1 Broadcast News Refresher Lecture KBP-Cebu Chapter September 26, 2009 Baseline Restaurant Lecturer: JUN TARIMAN

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Broadcast News Broadcast News Refresher LectureRefresher Lecture

KBP-Cebu ChapterKBP-Cebu Chapter

September 26, 2009September 26, 2009

Baseline RestaurantBaseline Restaurant

Lecturer: JUN TARIMANLecturer: JUN TARIMAN

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What is NEWS?What is NEWS?

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What is NEWS?What is NEWS?The dog bites a man.The dog bites a man.

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What is NEWS?What is NEWS?The dog bites a man.The dog bites a man. A man bites a dog.A man bites a dog.

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News ProcessNews Process News GatheringNews Gathering News WritingNews Writing News Presentation/ReportingNews Presentation/Reporting

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News ProcessNews Process News News GatheringGathering

Story ConferenceStory Conference Deployment of news team/reporterDeployment of news team/reporter

News Desk vs. Field ReporterNews Desk vs. Field Reporter News Producer vs. News AnchorNews Producer vs. News Anchor

Art of InterviewingArt of Interviewing Human Trail, Paper Trail, Electronic TrailHuman Trail, Paper Trail, Electronic Trail

News WritingNews Writing News Presentation/ReportingNews Presentation/Reporting

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News ProcessNews Process News GatheringNews Gathering News News WritingWriting

Determine the focus sentenceDetermine the focus sentence News Story Form and OrganizationNews Story Form and Organization

Inverted Inverted PyramidPyramid vs. Square Format vs. Square Format Cebuano News Writing/ReportingCebuano News Writing/Reporting

News Presentation/ReportingNews Presentation/Reporting

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News ProcessNews Process News GatheringNews Gathering News News WritingWriting

Determine the focus sentenceDetermine the focus sentence It helps you decide what you It helps you decide what you must must

includeinclude.. It helps you decide what you It helps you decide what you can leave can leave

outout.. It helps you decide what order to set It helps you decide what order to set

out the facts out the facts to lead the listenerto lead the listener through the story logically.through the story logically.

It sums up the essentials of your story It sums up the essentials of your story in in one sentenceone sentence that answers these that answers these three questions: three questions: WhoWho, , WhatWhat, and , and WhyWhy??

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Focus SentenceFocus Sentence Examples:Examples:

Kim teaches Writing for Radio Kim teaches Writing for Radio because she wants journalists to tell because she wants journalists to tell compelling radio stories.compelling radio stories.

People in Buenos Aires are planning People in Buenos Aires are planning to march tonight because they want the to march tonight because they want the mayor to resign after a nightclub fire killed mayor to resign after a nightclub fire killed more than 180 people.more than 180 people.

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Focus SentenceFocus Sentence Examples:Examples:

Former Philippine President Joseph Former Philippine President Joseph Estrada seeks full media coverage of the Estrada seeks full media coverage of the trial of his cases to inform the public of the trial of his cases to inform the public of the status of his case.status of his case.

Giant broadcasting network ABS-CBN Giant broadcasting network ABS-CBN has vowed to remain free from has vowed to remain free from government’s censorship especially during government’s censorship especially during the times when the public needs most of the times when the public needs most of the information.the information.

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Focus SentenceFocus Sentence Focus: Indonesian authorities are speeding up the Focus: Indonesian authorities are speeding up the

naming of all of its islands to prepare the country naming of all of its islands to prepare the country in territorial disputes resolution.in territorial disputes resolution.

Indonesia islands/morning prime News/ Indonesia islands/morning prime News/ March 8, 2006March 8, 2006

The United Nations has asked Indonesia to The United Nations has asked Indonesia to speed up the naming of all of its islands.speed up the naming of all of its islands.

Marine Affairs and Fisheries Minister Freddy Marine Affairs and Fisheries Minister Freddy Numberi says the country has until 2007 to Numberi says the country has until 2007 to submit the names to the U-N.submit the names to the U-N.

Freddy says barely half of the more than Freddy says barely half of the more than 17-thousand islands in Indonesia have been 17-thousand islands in Indonesia have been named.named.

