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Literary Artists (the good ones at least) choose their words carefully…
It is helpful to consider the things they could’ve done, but chose NOT to…
…and then ask yourself why…
EXAMPLE:Quote: “Baby, baby, baby…oooohhhh” (J. Bieber)
C but D: the “artist” could’ve said “darling, darling, darling”…
Could've but Didn't…
Even the most basic elements of language are in fact very complex.
Diction (word choice) is one of these basic ingredients.
Reasons for employing different types of diction:To communicate with denotative accuracyTo evoke emotionsTo suggest connections
Complexities of Language
Creates an elevated toneFree from slang, idioms, colloquialisms, and
contractionsOften features polysyllabic words,
sophisticated syntax, and elegant word choice
High / Formal Diction
“Discerning the impracticable state of the poor culprit’s mind, the elder clergyman, who had carefully prepared himself for the occasion, addressed to the multitude a discourse on sin, in all its branches, but with continual reference to the ignominious letter. So forcibly did he dwell upon this symbol, for the hour or more during which his periods were rolling over the people’s heads, that it assumed new terrors in their imagination, and seemed to derive its scarlet hue from the flames of the infernal pit.”
Nathaniel Hawthorne – The Scarlet Letter
High / Formal Diction
Uses standard language and vocabularyWithout elaborate wordsMay include contractions
Neutral Diction
“The shark swung over and the old man saw his eye was not alive and then he swung over once again, wrapping himself in two loops of the rope. The old man knew that he was dead but the shark would not accept it. Then on his back, with his tail lashing and his jaws clicking, the shark plowed over the water as a speedboat does. The water was white where his tail beat it and three-quarters of his body was clear above the water when the rope came taut, shivered, and then snapped. The shark lay quietly for a little while on the surface and the old man watched him. Then he went down very slowly.”
Ernest Hemingway – The Old Man and the Sea
Neutral Diction
The language of everyday useRelaxed and conversationalIncludes simple and common words, idioms,
slang, jargon, and contractions.
Low / Informal Diction
“Three quarts of milk. That’s what was in the icebox yesterday. Three whole quarts. Now they ain’t none. Not a drop. I don’t mind folks coming in and getting what they want, but three quarts of milk! What the devil does anybody need with three quarts of milk?”
Toni Morrison – The Bluest Eye
Low / Informal Diction
SlangColloquial ExpressionsJargonDialectConcrete DictionAbstract DictionDenotationConnotation
Types of Diction
Slang Colloquial Expressions
Jargon Dialect
Key features:
•Recently coined•Informal•ephemeral
•non-standard•Regional•Informal / conversational
•Common to a particular trade, profession, or pursuit
•Non-standard•Subgroup of a language•unique vocabulary and grammar
Examples OMG(Oh my God)
LOL(Laughing out loud)
Noob(New person)
“Y’all” (southern U.S.)
“Rubbish”(UK)
Nautical Terms
“cuddy” – a cabin on a ship
“taffrail” – one of a ship’s railings
“mizzen” – a mast
Newfie English
What are ye at?: or "Wadda ya'at b'y?"
("What are you doing?“)
Low / Informal Diction
Concrete DictionSpecific words that describe physical qualities
or conditions“Something soft and furry moved around her
ankles”“He was black all over, deep silky black, and his
eyes, pointing down toward his nose were bluish green.”
Abstract DictionDenotes ideas, emotions, conditions, or
concepts that are intangibleimpenetrable / incredible / inscrutable /
inconceivable / unfathomable
Concrete vs. Abstract Diction
DenotationThe exact, literal definition of a word Independent of any emotional association or
secondary meaningConnotation
The implicit, rather than explicit meaning of a word
Suggestions, associations, and emotional overtones attached to a word
HOUSE HOME
Denotation vs. Connotation
We often think of imagery in writing as something you can SEE.
But in actuality, it must be considered as anything you can IMAGINE.
IMAGERY: concrete / abstract
Abstract Imagery: The intangible
BEAUTY JUSTICE FAITH
DOUBTGUILT CONFIDENCE PARANOIA
VIOLENCE NOSTALGIA
FREEDOM
COMPASSION EPHEMERALITY
Concreteit was a summer night with a billion
sparkling stars above,and crickets and frogs singing in the damp marshes beyond my back porch.__________________________
it was a dark night deep in winter when a three-foot blanket of snow covered everything like a heavy white comforter, and the stillness was broken only by the clanging church bells echoing off the still brick buildings and filling the street.
the night was beautiful
Which type of Imagery is more effective?
Abstract
Lay your sleeping head, my love, Human on my faithless arm; Time and fevers burn away Individual beauty from Thoughtful children, and the grave Proves the child ephemeral: But in my arms till break of day Let the living creature lie, Mortal, guilty, but to me The entirely beautiful.
So is ABSTRACT always bad?