What did I change?

As this is only a storyboard, I could not show

the full effect of what I decided to

differently, although I have a brief visual.

1) All of the shots on my storyboard are

planned to be framed right, and frame

5 and 6 shows the student’s heads are

in frame.

2) I have added a few more shots which

was the planned finish version. This

was from the arrival of the teacher and

the students panicking,

3) I added a high angle in frame number

10 which shows the vulnerability of the

student.

4) I added some more dialogue and the

editing looks more continuous as the

props are placed in correct positions

throughout my drawings.