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ELA II Grades K-5 Sessions Standards Institute Summer 2018 Grade 5 Module 1 Unit 2 Lessons: Lesson 3 Lesson 16 Lesson 17 Lesson 18 Please bring this packet to Institute Sessions on days 1, 2, and 3.

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ELA II Grades K-5 SessionsStandards Institute Summer 2018Grade 5 Module 1 Unit 2 Lessons:

• Lesson 3• Lesson 16• Lesson 17• Lesson 18

Please bring this packet to Institute Sessions on days 1, 2, and 3.

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GR

AD

E 5:

MO

DU

LE 1

: UN

IT 2

: LES

SON

3

Infe

rrin

g A

bout

Cha

ract

ers

Bas

ed o

n H

ow T

hey

Res

pond

to C

halle

nges

: (C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apya

yas/

Pap

ayas

”)

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yrig

ht ©

201

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editi

onar

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hts

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mon

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e EL

A C

urric

ulum

• G

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1:U

2:L3

• A

pril

2014

• 1

Lo

ng-T

erm

Tar

gets

Add

ress

ed (B

ased

on

NYS

P12

ELA

CC

LS)

I can

exp

lain

wha

t a te

xt sa

ys u

sing

quo

tes f

rom

the

text

. (R

L.5.

1)

I can

mak

e in

fere

nces

usi

ng q

uote

s fro

m th

e te

xt. (

RL.

5.1)

I c

an d

eter

min

e th

e m

eani

ng o

f lite

ral a

nd fi

gura

tive

lang

uage

(met

apho

rs a

nd si

mile

s). (

RL.

5.4)

I c

an w

rite

info

rmat

ive/

expl

anat

ory

text

s. (W

.5.2

)

Supp

ortin

g Le

arni

ng T

arge

ts

Ong

oing

Ass

essm

ent

• I c

an a

nsw

er c

ompr

ehen

sion

que

stio

ns b

ased

on

text

from

Esp

eran

za R

isin

g th

at I

have

read

in

depe

nden

tly.

• I c

an id

entif

y si

tuat

ions

in E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

whe

re a

cha

ract

er’s

hum

an ri

ghts

are

cha

lleng

ed.

• I c

an m

ake

infe

renc

es fr

om th

e te

xt a

bout

Esp

eran

za, M

ama,

and

Abu

elita

.

• I c

an u

se c

onte

xt c

lues

to h

elp

me

dete

rmin

e th

e m

eani

ng o

f wor

ds in

Esp

eran

za R

isin

g.

• I c

an w

rite

to e

xpla

in m

y th

inki

ng a

bout

the

char

acte

rs in

Esp

eran

za R

isin

g.

• Co

mpr

ehen

sion

Qui

z, C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s Pap

ayas

/Pap

ayas

” (e

ntra

nce

ticke

t)

• Tr

iad

disc

ussi

ons

• Ex

it Ti

cket

: Ind

epen

dent

ans

wer

to te

xt-d

epen

dent

qu

estio

n

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GR

AD

E 5:

MO

DU

LE 1

: UN

IT 2

: LES

SON

3

Infe

rrin

g A

bout

Cha

ract

ers

Bas

ed o

n H

ow T

hey

Res

pond

to C

halle

nges

: (C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apya

yas/

Pap

ayas

”)

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yrig

ht ©

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mon

Cor

e EL

A C

urric

ulum

• G

5:M

1:U

2:L3

• A

pril

2014

• 2

A

gend

a Te

achi

ng N

otes

1.

Ope

ning

A. E

ntra

nce

Tick

et: C

ompr

ehen

sion

Qui

z, C

hapt

er 3

: “L

as P

apay

as/P

apay

as”

(5 m

inut

es)

B. E

ngag

ing

the

Rea

der:

Ora

l Cha

pter

Rev

iew

(5

min

utes

)

2.

Wor

k Ti

me

A. R

evis

iting

Pap

a’s D

eath

: Clo

se R

eadi

ng o

f Pag

es 2

2–23

(15

min

utes

)

B. C

halle

nges

to H

uman

Rig

hts i

n Ch

apte

rs 2

and

3 (1

0 m

inut

es)

C. H

ow C

hara

cter

s Res

pond

to C

halle

nges

: Ans

wer

ing

Que

stio

ns in

Tri

ads (

15 m

inut

es)

3.

Clos

ing

and

Asse

ssm

ent

A. I

ndep

ende

nt A

nsw

er (5

min

utes

)

B. D

ebri

ef (5

min

utes

)

4.

Hom

ewor

k

• In

adv

ance

: Rea

d Ch

apte

r 3 a

nd re

view

the

text

-dep

ende

nt q

uest

ions

(see

supp

ortin

g m

ater

ials

). Tw

o co

pies

of t

he q

uest

ions

are

pro

vide

d: a

bla

nk to

dis

play

for s

tude

nts,

and

one

with

ans

wer

s for

teac

her

refe

renc

e.

• Th

is le

sson

dra

ws d

irec

tly o

n th

e kn

owle

dge

stud

ents

bui

lt du

ring

Uni

t 1 a

bout

hum

an ri

ghts

. Stu

dent

s re

visi

t thi

s top

ic in

futu

re le

sson

s, so

the

disc

ussi

on in

Par

t B o

f Wor

k Ti

me

is in

tent

iona

lly b

rief

. Be

sure

to h

ave

the

Uni

t 1 a

ncho

r cha

rts o

n sp

ecifi

c ar

ticle

s of t

he U

DH

R a

vaila

ble

whe

re st

uden

ts c

an se

e th

em, t

o jo

g th

eir m

emor

y. A

lso

be su

re st

uden

ts h

ave

thei

r UD

HR

not

e-ca

tche

rs.

• Th

is le

sson

intr

oduc

es a

new

rout

ine:

an

entr

ance

tick

et c

ompr

ehen

sion

qui

z, in

tend

ed to

che

ck

whe

ther

stud

ents

hav

e do

ne th

eir r

eadi

ng.

• N

ote

that

for t

he te

xt-d

epen

dent

que

stio

ns, s

tude

nts a

re to

ld so

me

of th

e pa

ge n

umbe

rs w

here

the

answ

ers c

an b

e fo

und.

Thi

s sca

ffold

ing

will

gra

dual

ly b

e re

mov

ed a

s stu

dent

s pro

gres

s thr

ough

the

nove

l.

• As

in L

esso

n 2,

stud

ents

wor

k in

gro

ups t

o an

swer

text

-dep

ende

nt q

uest

ions

. Con

tinue

gui

ded

prac

tice

as n

eede

d, b

ut b

e su

re d

urin

g W

ork

Tim

e C,

all

stud

ents

hav

e th

eir o

wn

copy

of t

hese

que

stio

ns to

re

fere

nce

as th

ey w

ork

in th

eir t

riad

s. S

tude

nts m

ay n

ot h

ave

time

to a

nsw

er a

ll te

xt-d

epen

dent

qu

estio

ns; r

emin

d th

em th

at it

is m

ost i

mpo

rtan

t for

them

to d

iscu

ss e

ach

ques

tion

thor

ough

ly a

nd c

ite

evid

ence

. Stu

dent

s will

revi

sit t

he c

hara

cter

ana

lysi

s (be

gun

in L

esso

n 3)

dur

ing

Less

on 4

as w

ell.

• Ba

sed

on h

ow g

roup

s fun

ctio

ned

on th

e fir

st d

ay o

f rea

ding

the

nove

l, yo

u m

ight

mod

ify g

roup

s at t

his

time.

• Th

is le

sson

rein

trod

uces

a p

atte

rn o

f ana

lysi

s tha

t stu

dent

s wer

e fir

st e

xpos

ed to

in U

nit 1

, whe

n th

ey

anal

yzed

the

first

hand

acc

ount

s of h

uman

righ

ts v

iola

tions

. Thr

ough

out t

heir

stud

y of

Esp

eran

za,

stud

ents

will

con

side

r the

cha

lleng

es c

hara

cter

s fac

e (in

clud

ing

but n

ot li

mite

d to

hum

an ri

ghts

ch

alle

nges

), ho

w th

e ch

arac

ters

resp

ond,

and

how

a c

hara

cter

’s re

spon

se h

elps

us u

nder

stan

d th

at

char

acte

r and

the

them

es o

f the

nov

el.

• R

evie

w T

hink

-Pai

r-Sh

are,

Wri

te-P

air-

Shar

e, a

nd C

old-

Call

prot

ocol

s (Ap

pend

ix 1)

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GR

AD

E 5:

MO

DU

LE 1

: UN

IT 2

: LES

SON

3

Infe

rrin

g A

bout

Cha

ract

ers

Bas

ed o

n H

ow T

hey

Res

pond

to C

halle

nges

: (C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apya

yas/

Pap

ayas

”)

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yrig

ht ©

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editi

onar

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hts

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NYS

Com

mon

Cor

e EL

A C

urric

ulum

• G

5:M

1:U

2:L3

• A

pril

2014

• 3

Le

sson

Voc

abul

ary

Mat

eria

ls

inde

pend

ently

, ide

ntify

, co

mpr

ehen

sion

, cha

lleng

e, in

fer,

in

fere

nce,

quo

tes,

infe

rent

ial,

deni

al o

f pr

oper

ty, h

uman

righ

ts,

disc

rim

inat

ory,

ang

uish

, sm

othe

red

(23)

, com

posu

re, i

ndig

natio

n

• Co

mpr

ehen

sion

Qui

z En

tran

ce T

icke

t (Ch

apte

r 3: “

Las P

apay

as/P

apay

as”)

(one

per

stud

ent)

• Es

pera

nza

Ris

ing

(boo

k; o

ne p

er st

uden

t)

• U

DH

R n

ote

catc

her (

from

Uni

t 1; s

tude

nts’

com

plet

ed c

opie

s)

• U

DH

R a

rtic

les a

ncho

r cha

rts (

from

Uni

t 1)—

idea

l, bu

t not

ess

entia

l

• Ev

iden

ce fl

ags (

stic

ky n

otes

: the

smal

lest

size

ava

ilabl

e or

larg

er si

zes c

ut in

to st

rips

)—tw

o ba

ggie

s per

stud

ent (

one

each

for

hom

e an

d sc

hool

)

• Te

xt-d

epen

dent

que

stio

ns fo

r Cha

pter

3: “

Las P

apay

as/P

apay

as” (

one

per s

tude

nt a

nd o

ne to

dis

play

)

• Te

xt-d

epen

dent

que

stio

ns fo

r Cha

pter

3: “

Las P

apay

as/P

apay

as” (

Answ

ers f

or T

each

er R

efer

ence

)

• N

orm

s for

Tri

ad T

alk

anch

or c

hart

(fro

m L

esso

n 2)

• H

omew

ork:

Pur

pose

for R

eadi

ng, C

hapt

er 4

: “Lo

s Hig

os/F

igs”

(one

per

stud

ent)

• H

uman

Rig

hts C

halle

nges

in E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

anch

or c

hart

(new

; tea

cher

-cre

ated

; see

Wor

k Ti

me

B)

• In

ferr

ing

by U

sing

Tex

t Clu

es a

ncho

r cha

rt (n

ew; t

each

er-c

reat

ed; s

ee W

ork

Tim

e A)

• St

uden

t jou

rnal

s

• R

eadi

ng E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

anch

or c

hart

• In

dex

card

s or h

alf-

shee

ts o

f pap

er

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AD

E 5:

MO

DU

LE 1

: UN

IT 2

: LES

SON

3

Infe

rrin

g A

bout

Cha

ract

ers

Bas

ed o

n H

ow T

hey

Res

pond

to C

halle

nges

: (C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apya

yas/

Pap

ayas

”)

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yrig

ht ©

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e EL

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urric

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• A

pril

2014

• 4

O

peni

ng

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

A. E

ntra

nce

Tick

et: C

ompr

ehen

sion

Qui

z, C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apay

as/P

apay

as”

(5 m

inut

es)

• R

emin

d st

uden

ts to

sit w

ith th

eir t

riad

s thr

ough

out t

heir

stud

y of

the

nove

l.

• In

trod

uce

the

new

rout

ine

of th

e co

mpr

ehen

sion

qui

z en

tran

ce ti

cket

by

revi

ewin

g th

e fir

st le

arni

ng ta

rget

. Cla

rify

the

mea

ning

of t

he w

ords

com

preh

ensi

on a

nd in

depe

nden

tly. E

xpla

in th

at th

is q

uiz

will

be

a da

ily p

ract

ice

as w

e m

ove

thro

ugh

Espe

ranz

a R

isin

g, d

esig

ned

to a

sses

s whe

ther

stud

ents

read

and

und

erst

ood

the

text

ass

igne

d fo

r hom

ewor

k.

• R

emin

d st

uden

ts th

at th

eir h

omew

ork

read

ing

is a

“fir

st d

raft”

read

; the

y ar

e no

t exp

ecte

d to

und

erst

and

ever

ythi

ng. B

ut it

is

impo

rtan

t tha

t the

y fe

el a

ccou

ntab

le fo

r the

read

ing,

pra

ctic

e re

adin

g on

thei

r ow

n, a

nd tr

y th

eir b

est.

