Improving my front page 2

Front pageI began by taking most of the elements of my page off and looking at a professional pop magazine:

I really liked the colour scheme so I used it in my magazine.

Front page

I then changed everything to these colours and used the layout from this magazine to place my boy sell lines:

Front pageI then added my banner and main sell line

Front page

I then used the sun picture to fill the dead space.

Photoshop: changed her skin colour and top colour

Front page

Lastly, I added the win sell line to fill white space