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Focus SentenceFocus SentenceHe said local authorities are now being He said local authorities are now being

tasked to name their respective islands rather tasked to name their respective islands rather than wait for the Ministry of Home Affairs to do it.than wait for the Ministry of Home Affairs to do it.

Freddy warned that the delay in naming the Freddy warned that the delay in naming the islands will jeopardize Indonesia’s claim over islands will jeopardize Indonesia’s claim over these islands before an international forum.these islands before an international forum.

Other countries have also claims over some Other countries have also claims over some of the islands.of the islands.

Freddy is optimistic Indonesia would be Freddy is optimistic Indonesia would be able to submit on time the names of its islands.able to submit on time the names of its islands.

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News Story Form & News Story Form & OrganizationOrganization

Inverted Pyramid Inverted Pyramid

most important facts

supporting details

additional details

more details

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News Story Form & News Story Form & OrganizationOrganization

Square FormatSquare Format

story lead

fact 2 and detail

fact 3 and detail

rounding off

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News Sentence StructureNews Sentence Structure Passive sentencesPassive sentences

Follows the Object-Verb-Subject agreementFollows the Object-Verb-Subject agreement Example: Example:

O V SO V S

A man was bitten by the dog.A man was bitten by the dog.

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Follows the Object-Verb-Subject agreementFollows the Object-Verb-Subject agreement Example: Example:

O V SO V S

A man was bitten by the dog.A man was bitten by the dog.

Active sentencesActive sentences Follows the Subject-Verb-Object agreementFollows the Subject-Verb-Object agreement Example:Example:

S V OS V O

The dog bites a man.The dog bites a man.

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Follows the Object-Verb-Subject agreementFollows the Object-Verb-Subject agreement Example: Example: O V SO V S

A man was bitten by the dog.A man was bitten by the dog.The The presidentpresident was bitten by a was bitten by a

dog.dog. Active sentencesActive sentences

Follows the Subject-Verb-Object agreementFollows the Subject-Verb-Object agreement Example:Example: S V OS V O

The dog bites a man.The dog bites a man. The The dogdog bit the President. bit the President.

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Mga Sayop sa Pagsulat Mga Sayop sa Pagsulat ug Pagsibya sa ug Pagsibya sa

CebuanoCebuano

““A True Story” A True Story”

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Cebuano JournalismCebuano JournalismSentence Structure:Sentence Structure:

S V OS V O

I am going to the Carbon Market.I am going to the Carbon Market.

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S V OS V O


Ako moadto sa Carbon Market.Ako moadto sa Carbon Market.

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S V OS V O


Ako moadto sa Carbon Market.Ako moadto sa Carbon Market.

V S OV S O

Moadto ko sa Carbon MarketMoadto ko sa Carbon Market

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Always use the V-S-O Always use the V-S-O formform

S-V-O format S-V-O format

““Gatosan ka mga Gatosan ka mga magsisibya sa radyo magsisibya sa radyo ug telebisyon ug telebisyon ang ang nagtapoknagtapok sa labing sa labing unang higayon nga unang higayon nga Broadcaster’s Broadcaster’s Congress.”Congress.”

V-S-O V-S-O formatformat

“ “Pormal nang Pormal nang gibuksangibuksan kagahapon ang kagahapon ang kasaulogan sa kasaulogan sa Broadcaster’s Broadcaster’s Month dinhi sa Month dinhi sa Sugbo.” Sugbo.”

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NasunogNasunog ang usa ka tindahan nga ang usa ka tindahan nga nahimutang sa barangay Paknaan niadtong nahimutang sa barangay Paknaan niadtong Sabado sa kadlawon.Sabado sa kadlawon.

NadawatNadawat sa Mandaue City Fire Department sa Mandaue City Fire Department ang alarma… alas dose cuarenta y nueve ang alarma… alas dose cuarenta y nueve niadtong Sabado sa kadlawon.niadtong Sabado sa kadlawon.

Hinoon, Hinoon, wala kakatapwala kakatap ang kayo sa ubang ang kayo sa ubang mga panimalay sa dapit… human mga panimalay sa dapit… human ma-controlma-control sa sa mga bombero ang sunog… sulod lang sa usa ka mga bombero ang sunog… sulod lang sa usa ka minuto. minuto.