• D

istr

ibut

e th

e qu

iz a

nd g

ive

stud

ents

five

min

utes

to c

ompl

ete

it. C

olle

ct st

uden

ts’ w

ork

to re

view

and

/or a

sses

s.

• Co

nsid

er p

ostin

g no

nlin

guis

tic

sym

bols

to a

ssis

t ELL

s in

com

preh

ensi

on a

nd m

akin

g co

nnec

tions

.

• So

me

stud

ents

may

be

unfa

mili

ar

with

aca

dem

ic v

ocab

ular

y w

ords

(e

.g.,

com

preh

ensi

on, s

ituat

ion,

ch

alle

nged

, ide

ntify

, exp

lain

). Cl

arify

vo

cabu

lary

with

stud

ents

as n

eede

d.

B. E

ngag

ing

the

Rea

der:

Ora

l Cha

pter

Rev

iew

(5 m

inut

es)

Not

e: K

eep

this

rev

iew

shor

t. St

uden

ts a

naly

ze th

e ch

apte

r in

mor

e de

tail

thro

ugho

ut th

e le

sson

.

• Af

ter t

he q

uiz,

lead

the

clas

s in

a br

ief w

hole

cla

ss re

view

sess

ion,

col

d ca

lling

stud

ents

to e

licit

a su

mm

ary

of th

e ch

apte

r th

at w

as re

ad fo

r hom

ewor

k. S

tart

with

an

open

-end

ed q

uest

ion,

such

as:

“Wha

t was

this

cha

pter

mos

tly a

bout

?” o

r “W

hat

happ

ened

in th

is c

hapt

er?”

Enc

oura

ge st

uden

ts to

cite

evi

denc

e or

poi

nt to

spec

ific

pass

ages

. Not

e w

hich

stud

ents

are

abl

e to

ans

wer

the

ques

tions

, and

the

qual

ity o

f the

ans

wer

s.

• Th

en a

sk th

e la

st q

uest

ion

from

the

quiz

aga

in:

* “A

t the

star

t of C

hapt

er 3

, wha

t doe

s Esp

eran

za d

ream

abo

ut?”

Be

sure

stud

ents

und

erst

and

that

she

drea

ms P

apa

is st

ill a

live.

Thi

s will

serv

e as

the

tran

sitio

n to

the

next

sect

ion

of th

e le

sson

.

• Po

stin

g po

ints

of c

lass

dis

cuss

ions

as

sist

s ELL

s in

com

preh

ensi

on.

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MO

DU

LE 1

: UN

IT 2

: LES

SON

3

Infe

rrin

g A

bout

Cha

ract

ers

Bas

ed o

n H

ow T

hey

Res

pond

to C

halle

nges

: (C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apya

yas/

Pap

ayas

”)

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W

ork

Tim

e M

eetin

g St

uden

ts’ N

eeds

A. R

evis

itin

g P

apa’

s D

eath

: Clo

se R

eadi

ng o

f Pag

es 2

2–23

(15

min

utes

)

• R

emin

d st

uden

ts o

f the

text

-dep

ende

nt q

uest

ions

they

dis

cuss

ed a

bout

Cha

pter

2: “

Las U

vas/

Gra

pes.

” Poi

nt o

ut th

at m

any

of th

em m

ay n

ot h

ave

had

time

to fu

lly d

iscu

ss th

e fif

th q

uest

ion:

* “A

t the

end

of t

he c

hapt

er, w

hy d

oes E

sper

anza

feel

her

hea

rt d

rop

and

that

she

has s

unk

into

a ‘d

ark

hole

of d

espa

ir a

nd

disb

elie

f’?”

• As

k st

uden

ts to

talk

in th

eir t

riad

s bri

efly

to re

min

d ea

ch o

ther

wha

t hap

pene

d at

the

end

of C

hapt

er 2

.

• Pr

obe

with

a se

ries

of t

ext-

depe

nden

t que

stio

ns:

* “D

id E

sper

anza

real

ly si

nk in

to a

hol

e?”

* “W

hat d

oes t

he w

ord

desp

air

mea

n? W

hy d

oes E

sper

anza

feel

des

pair

?”

• If

stud

ents

do

not m

entio

n th

e w

ord

grie

f, of

fer t

his v

ocab

ular

y te

rm a

s a p

reci

se w

ay to

des

crib

e Es

pera

nza’

s exp

erie

nce:

de

ep, d

eep

sadn

ess.

• D

irec

t stu

dent

s to

Chap

ter 3

, the

fina

l tw

o se

nten

ces o

n pa

ge 2

3, a

nd a

sk:

* “W

hat a

re ‘t

he e

vent

s of l

ast n

ight

’?”

* “B

ased

on

cont

ext c

lues

, wha

t mig

ht th

e w

ord

wre

nche

d m

ean?

* “T

he a

utho

r say

s: ‘H

er sm

ile fa

ded,

her

che

st ti

ghte

ned,

and

a h

eavy

bla

nket

of a

ngui

sh sm

othe

red

her s

mal

lest

joy.

’ W

hat m

ight

ang

uish

mea

n? Is

she

real

ly w

eari

ng a

bla

nket

?”

• Po

int o

ut to

stud

ents

that

the

auth

or is

usi

ng la

ngua

ge in

ver

y in

tere

stin

g w

ays t

o he

lp re

ader

s und

erst

and

wha

t Esp

eran

za

is fe

elin

g. T

hey

will

exp

lore

this

in m

ore

dept

h in

futu

re le

sson

s.

• Po

int o

ut th

at th

e au

thor

nev

er d

irec

tly te

lls re

ader

s tha

t Pap

a di

ed. A

sk:

* “H

ow w

ere

you

able

to fi

gure

out

wha

t hap

pene

d?”

• Be

gin

the

Infe

rrin

g by

Usi

ng T

ext C

lues

anc

hor c

hart

with

a d

raw

ing

of a

stic

k fig

ure

with

a th

ough

t bub

ble

that

says

: “Th

e te

xt sa

ys …

so I

infe

r tha

t …” O

n th

is c

hart

, add

seve

ral o

f stu

dent

s’ ex

ampl

es a

bout

how

they

infe

rred

that

Pap

a di

ed.

• As

k st

uden

ts to

add

an

evid

ence

flag

to th

e op

enin

g of

Cha

pter

3: “

Las P

apay

as,”

with

the

phra

se “E

sper

anza

gri

evin

g.”

(Thi

s ear

ly m

odel

ing

of h

ow to

sum

mar

ize

a ch

apte

r in

a ph

rase

will

hel

p st

uden

ts b

egin

to k

eep

trac

k of

the

mai

n ev

ents

. In

futu

re le

sson

s, st

uden

ts w

ill b

egin

to w

rite

thei

r ow

n ev

iden

ce fl

ags t

o su

mm

ariz

e th

e ch

apte

r.)

• In

crea

se in

tera

ctio

ns w

ith v

ocab

ular

y in

con

text

. Thi

s inc

reas

es th

e ra

te o

f EL

L vo

cabu

lary

acq

uisi

tion.

• EL

L la

ngua

ge a

cqui

sitio

n is

fa

cilit

ated

by

inte

ract

ing

with

nat

ive

spea

kers

of E

nglis

h w

ho p

rovi

de

mod

els o

f lan

guag

e.

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IT 2

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SON

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Infe

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Cha

ract

ers

Bas

ed o

n H

ow T

hey

Res

pond

to C

halle

nges

: (C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apya

yas/

Pap

ayas

”)

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W

ork

Tim

e (c

ontin

ued)

M

eetin

g St

uden

ts’ N

eeds

B. C

hall

enge

s to

Hum

an R

ight

s in

Cha

pter

s 2

and

3 (1

5 m

inut

es)

• R

ead

alou

d th

e le

arni

ng ta

rget

: “I c

an id

entif

y si

tuat

ions

in E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

whe

re a

cha

ract

er’s

hum

an ri

ghts

are

ch

alle

nged

.” R

evie

w th

e m

eani

ng o

f the

wor

d ch

alle

nged

in th

is c

onte

xt (t

este

d or

vio

late

d), w

hich

stud

ents

shou

ld re

call

from

thei

r stu

dy o

f the

UD

HR

dur

ing

Uni

t 1.

• As

k st

uden

ts to

talk

in th

eir t

riad

s abo

ut th

e hu

man

righ

ts th

ey re

mem

ber f

rom

thei

r stu

dy o

f the

UD

HR

. Dir

ect t

hem

to

thei

r com

plet

ed U

DH

R n

ote-

catc

her

and

UD

HR

anc

hor

char

ts (f

rom

Uni

t 1).

Giv

e st

uden

ts a

few

min

utes

to sk

im

thes

e do

cum

ents

, with

whi

ch th

ey sh

ould

be

quite

fam

iliar

. Inv

ite a

few

tria

ds to

shar

e ou

t som

e of

the

hum

an ri

ghts

nam

ed

in th

e U

DH

R a

nd th

e ni

ckna

mes

stud

ents

gav

e th

ose

righ

ts d

urin

g U

nit 1

.

• As

k st

uden

ts to

shar

e w

here

they

pla

ced

thei

r evi

denc

e fla

gs a

s the

y re

ad C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s Pap

ayas

” (fo

r hom

ewor

k):

* “W

hat c

halle

nges

did

the

char

acte

rs in

this

cha

pter

face

?”

* “W

here

are

ther

e ex

ampl

es sp

ecifi

cally

of h

uman

righ

ts c

halle

nges

?”

• If

nec

essa

ry, s

caffo

ld th

e st

uden

ts’ l

earn

ing

by a

skin

g th

em if

they

can

find

som

e of

the

follo

win

g ex

ampl

es:

* A

chal

leng

e to

the

righ

t to

life,

libe

rty,

and

per

sona

l sec

urity

(the

mur

der o

f Esp

eran

za’s

fath

er, p

. 24)

* Th

e di

scri

min

ator

y tr

eatm

ent o

f Ind

ians

com

pare

d to

peo

ple

of S

pani

sh d

esce

nt (p

p. 12

, 15–

18)

* Th

e de

nial

of p

rope

rty

righ

ts to

wom

en (p

. 30)

• St

art a

Hum

an R

ight

s C

halle

nges

in E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

anch

or c

hart

to u

se th

roug

hout

the

nove

l as s

tude

nts f

ind

mor

e ex

ampl

es.

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MO

DU

LE 1

: UN

IT 2

: LES

SON

3

Infe

rrin

g A

bout

Cha

ract

ers

Bas

ed o

n H

ow T

hey

Res

pond

to C

halle

nges

: (C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apya

yas/

Pap

ayas

”)

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Tim

e (c

ontin

ued)

M

eetin

g St

uden

ts’ N

eeds

C. H

ow C

hara

cter

s R

espo

nd

to C

hall

enge

s: A

nsw

erin

g Q

uest

ion

s in

Tri

ads

(15

min

utes

) •

Rev

iew

the

anch

or c

hart

Nor

ms

for

Tria

d Ta

lk (f

rom

Les

son

2). H

ave

stud

ents

rem

ain

in tr

iads

, but

gat

her s

tude

nts’

atte

ntio

n w

hole

gro

up. R

ead

alou

d th

e le

arni

ng ta

rget

: “I c

an m

ake

infe

renc

es fr

om th

e te

xt a

bout

the

char

acte

rs in

Es

pera

nza

Ris

ing.

” Rem

ind

them

that

ear

lier i

n th

is le

sson

, the

y be

gan

an a

ncho

r cha

rt a

nd ta

lked

abo

ut h

ow th

ey w

ere

able

to m

ake

an in

fere

nce

that

Pap

a di

ed e

ven

thou

gh th

e au

thor

did

n’t s

ay it

dir

ectly

.

• Te

ll st

uden

ts th

at th

ey w

ill le

arn

mor

e ab

out i

nfer

ence

and

kee

p pr

actic

ing

draw

ing

infe

renc

es b

ased

on

clue

s fro

m th

e te

xt.

Rem

ind

stud

ents

of t

heir

wor

k ye

ster

day,

usi

ng e

vide

nce

flags

to tr

ack

thei

r thi

nkin

g as

they

read

.

• Po

int o

ut to

stud

ents

that

the

way

peo

ple

resp

ond

to c

halle

nges

tells

us a

lot a

bout

who

they

are

. Ask

stud

ents

to ta

lk in

th

eir g

roup

s abo

ut a

n ex

ampl

e. M

odel

as n

eede

d w

ith so

met

hing

from

you

r ow

n lif

e.

• R

ead

out l

oud

the

lear

ning

targ

et: “

I can

wri

te to

exp

lain

my

thin

king

abo

ut th

e ch

arac

ters

in E

sper

anza

Ris

ing.

” Tel

l st

uden

ts th

at th

roug

hout

thei

r stu

dy o

f Esp

eran

za R

isin

g, th

ey w

ill b

e th

inki

ng a

bout

the

chal

leng

es E

sper

anza

and

oth

er

char

acte

rs fa

ce, h

ow th

ose

char

acte

rs re

spon

d, a

nd w

hat t

hat t

ells

us a

bout

thos

e ch

arac

ters

. Rem

ind

them

that

they

did

so

met

hing

sim

ilar w

hen

they

read

the

first

hand

hum

an ri

ghts

acc

ount

s at t

he e

nd o

f Uni

t 1.

