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My assignment on grammatical errors found in local advertisements.
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LANGUAGE AWARENESS
Name: Harith Zakuan Bin Rosman
S.ID: 3101017181
Lecturer: Mdm. Aisyah Bt. Abdul Mutalib
Assignment: Grammatical Errors On Signboards/ Pamphlets/ Commercials/
Advertisements
1. MAXIS Grammar Fail!
•The Error:Sign into view your actual statistics.
•Into is not the same with in to:Ali dives into the pool.Please get in to the line.
•The correct sentence should be:
Please visit My Account page and sign in to view your actual statistics.
2. HOSTEL FELLOWS Grammar Fail!
•The Error:…contact fellows on duty should any
emergencies or problems within the…
•Should must have verbs following, example:Do remind me should I forget about her birthday.
•The correct sentence should be:
…contact fellows on duty should any emergencies or problems occur within the…
3. FITM Grammar Fail!
•The Error:To all FITM students with CGPA 3.5 and
above are invited...
•To is not needed/ add a pronoun before verb:
To my loved ones, you are my life.All members are welcome to join.
•The correct sentence should be:
…all FITM students with CGPA 3.5 and above are invited...To all FITM students with CGPA 3.5 and above, you are invited...
4. MPP Grammar Fail!
•The Error:The more fun is yet to come!
•The is not needed; the is used to specify:I made sure the kids are safe before leaving them.More prizes to be won!
•The correct sentence should be:
More fun is yet to come!
5. ICLS Grammar Fail!
•The Error:We looking forward your present as it
will enlighten…
•We needs a helping verb; -ing needs a preposition; wrong use of word present:
We are the youth of the nation.Searching for real love is hard.You need to present yourself in court.
•The correct sentence should be:
We are looking forward for your presence as it will enlighten our…
6. LAB RULES Grammar Fail!
•The Error:Students are not allowed to surf any
prohibited and against the law website; pornography.
•Wrong arrangement of words of description; redundancy of statement
Do activities that are against the law.Anything that is against the law is obviously prohibited.
•The correct sentence should be:
Students are not allowed to surf any prohibited websites like pornography and websites that are against the law.
7. MUET AD Grammar Fail!
•The Error:Document required
•When mentioning more than one item of a type, the noun becomes plural:
Assignments for today: Write an essayRead page 10
•The correct sentence should be:
Documents required…
8. JOB VACANCY Grammar Fail!
•The Error:Register as agent top-
up at here.
•Wrong noun to noun pair; incorrect preposition usage:
To describe a box using noun: pencil box, not box pencilGet your gifts here!
•The correct sentence should be:
Register as top- up agent here!