of my learning is (b) to get a better job; (c) to contribute to
society; (d) to become successful; and (e) to support my family.
2. The success of my learning in this program depends on (b) my study at home.
3. The most important reason for using technology in this program is that it (a) helps
me learn things faster; (b) helps me effectively accomplish my goals in this class;
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(c) allows me to do my assignments independently; (d) gives me opportunities to
learn more; and (e) allows me to learn at my own pace.
4. The following sentence describes me as a learner in this program: (b) I can reach
any goal if I work hard.
According to Gio’s intake questionnaire, she saw learning as an important aspect
of her professional, social, and family life and understood the necessity of studying on
her own in order to achieve success. Technology seemed to be a very useful tool in her
overall learning experiences. However, there was also an indication of lack of self-
efficacy. Gio did not believe that she could be successful learning new things
independently. Making and carrying out decisions, as well as planning and evaluating her
own learning progress, did not apply to her as a learner to a great extent. Least of all, she
was able to identify her own strengths and weaknesses. Thus, at the beginning of the
semester, Gio was not prepared to regulate her learning and was facing an additional
challenge of mastering the skill of analyzing her own performance.
As a participant in this study, Gio was completing weekly self-evaluations (see
Appendix D), which helped me observe not only her learning progress but also the way
she was dealing with the difficulties. Planning appeared to be the main part where Gio
failed as a self-directed learner. While it was easy enough for her to see the end result of
her weekly activities, choosing the appropriate direction and steps to reach it was largely
misunderstood. In fact, her goals and steps were redundant most of the time and did not
show what exactly she wanted to achieve during the week or which direction she wanted
to pursue. Having noticed her trouble planning her weekly goals and objectives, I tried to
correct the situation by giving Gio (and other participants) a sample of a completed self-
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evaluation form, but it had no effect. Her planning sections reflected only her immediate
problems (most often her grammar), which made me believe that Gio did not have a
broad perspective of her learning.
Comparing Gio’s self-evaluations with the actual performance, I also noticed the
tendency to exaggerate the results. For instance, in Week 6, she was planning to improve
her online interaction skills and reported a slight progress in this area (see Appendix D).
However, there was only one blog post from her that week and no interaction with any of
her classmates. Perhaps the very fact that she did answer some discussion questions
seemed as an accomplishment to her. Yet there is a clear indication that Gio initially did
not know what she wanted to achieve each week and, therefore, was unable to set the
goals that would allow her to make a steady progress. Since she was only spending about
five hours working online, so there was no significant outcome to analyze. It is also
possible that she did not see the importance of planning and analyzing her learning; as a
result, the first section of her self-evaluation form was always vague, and the second one
was not given much thought to. The pattern of Gio’s self-evaluations does not show a
significant progress in her independent study (see Figure 8). Even in her most successful
weeks, it does not reach the highest point which indicates lack of effort and motivation to
do better. Another observation in this case is that it demonstrates a series of rises and
falls. Each time the level of satisfaction went up, a sharp slide followed. In other words,
every time Gio made some progress, she took a break from learning until she noticed the
decrease in her grades, which motivated her to start working harder again.
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Figure 8. Line graph showing changes in Gio’s weekly self-evaluations during the hybrid course.
The same pattern can be seen in her biweekly evaluations of her learning
experiences (see Table 12). The inconsistency of Gio’s learning activities can explain the
recurrent problems in grammar and writing she was facing throughout the course. These
problems are also reflected in her self-evaluations, but with little effort to make
improvement. For instance, early in the semester, she realized that she did not have a
strong grammar background. Her most troublesome area was the use of past participles of
both regular and irregular verbs in Past Simple and the Passive Voice. Almost every
planning section mentioned these forms as the problems she wanted to overcome and
every time her self-evaluation was unsatisfactory. The reason was also frequently
indicated among the things she would do differently next week: make time for
homework, spend more time practicing, organize my time better, etc. Thus, in addition to
lack of clear goals, there was a time management issue, which hindered her learning
progress.
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Table 12 Summary of Gio’s Experiences, Self-Evaluation, and Writing Progress
Week 2-3 Week 4-5 Week 6-7 Week 8-9 Week 10-11
Online reading 4.25 3.0 4.5 4.0 3.0
Online writing 4.0 2.5 3.5 3.0 2.5
Self-directedness 2.75 2.75 2.5 2.75 2.62
Word count Mid-term average End-of-term average
Blog
Paragraph
194
252
271
296
Grade 66 73.6
Gio’s biweekly learning experiences questionnaires did not improve my
impression of her ability to regulate her learning. Although most of the time, she
indicated that combining traditional and online learning gave her more learning
opportunities, some of the items referring to being self-directed in this process were
marked low in both environments. In particular, she did not see the way of using her full
potential as a learner either in class or online. Based on Gio’s performance in this course
she was neither using her full potential not regulating her learning, which resulted in her
slow progress in this course as can be seen in Table 12.
The biweekly average scores in Table 12 do not show significant progress in any
of the given areas which confirms that even though Gio preferred the hybrid format to the
traditional one, her online practice did not gain improvements in her language skills since
it was done aimlessly. In her interviews, Gio confirmed that writing was a challenge for
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me, but as a learner she would rather get direct help from the instructor than choose her
own path of dealing with the problem.
Summary of Gio’s self-directedness. Gio’s progress in this course was not a
steady climb to the summit. This includes her development as a self-directed learner as
well as her performance in all areas. Some indication of poor self-efficacy was given in
her intake questionnaire. Gio’s low scores for describing herself as a learner suggested
that she did not have a high opinion of her abilities to be successful academically and,
therefore, did not have high expectations of her performance in this program from the
beginning. This assumption was later confirmed by her self-evaluations and reflections
on her biweekly learning experiences.
I had to look at Gio’s experiences from a different point of view and explain her
choice of the outsider’s position as an attempt to hide her insecurities and learning
problems. Gio’s situation is typical more many students who realize that changes are
necessary but are afraid to disrupt their comfort zone. Regardless of the abundance of
self-study resources and reading and writing opportunities, very little of her planning
involved these experiences. There were also no additional topics that would show Gio’s
personal interests in some areas. In fact, this part of the planning section mentioned
writing as things she wanted to learn in general. Unlike some of her classmates who read
more than the assignment required and shared their personal discoveries in the blog
discussions, Gio never made such contributions let alone planned them out of pure
curiosity.
Thus, in Gio’s case, there was no indication that she knew how to set her learning
goals, determine the objectives, plan steps to reaching her goal, or critically analyze her
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performance. There could be a number of reasons that prevented Gio from exploring her
learning potential such as fear of making mistakes, fear of sharing, poor study skills and
critical thinking skills, lack of experience analyzing her own performance, etc. However,
due to the limitation of this study, it was impossible to produce evidence as to what
caused Gio’s learning problems. One thing is clear: her position of an outsider was
detrimental to her as a person and a learner, which is obvious from comparing her
progress with that of the students who were consistently using the Web site for
communication and learning (Al-Jarf, 2002).
In summary, there was negative evidence of Gio’s self-directedness which
included inability to visualize the ultimate learning goal; plan skills to set immediate
goals and reach them independently; recognize her strengths and weaknesses; and
critically evaluate the result of her learning. Her lack of learning skills and interest in
learning beyond the given task also hindered her learning progress.
Evidence and Discussion of Gio’s Use of Learning Strategies
Gio’s biweekly evaluation of her use of memory, cognitive, compensation, and
social strategies completed my understanding of her learning difficulties. First of all, very
few items in these groups of strategies received the highest value of 5 (on the scale of 1 to
5), which indicated that Gio was not applying all her effort either in class or online.
Second, there were periods of improvement, which coincided with her higher learning
activity in general and were followed with a decrease on all points. This pattern of her
learning strategies matched the data on other research questions. Some of Gio’s choices
identified her preference to use these strategies either in traditional or online format of
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learning. Overall, there was a slight increase in the use of strategies online; however, the
difference was rather small.
Memory strategies. The data on memory strategies show that Gio used more of
them in class than online. Based on the biweekly average values, the use of memory
strategies online decreased in the second half of the semester, when Gio’s online activity
slowed down. Some items in this set of strategies reflect Gio’s learning skills in general.
Associating and placing new words in context stayed at almost the same level in both
environments throughout the course, which suggests that neither of them was used much
to memorize new words and structures (see Table 13). On the other hand, reviewing was
evaluated slightly higher online in the first three periods, when Gio did more independent
work, and decreased toward the end of the course along with the rest of the values.
Table 13 Gio’s Biweekly Use of Memory Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O
Associating 3 4 3 4 3 3 4 3 4 3
New words in context 4 3 3 3 2 3 3 3 3 3
Imagery 3 1 5 3 3 2 2 2 5 3
Keywords 4 3 4 2 3 4 2 2 4 2
Reviewing 3 4 3 4 3 4 5 3 3 3
Biweekly average 3.4 3 3.6 3.2 2.8 3.2 3.2 2.6 3.8 2.8
Note. The biweekly evaluations of memory strategies were performed on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment.
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Figure 9 illustrates the differences in Gio’s use of memory strategies in class and
online on the biweekly basis. Evidently, the peak of her independent work online falls in
the middle of the semester, when her weekly plans included reading and working with
vocabulary. The rest of the semester, she practiced mostly grammar online, and memory
strategies clearly prevailed in class, where the instruction involved all items in this set.
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Figure 9. Bar graph showing changes in Gio’s use of memory strategies in class and online.
Cognitive strategies. Cognitive strategies showed the most stable pattern of online
application of all the four sets. The only exception was the first two weeks of the
semester, when Gio was adjusting to learning in the new format. Although her online
study was not as intensive as other students’, it clearly required more concentration and
critical thinking than her study in class. As a result, her biweekly average values online
exceeded those in class, as shown in Table 14.
Based on these values, repeating appears to have more use in class than online,
which indicates that Gio did not do much reviewing on her own. Recognizing, on the
other hand, received equal evaluation in both environments in three out of five biweekly
periods. The low values for this item may be explained by the fact that most of the
material in this course was new to Gio. However, it is unlikely, given that she had taken
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six semesters of ESL before this course. Another possibility is that she could not
recognize the language forms visually like many people who learned English through
verbal communication. These assumptions, however, were not included in the
investigation. Among the last three items in this set, only adding resources and
summarizing were given higher values for the use online. These strategies relate to
practicing grammar online and preparing blog posts.
Table 14 Gio’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Cognitive Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O
Repeating 4 3 4 3 3 3 3 4 4 3
Recognizing 3 2 3 3 2 3 2 2 3 3
Adding resources 4 2 4 5 2 3 2 4 4 5
Analyzing 3 3 2 3 3 4 3 3 2 3
Summarizing 2 4 3 4 2 3 3 4 3 4
Biweekly average 3.2 2.8 3.2 3.6 2.4 3.2 2.6 3.4 3.2 3.6
Note. The biweekly evaluations of memory strategies were performed on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment. As shown in Figure 10, Gio used more cognitive strategies online than in class.
However, it is also obvious that the use of these strategies increased in the second period
and decreased in the third one in both environments. This pattern suggests that either the
difficulty of the material required more effort or Gio herself exercised more self-
discipline to complete her assignments.
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Figure 10. Bar graph showing changes in Gio’s use of cognitive strategies in class and online. Compensation strategies. Compensation strategies were used equally in both
environments in most biweekly periods. However, on two occasions, their stability was
disrupted by a sudden increase online. This rise coincided with the introduction of the
material that required clear understanding. This is obvious in Weeks 3-4 and 9-10, when
the class worked on writing descriptive paragraphs and analyzing causes (see Table 15).
Table 15 Gio’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Compensation Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O
Language clues 3 3 3 4 2 3 3 4 3 4
Native language 1 1 3 4 2 3 2 2 3 3
Help from experts 5 5 4 3 4 4 3 4 4 3
Communication 4 3 3 3 4 3 4 3 3 3
Message adjustment 3 4 2 3 4 3 3 2 2 3
Average 3.2 3.2 3 3.4 3.2 3.2 3 3 3 3.2
Note. The biweekly evaluations of memory strategies were performed on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment.
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According to these data, Gio had to do more translating into her native language
in order to understand the online reading in Weeks 3-4 and 9-10. Most of the strategies,
however, remained unchanged throughout the course or even decreased in use. For
example, communicating with peers and adjusting messages had slightly less values
toward the end of the semester. Another feature that stands out among these items is the
decrease in the use of help from the experts (either the instructor or more advanced
peers). Although Gio was regularly receiving feedback from me, she never contacted me
with her questions online, so her values for this strategy indicate not asking for help
rather than not getting help.
The changes in the use of compensation strategies are shown in Figure 11. The
spikes in the online activity in the second and the fifth biweekly periods were due to
switching to the native language. The fourth period, which corresponds to Weeks 7-8,
shows the lowest level since not many of these strategies were needed to work on the
lesson. It should also be noted that many compensation strategies involve
communication. Since Gio was avoiding interacting with peers both in class and online,
most of them were evaluated equally in both environments.
2.8
2.9
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Figure 11. Bar graph showing changes in Gio’s use of compensation strategies in class and online.
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Social strategies. Analyzing Gio’s use of social strategies, I was expecting to find
more of them in the traditional environment. It was true in most cases, but they were used
more online twice during the semester (see Table 16). Based on Gio’s first interview and
evaluation of her use of social strategies, she immediately noticed the advantages of the
online communication. The first two weeks of the course brought many new experiences,
most of which occurred in the class blog, where the students were introducing themselves
and sharing their future plans. The first blog discussion showed that the same concept
(e.g., plagiarism) can find many personal and cultural points of view. It also revealed
different levels of writing skills. As a result, Gio gave higher values to the last three items
in this set: cooperating, communicating, and developing cultural understanding.
However, she did not feel comfortable asking for clarification online, which explains the
higher value for this item in class.
Table 16 Gio’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Social Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O
Asking to clarify 5 4 4 3 2 4 4 2 4 3
Asking to correct 4 4 3 3 3 4 4 2 4 3
Cooperating 3 4 3 3 3 4 5 2 3 3
Communicating with more proficient speakers 3 4 3 3 4 4 2 2 3 3
Developing cultural understanding 2 4 4 3 4 4 2 2 3 3
Average 3.4 4 3.4 3 3.2 4 3.4 2 3.4 3
Note. The biweekly evaluations of memory strategies were performed on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment.
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Another increase in the use of social strategies online took place in the middle of
the semester, when Gio’s overall learning was at its best. During that time, the planning
sections in her weekly self-evaluations included overcoming the fear of communicating
and increasing online interaction. It reflected on the increase of social strategies online.
There were also some improvements in her writing and confidence in her abilities.
However, having reached a slightly higher level in her performance, Gio did not continue
to improve her skills; instead, she reduced her effort which resulted in another slide.
The data for the second half of the semester show a noticeable decrease in the use
of social strategies online, which coincided with the decrease in her online activity and
general performance in all areas. The situation improved in the following period but did
not reach the level of the mid-term or the first week of classes (see Figure 12).
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Figure 12. Bar graph showing changes in Gio’s use of social strategies in class and online. Comparison of Gio’s Use of Learning Strategies
Based on the average sum of values in each set of strategies, it was determined
that memory and social strategies prevailed in traditional learning, while cognitive and
compensations strategies took a slight priority online. All four sets of strategies were used
almost equally in a combination of both environments (see Figure 13).
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Online
Both
Class 16.8 14.6 15.4 16.8
Online 14.8 16.6 16 16
Both 31.6 31.2 31.6 32.8
memory cognitive compens social
Figure 13. Bar graph showing differences in Gio’s use of strategies in the hybrid format.
Among the four sets, the combined use of social strategies in class and online was
the highest. However, there are no significant differences in values to indicate a clear
preference of one set of strategies over the others.
Summary of Case 2
For Gio, the hybrid course did not bring significant improvement in her language
skills. She was not prepared academically and psychologically to take on the challenges
of independent study that come with e-learning environment. Much of her progress was
affected by the inconsistency of her effort as a student and possibly her low motivation to
study. Although she saw the opportunities for enhancing her language skills and general
knowledge that the course offered, she did not take advantage of them. However, as she
admitted in her later interviews, she would take a hybrid course rather than a traditional
one if she were given a choice.
Based on the collected data, the research questions concerning Gio’s case can be
answered as follows:
What features characterize changes in Gio’s writing in the hybrid EAP course?
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The features that underwent changes in Gio’s writing included better presentation
of the controlling idea and sequencing of the supporting details and a small improvement
in spelling and sentence structure.
What evidence of Gio’s self-directedness was present in the hybrid program?
The data showed that Gio was not able to regulate her learning process due to
inability to set her own goals and objectives, critically evaluate the results of her learning
and make the necessary changes, and poor time management skills.
Which learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, or social) did Gio
prefer to use more in this type of environment?
Gio used all strategies almost equally in a combination of both environments with
a slight preference given to the social ones. In class, memory strategies were used the
most, and cognitive strategies were used the least. However, these two sets were used in
the reversed order online: cognitive strategies were used the most and memory strategies
were used the least.
Case 3: Joe—“The Leader”
I am the kind of person that likes to share what I know. I just never had many opportunities to do it until this course. The experience in this course is very important for me because it gave me the confidence in myself. I know what I have to contribute and how to do it.
Joe’s experience in this course stands out among the others. The dream of
learning and reaching the higher levels of knowledge has always been part of his life, and
there always have been obstacles to making it come true. My first impression of him as a
person who seeks self-improvement through learning was confirmed many times
throughout the course. Whether working in class or online, on a group assignment or
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alone, Joe had to be completely satisfied with the result. In class interactions, he was
always polite and soft-spoken but firm in maintaining his criteria of good work. Perhaps
because he was a little older than most students in his Saturday EAP group, he often
acted as a mentor to those who needed help. Not surprisingly, he soon received a
nickname “Professor.” True, Joe had many qualities of an in-born teacher, but he was
also a good organizer, communicator, and decision maker, which made me think of him
as a leader.
At the age of 39, Joe is an example of a family man who sees himself as a
provider and the head of his household. He has other relatives in the US, and all of them
turn to him for help and advice knowing that they will find both. Between his own work
and study, he coaches a children’s soccer team and finds time to attend his son’s sports
activities and his daughter’s concerts. Joe, like most immigrant parents, is extremely
proud of his children’s success at school and wants to instill the value of education upon
them so that his own dream of learning could materialize in his children.
For Joe, the importance of learning comes from his love of sharing. He was able
to complete only two years of college education in his native country, Peru. However, he
never really stopped learning or abandoned his dream of returning to school. His curiosity
about life and the world made him read and reflect on things he discovered through
reading. In the US, Joe did not escape the drama of many immigrants. Lack of language
skills put him in a low-paid job and limited his educational opportunities, but it did not
change his ideals of personal growth which brought him to WCC. Joe is one of the few
students I met who took consecutively all levels of ESL from 0 to 7. The EAP class was
another step in his learning journey, and there are more to come.
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The Hybrid Course through the Eyes of the Leader
In order to understand Joe’s experiences in this course, it is necessary to point out
two important traits of his character: his motivation to educate himself and his sense of
responsibility for doing it. His desire for self-improvement was the driving force that kept
him looking for more learning opportunities. Having placed himself ahead of the class, he
felt responsible for learning more so that he could be an example to others. Yet in setting
high standards, he was often too inflexible to accept the possibility that errors are a
natural part of the learning process. The contradiction created difficulties at the beginning
of the course. The result of Joe’s first writing assignment was disappointing, which
caused a “writer’s block” in the following week.
I didn’t do much discussion in week 2 because I had a block. I thought that the comments should be written as paragraphs and wanted to be perfect, but it didn’t happen. But in Week 1, I liked using the blog. When you don’t know who is going to read your comment, you feel more responsible for what you write.
The trouble in the first two weeks did not discourage Joe from continuing his
writing effort. Expressing his thoughts both orally and in writing was extremely
important for him both as a way of learning and building self-confidence. He soon
realized that the blog was the place where he could share what he had learned before and
where he would not be judged for occasional imperfections.
Expressing myself orally in class makes me feel that someone might criticize me. I always have to think of the audience that is listening to me. I don’t feel this restriction online. For my learning, it is important for me to express myself freely.
The connection between his inner world and the world around found its
expression through communicating his thoughts online. For Joe, the blog became the
channel for self-expression. The fear of making mistakes was overcome by his natural
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desire to be heard, to be recognized as an individual whose contribution to the
community should be noted and respected. In his interviews, he consistently emphasized
the importance of being seen as a person above all other social roles. The blog helped
him establish this position. Once, Joe created a motto that best summarized his need for
writing: you are what you write.
Expressing myself is extremely important for me. I never had a chance to express all the things I had on my mind before. Doing it, I feel better about myself as a person.
Since his writer’s block in the beginning of the course, Joe went through a big
personal transformation. As the course continued, he found more and more benefits in
blogging. This form of learning from sharing encouraged him to do more reading which
increased his general knowledge. Not limiting his sources to the required reading, he
often searched for additional information which he looked at from his personal
perspective and applied to his life experiences. By doing this, he was able to continue his
leadership online and stir the blog discussion by raising his own questions.
Expressing my thoughts online has become my favorite thing to do. I would like to continue using the blog when the course is over.
Self-confidence was Joe’s main theme while reflecting on his overall learning in
the course and writing progress. Although he completed the highest level of ESL
instruction, he never really used writing as a way of constructing knowledge. Things he
had learned from reading needed a connection with reality in order to acquire form and
meaning. Joe’s initial writing attempts were chaotic and lacked logical sequence. By
constantly translating his thoughts into writing, he was able to improve his writing skills.
Last night I felt so proud of myself. When I started this class, I wasn’t sure I could do what I did yesterday. I can see my progress now. The difficult part was
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selecting and organizing information. I have a lot to say and many ideas to share, but choosing the right things to say is hard. Improving the organization was not the only learning objective for Joe. As every
ESL student, he had to deal with some grammar and punctuation problems, which he
approached vigorously. He was one of the first people in class to use the online self-study
resources and quickly appreciated their convenience and variety.
I still use the textbook. But the online resources are handier and more useful. They give better examples.
Aside from giving Joe his most liberating experiences and satisfaction with his
progress, the blog was also an occasional source of disappointment. The main issue was
not being followed in the discussion. For Joe, sharing his knowledge was necessary not
only as a way of clarifying his own thoughts but also as a way of attracting attention of
his peers. Although he was trying to be compassionate to their challenges, he often
mentioned that would like to see more reaction from his classmates to what he wrote.
I see that I am trying harder than other people and it bothers me that they are indifferent. But those who post on the blog help me think more.
There were also times when the reaction was not what he had wanted to see. In
his self-imposed leadership position, it was difficult for Joe to accept criticism from his
peers. A message of disagreement would show that someone else had a better knowledge
of the subject and, therefore, was seen as a threat to undermine his authority. However,
the conflict in this case was between Joe’s high expectations of himself and the evidence
of being imperfect.
The negative message from Yana bothered me because she didn’t agree with me and it seemed to be a little rude. It was the way she wrote it. There could be a more flexible way of putting. I was trying to find something in her writing to criticize her about, but I couldn’t find anything this week.
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Joe’s sensitivity to other people’s opinions was obvious in class as well as online.
He felt better when he heard positive remarks about his work and suffered when he did
not find support. Striving to be an example to others, he nevertheless remained a typical
ESL student with all the insecurities and vulnerabilities that are caused by the new
cultural and language dimensions. Yet looking at Joe’s progress in this course, I cannot
help but admiring his effort. The most important thing is that Joe himself felt the
transformational power of the hybrid learning experience which gave him the freedom to
play the role that he defined for himself.
Evidence and Discussion of Changes in Joe’s Writing Skills
Writing was an important aspect of learning English for Joe. He worked seriously
on every assignment trying to incorporate the new information he received from reading
and connect it with his personal experiences. This was his first course that focused
specifically on organizing and developing writing. The ESL classes he had attended
helped him acquire a good grammar foundation but did not provide him with skills of
expressing his ideas in a fluent and grammatically correct composition. As a result, at the
beginning of the course, he encountered the difficulty of choosing the right information
for the given task and placing it in a logical sequence. Due to his expansive reading, he
had many things he wanted to share but did not know how to organize them correctly.
Thus, principles of organization in writing immediately became Joe’s priority.
Another challenge was to match the complexity of his Spanish syntax with the
English word order. It was obvious from his manner of speaking and developing
sentences in writing that Joe was accustomed to using long complex sentences in his
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native language. However, his knowledge of the English syntax and vocabulary was
insufficient to accommodate this style. As a result, Joe’s typical writing problems
included sentence structure, punctuation, and choice of vocabulary. These errors were
much harder to deal with than the organizational ones. A more detailed overview of his
problems in writing and the changes that occurred is given in Table 17.