Gibana-banangGibana-banang mokabat sa baynte singko mokabat sa baynte singko mil pesos ang danyos diin gilambigit sa koryente mil pesos ang danyos diin gilambigit sa koryente

ang hinungdan sa pag-ulbo sa sunog..ang hinungdan sa pag-ulbo sa sunog..

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((wrongwrong))

Motorsiklo sa Cebu City Traffic Motorsiklo sa Cebu City Traffic Operations Management o CITOM Operations Management o CITOM gituohang gisunoggituohang gisunog samtang giparada sa samtang giparada sa may barangay Basak-San Nicolas, may barangay Basak-San Nicolas, dakbayan sa Sugbo.dakbayan sa Sugbo.

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Who is the subject?Who is the subject? Position/Designation first Position/Designation first

before namebefore nameCebu City Police Director Sr. Supt. Cebu City Police Director Sr. Supt.

Patricinio Comendador has ordered the Patricinio Comendador has ordered the manhunt of….manhunt of….

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Who is the subject?Who is the subject? Position/Designation first Position/Designation first

before namebefore nameCebu City Police Director Sr. Supt. Cebu City Police Director Sr. Supt.

Patricinio Comendador has ordered the Patricinio Comendador has ordered the manhunt of….manhunt of….

Gimando sa hepe sa kapolisan sa Gimando sa hepe sa kapolisan sa Dakbayan sa Sugbo--Sr. Supt. Patrocinio Dakbayan sa Sugbo--Sr. Supt. Patrocinio Comendador ang pagpangita sa…Comendador ang pagpangita sa…

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Paghubad (Translation)Paghubad (Translation) No literal translationNo literal translationSunstar Daily:Sunstar Daily:

“ “The Aboitiz Football Cup The Aboitiz Football Cup kicks offkicks off this this Sunday at the…. “Sunday at the…. “

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Paghubad (Translation)Paghubad (Translation) No literal translationNo literal translationSunstar Daily:Sunstar Daily:

“ “The Aboitiz Football Cup The Aboitiz Football Cup kicks offkicks off this this Sunday at the…. “Sunday at the…. “

Superbalita:Superbalita:

““MopatidMopatid karong Dominggo ang Aboitiz karong Dominggo ang Aboitiz Football Cup diha sa … “Football Cup diha sa … “

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Paghubad (Translation)Paghubad (Translation) No literal translationNo literal translationSunstar Daily:Sunstar Daily: “ “The Aboitiz Football Cup The Aboitiz Football Cup kicks offkicks off this this

Sunday at the…. “Sunday at the…. “Superbalita:Superbalita:

““MopatidMopatid karong Dominggo ang Aboitiz karong Dominggo ang Aboitiz Football Cup diha sa … “Football Cup diha sa … “

“ “MagsugodMagsugod karong Dominggo ang karong Dominggo ang Aboitiz Football Cup diha sa…. “Aboitiz Football Cup diha sa…. “

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Paghubad (Translation)Paghubad (Translation) Relax the Cebuano rule for Relax the Cebuano rule for

NumbersNumbers1 – Usa (1 – Usa (unouno)) 6 – Unom (6 – Unom (saissais))

2 – Duha (2 – Duha (dosdos)) 7 – Pito (7 – Pito (sietesiete))

3 – Tulo (3 – Tulo (trestres) ) 8 – Walo (8 – Walo (ochoocho))

4 – Upat (4 – Upat (cuatrocuatro) 9 – Siyam () 9 – Siyam (nuevenueve))

5 – Lima (5 – Lima (cincocinco) 10 – Napulo () 10 – Napulo (diezdiez))

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NumbersNumbers11 – Napulo’g usa (11 – Napulo’g usa (onseonse) 20 – Kawhaan ) 20 – Kawhaan ((bentebente))

12 – Napulo’g duha (12 – Napulo’g duha (dosedose) 21 – Kawhaa’g usa ) 21 – Kawhaa’g usa

13 – Napulo’g tulo (13 – Napulo’g tulo (tresetrese) 22 – Kawhaa’g ) 22 – Kawhaa’g duhaduha

14 – Napulo’g upat (14 – Napulo’g upat (katorsekatorse))

15 – Napulo’g lima (15 – Napulo’g lima (kinsekinse))

