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not that I’m saying it’s traditional” --the stigma against the “traditional” in British sitcoms

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“not that I’m saying it’s traditional”

--the stigma against the “traditional” in British sitcoms

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My last visit to Germany.

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FADE IN:

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INT. CHANNEL HQ. DAY.

• SHAUN and ALAN, writers, are talking about the pilot they have just delivered to the COMEDY COMMISSIONER, a pleasant man.

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COMMISSIONER (genially)

We’re looking at all our pilots, and working out the balance - how many traditional sitcoms we want-

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The COMMISSIONER stops in his tracks and looks apologetically at SHAUN and ALAN.

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COMMISSIONER (urgently)

Not that I’m saying your sitcom is traditional.

(pause) Sorry.

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(1) Why did the genial commissioner

apologise for calling the sitcom

“traditional”?

Two questions.

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(2) And what’s with all the rabbits?

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A traditional British sitcom.

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The traditional British sitcom.

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An archetypal moment

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An archetypal moment

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Our take on this

…of which more later

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Our take on this

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What’s wrong with this?

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• farcical plots

What’s wrong with this?

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• farcical plots• unnatural dialogue

What’s wrong with this?

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• farcical plots• unnatural dialogue• demonstrative acting

What’s wrong with this?

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• farcical plots• unnatural dialogue• demonstrative acting• studio shoot

What’s wrong with this?

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• farcical plots• unnatural dialogue• demonstrative acting• studio shoot• cosiness

What’s wrong with this?

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(A word about darkness)

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(A word about darkness)

…and back to the list

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• farcical plots• unnatural dialogue• demonstrative acting• studio shoot• cosiness• audience laughter

What’s wrong with this?

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The magic formula:

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• nothing happens

The magic formula:

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• nothing happens• no jokes

The magic formula:

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• nothing happens• no jokes• mumbling

The magic formula:

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• nothing happens• no jokes• mumbling• hand-held

The magic formula:

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• nothing happens• no jokes• mumbling• hand-held• cruelty

The magic formula:

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• nothing happens• no jokes• mumbling• hand-held• cruelty • no audience

The magic formula:

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In other words…

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In other words…

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In other words…

real life

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In other words…

real lifeboring

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Real life isn’t funny

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Real life isn’t funny

80-90% of laughs follow:

•“I know.”•“I’ll see you guys later.”

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Why the stigma against being funny?

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Why the stigma against being funny?

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Why the stigma against being funny?

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The Origin Of The Species

•music hall•farce•radio

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Technology has changed the possibilities

•portable cameras•multiple channels•digital editing

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Technology has changed the possibilities

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Technology has changed the possibilities

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But it is not evolution

music radio traditional modern hall sitcom comedy

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Different styles

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Different clusters of styles

darknaturalistic

niche

multi-camera

hand-held

edgy

experimental

farcical

audiencelaughter

studio

warm

demonstrative

familiar

linear

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Pick the bits that fit

darknaturalistic

niche

multi-camera

hand-held

edgy

experimental

farcical

audiencelaughter

studio

warm

demonstrative

familiar

linear

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Pick the bits that fit

experimental

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Pick the bits that fit

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Crawford Park: the page

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Crawford Park: the stage

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Get the audience laughter right…

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Get the audience laughter right…

…and you don’thear it.

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Get the audience laughter right…

…and you don’thear it.

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Get the audience laughter right…

…and you don’thear it.

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Get the audience laughter right…

…and you don’thear it.

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Get the audience laughter right…

“A lot of people said that we didn't have a laughter track. We went through this bizarre ritual of saying: ‘But it did!’ And they would say: ‘No it didn't!’ And we'd say: ‘Well it did!’”--Armando Iannucci

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The fashion changed.

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The fashion changed.

Also out of fashion: PUNS.

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The fashion changed.

Also out of fashion: PUNS.

An example pun:

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The fashion changed.

Also out of fashion: PUNS.

An example pun:

Q: According to Freud, what comes between fear and sex?

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The fashion changed.

Also out of fashion: PUNS.

An example pun:

Q: According to Freud, what comes between fear and sex?

A: Fünf.

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The fashion changed.

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The fashion changed.

hymns hers

Mars Pa’s Bars Bars

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The fashion changed.

It will change again.

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The fashion changed.

It will change again.

But slowly.

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The fashion changed.

It will change again.

But slowly.

Why?