Table 17 Comparison of Joe’s Writing in First and Last Quarters
Code Problem First quarter Last quarter
CI Controlling idea CI is not clear and the paragraph
lacks focus
CI is clear and serves as the focus of the
composition
D Development D does not follow CI;
disorganized, insufficient details
D is thorough & almost always follows CI;
D includes supporting details & examples
LF Language forms LF are wrong for the context Some problems in choice of LF remain
WO Syntax Complex sentences contain many
errors in WO and punctuation
Significant improvement in WO; fewer
errors in punctuation
Grammar &
spelling
Some errors in the use of
prepositions and articles
Some errors in the use of prepositions and
articles remain
Average grade 85.5 (B) 91 (A-)
Joe’s immediate success in writing was the change in paragraph organization. His
first assignment was disorganized and did not follow any specific order. His controlling
idea was vague, so it was difficult for him to stay focused on the point he was trying to
make. However, positive changes could be noticed in the following assignment. He
considered his previous errors and significantly improved his controlling idea and the
way it was developed in the paragraph. This aspect of writing continued to improve
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throughout the semester. Joe learned to plan his writing by preparing an outline which
helped him stay focused and avoid irrelevant information.
Some other problematic areas included syntax and punctuation. He made some
improvements in both but did not completely eradicate these errors. One of the most
persistent problems was the use of prepositions and articles which is the most difficult
part for a second language learner to master. However, his overall understanding of
grammar was better than other students’ in his class, and it allowed him to pay more
attention to the content and organization of his writing. It explains his above average
grades at the beginning of the semester.
The writing samples below demonstrate the changes in Joe’s writing skills. The
complete texts of these paragraphs and Joe’s blog posts can be found in Appendix B.
Sample 1
People from Peru will always remember 22 November 2000 as the day of freedom from a corrupted, massive human violator, and abusive of power government. Peruvian president Alberto Fujimori after more than a decade of government, resigns by long distance, sending a letter to the Peruvian Congress from Tokyo (Japan) where he sought for political Asylum. Fujimori actually is on trial for his dictatorial government in Peru. Back in September 2000, Peruvian television released a video-tape where Vladimiro Montesinos (Fujimori’s secrete police chief) considered the power behind the throne, is showing bribing to an opposition legislator handing him US $ 15,000, in return for his agreement to switch his allegiance to the ruling party’s parliamentary bloc. The video proved the corruption inside the government already known, and besides others events which follow up, this minimum one was mainly the cause of Fujimori’s fall. This sample is taken from Joe’s first writing assignment which required that
students describe a historical event in their country in a narrative paragraph. Instead of
focusing on a specific event and showing its significance in the Peruvian history, Joe
described Fujimori himself as a person and a politician, which makes this paragraph
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descriptive rather than narrative. The biggest error he made was not formulating a clear
controlling idea. As a result, he had no direction to follow in this paragraph. He also
included too much information which was irrelevant to the topic. His first paragraph was
informative but not successful.
Joe’s blog posts in this week were detailed and engaging. The class was working
on the History Module, which included reading about the Puritans. He was not
intimidated by the new learning environment. Unlike other students who simply read the
article and posted their answers, Joe added his own interpretation of the events and
connected them with the present-day situation. He also tried to find parallels between the
past of the US and its modern history. In fact, he posted some rather controversial
statements trying to stimulate the discussion. Both his blog and paragraph writing showed
that his main purpose was to share his knowledge and opinion with others.
Sample 2
Different nation’s conditions have been the cause of immigration to the United States of America throughout its history. Peru in South America is not an exception. A good number of Peruvian people have immigrated to the United States due to security, economic stability, and looking for a better children’s future. Security is one of the reasons of immigration for them. In order to plan their future; safety for their families is primordial. The last two decades Peru had suffered a social and political instability, due to terrorist movements, and the brutal contra insurgency of a dictatorial government. Thousands of innocent workers’, peasants, and students were prosecuted, tortured, and murdered. Consequently, thousand of Peruvians were forced to immigrate. This passage from Week 4 shows a much better paragraph organization than in
the first week. The assignment was to analyze the reasons for immigration which is clear
from Joe’s topic sentence. His discussion points were included in the controlling idea and
developed in a logical sequence following from general to specific information. Although
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this paragraph was shorter than the first one, it was much better organized. Most of the
errors in this paragraph were in the use of punctuation and vocabulary. Apostrophes and
semicolons were some of the punctuation marks that Joe had to work on throughout the
semester. Using words that do not belong in the context (e.g., primordial) remained one
of the most typical features of Joe’s writing in this course. It was especially difficult to
improve his understanding of vocabulary use without an in-depth study of the language.
There were also occasional errors in parallelism which disappeared in his further
assignments when this aspect of grammar was studied.
Unlike Joe’s paragraph, his blog writing in Week 4 increased in volume. The
topic of immigration was obviously of interest to him. He was leading the discussion by
posting additional questions for his peers to consider. Although some of his ideas were
rather controversial, his posts showed his confidence in his abilities to express his points
of view.
Sample 3
Do you know that girls’ cerebral volume development is faster than in boys? Can you believe it? Well, researchers from the National Institute of Health found that total cerebral volume peak at 10.5 years in girls, four years earlier than in boys. Yes, scan of boys’ and girls’ brain over time show they develop differently. Furthermore, they present others physical and psychological differences. Are there only differences in their characteristics of development? No, social skills development is one similar characteristic they have. The fact that boys don’t hear as well as girls is one of the physical differences that exists between them, which means that an instructor needs to speak louder in order for the boys in the room to hear her/him; it could be one reason for affecting boys on their attention and in their language skills development. On the other hand, girls’ better hear make them more attentive, which is one of the reasons of their language skills earlier development. Sample 3 shows an excerpt written in Week 9, when Joe became comfortable
enough with the paragraph organization to experiment with different ways of introducing
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the controlling idea. In this paragraph, he compared and contrasted the development of
boys and girls. He used an unusual introduction, yet his controlling idea is clear: different
brain development and similar social skills. Each point of comparison and contrast was
sufficiently developed with supporting details and examples. There were some errors in
punctuation and the use of the transition words; however, there were no significant
grammar errors. The volume of his writing at this point in the semester also increased.
Joe’s blog posts in Week 9 contributed many interesting points to the discussion.
As a parent, he included some of his experiences as well as information from additional
reading. His messages were well-thought, informative, and clearly written. There were no
significant grammar errors to obscure him meaning. The volume of his blog writing
increased again compared with the previous weeks.
Each week, Joe demonstrated improvements in his writing skills which allowed
him to become more confident in his abilities. Along with the changes in the paragraph
organization, there was an increase in the volume of writing particularly in his blog posts.
Importantly, Joe approached each assignment as a personal challenge and an opportunity
to take a stand on the discussion issues. This approach required new information as well
as language means. Therefore, Joe added his own research to each topic and thus
increased his volume of processing and producing the language. The combination of
reading and writing encouraged him to work seriously on his vocabulary and helped him
to acquire more language and general knowledge.
Summary of changes in Joe’s writing. The hybrid course was beneficial for Joe’s
writing skills and overall language acquisition due to the extensive reading and online
communication with peers. Since he was receiving only three hours a week of traditional
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instruction, the Web site became an essential part of his learning experience. Joe’s desire
to share with others motivated him to use the blog as a forum for his ideas. He used the
online grammar resources independently in order to find answers to many of his
questions. My feedback in Writing Shop helped him make improvements in organization,
content, and development. As a result of combining learning in class and online, Joe was
able to increase the volume of his writing and improve his grades (see Table 18).
Table 18 Changes in Joe’s Writing throughout the Course
Weeks 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12
Words/ blog 451 216 751 166 815 628 533 815 677 410 598
Words/ paragr. 394 276 292 331 315 339 386 383 353 720 552
Grade 71 86 92 93 90 92 90 91 91 89 93
The classes in the Saturday program started one week later than in the night
program; therefore, Joe’s first blog post and paragraph were written in Week 2. Although
he was a newcomer to the blog, his posts were some of most thoughtful ones. As can be
seen in Table 18, the volume of his blog posts fluctuated throughout the semester. This
can be explained by his busy lifestyle and the pressure from work and family
responsibilities. However, the volume of his paragraphs had been showing a small but
steady growth until Week 11, when the class started working on essay writing. Since an
essay required more information, Joe’s assignment in Week 11 had a sharp increase in
volume.
Joe’s grades improved significantly in the first part of the semester but did not rise
above 93. His paragraph in Week 2 had multiple problems in the organization. He took
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this experience into account in the following week. Instead of writing more, he focused
on developing his controlling idea. As a result, his Week 3 paragraph was smaller in
volume, but his grade was higher. The rest of the semester, the quality of his writing was
affected by some fossilized mistakes in punctuation and the use of prepositions and
articles. In general, his content and organization of writing had higher scores than his
syntax and mechanics. Thus, even though progress was made in all areas, some aspects of
his writing improved more than others. To summarize, features that characterize changes
in Joe’s writing include improvements writing style and organization; content; volume of
language production; punctuation; and vocabulary and general language use.
Evidence and Discussion of Joe’s Self-Directedness in Learning
Joe’s successes in this course were largely the result of his motivation, while his
failures related to his lack of skills to regulate his learning process. My first impression of
his self-directedness came from his intake questionnaire. Some of his responses indicated
that he was a disciplined person who had high expectations of himself. Interestingly,
none of the items regarding his prior education was estimated highly even though his
primary source of learning was school. On the other hand, Joe used rather high scores
describing himself as a learner. This indicated that Joe achieved more learning by himself
than from his school experience. Importantly, his prior education did not provide him
with skills to set his own goals and assess his progress, yet he believed that he was able to
learn many things on his own with determination and hard work.
The highest scores on the scale of 1 (least like me) to 5 (most like me) were given
to the following items:
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1. The primary purpose of my learning is (a) to become a better person; (c) to
contribute to society; and (e) to support my family.
The choice of these items indicates a high level of self-respect and a strong sense
of responsibility for the wellbeing of his family. Learning for Joe is not simply a step up
on the social ladder but a means of self-improvement which can lead to giving more to
the society and his family.
2. The success of my learning in this program depends on (b) my study at home; and
(e) my family support.
All other items in this section including study at school and teacher’s work
received the score of four. This shows that Joe saw himself responsible for his learning
progress and realized that no one but him could make him successful. His family was also
an important factor since he had to divide his time between his study and the needs of his
children.
3. The most important reason for using technology in this program is that it (c)
allows me to do my assignments independently; and (e) allows me to learn at my
own pace.
Independence in learning is stressed in his choice of these items. As a person with
many responsibilities besides learning, Joe also found it important that the course allowed
for flexibility in time management.
4. The following sentence describes me as a learner in this program: (a) I am able to
learn many things on my own; and (b) I can reach any goal if I work hard.
By giving these items the highest scores, Joe indicated that he believed in his
abilities and knew that success was a matter of persistence and hard work.
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Although Joe’s intake questionnaire portrayed him as a person with good
potential to be self-efficient, it was not clear whether he actually had the practical skills to
regulate his learning. For instance, such items as planning, making decisions, and
understanding his strengths and weaknesses were not evaluated highly. The weekly self-
evaluations which Joe completed throughout the course demonstrated that he had to
acquire some skills to make improvements in these areas. In particular, while doing his
first few self-evaluations, Joe noticed that his weakest point was his trying to be perfect
and overdoing. The feedback he received from me on his writing helped him realize that
the amount of information included in the paragraph does not necessarily improve the
quality of writing. Based on his Week 4 self-evaluation, his first step in overcoming this
problem was a more careful selection of information and focus on controlling idea. Two
weeks later, Joe added paragraph planning as a step to improving his focus in writing.
The most serious obstacle in Joe’s learning progress in this course was his time
management skills. Leading a busy life, he found it difficult to have enough time to
study, yet sitting at the computer, he was tempted to surf the Web for fun rather than do
his homework. In his interviews, he admitted that some of his time was wasted on
irrelevant searches. It was also reflected in his first seven self-evaluations, where he
pointed out that it conflicted with his sense of responsibility and caused him stress.
Finally, he developed a study schedule that included working on his homework a few
times during the week and sharing the computer with his two children. Starting from
Week 7, his weekly plans were focused more on specific grammar and writing problems
he wanted to overcome and did not mention not having enough time on study. However,
Joe’s high expectations of himself made him feel dissatisfied with his own performance
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most of the time. He never chose the highest score to evaluate his weekly learning
activities. As a result, his average weekly scores demonstrate a zigzagging pattern in
Figure 14.
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Figure 14. Line graph showing changes in Joe’s weekly self-evaluations during the hybrid course.
According to the data in Figure 14, the middle of the semester was the only period
of stability in Joe’s progress. It was the time when he was able to make adjustments in his
schedule. The rise that followed this period shows that Joe could manage his time more
successfully and changed his focus of attention from matters of discipline to his writing
needs. His Week 8 report (see Appendix D) indicated that he was satisfied with his
progress. However, the rest of the semester he had to handle more responsibilities at
work, and it interfered with his study time and affected his satisfaction with his
performance once again.
Comparing Joe’s self-evaluations with his biweekly experiences reports, I noticed
an interesting tendency. As shown in Table 19, his evaluation of online reading and
writing experiences which also related to self-directed learning grew steadily in the first
half of the semester and reached the highest score at mid-term. There was also a definite
increase in the volume of writing and in the grades. However, his average biweekly
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scores for his own learning performance began to decrease at that time. It suggests that by
the middle of the semester Joe fully appreciated the function of the online component of
the course in providing him with tools and opportunities for improving his English skills;
however, he also realized that having completed the highest level of ESL, he still had
many weak points to work on and was not happy with the results of his writing. It also
indicates that he was capable of analyzing his work critically. However, due to Joe’s high
expectations of himself, he was not objective in his self-evaluations.
Table 19 Summary of Joe’s Experiences, Self-Evaluation, and Writing Progress
Weeks 2-3 4-5 6-7 8-9 10-11 12
Online reading 4.25 4.25 4.75 5.0 5.0 5.0
Online writing 4.25 4.5 5.0 5.0 5.0 5.0
Self-directedness 2.38 3.0 2.25 2.63 2.38 2.5
Word count Mid-term average End-of-term average
Blog
Paragraph
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322
610
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Grade 86.4 91
An observation should be made regarding Joe’s weekly learning plans. Although
his blog posts frequently demonstrated that he did additional research on the topics of
discussion, he never planned to read about subjects of his personal interest. Everything he
wanted to learn and improve referred to writing skills and English in general. Thus, his
non-required reading was done spontaneously, which allowed him to incorporate the new
information into his blog posts but not into his writing assignments. It is necessary to note
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that all weekly assignments for the entire semester were posted on the Web site at the
beginning of the course. Thus, all students had an opportunity to preview the topics in
advance and plan their study time according to the difficulty of the material. The fact that
Joe did not plan ahead indicates a weakness in his self-directedness.
Summary of Joe’s self-directedness. Comparing all the data I obtained from Joe’s
self-evaluations, learning experience questionnaires, and in-person interviews, I realize
that his progress in this course was complicated by the conflict between his actual
abilities and the level of performance he wanted to achieve. Although his ambitious
desire to reach the summit is commendable, it made him sensitive to his failures (or what
he perceived as such) and overly critical of his work. The do-not-fail policy did not serve
him well in regulating his learning process. Instead of focusing on the broader
understanding of the language use, he stayed within the limits of perfecting his writing
skills. This strategy was faulty since better writing is inseparable from better knowledge
of the language. However, in Joe’s case, it demonstrates an inadequate perception of his
abilities rather than actual language practice. Setting his bar high, Joe was also unwilling
to ask for help or accept help from others for fear of showing his weaknesses. From the
perspective of self-directed learning, this shows that he was not flexible enough to try
different methods in order to make better progress.
On the positive side, Joe’s motivation stayed high throughout the course. He spent
many hours studying independently and indeed improved some of his weak points. I was
impressed with his persistence in trying to use some of the troublesome forms correctly.
Sometimes, it took several weeks for him to see the improvement, but he continued
practicing relentlessly. His motivation was also an important factor in using technology
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for learning since he wanted to see better results fast. The contradiction, however, is that
being motivated he still was unable to manage his study time. Thus, Joe’s self-
directedness in this course consisted of a series of ups and downs, just like the zigzagging
line which represents it. To sum up, the evidence of his self-directedness in the hybrid
course includes perception of himself as an achiever; high motivation to succeed; critical
evaluation of his performance; and persistence in pursuing his objectives. The areas that
require further development include adequate assessment of his abilities; coordination of
self-monitoring and planning further learning; and time management.
Evidence and Discussion of Joe’s Use of Learning Strategies
Due to his high motivation, Joe was actively involved in class work in both
environments; however, as he noted in one of his interviews, 75% of his learning took
place online. Not surprisingly, three strategies out of four—memory, cognitive, and
compensation—were used more online than in class at the start of the course. Social
strategies leaned toward e-learning in the third biweekly period. Joe became an active
blogger from the very first week; however, due to his peers’ inertness, he felt that social
strategies were better used in the traditional settings. Aside from his social strategies, all
others show a pattern of increasing in both environments in the first half of the semester
and slightly decreasing simultaneously in the second half. Joe’ personal explanation was
that he saw his study online as the continuation of his study in class and vice versa.
Therefore, using more strategies in one environment led to using more in the other. At the
end of the course, however, the use of all strategies online remained high while their use
in class decreased. According to his observation, many of his classmates were tired by the
end of the course and lost their motivation, so the class interaction was not as enthusiastic
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as before. On the other hand, the blog continued to attract the people who were genuinely
interested in learning. In more details, these strategies will be discussed further.
Memory strategies. The obtained data indicate that, while studying online, Joe
relied more on the memory strategies than studying in class. Even though his scores for
the use of memory strategies in class grew in the first half of the semester, they never
reached the level of their online counterparts. In fact, the difference between the biweekly
averages in these environments increased considerably with each evaluation. Once the
online strategies reached the highest score at mid-term, the in-class strategies began to
slightly lose value (see Table 20).
Table 20 Joe’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Memory Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10 11-12
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O T O
Associating 3 4 3 5 4 5 4 5 3 5 4 5
New words in context 3 4 3 4 4 5 4 5 3 5 3 5
Imagery 1 1 4 5 4 5 3 5 4 4 4 5
Keywords 3 4 1 4 4 5 3 5 3 4 3 5
Reviewing 3 4 3 5 3 5 3 5 3 5 3 5
Biweekly average 2.6 3.4 2.8 4.6 3.8 5 3.4 5 3.2 4.6 3.4 5
Note. The biweekly evaluations of memory strategies were performed on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment.
Analyzing Joe’s use of memory strategies, it is easy to notice that all items in this
set were more required in the online environment than in the traditional one (see Figure
15). Online learning involved a variety of activities (reading, writing, practicing
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grammar, memorizing vocabulary, etc.) which had to be done independently and,
therefore, needed various memory strategies. The fact that the use of memory strategies
immediately began to prevail in the online environment indicates that Joe worked
independently from the first week of the course. Some aspects were evidently new to
him. For example, the use of imagery received the lowest score in his first evaluation. As
he explained it during the interview, he did not know how to relate to the pictures
illustrating some vocabulary items in the text online. However, the later reports showed
much higher values for this item.
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Figure 15. Bar graph showing change in Joe’s use of memory strategies in class and online.
Another important factor accounting for the difference between using memory
strategies in class and online is the time spent in each environment. Since Joe’s program
offered only three hours a week of face-to-face instruction, he spent much more time
studying online, where he had to use more memory strategies. The rising pattern of the
memory strategies in class in the first half of the semester signifies the periods when
learning in this environment required memorizing a large amount of new information. In
the fourth and fifth biweekly periods, when the class continued working on paragraph
organization, using memory was not as important. However, Joe’s last evaluation shows
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a slight increase in the use of memory strategies in class. It coincided with the
introduction of the essay format which evidently had to be associated with the previously
studied material and required the use of memory strategies again.
Cognitive strategies. As shown in Table 21, all cognitive strategies were used to a
much greater extent online than in class. Similar to memory strategies, the use of
cognitive strategies in class was growing alongside their use online in the first half of the
semester and started to decrease after the mid-term. The online environment, however,
continued to receive the highest scores on all points until the end of the semester.
Table 21 Joe’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Cognitive Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10 11-12
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O T O
Repeating 3 4 3 4 4 5 3 5 4 5 3 5
Recognizing 2 3 3 5 4 5 4 5 3 5 3 5
Adding resources 3 4 3 5 3 5 3 5 3 5 3 5
Analyzing 3 4 3 4 3 5 3 5 3 5 3 5
Summarizing 3 4 3 4 3 5 3 4 3 5 3 5
Biweekly average 2.8 3.8 3 4.4 3.4 5 3.2 4.8 3.2 5 3 5
Note. The biweekly evaluations of memory strategies were performed on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment.
There is a strong similarity in the way Joe used memory and cognitive strategies:
both were growing in the first half of the semester; then their use decreased in class but
stayed high online (see Figure 16). Ever since the first week of the course, he started
supplementing his study in class once a week with working online, which made him rely
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more on his own learning skills rather than direct instruction. Both of these sets of
strategies were essential in his processing and manipulating the online material and,
therefore, did not measure up to their use in class where the material was organized and
explained for him. Only recognizing and repeating gained value in the first half of the
semester since the class work included review of the previously studied topics. The items
representing critical thinking skills (analyzing and summarizing) were used consistently
at a higher rate in the online environment and never reached a score above three in class.
Adding resources was also evaluated much lower in class than online, where Joe could
choose from a large number of various self-study materials.
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Figure 16. Bar graph showing changes in Joe’s use of cognitive strategies in class and online.
Compensation strategies. Joe’s biweekly evaluation of the use of compensation
strategies suggests that he was using them at a higher rate online than in class. Once
again, it indicates that he had to utilize a variety of skills and strategies while working
with the Web site. Whereas their use in class depended on the organization of the lesson
and the complexity of the material, online he needed all the strategies in this set in order
to better understand the content. These data also point to the communicative functions of
the Web site and explain why Joe’s opinion of communication online was almost always
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higher than communication in class. He evaluated this item equally high only once during
the course which suggests that his perception of communication was not based on the
type of the environment but on the activities it involved.
Table 22 shows that the biweekly average scores for the use of compensation
strategies in class fluctuated throughout the semester indicating that Joe did not apply
these strategies consistently while studying in the traditional setting. Online, however, he
was using them more frequently than in class. The average scores for the online use grew
to the highest point in the first half of the semester and stayed high until the end of the
course.
Table 22 Joe’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Compensation Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10 11-12
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O T O
Language clues 2 3 4 4 3 5 3 5 4 5 3 5
Native language 4 4 5 5 4 5 3 5 4 5 3 5
Help from experts 5 5 5 4 5 5 4 5 5 5 4 4
Communication 3 4 5 5 4 5 3 5 4 5 3 5
Message adjustment 3 4 4 5 3 5 3 5 3 5 3 5
Average 3.4 4 4.6 4.6 3.8 5 3.2 5 4 5 3.2 4.8
Note. The biweekly evaluations of memory strategies were performed on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment. Figure 17 illustrates the changes in the use of compensation strategies particularly
in the second half of the semester, when Joe’s study online required a more detailed
comprehension of the material. Compared with learning online, learning in class involved
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more explanations from the instructor and did not force him to compensate for the gaps in
understanding as much as online.
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Figure 17. Bar graph showing changes in Joe’s use of compensation strategies in class and online.
Social strategies. Joe’s use of social strategies both in class and online was
encouraged by his desire to share his knowledge and his classmates’ willingness to
collaborate with him. Social strategies immediately received equal average scores even
though there was a difference in per item evaluation (see Table 23). Aside from the
second biweekly period, when social strategies were used more in the traditional
environment, their use online was greater than in class. The last two biweekly evaluations
of online strategies show a slight decrease in the average scores.
Table 23 also shows which strategies helped Joe establish better communication
with other students in each biweekly period. Based on the average figures for the use of
social strategies in class and online, Joe did not need much time to adjust to the online
environment and used them equally in both formats in the first two weeks of the course.
However, his second evaluation showed more social strategies used in the traditional
environment due to the higher values assigned for asking for clarifications and
corrections. It indicates that Joe acted as a student who was accustomed to the traditional
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format of learning. When he gained more experience studying online, his scores for these
and other items started showing his preference toward the online environment.
Cooperating is the only strategy that was equally evaluated in both formats for two
consecutive periods. Once it increased at mid-term, it retained its higher position online
compared with cooperating in class.
Table 23 Joe’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Social Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10 11-12
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O T O
Asking to clarify 5 4 5 3 5 5 5 5 5 4 5 5
Asking to correct 4 5 5 4 4 5 5 5 5 4 5 5
Cooperating 4 4 4 4 4 5 3 5 4 5 3 4
Communicating with more proficient
speakers
5 4 5 4 4 5 3 5 4 5 3 4
Developing cultural understanding 4 5 4 4 5 5 3 5 3 5 3 5
Average 4.4 4.4 4.6 3.8 4.4 5 3.8 5 4.2 4.6 3.8 4.6
Note. The biweekly evaluations of memory strategies were performed on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment.
Explaining his choice, Joe emphasized the lack of time for really productive
cooperation during the class. Online, however, he felt that cooperation was a natural part
of learning due to the ongoing discussion and free exchange of ideas. Being constantly
involved in communication online, he was also more exposed to different writing skills
and cultural views on the discussion topics. Thus, he was able to share and increase his
knowledge more through his social interactions online than in class. As a result, his
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overall use of social strategies online increased in the second half of the semester (see
Figure 18).
