Here I have used the colour black in my background to allow the picture and writing to stand out a little more. Also I think it is a good Idea to keep with the darker colours as it makes it seem more Angry and aggressive emphasising that rock attitude. I feel a little happier using Quark as have used it to do my contents page, so I feel I know how to used it well now, I find it really helpful as it has guides so I know where everything needs to be.

Here I have added some more images to make the article more appealing as in many of the article I have looked at in Kerrang! and NME have used more than one image. I have also put some of the bands details at the bottom in red to make is seem more realistic.

In this shot of my double page spread, I have chosen this image because any images I had couldn’t get a picture of the band so I had to be creative and create something that was going to fit in with my article so I have used some cards that the band had given me and I took some shots of them in different positions to see If I could make a good picture out of them. I have also changed the writing to white, red and yellow, as there where too many colours.

In this print screen I have changed the image, as here I have cut out some information of the band and placed it together, I think this works a lot better than the other image as it looked a little messy and not very professional. Also here I have highlighted all of the words “MERGER” in red to make it stand out more.

I was trying to find away of making my heading bigger and bolder but it was too long and wouldn’t work so I shortened it to “Band in a Box” its shorter and more snappy and I think that it will attract the audience better. As it is also more clear.