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Second guessing

writers

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Second guessing

writers

audiences

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Second guessing

writers

audiences

fashion

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Second guessing

writers

audiences

fashionproducers

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Second guessing

writers

audiences

fashionproducers

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Second guessing

writers

audiences

fashionproducers

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Second guessing

writers

audiences

fashionproducers

commissioning editors

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Second guessing

writers

audiences

fashionproducers

commissioning editors

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Second guessing

writers

audiences

fashionproducers

commissioning editors

schedulers

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Second guessing

writersaudiences

fashionproducers

commissioning editors

schedulers

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Second guessing

writersaudiences

fashionproducers

commissioning editors

schedulers

channelcontrollers

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Second guessing

writersaudiences

fashionproducers

commissioning editors

schedulers

channelcontrollers

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Second guessing

writersaudiences

fashionproducers

commissioning editors

schedulers

channelcontrollers

critics

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Second guessing

writersaudiences

fashionproducers

commissioning editors

schedulers

channelcontrollers

critics

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Who loses out?

audiences

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Who loses out?

audiences

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A writer wants:

AttentionMoneyLaughter

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A writer wants:

MoneyLaughterAttention

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A writer wants:

MoneyLAUGHTER FROM PEERSLAUGHTER FROM AUDIENCEAttention

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What makes your peers laugh…

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What makes your peers laugh…

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…is not what makes the audience laugh.

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…is not what makes the audience laugh.

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A neurobiologist has a formula:

((R x D + V) x F) + SA

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A neurobiologist has a formula:

((R x D + V) x F) + SA

where

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A neurobiologist has a formula:

((R x D + V) x F) + SA

whereR = recognisability of main character

D = delusions of grandeurV = verbal wit

F = no of times characters fall overS = difference in status between characters

A = success of characters’ stratagems

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A neurobiologist has a formula:

nonsense

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The range of sitcom is so broad…

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The range of sitcom is so broad…

…some don’t even have any jokes.

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The range of sitcom is so broad…

…some don’t even have any jokes.

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The range of sitcom is so broad…

…some don’t even have any jokes.

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The range of sitcom is so broad…

jokes

okay

Nighty Night

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The range of sitcom is so broad…

jokes

okay

Nighty Night

The ThickOf It

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The range of sitcom is so broad…

jokes

okay

Nighty Night

The ThickOf It

(down here is not okay)

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Jokes can be hidden…

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Jokes can be hidden…

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Playing with the timeline:

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Playing with the timeline:

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Playing with the timeline:

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Playing with the timeline:

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Playing with the timeline:

…when it’s right for the story.

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Mixing and matching:

•The Japanese businessman

•The long-suffering wife

•The sofa

•The dreadful dénouement

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Mixing and matching:

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Mixing and matching:

•Fulfill commissioners’ need to be “modern” &/or “edgy”

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Mixing and matching:

•Fulfill commissioners’ need to be “modern” &/or “edgy”

•Fit the budget

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Mixing and matching:

•Fulfill commissioners’ need to be “modern” &/or “edgy”

•Fit the budget

•Fit the tone

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Mixing and matching:

•Fulfill commissioners’ need to be “modern” &/or “edgy”

•Fit the budget

•Fit the tone

•Funny

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•Funny

IMPORTANT

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•Funny

IMPORTANTDanke Schön!

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SOURCES

•The Word Season 5 Episode ? [Channel Four, 1995]•"Wild Rabbit" photo by Joshua Davis [cc licence on Flickr]•Terry And June Season 3 Episode 3 [BBC1, 1981]•Father Ted Season 2 Episode 6 [Channel Four, 1996]•Respectable Season 1 Episodes 1& 6 [Five/Paramount, 2006]•Monkey Dust Season 3 Episode 1 [BBC3, 2005]•Laughter: A Scientific Investigation [Robert R. Provine, Faber, 2000]•Imagine: A Funny Thing Happened On The Way To The Studio [BBC1, 2006]•"Drury Lane Theatre" engraving by Isaac Taylor [RCM Centre for Performance History, 88E2]•Fawlty Towers Season 1 Episode 5 [BBC1, 1975]•Extras Season 2 Episode 4 [BBC2, 2006]•Crawford Park pilot [Pozzitive Productions, 2007]•Heresy Show 4 [BBC Radio 4, 2004]•The Two Ronnies Series 8 [BBC1, 1971]•"Del Boy is top of the class, say sitcom scientists" [The Guardian, June 7, 2005]•The Thick Of It New Year Special [BBC4, 2007]•Everything Bad Is Good For You: How Popular Culture Is Making Us Smarter [Steven Johnson, Allen Lane, 2005]