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Figure 18. Bar graph showing changes in Joe’s use of social strategies in class and online.
Comparison of Joe’s Use of Learning Strategies
The most important observation regarding Joe’s use of learning strategies is that
all sets of strategies including social had a higher rate of application in the online
environment than in the traditional one. This indicates that Joe spent more time studying
independently online and used more different resources than in class. Expanding his
learning activities, he had to use a variety of skills and strategies to internalize the
material.
Figure 19 allows for the comparison of the use of strategies in each type of
environment. Based on the average of the total biweekly scores, social strategies were
used the most in class and the least online. Compensation strategies were used the most
online, and memory strategies were used the least in class. The combined use of
strategies in both environments place social strategies ahead of all others while cognitive
strategies occupy the last place. However, the fact that cognitive strategies received a
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very high score online and the lowest score in class indicates that online format provided
a more challenging learning environment.
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Class 16 15.5 18.5 21
Online 23 23.3 23.7 22.8
Both 39 38.8 42.2 43.8
Memory Cognitive Compens Social
Figure 19. Bar graph showing differences in Joe’s use of strategies in the hybrid format.
Summary of Case 3
The hybrid course helped Joe discover his learning potential and raise his level of
self-esteem. All the courses he had taken previously did not encourage him to learn
English through sharing and exploring. Having the tools and the format for independent
study, he used writing as a way of reaching out to others and expressing his inner world.
Writing made him realize that his thoughts have form and are meaningful not only to
himself but also to his readers. This personal revelation helped him grow more confident
in his knowledge as well as in his abilities to deliver it to others.
As an ambitious person, he tried to be perfect in all his writing assignments.
However, this approach made him too focused on details. As a result, he could not
combine writing with other language skills, which stopped him from making a more
noticeable progress. Also, his work and family responsibilities frequently interfered with
his study. In spite of that, learning in the hybrid format was highly beneficial for Joe both
personally and academically.
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What features characterize changes in Joe’s writing in the hybrid EAP course?
Joe’s writing throughout the course produced evidence of positive changes in the
organization and content of writing, increase in the volume of writing, and better use of
punctuation and vocabulary.
What evidence of Joe’s self-directedness was present in the hybrid program?
The collected data indicate that Joe had a high perception of himself as an
achiever and motivation to succeed. These qualities allowed him to perform critical
evaluation of his performance and remain persistent in pursuing his learning objectives.
However, he was not able to adequately assess his abilities and manage his time in order
to complete his learning plans.
Which learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, or social) did Joe
prefer to use more in this type of environment?
Joe used all four sets of strategies to a greater extent in his online learning
experience than in class. Among them, compensation strategies were used the most and
memory strategies were used the least online. Social strategies prevailed in a combination
of both learning formats, while memory strategies were used least of all. In class, social
and compensation strategies were used the most.
Case 4: Jang— “The Follower”
Sometimes I feel if somebody did not do the blog or writing or any homework or any practicing, so why I have to do it? If they did not do any work and they are still welcome in class, I can do like them. I know it's such a bad, bad thought. My first impression of Jang was that of a quiet, polite, and hard-working student.
However, as weeks were going by and our collaboration was becoming closer, I found
new features of her character that did not surface in typical class interactions. Our
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discussions of her experiences in this course helped me realize that Jang was a highly
suggestible student for whom the behavior of the majority dictated the choice of actions.
Born and raised in Thailand, she grew accustomed to weighing her personal decisions
against those of the people around her. The presence of community was one of the things
Jang missed the most living in America. Comparing her life back home and in the US,
she could not hide the feeling of frustration from lack of the hierarchical structure which
would allow her to see her place in the social order.
Her EAP class, which met only once a week, was too different from the Thai
school environment. Instead of the familiar mono-ethnic classroom, she found herself
among other ESL students whose cultural, educational, and social status she could not
relate to, and whose model of learning behavior she could not follow. Although Jang was
one of the youngest students in her group, she had already completed her Bachelor’s
degree and was planning to continue her studies in the US to receive a Master’s degree in
Tourism and Hospitality. Learning more English was the first step in that direction. She
signed a contract with an au pair agency and came to New York to work as a nanny. Her
contract required attending English classes, which brought her to WCC, where, in
addition to EAP, she started taking a pronunciation course twice a week. She had studied
English in Thailand, but the instruction was focused mostly on grammar. Therefore, in
addition to cultural and academic differences, communication and writing were the two
areas that caused the most challenges in her new learning experiences.
The Hybrid Course through the Eyes of the Follower
Of all the challenges that came with adjusting to the new learning environment,
cultural aspect was the most important one. On the one hand, there was too much
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freedom in the American classroom, which for Jang meant more chaos rather than more
learning opportunities. On the other hand, the mix of cultures represented different
leaning styles and behaviors some of which she perceived as strange.
I am afraid to get more confused interacting with people. We all are from different cultures and we have different ways of saying things. In class I don’t speak at all unless I want to answer your question. In Thailand it is rude to speak up because you may interrupt someone. Clinging to her own cultural norms, Jang found herself torn between the necessity
to interact and the fear of offending someone while doing it. This situation caused an
inner conflict which was enhanced by the awareness of right (what she was taught to do
in her culture) and wrong (what she saw others do). Once, wiping away her tears, she
confessed that she felt lonely in her struggle to do the right thing.
I feel comfortable in class because I am used to studying this way. I like to have people around me. But when the other students are not prepared for class, I get annoyed because I don’t want to come here and waste my time listening to them complain or ask questions which were already discussed before. I have no patience with that. In an effort to find the proper role model, Jang started giving more attention to
blog discussion where she could avoid unpleasant social situations and feel encouraged
by other people’s writing. Unlike in class, where she deliberately stayed away from
communication with others, online she was open and sociable even though her rigid rules
of etiquette somewhat restrained her creativity.
In general, my online experience is getting better. Now I am more comfortable and I am not afraid to post what I think. I often see wrong spelling and incorrect sentences. I know a better way, but I never mention it because the people will be offended. Social aspects of learning were not the only difficulty Jang had to cope with. Her
problems also came from a different approach to learning due to which she could no
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longer follow the habitual pattern: read, memorize, and recite. Instead, she was required
to think, analyze, associate, and evaluate.
In Thailand, we don’t study this way. We just memorize the information from the books and tell in class what we remember. I am not used to analyzing things or making connections. I just don’t know how to do it. It is difficult for me to change.
Being accustomed to rote memorization, Jang had not acquired either sufficient
critical thinking skills or concepts which she could rely on while processing the new
material. As a result, her language production was also affected. She had problems
developing her paragraphs and explaining the problem presented in the blog discussion
questions.
Many times I just don’t know what to say even when I read all the material. I just don’t know what to do with all of that. The discussion questions do not follow the text, so I have to come up with some of my own ideas and it is hard for me for some reason. Her study online was the first step toward changing her social and learning styles.
Thanks to the blog, she discovered that there were many students like her who sincerely
wanted to become better at writing. Their posts contained new ideas and points of view
which she considered in her writing assignments and which she could not have generated
by herself. This form of interactions not only created the presence of a community but
also helped her improve her writing skills.
I feel satisfied with how much I express myself. It keeps me learning. It helps with writing too. When other people put their posts, I see new ideas and use them in my writing as well. Jang’s perception of the hybrid learning was changing throughout the course.
Having been a traditional learner all her life, she first expected to have the same teacher-
centered instruction as she had back in Thailand. When the classroom environment did
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not meet her expectations, she started taking advantage of the online component. By the
middle of the semester, she could see the difference between learning in class and online.
I think it worked well both ways, but online it was better. Online you can explain where and when and how without restrictions. Jang also realized that the organization of the course was based on the continuing
cycle of introducing and expanding the information. Although this form of learning was
new to her, she quickly developed a sense of structure which allowed her to maintain
focus as she proceeded from one lesson to another.
I think I learned more both ways because the writing styles were introduced in class, but most of the work on the topics was done online. Her next discovery was that the textbook did not include all the topics she wanted
to review. Once again, the Web site came to the rescue. This was a new form of
practicing grammar for Jang, but, as it turned out, at was more convenient than the
traditional print materials.
Sometimes I couldn’t find what I wanted in the textbook. The handouts online are very concise, all the points are clear, and they are convenient to use. I find that it is easier for me to use the online materials. In the book the information is scattered on different pages, so I sometimes lose the connection between the explanations and the practice part. But online I see everything on one page and I don’t have to flip pages. Overall, the hybrid format for Jang was a difficult transition to becoming an
independent learner. There were such undeniable advantages in this experience as
developing the sense of belonging to a community, following a better example of
learning, and having the tools to supplement the textbook. However, there were also
some obstacles Jang could not overcome due to cultural boundaries. For instance, it was
hard to abandon the rote way of learning. Accustomed to being obedient, she did not
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know how to behave in the environment that welcomed a free exchange of ideas. Worst
of all was losing the feeling of security that she used to have from knowing her place and
following a good example.
Evidence and Discussion of Changes in Jang’s Writing Skills
Jang started this course with multiple problems in writing. Although she studied
much grammar in Thailand, the practice included mostly form recognition. Now she had
to use the forms she studied to produce her own language, and it was a difficult task,
especially in the first few weeks. There was an obvious confusion in verb tenses,
punctuation, and sentence structure. However, the most serious problem was lack of unity
and focus on the main idea in her writing. In part, it was due to her traditional way of
learning by memorizing the information.
In this course, students were required to present and develop their points of view
in a logical and coherent way. Jang had no skills either to analyze the material or to
establish the association between different pieces of information. As a result, it was easier
for her to work with factual information than with the assignments that involved analysis
of the material. Throughout the course, critical thinking remained the most difficult
aspect of her writing experience. Considering the fact that this was the first English
course she was taking outside Thailand, it is not surprising that her progress was slow.
The changes in her writing skills are summarized in Table 24.
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Table 24 Comparison of Jang’s Writing in First and Last Quarters
Code Problem First quarter Last quarter
CI Controlling idea CI is not clear; there is no topic sentence; the
paragraph lacks focus and unity
CI is clear; the paragraph is
unified
D Development D lacks supporting details; poor transitions;
disconnected details
D follows CI & includes
more supporting details
LF Language forms Confusion in the use of LF, especially
infinitives & gerunds, adjectives & adverbs
Some problems in choice of
LF remain
WO Syntax Short, choppy sentences; punctuation errors Complex sentences; fewer
errors in punctuation
Grammar &
spelling
Many errors in the use of participles,
prepositions, articles, and voices
Some errors of the earlier
errors remain
Average grade 84.5 (B) 86 (B)
However, in spite of the difficulties expressing herself in English, Jang was very
successful in some areas. Above all, the changes in her skills were obvious in paragraph
organization. She quickly understood the rules of unity in writing. Compared with her
first paragraph, her second paragraph had a considerable improvement in presenting and
following the controlling idea even though the development was not always thorough
enough and lacked analysis. Jang’s average grade in the first and the last quarters does
not do justice to the effort she put into writing. The following samples of Jang’s writing
show the changes in her skills.
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Sample 1
The slave system is the problem for developing country, for example; social , political especially , economic. It was stopped by King Chakri V. Thailand had slavery for a hundred year, ago. Since Ayuttaya Dynasty to Rattanagosin Dynasty till mid of Chakri Dynasty. At that time, we did not have a democratic government, yet and third of people were slave. The slaves were treated by their own boss ( rich people ). When rich people lend poor people money but they cannot pay back, they will give their children to be a slave instead of money. When babies were born from slave’s parents they were slave, also. If they want to have freedom, they might have enough money but it was extremely impossible because they got a little salary. King Junlajomkrow or King Chakri V of Thailand had stopped the slave system by peaceful way, since 1874. The excerpt above was taken from Jang’s first paragraph written about a historical
event in her country in Week 2. This was supposed to be a narrative paragraph; however,
Jang failed to write a clear topic sentence and present the importance of abolishing
slavery in Thailand. Her first sentence points to social, political, and economic problems
as a result of slavery, but they do not relate to the writing topic. For the most part, her
paragraph described slavery as a social phenomenon, but the event itself remained
obscure. No information was given about what exactly was done and how it changed the
Thai society. There were also many errors in the use of tenses, punctuation, and sentence
structure. In some places, there was an obvious lack of vocabulary: their own boss
(owner). Jang received the worst grade for this paragraph.
Jang’s blog post in Week 2 contained very short answers to the discussion
questions. At that time, the class was working on the history module, which was based on
the reading about the early period of the Puritan colonies in the U.S. Having come from a
different cultural and religious background, Jang could not relate to this part of history. A
more serious concern, however, was her inability to analyze the relationship between the
historical and modern facts which was not based on cultural understanding. For instance,
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one of the questions required an interpretation of George Elliot’s saying “the happiest
nations have no history.” Even though Jang attempted to answer this question, she looked
at it superficially and did not develop her ideas logically.
Sample 2
There can be many causes of immigration. Some of the causes are employment, finding a better life and escaping from wars. One of the reasons is employment. Immigrants want a job that can support their life and the place where they move is easier to get a job. The countries where they move have better variety jobs and they are willing to do it. Some people move because they get an advance position of their career. They can earn a higher step and profit. Another reason is finding a better life. They want to leave from poverty. They need money to make their life more comfortable. If they have money they can get the proper consumer goods and the appliances. Also, they can have a good education. They receive an opportunity to choose the proper school. The most important reason is escaping from wars. Immigrants need a place where they can have a peaceful and safety for them and their family. Nobody needs to live in a high rate of risk and dangerous. Some immigrants escape from political war because they cannot accept the pressure. Many harmful will happen if they are still in their country. So, there are some reasons, which make people emigrate from their own country.
Sample 2 demonstrates the entire paragraph written in Week 4 to analyze the
reasons for immigration. Although the volume of writing is less than in the previous
sample, the organization is clear and easy to follow. Her controlling idea is stated at the
beginning of the paragraph. Each point (employment, better life, and escape from wars) is
discussed in the body of the paragraph. Thus, there is a noticeable improvement in the
organization. However, the paragraph is not informative, and it does not engage the
reader in Jang’s thinking process. This sample serves as another example of Jang’s poor
critical thinking skills and lack of general knowledge. The writing assignment was
preceded by reading about the history of immigration in the US, which contained
information about the reasons that forced people to leave their homeland. Jang selected
appropriate discussion points but was unable to support them with reading. It is also
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important to note that she used short simple sentences throughout the paragraph which
made it choppy and disconnected. There are no transition words that could help her create
a more coherent piece of writing. This was a simplistic way to avoid using punctuation
and organizing complex sentence structures. Jang maintained this style until the last
quarter of the semester, when she began to feel more confident about her writing.
Jang’s blog posts in Week 4 were written in the same manner as her paragraph:
with short choppy sentences which affected the fluency of her writing. The similarity is
also in the content of writing. The blog discussion helped her to choose some points to
include in her paragraph, but she was unable to develop either of them with essential
details and examples. Although she increased the volume of her writing in the blog and
attempted to form her own opinions about immigration issues, she seemed to be unsure of
her answers. Instead of analyzing the assigned reading or additional sources, she was
simply speculating. In some cases, her responses were influenced by the opinions of other
students. For example, when she found “in Rome do as Romans do” in someone’s post,
she changed her previous idea about the need to assimilate into the main culture. On the
positive side, her blog posts showed an effort to reflect on the new material, which is an
important aspect of a meaningful language use.
Sample 3
Students have their own learning style; however, they not recognize what kinds are they belong. Learning style of students can be divided into two categories. First category is students who are talkative. They like to listen, speak, and interact with other. Their performances are outstanding in classrooms. They like to listen to their teachers or classmates and share the ideas with speaking and interacting … When they express with talking, it helps them understand the subject matters easier. The careers, which should be suitable for these students are receptionist, tour guide, secretary, flight attendant, or concierge. The students, who belong to this category, can do these kinds of jobs because they have to deal with many
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people by using participation or interaction, which they already had that skills. Second category is students who are reticent. They like to think, read, and write. When they are alone, they have widespread thoughts and inspirations. They prefer a quiet time and no rush … By recognize which learning style are they, they will understand and improve their quality of learning.
The sample above is taken from the classification paragraph written by Jang in
Week 10. Jang’s division of learning styles into two categories is clear but questionable.
The introductory sentence in this paragraph is somewhat disconnected from the
controlling idea; however, the conclusion helps to see her reasoning. Each learning style
is sufficiently described. It is obvious that Jang prepared a plan and followed it
characterizing each category. There are some grammar errors, but they are minor and do
not obscure the meaning. The sentence structure has clearly improved compared with the
first two samples. In this paragraph, Jang tried to use complex sentences and transition
words which created a better flow in her paragraph. There are still some punctuation
problems, but overall there are many positive changes in her writing.
Unlike her paragraphs, which she seriously worked on, her blog posts did not
show much progress. For the most part, they remained short and superficial. In week 10,
she also had problems with the Internet connection, which affected the volume of her
posts. However, Jang’s blog communication style changed. Instead of trying to answer all
the discussion questions, she started focusing more on those that involved practical
assignments. This allowed her to share her experiences with the class and bring her
personal voice to the online discussion. Even though she still had difficulties
understanding and analyzing the material, her participation in the discussion became
more interactive than in the previous weeks. Expressing her thoughts, she would also
admit whether she understand the topic or not. Some of her messages contained requests
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for help from anyone who was available; others addressed her classmates directly. In
other words, Jang used blogging as a substitute for face-to-face communication which
she continued to avoid in class. This was the most noticeable change in her blog writing.
Summary of changes in Jang’s writing. At the beginning of the course, Jang’s
writing was compounded with limited general knowledge and lack of abilities to analyze
the reading which could serve as a springboard for her academic study. She found that
rote memorization, which was the style she grew accustomed to in Thailand, was useless
in the US, but she could not change fast enough to keep up with her classmates who had
other educational backgrounds. This course helped her to become familiar with the
requirements and the communication style she would have to face as a graduate student
in this country. The hybrid format with its emphasis on connecting reading, discussion,
and writing immersed her in the English language and forced her to use more of her
learning potential. Although her attempts to participate in the academic discussions
online and follow the standards of the American college writing did not produce a
noticeable improvement in her critical thinking skills, they were the first steps to a
gradual change in her approach to learning.
The most significant changes in Jang’s writing included organization,
development of the controlling idea, and syntax. There was also some improvement in
grammar and general language use. However, some persistent problems in these areas
could not have been solved due to her overall low level of language acquisition. This can
be illustrated by the data in Table 25, according to which Jang’s grades reached a plateau
by the middle of the semester and did not progress beyond the score of 87. In fact, her
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grades slightly decreased in Weeks 11 and 12, when Jang had to write her first essays and
deal with more information.
Table 25 Changes in Jang’s Writing throughout the Course
Weeks 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12
Words/ blog 160 321 283 589 457 287 531 405 180 282 280
Words/ paragr. 247 360 209 295 262 250 277 270 258 479 504
Grade 75 91 87 85 86 87 85 87 87 85 85
There was also no significant gain in the volume of her paragraphs except in the
last two weeks of the semester. However, given that the writing assignments at that time
had expanded from a paragraph to an essay, Jang’s amount of writing was still
insufficient. In this case, the most serious problems included limited content information
and development of ideas, which once again stemmed from lack of general knowledge
and insufficient reading.
Some changes occurred in Jang’s blog writing. Throughout the course, she
developed a personal style of online communication which was informal and
conversational. Although the content of her blog posts did not contain significant
information to contribute to other people’s learning, it was useful for her to participate in
the online discussions where she could see better examples of writing and more
information for her own assignments. In this sense, CMC was a positive factor in Jang’s
learning experience. However, the volume of her blog writing fluctuated depending on
the topic of the discussion and the Internet access and did not show a steady increase.
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Thus, based on the data reflecting Jang’s writing performance in this course, the
features that characterize positive changes in this area include better organization and
unity; clear controlling idea and focus of writing; and better use of syntax and
punctuation.
Evidence and Discussion of Jang’s Self-Directedness in Learning
In many respects, the hybrid course helped Jang discover new ways of learning
and look at her experiences as a student from a different angle. For Jang, whose prior
education was strictly teacher centered, the very term “self-directed’ was a discovery. Her
Thai schools did not require either becoming independent or understanding her own
learning potential. All her life, she was expected to be obedient and study hard for fear of
being punished. The concept of punishment for not doing her best was deeply rooted in
Jang’s consciousness. When she could not get the desired result, she felt like punishing
herself by practicing for hours. Although her persistence was admirable, she failed to see
the real reason for her difficulties and wasted her time correcting the most obvious
grammar errors instead of expanding her understanding of the language use through
reading and writing. The positive side of her background was that it allowed her to
develop a sense of discipline and responsibility for completing her assignments. Thus,
while having difficulties deciding her own course of actions, Jang was diligent and hard-
working when given directions.
The initial evidence of Jang’s self-directedness was obtained from her intake
questionnaire, where the responses had to be evaluated on the scale of 1 (least like me) to
5 (most like me). Based on her responses, Jang started the course understanding her
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abilities but not knowing how to regulate her own learning. The following items received
the highest scores:
1. The primary purpose of my learning is (d) to become successful; and (b) to get a
better job.
The choice of these items indicates that Jang saw higher education as a way of
improving her income and career options. Such items as improving herself, contributing
to society, or supporting her family did not receive much attention in this section.
Although evaluating the learning motivation was not the purpose of this study, it appears
that Jang’s responses point to the importance of material aspects in her life.
2. The success of my learning in this program depends on (a) my study at school;
and (b) my study at home.
Jang rated studying at school the highest, thus indicating her preference for
traditional learning. This choice is understandable since she had no prior exposure to
other learning formats. Studying at home was also highly evaluated since the assigned
homework would continue the work in class. However, she did not include other sources
of learning, which suggests that she was expected to succeed by following the teacher’s
directions rather than applying English meaningfully outside the class.
3. The most important reason for using technology in this program is that it (e)
allows me to learn at my own pace; and (d) gives me opportunities to learn more.
This section shows Jang’s choice of priorities. Evidently, she realized that online
technologies could give access to more information and, therefore, could provide her with
more learning opportunities. However, it was important for her to be able to learn at her
own pace because, as an au pair, she did not have a fixed work schedule. Thus,
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opportunities for choosing her own study time and online resources attracted her to using
technology the most. The speed of learning was irrelevant and received the least score.
4. The following sentence describes me as a learner in this program: (e) I can plan
and evaluate my learning progress; and (c) I know my strengths and weaknesses.
Jang’s giving high scores to these items shows that she felt confident in her
abilities to learn independently. However, she rated making and carrying out decisions
the lowest. It is possible that at the beginning of the course she saw what areas she had to
work on (e.g. strengths and weaknesses) but did not know how to approach them. As for
planning her weekly learning, it was mostly limited to the surface errors during the
semester.
Reviewing Jang’s weekly self-evaluations, I noticed that she was realistic in her
perception of herself as a learner and good at evaluating her progress. However, she had
difficulties making decisions regarding her learning and depended on the teacher’s input.
Most of her weekly goals reflected the grammar topics studied in class during that time:
improve the use of time clauses, adjective clauses, past participles, etc. A few times, she
included the goals to overcome her personal inhibitions: to start the blog discussion, to
challenge my writing experience with new information. This happened following my
suggestions to change her planning pattern. None of Jang’s weekly plans included
learning about topics of general interest or posed a challenge to improve skills other than
grammar and writing which might be required in her academic study. Her level of self-
directedness was not high enough to take advantage of the multiple opportunities for
learning beyond the syllabus.
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However, other items of Jang’s intake questionnaire and weekly self-evaluations
at the beginning of the course indicated that she had some potential to become a self-
directed learner. One example is the fact that she saw technology as an opportunity to
learn at her own pace, which required strong discipline and time management skills.
Choosing her own study schedule gave her control over the amount of work she could do
and the time she needed to spend. On an average week, Jang added about 30 hours of
online study to her classroom instruction most of which were spent preparing writing
assignments, practicing grammar, and blogging. She could also evaluate her performance
by comparing her weekly plans with the results she achieved even though she avoided
analyzing the positive and negative parts of her experience.
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The average scores of Jang’s self-evaluation show that Jang’s satisfaction with
her performance was growing until Week 7 (see Figure 20). However, the following
week coincided with the school spring break, and she could not complete her plans being
busy with the children in her care (see Appendix D). The rest of the semester, most of her
weekly goals included review of the previous material, which was easier to accomplish
than exploring new topics, and her self-evaluation started rising again.
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In Jang’s case, her satisfaction with her performance never reached the highest
point. Although she spent a significant amount of time practicing online, she approached
grammar and writing as drills following her customary rote learning style and did not
focus on reading and analyzing the material. Since her language practice was taken out of
context, her progress in all areas was slow. It can be confirmed by the data obtained from
Jang’s biweekly evaluations of her online learning activities.