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NumbersNumbers30 – Kat’loan (30 – Kat’loan (trentatrenta) 80 – Kawaloan () 80 – Kawaloan (ochentaochenta))

40 – Kap-atan 40 – Kap-atan (cuarenta)(cuarenta)90 – Kasiyaman 90 – Kasiyaman

((nobentanobenta) )

50 – Kalim-an (50 – Kalim-an (singkuwentasingkuwenta) 100 – Usa ka gatos) 100 – Usa ka gatos

60 – Kaunoman (60 – Kaunoman (sais sientasais sienta) 200 – Duha ka ) 200 – Duha ka gatosgatos

70 – Kapitoan (70 – Kapitoan (sietentasietenta)) 300 – Tulo ka gatos 300 – Tulo ka gatos

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NumbersNumbers

128 = Usa ka gatos ug kawhaan ug walo128 = Usa ka gatos ug kawhaan ug walo

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NumbersNumbers

128 = Usa ka gatos ug kawhaan ug walo128 = Usa ka gatos ug kawhaan ug walo

((Siento bente ochoSiento bente ocho))

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NumbersNumbers

128 = Usa ka gatos ug kawhaan ug walo128 = Usa ka gatos ug kawhaan ug walo ((Siento bente ochoSiento bente ocho))

1989 = Usa ka libo siyam ka gatos ug 1989 = Usa ka libo siyam ka gatos ug kawaloa’g kawaloa’g

siyam ka tuigsiyam ka tuig

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NumbersNumbers

128 = Usa ka gatos ug kawhaan ug walo128 = Usa ka gatos ug kawhaan ug walo ((Siento bente ochoSiento bente ocho))

1989 = Usa ka libo siyam ka gatos ug 1989 = Usa ka libo siyam ka gatos ug kawaloa’g kawaloa’g

siyam ka tuigsiyam ka tuig ((Mil nueve sientos ochenta y nueveMil nueve sientos ochenta y nueve))

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Paghubad (Translation)Paghubad (Translation) abUsing “abUsing “arar”, “”, “erer” as ” as

suffixessuffixes

accommodate + accommodate + arar = akomodar = akomodar resolve + resolve + arar = resolbar = resolbar falsify + falsify + arar = palsipikar = palsipikar to delay +to delay +arar = delatar = delatar attend + attend + erer = attender = attender

distribute + distribute + er er = distribuwer = distribuwer

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Paghubad (Translation)Paghubad (Translation) abUsing “abUsing “arar”, “”, “erer” as suffixes” as suffixes

accommodate + accommodate + arar = akomodar ( = akomodar (pagdawatpagdawat))resolve + resolve + arar = resolbar ( = resolbar (paghusay, paghusay,

pagsulbadpagsulbad))falsify + falsify + arar = palsipikar ( = palsipikar (ilegal nga pag-ilegal nga pag-

usabusab))to delay +to delay +arar = delatar ( = delatar (paglanganpaglangan))attend + attend + erer = attender ( = attender (pagtagadpagtagad))

distribute + distribute + er er = distribuwer ( = distribuwer (pag-apod-pag-apod- apodapod))

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Paghubad (Translation)Paghubad (Translation) Retain the English wordsRetain the English words

naytklab = night clubnaytklab = night clubdrayberdrayber = driver = driver pirslabpirslab = first love = first loveplaslaytplaslayt = flash light = flash lightobertaym = overtimeobertaym = overtimeadbentyur = adventureadbentyur = adventure

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““Inappropriate” Use of WordsInappropriate” Use of Words Collective Nouns don’t need Collective Nouns don’t need

““mgamga””kapolisankapolisan katilingbankatilingbankatawhankatawhan kahayopankahayopankababayenankababayenan kalasangankalasangankalalakin-ankalalakin-an kakahoyankakahoyankabatan-onankabatan-onan kalungsorankalungsorankabomberohankabomberohan kapariankapariankadagatankadagatan kasundalohankasundalohankabukirankabukiran kaparyentihankaparyentihan

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““Inappropriate” Use of WordsInappropriate” Use of Words

Collective Nouns don’t Collective Nouns don’t need “need “mgamga””

“…“…hilabi na sa atong hilabi na sa atong mga mga kapolisankapolisan dinha…” dinha…”

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““Inappropriate” Use of WordsInappropriate” Use of Words 5 Ws & 1H5 Ws & 1H