• As

k st

uden

ts to

beg

in fo

ur n

ew p

ages

in th

eir r

eadi

ng jo

urna

l (on

e pe

r cha

ract

er),

and

on e

ach

page

qui

ckly

jot a

re

spon

se to

the

follo

win

g qu

estio

n:

“Wha

t do

you

alre

ady

know

abo

ut th

is c

hara

cter

?”

– Es

pera

nza

– M

ama

– Ab

uelit

a

– M

igue

l

• Te

ll st

uden

ts th

at in

the

next

less

on, t

hey

will

focu

s mor

e on

Mig

uel;

toda

y th

ey w

ill ju

st fo

cus o

n Es

pera

nza’

s fam

ily.

• D

istr

ibut

e an

d di

spla

y th

e Te

xt-d

epen

dent

Que

stio

ns fo

r C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apay

as/P

apay

as.”

• In

tria

ds, s

tude

nts s

houl

d re

ad a

loud

one

text

-dep

ende

nt q

uest

ion

at a

tim

e, a

nd c

lari

fy a

ny te

rms.

The

y sh

ould

then

thin

k on

thei

r ow

n, th

en ta

lk to

geth

er to

ans

wer

the

ques

tion,

mar

king

thei

r ans

wer

s with

evi

denc

e fla

gs. T

hey

do n

ot n

eed

to

wri

te c

ompl

ete

answ

ers t

o th

e qu

estio

ns a

t thi

s poi

nt.

• St

uden

ts sh

ould

then

repe

at th

is c

ycle

for t

he n

ext q

uest

ion.

• Co

nsid

er w

ritin

g an

d di

spla

ying

step

s fo

r mul

tiste

p di

rect

ions

. ELL

s can

re

turn

to st

eps t

o m

ake

sure

they

are

on

trac

k.

• W

hen

ELLs

are

ask

ed to

pro

duce

la

ngua

ge, c

onsi

der p

rovi

ding

a

sent

ence

fram

e, se

nten

ce st

arte

r, o

r cl

oze

sent

ence

to p

rovi

de th

e st

ruct

ure

requ

ired

.

• Co

nsid

er a

llow

ing

stud

ents

to d

raw

th

eir o

bser

vatio

ns, i

deas

, or n

otes

w

hen

appr

opri

ate.

Thi

s allo

ws E

LLs

to p

artic

ipat

e in

a m

eani

ngfu

l way

.

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DU

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: UN

IT 2

: LES

SON

3

Infe

rrin

g A

bout

Cha

ract

ers

Bas

ed o

n H

ow T

hey

Res

pond

to C

halle

nges

: (C

hapt

er 3

: “La

s P

apya

yas/

Pap

ayas

”)

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Wor

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me

(con

tinue

d)

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

•As

stud

ents

wor

k, m

onito

r thi

s dis

cuss

ion.

Em

phas

ize

that

the

auth

or is

not

telli

ng th

e re

ader

wha

t the

cha

ract

ers a

re li

ke,

she

is sh

owin

g th

e re

ader

how

the

char

acte

rs b

ehav

e, so

that

the

read

er c

an in

fer

wha

t the

cha

ract

er is

like

.

•W

hile

cir

cula

ting,

mak

e su

re a

ll st

uden

ts a

re p

artic

ipat

ing.

Rei

nfor

ce st

uden

ts w

ho a

re fo

llow

ing

the

Tria

d Ta

lk n

orm

s wel

l.

Clo

sing

and

Ass

essm

ent

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

A.I

ndep

ende

nt A

nsw

er (

5 m

inut

es)

•R

emin

d st

uden

ts o

f wha

t the

y di

d to

day

by a

skin

g st

uden

ts to

rere

ad o

ut lo

ud th

e le

arni

ng ta

rget

s. H

ave

stud

ents

giv

esu

gges

tions

to a

dd to

the

anch

or c

hart

Rea

ding

Esp

eran

za R

isin

g an

chor

cha

rt. M

ake

sure

to a

dd: “

usin

g co

ntex

t clu

es to

figur

e ou

t voc

abul

ary”

and

“thi

nkin

g ab

out h

ow c

hara

cter

s res

pond

to c

halle

nges

” to

the

char

t.

•D

istr

ibut

e in

dex

card

s or h

alf-

shee

ts o

f pap

er. A

sk st

uden

ts to

sele

ct o

ne q

uest

ion

(i.e.

, abo

ut ju

st o

ne o

f the

cha

ract

ers)

from

thei

r Tri

ad T

alk

disc

ussi

on fo

r whi

ch th

ey fe

el th

at th

ey h

ave

a co

mpl

ete

answ

er. A

sk st

uden

ts to

wri

te th

e nu

mbe

r of

the

ques

tion

and

thei

r ans

wer

, usi

ng sp

ecifi

c de

tails

from

the

text

.

•Fo

r stu

dent

s who

stru

ggle

, con

side

rpr

ovid

ing

extr

a tim

e fo

r tas

ks a

ndan

swer

ing

ques

tions

in c

lass

disc

ussi

ons.

ELL

s ofte

n ne

ed m

ore

time

to p

roce

ss a

nd tr

ansl

ate

info

rmat

ion.

B.D

ebri

ef (

5 m

inut

es)

•As

k st

uden

ts to

wri

te a

def

initi

on o

f inf

erri

ng in

thei

r rea

ding

jour

nal.

Then

ask

stud

ents

to sh

are

thei

r def

initi

on w

ith th

eir

tria

d. C

old

call

a fe

w st

uden

ts to

shar

e an

infe

renc

e th

ey m

ade

abou

t Esp

eran

za, M

ama,

or A

buel

ita d

urin

g cl

ass t

oday

.

•Co

nsid

er a

llow

ing

stud

ents

to d

raw

thei

r obs

erva

tions

, ide

as, o

r not

esw

hen

appr

opri

ate.

Thi

s allo

ws E

LLs

to p

artic

ipat

e in

a m

eani

ngfu

l way

.H

omew

ork

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

•R

ead

Chap

ter 4

: “Lo

s Hig

os/F

igs”

(pag

es 3

0–57

) in

Espe

ranz

a R

isin

g. U

se th

e H

omew

ork:

Pur

pose

for

Rea

ding

,C

hapt

er 4

: “Lo

s H

igos

/Fig

s” q

uest

ion

to fo

cus y

our r

eadi

ng. U

se e

vide

nce

flags

to m

ark

the

spec

ific

area

s in

the

book

that

supp

ort y

our a

nsw

er.

Not

e: If

con

cern

ed a

bout

stud

ents

com

plet

ing

the

read

ing

assi

gnm

ent a

t hom

e, p

lan

an a

dditi

onal

rea

ding

per

iod

late

r in

th

e da

y or

firs

t thi

ng in

the

mor

ning

. All

stud

ents

shou

ld c

ome

to e

xpec

t tha

t the

y w

ill u

se so

me

of th

e “s

lush

y tim

e” d

urin

g th

e da

y—ri

ght b

efor

e or

afte

r lu

nch,

dur

ing

dow

ntim

e be

twee

n ot

her

task

s, a

s the

y en

ter

the

clas

sroo

m in

the

mor

ning

or

just

bef

ore

dism

issa

l, as

tim

e fo

r re

adin

g th

e no

vel o

r in

depe

nden

t rea

ding

. In

addi

tion,

stud

ents

like

ly to

nee

d ad

ditio

nal

supp

ort s

houl

d pr

erea

d th

is n

ovel

with

supp

ort d

urin

g in

terv

entio

n or

oth

er su

ppor

t per

iods

. Pre

read

ing

with

supp

ort w

ill

then

allo

w st

uden

ts to

spen

d cl

ass p

erio

ds r

erea

ding

and

focu

sing

on

evid

ence

.

•Au

dio

reco

rdin

gs o

f tex

t can

aid

stud

ents

in c

ompr

ehen

sion

. Stu

dent

sca

n pa

use

and

repl

ay c

onfu

sing

port

ions

whi

le th

ey fo

llow

alo

ng w

ithth

e te

xt.

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the

Trai

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evis

iting

Cha

pter

5: “

Las

Gua

yaba

s/G

uava

s”)

Long

-Ter

m T

arge

ts A

ddre

ssed

(Bas

ed o

n N

YSP1

2 EL

A C

CLS

)

I ca

n us

e qu

otes

to e

xpla

in th

e m

eani

ng o

f lit

erar

y te

xts.

(RL.

5.1)

I

can

use

quot

es to

sup

port

my

infe

renc

es in

lite

rary

text

s. (R

L.5.

1)

I ca

n de

term

ine

a th

eme

base

d on

det

ails

in th

e te

xt. (

RL.

5.2)

I

can

sum

mar

ize

a lit

erar

y te

xt. (

RL.

5.2)

I

can

com

pare

and

con

tras

t lit

erar

y el

emen

ts u

sing

det

ails

from

the

text

. (R

L.5.

3)

I ca

n w

rite

an

info

rmat

ive/

expl

anat

ory

text

. (W

.5.2

) I

can

use

the

wri

ting

pro

cess

to p

rodu

ce c

lear

and

coh

eren

t wri

ting

(wit

h su

ppor

t). (

W5.

5)

Supp

ortin

g Le

arni

ng T

arge

ts

Ong

oing

Ass

essm

ent

• I

can

find

evid

ence

in E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

that

will

sup

port

my

infe

renc

es a

bout

how

Esp

eran

za c

hang

es

thro

ugho

ut th

e no

vel.

• I

can

anal

yze

how

Esp

eran

za r

espo

nds

to a

key

eve

nt in

the

nove

l, an

d w

hat t

his

show

s ab

out h

er

char

acte

r.

• I

can

wri

te a

n es

say

in w

hich

eac

h pa

ragr

aph

has

a cl

ear

topi

c se

nten

ce, a

bod

y, a

nd a

con

clus

ion.

• Pa

rtne

r A

ccor

dion

gra

phic

org

aniz

er (f

or P

arag

raph

1)

• Pa

rtne

r D

raft

Par

agra

ph 1

(par

tial

ly c

ompl

eted

)

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grap

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ritin

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: H

ow E

sper

anza

Res

pond

s on

the

Trai

n (R

evis

iting

Cha

pter

5: “

Las

Gua

yaba

s/G

uava

s”)

Age

nda

Teac

hing

Not

es

1.

Ope

ning

A.

Cel

ebra

tion

of T

wo-

Voi

ce P

oem

s (5

min

utes

)

2.

Wor

k Ti

me

A.

How

Esp

eran

za R

espo

nded

on

the

Trai

n: A

nsw

erin

g Q

uest

ions

in T

riad

s (1

0 m

inut

es)

B.

Gui

ded

Prac

tice

: Int

rodu

ctio

n to

Acc

ordi

on G

raph

ic

Org

aniz

er (2

5 m

inut

es)

C.

Intr

oduc

tion

to P

arag

raph

Wri

ting

(10

min

utes

)

D.

Tria

d G

roup

Wri

ting

: Beg

inni

ng P

arag

raph

1

(7 m

inut

es)

3.

Clo

sing

and

Ass

essm

ent

A.

Shar

ing

(3 m

inut

es)

4.

Hom

ewor

k

• In

adv

ance

: Cop

y th

e sa

mpl

e pa

ragr

aph

abou

t Cha

pter

3 (i

n su

ppor

ting

mat

eria

ls) o

n to

a p

iece

of c

hart

pa

per,

to s

how

stu

dent

s du

ring

Wor

k Ti

me

B o

f thi

s le

sson

.

• In

this

less

on, s

tude

nts

revi

sit C

hapt

er 5

: “La

s G

uaya

bas/

Gua

vas.

” In

adv

ance

, rer

ead

Cha

pter

5 a

nd

revi

ew th

e te

xt-d

epen

dent

que

stio

ns (s

ee s

uppo

rtin

g m

ater

ials

). T

wo

copi

es o

f the

que

stio

ns a

re

prov

ided

: a b

lank

to d

istr

ibut

e to

stu

dent

s an

d di

spla

y, a

nd o

ne w

ith

answ

ers

for

teac

her

refe

renc

e.

• St

uden

ts h

ave

done

a lo

t of w

riti

ng th

roug

hout

this

uni

t, bu

t thi

s le

sson

is th

eir

first

form

al p

arag

raph

w

riti

ng in

stru

ctio

n of

the

year

.

• Fo

r th

e gu

ided

pra

ctic

e (W

ork

Tim

e, P

art B

), b

e cl

ear

wit

h st

uden

ts th

at y

ou w

ill m

odel

usi

ng th

e gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer

abou

t one

topi

c (w

hen

the

ranc

h is

set

on

fire,

in C

hapt

er 3

: “Lo

s H

igos

/Fig

s”).

The

y w

ill th

en d

o th

e sa

me

thin

g ab

out a

diff

eren

t top

ic (t

he e

vent

s on

the

trai

n, fr

om C

hapt

er 5

: “La

s G

uaya

bas/

Gua

vas”

).

