Starter: in what ways would you improve this presentation?

Annotate (label) the presentation.

Identify at least three ways in which you would change the presentation to

improve it.

My idea for a community project is to create a youth centre that all the young people in my area can use. The idea behind this youth centre is that children can use the facilities to play sports, to socialise and to explore their interests.

My Community Project

The youth centre will have three rooms and will have all the latest sports facilities.

Digital StudiesAssessment Feedback

STAR opportunity

Date:

Homework

You have been given feedback on your Home Learning Project, based on ‘Child Soldiers’.

The stories were mostly fantastic – very imaginative, original and emotional.

For homework – use the EBI comments to make improvements to your HLP.

Deadline:

Learning Objectives

Learning Objectives Learning Outcomes

Review your assessment feedback

You have produced a written response to your WWW/EBI

comments

Use your EBI comments to improve your presentation

You have made significant additions or changes to your

planning or presentation

Peer-assess your partner’s improvements

You have provided written feedback on your partner’s

improvements

LO: Review your assessment feedback

Read the comments about WWW and EBI on your Digital Studies assessment.

You should provide:

Pupil response – what do you think you did well and what do you believe you could improve? Do you agree

with the feedback?

STAR target – using the EBI feedback, set yourself a STAR target that you will focus on during this lesson.

LO: Use your EBI comments to improve your presentation

Using the EBI comments and your STAR target, make significant changes to either

your planning or your presentation.

This should demonstrate your ability to improve your own work, utilising your

strengths to build on areas that require development.

LO: Peer-assess your partner’s improvements

With a work partner:- Inform your partner what your STAR target for the lesson was

- Swap your assessment with your work partner- Assess your partner’s work and provide a written response

using the following question…

How has your partner used their STAR target to improve their work?

Next, provide your partner with a new…

WWW:

EBI:

Learning Objectives

Learning Objectives Learning Outcomes

Review your assessment feedback

You have produced a written response to your WWW/EBI

comments

Use your EBI comments to improve your presentation

You have made significant additions or changes to your

planning or presentation

Peer-assess your partner’s improvements

You have provided written feedback on your partner’s

improvements