Improving the final product

By Mitchell Turner

My Initial intentions

• The main image in the centre of the page was too plain and needed lots of improving in order to reach a higher standard.

• The contents page was very bland and needed more images in order to obtain the audiences attention.

Improvements: Front Cover

• A puff was added to the front cover in order to fill up some of the white space along with moving the image up as the audience is only interested in the head down to the chest.

• The colour of the banner on the left hand side has changed from black to blue in order to coincide with the house style of Trinity school and another banner was added to the bottom of the page.

Improvements: Front Cover

The change of colour to fit in with the Trinity colour scheme

Banner added to the bottom of the page

Puff added to fill in white space

Improvements: Contents

• The contents page was changed a lot from the drafts versions and initial versions of my product.

• It changed from two images into four, this is so the audience have more images to engage with.

• The colour scheme also changed in order to match the Trinity colour scheme.

Improvements: Contents

Colour scheme changed in order to match the Trinity house style

Amount of images being changed from two to four

Background colour added to contents page