Diin o Asa = WhereDiin o Asa = WhereKanus-aKanus-a = When = WhenNgaNga = Which = WhichKinsaKinsa = Who = WhoNganoNgano = Why = WhyUnsaonUnsaon = How = How

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““Inappropriate” Use of WordsInappropriate” Use of Words 5 Ws & 1H5 Ws & 1H

Diin o Asa = WhereDiin o Asa = WhereKanus-aKanus-a = When = WhenNgaNga = Which = WhichKinsaKinsa = Who = WhoNganoNgano = Why = WhyUnsaonUnsaon = How = How

“…“…and signing sa and signing sa commitment wall commitment wall diindiin… sa hitabo…”… sa hitabo…”

“…“…gitiwas ang gitiwas ang hamubong hamubong programa programa kung kung diindiin gisugdan kini gisugdan kini sa pag-bendisyon…sa pag-bendisyon…

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““Inappropriate” Use of WordsInappropriate” Use of Words

Kun vs. KonKun vs. Kon

KonKon = if= if

KunKun = or= or

kon dilikon dili = if not= if not

kundilikundili = but= but

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““Inappropriate” Use of WordsInappropriate” Use of Words Useless phrases and wordsUseless phrases and words

Sa laing balita… (Sa laing balita… (in another newsin another news)) Sa laing bahin (Sa laing bahin (meanwhilemeanwhile)) Samtang (Samtang (whilewhile))

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““Inappropriate” Use of WordsInappropriate” Use of Words Useless phrases and wordsUseless phrases and words

Sa laing balita… (Sa laing balita… (in another newsin another news)) Sa laing bahin (Sa laing bahin (meanwhilemeanwhile)) Samtang (Samtang (whilewhile))

(correct use of “(correct use of “SamtangSamtang”)”)““Usa ka nursing student ang nabiktima sa Usa ka nursing student ang nabiktima sa

pagpanulis SAMTANG nagsakay og jeep.”pagpanulis SAMTANG nagsakay og jeep.”

(correct use of “(correct use of “SamtangSamtang”)”)“…“…aron makuha ang ilang Tatakbo Ka shirt aron makuha ang ilang Tatakbo Ka shirt

ug election pins SAMTANG ang mga ug election pins SAMTANG ang mga politiko nga andam mosalmot naghinam-politiko nga andam mosalmot naghinam-hinam sab…”hinam sab…”

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““KayKay” wa’y gamit ” wa’y gamit

……apan kulang ug mabaw pa apan kulang ug mabaw pa diay kaayo kini diay kaayo kini tungod tungod kaykay ang ang atong naandan nga pinulongan atong naandan nga pinulongan kaykay nasagolan naman diay og nasagolan naman diay og mga banyaga.mga banyaga.

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““Matod paMatod pa” is vague ” is vague

Matod paMatod pa sa ubang tawo, sa ubang tawo, mas mo-uswag ang usa ka nasod mas mo-uswag ang usa ka nasod kon magkasinabtanay ang mga kon magkasinabtanay ang mga molopyo.molopyo.

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““Matod paMatod pa” is vague ” is vague

Matod paMatod pa sa ubang tawo, mas sa ubang tawo, mas mo-uswag ang usa ka nasod kon mo-uswag ang usa ka nasod kon magkasinabtanay ang mga magkasinabtanay ang mga molopyo.molopyo.

Matod paMatod pa sa akong maestro…. sa akong maestro….

Matod paMatod pa ni Judge Suerte… ni Judge Suerte…

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““PossessionPossession” is not ” is not posisyonposisyon

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Merriam-Webster Dictionary:Merriam-Webster Dictionary:

PossessionPossession– – n. control or n. control or occupancy occupancy

of property.of property.

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PossessionPossession– – n. control or n. control or occupancy occupancy

of property.of property.