Table 26 Summary of Jang’s Experiences, Self-Evaluation, and Writing Progress
Weeks 2-3 4-5 6-7 8-9 10-11 12
Online reading 3.5 3.5 2.5 3.5 3.5 3.5
Online writing 3.5 3.5 2.5 3.5 3.5 3.5
Self-directedness 2.25 2.5 2.63 2.25 2.88 2.75
Word count Mid-term average End-of-term average
Blog
Paragraph
350
270
336
358
Grade 85.1 85.8
As shown in Table 26, the average biweekly scores for online reading and writing
remained the same throughout the course and did not grow beyond 3.5. The volume of
her writing and the average grades in the first and the second half of the semester also did
not change significantly. However, according to her self-evaluations, she was able to
overcome some of her problems and improve specific skills, which increased her average
biweekly scores.
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The stability of Jang’s evaluations of her online reading and writing experiences
serves evidence of her limitations in self-directed learning. She was only able to see the
problems related to her most common surface errors in grammar and vocabulary, which
prevented her from learning the language through knowledge construction. The reading
she completed in this course had little effect on her writing skills development because
she saw it as the source of new vocabulary and left out the analysis of information. Her
blog posts did not include the new ideas or reflections on the reading. Thus, the new
vocabulary remained out of context and did not become an active part of her language
production either orally or in writing. As a result, her satisfaction with the progress in
these areas did not increase either.
Summary of Jang’s self-directedness. Although Jang’s growth of self-directedness
was held back by her dependence on direct instruction and rote memorization, she made
some progress in regulating her learning by exercising time management and self-
discipline. These two factors were indispensable in her overall experience in this course
and allowed her to stay focused on the problems she wanted to overcome and the
assignments she had to complete. With an amazing dedication, she spent many hours
working on her English, which allowed her to make some improvement in her writing
skills. Initially, she relied mostly on the textbook, but later on she expanded her practice
with the online grammar resources and the online course handouts. Finally, she started
using only the online materials when she realized that they offered a better choice and
convenience. Thus, managing study time and resources was a step toward becoming self-
directed.
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Jang’s sense of responsibility was the motivational force behind her study out of
class, which included her participation in the online discussions as well. Although her
own posts were short and uninformative, being involved in this interactive discourse she
had an opportunity to learn from others. She was able to see posts that were better written
and contained more ideas than hers. From the point of view of self-directedness, this
experience allowed her to better understand her strengths and weaknesses as a learner.
She admitted in her interviews that she really admired the blog posts from some of her
classmates but found others poorly written. Comparing different pieces of writing, she
determined for herself what example she wanted to follow and tried to reach that
standard. However, her goals of improving writing were limited to pursuing the correct
forms, such as mechanics and organization, whereas the depth of written self-expression
was too difficult to achieve in one semester since it placed a great emphasis on the
familiarity with the content.
Although self-discipline is an important part of self-directedness, it was not
enough for Jang to become a truly self-directed learner. Her previous school experience
taught her to follow directions. Therefore, one of the most challenging aspects of the
hybrid format was making decisions concerning what and how to study. The English
courses she had taken before emphasized grammar, vocabulary, and product-oriented
writing. Naturally, Jang focused on these areas. Since drills were the most familiar forms
of the language practice, she continued using them throughout the course. This approach
was initially flawed since the course was designed to develop writing in a close
connection with reading, concept development, and social knowledge construction. Not
only the format of learning but also its underlying philosophy was new to Jang. Thus,
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Jang’s decision to expand her language practice through the Web site self-study resources
was the best one she could make at that time. Given the fact that she had never studied
outside her native country before, her limitations are understandable.
In sum, the evidence of Jang’s self-directedness in the hybrid course includes time
management; self-discipline; motivation to study; use of additional resources; and
evaluating her own strengths and weaknesses. The areas that need improvement include
setting higher her learning goals; expanding her areas of general interest; and making
decisions regarding her plan of study.
Evidence and Discussion of Jang’s Use of Learning Strategies
The data obtained from Jang’s biweekly learning experiences questionnaires
clearly showed that she used all sets of strategies to a much greater extent online than in
class. Partially, it happened as a result of Jang’s extensive online practice for which she
dedicated approximately 30 hours a week. However, the changes that occurred in the use
of strategies in both environments indicate that Jang’s experiences learning online and in
class were becoming more interconnected. Comparing the patterns outlined in Figures
21-24, I noticed the tendency of most strategies to decrease in-class and increase online
in the first few weeks. Then the online rates would continue to rise until they reached the
highest point; their in-class counterparts would also begin to increase but never as high as
online. The analyses of these data are given in the following discussion.
Memory strategies. The use of memory strategies was consistently higher online
than in class. Based on the data shown in Table 27, only using imagery and reviewing
material online and in class received equal scores in the first two weeks. The rest of the
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semester, most of these strategies prevailed online even though their use in class also
rose.
Table 27 Jang’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Memory Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10 11-12
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O T O
Associating 3 4 3 4 3 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
New words in context 4 5 4 5 2 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
Imagery 4 4 4 5 5 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
Keywords 3 4 3 4 4 5 4 4 4 5 4 5
Reviewing 4 4 4 4 3 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
Biweekly average 3.6 4.2 3.6 4.4 3.4 5 4 4.8 4 5 4 5
Note. The biweekly evaluations of memory strategies were performed on the scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment. As an experienced learner, Jang immediately gave preference to memory
strategies online, where she had more opportunities to work with text and imagery.
Specifically, placing new words in context online received the highest score throughout
the course. This can be explained by the fact that online reading offered more relevant
vocabulary. It was easier to understand the meaning of the new words since many of
them were hyperlinked to the pictures and dictionary definitions. Online dictionaries were
also provided to the students through the Web site. Finally, placing the words in context
included using them in writing and online communication with peers. Such diverse
vocabulary practice was not possible in class and, therefore, was evaluated the lowest.
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Figure 21 demonstrates that studying online required more memory strategies
than in class. By the third biweekly report, it was clear that her online study needed more
effort than her class work. Therefore, there was a slight decrease in the use of memory
strategies in class. However, as Jang continued learning and gaining experience in the
hybrid format, she divided her attention between the classroom and the Web site.
Knowing what amount of material she had to work with allowed her to adjust her
memory strategies to the requirements of each environment.
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Figure 21. Bar graph showing changes in Jang’s use of memory strategies in class and online.
Cognitive strategies. Unlike all other sets of strategies, cognitive strategies found
a slightly greater use in class than online in the first two weeks. However, the following
evaluations showed their stable growth online and decrease in class. This pattern changed
in the second half of the semester, when cognitive strategies reached their peak in the
online environment and continued to fluctuate in the traditional one.
The first two weeks was the time when Jang was learning to use the Web site and
discovering what role it played in the entire course structure. In that period, her online
experiences were limited to completing the reading, discussion, and writing assignments.
As a result, most of the strategies in this set received equal scores in both environments.
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However, her next biweekly report showed that more of her learning started happening
online than in class and, therefore, required more cognitive strategies in that environment
(see Figure 22). Compared with classroom instruction, the level of difficulty of the online
material was higher for Jang and prompted her to apply various cognitive strategies in
order to complete the assignments.
Table 28 Jang’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Cognitive Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10 11-12
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O T O
Repeating 4 4 4 4 3 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
Recognizing 5 4 5 4 4 5 5 5 5 5 5 5
Adding resources 4 4 4 5 3 5 4 5 4 5 3 5
Analyzing 4 4 3 5 2 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
Summarizing 4 4 3 5 3 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
Biweekly average 4.2 4 3.8 4.6 3 5 4.2 5 4.2 5 4 5
Note. The biweekly evaluations of cognitive strategies were performed on the scale of one (worst) to five (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment. Recognizing is the only strategy in this set that received the highest scores for the
use in class in nearly all evaluations. A possible explanation can be Jang’s earlier
acquired learning style with an emphasis on form recognition rather than language
production. In contrast, analyzing and summarizing which required an active
manipulation of the material lost their values in class when Jang became more
accustomed to using the Web site, which provided a more interactive learning
environment.
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It is also important to note that the steadily dominant position of cognitive
strategies online did not change for the most part of the semester while in class their
stability was established only in the second half. In addition to the differences in the
amount and complexity of the assignments offered in class and online, it indicates that
the online environment helped Jang develop some of her cognitive strategies and transfer
them to learning in class.
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Figure 22. Bar graph showing changes in Jang’s use of cognitive strategies in class and online.
Compensation strategies. The use of compensation strategies online was given
clear preference since the beginning of the semester. Table 29 demonstrates that all items
in this set were receiving the highest rates throughout the semester. Compared with the
online environment, these strategies were used much less in class, especially in the first
half of the semester. However, the situation improved at the end of the course, when Jang
started working more collaboratively and, therefore, had to apply more compensation
strategies in the traditional setting.
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Table 29 Jang’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Compensation Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10 11-12
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O T O
Language clues 3 4 3 5 3 5 3 5 4 5 4 5
Native language 2 4 2 5 2 5 3 5 4 5 4 5
Help from experts 3 4 3 5 3 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
Communication 4 4 3 5 4 5 4 5 4 5 5 5
Message adjustment 2 4 2 5 3 5 3 5 4 5 4 5
Average 2.8 4 2.6 5 3 5 3.4 5 4 5 4.2 5
Note. The biweekly evaluations of compensation strategies were performed on the scale of one (worst) to five (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment.
Due to the nature of the online learning, Jang had more freedom to use a variety
of compensation strategies in order to better acquire the material. As she often mentioned
in her interviews, while studying in class, she felt confined by social rules which stopped
her from attracting attention to her personal learning needs. Thus, the social environment
in class was a restricting factor in her use of compensation strategies. In contrast, she felt
liberated while working online. Knowing that no one was watching her, she was less
apprehensive of her language errors and could communicate more and ask for help when
she needed it. Since all communication online occurred through reading and writing, she
was forced to manipulate the text with the help of language clues, direct translation, and
message adjustment. As a result, all compensation strategies were required to a much
greater extent in this environment.
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The use of compensation strategies online also helped her become more confident
in her communication skills. The online discussions, where many of these strategies were
used, made her more aware of her own potential as a learner as well as cultural
differences and personalities of her classmates. These changes found their reflection in
her face-to-face learning. As shown in Figure 23, the in-class use of compensation
strategies was steadily growing since the third biweekly period. Although they were
never used as much as online, their increase indicates that Jang was developing as a
learner in both environments and transferring skills from one to the other.
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Figure 23. Bar graph showing changes in Jang’s use of compensation strategies in class and online.
Social strategies. Just like memory and compensation strategies, social strategies
online immediately outweighed their use in class and reached its highest level by the
middle of the semester. Even though there was a slight decrease in the fourth and fifth
biweekly periods, overall the online environment called for more social strategies than
the traditional one. Based on the data presented in Table 30, another significant
difference is that social strategies were used more consistently online than in class, where
their pattern was highly irregular.
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Table 30 Jang’s Biweekly Evaluations of the Use of Social Strategies
Weeks 1-2 3-4 5-6 7-8 9-10 11-12
The use of: T O T O T O T O T O T O
Asking to clarify 4 4 3 4 5 5 3 5 4 5 4 5
Asking to correct 4 4 4 5 5 5 4 5 4 5 4 5
Cooperating 4 4 4 4 4 5 4 4 5 4 5 5
Communicating with more
proficient speakers
3 4 3 4 5 5 3 5 4 5 4 5
Developing cultural understanding 3 3 3 4 5 5 4 5 3 5 5 5
Average 3.6 3.8 3.4 4.2 4.8 5 3.6 4.8 4 4.8 4.4 5
Note. The biweekly evaluations of social strategies were performed on the scale of one (worst) to five (best). T = traditional environment; O = online environment. Jang’s evaluations of her use of social strategies demonstrate the changes in her
learning experiences. At the beginning of the semester, she obviously felt that both
environments provided equal opportunities for all aspects of her social learning except
communicating with more proficient speakers. However, her opinion began to change
when she realized that she was involved in more interaction online than in class. The
more she used the Web site, the more social strategies she needed.
The stability of Jang’s online scores shown in Figure 24 can be explained by the
fact that online discussion was an integral part of the course. Following the requirement
to participate in the blog at least four times during the week, she found herself immersed
in the discourse which was impossible without asking questions, correcting, and sharing
information. On the other hand, acting this way in class disagreed with Jang’s
understanding of the proper behavior of a student. She used social strategies only when
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she was assigned to work in a group with other students, but she never initiated a social
interaction if the task did not require it. Online, however, where physical presence could
not substitute for communication, she had no choice but to interact with others. As a
result, social strategies were more frequently applied online than in class.
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Figure 24. Bar graph showing changes in Jang’s use of social strategies in class and online. Comparison of Jang’s Use of Learning Strategies
The data obtained from Jang’s biweekly evaluations indicate that studying online
required more learning strategies than in class, which can be seen in Figure 25. Among
the four categories, cognitive strategies had the leading position in a combination of both
environments. Jang explained it by her preference to learn from working with the text,
which required frequent use of such cognitive strategies as repeating, recognizing, and
using additional resources both in class and online. However, applied separately in class
and online they came second to social and compensation ones respectively.
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Class 18.83 19.5 16.67 19.83
Online 23.67 23.83 24.17 23
Both 42.5 43.33 40.84 42.83
Memory Cognitive Compens Social
Figure 25. Bar graph showing differences in Jang’s use of strategies in the hybrid format.
Jang’s evaluation of social strategies in class was based on her perception of
learning among her peers. Staying quiet, she was nevertheless listening to and observing
her classmates, which made her feel as part of the group and helped her learn. Inwardly,
she was impressed with the fact that other students could express their opinions and ask
questions openly without waiting to be called on. This prompted her to place social
strategies as the highest she used in class. Online, however, they were rated the lowest of
all because of her disappointment with not getting responses from some peers, but their
combined score was high due to the frequent use in class.
On the other hand, compensation strategies were evaluated the lowest in class
since they required “overcoming limitations” in speaking when applied in a social setting
(Oxford, 1990, p. 47). Least practical were switching to the native language, which was
not possible in the multilingual environment, and adjusting the message, which required
verbal communication. Due to Jang’s personal learning behavior, most of her language
was produced online, where she felt more comfortable to communicate in writing and
compensate for the gaps in knowledge. Therefore, compensation strategies were used the
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most online and the least in class among the four sets. The large difference in these
values made them the least used in a combination of both environments.
Summary of Case 4
This course added many discoveries to Jang’s knowledge of cultures,
communication, and ways of learning. New in the United States, she was overwhelmed
with differences in teaching methods and school requirements. Moreover, she had to
adjust to the hybrid learning format, which was a new and unusual experience. However,
as a disciplined and responsible person, she was able to stay focused on her learning tasks
and not succumb to self-pity.
In spite of the significant gaps in her language skills and general knowledge,
which hindered her overall progress, there were several victories. During the course, she
learned to look critically at her performance and choose her own activities and resources
to address the most obvious language problems. The Web site, which initially seemed
complex and intimidating, became a friendly companion in her learning process. Not
satisfied with the textbook practice, she frequently resorted to the online resources to find
answers to her language-related questions. However, it was the online communication
format that contributed the most to her learning success. The online expansion activities
which involved reading, discussion, and writing gave her multiple opportunities to apply
her language skills and learn from her more advanced peers. Studying in this
environment, she was encouraged to use more learning strategies, which improved her in-
class experiences as well. The result of her efforts was better writing and general
language use.
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However, one semester was not enough time to eliminate all of Jang’s problems.
Her cultural view on learning and teaching was one of the blocks that stopped her from
becoming more self-directed as a learner. Being accustomed to following her instructors’
directions, she could not decide independently what goal to set and how to reach it in the
most efficient way. To a large extent, her progress in this course was affected by lack of
critical thinking skills which made it difficult for her to internalize the new concepts and
reflected negatively on her writing skills development. These issues prevented her from
achieving better learning results.
What features characterize changes in Jang’s writing in the hybrid EAP course?
During the course, Jang’s writing demonstrated such changes as better
organization and unity, improvements in stating the controlling idea and maintaining
focus in writing, and better use of syntax and punctuation.
What evidence of Jang’s self-directedness was present in the hybrid format?
Jang’s self-directedness in this study was evident mainly in her progress in
practice time management and self-discipline which allowed her to regulate her learning
and stay focused on the problems she decided to overcome and the tasks she was
assigned to complete. Additionally, she maintained a high level of motivation throughout
the course and was able to significantly increase her independent study time.
Which learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, or social) did Jang
prefer to use more in this type of environment?
In a combination of both environments, priority was given to cognitive and, to a
smaller degree, social and memory strategies. While studying in class, Jang most
frequently relied on social and cognitive strategies; compensation strategies were used
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least of all. Online, the most preferred strategies were compensation, cognitive, and
memory.
Cross-Case Examination
This case study revealed many features that were inalienable part of hybrid
learning. The three areas that were addressed through the research questions—writing,
self-directed learning, and learning strategies—create the core of this learning format due
to the students’ involvement in writing discourse and independent study. The findings
indicate that the hybrid course expanded their writing experiences and raised their skills
and levels of self-awareness as learners. Each case produced some evidence of success in
most areas of the investigation. Yet there were difficulties which should be considered in
hybrid course design.
Research Question 1
The four participants in this study had high-intermediate (Level 6) overall
language proficiency at the beginning of the course. However, there were differences in
their speaking and writing skills, educational background, and experiences in the English
speaking environment. Yana and Jang, who recently arrived in the United States, had
more difficulties in communication and correct use of grammar. However, Yana had
more learning experiences in higher education settings and was able to learn fast by
building upon her strong learning skills. Her prior education allowed her to develop
general knowledge and establish her personal style of thought expression, which required
specific vocabulary and sentence structure. Jang, on the other hand, learned English as a
school subject and could not easily make a transition to using it as a means of verbal and
written communication. Gio and Joe had lived in the US for seven and six years
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respectively. During that time, they developed their communicative competence by using
English socially and taking ESL classes. Although they spent almost equal number of
semesters studying English, Joe’s writing and grammar were more advanced than Gio’s.
In fact, Gio’s grammar skills were the lowest among the participants in spite of her taking
six semesters of ESL. Thus, due to the differences in skills and attitudes to learning, there
were no uniformed results regarding changes in writing at the end of the semester (see
Table 31).
Table 31 Summary of Changes in the Participants’ Writing at the End of the Semester
What features characterize changes in the writing skills?
Yana, Gio, Joe, Jang
Yana, Joe
Yana, Joe
Gio, Jang
Yana, Joe, Jang
Yana, Gio
Common changes
1. Better organization of writing: clear presentation of controlling idea,
relevant supporting details, improved sequence of supporting details
and examples, improved unity of writing
2. Better content of writing: including interesting details, thorough
development
3. Increased volume of writing
4. Better sentence structures
5. Better punctuation
6. Better spelling
Yana, Gio, Joe, Jang
Gio, Jang
Gio, Jang
Gio, Jang
Common difficulties
1. Difficulties in the use of grammar: verb forms, prepositions, articles
2. Difficulties in general language use
3. Lack of general knowledge
4. Lack of critical thinking skills
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As shown in Figure 26, the participants also demonstrated different gains in the
volume of language production and grades. Yana made the most progress in these areas
based on the difference between the average results in the first and second halves of the
semester. Joe increased his average volume of writing, whereas his average grade did not
change as dramatically as Yana’s. Gio, on the other hand, improved the quality of writing
more than its volume. Jang increased the volume of her paragraph writing, but she could
not keep up with the blog communication due to technical problems in the second half of
the semester and decreased her blog participation. Although she started writing longer
paragraphs, she did not have a significant gain in her grades because of her overall low
level of language production.
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Blog volume 268 77 130 -14
Paragr. volume 435 44 134 88
Grade gain 11.8 7.6 4.6 0.7
Yana Gio Joe Jang
Figure 26. Bar graph showing differences in the average writing volume and grades. The values represent the differences between the average numbers of word count and grade received in the middle and at the end of the semester.
In order to have a complete account of the changes in the participants’ writing
skills, it is important to compare their writing performance at the beginning and at the end
of the semester. Table 32 shows that Yana and Gio initially had the lowest grades.
However, there is a significant gap between their highest grades, which indicates
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different growth of writing skills. Joe’s initial grade was much higher than Yana’s, yet he
did not perform as well as Yana did. Gio and Jang had slightly different writing
proficiency at the beginning and at the end of the semester; however, the difference
between their highest and lowest grades is the same, which suggests that they had equal
gain. Based on the differences in the volume of writing and grades, Yana and Joe became
the most proficient writers, while Gio and Jang achieved less success.
Table 32 Summary of the Differences in Average Writing Volume and Grades throughout the
Semester
Blog volume Paragraph volume Grade
lowest highest lowest highest lowest highest
Yana 131 679 271 1,442 64 97
Gio 114 420 133 485 64 80
Joe 216 815 276 720 71 93
Jang 160 589 209 504 75 91
Case 1: Yana— “The Team Player”
Compared with the other participants, Yana showed the most changes in her
writing which are evident in the increase of the volume and quality of writing (see Figure
26). Part of her success was her strong educational background and high level of
motivation which allowed her to utilize her general knowledge and learning skills in her
independent study. Thanks to the online component of the course, her language learning
became a continuing process of seeking and sharing knowledge, which helped her
increase her volume of writing (see Figure 26 & Table 32). Being constantly exposed to
new ideas and ways of expressing them in the blog and Writing Shop, Yana improved her
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overall understanding of the language and became motivated to write better posts. The
skills she developed through online reading and communication were enhanced by
additional grammar practice. Learning from different sources and applying the language
in various academic discussions resulted in improving the quality of her writing which
can be seen in the difference between her lowest and highest grades. It is obvious from
Table 32 that Yana started the course as a beginning writer; however, her grades
continued to improve throughout the course, and her final grade of 97 was the highest in
her group.
I am so happy that I have this Web site. I don’t think I would have learned as much in these six weeks without the Web site. (Week 6 interview)
Case 2: Gio “The Outsider”
Having worked closely with Gio throughout the course, I realized that making an
effort was not her learning style. Although she was punctual and polite in class, she
completed her assignments without enthusiasm, often superficially and inattentively. Her
difficulties in grammar and writing after taking six semesters of ESL indicate that such
learning behavior was typical for her and not caused by the new learning format.
Gio’s approach to learning was completely different from that of her peers due to
her lack of motivation to study on her own. Unlike Yana, she did not take advantage of
the Web site. Her hybrid learning experience was limited to posting brief responses to the
blog discussion questions, first draft demonstrations, and some grammar practice which
was inconsistent and spontaneous. For her, the online assignments were just another form
of homework, which she did formally, with no interest in becoming part of the learning
community. She avoided participating in the blog discussions and sharing her ideas with
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others. Thus, the power of social learning did not make an impact on her language
progress. As a result, she did not show a significant gain in either area of writing.
I don’t know what to say to people or how to make them interested in my opinion. I don’t like to argue. If I know something well, I just keep it to myself. (Week 10 interview)
Case 3: Joe— “The Leader”
Joe’s experience in the hybrid course was similar to Yana’s in that he approached
online communication as an opportunity to share his knowledge and opinions with his
peers. In order to do that, he read and researched additional materials and worked on his
blog posts as much as he did on his writing assignments. His outgoing personality made
him the leader of the online discussions, which required serious work on his language
skills. His volume of writing was higher than other students’ at the beginning of the
course and increased further in the second half of the semester (see Figure 26). Since his
grammar was also more advanced, he focused on the content and organization of writing.
Thus, even though he made significant improvement in both areas, his grades did not
increase as dramatically as Yana’s.
Through interaction online, I have to look for more information and use all my resources. I want to put quality posts, so I am challenged to give more. (Week 8 interview)
Case 4: Jang— “The Follower”
Jang’s progress in writing was not as great as Yana’s or Joe’s, yet it can be
considered quite significant given that she had learned most of her English in her native
country, where the purpose of learning the language was to perform well on the test
rather than to use it for communication. Her success is most obvious in the writing
organization and sentence structure. However, her lack of general knowledge and critical
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thinking skills created difficulties in acquiring more language through online reading and
communication. Although she was diligent about participating in the blog discussions,
she could contribute little knowledge of her own. Technical problems also interfered with
her progress. The volume of her blog writing decreased at the end of the semester, when
she lost her Internet connection. Yet the online practice helped her develop confidence
and learn from others.
Online I find more new things because I see more posts. In class I don’t hear new things often. (Week 4 interview)
Research Question 2
In spite of the differences in learning needs, goals, levels of motivation, and
attitude to learning, all participants demonstrated some common evidence of self-
directedness and the challenges in the Web-based environment and ability to exercise
self-directedness (see Table 33).
Table 33 Summary of Evidence of Self-Directedness Found in the Hybrid Course
What evidence of self-directedness is present in the hybrid learning format?
Yana, Joe, Jang
Yana, Joe, Jang
Yana, Joe, Jang
Yana, Joe
Yana, Joe, Jang
Yana, Jang
Yana, Jang
Yana, Joe, Jang
Common evidence
1. Setting new learning goals
2. Persistence in pursuing learning objectives
3. The use of additional resources
4. High expectations of themselves
5. Motivation to learn
6. Critical self-evaluation
7. Recognizing strengths and weaknesses
8. Plan further steps in learning
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Yana, Joe, Jang 9. Seeking help from others
Yana, Gio, Joe
Yana, Gio, Joe
Jang, Gio
Joe, Gio
Common difficulties
1. Self-discipline
2. Time-management skills
3. Decision making
4. Monitoring progress
Due to their cultural backgrounds and personalities, the participants approached
learning in different ways and had different expectations of themselves, their instructor,
and their learning community. Their nicknames—Team Player (Yana), Leader (Joe),
Outsider (Gio), and Follower (Jang)—reflect their personalities and levels of involvement
with others while working on a learning task. Thus, self-directedness in this course was
highly individual for each person.