• R

evie

w I

nk-P

air-

Shar

e pr

otoc

ol (S

ee A

ppen

dix

1).

Less

on V

ocab

ular

y M

ater

ials

info

rmat

ive,

exp

lana

tory

, par

agra

ph,

essa

y, c

ompa

res,

con

tras

ts, t

opic

se

nten

ce, b

ody,

con

clus

ion

• Tw

o-vo

ice

poem

s (b

egun

in L

esso

n 14

) •

Esp

eran

za R

isin

g (b

ook;

one

per

stu

dent

) •

Text

-dep

ende

nt q

uest

ions

for

Cha

pter

5: “

Las

Gua

yaba

s/G

uava

s” (o

ne p

er s

tude

nts;

one

to d

ispl

ay)

• Te

xt-d

epen

dent

que

stio

ns fo

r C

hapt

er 5

: “La

s G

uaya

bas/

Gua

vas”

(Ans

wer

s fo

r Te

ache

r R

efer

ence

) •

Acc

ordi

on g

raph

ic o

rgan

izer

for

Para

grap

h W

riti

ng (o

ne p

er s

tude

nt, a

nd o

ne to

dis

play

on

docu

men

t cam

era)

Sam

ple

Para

grap

h C

hapt

er 3

(cop

ied

onto

cha

rt p

aper

; alt

erna

tive

ly, w

rite

you

r ow

n m

odel

par

agra

ph)

• G

reen

, blu

e, a

nd r

ed m

arke

rs; c

olor

ed p

enci

ls fo

r st

uden

ts

• H

omew

ork

Han

dout

: Pla

nnin

g an

d O

rgan

izin

g M

y Se

cond

Par

agra

ph, w

ith

Hom

ewor

k H

ando

ut: A

ccor

dion

Gra

phic

O

rgan

izer

for

Para

grap

h W

riti

ng (o

ne p

er s

tude

nt)

• D

ocum

ent c

amer

a

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ow E

sper

anza

Res

pond

s on

the

Trai

n (R

evis

iting

Cha

pter

5: “

Las

Gua

yaba

s/G

uava

s”)

Ope

ning

M

eetin

g St

uden

ts’ N

eeds

A. C

eleb

rati

on o

f Tw

o-V

oice

Poe

ms

(5 m

inu

tes)

• In

vite

a fe

w m

ore

grou

ps w

ho h

aven

’t ye

t sha

red

thei

r po

ems

to d

o so

. Aga

in, h

ave

peer

s gi

ve s

peci

fic p

rais

e.

• C

eleb

rate

thei

r ac

com

plis

hmen

ts—

capt

urin

g th

e co

ntra

stin

g po

ints

of v

iew

of t

wo

char

acte

rs fr

om E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

in a

po

em.

• R

evie

w th

e fir

st le

arni

ng ta

rget

: “I

can

find

evid

ence

in E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

that

will

sup

port

my

infe

renc

es a

bout

how

E

sper

anza

cha

nges

thro

ugho

ut th

e no

vel.”

Ask

stu

dent

s to

sel

f-as

sess

thei

r pr

ogre

ss to

war

d m

eeti

ng th

is ta

rget

usi

ng th

e Fi

st to

Fiv

e pr

otoc

ol.

• R

etur

n st

uden

ts’ e

ntra

nce

and

exit

tick

ets

from

Les

son

15. A

ddre

ss a

ny m

ajor

mis

conc

epti

ons.

Ask

stu

dent

s to

hol

d on

to

thes

e en

tran

ce a

nd e

xit t

icke

ts; t

hey

will

wan

t to

refe

r to

them

for

thei

r w

riti

ng la

ter

in th

e un

it.

• E

LLs

may

be

unfa

mili

ar w

ith

Tier

2

voca

bula

ry w

ords

(e.g

., ev

iden

ce,

supp

ort,

infe

renc

e). C

lari

fy

voca

bula

ry w

ith

stud

ents

as

need

ed.

Wor

k Ti

me

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

A. H

ow E

sper

anza

Res

pon

ded

on

th

e T

rain

: An

swer

ing

Qu

esti

ons

in T

riad

s (1

0 m

inu

tes)

• H

ave

stud

ents

get

into

thei

r tr

iad

grou

ps.

• Te

ll st

uden

ts th

at to

day

they

are

goi

ng to

dig

bac

k in

to C

hapt

er 5

: “La

s G

uaya

bas/

Gua

vas”

of E

sper

anza

Ris

ing,

in o

rder

to

answ

er s

ome

ques

tion

s ab

out t

he h

uman

rig

hts

chal

leng

es E

sper

anza

face

s or

wit

ness

es in

the

nove

l and

how

she

res

pond

s to

thos

e ch

alle

nges

. Be

sure

stu

dent

s ha

ve th

eir

text

s E

sper

anza

Ris

ing.

Dis

trib

ute

and

disp

lay

the

Tex

t-D

epen

dent

Q

uest

ions

for

Cha

pter

5: “

Las

Gua

yaba

s/G

uava

s” (s

ee s

uppo

rtin

g m

ater

ials

). R

ead

thro

ugh

each

of t

he q

uest

ions

and

cla

rify

an

y te

rms

as n

eces

sary

. As

stud

ents

wor

k in

thei

r gr

oups

, mov

e th

roug

hout

the

room

to o

ffer

sup

port

as

need

ed.

• C

onsi

der

part

neri

ng a

n E

LL w

ith

a st

uden

t who

spe

aks

the

sam

e L1

w

hen

disc

ussi

on o

f com

plex

con

tent

is

req

uire

d. T

his

can

let s

tude

nts

have

mor

e m

eani

ngfu

l dis

cuss

ions

an

d cl

arify

poi

nts

in th

eir

L1.

• V

isua

ls c

an h

elp

som

e st

uden

ts

com

preh

end

ques

tion

s an

d di

scus

sion

s. C

hart

mai

n po

ints

in

answ

ers

and

post

all

ques

tion

s as

ked

to s

tude

nts.

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ritin

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ow E

sper

anza

Res

pond

s on

the

Trai

n (R

evis

iting

Cha

pter

5: “

Las

Gua

yaba

s/G

uava

s”)

Wor

k Ti

me

(con

tinue

d)

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

B. G

uid

ed P

ract

ice:

In

trod

uct

ion

to A

ccor

dio

n G

rap

hic

Org

aniz

er (

25 m

inu

tes)

• In

vite

the

clas

s to

rea

d th

e le

arni

ng ta

rget

alo

ud w

ith

you:

“I

can

anal

yze

how

Esp

eran

za r

espo

nds

to a

key

eve

nt in

the

nove

l, an

d w

hat t

his

show

s ab

out h

er c

hara

cter

.”

• U

se a

doc

um

ent c

amer

a to

dis

play

the

Acc

ord

ion

Gra

ph

ic O

rgan

izer

for

Par

agra

ph

Wri

tin

g, a

nd d

istr

ibut

e a

blan

k co

py to

eac

h st

uden

t.

• Te

ll st

uden

ts th

at th

ey a

re g

oing

to s

tart

org

aniz

ing

thei

r pa

ragr

aphs

, usi

ng th

e A

ccor

dion

gra

phic

org

aniz

er a

s a

tool

to

gath

er a

ll th

e im

port

ant i

nfor

mat

ion

and

deta

ils th

ey w

ill n

eed

in o

rder

to w

rite

a c

ompl

ete

para

grap

h.

• Te

ll st

uden

ts th

at y

ou w

ill m

odel

, wri

ting

abo

ut w

hen

the

ranc

h is

set

on

fire

from

Cha

pter

4: “

Los

Hig

os/F

igs.

” Th

ey w

ill

then

do

the

sam

e th

ing

abou

t a d

iffer

ent e

vent

(fro

m C

hapt

er 5

: “La

s G

uaya

bas/

Gua

vas,

” w

hich

they

just

dis

cuss

ed).

• R

ead,

and

poi

nt to

, the

pro

mpt

from

the

firs

t box

(Top

ic):

“St

ate

the

key

even

t and

/or

chal

leng

e E

sper

anza

face

s.”

Say:

“I

will

wri

te a

bout

the

chal

leng

e fr

om C

hapt

er 3

, whe

n th

e ra

nch

is s

et o

n fir

e. I

will

wri

te: “

Ran

ch s

et o

n fir

e.”

• R

emin

d st

uden

ts th

at g

raph

ic o

rgan

izer

s do

not

nee

d to

incl

ude

com

plet

e se

nten

ces,

but

idea

s th

at w

ill p

rom

pt th

eir

thin

king

whe

n th

ey a

re r

eady

to w

rite

thei

r pa

ragr

aphs

.

• Te

ll st

uden

ts th

at th

ey w

ill n

ow c

hoos

e th

eir

topi

c, fr

om C

hapt

er 5

. Ask

them

to th

ink

abou

t the

text

-dep

ende

nt q

uest

ions

th

ey ju

st d

iscu

ssed

wit

h th

eir

tria

ds. C

lari

fy th

at th

eir

topi

c do

es n

ot n

eed

to b

e re

ally

spe

cific

at t

his

tim

e. T

hey

will

add

m

ore

deta

ils la

ter.

• Pr

ompt

stu

dent

s to

dis

cuss

wit

h th

eir

tria

d:

* “I

n C

hapt

er 5

: ‘La

s G

uaya

bas,

’ wha

t is

a sp

ecifi

c ev

ent w

hen

Esp

eran

za fa

ces

a ch

alle

nge?

” Lo

ok fo

r su

gges

tion

s su

ch a

s:

Esp

eran

za r

idin

g th

e tr

ain

or E

sper

anza

mee

ting

Car

men

.

• In

vite

a fe

w tr

iads

to s

hare

thei

r th

inki

ng. G

ive

feed

back

as

nece

ssar

y, to

be

sure

all

stud

ents

und

erst

and

wha

t a to

pic

is: t

he

focu

s of

thei

r pa

ragr

aph.

Ask

stu

dent

s to

fill

in th

e to

pic

in th

e to

p bo

x of

thei

r in

divi

dual

gra

phic

org

aniz

er.

• M

odel

for

stud

ents

the

Det

ail b

ox in

the

grap

hic

orga

nize

r, e

xpla

inin

g th

at th

ey s

houl

d gi

ve m

ore

info

rmat

ion

abou

t the

to

pic.

Say

: “Si

nce

the

topi

c I

am w

riti

ng a

bout

is th

e ra

nch

catc

hing

fire

, the

det

ail I

will

add

sho

ws

wha

t hap

pene

d to

E

sper

anza

whe

n th

e ra

nch

caug

ht fi

re.”

The

n w

rite

: “E

sper

anza

esc

apes

fire

; los

es e

very

thin

g,”

in th

e D

etai

l box

. Aga

in,

rem

ind

stud

ents

that

com

plet

e se

nten

ces

are

not n

eces

sary

her

e.

• St

uden

ts n

eedi

ng a

ddit

iona

l su

ppor

ts m

ay b

enef

it fr

om p

arti

ally

fil

led-

in g

raph

ic o

rgan

izer

s.

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ritin

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sper

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Res

pond

s on

the

Trai

n (R

evis

iting

Cha

pter

5: “

Las

Gua

yaba

s/G

uava

s”)

Wor

k Ti

me

(con

tinue

d)

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

• A

sk s

tude

nts

to n

ow d

o th

e sa

me

thin

g on

thei

r gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer

abou

t the

trai

n ri

de fr

om C

hapt

er 5

, beg

inni

ng w

ith

a di

scus

sion

in th

eir

tria

ds, f

ollo

wed

by

shar

ing

out,

and

final

ly w

riti

ng in

thei

r gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer.

Pro

vide

cla

rific

atio

n or

re

dire

ctio

n if

nece

ssar

y on

det

ails

.

• N

ext,

show

stu

dent

s th

e th

ird

box

on th

e gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer,

titl

ed E

xpla

in. S

ay: “

The

Exp

lain

box

is u

sed

to m

ake

a cl

ear

conn

ecti

on b

etw

een

the

first

det

ail a

nd th

e ne

xt d

etai

l, m

ore

spec

ifica

lly w

hat c

halle

nge

Esp

eran

za fa

ces

beca

use

of th

e ra

nch

burn

ing.

My

deta

il w

as a

bout

how

Esp

eran

za ‘e

scap

ed th

e fir

e, b

ut lo

ses

ever

ythi

ng,’

so I

am

goi

ng to

wri

te ‘E

sper

anza

ne

eds

clot

hes

from

the

poor

box

’ to

help

exp

lain

wha

t it m

eans

to lo

se e

very

thin

g—ev

en y

our

clot

hes.

• A

sk s

tude

nts

to n

ow d

o th

e sa

me

thin

g on

thei

r gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer,

abo

ut th

e tr

ain

ride

from

Cha

pter

5, b

y fo

llow

ing

the

proc

ess

wit

h th

eir

tria

ds. A

s st

uden

ts d

iscu

ss, l

iste

n fo

r gr

oups

that

hav

e st

rong

exa

mpl

es o

f exp

lain

ing

the

chal

leng

e E

sper

anza

face

s an

d ha

ve th

em s

hare

out

.

