Good:

• Green Screen use is good

• Performance scenes look confident

• Well synced to music

Improve:

• Needs more shot type

variety

• Hands disappear on green screen

shots

• More narrative - to make sense

of what is happening

Good:

• Fast Paced Editing

• Scenes cut to the beat

Improve:

•Lighting

• Narrative becomes repetitive

• Too many mid shots

• Too much green screen

shots

Good:

• Green Screen use is good

(matches genre)

• Effective performance

shots

• Good editing

Improve:

• Lighting

• Some green scene shots

• Edit odd bits that are out of

sync

• More narrative needed for

sense of ‘flow’

• More variety of shots needed

Good:

• Cheesy

• Fits genre

•Edited well

• Good use of green screen

Improve:

• Lighting

• Hands disappear in green screen

• More narrative is needed

Good:

• Seem like a girl-band

• Good costumes

• Fit the genre

Improve:

•Storyline

•Narrative

•Some green screens

don’t look good

•Shadows/Lighting

Good:

• Fits genre perfectly

•Framing performance

shots

Improve:

• Green screen looks amateur =

less of them?

•More Narrative

Good:

• Close up of lips

• Good use of green screen

Improve:

• More narrative needed

Good:

• Synced well

•Up tempo along with song

•Cuts with the beat

• Use of green screen

Improve:

• Don’t understand

storyline = add narrative

• Repetitive shot types

• (all mid shots)

By having this feedback I feel that we can now improve our music video dramatically.

• Firstly I think that we should get a wider variety of shots, for example we could film in front of the black screen with long, mid and close up shots.

• We will also sort out which green screen sections are appropriate to use, as having hands disappear mid way through id not professional.

• Another important note we have taken from this is to make the storyline/narrative clearer and easier to understand. Therefore we will film some more so there will be a sense of flow and continuity throughout the music video.

By having this feedback I feel that we can now improve our music video dramatically.

• Firstly I think that we should get a wider variety of shots, for example we could film in front of the black screen with long, mid and close up shots.

• We will also sort out which green screen sections are appropriate to use, as having hands disappear mid way through id not professional.

• Another important note we have taken from this is to make the storyline/narrative clearer and easier to understand. Therefore we will film some more so there will be a sense of flow and continuity throughout the music video.