Case 1: Yana— “The Team Player”
Yana approached learning as a constructive process, in which she placed herself
as a co-participant both in the traditional and online environment. Due to her sociable
personality and high expectations of herself, she was open to the idea of trying new ways
of learning. Although she had never used online technologies for learning English before,
she did not hesitate to make the Web site her learning companion. Having the access to
the online discussions and resources, she was able to broaden the range of her learning
goals and choose the tools to reach them.
During the course, Yana demonstrated that she was capable of regulating her own
learning. An important part of this process was her understanding of her strengths and
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weaknesses, which allowed her to plan new steps and evaluate her progress. A few times,
her weekly self-evaluations reflected self-discipline issues such as not allocating enough
time or not pushing herself hard enough to complete the assignment. However, such
instances were not common and did not create a problem in her learning process. On an
average week, Yana spent about 20 hours studying on her own. Her motivation and the
drive to succeed were very strong due to her eagerness to become more familiar with
American culture and find her place in this society. It helped her to improve not only her
English skills but also her self-regulative competency.
Case 2: Gio— “The Outsider”
Gio was the only participant who did not demonstrate strong evidence of self-
directedness. The main problem was absence of clear goals and a real need to improve
her English. Her position as a Spanish editor did not put high demands on her second
language skills. Although she would have liked to complete the education she started in
her native country, she did not feel that it was an urgent necessity and, therefore, did not
have a strong intrinsic motivation to make maximum progress in the shortest amount of
time, which greatly affected her self-discipline and time-management (Edom et al.,
2004). Unlike the other participants, she spent only about five hours a week studying
online. The fact that she was negligent about her weekly plans and did not consider
seriously either setting new goals or evaluating her progress indicates that she was not
interested in taking control over her learning progress.
Although the study did not specifically address the relationship between the type
of personality and self-regulation of learning, it is important to mention that Gio’s
position of an outsider in class and online limited her chances of learning from her more
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advanced peers and diminished her learning progress as well. In the first weeks, she was
explaining it by lack of cultural understanding. At the end of the semester, however, she
admitted that she simply chose not to be involved. This choice was made poorly since
interaction could have increased her motivation to learn (Frankola, 2001, as cited in
Edom et al, 2004) in addition to giving her a variety of learning experiences. As a result
of avoiding learning, Gio’s performance in class was lower than other student’.
Case 3: Joe— “The Leader”
Joe’s motivation to learn was the strongest among the four participants since it
was sustained by his ambition to be ahead of the group. He immediately saw learning in
both environments as an opportunity to bring his skills and knowledge to a much higher
level than would be possible in a traditional course. Like Yana, he also wanted to learn
English faster in order to explore new possibilities for work and study and improve his
social status. However, as a learner, he was not objective in his self-assessment. Trying to
be perfect, he considered every error a serious problem. This approach affected his
weekly self-evaluations where every item he found less than perfect was graded
unsatisfactory.
Joe’s persistence in learning was evident in the amount of time he spent practicing
online. His typical week included about 25 hours of independent study, which were
distributed between his grammar, writing, and online communication activities many of
which Joe selected based on his own interests. Through the Web site, he was able to add
a number of resources to augment his class material and become more self-reliant in his
learning progress.
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Case 4: Jang— “The Follower”
Of all the participants, Jang had the strongest self-discipline and time-
management skills which she developed based on the traditional rules of learning
behavior in her native country. Since early childhood, she was trained to follow the
instructions to the letter and be responsible for completing the assignments. These
qualities allowed her to stay focused on learning tasks which she approached with
persistence and eagerness to improve her language skills. However, the drawback of her
traditional learning style was lack of metacognitive strategies which would allow her to
take control over her learning. She was unable to make personal decisions regarding her
learning goals and replicated the ones set by the course. Her weekly plans did not reflect
any personal interests or attempts to expand her general knowledge. Yet her goals were
concrete and attainable through the steps she planned. The simplicity of Jang’s weekly
plans was an indication of the beginning stage of her developing self-directedness.
Another shift to being more self-directed occurred in organizing her learning
tasks. Immersed in a pool of new information and learning activities, she felt disoriented
and could not prioritize the tasks at first. However, evaluating her weekly progress, she
learned to identify the areas that needed more attention and avoided making the wrong
steps. Based on the analysis of her own performance, she was able to focus on the areas
that needed more practice. Since this was the first course that provided additional
resources online, it took Jang some time to appreciate the convenience of the new format.
Being used to the traditional way of learning, she used to wait for the textbook
assignment to be given for each class. When she saw that the Web site offered a larger
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variety of learning resources than the textbook, she started studying independently online.
This was a major step toward becoming more self-directed.
Research Question 3
The investigation of the use of learning strategies in the hybrid learning format
complemented the findings on the students’ self-directedness which could not be
achieved without such metacognitive strategies as setting goals, planning steps, and
performing self-evaluation. Learning in the traditional and online environments, however,
required direct manipulation of the text and oral communication which involved using
memory, cognitive, compensation, and social strategies. Similarly to exercising self-
directedness, the use of learning strategies demonstrated that each participant had highly
individual approach to learning.
The data in Figure 27 indicate that all strategies were used to a greater extent
online than in class by all the participants except Gio, who rated her strategies almost
equally in both environments. Since Gio spent about five hours a week studying
independently online while the other participants spent between 20 and 30 hours, it is
possible to assume that those learners, who studied online more used, more learning
strategies than Gio, who studied online very little. It is also clear that Joe and Jang, whose
face-to-face instruction took place once a week, used significantly more learning
strategies than Yana and Gio, who had classroom instruction twice a week. It can be
explained by the fact that the participants in the Saturday program had to study more on
their own than those in the evening program. It suggests that there may be a relationship
between the frequency of sessions and the use of strategies. However, neither of these
assumptions was targeted by the study and, therefore, could not be verified.
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Class 63.8 63.6 71 74.83
Online 83.8 63.4 92.8 94.67
Both 147.6 127.2 163.8 169.5
Yana Gio Joe Jang
Figure 27. Bar graph showing comparison of overall use of strategies by the participants.
The summarised data in Table 34 show that among the four categories social
strategies were rated the highest in class and the lowest online; compensation and
cognitive strategies were used the most online and the least in class. Memory strategies
received average evaluation in both environments.
Table 34 Comparison of the Use of Individual Strategies in Class and Online
Memory
Cognitive Compensation Social
Class Online Class Online Class Online Class Online
Yana 16.2 22.4 15.8 22.8 17 20.4 14.8 18.2
Gio 16.8 14.8 14.6 16.6 15.4 16 16.8 16
Joe 16 23 15.5 23.3 18.5 23.7 21 22.8
Jang 18.8 23.7 19.5 23.8 16.7 24.2 19.8 23
Note. The values in this table represent the average of the total scores obtained from biweekly evaluations of the use of learning strategies in class and online. Case 1: Yana— “The Team Player”
Yana’s use of all four sets of strategies online was greater than in class. In
particular, she relied the most on cognitive and memory strategies while studying in the
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online environment. Both of these categories involved direct interaction with the text and
applying crtical thinking skills. This refects Yana’s approach to learning which placed a
great importance to details, patterns, and associations between the new concepts and the
existing ones. Social strategies were the least used online and in class because she felt
that was not receiving enough peer support in each environment. Compensation strategies
which include a variety of skills allowing to understand the new material were used the
most in class. This can be explained by the fact that attending the class twice a week she
had to process more new information and had an opportunity to use the language in direct
interaction with her classmates. Working online, she was internalizing this information
through a more detailed manipulation of the language and, therefore, required memory
and cognitive strategies.
Case 2: Gio— “The Outsider”
Gio’s evaluations did not show a significant difference in the use of strategies in
class and online (see Figure 27). The main reason is that she did not study as much online
as the other participants. As a student in the evening program, she spent six hours a week
in class and only about five hours a week online. Therefore, she used most of the
strategies similarly in both environments. In class, she most commonly relied on memory
and social strategies, among which the highest evaluation was often given to elaborating,
reviewing, and asking for clarification and correction. It indicates that she preferred to
receive direct explanations than to work with the material by herself and apply effort,
which also points to her low level of motivation. Online, however, she used more
cognitive strategies than the other categories, which can be explained by the need to
repeat the class topic and to use additional grammar resources. However, none of the
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categories significantly outwheighed the others in either environment. Thus, Gio’s lack of
motivation to study affected not only her self-directedness but also the strategies she used
outside of class.
Case 3: Joe— “The Leader”
Joe’s use of learning strategies online was significantly higher than in class. In
this respect, his evaluations are similar to those of Yana’s; however, all his score for
online use of strategies exceeded Yana’s as a result of spending more time online. Joe’s
class met only once a week, which forced him to study independently. With the help of
the Web site, he was able to incorporate a variety of learning activities, which explains
the fact that compensation strategies which led to a better understanding of the material
were evaluated the highest in this environment. Social strategies were used the least
online because Joe felt that it was more appropriate to ask for clarification and correction
face to face. However, he emphasized the use of social strategies in class as most relevant
in his role of a leader. Since interaction was his preferred learning style, cognitive
strategies, which required concentrating on the forms and patterns, were used the least in
class.
Case 4: Jang— “The Follower”
Jang used the most learning strategies in both environments (see Figure 27). All
her online evaluations were higher than those of Joe and Yana’s since she also spent the
most time studying online. Like Joe, she used compensation strategies the most online
where she worked on all her language skills. Another similarity is that social strategies
also received the lowest evaluation in the online environment. However, Jang was not
intimidated to ask questions online. The main reason was lack of cooperation with her
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peers which Jang could not overcome due to her limited general knowledge and cultural
understanding. On the other hand, social strategies were used the most in class, where
Jang had no choice but to collaborate with the partners in the group she was assigned to.
The least used in class were compensation strategies regardless of being the highest
evaluated online. It indicates that the traditional environment did not offer as much
variety of learning experiences as the Web site.
Results of Cross-Case Examination
In brief, the data obtained during the case study demonstrate findings in the
following areas:
1. Changes in the writing of the students include improvements in the organization,
content, volume of writing, syntax, and spelling.
2. Evidence of self-directedness includes motivation to learn; regulating learning by
setting goals, evaluting progress, and planning steps to achieve goals; and
recognizing strengths and weaknesses.
3. The use of all four groups of learning strategies (memory, cognitive,
compensation, and social) in the hybrid learning format is characterized by their
greater application online than in class.
Evidence of Quality
In order to ensure validity and reliability of the case study, the data were
interpreted within and generalized to the conceptual framework established earlier in the
study. Its components included Vygotsky’s (1962) theory of social learning; Scardamalia
and Bereiter’s (1994) model of computer-supported intentional learning environment
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(CSILE); Bandura’s (1986) theory of self-efficacy; and Oxford’s (1990) classification of
language learning strategies.
Reliability in this study was viewed as the property of information (Merriam,
1988; Stake, 1995; Yin, 2003) and strengthened by using the following strategies:
1. The participants had a similar level of language proficiency.
2. The study was conducted during the entire semester.
3. The questionnaire items were designed to seek evidence in response to the
research questions.
4. The participants were involved in repetitive learning activities which allowed for
establishing commonalities and differences in their learning behavior.
5. The participants evaluated the same learning experiences and strategies on a
weekly and biweekly basis.
6. Accurate records of collected data were kept throughout the study.
Following Yin (2003) and Stake (2006), validity was ensured by performing
additional data treatment:
1. Triangulation was used to cross-check the data on each research question using
multiple sources.
2. The results of the questionnaires and interviews were discussed with the
participants in order to receive their feedback and verify accuracy.
3. The participants’ writing samples and the results of the questionnaires and
interviews were discussed with three colleagues in order to receive different
points of view and reduce the possibility of researcher’s bias.
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4. The assumptions and conclusions concerning the processes and the results of the
study were critically re-examined throughout the study.
Summary
This chapter presented the data collection process and treatment of the evidence
received in the course of the case study. The description of the hybrid course, which
included students’ first impressions of this learning format, the organization of the
course, and the feedback form the participants, was given in order to place the study in a
specific context and create the background for the discussion of individual cases. Four
students attending evening and Saturday EAP classes volunteered to participate in this
research. Their writing samples, weekly self-evaluations, and the responses to biweekly
questionnaires and in-person interviews provided evidence that allowed for answering the
research questions. The discussion of each case study included personal introduction of
the participants, demonstration of the evidence related to the research questions, and
analysis of the evidence. Cross-case examination included summary of findings among
the four cases followed by the individual case studies which allowed for establishing
commonalities and differences in the results of the investigation. The chapter also
contains summary of the strategies which were used in this study in order to ensure its
reliability and validity.
Due to the differences in the English language skills, cultural background, and
motivation to learn, each participant achieved a different degree of success. However,
based on the obtained data, it is possible to find similarities in changes of their writing
and learning behavior. Thus, the most common changes in the writing are reflected in the
improvements in the organization, content, volume of writing, syntax, and spelling. The
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evidence of self-directedness is demonstrated in motivation to learn; regulating learning
by setting goals, evaluting progress, and planning steps to achieve goals; and recognizing
strengths and weaknesses of self-directedness. The use of all four groups of language
learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, and social) in the hybrid format
was found to be greater online than in class.
The data presented in this chapter are interpreted in chapter 5, which concludes
the discussion of the findings in this case study. The interpretations and conclusions on
each research question are given within the conceptual framework which is built on
social learning theory. The chapter introduces the factors, such as learners’ cultural
background, time management, and critical thinking skills, which were encountered
during the study but could not be addressed due to the limitations of the research design.
These factors indicate directions for further research in the area of hybrid learning. In
addition to suggestions for further research, chapter 5 gives recommendations for
practical application of the findings and discusses their implications for social change. To
complete the discussion, the chapter includes reflections on the experiences of teaching
the hybrid EAP course and conducting the research.
CHAPTER 5: DISCUSSION
This chapter completes the discussion of the findings obtained during the case
study of the hybrid EAP course. The purpose of the study was threefold: to investigate (a)
changes in the writing skills of college-bound adult ESL student; (b) evidence of their
self-directedness; and (c) the use of learning strategies in the hybrid learning format. The
need for studying the application of the hybrid design in the EAP course was called for
by the importance of improving the effectiveness of precollege ESL writing instruction
and enhancing learners’ language acquisition through a continuous reading and writing
discourse.
This research was designed as a qualitative case study in order to incorporate
multiple sources of evidence and data collection techniques and to better understand
students’ attitudes and behaviors which can lead to positive changes in their writing skills
in a hybrid course. The case study took place at Westchester Community College (WCC),
NY, where the hybrid EAP course was taught. Four participants from willing volunteers
were selected for this investigation. Two of them were attending the EAP course in the
evening program and received six hours a week of classroom instruction for 10 weeks;
two others were studying in the Saturday EAP program and had one 3-hour face-to-face
session a week for 12 weeks. All participants had high-intermediate level of the English
language proficiency at the beginning of the semester.
Three research questions were addressed in this study:
1. What features characterize changes in the writing of ESL students in hybrid
courses?
2. What evidence of self-directedness is present in the hybrid program?
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3. Which learning strategies (memory, cognitive, compensation, or social) do
students prefer to utilize more in this type of environment?
The data collected during the investigation indicate that the most common
changes in student writing include improvements in the organization. At the end of the
course, all four participants were able to clearly state the controlling idea of their writing,
provide relevant supporting details, organize the details in correct sequence, and maintain
the unity of writing. Additionally, there was evidence of improvement in the content and
volume of writing, sentence organization, punctuation, and spelling. However, due to the
highly individual nature of language acquisition and differences in prior educational
experiences and motivation, there were no uniformed results in improving the quality of
writing. In particular, it refers to slow progress in grammar and general language use and
difficulties in applying background knowledge and critical thinking skills.
The evidence of self-directedness in the hybrid course was presented by the
students’ motivation to learn and their ability to regulate their learning by setting new
goals, evaluating their progress, and planning further steps in learning. Their independent
study involved using multiple resources provided through the Web site (esl-page.com)
and researching new topics of their interests. Other elements of self-directedness in this
course included high expectations of themselves, which helped the learners stay
persistent in achieving their goals and perform critical analysis of their progress in order
to address their strengths and weaknesses. Most of the participants spent additional 20-30
hours a week studying online, which included reading, preparing blog posts and weekly
writing assignments, and practicing grammar. However, based on the students’ self-
evaluations, time management and self-discipline were some of the issues affecting their
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independent study. Other common difficulties included adequate assessment of individual
progress and the choice of what to study and how to approach the task.
The findings regarding the use of learning strategies indicate that all four
categories chosen for this investigation—memory, cognitive, compensation, and social—
were used to a much greater extent online than in class by three participants, who used
the Web site 20-30 hours per week. One participant, who studied only five hours a week
online, did not find significant difference in the use of strategies in either format.
However, even in this case, cognitive and compensation strategies slightly prevailed in
the online environment. Overall, studying online, two of the participants used cognitive
strategies the most; two others preferred compensation strategies. Social strategies were
used most commonly in class. A significant difference was also found in the overall use
of strategies both in class and online between the participants attending classes twice a
week and once a week.
In more detail, the results of the case study will be discussed further focusing on
the interpretation and limitations of the findings; implications for social change;
recommendations for action and further research; and reflections on teacher-researcher
experiences.
Interpretations of the Findings
Role of the Conceptual Framework
The evidence collected in response to the research questions of the case study was
interpreted within the conceptual framework which was developed at the beginning of the
investigation. The connection between the main aspects of each theory, which is
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presented in Figure 28, helped to create the background for the analysis of the findings
and to compare the participants’ progress in the hybrid course.
Figure 28. Diagram of conceptual framework.
From the point of view of Vygotsky’s (1962) theory, two factors of the hybrid
learning contribute to the changes in writing skills: social nature of learning which is
evident in sharing knowledge and the connection between the development of cognitive
constructs and writing. These factors were created by combining the traditional and
online learning formats following the CSILE model by Scardamalia and Bereiter (1994),
which emphasizes online collaboration and knowledge-building discourse. The
mechanism of knowledge sharing operated in a loop pattern where the original post from
one student attracted a reaction from another person, which then prompted a response
from the author, etc. The cyclic organization of the course helped to create the
Social learning
CSILE
Sharing knowledge
Intentional learning
Language learning strategies
Self-directedness
Online collaboration
Metacognitive strategies
Knowledge building discourse
Connecting new concepts & writing
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opportunities not only for knowledge sharing but also for expanding learning (Serdyukov,
2004; Serdyukov & Hill, 2004).
This ongoing discourse required using various communication strategies
(agreeing, disagreeing, clarifying, asking questions, informing) and expressing ideas with
grammatical and logical accuracy. The knowledge that the learners wanted to share had
to be retrieved from various information sources, which led to developing reading skills
and forming new concepts later found in writing. Unlike face-to-face communication,
online communication required a well-developed written speech and, therefore, was
beneficial for the acquisition of new concepts and language forms. Thus, a combination
of various skills and strategies required in the online environment enhanced students’
writing.
Although the design and the pedagogy of the course were fundamental in the
hybrid format, other important factors were involved in the learning process. Among
them, self-efficacy of the students played the most decisive role. In view of Bandura’s
(1986) theory, awareness of one’s own potential and limitations and the ability to regulate
one’s own learning behavior are the underlying components of self-efficacy. This
conception implies that a person is able to perform self-monitoring, self-judgment, and
self-evaluation of his or her own behavior. A person’s perception of self as an achiever is
essential in order to develop self-efficacy. On the other hand, low expectations of self
result in poor self-efficacy (Bandura, Barbaranelli, Caprara, & Pastorellu, 1996). In
learning, self-efficacy is represented by self-directedness which is evident is the ability to
understand one’s own capacity to learn which results in applying metacognitive learning
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strategies: setting learning goals, planning and performing steps to achieve goals,
critically evaluating the performance, and determining further course of action.
Since learning is a highly individual act, the conceptual framework of this
research was complemented by direct language learning strategies (memory, cognitive,
and compensation) and indirect language learning strategies (social), which were
modified from Oxford’s (1990) strategy classification system. Strategies can be defined
as specific steps taken “by the learner to make learning easier, faster, more enjoyable,
more self-directed, more effecting, and more transferable to new situations” (Oxford,
1990, p. 8). In addition to completing an understanding of the processes involved in
intentional learning, this component of the conceptual framework aided in collecting and
interpreting the data regarding the use of learning strategies in the hybrid format.
Research Questions
Changes in the Writing Skills
The first research question addressed the changes in the writing which took place
in the hybrid learning format. The data which were obtained throughout the course from
student in-class and take-home assignments and blog posts allow for the conclusion that
the most common changes reflect improvements in the organization, content, and volume
of writing. Better organization was noticed in the writing of all four participants and
included such features as better presentation of the controlling idea, relevant supporting
details, better sequence of supporting details and examples, and improved unity of
writing. This change can be attributed to the cyclical structure of the hybrid course which
allowed for providing the students with prompt feedback and extensive writing practice
outside of classroom. Improvements in content and volume were found in the writing of
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Yana and Joe, who were involved in blogging more than the other two participants. Their
contribution to the blog discussions was supported by extensive reading, which gave
them opportunities not only for meaningful knowledge construction but also for faster
developing their writing skills.
Additionally, there were positive changes in writing mechanics which referred to
the use of better syntax and spelling. Gio and Jang had positive changes in sentence
structure. Both of them made improvements in the use of clauses and the word order.
However, punctuation remained a problem in Gio’s writing although it was significantly
improved by the other three participants. Yana, whose spelling problems were the most
obvious at the beginning of the semester, was able to make noticeable progress in this
area. To a smaller extent, spelling also improved in Gio’s writing. These changes indicate
that using written language for communication is also beneficial for positive changes in
the mechanics of writing.
All participants agreed that these features developed throughout their engagement
in the online writing discourse in blog and Writing Shop, which allowed them to share
their ideas, collect information, complete their prewriting, and receive feedback. They
also commented on the convenience of using asynchronous method of online
communication which eliminated the pressure to produce fast responses and gave them a
chance to do their own research and compose longer passages. These results are
substantiated by the findings in earlier studies (Al-Jarf, 2002; Black, 2005; Carpenter,
Brown, & Hickman, 2004; Jones, 2007) which indicate that CMC positively affects the
quality and organization of second language writing. Many researchers explain student
achievements in the hybrid and Web-enhanced courses by the constant interaction with
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the text while processing and producing the language which promotes the use of multiple
language skills, critical thinking, and intellectual development (Esmaeili, 2002; de
Guerrero, 2004; Krashen & Lee, 2004; Smith, 2000). These studies found a strong
connection between reading, thinking, forming inner speech, and writing which points to
the fundamental importance of the development of language through the development of
mind (Vygotsky, 1962).
The results of the case study also revealed some challenges that should be taken
into consideration while designing and teaching hybrid EAP courses. Namely, the hybrid
learning format did not entirely eliminate the problems in general language use and
grammar. These aspects are closely related to the level of language acquisition and
require significant amount of time and learner effort (Krashen & Brown, 2007).
Specifically, all four participants continued having difficulties in the use of grammar
forms which were alien to their native languages (verb tenses, prepositions, and articles)
even though they received grammar instruction during class time and used online
resources independently to work on the most troublesome forms. Similar issues were
found in other research involving the hybrid model (Zhang, Gao, Ring, & Zhang, 2007),
which suggests that developing accuracy in the use of academic language is far more
complex than improving organization and, therefore, must be specifically addressed in
the hybrid courses.
Among the factors that impeded writing skills development were also insufficient
general knowledge and critical thinking skills of some participants. The difficulties in
these areas are commonly encountered in the EAP programs due to inadequacy of prior
education of the precollege adult ESL students. Since writing, especially academic
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writing, requires highly developed cognitive constructs and the ability to carry out
analysis and argumentation, organization of writing cannot guarantee qualitative changes
in this area (Heaney, 2006). The CSILE model in this study allowed the students to
develop new schemata through online reading and interaction which required critical
thinking skills. However, some participants were better prepared to make the transition to
constructive learning than others due to their personal motivation and earlier developed
approach to learning.
Evidence of Self-Directedness
The second research question referred to evidence of self-directedness present in
the hybrid course. Based on the findings, it was possible to establish that Yana, Joe, and
Jang, who had high motivation to learn, used additional online resources and stayed
persistent in pursuing their learning objectives. With some guidance earlier in the
semester, these participants learned to set new goals, evaluate their progress, and plan
further steps in learning. They also demonstrated evidence of having high expectations of
themselves, recognizing their strengths and weaknesses, and seeking help from more
experienced partners. All of these components of self-directed learning (Bandura, 1986)
were essential in the hybrid course, which required a considerable amount of independent
study. However, Gio, whose level of motivation was very low, did not prove that she was
capable of regulating her learning. Her negative attitude to independent study affected her
overall progress in this course and her willingness to take control over her learning.