• B

e su

re to

poi

nt o

ut w

hy th

ese

are

good

exa

mpl

es o

f exp

lain

: “It

tells

why

the

deta

il is

impo

rtan

t, an

d th

e ch

alle

nge

Esp

eran

za fa

ces.

• D

irec

t stu

dent

s’ a

tten

tion

to th

e se

cond

Det

ail b

ox, e

xpla

inin

g th

at th

ey w

ill w

rite

abo

ut E

sper

anza

’s r

espo

nse

to th

e ev

ent,

us

ing

text

dir

ectl

y fr

om th

e bo

ok. M

odel

this

by

turn

ing

to p

age

52 a

nd s

how

ing

stud

ents

(usi

ng a

doc

umen

t cam

era

or o

ther

re

sour

ce) t

he s

ente

nce:

“M

ama,

at a

tim

e lik

e th

is, m

ust w

e w

orry

abo

ut s

ome

poor

fam

ily w

ho n

eeds

clo

thes

?” W

rite

: “p.

52

poor

box

” so

they

und

erst

and

they

do

not n

eed

to w

rite

the

full

quot

e on

the

orga

nize

r.

• H

ave

stud

ents

dis

cuss

the

seco

nd d

etai

l wit

h th

eir

tria

ds, t

hen

fill o

ut th

e ne

xt D

etai

l box

abo

ut th

e tr

ain

ride

on

thei

r gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer.

Lis

ten

for

grou

ps th

at h

ave

stro

ng e

xam

ples

.

• A

sk a

few

tria

ds to

sha

re th

eir

seco

nd d

etai

l alo

ud w

ith

the

clas

s, p

oint

ing

out t

hat t

hese

phr

ases

sho

w s

omet

hing

spe

cific

ab

out E

sper

anza

’s r

eact

ion

to th

e ch

alle

nge

she

is fa

cing

.

• Sh

are

that

the

seco

nd E

xpla

in b

ox is

whe

re s

tude

nts

will

wri

te w

hat h

appe

ns w

hen

Esp

eran

za r

espo

nds

the

way

she

doe

s.

Mod

el, b

y w

riti

ng s

omet

hing

suc

h as

: “M

ama

says

they

are

poo

r.”

• A

sk s

tude

nts

to n

ow d

o th

e sa

me

thin

g fo

r th

eir

topi

c, fr

om C

hapt

er 5

, abo

ut th

e tr

ain

ride

, fir

st d

iscu

ssin

g in

thei

r tr

iads

. As

stud

ents

dis

cuss

, lis

ten

for

grou

ps th

at h

ave

stro

ng e

xam

ples

(for

exa

mpl

e, s

tude

nts

mig

ht n

otic

e th

at M

ama

apol

ogiz

es to

C

arm

en fo

r E

sper

anza

’s b

ad m

anne

rs).

Ask

a fe

w tr

iads

to s

hare

alo

ud w

ith

the

clas

s.

• C

onsi

der

allo

win

g st

uden

ts to

dra

w

thei

r ob

serv

atio

ns, i

deas

, or

note

s w

hen

appr

opri

ate.

Thi

s al

low

s E

LLs

to p

arti

cipa

te in

a m

eani

ngfu

l way

.

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ritin

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art I

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ow E

sper

anza

Res

pond

s on

the

Trai

n (R

evis

iting

Cha

pter

5: “

Las

Gua

yaba

s/G

uava

s”)

Wor

k Ti

me

(con

tinue

d)

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

• R

emin

d st

uden

ts th

at th

e ta

rget

they

are

wor

king

on

is “

to a

naly

ze h

ow E

sper

anza

res

pond

s to

a k

ey e

vent

in th

e no

vel,”

w

hich

is w

hat t

hey

have

just

don

e by

filli

ng in

thei

r to

pic,

det

ails

, and

exp

lain

s. B

ut n

ow th

ey n

eed

to m

eet t

he s

econ

d pa

rt o

f th

e ta

rget

, whi

ch is

to a

naly

ze “

wha

t thi

s sh

ows

abou

t her

cha

ract

er.”

• D

irec

t stu

dent

s’ a

tten

tion

to th

e fin

al s

pace

, Con

clus

ion.

Thi

nk a

loud

, say

ing:

“I

am g

oing

to lo

ok b

ack

at m

y no

tes

abou

t the

to

pic,

det

ails

, and

exp

lain

s on

my

grap

hic

orga

nize

r. T

hey

disc

uss

how

Esp

eran

za lo

ses

ever

ythi

ng, i

nclu

ding

her

clo

thes

, in

the

fire;

how

she

res

pond

s by

thin

king

that

the

clot

hes

left

by

the

nuns

mus

t be

for

som

e po

or fa

mily

; and

then

Mam

a ha

s to

ex

plai

n th

at th

ey a

re th

e on

es w

ho a

re p

oor.

I a

m g

oing

to a

sk m

ysel

f, w

hat d

oes

this

info

rmat

ion

mak

e m

e th

ink

abou

t E

sper

anza

’s c

hara

cter

? I

thin

k it

mea

ns E

sper

anza

has

alw

ays

had

ever

ythi

ng s

he e

ver

wan

ted,

so

she

can’

t und

erst

and

bein

g po

or o

r ne

edin

g to

acc

ept c

hari

ty. S

o I

am g

oing

to w

rite

: ‘E

sper

anza

had

eve

ryth

ing;

now

poo

r; c

an’t

unde

rsta

nd’ i

n th

e sp

ace

for

my

conc

lusi

on.

• A

sk s

tude

nts

to n

ow d

o th

e sa

me

thin

g fo

r th

eir

topi

c, fr

om C

hapt

er 5

, abo

ut th

e tr

ain

ride

, fir

st d

iscu

ssin

g in

tria

ds,

spec

ifica

lly, “

Wha

t can

we

infe

r?”

then

wri

ting

a n

ote

in th

e C

oncl

usio

n bo

x of

thei

r gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer.

• H

ave

a fe

w tr

iads

sha

re o

ut th

eir

conc

lusi

ons.

C. I

ntr

odu

ctio

n to

Par

agra

ph

Wri

tin

g (1

0 m

inu

tes)

• D

irec

t stu

dent

s to

the

lear

ning

targ

et: “

I ca

n w

rite

an

essa

y in

whi

ch e

ach

para

grap

h ha

s a

clea

r to

pic

sent

ence

, a b

ody,

and

a

conc

lusi

on.”

Spe

cific

ally

cla

rify

the

wor

ds to

pic

sent

ence

, bod

y an

d co

nclu

sion

, add

ing

clar

ifyin

g w

ords

or

syno

nym

s.

• Th

en r

ead

the

post

ed S

amp

le P

arag

rap

h f

or C

hap

ter

3 (o

n ch

art p

aper

) to

illus

trat

e ho

w th

e no

tes

from

the

grap

hic

orga

nize

r w

ere

used

to c

reat

e a

para

grap

h. A

sk s

tude

nts

wha

t the

y no

tice

abo

ut h

ow th

e no

tes

on th

e gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer

are

diff

eren

t fro

m th

e sa

mpl

e pa

ragr

aph.

(Lis

ten

for

stud

ents

to n

otic

e: th

e fir

st li

ne is

inde

nted

, the

re a

re c

ompl

ete

sent

ence

s in

stea

d of

not

es, t

he s

ente

nces

are

con

nect

ed a

nd n

ot o

n se

para

te li

nes,

etc

.)

• U

sing

a d

iffer

ent c

olor

mar

ker

for

each

, und

erlin

e th

e to

pic

stat

emen

t, de

tail,

exp

lain

, and

con

clus

ion

on th

e gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer.

Ask

stu

dent

s to

look

at t

he c

hart

and

find

the

sent

ence

s in

the

para

grap

h th

at c

orre

spon

d to

eac

h pa

rt o

f the

gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer.

Und

erlin

e ea

ch s

ente

nce

wit

h th

e sa

me

colo

r m

arke

r as

the

corr

espo

ndin

g pa

rt o

f the

gra

phic

org

aniz

er.

Poin

t out

to s

tude

nts

that

the

first

sen

tenc

e of

a p

arag

raph

is in

dent

ed o

n th

e pa

ge. T

ell s

tude

nts

that

the

deta

il an

d ex

plai

n se

nten

ces

mak

e up

the

body

of t

he p

arag

raph

and

that

the

last

sen

tenc

e is

the

conc

lusi

on o

f the

par

agra

ph.

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grap

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ritin

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ow E

sper

anza

Res

pond

s on

the

Trai

n (R

evis

iting

Cha

pter

5: “

Las

Gua

yaba

s/G

uava

s”)

Wor

k Ti

me

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

D. T

riad

Gro

up

Wri

tin

g: B

egin

nin

g P

arag

rap

h 1

(7

min

ute

s)

• Te

ll st

uden

ts th

at n

ow th

ey w

ill s

tart

to d

raft

thei

r fir

st p

arag

raph

s ba

sed

on th

eir

grap

hic

orga

nize

rs a

bout

an

even

t in

Cha

pter

5.

• U

sing

the

Ink-

Pair

-Sha

re p

roto

col,

ask

stud

ents

to in

depe

nden

tly

wri

te a

sen

tenc

e th

at c

onve

ys th

e m

ain

idea

of t

heir

firs

t pa

ragr

aph

(fro

m th

e To

pic

box

on th

eir

grap

hic

orga

nize

rs),

and

then

sha

re th

eir

sent

ence

wit

h th

eir

part

ners

. Rem

ind

them

to

inde

nt th

eir

firs

t sen

tenc

e. L

ead

a w

hole

-cla

ss s

hari

ng o

f sen

tenc

es, r

ecor

ding

sam

ples

on

the

boar

d an

d re

view

ing

the

char

acte

rist

ics

of g

ood

topi

c se

nten

ces.

Ask

stu

dent

s to

und

erlin

e th

eir

topi

c se

nten

ce in

gre

en.

• R

epea

t thi

s pr

oces

s, a

skin

g st

uden

ts to

wri

te tw

o se

nten

ces

for

the

body

of t

heir

par

agra

ph u

sing

the

supp

orti

ng d

etai

ls th

ey

note

d in

the

firs

t Det

ail a

nd E

xpla

in b

oxes

of t

heir

gra

phic

org

aniz

er. P

oint

out

to th

em th

at th

ese

sent

ence

s co

ntin

ue a

fter

th

e to

pic

sent

ence

and

do

not e

ach

star

t on

thei

r ow

n lin

e. R

efer

to th

e sa

mpl

e pa

ragr

aph

as a

mod

el. A

fter

stu

dent

s co

mpl

ete

the

body

sen

tenc

es o

f the

ir p

arag

raph

, ask

them

to s

hare

alo

ud a

nd th

en u

nder

line

thos

e se

nten

ces

in b

lue.

• C

onti

nue

as ti

me

perm

its;

like

ly s

tude

nts

will

nee

d to

sto

p at

this

poi

nt a

nd c

onti

nue

draf

ting

this

firs

t par

agra

ph d

urin

g Le

sson

17.

Clo

sing

and

Ass

essm

ent

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

A. S

har

ing

(3 m

inu

tes)

• In

vite

a fe

w s

tude

nts

to s

hare

the

firs

t thr

ee s

ente

nces

of t

heir

par

agra

phs

alou

d, a

nd a

sk o

ther

s to

iden

tify

the

char

acte

rist

ics

of g

ood

topi

cs, d

etai

ls, a

nd e

xpla

ins

evid

ent i

n st

uden

ts’ p

arti

al d

raft

s.

• E

LL la

ngua

ge a

cqui

siti

on is

fa

cilit

ated

by

inte

ract

ing

wit

h na

tive

sp

eake

rs o

f Eng

lish

who

pro

vide

m

odel

s of

lang

uage

.

Hom

ewor

k M

eetin

g St

uden

ts’ N

eeds

• C

ompl

ete

the

hom

ewor

k h

and

out:

Pla

nn

ing

and

Org

aniz

ing

My

Seco

nd

Par

agra

ph

, wit

h A

ccor

dio

n G

rap

hic

O

rgan

izer

she

et. T

o do

this

ass

ignm

ent,

you

will

nee

d yo

ur e

ntra

nce

and

exit

tick

ets

from

Cha

pter

s 8–

15.

Cop

yrig

ht ©

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GRADE 5: MODULE 1: UNIT 2: LESSON 16 Text-Dependent Questions for Chapter 5:

“Las Guayabas/Guavas” (Pages 58–80)

1. On pages 66 and 67, Esperanza arrives at the train station in Zacatecas, and Alfonso leads them

past the fancy car with leather seats and the dining car to one with wooden benches, trash, and the smell of rotting fruit and urine. She also sees many “peasants” crowded onto the seats. How does Esperanza respond to having to ride on this train car? Use details from the text to explain your answer.