Posisyon– Posisyon– Cebuano for Cebuano for “position”“position”

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Nailhan na ang “Nailhan na ang “SuspetsadoSuspetsado” ”

Ang Ang wa’ mailhingwa’ mailhing suspetsado… suspetsado…

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Ang Ang wa’ mailhingwa’ mailhing suspetsado… suspetsado…


“ “SuspectSuspect”, ”, n: one who is n: one who is suspected (as of a crime)suspected (as of a crime)

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Naglakaw ang duha ka mga Naglakaw ang duha ka mga biktima gikan sa Larsian sa Fuente biktima gikan sa Larsian sa Fuente paingon unta sa ilang pinuy-anan sa paingon unta sa ilang pinuy-anan sa Junquera Extension… dihang gitulis Junquera Extension… dihang gitulis sa duha ka sa duha ka wa’ mailhing mga wa’ mailhing mga lalakelalake sa dalan Arlington. sa dalan Arlington.

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Nasikop atol sa follow-up Nasikop atol sa follow-up operation sa kapolisan ang duha ka operation sa kapolisan ang duha ka mga suspetsado nga sila si mga suspetsado nga sila si Junjie Junjie dela Calzada ug laing disi siete dela Calzada ug laing disi siete anyosanyos… pulos taga Ward kuwatro, … pulos taga Ward kuwatro, Minglanilla…Minglanilla…

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Age DOESn’t Matter Age DOESn’t Matter

Nakabsan gayud sa kinabuhi si Nakabsan gayud sa kinabuhi si Vedasto Corsiga Junior,Vedasto Corsiga Junior, baynte singko baynte singko anyosanyos, , cook sa usa ka Korean restaurant cook sa usa ka Korean restaurant sa da’an Ramos.sa da’an Ramos.

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Age DOESn’t Matter Age DOESn’t Matter

Nakabsan gayud sa kinabuhi si Nakabsan gayud sa kinabuhi si Vedasto Corsiga Junior,Vedasto Corsiga Junior, baynte singko baynte singko anyosanyos, , cook sa usa ka Korean restaurant cook sa usa ka Korean restaurant sa da’an Ramos.sa da’an Ramos.

Nakabsan gayud sa kinabuhi si Nakabsan gayud sa kinabuhi si Vedasto Corsiga Junior, cook sa usa ka Vedasto Corsiga Junior, cook sa usa ka Korean restaurant sa da’an Ramos.Korean restaurant sa da’an Ramos.

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Don’tDon’t translate everything! translate everything!

Gikiha ni Banilad Barangay Gikiha ni Banilad Barangay Kapitan Glen Bercide si Vice-Mayor Kapitan Glen Bercide si Vice-Mayor Carlo Fortuna og Carlo Fortuna og Malversation of Public Malversation of Public FundsFunds..

Retain the English WordsRetain the English Words

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Don’tDon’t translate everything! translate everything!

Gikiha ni Banilad Barangay Gikiha ni Banilad Barangay Kapitan Glen Bercide si Vice-Mayor Kapitan Glen Bercide si Vice-Mayor Carlo Fortuna og Carlo Fortuna og Malversation of Malversation of Public FundsPublic Funds..

(translation): (translation): Pagpangawkaw sa pundo Pagpangawkaw sa pundo sa gobierno.sa gobierno.

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““Ceblish” Ceblish”

Ang mga election officers nga Ang mga election officers nga maoy maoy mo-conductmo-conduct sa seminar sa sa seminar sa mga magtutudlo sa mga magtutudlo sa unang quarter unang quarter sa 2010sa 2010……

Na-busy ‘ron ang COMELEC sa ‘ron ang COMELEC sa nagpadayong nagpadayong voter’s registrationvoter’s registration hangtud sa Oktubre trenta y uno.hangtud sa Oktubre trenta y uno.

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Alang ni John Lloyd… Alang ni John Lloyd… true true love waitslove waits…… Ugma na ang Ugma na ang showingshowing sa “ sa “In My LifeIn My Life”…”…

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Alang ni John Lloyd… Alang ni John Lloyd… true love true love waitswaits…… Ugma na ang Ugma na ang showingshowing sa sa ““In My LifeIn My Life”…”…

((translationtranslation))

Alang ni John Lloyd… makapa-Alang ni John Lloyd… makapa-abot ang tinuoray nga gugma… abot ang tinuoray nga gugma… Ugma, ipasalida na ang “In My Ugma, ipasalida na ang “In My Life”…Life”…

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1 Broadcast News Refresher Lecture KBP-Cebu Chapter September 26, 2009 Baseline Restaurant Lecturer: JUN TARIMAN