These results agree with some earlier studies (Carpenter, Brown, & Hickman, 2004;
Kannan & Macknish, 2000) which indicate that motivation is the principal factor of
positive experience in the hybrid learning format.
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Among other issues related to self-directedness were inadequate self-discipline
and time management skills, which are common in online education (Serdyukov & Hill,
2004). Although Yana, Joe, and Jang spent approximately 20-30 hours studying
independently online, they sometimes reported difficulties focusing on the assignments
caused by the need to share the computer with other family members or by some
irrelevant Internet attractions. On a minor scale, fear of making decisions and overcritical
self-monitoring were also interfering with self-directed learning of Jang and Joe. Jang,
who only recently arrived in the US from Thailand, was educated in a highly teacher-
centered system and was not accustomed to making her own decisions regarding her
learning. Joe, on the other hand, had a tendency to exaggerate his errors. Although these
aspects are closely linked to personality and attitude to learning, they also indicate
problems with self-efficacy and should be considered while planning, organizing, and,
and teaching hybrid courses along with students’ educational culture and traditions.
Use of Learning Strategies
The last research question addressed the most commonly used language learning
strategies in the hybrid learning environment. This direction of research continued the
investigation of students’ ability to carry out independent study and is, therefore, closely
connected with the question of self-directedness, which involves such strategies as setting
goals, evaluating progress, and planning further steps in learning. Operating with these
indirect strategies implies the choice of the actions that could bring better learning results.
Thus, further investigation of the use of strategies included four categories: memory,
cognitive, compensation, and social. The data obtained from student evaluations indicate
that Yana, Joe, and Jang, who were more self-directed than Gio, used all four sets to a
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greater extent online than in class. There was a short transition period at the beginning of
the semester, when the students were becoming familiar with the new format. Starting
from the second biweekly evaluation, the use of learning strategies online significantly
outweighed their use in class.
The fact that all strategies dominated in the online environment can be partially
explained by the growth of the students’ self-directedness and continuing interest in
learning. Following the CSILE model, none of the class assignments were duplicated
online, and the level of difficulty of online course work was gradually increasing so as to
maintain the level of challenge (Sankaran, Sankaran, & Bui, 2000). In addition, the online
discussions helped the students to become more familiar with each other and learn from
each other’s experiences while constructing their new knowledge. These elements of the
hybrid format allowed for sustaining the students’ motivation throughout the course.
Similar findings were reported in some studies on the hybrid writing instruction (Bloch,
2007; Cunningham, 2000; Lowe & Williams, 2004) which indicated that having online
learning experience in addition to the traditional instruction creates a better sense of
community and has a motivational effect on students.
While emphasizing the importance of interaction and knowledge sharing in hybrid
learning, it is necessary to note that social strategies were used more online than in class;
however, they were not used as much as cognitive and compensation ones. This finding
does not contradict social learning theory but reveals its different function in the web-
based instruction. In the classroom, students have to pay much more attention to social
factors (teacher, peers, etc.) which put social strategies ahead of the others. However, in
the online environment, where there are no social distractions, students apply fewer social
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skills and are encouraged to use more information processing and critical thinking skills.
Even while communicating online, they have to read and think first before producing the
message. Therefore, interaction remains an essential part of the online
learning community, but by removing physical social presence, it creates a social forum
that brings forward higher order thinking skills and stimulates learning.
Thus, the use of learning strategies online can be characterized by the tendency to
apply cognitive strategies (repeating, recognizing, using additional resources, analyzing,
and summarizing) and compensation strategies (using clues, native language, and
communication; getting help; and adjusting message) more than the other categories. It is
important to notice that the division between the two categories was based on the amount
of the traditional instruction the students received during the week. Thus, Yana and Gio,
who had classes twice a week and received more material from direct instruction, used
the Web site to repeat this material with the help of additional resources, to summarize
their reading, and to analyze their errors after getting instructor’s feedback. Therefore,
they used cognitive strategies online the most. Joe and Jang attended classes once a week
and had to apply more effort studying independently, which required strategies that could
help them understand the material on their own. Thus, they found compensation
strategies most useful.
It was also found that those students who added 20-30 hours of online study to
their traditional instruction used significantly more strategies in the Web-based
environment than in class. Gio, whose online study time was limited to five hours a week,
did not demonstrate a significant difference in the use of strategies in either environment.
Thus, the increase in the use of strategies online can be explained by the amount of time
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the student spent studying independently online. Additionally, there was a noticeable
difference in overall use of strategies in both environments in the evening and Saturday
EAP programs. Joe and Jang, who received three hours of traditional instruction a week
in the Saturday program, had to spend more time studying online and used more learning
strategies in that environment than Yana and Gio, who attended classes twice a week in
the evening program. The Saturday students also used more learning strategies in class
than the students in the evening program. This finding suggests that online study helped
develop their overall learning skills which allowed them to study more efficiently in each
environment.
Summary of Findings
The evidence obtained throughout the investigation allowed for the conclusion
that combining classroom and online instruction resulted in the following changes in the
participants’ learning behavior:
1. Improvements in the writing skills which were found in organization, content,
volume, syntax, and spelling.
2. The use of self-directed learning which involves setting goals, evaluting progress,
and planning steps to achieve goals and is based on motivation to learn and
recognizing strengths and weaknesses.
3. The use of all four sets of language learning strategies (memory, cognitive,
compensation, and social) to a greater extent online than in class.
Limitations of the Study
The main limitation of this study was the inability to embrace all the variables
affecting student performance. The format of the case study limited the scope of the
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research to the phenomenon of the hybrid EAP course in the community college setting.
Therefore, many sets of data indicating factors and relationships that lay beyond the
chosen research questions could not be explored so as not to change the direction of the
investigation.
None of the participants in this project had ever had experiences with the hybrid
format of learning prior to taking this course. In their interviews, the participants
answered questions about their best and worst experiences both in class and online. Their
responses indicated that their feelings about studying online changed throughout the
course. In the second half of the semester, all four participants stated that if they had to
choose between the traditional and the hybrid format, they would choose the hybrid one.
However, the scope of the research did not include investigation of the students’ feelings
about combining classroom and online instruction. Thus, it was impossible to fully
address the changes in their attitude to using online technologies for language learning.
The chosen format of the online component was limited to the class Web site,
where social software technology was used for class discussions and first draft
demonstrations. The technical limitations of the course design did not allow for using
other forms of course delivery such as Black Board or WebCT. The investigation was
focused entirely on student performance and excluded the relationship between the
method of delivery and the learning progress. Therefore, the results of the study cannot
be used to compare the effectiveness of all existing course delivery systems.
The first research question targeted changes in the students’ writing as a result of
taking the hybrid course. However, the process of writing requires strong critical thinking
skills and language proficiency and often depends on cultural and personal factors which
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could not be investigated in this study. In the hybrid format, critical thinking skills are
essential in processing information from reading and summarizing it in writing. Although
reading was an important part of this course, its role was not specifically addressed in the
research. The changes in writing are presented as the result of all aspects of the hybrid
learning rather than reading and writing connection. Likewise, the relationship between
critical thinking skills and changes in writing could not be addressed in this study.
Although all participants had an average proficiency of Level 6, there actual language
skills differed due to such factors as approach to learning, length of stay in the US,
language background, and work or family environment. Because of the specific purpose
and conditions of the study, these factors stayed outside the focus of the investigation.
The second research question concerned the evidence of self-directedness of the
students. Most of the data indicate that motivation to study, self-discipline, and time
management skills helped the students to apply metacognitive strategies in regulating
their learning. However, it was impossible to address the factors that affect these
components of self-directedness. In particular, it is necessary to understand what factors,
intrinsic or extrinsic, have a stronger influence on learners’ decisions to study
independently and their choice of learning activities and how time management skills can
be affected by the need to attend classes at appointed time in the hybrid format. Another
fundamental component of self-directedness which was noticed during the investigation
refers to the students’ expectations of themselves and the instructor. Since this aspect
often bears a cultural impact, it raises the question of the relationship between the cultural
background of the learners and their performance in courses that require independent
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online study. However, the scope of the study did not allow for investigating either
motivational or cultural factors.
The final research question addressed the use of language learning strategies in
the hybrid learning format. According to the obtained data, all sets of strategies were used
significantly more online than in class. However, some of the findings could not be
substantiated by research literature due to lack of data in this area. It was also impossible
to further investigate to what extent the amount of classroom instruction affects the
choice of learning strategies online; whether there is a relationship between the amount of
time of independent study and the use of learning strategies; and whether the use of
specific strategies online affects the learner performance in class. More research is
needed in order to answer these questions.
Implications for Social Change
ESL instruction is an important developmental field that serves as a transition
stage to acculturation and realization of individual potential in a new social environment.
Due to its social importance, ESL has attracted the attention of many scholars and
practitioners who sought ways of more efficient teaching and learning. Although much
has been achieved in ESL methodology over the years, researchers continue to be
challenged with new possibilities brought about by the growing knowledge. Most
recently, technological advancements have offered tools for second language learning
which require researchers’ attention. The conducted case study of hybrid ESL writing
instruction contributes to the cause of positive social change with its theoretical, practical,
and social applications.
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From the theoretical perspective, the study offers new knowledge based on the
experience of applying the conceptual framework involving social learning in a
combination of traditional and online instruction. It also demonstrates an innovative
approach to teaching academic ESL writing and thus enriches the current methodology
and research with new evidence of the benefits of online technologies for ESL
instruction. Moreover, it shows the role of the conceptual framework in the hybrid course
design and sets a model of the hybrid instructional format.
The practical importance of the study is indicated by the participants’ positive
outcomes and experience in the hybrid course which resulted in improvements in their
writing skills and their growth as self-directed learners. Both results were achieved by a
successful course design and organization which allowed for increasing the study time
and creating multiple opportunities for skills development through continuing cyclical
learning. Since writing is the most difficult skill to acquire, the improvements in this area
which occurred in a 10- and 12-week course can be considered significant. While
learners’ self-directedness is essential in all academic programs, it is paramount for ESL
students who are pressured to perform well in the content areas using a non-native
language. By giving the learners the tools for independent study and the opportunity to
learn collaboratively, this course helped them build their metacognitive skills and feel
responsible for their learning. These experiences raised their confidence as learners and
allowed them to become more flexible in using various learning strategies. Increasing
their online learning, they became more independent in setting and achieving their goals
and choosing strategies that were more appropriate for their needs. Thus, the three
aspects of the research—writing skills, self-directedness, and learning strategies—are
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relevant to the present-day needs of college-bound ESL students and have practical
significance to both students and instructors.
The social aspect of this research is reflected in preparing adult ESL learners for
academic study which is a prerequisite for improving their professional status and quality
of life. Education has always been an important factor of personal and professional
development. However, its significance in the US has grown in recent years due to the
economic slowdown. Therefore, the English language skills, particularly writing, are
fundamental for those who wish to continue their education in the United States. By
improving the learners’ acquisition of writing skills, the hybrid EAP course built a basis
for a faster transition to the credit programs and a more successful academic experience.
Last but not least, by serving the needs of the minority groups, this course provided them
with tools for self-improvement which will eventually benefit both the learners and the
community they live in. From this perspective, the case study contributed not only to
individual needs of the adult ESL students but also to the positive change in the
American society.
Recommendations for Actions
The findings in this study indicate that the hybrid format of learning gives a
number of advantages in improving the quality of the ESL writing instruction and
developing self-directed and independent study skills of learners. Therefore, it is of
primary interest to post-secondary educational institutions which offer developmental
ESL courses, ESL instructors who prepare learners for academic study, and college-
bound ESL learners. Additionally, the study demonstrated a model of integration of the
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traditional and online instruction which can be used by instructional designers developing
hybrid courses.
Success in hybrid learning begins with understanding of the technological and
pedagogical features it involves and the responsibilities it places on the instructors and
learners. Therefore, it is essential that hybrid courses be properly advertised and
described to the interested population. It is important that schools offer student
counseling to those who are planning to take a hybrid course in order to explain the
technical and academic requirements of this type of study. Equally important is staff
development which should involve technology skills as well as methods of integrating
online material into the traditional instruction. Although both student counseling and
staff development are part of any academic environment, specifically for hybrid courses,
it should be done in collaboration with technology departments and the program
administrators.
Technologically, hybrid courses do not require a special infrastructure and can be
implemented through any available course delivery system or open network. This
decision depends on the practical considerations and should be taken by the school
department of technology and the instructor prior to advertising the course. Likewise, the
choice of the communication mode (synchronous or asynchronous) should be chosen
according to the purpose of the instruction and the school’s technological capacity. It is
essential, however, that access to the Web component be available at all times, and the
instructor and students maintain online communication throughout the course.
The biggest change required by introducing hybrid courses involves teachers’ and
students’ work load. The amount of online material may contain from 30% to 79% of
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course content (Allen, Seaman, & Garrett, 2007). Thus, it is the responsibility of the
program administrators to determine the number of face-to-face and online hours in the
teaching contract. For students, it is important to understand that their online participation
is an integral part of their course work and that there are many benefits beyond receiving
grades and credits.
The findings of the study are important for ESL instructors who intend to use the
hybrid format in their courses. The results concerning the development of writing skills
are especially interesting for those who work with college-bound students or teach ESL
writing in other adult education programs. This project also demonstrated an example of
integration academic modules in five content areas—literature, history, science,
psychology, and business—into an EAP course, which can be followed by other ESL
professionals. However, it is critical to understand that a hybrid course is not simply a
means of communication with students outside of class but a continuation of class work
which requires strong facilitation skills and dedication to learner success. Because hybrid
learning is based on student-centered pedagogy, the instructors must be ready to embrace
this approach in order to see positive results in the students’ performance (Gousseva,
1998; Cunningham, 2000). Computer skills are another component of success. Thus,
instructors must be responsible for taking the necessary training in order to be ready to
implement constructivist ESL methodology using online technologies. Although many
schools have professional course developers, as experts in the field, ESL instructors
should share the responsibility for selecting the course material and developing the course
structure and sequence.
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This case study can also be of interest to ESL students who are motivated to learn
faster as a result of such intrinsic factors as job requirements, family needs, or personal
development. These factors determine their desire to try different ways of learning in
order to accomplish their goals. However, student motivation must be accompanied by
willingness to take control over their learning by setting attainable goals and
understanding their potential. Planning to take a hybrid course, students must be realistic
about their time management skills and their strengths and weaknesses. Those who are
willing to share the responsibility for the learning will be able to appreciate the flexibility
of this method and the support they can receive outside of class.
Finally, this study showed an example of an EAP course which can be interesting
for instructional designers, course developers, and ESL publishers, who offer online
companions to their print materials. The online component allowed for the cyclical
organization of the course and the expansion of each lesson through a variety of learning
activities. This format proved to be successful and should be used in the future. This
course integrated the textbook and online material including reading selection and self-
study resources in grammar and writing. However, the use of the textbook may be
optional since the online environment provides resources for all language skills
development. Importantly, the course Web site must serve the purpose of the instruction
and focus on functionality rather than visual effects (Deubel, 2003; Serdyukov & Hill,
2003).
The dissemination of these results can be done by sharing the results of the study
with the administration of the English Language Institute (ELI), which hosted the project.
The findings can be included in staff development workshops and student orientation
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sessions. Additionally, the information for both instructors and students can be posted on
the ELI Web site. For a wider audience, dissemination can take place through online and
print professional publications and conference presentations.
Recommendations for Further Study
Several variables were encountered during the investigation which could not be
explored due to the limitations of the case study. Some of occurred in connection with the
research questions; others refer to the hybrid format of learning and course design.
My analysis of the changes in the writing skills of the participants was based on
the final drafts of compositions and the online discussion posts. However, a deeper
understanding of the changes in the writing as a process of though expression requires
addressing the amount of reading and the form of reading that preceded the writing
practice. Much research had been done on connection between reading and writing skills;
however, the online environment makes interaction with the text principally different
from reading a book. Due to its branching design, the online text takes readers to new
destinations which include additional reading (definition, explanations, authors’
biographies, descriptions, etc.), visual (illustrations, photos, charts, data tables, etc.), and
audio (podcasts, narratives, songs, etc.) materials. Thus, reading online provides learners
with a rich experience that stimulates different senses and involves different critical
thinking and language processing skills. This brings up a question of whether such form
of reading enhances the development of writing and critical thinking skills.
Another point that could not be included in the investigation of writing skills is
the acquisition of grammar. This aspect requires quantitative data collection instruments
and can be better addressed in an experimental research. It is also important to understand
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what factors of the hybrid learning (direct instruction, online tutorial, self-study
resources, CMC, etc.) cause most changes in grammatical accuracy.
Students’ self-directedness and the use of learning strategies in the hybrid
learning require further research. My investigation in these areas resulted in some
accidental evidence that the learners’ self-directed skills and the choice of learning
strategies have a strong relationship with the model of learning that is customary in their
native culture. However, in this case study, it was impossible to investigate the effect of
the participants’ cultural background on these aspects of learning. Although some
research on motivation and the use of strategies among cultures has been done (Oxford,
1996), it did not involve hybrid learning, which differs from the traditional environment
due to the use of technology. This direction of research should involve cultural views on
learning with technology, attitudes to learning independently, and the relationship
between self-directedness and learner success.
Some of the questions regarding the use of learning strategies relate to the
organization of the course and should be investigated further. First of all, it is important
to understand the relationship between the amount of classroom and online study and the
choice of learning strategies in each environment. Since learning online can take a
significant amount of time, it is also necessary to explore the relationship between this
factor and the use of learning strategies. The data in this study indicated that the use of
learning strategies online was growing faster than in class. It is, therefore, necessary to
address the factors that promoted this growth and its possible effects on learning.
Additional areas of research include learners’ attitudes toward combining
classroom and online instruction and the changes in their perspectives on studying
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independently online. All the participants in this study reflected positively on most of
their learning experiences and expressed their preference to hybrid courses over the
traditional ones. However, it is not clear what experiences caused the change from feeling
insecure to feeling confident in the online environment. Also, some participants had
technical and social difficulties such as losing the Internet connection and not receiving
enough support from their peers online. Therefore, it is important to understand what
impact these issues had on their learning.
Finally, the design of the hybrid course also requires further investigation. In
particular, it is necessary to explore the online features and resources that students find
most useful in their learning experience. Since technology continues to develop, new
forms of communication (e.g. Skype) should also be considered in hybrid learning.
Thus, further research may include the following questions:
1. Whether online reading has a positive effect on writing and critical thinking skills
development
2. Whether specific features of online learning enhance grammatical accuracy
3. Whether there is a relationship between cultural views on independent learning
with technology and self-directedness
4. Whether the amount of classroom study time affects the choice of learning
strategies
5. Whether there is a relationship between the amount of independent study the use
of learning strategies
6. Whether specific factors of online learning dictate the choice of strategies and
affect learning
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7. Whether specific hybrid learning experiences affect learners’ attitude to this
format
8. Whether students find some features of hybrid learning more useful than others
9. Whether the need to attend scheduled classes affects students’ time management
Reflections on the Teaching and Research Experiences
Teaching Experience
I have been integrating online technologies into traditional instruction since 2007,
when I first designed the Web site, ESL Writing Extension, as a prototype for the hybrid
EAP course. Since then, I have used the site in my pilot study and redesigned it three
times trying to improve the look, functionality, and content. It took about a year to
completely develop the structure of the course and to choose the most successful
organization and material. Therefore, starting this project, I was confident in the
technological aspect of the course and my ability to find creative solutions to any
technical problems that may have occurred. From the human perspective, however, I was
well aware of the challenges and responsibilities I was about to take on.
This spring semester, I was assigned to teach the lower section in the evening and
Saturday program, and my experience was telling me that I was facing an uphill battle.
Students who are placed in the lower section usually have many problems in grammar
and writing, and the semester is spent practicing paragraph development. The essay
format is briefly introduced at the end of the course. In addition to language problems,
some students have lack of general knowledge and wrong expectations of the course and
their responsibilities as learners. Having taken a few regular ESL courses, students grow
comfortable in the all-ESL environment, where teachers are tolerant to errors and do not
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mind repeating in class what should have been studied at home. Being challenged with
higher academic requirements, they reveal serious lack of study and time management
skills. This list can continue with an array of individual learning problems, which only
emphasizes the need for change in the ESL instruction.
One of the most difficult aspects of teaching an ESL class is forming a
community of learners in a multilingual, multicultural setting. In addition to personal
attitudes to learning, all students bring their cultural styles of interaction which create
challenges in developing the sense of togetherness and establishing open communication.
Both evening and Saturday groups were culturally diverse. In my evening class, which
consisted of 13 students, there were five students from Peru, two students from Ukraine,
one from Korea, one from Columbia, one from Ghana, one from Russia, one from
Romania, and one from Nicaragua. Among the 17 students in the Saturday group, there
were five students from Peru, three students from Ecuador, three from Thailand, two
from Korea, two from Columbia, one from Albania, and one from the Dominical
Republic. Although the Spanish language was dominant in both groups, interaction
among the students in class and online was affected by their cultural differences in the
first few weeks of the course. However, once most of the students became accustomed to
using the blog for communication, they realized that they were making many interesting
discoveries about other cultures and acknowledged that the online environment gave
them better opportunities for communication than the traditional one. It can be explained
by the differences in social presence represented by each environment. The invisibility
factor of online communication erased the usual social barriers that stop second language
learners from freely expressing themselves. In contrast, face-to-face interaction was more
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bound by the awareness of other people’s reaction to individual behavior. Thus,
interaction online became more open than in class, where it continued to be affected by
social presence.
Teaching the hybrid course, I realized that the typical difficulties of the traditional
instruction were magnified through the use of technology. The online communication
brought out many problems which could easily remain hidden in class: language errors,
negative attitudes, lack of motivation, etc. Some students had little knowledge to share
but tried to be involved; others had fear of communicating and either contributed very
little or skipped the discussions; yet others never developed the habit of working on their
English outside the class and simply did not do the assignments. These issues are not
exceptional in ESL practice. Every traditional class has students with low skills who try
hard, students who are afraid to use the language in front of others, and students who do
not study on their own. However, in a class of 15-20 students, it is easy to blend in while
online everyone makes an individual statement.
On the other hand, some students saw the online discussions as an excellent forum
for self-expression. This group wanted a chance to be heard in class as well but had to
consider the time and the needs of others. Using the blog, they had no such restrictions.
Other students found that asynchronous communication helped them develop their
thoughts better because there was no pressure to produce immediate response. They liked
the fact that they could spend as much time as necessary to prepare their messages and
post them at their convenience. Likewise, students who were uncomfortable speaking in
class felt more confident using written communication because they could collect their
ideas and correct their mistakes before sharing their posts with others. Not having social
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presence physically, they also felt that it was a safer way to communicate since there was
no one to judge their accent or appearance.
From the technical perspective, there were no significant problems with using
computers for learning. All students in the evening class were computer literate and had
computers either at home or at work. In the Saturday class, only one student did not have
a computer and did not know how to use one. This person received assignments in print
but did not participate in the online discussions. Therefore, lack of technology skills was
not an impediment to online study for most students.
Overall, my experience of teaching the hybrid course reinforced my belief that
students’ intrinsic motivation and dedication are the most important factors of success in
adult ESL instruction. Many students have job and family responsibilities that outweigh
their academic commitments. This develops dependence on the teacher and false
expectations of the instruction. Students begin to believe that physically attending the
class where the teacher can answer their questions substitutes for their learning outside
the classroom. Some students even acquire the I-pay-for-it attitude in order to justify their
lack of effort. These common social problems of the ESL field became especially
obvious in the hybrid course, which required systematic independent learning. In both
groups, there were students who did not participate explaining it by lack of time; those
who participated irregularly; and those who consistently followed my requirements for
online participation. This group showed the most improvement.
Another observation refers to individualization of instruction which I found was
easier to accomplish in the hybrid course than in the traditional one. The students’ first
draft demonstrations in Writing Shop helped me notice the areas that needed immediate
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attention and give them feedback and recommendations. Some students used this section
of the Web site to communicate with me throughout the week. After posting the first
draft, they continued making changes and posting new drafts in order to achieve
maximum improvement. This helped me to establish a productive collaboration which
would have been impossible in the traditional format. Other students emailed me their
questions regarding their assignments or the correct use of grammar and vocabulary.
Additionally, the students’ blog posts demonstrated their understanding of the topic and
allowed me to address their weaknesses in the following lesson. Compared with the
traditional classes, the hybrid course gave students more individual attention and had
them more engaged in learning.
Thus, aside from some issues with students’ motivation, my teaching experience
was enriched by the new possibilities of communicating with the students outside the
class and better ways of addressing their needs.
Research Experience
The first week of the EAP program in the spring semester coincided with the
beginning of my case study. Knowing that my participants may have many of the typical
ESL problems, I felt apprehensive of the success of the project. However, I had to avoid
that bias in order not to develop wrong expectations that could affect my judgment. I tried
to focus on the positive teaching experiences I had over the years and the encouraging
results of my pilot study. An ESL classroom is unlike any other learning environment in
that it brings together individuals from the most diverse backgrounds and social groups.