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2. On pages 69 and 70, Esperanza takes the doll her Papa gave her out of its valise, and a young girl runs up to her and tries to hold the doll. How does Esperanza respond to the girl, and what does Esperanza’s mama say and/or do when Esperanza reacts the way she does? Explain your answer with details from the text. _________________________________________________________________

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3. On pages 78 and 79, Esperanza sees Carmen give money and food to a begging woman. Esperanza responds by asking why the beggar woman doesn’t just go get food from the farmer’s market. What does this tell you about Esperanza’s character at this point in the story? Cite evidence from the novel to support your answer.

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GRADE 5: MODULE 1: UNIT 2: LESSON 16 Homework Handout:

Planning and Organizing My Second Paragraph

Name:

Date:

1. Choose an event (from Chapters 8–15) that you want to write about. It should be a time when Esperanza responds to or witnesses some type of challenge.

To help you choose, use your evidence flags and your entrance and exit tickets from Chapters 8–15. The list below includes some suggestions of events you might choose, but you can choose a different event if you want.

a. Chapter 8 – Marta talking to workers about the strike

b. Chapter 10 – Mama and Esperanza working in the fields when Mama becomes ill

c. Chapter 11 – Going to Mr. Yakota’s grocery store; meeting campesino family

d. Chapter 12 – Marta hiding from immigration officers

e. Chapter 13 – People from Oklahoma having better living conditions (indoor toilets and swimming pool); Miguel losing his engineering job at railroad; Isabel not being chosen for May Day queen

Complete the blank Accordion graphic organizer about that event. Make sure to bring this completed graphic organizer to the next class. You will need it to write Paragraph 2 of your essay.

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GRADE 5: MODULE 1: UNIT 2: LESSON 16 Homework Handout:

Accordion Graphic Organizer for Paragraph Writing

Topic: (State the key event and/or challenge Esperanza faces)

Detail: (What happens to Esperanza?)

Explain: (Why is that first detail important?

How does it connect to the next detail?)

Detail: (Esperanza’s response to the event)

Explain: (What happens when Esperanza respondsthe way she does?)

Conclusion: (What can we infer about Esperanza’s character based on how she responds?)

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IT 2

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-Ter

m T

arge

ts A

ddre

ssed

(Bas

ed o

n N

YSP1

2 EL

A C

CLS

)

I can

use

quo

tes t

o ex

plai

n th

e m

eani

ng o

f lite

rary

text

s. (R

L.5.

1)

I can

use

quo

tes t

o su

ppor

t my

infe

renc

es in

lite

rary

text

s. (R

L.5.

1)

I can

det

erm

ine

a th

eme

base

d on

det

ails

in th

e te

xt. (

RL.

5.2)

I c

an c

ompa

re a

nd c

ontr

ast l

itera

ry e

lem

ents

usi

ng d

etai

ls fr

om th

e te

xt. (

RL.

5.3)

I c

an w

rite

an

info

rmat

ive/

expl

anat

ory

text

. (W

.5.2

) I c

an u

se th

e w

ritin

g pr

oces

s to

prod

uce

clea

r and

coh

eren

t wri

ting

(with

supp

ort)

. (W

.5.5

)

Supp

ortin

g Le

arni

ng T

arge

ts

Ong

oing

Ass

essm

ent

•I c

an fi

nd e

vide

nce

in E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

that

will

supp

ort m

y in

fere

nces

abo

ut c

hara

cter

s fro

m th

e bo

ok.

•I c

an a

naly

ze h

ow E

sper

anza

resp

onds

to a

key

eve

nt in

the

nove

l, an

d w

hat t

his s

how

s abo

ut h

er c

hara

cter

.

•I c

an w

rite

an

essa

y in

whi

ch e

ach

para

grap

h ha

s a c

lear

topi

c se

nten

ce, a

bod

y, a

nd a

con

clus

ion.

•Ac

cord

ion

grap

hic

orga

nize

r for

Par

agra

ph 2

(hom

ewor

k)

•Pa

rtne

r and

indi

vidu

al p

arag

raph

s

Age

nda

Teac

hing

Not

es

1.O

peni

ngA.

Rev

iew

of L

earn

ing

Targ

ets a

nd C

rite

ria

for S

ucce

ss (1

0 m

inut

es)

2.W

ork

Tim

eA.

Gui

ded

Prac

tice:

Com

plet

e D

raft

Par

agra

ph 1

(10

min

utes

)

B.Pe

er C

ritiq

ue o

f Gra

phic

Org

aniz

er fo

r Par

agra

ph 2

(10

min

utes

)

C.In

depe

nden

t Wri

ting:

Dra

fting

Par

agra

ph 2

(15

min

utes

)

D.

Gro

up D

iscu

ssio

n: H

ow E

sper

anza

Cha

nges

ove

r Tim

e; th

e Ph

oeni

x M

etap

hor (

10 m

inut

es)

3.Cl

osin

g an

d As

sess

men

t

A.D

ebri

ef (5

min

utes

)

4.H

omew

ork

•Fo

r thi

s wri

ting

assi

gnm

ent,

stud

ents

are

not

giv

en a

form

al ru

bric

. Rat

her,

they

w

ork

with

the

teac

her t

o cr

eate

“cri

teri

a fo

r suc

cess

.” T

he ra

tiona

le b

ehin

d th

is is

to

ens

ure

that

stud

ents

act

ivel

y co

ntri

bute

to a

nd o

wn

the

crite

ria

upon

whi

ch

thei

r wri

ting

will

be

asse

ssed

.

•R

evie

w: C

atch

and

Rel

ease

pro

toco

l (se

e Ap

pend

ix 1)

.•

Rer

ead

page

s 249

–250

, thi

nkin

g sp

ecifi

cally

abo

ut th

e ph

oeni

x m

etap

hor,

whi

ch

stud

ents

dis

cuss

in P

art D

of W

ork

Tim

e.

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on V

ocab

ular

y M

ater

ials

info

rmat

ive,

exp

lana

tory

, par

agra

ph,

essa

y, c

ompa

re, c

ontr

ast,

topi

c se

nten

ce, b

ody,

con

clus

ion,

pho

enix

• Es

pera

nza

Ris

ing

(boo

k; o

ne p

er st

uden

t)

• Co

mpa

re/C

ontr

ast E

ssay

Cri

teri

a fo

r Suc

cess

anc

hor c

hart

(new

; tea

cher

-cre

ated

)

• St

uden

ts’ c

ompl

eted

gra

phic

org

aniz

ers f

or P

arag

raph

s 1 a

nd 2

, as w

ell a

s the

ir in

com

plet

e dr

aft o

f Par

agra

ph 1

(fro

m L

esso

n 16

cla

ssw

ork

and

hom

ewor

k)

• Ac

cord

ion

grap

hic

orga

nize

r for

Par

agra

ph W

ritin

g (f

rom

Les

son

16)

• Sa

mpl

e gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer a

bout

Cha

pter

3 (f

rom

Les

son

16; o

ne to

dis

play

)

• Sa

mpl

e pa

ragr

aph

abou

t Cha

pter

3 (f

rom

Les

son

16; o

ne to

dis

play

)

• Pa

ragr

aph

2 Ta

sk C

ard

(one

per

stud

ent)

Ope

ning

M

eetin

g St

uden

ts’ N

eeds

A. R

evie

w o

f Lea

rnin

g Ta

rget

s an

d C

rite

ria

for

Succ

ess

(10

min

utes

)

• In

vite

a fe

w g

roup

s tha

t hav

e no

t yet

shar

ed th

eir t

wo-

voic

e po

ems t

o do

so. A

sk p

eers

to g

ive

spec

ific

prai

se.

• R

evie

w to

day’

s lea

rnin

g ta

rget

s, w

hich

are

the

sam

e as

yes

terd

ay’s

lear

ning

targ

ets.

Use

the

key

wor

ds in

the

lear

ning

targ

ets

to c

reat

e th

e C

ompa

re/C

ontr

ast E

ssay

Cri

teri

a fo

r Su

cces

s an

chor

cha

rt w

ith st

uden

ts. T

he c

hart

shou

ld in

clud

e th

e fo

llow

ing

(as w

ell a

s oth

er c

rite

ria

your

cla

ss id

entif

ies)

:

– Ci

ting

evid

ence

– M

akin

g in

fere

nces

– K

ey e

vent

s fro

m th

e be

ginn

ing

and

end

of th

e no

vel

– Pa

ragr

aphs

hav

e to

pic

sent

ence

– Pa

ragr

aphs

hav

e su

ppor

ting

deta

ils

– Pa

ragr

aphs

hav

e co

nclu

ding

sent

ence

• Vi

sual

s can

hel

p EL

Ls a

nd o

ther

st

uden

ts c

ompr

ehen

d qu

estio

ns a

nd

disc

ussi

ons.

Cha

rt m

ain

poin

ts in

an

swer

s and

pos

t all

ques

tions

as

ked

to st

uden

ts.

• So

me

stud

ents

may

be

unfa

mili

ar

with

Tie

r 2 v

ocab

ular

y w

ords

. Cl

arify

voc

abul

ary

with

stud

ents

as

need

ed.

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il 20

14 •

4

Wor

k Ti

me

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

A. G

uide

d P

ract

ice:

Com

plet

e D

raft

Par

agra

ph 1

(10

min

utes

)

• H

ave

stud

ents

gat

her i

n th

eir t

riad

gro

ups a

nd ta

ke o

ut th

eir t

wo

com

plet

ed g

raph

ic o

rgan

izer

s fo

r P

arag

raph

s 1

and

2, a

s wel

l as t

heir

inco

mpl

ete

draf

t of P

arag

raph

1.

• D

ispl

ay th

e Sa

mpl

e A

ccor

dion

gra

phic

org

aniz

er fo

r C

hapt

er 3

and

Sam

ple

para

grap

h ab

out C

hapt

er 3

(on

char

t pap

er) f

rom

the

last

less

on. R

ead

the

lear

ning

targ

et a

loud

: “I c

an w

rite

an

essa

y in

whi

ch e

ach

para

grap

h ha

s a c

lear

to

pic

sent

ence

, a b

ody,

and

a c

oncl

usio

n.”

• R

evie

w a

s nee

ded,

bas

ed o

n th

e sa

mpl

e gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer a

nd p

arag

raph

abo

ut th

e fir

e in

Cha

pter

3. D

irec

t stu

dent

s to

the

seco

nd d

etai

l and

exp

lain

on

your

gra

phic

org

aniz

er a

bout

the

fire.

Ask

stud

ents

to fi

nd th

e se

nten

ces i

n th

e sa

mpl

e pa

ragr

aph

that

cor

resp

ond

to th

ese

part

s of t

he g

raph

ic o

rgan

izer

, whi

ch a

re u

nder

lined

in b

lue.

Und

erlin

e th

e w

ord

body

in

the

lear

ning

targ

et.

• G

ive

stud

ents

10 m

inut

es to

com

plet

e th

e dr

aft o

f the

ir fi

rst p

arag

raph

abo

ut a

cha

lleng

e Es

pera

nza

face

d in

Cha

pter

5.

• U

se th

e In

k-Pa

ir-S

hare

pro

toco

l, ha

ving

stud

ents

inde

pend

ently

wri

te tw

o m

ore

sent

ence

s for

thei

r sec

ond

deta

il an

d ex

plai

n an

d th

en sh

are

thei

r sen

tenc

e w

ith th

eir p

artn

ers.

• R

epea

t thi

s pro

cess

with

the

conc

lusi

on, w

hich

is u

nder

lined

in b

oth

the

grap

hic

orga

nize

r and

sam

ple

para

grap

h. O

ffer

spec

ific

feed

back

as s

tude

nts s

hare

, not

ing

good

exa

mpl

es in

whi

ch st

uden

ts h

ave

anal

yzed

wha

t Esp

eran

za’s

resp

onse

to

the

even

t sho

ws a

bout

her

cha

ract

er.

• As

k st

uden

ts to

hol

d on

to th

eir P

arag

raph

1 dr

aft f

or n

ow.

• EL

L la

ngua

ge a

cqui

sitio

n is

fa

cilit

ated

by

inte

ract

ing

with

nat

ive

spea

kers

of E

nglis

h w

ho p

rovi

de

mod

els o

f lan

guag

e.

• Fo

r stu

dent

s nee

ding

add

ition

al

supp

orts

pro

duci

ng la

ngua

ge,

cons

ider

offe

ring

a se

nten

ce fr

ame,

se

nten

ce st

arte

r, o

r clo

ze se

nten

ce to

pr

ovid

e th

e st

ruct

ure

requ

ired

.

B. P

eer

Cri

tiqu

e of

Gra

phic

Org

aniz

er fo

r P

arag

raph

2 (

10 m

inut

es)

• K

eep

stud

ents

in tr

iads

and

ask

stud

ents

to e

xcha

nge

the

grap

hic

orga

nize

rs th

ey c

ompl

eted

for h

omew

ork,

abo

ut a

seco

nd

even

t lat

er in

the

nove

l.

• Le

t stu

dent

s kno

w th

ey w

ill u

se th

e fe

edba

ck fr

om th

eir p

eers

to h

elp

them

wri

te, r

evis

e, a

nd fi

naliz

e th

eir p

arag

raph

s for

th

eir f

inal

ess

ays t

o be

com

plet

ed d

urin

g th

e O

n-D

eman

d En

d of

Uni

t 2 A

sses

smen

t in

the

next

less

on.

