Negatives:

× Reduce amount of ‘lip’ shots

× Need to add more narrative so the story is

__clearer.

× Keep referring to examples of Pop videos to

__stay with the genre

Positives:

Well Synced

Used Green Screen (Adds Creativity)

Editing Pace suits song

Narrative so far

Need to do:

Change middle bit of song

Reduce Lip Videos

Sort out arms on Green Screen Clips (they

__disappear)

Finish Entire Song!