Just as it is common to find learners who are struggling with literacy, it is also common
to have students with higher degrees and aspiration for learning. My optimism was also
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reinforced by the sense of purpose that was inseparable from this project. Seeing my
research socially important helped me stay positive and focus on my objectives.
The first two weeks of the study were the hardest mainly because I had to deal
with the usual resistance of both groups to use the Web site. However, this difficulty was
expected based on my previous experience of teaching the hybrid course. Studying online
was not only new to all of them but also unexpected. This element of surprise was both a
positive and a negative factor in my study. On the one hand, the time and effort it took to
make students realize the benefits of this method could have been spent more
productively. On the other hand, it ensured that my participants were ordinary ESL
students who had typical attitudes and problems and not an exclusive group of
overzealous learners.
This time, the adjustment period, which normally takes place at the beginning of
the semester, included an additional challenge of establishing collaboration with my
participants and understanding their needs and expectations. It impressed me that many
students volunteered to take part in this project even though they knew that there were no
extra credits or grades to gain. They seemed to be genuinely interested in learning more.
However, once I started working with the participants, I realized that only three of them
were sincere in their desire to improve. Gio, whom I called the Outsider, was much less
motivated than the others. I cannot explain why she joined the project. Perhaps she
overestimated her own enthusiasm for learning. She did not break her commitment, but
because of her minimal effort, she did not improve as much as the other participants. Yet
her involvement in the study was a valuable experience for me. As a teacher, I realized
that this format of learning requires more motivation and self-directedness than the
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traditional one. As a researcher, I learned that even the best-planned studies can have an
unpredictable downside when working with human subjects. Above all, Gio’s
participation allowed me to contrast her progress and experiences with those of Yana,
Joe, and Jang. Since Gio’s learning was not much different from the traditional format,
the experiences of the other three participants clearly show the benefits of the hybrid
learning.
Most of the data collection tools required the participants’ evaluation of the
learning experiences in this course. Naturally, there was some confusion in the first week,
so I had to do some modeling and explaining. However, due to my duel role in this study,
I also had to be aware of my possible influence on their responses. In order to avoid
getting “suggested” answers, I gave them the freedom to complete their questionnaires
independently stressing that there were no right or wrong answers and that every
experience and observation they shared with me had value. My other strategy was to keep
a friendly relationship with the participants regardless of their performance. I emphasized
the fact that, being a student myself, I could relate to the difficulties they had to go
through, but as a teacher, I wanted to see them learn more, and that was the whole
purpose of the project. However, I did not treat them differently from other students
either in class or online.
My most significant experience as a researcher came from analyzing the data. The
positive changes in the evaluations of online learning experiences and the improvements
in writing showed that my idea of a hybrid EAP course proved to be beneficial for the
students. Yet it took careful examination of many details in order to assemble the overall
picture. My analyses would have been impossible without my close relationship with all
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participants which allowed me to understand their learning needs, preferences, and goals,
as well as their personalities. Since this was a qualitative study, these human “data”
helped me recognize the reasons behind their responses and interpret them better.
However, I had to be aware of the potential subjectivity in my interpretations of
the data that might come as the result of familiarity with the students. One of my
strategies was grading the writing of all students who attended my classes without
looking at the names of the authors. This helped me to avoid making premature
predictions. Also, using the rubric for ESL composition (Jacobs, Hartfiel, Hughey, &
Wormuth, 1981), I tried to make sure that my assessment matched the criteria. I am
grateful to two of my colleagues at WCC, who agreed to verify my assessment of the
students’ writing. Another useful strategy was my constant communication with the
participants. Their feedback during the interviews was invaluable to me as a way of
clarifying their perspective on the hybrid learning experiences and the values they
assigned to the questionnaire items. During the study, the participants received two
progress reports reflecting the changes in the quality and volume of their writing. In
addition to being a motivational factor, it helped to maintain their goals and the spirit of
collaboration.
Looking back at my experience, I realize that my choice of the case study design
was appropriate for the purpose of the research. I was trying to conduct an in-depth
investigation and, therefore, could not involve more than four participants. However, due
to a number of questions that rose during the investigation, I believe this direction of
research should continue with a larger sample of population and a different method. My
alternative for a case study with a few participants from each group would be an
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experimental study with two groups in the same EAP program. The students in one class
would use the Web site in addition to their face-to-face sessions and make the
experimental group; the students in the other class would attend their regular sessions
without access to the Web site. This method would allow for the comparison of the
students’ achievements in both learning formats.
As a novice researcher, I have learned that every study has limitations. However,
they do not impede gaining new knowledge but open doors to new ideas and raise new
questions to be answered. This study has been an important experience for me especially
due to its practical aspect which will hopefully find its place in the ESL curriculum.
Conclusion
The case study of hybrid course design demonstrated that blending traditional and
online instruction creates a number of advantages for college-bound students who are
motivated to improve their language skills faster. The results of the study indicate that
learners can achieve significant gain in organization, content, and volume of writing.
These improvements are the result of integrating online reading and communication with
academic writing which takes place in a cyclical manner and increasing the time for a
better material acquisition. Additionally, the hybrid format allows for individualizing the
instruction by providing students with the instructor’s support and tools for independent
learning. However, as all online study, the hybrid learning requires high intrinsic
motivation and self-directedness. Both successes and failures are magnified by this
method due to the openness of the online environment. Thus, the benefits of the hybrid
format for truly motivated people can come from being engaged in meaningful
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constructive learning; while for those who are either not motivated or unsure of their
learning goals, the hybrid format may not make a significant difference.
At present, the novelty of the hybrid learning causes reservations regarding
blending traditional and online instruction, most of which stem from misunderstanding of
what this method represents and what organizational changes are required (Allen,
Seaman, & Garrett, 2007). The intention of this study was to demonstrate that a hybrid
course is not a variation of either online or face-to-face learning format, but a unique
instructional design that brings student participation and achievement to a higher level. It
is my sincere hope that my research will draw attention of those people who make
decisions regarding course offering and those who carry them out to the use of online
technologies in second language learning.
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APPENDICES
APPENDIX A:
HYBRID COURSE DOCUMENTS
Table A1 Content of the Web Site
Course information Learning resources
1. course description
2. Saturday syllabus
3. PM syllabus
4. requirements
5. home assignments for:
a) Evening EAP
b) Saturday EAP
1. grammar
2. writing
3. reading
4. course handouts
Table A2 Integration of Class and Online Instruction
Spring 2008 Instructional Plan
Week Class work Online reading/discussion topic Writing topic
1 Paragraph
structure
Brilliant or Plagiarized? Is Plagiarism a Crime?
2 Narrative
Paragraph
History Module: The Puritans Describe a Significant Event in History or
Politics of Your Country
3 Descriptive
Paragraph
Historical Places around the
World
Describe a Historical Place in Your
Country
4 Analyzing
Causes
Immigration Analyze the Cause of Immigration
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5 Analyzing
Causes
Literature Module: The Use of
Force
Analyze the Behavior of the Characters in
the Story
6 Process Writing Science Module: What is
Cybernetics?
Describe the Process of Communication
in Your Culture
7 Process Writing Computers in Everyday Life Describe the Process of Using WCC
Online Library Catalogues
8 Comparison &
Contrast
Traditional & Nontraditional
Schools & Students
Compare & Contrast Traditional &
Nontraditional Students
9 Comparison &
Contrast
Gender Differences and Learning Compare & Contrast Specific
Characteristics of the Development of
Boys & Girls
10 Classification
Paragraph
What Type of Learner Are You? Write a Classification of Learning Styles
11 Analyzing
Effects
Business Module: Cultural
Dimensions & Globalization
Describe the Effects of Another Culture
on the Development of Your Country
12 Analyzing
Effects
Computer Revolution Describe the Effects of Computer
Technologies on Society
Table A3 Sample Weekly Assignment
Week Date Evening EAP Date Saturday EAP
5 2/25
1. Text: Chapter 4: pp. 88-93
2. Grammar: 240-242
3. Blog discussion: Literature Module;
The Use of Force
4. Writing: Explain the reasons for the
conflict in the story The Use of Force.
2/23-
27
1. Text: Chapter 4: pp. 88-96
2. Grammar: pp. 240-242
3. Blog discussion: Literature
Module; The Use of Force
4. Writing: Explain the reasons for
the conflict in the story The Use of
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Post 1st draft in Writing Shop by 2/27 Force. Post 1st draft in Writing Shop
by 2/27.
2/27 1. Text: Chapter 4: pp. 94-96
2. Continue blog discussion
3. Read & comment on other students’
paragraphs online (use checklist on pp.
92-93). Prepare final draft and submit in
class on 3/03.
2/27-
3/01
1. Continue Blog discussion.
2. Read & comment on other
students' paragraphs online (use
checklist on pp. 92-93).
3. Prepare final draft & submit in
class on 3/01.
Table A4 Sample Blog Discussion Questions
Week 5 Blog Discussion Questions
1. What caused the conflict in the story? What part did each character play in it?
2. Could the conflict have been avoided? Do you think the use of force was justified?
3. Did you notice any problems in the behavior of the family members?
4. Do you find Mathilda's behavior typical for a girl her age? What would you do if you were her
parent?
5. What is the typical relationship between parents and children in your country? How is it
established?
6. Are there any differences in the way children are raised in your country and in the US?
APPENDIX B:
DATA COLLECTION TOOLS
Table B1 Intake Questionnaire Codes: PK – prior knowledge; SD – self-directedness Directions to the participants: Rate your responses on the scale from 1 (least like me) to 5 (most like me).
Demographic data
Age _____ Semesters of ESL _____
Sex _____ Computer skill _____
Years of education completed _____ Job status _____
Country of origin _____ Family status _____
Years in the U.S. _____
Educational background
PK The education I received prior to moving to the US
a) ___ gives me knowledge of other
cultures
b) ___ gives me knowledge of other
languages
c) ___ helps me set my goals and assess
my progress
d) ___ helps me learn new things
e) ___ helps me learn English
PK 2. The source of most of my learning experiences
was
a) ___ school
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b) ___ family and friends
c) ___ work
d) ___ TV
e) ___ books
f) ___ other (specify)
SD 3. The primary purpose of my learning is a) ___ to become a better person
b) ___ to get a better job
c) ___ to contribute to society
d) ___ to become successful
e) ___ to support my family
SD 4. The success of my learning in this program
depends on
a) ___ my study at school
b) ___ my study at home
c) ___ my teachers’ work
d) ___ my program organization and
academic support
e) ___ my family support
SD 5. The most important reason for using technology
in this program is that it
a) ___ helps me learn things faster
b) ___ helps me effectively accomplish
my goals in this class
c) ___ allows me to do my assignments
independently
d) ___ gives me opportunities to learn
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more
e) ___ allows me to learn at my own
pace
SD 6. The following sentence best describes me as a
learner in this program
a) ___ I am able to learn many things on
my own
b) ___ I can reach any goals if I work
hard
c) ___ I know my strengths and
weaknesses
d) ___ I can make decisions for myself
and carry them out
e) ___ I can plan and evaluate my
learning progress
Table B2 Weekly Self-Evaluation
Directions to the participants: Complete Section 1 at the beginning of each week of study. Complete Section 2 at the end of the week. Critically analyze and evaluate your performance. Section 1: 1. My goal this week is:
2. Steps I will take to reach my goal are:
3. Skills I want to improve are:
4. Problems I want to overcome are:
5. Things I want to learn in general are:
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Section 2:
Evaluation points Strongly
agree
Agree Disagree Strongly
disagree
Comments
I reached the goal I set for myself at the
beginning of the week
4 3 2 1
I completed all the steps I originally
planned
4 3 2 1
I improved the skills I wanted to improve 4 3 2 1
I overcame the problems 4 3 2 1
The new things I have learned this week
are
The skills I have improved this week
Things I would do differently
Table B3 Biweekly Learning Experiences: Online Reading and Writing Skills
Directions to the participants: Evaluate your reading and writing experience on a scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). Online reading Strongly
agree
Agree Neutral Disagree Strongly
disagree
I find that online reading helps me
a) relate my previous experience to the new
material
5 4 3 2 1
b) find ideas for writing 5 4 3 2 1
c) learn new vocabulary and grammar
structures
5 4 3 2 1
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d) learn new things in general 5 4 3 2 1
Online writing
I find that online written communication
helps me
a) use more English 5 4 3 2 1
b) become a more skillful writer 5 4 3 2 1
c) realize my weak and strong points in the
use of English
5 4 3 2 1
d) become more fluent in writing and orally 5 4 3 2 1
Table B4 Biweekly Learning Experiences: Combining Classroom and Online Experience
Directions to the participants: Compare your learning experience in class with your combined experience in class and online and evaluate the items below on a scale of 1 (worst) to 5 (best). I find that my classroom experience alone Rate Comment
Provides:
1. Proper language models (grammar structures, idioms, etc.)
2. Opportunities to improve my general English skills
3. Opportunities to improve my writing skills
Helps me:
4. Use my full potential as a learner
5. Apply my knowledge in practice
6. Share my knowledge with others
7. Learn from my peers as well as my teacher
8. Work on my weaknesses
I find that combining classroom and online experience
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Provides:
1. Proper language models (grammar structures, idioms, etc.)
2. Opportunities to improve my general English skills
3. Opportunities to improve my writing skills
Helps me:
4. Use my full potential as a learner
5. Apply my knowledge in practice
6. Share my knowledge with others
7. Learn from my peers as well as my teacher
8. Work on my weaknesses
Table B5 The Use of Learning Strategies Directions to the participants: On a scale from 1 (worst) to 5 (best) evaluate the strategies you have used most in class and online. If it doesn’t apply to your experience, write N/A.
Memory strategies
Evaluate the use of memorization techniques In class Online
1. Associating/elaborating
2. Placing new words into context
3. Using imagery, symbols, and mapping
4. Using keywords
5. Reviewing
Cognitive strategies
Evaluate the use of language learning techniques In class Online
1. Repeating
2. Recognizing and using formulas & patterns
3. Using additional resources
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4. Analyzing
5. Summarizing & reflecting
Compensation strategies
Evaluate your comprehension techniques In class Online
1. Using language and other clues
2. Switching to native language
3. Getting help from the instructor & peers
4. Using communication
5. Adjusting the message
Social strategies
Evaluate your social learning techniques In class Online
1. Asking for clarification
2. Asking for correction
3. Cooperating on a task with classmates
4. Communicating with more proficient speakers
5. Developing cultural understanding through communication
Biweekly In-Person Interview
I. Writing Experience
1. What difficulties in producing language have you encountered over the past two
weeks in
a) grammar
b) vocabulary
c) writing style (clarity of thought expression, paragraph organization:
descriptive, narrative, etc.)
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d) content (familiarity with the writing topic, linking with prior experience, etc)
2. What did you do to overcome these difficulties?
a) reviewed the task
b) rewrote the message
c) asked for help
d) other (please explain)
3. What difficulties in understanding the language have you encountered in
a) grammar
b) vocabulary
c) writing style
d) content (familiarity with the discussion topic, linking with prior experience)
4. What did you do to overcome these difficulties?
a) reviewed the task
b) rewrote the message
c) asked for help
d) other (please explain)
5. What difficulties have you encountered specifically in your online writing
experience
a) semantic (understanding the content)
b) syntactic (sentence structure, word order, punctuation)
c) mechanical (typing, editing, spelling)
d) general language use (language means, tense forms, etc.)
6. What did you do to overcome these difficulties?
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a) reviewed the task
b) rewrote the message
c) asked for help
d) other (please explain)
7. What difficulties have you encountered specifically in your online interaction
with your peers
a) clarity of your thought expression (use of vocabulary, idioms, sentence
organization, etc.)
b) clarity of others’ thought expression
c) differences in understanding the content
d) differences in understanding the task
8. What did you do to overcome these difficulties?
a) reviewed the task
b) rewrote the message
c) asked for help
d) other (please explain)
II. Learning Experience
1. Was writing an important part of your learning experience over the past two
weeks? Explain why.
2. Which format (in-class, online, or a combination of both) did you find more
effective in providing opportunities to practice writing skills? Explain why.
3. Was ability to express you thoughts orally or in writing important to you? Explain
why.
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4. Which format (in-class, online, or a combination of both) did you find more
effective in providing opportunities for self-expression? Explain why.
5. Was collaborating with others important to you? Explain why.
6. Which format did you find more effective in providing opportunities for
collaboration with others? Explain why.
7. Was learning new things in general important to you? Explain why.
8. Which format (in-class, online, or a combination of both) did you find more
effective in providing opportunities to learn new things? Explain why.
9. What resources did you find more effective and convenient (textbook or online
materials and hyperlinks)? Which once did you use most in your learning
experience? Explain why.
10. In general, which format helped you learn most, in-class, online, or a combination
of both? Explain why.
III. Practical Issues
1. What difficulties have you had attending the class (class schedule, physical
discomfort, social distractions, interpersonal relations with other students and the
instructor, temperature, parking, etc.)? How did you overcome these difficulties?
2. What difficulties have you had in your online experience (posting procedure, lack
of social presence, delays in receiving feedback, etc.)? How did you overcome
these difficulties?
3. What did you find positive and negative about your in-class learning experience?
Explain why.
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4. What did you find positive and negative about your online learning experience?
Explain why.
5. What did you find positive about your in-class and online social experience?
What do you find negative? Explain why.
Table B7 Grade Conversion Chart
A (Excellent) 90-100
B (Good) 80-90
C (Fair) 70-80
D (Poor) 60-70
APPENDIX C:
PARTICIPANTS’ WRITING SAMPLES
Case 1: Yana’s Writing Samples
Week 1 Paragraph: Plagiarism
In the last few years, in all over world, increase the problem of plagiarism which concern
not just creators of any literary, musical or scientific treatise but students and scholars as
well. Let try to understand (to investigate) whether is plagiarism a crime. In fact, stealing
any ideas or extracts of other people with the object of profit motive definitely classify as
a crime because it breaks copyright law. However, whether students how do plagiarize
are a crime or they are simply cheater which violate “honor codes based on trust between
students and faculty.” I find it is a two side of the same coin. Some students are not
confident and strong enough, worse more lazy and as a result they find problems’
solution by using an internet and getting a copy of already done work. They are not
honest to other students, to the teacher and what is most important to their self. On the
other hand, some students research o lot of material and then rewrite it by their own
words. I think, ones getting an information can not disappear from a brain forever later.
Of course it not enough to be a good educated, although less is better than nothing. In
brief, plagiarism hurts writing, thinking and analysing skills and students how do that
stealing their own knowledge and they can not be able become a high educated specialist.
So in the future it will de almost impossible to get prestige job because the competition is
very hard. However, they do nothing to the detriment of other people. Thus I will never
definite students plagiarism as a crime.
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Week 1 Blog
Hi to all of you,
I have the honor to introduce myself. My name is Yana and I am, like you and you, and
you... and you, taking English for Academic Purposes Program.
My goal is to improve my English writing skills that means improving my vocabulary,
grammar and ability to write essay. I am almost sure we are going to work together
greatly!
Week 4 Paragraph: The Reasons for Immigration
Immigration is international phenomenon, and typically (characteristically) for all of
well-known countries. There are a number of reasons of Immigration, but would like to
dwell (up)on a following main reasons: sociel and economicel problems, economical and
business cooperation between countries and an escape from political, race or religious
persecutions. Each human would like to have good job and carier for himselves, a safety
place to stay and a comfortable house to live for him and his family and a possibility to
get high education and secure future for his next generation. Unfortunately, not every
countries can give an opportunity to try to get one's best or to make one's best that human
can. As a resalt, people start to look for more favourable conditions of work, or higher
living standard in another countries. So, people leave they homeland and go there, where
they could have a possibilites of getting better job, earning better money; where they
coulde be confident in they future and in the future of their children. For example, the
time of Russian reorganization 1985 – 1991, which was the time of economycal crisis
and political depression, was very difficult for the country and her folk. It caused a
beginning of the mass immigration like Russian-German went to Germany, Jewish to
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Israel and many progressive Rassian people to America. Everybody, who got an
alternative to go to the country with better standart of live and social protectability, left
Russia and went to another country. A development of the external economic links are
the next reason. Economical rise create conditions for a business development, a
collaboration in an art, a science, and so on. Every day, more and more, leader countries
open subsidiaries of banks, factories, companies and key industsries in all over the world.
They make a contract with a skill people, which go into these countries and then, from
different rerasons, more often (frequently), do not go back. One more, not less important
reason, difficulties between the State and the personality. In some countries, plenty of
people who do not agree whith exsixtent political structure their country, have to leave
the homeland because of persecutions. Also, hational revolutions or wars owing to
religious conflict force people run away to really democraty countries, where they would
have freedom of words, thought, choise of religious. Good example is immigration after
Russian October Revolution 1917, when Russian nobly and aristocracy had all kind of
persecution. Other example, imigration from Chile, after general Pinochet came to power
and established dictatorial regime. Of course, there are much more different reasons of
imigration, but evidently, that sociel-economical and military-political reason take the
most important place in this list.
Week 4 Blog
America was always attractive for people from many countries. The idea of “pursuit of
happiness” heartens people who went to America. Also, they hoped to find here freedom,
possibility to get a new life, to start own business or to earn money and start some
business in the homeland. Nowdays, the reasons has not change. Yes, I consider
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assimilation is still a priority today. In spite of the fact that each ethnicity organizes
something like a community (Russian usually stay with Russian-speaking, German with
German, Chinese with Chinese, Jewish with Jewish, etc.), and they keep up their
traditions, people try to learn more from language, history, political and economical
systems. Other question is how much chains and possibilities they have. In my opinion,
the small ethnic communities are parts of the mainstream culture. America had always
accept different culture. So America was formed, so America functions, and because of
this reason America was and is attractive for almost everybody. Of course, there are basic
rules and lows, which must be accepted by these small ethnic groups of people.
Week 7 Paragraph : How to Find Information Online
Nowadays, using Internet makes the process of receiving any information about colleges
and its courses much easier. If you are interested in some Accounting course, a good
point to start is at www.sunywcc.edu/home.htm Web site, which belongs to Westchester
Community College (WCC). The process of finding out about an Accounting course on
their Web site will not be difficult. You only have to follow a few successive steps. First
of all, you will have to open the aforementioned WCC Web. You will come to the WCC
homepage, where you can see several tabs. All of these tabs contain submenus, which
open up when moving the cursor over top menu. One top menu reads “Academics”. If
you move the cursor over it, you will see that it contains the sub menu “Course
information”. Click on it and you will be taken to another Web site, which provides
information about course schedules. This page offers three difference semesters starting
in Spring, Summer and Fall. After you have decided which semester is more appropriate
for you, click at Credit Course Schedule text version. You will be taken to yet another
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webpage that is divided into two parts. On the right part there are an array of information
about course details. On the top left there is information about when a semester starts and
finishes, and below, about course categories where you will have to click on Accounting.
On the right side of the same page, will appear all available information about
Accounting and Finance classes. This information tells us about these courses reference
number, title, day, time and place to study. Also, it tells who will teach that section, how
many academic and charge credits you can earn for each course, and, in case you need to
find this course in the catalogue, a catalogue number. Some courses have a comments,
like “Managerial Accounting Prereq: ACC 119 Financial Accounting” or “Honor Option
Available/Contact Prof Christesen 914-606-6876” which give an additional important
information about a course. For example, the first comment means that before even
considering taking ACC 120 Managerial Accounting it is required to pass Acc 119
Financial Accounting course. Additionally, in the last column you can find out which
courses need lab time and the prise for that. On this page you can easily see that there are
day, evening, online and off-campus courses. For instance, if you decided to study for
Spring Semester 2008, which runs from January 22 through May 10, and selected ACC
119 Financial Accounting course, you will see that it takes place on an evening schedule.
There are two different days available for this course. You will be able to take either
Mondays and Wednesdays course, which begins at 5:40 pm till 8:00 pm, or Tuesdays and
Thursdays course, beginning at 6:00 pm till 8:15 pm. Both of these courses take place in
classroom building (CLA) room 0108, and give 4 academic and 4 charge credits. Also,
those do not request any LAB. Last, but not least important information you can find is
about tuition. Above the course schedule page there is a green bar, which contains several
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tabs. Click on admissions and you will be taken to Web site which contains submenus,
one of which is read Tuition & Fees. Click on it and on this page you will see information
about full- and part-time tuition. If you want to study 12 or more credit hour per semester,
you have to take full-time tuition; if fewer than 12 credit hours, part-time is enough. It
needs to be noted that tuition depends on the kind of students. Resident students pay less
than non-resident. Prices and schedules for each Accounting courses in WCC vary widely
and it really is a question of the individual’s budget and time as well as the learning style
which approach is suited the most. WCC is the largest educational institution in the
Westchester County, and has a variety of courses. Following the instruction, as described
above, will help you find information about every course that you will be interested in
fast and easily.
