A bird came down the walk

A bird came down the walk22nd January 2014

Even nature amuses Emily

Dickinson!Have you heard the one about the bird?

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A Bird came down the walk -He did not know I saw - He bit an Angle-worm in halvesAnd ate the fellow, raw.

And then he drank a DewFrom a convenient Grass -And then hopped sidewise to the WallTo let a Beetle pass -

He glanced with rapid eyesThat hurried all around -They looked like frightened Beads, I thought -He stirred his Velvet Head

Like one in danger; Cautious,I offered him a CrumbAnd he unrolled his feathersAnd rowed him softer home -

Than Oars divide the Ocean,Too silver for a seam -Or Butterflies, off Banks of Noon,Leap, plashless, as they swim.

A Bird came down the walk -He did not know I saw - He bit an Angle-worm in halvesAnd ate the fellow, raw.

It almost sounds human – there is a sense that it is behaving in a civilised fashion

Its behaviour is natural as it does not realise it is being observed.

An angleworm is any type of worm (such as an earthworm) that is used for fishing bait.

‘Raw’ seems to be an unusual word to use – we would not expect the bird to cook it! This perhaps ties in with the civilised attitude suggested by the first line. On the other hand, it could show the cruelty of nature.

And then he drank a DewFrom a convenient Grass -And then hopped sidewise to the WallTo let a Beetle pass -

Again she suggests that the bird is more human in its mannerisms.

Does he hop sideways because he is ‘polite’ or is he startled by the beetle?Note how overall the

theme is far more simplistic than previous poems. It focus far more on straightforward ideas.

He glanced with rapid eyesThat hurried all around -They looked like frightened Beads, I thought -He stirred his Velvet Head

Again, we see human behaviour.

Dashes suggest a pause for her to introduce her thoughts.

Poetic image shows her opinion/feelings. Notice how this stanza

clearly leads us on to the next – there is no pause. Previous stanzas have been self contained units.

Like one in danger; Cautious,I offered him a CrumbAnd he unrolled his feathersAnd rowed him softer home -

Continuation from previous stanza. Sense of danger – does this tie into Dickinson’s own feelings?

Who is cautious – her or the bird?

The word ‘unrolled’ gives a sense of the bird opening up as it spreads its wings.

The wings are compared to oars – think about their movement. Use of the word ‘softer’ gives a suggestion of the elegance of nature.

Than Oars divide the Ocean,Too silver for a seam -Or Butterflies, off Banks of Noon,Leap, plashless, as they swim.

Note how the language here is far more poetic. Once the bird takes flight it becomes a far more graceful creature and this is shown by use of alliteration. It is as if the bird only really shows its beauty when it is in flight.

The wings break through the air with greater ease than oars through water.

What exactly are ‘Banks of Noon’?.

She suggests the bird is even more graceful than butterflies who leap and swim through the air.

Summary

• This seems to be a much simpler poem than the others.

• It shows both the cruelty and beauty of nature.

• What does Dickinson feel about the bird?

ESSAY

“He bit an Angle-worm in halvesAnd ate the fellow, raw…”Discuss ways in which Dickinson presents nature in ‘A Bird came down the Walk’.In your answer, explore the effects of language, imagery and verse form.(Summer 2013)