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‘That idea liked me so much.’• I liked the idea so much.

• I thought it was an amazing idea.

• I really liked the idea.

‘When I’m playing a match I lose sense of reality’

‘I found playing the guitar like a way to disconnect yourself from real life’

‘It is a way to distract from the world’

•When I’m playing a match I get away from it all.

•I found playing the guitar a good way to get away from it all.

‘I realized how useful it [Internet] was when I paid for Internet service’

• I realized how useful it was when I installed Internet on my computer.

• I realized how useful it was when I got Internet service.

‘Those days the Internet was like ‘empty’ because I didn’t know what to do in there.’• In those days the Internet was a

mystery for me because I didn’t know what it was really for.

• In those days the Internet was puzzling for me because I didn’t know what it was used for.

‘One year ago I decided to do a course to learn how to handle properly with computers’

• One year ago I decided to take up a computing course to make the most of my computer.

• One year ago I decided to take up a computing course to learn how to use it properly.

‘I recommend to everyone as a hobby.’I really recommend playing any sports as a hobby.’

• I recommend playing sports as a hobby to everyone.

• I highly recommend taking up any sport as a hobby.

‘I stopped going to the club because it was specially for boys from 6-12 years old.’

• Once you are 13 you cannot play there anymore

• I stopped going to the club because I was 13 and they only let kids under 12 enter/play.