Week 7 Blog
What is globalization? Globalization of humanity is including the whole world in the
united system of economic, social, politic and cultural intercommunication. The character
of present society has been moulded by hight pace of development of technology and
increasing of her role in human life. Resources of modern information technology play of
no small importance role in the process of globalization. They make each tellurian
involved to every events in every part of the globe. There are as advantages, as
disadvantages of using the technology. Of corse, because of using technology life became
more progressive, dynamic and convenient. Also, it promotes a solution of some global
problems. However, using technology damages environment and is injurious to human's
health as well.
Case 2: Gio’s Writing Samples
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Week 1 Paragraph: Plagiarism
I considered Plagiarism a crime for two reasons, one because people are not honest and
two plagiarism people gain their degree with low acknowledge of their career. Students
not honest are going to pass their graded with out effort. Plagiarism is a bad habit and it
does help the students to be a good professional in their future. You all know classes are
hard, but you need to be creative and honest with our teachers. You can always make
research in the internet, but copy some job done, is be not sincere with your self and with
your teacher. If you are a plagiarism in your class will show when you finish your career
and be a bad professional. Also is going to be hard to work and don't have a good skills.
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Hi to all,
Let me introduce myself, my name is Giovana and I also taking English for Academic
Purposes Program. My goals for the future are:
-Be able to write well
-Spreak fluently English
-Develop and work on my career, "Media Communications" in USA.
What is plagiarism?
Is when you take information that doesn't belong to you and used it as your. Is cheat
somebody, that can be the teacher of your class, telling him or her that you did the home
work or test by yourself, but you really liying him or her you copy this from somebody
else.There are many kinds of plagiarism, people copy disks, videos, private information
and much more.
Week 4 Paragraph: The Reasons for Immigration
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As an immigrant of U.S. and base in my own experience I can name three cause of
immigration, political persecution, economic reasons, and lack of opportunities for
professionals in our native countries. The first reason why people left their country is
political persecution, in case of my country, Peru, a decade ago many people desided to
run away from there because, the terrorist issue. Many families got kill, bussineses were
destroyed and universities were invade for these groups. People have to move on and find
other places to live, a lot of them found political asylum in united State. The second cause
is economic problems, and this is one of the most important issues in my country, people
don’t make enoght money to paid rent, buy their food and buy clothes, so if somebody
has the chance to came here, they will definily do it. The third reason is lack of
opportunities for proffesionals, every year thousands of students are graduated from
universities and when they are looking for job, they don’t find it. It is very hard to find a
job in your field. Now in my country you find a lot of proffesionals doing taxi or they are
vendors. In sum, I think many of us want to succed in life and that’s why we are here, we
are part of America.
Week 4 Blog
I think this a really controversial topic to disscus, and we are the protagonists. Because
his economy is one of the best in the world and we came here looking for opportunities
we could’t find in our countries. No, I don’t think that the reasons are exactly the same.
They had change. Probably hindred years ago immigrated for religionus persocution in
their countries. In 1906, asian immigrants were exclude, racism 1907 immigration
restriction for southeastern European, because social and economic festering problems in
U.S. as a consequences of immigration.
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Yes, it is important to assimilate in this culture, which also is a mix of many nations
around this world.I think many people can find more opportunities in the mainstream
culture, but not everybody have the chance to do it. I learned that the money is one of the
most important things to live here. Families are very independent, one from other.
People are busy all the time.
Week 8 Paragraph: Traditional vs. Nontraditional Students
Going to college is never late; if you never have the opportunity to be a traditional
student you can still be a nontraditional student. Here are some differences and few
similarities you need to know. Age, social and family status, experiences, and schedule
are the differences. And the similarities are, the reason for study, previous education, and
academic needs. Traditional students are 17 to 25 years old; they usually go to college
when they finish high school. While, nontraditional students are older than 25 years. A
lot of traditional students, have a very active social life, a lot of friends and parties. On
the other hand, nontraditional students are busy working and some of them have family,
wife and children, they don’t have time to socialized. Traditional students don’t have
much experience about life, while nontraditional do. Schedule is another difference
while, traditional students are full time, and nontraditional are part time students. There
are also some similarities. Traditional and nontraditional students have the same reasons
to study, which is improve themselves and be a good professionals. Another one is
previous education. There both have to finish high school to go to college. And the last
one, is academics need, they have the same program. Traditional or nontraditional
students have many opportunities to make themselves better.
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Traditional students are the ones that finish high school and enroll to colleges, don’t
work, they are also depends in their parents or family that support them, they study full
time. Nontraditional students, which I’m identify, are that ones are older than 25 years,
independent, most of them have family, have a full time job, and study part time. This
increasing numbers starts in the beginning of 1970, there are many reasons, one of them
can be the necessity to make more money, with technology people want to go to college
to get a degree in different fields, guys want to do more job than the farmer and women
became more ambitious in get a profession than stay home cooking. With globalization,
professional go to another countries to updated their degrees and get their master.
Case 3: Joe’s Writing Samples
Week 2 Paragraph: Describing A Historical Event
People from Peru will always remember 22 November 2000 as the day of freedom from a
corrupted, massive human violator, and abusive of power government. Peruvian president
Alberto Fujimori after more than a decade of government, resigns by long distance,
sending a letter to the Peruvian Congress from Tokyo (Japan) where he sought for
political Asylum. Fujimori actually is on trial for his dictatorial government in Peru.
Back in September 2000, Peruvian television released a video-tape where Vladimiro
Montesinos (Fujimori’s secrete police chief) considered the power behind the throne, is
showing bribing to an opposition legislator handing him US $ 15,000, in return for his
agreement to switch his allegiance to the ruling party’s parliamentary bloc. The video
proved the corruption inside the government already known, and besides others events
which follow up, this minimum one was mainly the cause of Fujimori’s fall. In order to
exterminate the two terrorist movements “ The Shinning Path” and “Tupac Amaru”
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formed prior to Fujimori’s Government, He made up policies to carry this out. Human
rights were stepped in. Prosecution for massacres, murders and torture were used in the
counterinsurgency campaign against everyone presumed being part of this movements or
many of whom opposed to the system of govern. As a result, thousands of
“disappearances” of innocents’ workers, peasants and students were reported. Fujimori
controlled all along the state’s power: Executive, Legislative, Judiciary and even the
media. Either by bribing (mainly with drug traffic money) or menace, they were able to
govern almost without opposition. In 2005 Fujimori flew secretly to Chile, Peru’s
southern neighbor. The idea was to possible run in the 2006 elections. Chilean police
arrested him, and after a trial suit made by new Peru’s government, The Chilean Supreme
Court approved his extradition last September 2007. Last December, in a historic
decision (first one made to a former president) of the The Peruvian Judiciary, Fujimori
was found guilty for abuse of authority and sentenced to six years in prison. More dire
trial has already began, this time for human rights violation. The prosecution has asked
for a 30 years sentence. To sum up, this dictatorial period was a hard one for Peruvian
people. Corruption, disrespect of human rights, and abuse of power made it. Even though
there are some credits they reached, I complete disagree with the methods. “The end
doesn’t justify the means”.
Week 2 Blog
Puritans mainly hoped to accomplish to purify the Church of England from within. Also,
they hoped that the entire community, their “city on the hill” in the American colonies,
becomes a model for people still in England, and an example of how godly people should
live. Their intention didn’t materialize. As the “city in the hill” Puritans did in the past,
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American society still has the same root, due to believe itself a model to follow for the
world as Democracy, and the way they see immigration issues. American society is ruled
by Democracy system, they believe on it. They believe as well that this system of
government should rule the world. However, trying to settle it in Iraq is bringing such a
negative results we see everyday. A well percent of American society reminds me The
Puritans as well, in the way they see Hispanic immigration. Even tough they immigrated
as many Hispanics are now; they somehow want to reinstall The Pillory to those whom
had the audacity to disregard American rules. An example of it is American children’
parents deportations as a punishment. As a result, suffering like the pillory did.
Week 4 Paragraph: The Reasons for Immigration
Different nation’s conditions have been the cause of immigration to the United States of
America throughout its history. Peru in South America is not an exception. A good
number of Peruvian people have immigrated to the United States due to security,
economic stability, and looking for a better children’s future. Security is one of the
reasons of immigration for them. In order to plan their future; safety for their families is
primordial. The last two decades Peru had suffered a social and political instability, due
to terrorist movements, and the brutal contra insurgency of a dictatorial government.
Thousands of innocent workers’, peasants, and students were prosecuted, tortured, and
murdered. Consequently, thousand of Peruvians were forced to immigrate. Another
reason is the necessity of an economic stability. Peru’s difficult economic situation
implied a high unemployment; many professionals were obliged to carry out under
qualified jobs in order to subsist, others less “fortunate” wouldn’t even have this chance.
The job opportunity that this northern country offered was a powerful reason for them to
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immigrate. However, the most important reason of immigrating was to look for a better
future for their children. As in most of Hispanic families, their children future is
fundamental. They know the fact that U.S.A. has one of the world’s highest school
educations, the gratuity of it, and the facility to have a college education. Compared to
Peru where magisterial strikes looking for fair payments, the need of an education
infrastructure improvement, and the poverty of schools, for instance; make its public
education deficient. All in all, the excellent conditions to this Peruvian immigrants that
this country offers, security, economic stability, and a good chance of better future for
their children above explained; represents to them a huge force to migrate.
Week 4 Blog
Immigration is a big issue to talk about. I’ll try to be the most practical possible on my
answers. People the last two centuries have been attracted to this country mainly for its
prosperity. It means in a few words “a better life”. Basically, the reasons for present day
immigrations are the same as a hundred years ago. As a hundred years ago The Industrial
Revolution, The free Market in the present made an important reason for migration. In
addition, economic depression, escaping from autocratic regimens, famines, and poverty;
are other reasons as well. In Both cases they shared the same ideas: knowing that
America was built for immigrants, they came looking for “The American Dream”.
“When in Rome, do as the Romans Do”. Hispanic people have had realized the
importance of their vote in the actual primary elections. Trough it, they got involved in an
important nation’s issue, showing presence and power. It happened because they realized
the priority, and importance of assimilating to this new culture. As a result, they never
will be ignored again.
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Week 9 Paragraph: Are Boys and Girls the Same?
Do you know that girls’ cerebral volume development is faster than in boys? Can you
believe it? Well, researchers from the National Institute of Health found that total
cerebral volume peak at 10.5 years in girls, four years earlier than in boys. Yes, scan of
boys’ and girls’ brain over time show they develop differently. Furthermore, they present
others physical and psychological differences. Are there only differences in their
characteristics of development? No, social skills development is one similar characteristic
they have. The fact that boys don’t hear as well as girls is one of the physical differences
that exists between them, which means that an instructor needs to speak louder in order
for the boys in the room to hear her/him; it could be one reason for affecting boys on their
attention and in their language skills development. On the other hand, girls’ better hear
make them more attentive, which is one of the reasons of their language skills earlier
development. While girls brains are better at seeing the nuance of color, texture, and
facial expressions, boys’ visual system are better at seeing the action. This difference is
reflected in the way young girls like to use a lot of colors when drawing including more
people on it and playing with dolls; young boys differently like to play with trucks. How
emotions are handled is a clear example of Psychological differences between
adolescents. Due to girls’ more pronounced development of their brain area, which deal
with emotions; they are more likely to express their emotions either orally or in writing in
spite of boys, who are at a disadvantage. Friendship is carried out differently between
them also. Girls spend a lot of time being together, talking and going to places.
Friendship in boys; however, is based in common interest in games and activities. Social
skill is one characteristic that not only girls but also boys develop. They benefit from
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daily coexistence, where they learn from each other differences. They get to know each
other from it. To sum up, every child is unique and, also, not all boys or all girls are the
same. In addition, it’s necessary to mention that instead of saying that boys develop
slower than girls, it’s more exactly to say that they developed at different pace.
Week 9 Blog
In my opinion, the advantage of teaching boys and girls together can link to a better
sociable balance; consequently, to help to understand better the opposite gender. As an
example of disadvantage, focusing in education, I could mention the “pull back”
education development effect that boys affect on girls. Biological reasons between boys
and girls are discussed as a reason of teach them separately. The article mentions physical
and biological differences among them. Research reveals, as an example of a physical
difference, that in men the left and right hemispheres of the brain are completely
different; where the first one controls the verbal skills and the second one the spatial
functions. This division does not exist in women, who use both hemispheres of the brain
for language. Also, it mentions as another example, the notable differences to the way
images are processed between males and females due to retina composition. How boys
and girls handle emotions are explained in the article as well, as an example of
physiological differences between them. In the adolescence the change development of
the cerebral cortex, which deal with emotion is higher in girls than in boys. So, it takes
the latter ones at a disadvantage, when talking about emotions. All these differences
besides other ones are used by the author to justify somehow the necessity of teach boys
and girls separately.
Case 4: Jang’s Writing Samples
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Week 2 Paragraph: Describing a Historical Event
The abolition of slavery in Thailand
The slave system is the problem for developing country, for example; social , political
especially , economic. It was stopped by King Chakri V. Thailand had slavery for a
hundred year, ago. Since Ayuttaya Dynasty to Rattanagosin Dynasty till mid of Chakri
Dynasty. At that time, we did not have a democratic government, yet and third of people
were slave. The slaves were treated by their own boss ( rich people ). When rich people
lend poor people money but they cannot pay back, they will give their children to be a
slave instead of money. When babies were born from slave’s parents they were slave,
also. If they want to have freedom, they might have enough money but it was extremely
impossible because they got a little salary. King Junlajomkrow or King Chakri V of
Thailand had stopped the slave system by peaceful way, since 1874. The King tried to
give the reasons and explained to each group of politicians then expanded to other group
of people. He tried many ways giving their life better. He donated his money for them
and decreased the cost of slaves to get freedom. He gave an education for slave’s children
by established a school for them. So, when people had education they can think about the
reasons and made a decision follow the King’s way, without revenge of Thais. That is
another important event of history and that is why Thailand still exist.
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Discussion about The Puritans
a) They have the same attitude and behavior, stick in the bible without caring people what
they think.
b) They planed to conduct their religious affairs through the Church of England but
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expected to govern themselves. They were not intention materialized.
c) I don’t know but I think I cannot see the Puritans roots in the modern American society
because now, we have freedom to think and do whatever we want.
d) Yes, it dose. When Thailand fight for democracy, we had a lot of painful and sadness
because many people sacrificed themselves for.
e) “the happiest nations have no history” I think, it means no nations don’t have problems
and the problems will have a result with painful, and it means how long that your country
exist. If you have an old history that means you have many sadness because that that
period you don’t have more education, consideration and technology helping you solve it.
Week 4 Paragraph: The Reasons for Immigration
There can be many causes of immigration. Some of the causes are employment, finding a
better life and escaping from wars. One of the reasons is employment. Immigrants want a
job that can support their life and the place where they move is easier to get a job. The
countries where they move have better variety jobs and they are willing to do it. Some
people move because they get an advance position of their career. They can earn a higher
step and profit. Another reason is finding a better life. They want to leave from poverty.
They need money to make their life more comfortable. If they have money they can get
the proper consumer goods and the appliances. Also, they can have a good education.
They receive an opportunity to choose the proper school. The most important reason is
escaping from wars. Immigrants need a place where they can have a peaceful and safety
for them and their family. Nobody needs to live in a high rate of risk and dangerous.
Some immigrants escape from political war because they cannot accept the pressure.
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Many harmful will happen if they are still in their country. So, there are some reasons,
which make people emigrate from their own country.
Week 4: Blog
I don't think assimilation is still a priority today because they are have equal freedom.
They can think and do or act like American. I don't know much about the democratic here
but I think they are not ready to become part of the democratic processes.
For the first point of c) after I read from Joel I change my mind, I think most of people
that immigrated want to be part of this country. Also, I think like the pharse “When in
Rome, do as the Romans Do”, nobody wants to feel different. For the second point the
new immigrants are not ready for democracy because they just come in, may be they
don't know as much about the democracy here. If they lived for a while (until they know
and were accepted) they can have an opportunity for democracy.
I think people have always been attracted to this country because this country in their
sight is prosperity. They might have their better life in the flourish country. The reasons
for present-day immigration are the same as a hundred years ago, for example reasons
like; population increase but no job, technology and education was behind, unfair of
social or politics and the impoverishment.
In my opinion, I think assimilate in the mainstream culture is better because it makes they
feel that they are a part of and they were accepted from assimilation mainstream. I think
some people prefer ethnic communities because they feel more comfortable with people
of the same background. They will feel inoffensive and understand each other easily.
They will feel like they are the same family that can talk everything with and have a true
friend.
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Week 10 Paragraph: Classification of Learning Styles
Students have their own learning style; however, they not recognize what kinds
are they belong. Learning style of students can be divided into two categories. First
category is students who are talkative. They like to listen, speak, and interact with other.
Their performances are outstanding in classrooms. They like to listen to their teachers or
classmates and share the ideas with speaking and interacting. The presentation, using
CDs or DVDs, and group working will work for them because they can use their strength
talent points of learning style. When they express with talking, it helps them understand
the subject matters easier. The careers, which should be suitable for these students are
receptionist, tour guide, secretary, flight attendant, or concierge. The students, who
belong to this category, can do these kinds of jobs because they have to deal with many
people by using participation or interaction, which they already had that skills. Second
category is students who are reticent. They like to think, read, and write. When they are
alone, they have widespread thoughts and inspirations. They prefer a quiet time and no
rush. Their ideas come out better on paper. The learning activities that will work for
them are chart, diagram, reading article, or searching information reference, etc. Students
in this category can take their times and bring the brilliant ideas. Like author, interpreter,
researcher, columnist, or journalist, the students can develop their capacity of learning
style with these kinds of jobs. By recognize which learning style are they, they will
understand and improve their quality of learning.
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Sorry for silent for a long time. The internet was dead. Now I am back!! It sounds
interesting on the test which will tell you what type of study you are. I will try it now. Be
right back!!
Hi Joe, I know that you can help me. In ACT-REF I got 1REF, SEN-INT I got 3INT,
VIS-VRB I got 1VIS, SEQ-GLO I got 3GLO. I think if we know what type of study we
are and adapt to use the advantages of it. We will learn better and we will know our weak
points and prove it by trying harder or our friends who better in the other styles will help.
Which means, we can go forward together and help each other. I think in school are using
every style of learning but writing is use more than other style because students will write
or lecture what they learned and then write the paper or homework, too. I believed that
everybody have at least one thing which they can do the best or feel comfortable to do it!!
APPENDIX D:
SAMPLES OF PARTICIPANTS’ WEEKLY SELF-EVALUATIONS
Table D1 Sample of Yana’s Self-Evaluation in Week 5
Section 1: Planning (to be completed at the beginning of the week)
My goal this week To improve my knowledge of verb tenses
Steps I will take to reach my goal Work with online grammar resources
Skills I want to improve Express my thoughts clearly
Problems I want to overcome Talk with other people with more confidence
Things I want to learn in general System of education in the USA
Section 2: Evaluation (to be completed at the end of the week)
Evaluation points Strongly
agree
Agree Disagree Strongly
disagree
Comments
I reached the goal I set for
myself at the beginning of
the week
�
I completed all the steps I
originally planned
�
I improved the skills I
wanted to improve
�
I overcame the problems �
The new things I have
learned this week
How political and social systems and cultures of different countries affect
people’s upbringing
The skills I have improved
this week
Discussion and analyzing information
Things I would do Initiate collaboration with classmates
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differently
Table D2 Gio’s Sample Self-Evaluation in Week 6
Section 1: Planning (to be completed at the beginning of the week)
My goal this week To participate in the blog discussion
Steps I will take to reach my goal Practice online
Skills I want to improve Interact with my classmates online
Problems I want to overcome Fear of communicating online
Things I want to learn in general Learn more about where we live
Section 2: Evaluation (to be completed at the end of the week)
Evaluation points Strongly
agree
Agree Disagree Strongly
disagree
Comments
I reached the goal I set for
myself at the beginning of
the week
�
I completed all the steps I
originally planned
�
I improved the skills I
wanted to improve
�
I overcame the problems �
The new things I have
learned this week
I learned about cybernetics
The skills I have improved
this week
I improved interaction, but just a little
Things I would do
differently
Give myself more time for homework
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Table D3 Sample of Joe’s Self-Evaluation in Week 8
Section 1: Planning (to be completed at the beginning of the week)
My goal this week To improve the use of gerund vs. infinitives, punctuation (commas
& semi-colon), and new vocabulary
Steps I will take to reach my goal To use the online resources for gerund, infinitives, & punctuation;
to make a list of new words
Skills I want to improve To recognize when to use gerunds, infinitives, and the new
vocabulary correctly
Problems I want to overcome To use commas & semi-colons correctly
Things I want to learn in general How to increase reading speed
Section 2: Evaluation (to be completed at the end of the week)
Evaluation points Strongly
agree
Agree Disagree Strongly
disagree
Comments
I reached the goal I set for
myself at the beginning of
the week
�
I completed all the steps I
originally planned
�
I improved the skills I
wanted to improve
�
I overcame the problems �
The new things I have
learned this week
How to use some new online resources
Skills I have improved Punctuating sentences
Things I would do
differently
Use more of my teacher’s support online
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Table D4 Sample of Jang’s Self-Evaluation in Week 8
Section 1: Planning (to be completed at the beginning of the week)
My goal this week To start the blog discussion and Writing Shop assignment during
the spring break
Steps I will take to reach my goal To finish reading the article on Monday
Skills I want to improve To use verb tenses in writing correctly
Problems I want to overcome To use a different beginning in writing
Things I want to learn in general How to attract readers with a better introduction
Section 2: Evaluation (to be completed at the end of the week)
Evaluation points Strongly
agree
Agree Disagree Strongly
disagree
Comments
I reached the goal I set for
myself at the beginning of
the week
�
I completed all the steps I
originally planned
�
I improved the skills I
wanted to improve
�
I overcame the problems �
The new things I have
learned this week
What “self-directed” means – I never heard it before.
The skills I have improved
this week
How to compare and contrast
Things I would do
differently
Post my responses more frequently
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APPENDIX E:
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LUDMILA ELLIS 17 Alpine Drive, Unit E • Wappingers Falls, New York 12590 • (845) 790-5147 [email protected]
EDUCATION Walden University expected summer 2008 PhD in Education , Instructional Design for Second Language Learning Dissertation: “A Case Study of Hybrid Course Design in ESL Writing Instruction” Chair: Peter Serdyukov, Educational Technology Committee: Mary Dereshiwsky, Research Methodology Amie Beckett, Second Language Acquisition State University of New York, New Paltz, NY 1996-1998 M.S. in Edication, TESOL Rostov Pedagogical Institute, Rostov-on-Don, Russia 1982-1987 B.A. in Teaching Foreign Languages
Diploma with Honors
TEACHING EXPERIENCE
ESL INSTRUCTOR 2001-PRESENT Westchester Community College Valhalla, NY
Teach academic, integrated skills, and intensive ESL courses in grammar, reading, and writing and listening and speaking. Developed a hybrid EAP course and created a companion Web site esl-page.com. Integrated online technologies into the traditional ESL instruction. Design and evaluate students’ in-class and online assignments in language skills and content areas. Update and maintain the course Web site and the blog. Facilitate the students’ online discussion. ESL INSTRUCTOR 1999-2006 Ulster County BOCES Port Ewen, NY Taught traditional multilevel ESL and distance learning classes. Taught adult literacy classes. Taught advanced ESL to Japanese professional staff at Plasmaco, Inc.; developed ESL curriculum and skill supporting activities; administered NYS placement test. ESL INSTRUCTOR 1998-2001 Unification Theological Seminary Barrytown, NY Taught developmental writing, reading, research, and intensive listening and reading courses to graduate ESL students; developed course syllabi; administered and graded tests. Developed class assignments involving research strategies and online skills. ESL INSTRUCTOR 1998-99 Orange County Community College Newburgh, NY
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Taught intensive noncredit ESL course as part of the ESL Bridge Program. Developed skills supporting activities. Assisted students in the writing lab. ENGLISH INSTRUCTOR 1989-92 Rostov Pedagogical Institute Rostov-on-Don, RU Taught practical Course of English, English Phonetics, and integrated skills classes to first- and second-year students of English. ENGLISH INSTRUCTOR 1988-90 Rostov State University Rostov-on-Don, RU Taught English with concentration in reading, writing, and research skills to students of Psychology.
TEACHING INTERESTS: TESOL, ESL COURSE DEVELOPMENT & INSTRUCTIONAL DESIGN
PROFESSIONAL ACTIVITIES
2007 TESOL membership 2006 Took courses in Web design and blogging for education 2006 Best Plus Test training 2003 Fundamentals of Editing and Proofreading, New York University 2003 Creativity in TESOL workshop; Distance Learning Programs workshop Hudson
Valley Consortium 2002 Hudson Valley/Catskills TESOL conference, Distance Learning workshop References
Prof. Yeghia Aslanian Borough of Manhattan Community College 199 Chambers Street, Room N-420 New York, NY 10007 212-220-1398; [email protected] Prof. Peter Serdyukov National University 11255 North Torrey Pines, La Jolla, CA 858-642-8332; [email protected] Lukas Murphy, Assistant Director ESL Institute Westchester Community College 75 Grassland Road, AAB-302, Valhalla, NY 10595 914-606-7744; [email protected]