1. Part A Opening SequenceDraft 2DramaIna BaysonRamina Arlauskaite Carolle Mafuta-Nkalu Everyone- White

2. Part B Raminas Brainstorm A young girl + boyfriend Go to the same school Other girls likes the boy, jealousy because of the boys girlfriend The girl bullies/fights the girlfriend In the end, girlfriend just lying down with blood on her mouth. 3. Part B Carolles Brainstorms The girl trying to cut herself in front of a mirror crying *flashback* Girl and boy kissing while watching TV Her phone rings and boy takes it off her Tries to hit her *flash forward* Shows her trying to cut herself again 4. Part B Inas Brainstorm Girlfriend+Boyfriend Boy proposes to the girl after a date (in a cafe) She accepts Then, flash-forward: of her stalking boyfriend with another girl (holding hands) Unanswered calls from the boy to the girl 5. Part B Strongest Idea Strongest Idea Raminas Idea Inas Idea Not showing all story, just giving pieces of puzzle 6. Part B Final Idea Used Ramina and Inas Idea together: Girlfriend + Boyfriend Having a date, then he proposes to her Other girl outside of cafe watching them angrily He putting the ring in her finger *Flash forward* The Girlfriend saw boyfriend and the other girl holding hands She calls him but he didnt pick up 7. Part CGenre: Drama Dealing with Consists of conflict in emotional themes some scenes betweencharactersDramaReal life situationsThemesAddictionPoverty Sub genreViolence Romanceetc Tragedy Crime Docudrama (when a character act an event and exaggerates it a bit) 8. Part CWhy did we chose this genre, example Happens in real life o Shows that not all situations are perfect Affects young married couples (not all) o Showing that they are still too young 9. Part C Conventions of DramaCan have violenceLoveConventions Struggling (pain) Emotional scenes Deep emotionsConflict betweencharacters 10. Part DInspirational films My Amnesia Girl Genre: Drama, Romance, and Director:Comedy o Cathy Garcia-Molina Casts: o John Lloyd Cruz o Tony Gonzaga o Carlos Agassi o Etc. Distributed by: o Star Cinema Magic Released Date: o 24th November 2010 Language: o Tagalog o English http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gRUmk YM1gFI 11. Part D Inspirational Scene She and her old BoyfriendWhen shes recalling her memory (must be husband) saw each when her Fiance didnt come to other againtheir wedding day She acts like she dont know him (lost her memory)Shocked that Long shot of hershe doesnt Mid shot of her waiting for herheartbrokenremember Groomhim She told him that she didnt lost her memory at allShe told him the He is shocked thattruthshe lied to her 12. Part D I Love You To DeathJoey owns a pizza parlor, and is married to Rosalee, and is a major womanizer. Rosalee goes to extremes when she finds he has been cheating.Scene 3: Rosalee founds her husband cheatingLong shot of Rosalee Mid shot of her with Two shot of Rosaleeenter the librarybooksand the librarian Time- 7:51/8:55 Mid shot of Rosalee point of viewhttp://www.youtube.com/watMid shot of her looking at shot as she sees her husbandch?v=4Vp-books to borrow from the kissing another womenZ0u4Rhs&feature=relatedlibrary 13. Part D Character RepresentationGood/happy wifeMid shot of her smilingTwo shot, Serving herTwo shot, they areand she seems very happy husband a drinkhaving conversation http://www.youtube.com/wat ch?v=4Vp- Z0u4Rhs&feature=related Two shot, she loves being Two shot, kissing her next to her husband husband (protection) 14. Part D Character RepresentationAngry housewife Time- 00:00/00:53 http://www.youtube.com/watch ?v=sAnS9H6sLyM&feature=relat edRosalee hatred towards her husbandbecause he cheated on her, she andher mother planning to kill herhusband by over dose the food withsleeping pills, and differentingredient. 15. Part D Uslovia Kontrakta This film is a Russian film about two married couple, she lies to her husband she cant afford having babies because she has problems ( the truth is she lies to him because she doesnt wants to ruin her body.) A girl who gets married her sister accidently fallsdown on the glass table and has problemswith her brainstorm. She Wants to get money to get the oppressiondone by her fianc does not help her so shedumps him. Goes to another city to get a jobshe finds a job where she gives birth a givesaway her baby to another people who cantafford them. So she decided to do it and getthe money from the people who wants thebaby. Afterwards the man gets intorelationship with the girl and gets divorcedwith his wife finding out she was lying. 