• As

k st

uden

ts to

giv

e ea

ch o

ther

spec

ific,

kin

d, h

elpf

ul fe

edba

ck b

ased

on

thei

r gra

phic

org

aniz

er in

the

form

of p

rais

es,

ques

tions

, and

sugg

estio

ns.

• En

cour

age

them

to fo

cus o

n th

e cr

iteri

a: c

iting

evi

denc

e an

d ex

plai

ning

.

• Ci

rcul

ate

to li

sten

in a

nd su

ppor

t as n

eede

d. Id

entif

y st

uden

ts w

ho m

ay n

eed

addi

tiona

l sup

port

with

thei

r Par

agra

ph 2

gr

aphi

c or

gani

zer.

• Co

nsid

er p

rovi

ding

ext

ra ti

me

for

task

s and

ans

wer

ing

ques

tions

in

clas

s dis

cuss

ions

. ELL

s ofte

n ne

ed

mor

e tim

e to

pro

cess

and

tran

slat

e in

form

atio

n.

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• G

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2:L1

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il 20

14 •

5

Wor

k Ti

me

(con

tinue

d)

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

C. I

ndep

ende

nt W

riti

ng: D

raft

ing

Par

agra

ph 2

(15

min

utes

)

• D

istr

ibut

e th

e P

arag

raph

2 ta

sk c

ard

to st

uden

ts a

nd a

sk th

em to

star

t wri

ting

thei

r sec

ond

para

grap

hs.

• Th

ey sh

ould

beg

in w

ith th

eir P

arag

raph

2 g

raph

ic o

rgan

izer

(com

plet

ed fo

r hom

ewor

k) a

nd th

e fe

edba

ck th

ey ju

st re

ceiv

ed

from

pee

rs.

• Fo

r stu

dent

refe

renc

e, k

eep

the

Sam

ple

Acco

rdio

n G

raph

ic O

rgan

izer

for P

arag

raph

Wri

ting

and

the

sam

ple

para

grap

h po

sted

whe

re a

ll st

uden

ts c

an se

e th

e ch

arts

.

• R

emin

d st

uden

ts to

incl

ude

a to

pic

sent

ence

, bod

y, a

nd c

oncl

usio

n in

thei

r par

agra

phs.

Allo

w st

uden

ts to

use

the

book

, re

cord

ing

form

s the

y cr

eate

d fo

r eac

h ch

apte

r, ev

iden

ce fl

ags,

jour

nals

, not

e-ca

tche

rs, a

nd a

ny re

leva

nt a

ncho

r cha

rts w

ith

deta

ils a

bout

hum

an ri

ghts

cha

lleng

es a

nd c

hara

cter

resp

onse

s to

supp

ort t

hem

dur

ing

thei

r wri

ting.

• As

stud

ents

wor

k, c

ircu

late

to o

bser

ve a

nd su

ppor

t as n

eede

d.

• Co

llect

stud

ents

’ dra

ft Pa

ragr

aphs

1 an

d 2.

The

y w

ill n

eed

thes

e fo

r the

ir o

n-de

man

d as

sess

men

t dur

ing

Less

on 18

.

• Co

nsid

er w

ritin

g an

d br

eaki

ng d

own

mul

tiste

p di

rect

ions

into

num

bere

d el

emen

ts. E

LLs c

an re

turn

to th

ese

guid

elin

es to

mak

e su

re th

ey a

re o

n tr

ack.

• St

uden

ts n

eedi

ng a

dditi

onal

supp

orts

m

ay b

enef

it fr

om p

artia

lly fi

lled-

in

grap

hic

orga

nize

rs.

• Fo

r stu

dent

s who

may

be

stru

gglin

g,

prom

pt th

em to

refe

r to

thei

r not

es

from

Cha

pter

10, s

ince

stud

ents

al

read

y cl

osel

y an

alyz

ed h

ow

Espe

ranz

a is

gro

win

g as

a p

erso

n an

d ho

w h

er re

spon

se to

cha

lleng

es

chan

ges o

ver t

ime.

D. G

roup

Dis

cuss

ion:

How

Esp

eran

za C

hang

es o

ver

Tim

e; th

e P

hoen

ix M

etap

hor

(10

min

utes

)

Not

e: T

his d

iscu

ssio

n is

inte

nded

as a

scaf

fold

for

stud

ents

’ on-

dem

and

wri

ting

duri

ng L

esso

n 18

. •

Tell

stud

ents

that

in th

e ne

xt le

sson

, the

y w

ill c

ompl

ete

thei

r ess

ays o

n th

eir o

wn

for t

he E

nd o

f Uni

t 2 A

sses

smen

t.

• Ex

plai

n th

at th

eir f

inal

ess

ay w

ill h

ave

thre

e pa

ragr

aphs

. The

y ha

ve a

lrea

dy w

ritt

en d

rafts

of t

wo

of th

ose

para

grap

hs.

• Th

e fin

al p

arag

raph

will

be

abou

t how

Esp

eran

za g

rew

and

cha

nged

ove

r tim

e. T

hey

will

com

pare

and

con

tras

t how

she

resp

onde

d to

an

even

t ear

ly in

the

nove

l to

her r

espo

nse

late

r in

the

nove

l. To

day,

they

will

get

to th

ink

abou

t thi

s top

ic

som

e m

ore

as a

cla

ss.

• O

rien

t stu

dent

s to

page

249

, fift

h pa

ragr

aph,

whe

re it

says

: “As

the

sun

rose

, Esp

eran

za b

egan

to fe

el a

s if s

he ro

se w

ith it

.”

Rea

d al

oud

as st

uden

ts fo

llow

alo

ng. E

nd a

t pag

e 25

0 w

ith th

e la

st se

nten

ce o

f thi

s par

agra

ph: “

Mig

uel h

ad b

een

righ

t abo

ut

neve

r giv

ing

up, a

nd sh

e ha

d be

en ri

ght,

too,

abo

ut ri

sing

abo

ve th

ose

who

hel

d th

em d

own.

• Vi

sual

s can

hel

p EL

Ls a

nd o

ther

st

uden

ts c

ompr

ehen

d qu

estio

ns a

nd

disc

ussi

ons.

Cha

rt m

ain

poin

ts in

an

swer

s and

pos

t all

ques

tions

ask

ed

to st

uden

ts.

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Wor

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me

(con

tinue

d)

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

• As

k:

* “W

hat i

s a p

hoen

ix?”

If st

uden

ts a

re n

ot fa

mili

ar w

ith w

hat a

pho

enix

is, e

xpla

in th

at it

is a

myt

holo

gica

l bir

d re

sem

blin

g an

eag

le th

at li

ved

for a

long

tim

e, th

en w

ould

bur

n its

elf o

ut a

nd b

e re

born

from

the

ashe

s. A

lso

expl

ain

that

a p

hoen

ix

com

mon

ly a

ppea

rs in

lite

ratu

re a

s a sy

mbo

l of t

he e

nd o

f one

life

and

the

begi

nnin

g of

a n

ew li

fe.

• As

k st

uden

ts to

Thi

nk-P

air-

Shar

e re

gard

ing

thes

e qu

estio

ns:

* “I

n w

hat w

ays d

oes E

sper

anza

cha

nge

as a

per

son

thro

ugho

ut th

e no

vel?

* “W

hy d

o yo

u th

ink

the

auth

or c

hose

to c

ompa

re E

sper

anza

to a

pho

enix

in th

ese

last

pag

es o

f the

boo

k?”

• R

ecor

d st

uden

t res

pons

es o

n ch

art p

aper

so th

ey m

ay u

se th

em a

s a re

fere

nce

duri

ng th

e En

d of

Uni

t 2 A

sses

smen

t.

Clo

sing

and

Ass

essm

ent

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

A. D

ebri

ef (

5 m

inut

es)

• As

k st

uden

ts to

con

side

r:

* “W

ould

you

hav

e w

ante

d to

be

Espe

ranz

a’s f

rien

d at

the

begi

nnin

g of

the

nove

l? W

ould

you

wan

t to

be h

er fr

iend

at t

he

end

of th

e no

vel?

Why

or w

hy n

ot?”

Allo

w st

uden

ts to

Thi

nk-P

air-

Shar

e th

eir r

espo

nses

.

• EL

L la

ngua

ge a

cqui

sitio

n is

fa

cilit

ated

by

inte

ract

ing

with

nat

ive

spea

kers

of E

nglis

h w

ho p

rovi

de

mod

els o

f lan

guag

e.

Hom

ewor

k M

eetin

g St

uden

ts’ N

eeds

• Co

ntin

ue g

athe

ring

any

evi

denc

e to

use

in y

our E

nd o

f Uni

t 2 a

sses

smen

t.

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Copyright © 2013 by Expeditionary Learning, New York, NY. All Rights Reserved. NYS Common Core ELA Curriculum • G5:M1:U2:L17 • April 2014 • 8

For your homework last night, you were asked to do the following: Choose an event (from Chapters 8–15) that you want to write about. It should be a time when she responds to or witnesses some type of challenge. You might have chosen one of these events, or another event in the novel:

a. Chapter 8 – Marta talking to workers about the strike b. Chapter 10 – Mama and Esperanza working in the fields when Mama becomes ill c. Chapter 11 – Going to Mr. Yakota’s grocery store; meeting campesino family d. Chapter 12 – Marta hiding from immigration officers

You completed a graphic organizer about the event you chose. Now, write Paragraph 2 about the event you chose from Chapters 8–15.

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essm

ent:

On-

Dem

and

Ana

lytic

al E

ssay

abo

ut H

ow E

sper

anza

Cha

nges

Ove

r Tim

e Lo

ng-T

erm

Tar

gets

Add

ress

ed (B

ased

on

NYS

P12

ELA

CC

LS)

I ca

n us

e qu

otes

to e

xpla

in th

e m

eani

ng o

f lit

erar

y te

xts.

(RL.

5.1)

I

can

use

quot

es to

sup

port

my

infe

renc

es in

lite

rary

text

s. (R

L.5.

1)

I ca

n de

term

ine

a th

eme

base

d on

det

ails

in th

e te

xt. (

RL.

5.2)

I

can

sum

mar

ize

a lit

erar

y te

xt. (

RL.

5.2)

I

can

com

pare

and

con

tras

t lit

erar

y el

emen

ts u

sing

det

ails

from

the

text

. (R

L.5.

3)

I ca

n w

rite

an

info

rmat

ive/

expl

anat

ory

text

. (W

.5.2

) I

can

prod

uce

clea

r an

d co

here

nt w

riti

ng th

at is

app

ropr

iate

to ta

sk, p

urpo

se, a

nd a

udie

nce.

(W.5

.4)

Wit

h su

ppor

t fro

m p

eers

and

adu

lts,

I c

an u

se a

wri

ting

pro

cess

to p

rodu

ce c

lear

and

coh

eren

t wri

ting

. (W

.5.5

) I

can

choo

se e

vide

nce

from

lite

rary

or

info

rmat

iona

l tex

ts to

sup

port

ana

lysi

s, r

efle

ctio

n an

d re

sear

ch. (

W.5

.9)

Supp

ortin

g Le

arni

ng T

arge

ts

Ong

oing

Ass

essm

ent

• I

can

find

evid

ence

in E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

that

will

sup

port

my

infe

renc

es a

bout

cha

ract

ers

from

the

book

.

• I

can

wri

te a

n in

form

ativ

e/ex

plan

ator

y th

ree-

para

grap

h es

say

that

ana

lyze

s ho

w E

sper

anza

res

pond

s to

tw

o ke

y ev

ents

, and

com

pare

s an

d co

ntra

sts

her

resp

onse

to e

vent

s ov

er ti

me.

• I

can

wri

te a

n es

say

in w

hich

eac

h pa

ragr

aph

has

a cl

ear

topi

c se

nten

ce, a

bod

y, a

nd a

con

clus

ion.

• A

ccor

dion

gra

phic

org

aniz

ers

• Pa

rtne

r an

d in

divi

dual

par

agra

phs

• E

nd o

f Uni

t 2 A

sses

smen

t: O

n-D

eman

d A

naly

tica

l Ess

ay

abou

t How

Esp

eran

za C

hang

es o

ver

Tim

e

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End

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Ass

essm

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On-

Dem

and

Ana

lytic

al E

ssay

abo

ut H

ow E

sper

anza

Cha

nges

Ove

r Tim

e A

gend

a Te

achi

ng N

otes

1.

Ope

ning

A.

Rev

iew

of L

earn

ing

Targ

ets

and

Cri

teri

a fo

r Su

cces

s (1

0 m

inut

es)

2.

Wor

k Ti

me

A.

Eng

agin

g th

e W

rite

r: E

sper

anza

from

Beg

inni

ng to

E

nd (1

0 m

inut

es)

B.

End

of U

nit 2

Ass

essm

ent:

Rev

isin

g Pa

ragr

aphs

1

and

2, W

riti

ng P

arag

raph

3 (

35 m

inut

es)

3.

