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HSPA Persuasive Essay Student Model (Believing in Santa).notebook December 19, 2012
Analyzing, Annotating & Scoring Student Model
forHSPA Persuasive Prompt
Directions: 1) Get a different colored writing utensil for EACH of the following requirements for the fiveparagraph HSPA Persuasive Writing Prompt response. Then, create a Key like the one below.
= introductory strategy / hook= background information= thesis statement (including its restatement)= topic sentence= supporting detail (NUMBER THE SUPPORTING DETAILS)= transition= summary of main ideas= call to action / memorable ending
2) Locate each of the aforementioned requirements using your Key.
3) Edit the student model to correct spelling, grammar, and punctuation.
4) Annotate the student model by indicating its strengths and weaknesses Use the 6Point HSPA Rubric to help you with this step.
5) Score the student model using the 6Point HSPA Rubric.
HSPA Persuasive Essay Student Model (Believing in Santa).notebook December 19, 2012
Reasoning• opening and closing• single focus• second body paragraph's focus needs clarity and elaboration to effectively portray author's intended purpose• pattern of grammatical errors evident (comma splices, runons, pronoun/antecedent errors, homophone errors)
HSPA Persuasive Essay Student Model (Believing in Santa).notebook December 19, 2012
