Feedback and improvements on

poster and Digipak

Feedback on CD cover “These are effective designs, Harriet, linked well to the genre and audience. I think you need greater variety with the photos you use: you've got 6 photos in the booklet, all of which are of a drumkit/ drummer. Could you vary these to use other images related to the band/ video? It might be other poses, or other angles, or shots of the memory sequences (or similar types of image). The designs are highly effective, but greater variety/ range is needed in the photography”

Feedback on Poster cover This is an effective design, and the font choice and texture is excellent. You need to do a few tweaks: the gaps on the right side and the left side (of the three polaroids) should be equal. I also suggest you change/ add variety to the photos you've used (rather than three of drumming). Are the icons in the bottom left corner the same size/ spacing? Lastly, would the polaroid benefit from being laid out in a les formal/ straight manner?

Original poster design

Original CD designs

Further screen shots of the different scene in Music video

Memory scenes Cycling scenes Performance scenes

Inside cover 1

Front cover 1

Inside CD cover 2

Front cover 2 I have developed the frontCovers of my digipak by exploring andexperimenting with a range of different photos which were featured in my music video. I think that the new inside cover layout of design 3 and photos works well, as the filters on the photos are all the same, so they from a collective piece. I personally feel that design 3 for the front cover works the most successfully because of the similarity in colour filters and how they work and form a collective piece together as well

Front cover 3

Inside CD cover 3

Design 1: Incorporating a selection of photos from my music video, still making a relevant connection between the products, just incorporating more Photos. Design 2; I focused purely on the memory scenes from my music

video, these work well with the polaroid template as the photos contain the filter from the video.

Design 3: this takes similar aspects to the front cover designs that I have re- made. I think this design works well because the blue background merges and works well with the photographs layered