Clo

sing

and

Ass

essm

ent

A.

Self-

Ass

essm

ent (

5 m

inut

es)

4.

Hom

ewor

k

• B

ecau

se th

is is

an

on-d

eman

d as

sess

men

t, st

uden

ts w

ill n

eed

to c

ompl

ete

thei

r es

says

inde

pend

entl

y,

wit

hout

sup

port

.

Less

on V

ocab

ular

y M

ater

ials

info

rmat

ive,

exp

lana

tory

, par

agra

ph,

essa

y, c

ompa

res,

con

tras

ts, t

opic

se

nten

ce, b

ody,

con

clus

ion,

pho

enix

• E

sper

anza

Ris

ing

(boo

k; o

ne p

er s

tude

nt)

• St

uden

ts’ d

raft

Par

agra

phs

1 an

d 2

(fro

m L

esso

n 17

)

• A

ccor

dion

gra

phic

org

aniz

ers

(fro

m L

esso

ns 1

6 an

d 17

)

• C

ompa

re/C

ontr

ast E

ssay

Cri

tera

for

Succ

ess

anch

or c

hart

(fro

m L

esso

n 17

)

• E

nd o

f Uni

t 2 A

sses

smen

t: O

n-D

eman

d A

naly

tica

l Ess

ay a

bout

How

Esp

eran

za C

hang

es o

ver

Tim

e (o

ne p

er s

tude

nt)

• E

nd o

f Uni

t 2 A

sses

smen

t: O

n-D

eman

d A

naly

tica

l Ess

ay a

bout

How

Esp

eran

za C

hang

es o

ver

Tim

e (S

elf A

sses

smen

t)

• N

YS G

rade

s 4-

5 E

xpos

itor

y W

riti

ng E

valu

atio

n R

ubri

c (f

or T

each

er R

efer

ence

)

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Ass

essm

ent:

On-

Dem

and

Ana

lytic

al E

ssay

abo

ut H

ow E

sper

anza

Cha

nges

Ove

r Tim

e O

peni

ng

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

A. R

evie

w o

f Lea

rnin

g T

arge

ts a

nd

Cri

teri

a fo

r Su

cces

s (1

0 m

inu

tes)

• A

llow

any

rem

aini

ng g

roup

s th

at h

ave

not s

hare

d th

eir

two-

voic

e po

ems

to d

o so

. Aga

in h

ave

peer

s gi

ve s

peci

fic p

rais

e.

• R

evie

w to

day’

s le

arni

ng ta

rget

s an

d th

e C

ompa

re/C

ontr

ast E

ssay

Cri

teri

a fo

r Su

cces

s an

chor

cha

rt, c

reat

ed in

the

prev

ious

le

sson

. Ask

stu

dent

s if

ther

e ar

e an

y ad

diti

onal

cri

teri

a th

ey w

ant t

o ad

d to

the

char

t, ba

sed

on th

eir

para

grap

h dr

afts

and

the

peer

cri

tiqu

e th

ey r

ecei

ved

duri

ng L

esso

n 17

.

• Pr

ovid

e no

nlin

guis

tic

sym

bols

to

assi

st E

LLs

and

othe

r st

rugg

ling

read

ers

in m

akin

g co

nnec

tion

s w

ith

voca

bula

ry.

• Pr

ovid

ing

anch

or c

hart

s fo

r pr

oces

ses,

suc

h as

Cri

teri

a fo

r Su

cces

s, h

elps

all

lear

ners

un

ders

tand

exp

ecta

tion

s cl

earl

y.

Wor

k Ti

me

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

A. E

nga

gin

g th

e W

rite

r: E

sper

anza

fro

m B

egin

nin

g to

En

d (

10 m

inu

tes)

To h

elp

stud

ents

pre

pare

for

thei

r E

nd o

f Uni

t 2 A

sses

smen

t, as

k a

seri

es o

f que

stio

ns a

bout

how

Esp

eran

za c

hang

es o

ver

the

cour

se o

f the

nov

el. (

Cho

ose

to d

o th

is w

hole

gro

up o

r in

tria

ds.)

• R

emin

d st

uden

ts o

f the

ir d

iscu

ssio

n ab

out t

he p

hoen

ix fr

om th

e fin

al c

hapt

er. A

s qu

esti

ons

are

pose

d, a

sk s

ever

al s

tude

nts

to s

hare

thei

r th

inki

ng w

ith

the

grou

p. A

sk s

tude

nts

the

follo

win

g:

* “D

o yo

u th

ink

Esp

eran

za g

rew

and

dev

elop

ed a

s a

pers

on th

roug

hout

the

nove

l? S

uppo

rt y

our

answ

er w

ith

evid

ence

from

th

e no

vel.”

* “C

ompa

re: I

n w

hat w

ays

does

Esp

eran

za s

till

beha

ve th

e sa

me

at th

e en

d of

the

nove

l as

she

did

in th

e be

ginn

ing?

Giv

e ex

ampl

es.”

* “C

ontr

ast:

In

wha

t way

s is

Esp

eran

za d

iffer

ent a

t the

end

of t

he s

tory

than

she

was

in th

e be

ginn

ing?

Giv

e ex

ampl

es.”

* “W

hat i

s yo

ur o

pini

on o

f Esp

eran

za a

t the

end

of t

he n

ovel

?”

• E

LL la

ngua

ge a

cqui

siti

on is

fa

cilit

ated

by

inte

ract

ing

wit

h na

tive

sp

eake

rs o

f Eng

lish

who

pro

vide

m

odel

s of

lang

uage

.

• Fo

r st

uden

ts n

eedi

ng a

ddit

iona

l su

ppor

ts p

rodu

cing

lang

uage

, co

nsid

er o

ffer

ing

a se

nten

ce fr

ame,

se

nten

ce s

tart

er, o

r cl

oze

sent

ence

to

pro

vide

the

stru

ctur

e re

quir

ed.

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GR

AD

E 5:

MO

DU

LE 1

: UN

IT 2

: LES

SON

18

End

of U

nit 2

Ass

essm

ent:

On-

Dem

and

Ana

lytic

al E

ssay

abo

ut H

ow E

sper

anza

Cha

nges

Ove

r Tim

e W

ork

Tim

e (c

ontin

ued)

M

eetin

g St

uden

ts’ N

eeds

B. E

nd

of U

nit

2 A

sses

smen

t: R

evis

ing

Par

agra

ph

s 1

and

2, W

riti

ng

Par

agra

ph

3 (

35 m

inu

tes)

• Po

st th

e E

nd o

f Uni

t 2 A

sses

smen

t: O

n-D

eman

d A

naly

tica

l Ess

ay a

bout

How

Esp

eran

za C

hang

es o

ver

Tim

e fo

r al

l stu

dent

s to

see

. Rea

d th

roug

h th

e pr

ompt

and

cla

rify

any

term

s as

nec

essa

ry.

• Te

ll st

uden

ts th

at w

hile

they

are

rev

isin

g an

d w

riti

ng th

eir

final

par

agra

phs

com

pari

ng a

nd c

ontr

asti

ng E

sper

anza

’s

char

acte

r de

velo

pmen

t ove

r ti

me,

they

will

wan

t to

cons

ider

the

peer

cri

tiqu

e th

ey r

ecei

ved

duri

ng th

e pr

evio

us le

sson

. The

y sh

ould

als

o re

fer

to th

e an

chor

cha

rt: C

ompa

re/C

ontr

ast C

rite

ria

for

Succ

ess

(fro

m L

esso

n 17

); th

e sa

mpl

e pa

ragr

aph

on

char

t pap

er; t

he d

iscu

ssio

n at

the

begi

nnin

g of

cla

ss a

s w

ell a

s th

e di

scus

sion

abo

ut E

sper

anza

bei

ng c

ompa

red

to a

pho

enix

du

ring

the

prev

ious

less

on (s

tude

nt r

espo

nses

rec

orde

d on

cha

rt p

aper

); th

eir

evid

ence

flag

s, r

ecor

ding

form

s/no

te-c

atch

ers,

jo

urna

ls, a

nd o

ther

rel

evan

t anc

hor

char

ts a

bout

hum

an r

ight

s ch

alle

nges

and

cha

ract

er r

espo

nses

, as

tool

s to

sup

port

them

du

ring

the

final

wri

ting

pro

cess

.

• C

olle

ct s

tude

nts’

ess

ays

to fo

rmal

ly a

sses

s.

• C

onsi

der

prov

idin

g ex

tra

tim

e fo

r ta

sks

and

answ

erin

g qu

esti

ons

in

clas

s di

scus

sion

s. E

LLs

ofte

n ne

ed

mor

e ti

me

to p

roce

ss a

nd tr

ansl

ate

info

rmat

ion.

• O

ptio

nal e

xten

sion

: If a

ny s

tude

nts

finis

h ea

rly,

off

er th

e op

tion

to

crea

te a

n ac

com

pany

ing

illus

trat

ion

for

thei

r es

says

that

sho

ws

how

E

sper

anza

’s r

espo

nses

to h

uman

ri

ghts

cha

lleng

es c

hang

ed o

ver

the

cour

se o

f the

nov

el.

Clo

sing

and

Ass

essm

ent

Mee

ting

Stud

ents

’ Nee

ds

A. S

elf-

Ass

essm

ent (

5 m

inu

tes)

• A

sk s

tude

nts

to tu

rn to

thei

r E

nd o

f Uni

t 2 A

sses

smen

t (Se

lf-A

sses

smen

t). I

nvit

e th

em to

com

plet

e th

is s

elf-

asse

ssm

ent t

hen

then

han

d it

in w

ith

thei

r co

mpl

ete

essa

ys.

• A

sk s

tude

nts

to s

hare

wha

t the

y ce

lebr

ated

abo

ut th

eir

essa

ys o

n th

e se

lf-a

sses

smen

ts th

ey ju

st c

ompl

eted

. Mak

e su

re to

co

ngra

tula

te s

tude

nts

on c

ompl

etin

g th

e no

vel a

nd th

eir

anal

ysis

ess

ays

of E

sper

anza

as

a ch

arac

ter.

• R

emin

d st

uden

ts th

at in

Uni

t 3, t

hey

will

get

to w

rite

and

per

form

sce

nes

base

d on

som

e of

the

key

even

ts in

Esp

eran

za

Ris

ing.

• Fo

r st

uden

ts n

eedi

ng a

ddit

iona

l su

ppor

ts p

rodu

cing

lang

uage

, co

nsid

er o

ffer

ing

a se

nten

ce fr

ame,

se

nten

ce s

tart

er, o

r cl

oze

sent

ence

to

pro

vide

the

stru

ctur

e re

quir

ed.

Hom

ewor

k M

eetin

g St

uden

ts’ N

eeds

• N

one

Not

e: In

the

next

uni

t, st

uden

ts w

ill b

e le

arni

ng a

bout

and

par

ticip

atin

g in

Rea

ders

The

ater

. Fam

iliar

ize

your

self

with

wha

t R

eade

rs T

heat

er is

and

how

it is

use

d w

ith s

tude

nts

in th

e cl

assr

oom

(see

Uni

t 3 O

verv

iew

for

sugg

este

d re

sour

ces)

.

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GRADE 5: MODULE 1: UNIT 2: LESSON 18 End of Unit 2 Assessment:

On-Demand Analytical Essay about How Esperanza Changes over Time

Name:

Date:

Analytical Essay about How Esperanza Changes over Time

How does Esperanza change over time? Analyze how Esperanza responds to events early and late in the novel. Then compare her response to the two events. What do her responses show about her as a person? 1. Your first paragraph will be about a key event in Chapter 5: “Las Guayabas/Guavas,” when Esperanza is on the train to the United States. You have already planned and drafted this paragraph. Today, you can revise it to make it stronger. 2. Your second paragraph will be about the key event you chose from later in the novel. You have already planned and drafted this paragraph. Today, you can revise it to make it stronger. 3. Your third paragraph is NEW writing that you need to do ON YOUR OWN today. In this paragraph, you should compare (discuss similarities) and contrast (discuss differences). How does Esperanza respond to challenges differently at the end of the novel than she did in the beginning? Be sure to cite specific evidence from the text to support your analysis.

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Topic:

Detail:

Explain:

Detail:

Explain:

Conclusion:

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GRADE 5: MODULE 1: UNIT 2: LESSON 18 End of Unit 2 Assessment:

On-Demand Analytical Essay about How Esperanza Changes over Time (Self Assessment)

Name:

Date:

Criteria for Success and Self-Assessment Write three paragraphs. Each paragraph has a clear topic sentence. Each paragraph has at least two specific details. Each paragraph includes an explanation of the details. Each paragraph includes a conclusion explaining what this shows about Esperanza. Indent the first sentence of each paragraph. Write in complete sentences. Explain how Esperanza changes over time. 1. Write one “star”: something you are proud of and want to “celebrate” about your essay:

2. Write one “step”: something you think you need to work on or would like to improve to become a

strong independent writer:

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GR

AD

E 5:

MO

DU

LE 1

: UN

IT 1

: LES

SON

18

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k St

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