16. Chosen theme, brainstormPart Efor opening Theme: Tragic (a bit), RomanceClose up Flash forwards Showing emotions Clips of after he of a character/s proposed to her Mid-shot Brainstorm He took his phone outBoyfriend + to see who called himGirlfriendPOVOther girl seeing themYoung and becametogether + proposingengaged Cheating in a relationship 17. Part FResearch about our theme: Young couples There are almost 16 million adults aged 16-24 living in the UK of which almost three in ten (4.6 million) are either married or living with their partner. So there is a conflict in needs and readiness when it comes to relationships for those in that age bracket. Some may marry prematurely because the need for connection wins out. Students who marry while in school may be missing out on some experiences that would enhance their life experience and maturity. In their late teens and early twenties, people are still forming their adult identities, and are still doing a lot of growing psychologically. It is best to wait to marry until after about age 27 or so to ensure that this growth curve has begun to slow down. This reduces the chance that people will later come to realize that they didnt really know themselves yet when they got married, as well as feel that they have grown apart from their partner. 18. Who are the Characters & who they representPart H Ramina: Nevaeh The Boyfriends close friend Clothes: Black clothes to show jealousy, and darkNeil: John Ina: Lily The Boyfriend/ Fiance of his Johns Fiancegirlfriend Clothes: Semi formal clothes while hesClothes: Semi Smart clothes when proposing proposing to her Jeans and Hoody when going out withJogging bottoms and Top when sheother girlfriend saw them holding hands 19. Part H Characters ClothesLilys Semi Formal Outfit- For their Date with JohnJohns Semi Formal Outfit- For their Date with LilyJohns Non- Formal Outfit- When he is with Nevaeh Lilys Non- Formal Outfit - When following John to the Park with NevaehNevaehs Casual Outfit- When she is standing outside theCaf- When she is with John in the Park 20. Part HProps The necklace he willThe necklace and be using when hesearring that Lily wearing both semi would be wearing formal and non- when shes with formal clothesJohn of their dateThe Iphone LilysThe Iphone thatgoing to use for the John will use forending the ending The ring that John will give to Lily 21. Part I Location/Setting Cafe: where John proposes to Lily, while Nevaeh is outside looking at them. 22. Part ILocation/Setting Round wood Park: When Lily saw John and Nevaeh holding hands 23. Part JHow are we going tocreate enigma Showing pieces of the puzzle o Not showing everything o Building suspense Flashes of clips o There will be a flash forward 24. 5 bullet points of what is goingPart Kto happen in the whole film John and Lily got engage and move in together Lily becomes very over protective and thinks that John is cheating on her They always argue on simple things Johns old friend (Nevaeh) texts him to meet up, and Lily read it and becomes suspicious John picks up the phone and meet up with Nevaeh. He doesnt know that Lily is following him and Lily ended the relationship and John explains that him and Nevaeh are just friends, and everything went back to normal 25. Part K 5 bullet points of what is going tohappen in the opening sequence John proposes to Lily while theyre on a date. Nevaeh is watching them angrily from outside the cafe. Then *Flash Forward* Lily followed John and saw him holding hands with Nevaeh Lily tries to call John He declined the call 26. Part L Storyboard 27. Part L 28. Part L Shot list Shot Shot Name Description Prop/Costume Number 1Two ShotLily and John sitting down in Cafe, smart clothes- jeans,the cafe (having a date)polo, trainers, skirt, top,shoes, coffee 2Over theJohn taking out the ring to Ring in the boxShoulder shot propose to Lily 3Mid shotNevaeh of her looking atBlack jacket, jeans,John and Lily angrily white top, boots, makeup black lipstick 4P.O.V Nevaehs POV of what she is Table, chairs, coffee,seeingpeople, ring, clothes 5Close upOpening of the box (ring) Box and ring 6Mid shotLily shocked and happyMake up 7Close upLilys eyes crying of joy 29. Part L Shot Shot Name DescriptionProps/Costume Number 8Extreme Close Him putting the ring in herRingupfinger 9Long shot John and Nevaeh holdingPark, clothes-hands in parktrousers, Hoody, trainers, jeans, jacket, hand bag 10 Mid shotLily behind John and Tracksuit trousers,Nevaeh top, jacket, trainers, hair tied back 11 Close upLily dialling the phone to phonecall John 12 Two shotNevaeh and John TalkingClothes, phone(Mid shot)*Phone rings* 13 Extreme close Him declining the call phoneup 30. Part MScript 1. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Two shot, of Lily and John sitting down in the cafe shop, drinking tea. 2.INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Over the shoulder shot, John taking out the ring to propose to Lily. 3.EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW Mid-shot, Nevaeh looking at John and Lily angrily. Wearing a black jacket, jeans,white top, boots, and black lipstick. 4. EXT. THE CAFE SHOP WINDOW Point of view shot, Nevaeh point of view of what she is seeing. 5.INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Close up shot, Johns hand opening the ring box 31. Part M 6. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Mid-shot, Lily shocked and happy, she put her hands over her mouthspeechless. 7. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Close up, Lilys face crying as John propose to her. 8. INT. INSIDE THE CAFE SHOP. DAY Extreme Close up, John putting the ring on Lilys finger. 9. EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Long shot, John and Nevaeh holding hands, walking in the park. Johnswearing gray trousers, red hoody, and trainers whilst Nevaeh wearingjeans, black jacket, and hand bag. 10.EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Mid-shot of Lily behind John and Nevaeh, wearing tracksuit, top, jacket,trainers, and hair tied back. 32. Part M 11.EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Close up shot, Lily dialling her phone to call John, she pressthe button hard as she cannot believe what shes seeing. 12.EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Two shot and Mid shot, Nevaeh and John talking, laughing, thephone rings. 13.EXT. ROUNDWOOD PARK. Extreme Close up shot, Johns hand and the phone. He declines thecall. BLACKOUT 33. Part NApplying theories of Todorov Opening Sequence o Everything started good- him proposing o Then, becomes complicated- she sees John with someone else, suspicion o New equilibrium- for the audience to watch and find out more Whole Story o He proposes to Lily, she moved in with John and started to be over protective o Lily saw Nevaehs text to John and followed him and saw Nevaeh with him o They broke up because Lily thinks that hes cheating o But went back together knowing that Nevaeh is only his close friend 34. Part O Applying theories of Propp Villain- Nevaeh- wearing black, emo looking, Lily thinks that she is Johns girlfriend Main Character- John- story revolves around him Second Character- Lily- Johns girlfriend 35. Part PApplying theories ofStrauss We didnt use his theory of Binary Opposition, because there are no characters that are evil in our Opening Sequence There are no good and bad All of the characters are equal (no one is stronger than the other) 36. Part Q Target Audience Age: 15-25 Gender: Both Social Class: Working class Hobbies: exploring, going out, Lifestyle: Teenagers, young adults Location: London 37. Part QInterviews Results 3.53 2.515-18 years old 219-21 years old 1.51 0.50 38. Part RFilm Distributor and why One of the six major moviestudios One of the oldest Americanmovie studiosIndustry: Film In the film industry sinceFounded: 30th April, 19121912 o Its products are motion picturesHeadquarters: California, US They also distribute dramaProducts: Motion PicturesfilmsFounder: Carl Laemmle o The Phantom of the Opera (1925) o The Hunchback of Notre Dame (1923) 39. Part SAge rate of the film BBFC standard 15 for a film must have an appropriate language and behaviour for the audiences. There are no strong language There are no sexual activity or nudity (no strong detail) There can be violence, but not focus on pain and injury 40. Part T Evidence- Title and credits (fonts) As a group we decided to use font Time new roman o It will be helpful for our opening sequence title easy to read and eye catching o To express a range of voices and emotions . o Versatile and comfortable to work with, this title are like a favourite pair for our group opening sequence Draft 2. This is an example of what Font we will be using for our Opening Sequence. 41. Part U Music/Sound This sound is when Lily is standing behind John and Nevaeh, looking at them shocked and heartbrokenTo show that she may bethinking something bad This can be on the scene when Nevaeh is standing outside the cafe looking at John and Lily angrily This will be used when John proposes to Lily. To show happiness and joy