Sheet1MISTAKE1. Healthy food can give us more energy to our body. 2. I like to taste Western food and the Asian food. 3. Only you can eat Nasi Lemak in Malaysia. 4. Is it fair for the member whose already join this foodlovers.my?5. The notice say that the fee will be introduce for the meals delivery. 6. For example they can using a motorbike. 7. Do you agree it?8. I am the member of foodlovers.my.9. I am not agree with your reasons.10. Before I am so happy with the service but now I have to think twice for ordering from you again. 11. I have a bad news for you. 12. It is very high cost for me and I think I cant afford it. 13. I suggest foodlovers to collect a membership fees for each members every months.14. I am a member of foodlovers since two months. 15. We were understand about the costs that the foodlovers.my got was so high. 16. It might be cause reducing the order. 17. I hope our opinion and suggestion will accept. 18. I hope to hear a good news soon. 19. The changes that is you ask is most expensive for us. 20. Ive discussing with my another friends that is member of foodlovers too. 21. My parents originally from Sipitang.22. They not only delivering your orders but have free advisory tips.23. I have eaten out in seafood restaurant that located in the town.24. Do you receive an email from foodlovers?25. I am food lover.26. I have some good advices for your food service. 27. The email said that they will be a fee for the meals delivery.28. I suggest they use a bicycle instead of a car for the meals delivery to the customer.29. I am one of the Foodlovers.my member.30. Then I come back to here as a teacher.1. find the BIGGEST mistake in the sentences, correct them2. identify how many types of mistakes (which is the most frequent type)3. match erroneous sentences to types of mistakes4. students find similar mistakes in their writing tasks5. copy advice to feedback sheet

Sheet2ADVICEHow many times? Pay more attention to comparative adjectives1Pay more attention to countable/uncountable nouns6Pay more attention to countable/uncountable nounsPay more attention to countable/uncountable nounsPay more attention to countable/uncountable nounsPay more attention to countable/uncountable nounsPay more attention to countable/uncountable nouns (2x)Pay more attention to how you use articles3Pay more attention to how you use articlesPay more attention to how you use articlesPay more attention to how you use prepositions3Pay more attention to how you use prepositionsPay more attention to how you use prepositionsPay more attention to how you use tenses2Pay more attention to how you use tensesPay more attention to linking words1Pay more attention to subject/verb agreement1Pay more attention to verb forms10Pay more attention to verb formsPay more attention to verb formsPay more attention to verb formsPay more attention to verb formsPay more attention to verb formsPay more attention to verb formsPay more attention to verb formsPay more attention to verb formsPay more attention to verb formsPay more attention to word order3Pay more attention to word orderPay more attention to word order

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