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Peer Feedback Form 1
Peer Editor: ________________________________ Date:
_______________________
Group: _________ Writers name:
_____________________________________
Title: ____________________________________ Number of words in
the letter: ______________
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Is the letter interesting? [/] yes [] no
Write a comment about a part that is especially interesting to
you.
The part that mention about foreigners staying illegal in
Malaysia because they could earn more
money interest me the most as thats the main reason that
encouraged those foreigners to come to
Malaysia in the first place. Malaysia being a fast developing
country and proper in different
industries show those foreigners great opportunity to earn more
to improve their living at their
own country.
2. Do you understand everything? [/] yes [] noCircle or
underline any part that you do not understand, and write a comment
about it.
_______________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________
3. What is the topic sentence? Write it here.
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4. The topic sentence is (well-focused/not well-focused) and
(makes clear/doesnt make clear) the
writers attitude towards the topic.
5. Make a prediction about what you expect to read in the rest
of the letter based on the topic
sentence.
I expect more details on the use of biometric system.
6. Was your prediction in (5) accurate? [] yes [/] no
Comment. I read more about why foreign workers stay illegally in
Malaysia.
7. How is the topic sentence supported?
________________________________________________
8. Has the author related the supporting details to the topic
sentence? [] yes [] no
9. Are there any supporting details that require more
explanation to relate it to the topic sentence?
Comment:
_______________________________________________________________________________
10. Are there any irrelevant points/details in the letter? []
yes [/] no
What are
they?___________________________________________________________________
11. Are there any problems with format, grammar, punctuation and
sentence structure?[] yes [] no
Circle 3 instances of these problems, or copy them here.
