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Delia Memorial School (Hip Wo)
Final Examination 2011-2012
S4 English 2
Marking scheme
Part A (40 marks)Content 40
Accuracy 40
Presentation 20 Part A x 0.4
Content (40 marks)
31-40 marksAble to reach required word count of 200 words; plot written in an interesting way within the
context of an email; uses the past tense to describe what had happened; uses direct speech.
21-30 marksAble to reach at least 200 words; story is mostly described; uses some past tense and direct
speech; plot quite original but a few irrelevant material.
11-20 marksUnable to reach the required word count; story does not relate to the
pictures/confusing/inappropriate; story is not written within the context of an email; poor use of
the past tense
0-10 marksPlot missing; fail to complete the story/ email.
Accuracy (40 marks)
31-40 marksExcellent use of sentence structures and accurate word choice; no serious grammatical errors;approximately fewer than 5% errors.
21-30 marksGood use of sentence structures and good word choice; a few grammatical mistakes;approximately between 5-9% errors.
11-20 marksLack variety in sentence structures and word choice; frequent grammatical errors; approximately
between 10-14% errors.
0-10 marksPoor sentence structures and word choice; mixed constructions sentence boundary errors:
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Presentation (20 marks)
16-20 marksExcellence in logical organization, original development, coherent sentences with effectivetransitions; fluent; ideas well expressed.
11-15 marksLogical organization, coherent sentences with good transitions; organization adequate but not
particularly creative; ideas clearly expressed.
6-10 marks
Organization or purpose unclear; redundancy or inconsistency in supporting evidence;
paragraphs incoherent or under-developed; transitions unclear or nonexistent; not easy to follow.
0-5 marksParagraphs incoherent and not unified; inadequate development and arrangement of
information; absence of topic sentences with paragraphs; definitely difficult to follow; large
proportion of meaningless jumbles to words.
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Part B (60 marks)
Grading Scale
Content 40
Accuracy 40
Presentation 20 Part B x 0.6
Grading Standard
Content:
31-40 marksA clear sense of purpose as indicated by a strong central idea, supported by effective, concrete
detail; clear and intelligent development of the outline; original, interesting and readable.
21-30 marks
Central idea apparent, supported by adequate details; clear development of the outline; quite
original and interesting; a few irrelevant material.
11-20 marksCentral idea confused; inaccurate/unclear/illogical supporting details; outline partially used or
even misinterpreted; some irrelevant material.
0-10 marks
Central idea missing; absence of supporting details; fail to address the topic.
Accuracy:
31-40 marks
Excellent use of sentence structures and accurate word choice; no serious grammatical errors;
approximately fewer than 5% errors.
21-30 marks
Good use of sentence structures and good word choice; a few grammatical mistakes;
approximately between 5-9% errors.
11-20 marks
Lack variety in sentence structures and word choice; frequent grammatical errors; approximately
between 10-14% errors.
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0-10 marks
Poor sentence structures and word choice; mixed constructions sentence boundary errors:Run-on sentences
Unjustifiable sentence fragments
Comma splices
Agreement errors
Inappropriate shifts in tense, voice, mood, person
Presentation:
16-20 marks
Excellence in logical organization, original development, coherent paragraphs with effective
transitions; fluent; ideas well expressed.
11-15 marks
Logical organization, coherent paragraphs with good transitions; organization adequate but not
particularly creative; ideas clearly expressed.
6-10 marks
Organization or purpose unclear; redundancy or inconsistency in supporting evidence;
paragraphs incoherent or under-developed; transitions unclear or nonexistent; not easy to follow.
0-5 marks
Paragraphs incoherent and not unified; inadequate development and arrangement of
information; absence of topic sentences with paragraphs; definitely difficult to follow; large
proportion of meaningless jumbles to words.
If a composition is much too short, marks will be deducted for content, accuracy and
presentation accordingly. 0 will be given for a student who hands in a blank script.
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Sample Essays
Part A Question 1
Dear Jackie,
I had the most uneventful day! I wanted a different look so I went to a stylistnear my home in the hope of looking more attractive.
I talked to the stylist about the type of look I was aiming for. I wantsomething rather unusual that would make me attractive and trendy. Well,I suggest you to dye your hair rouge and trim them afterwards. The wordrouge sounded very peculiar yet appealing. Alright, Ill have that.
The stylist dyed my hair first. While I was waiting for the dye to penetrateinto my hair and show its effects, I fell asleep.
After an hour, I was woken up by my stylist as I had to have a hair wash. Iwas extremely excited by the new color to do its wonders. After the stylistwas done, he revealed my look to me in a mirror. Here you go! he saidgleefully. I almost fainted when I saw my hair! They were bright red! Butyou said rouge! I shrieked. Yes, rouge is French for red.
I was in deep trouble. I could not walk into school with this hair and mymom would be outraged at me. Dying my hair black only meant moredamaging. I had to wait for a week! Urgh!
Wish me luck for school tomorrow!
Your friend,Pat
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Part B
Question 2
Question 3
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Question 4
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Question 5
Question 6
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Question 7
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Question 8
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Question 9
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End of Marking Scheme