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Tips in News Writing

• Make the most important data as your lead.

• Be accurate in presenting facts.

• Names should be given in full when first mentioned. Thereafter, use Mr., Mrs., Miss or title and the surname.

• Attribute authority or source of news

•Avoid editorializing by not injecting your own opinion.

•Be objective. Present facts without bias.

•Make short sentences and brief paragraph. One-idea, one-sentence paragraph varying in length.

•Use simple words.

•Do not use first person pronoun, I.

•Prefer the active than passive voice of the verb.

•Numbers from 1 to 9 should be written in word and 10 above should be in numerical figure.

•Do not start the sentence with numerical figure; have it in word.

•Do not overload the first paragraph.

•Do not begin the lead with articles such as a, an, and the if possible.

Ang PAMATNUBAY

Ang PAMATNUBAY ay ang panimulang talata o pangungusap na naglalaman ng pinakamahahalagang bahagi ng balita.

“A LEAD LEAD should be like a miniskirt, short enough to be attractive, but long enough to cover the essentials.”

Mga Uri ng Pamatnubay

• KOMBENSYONAL O KABUUANG PAMATNUBAY – sinasagot nito ang mga tanong na 5Ws at 1H (What, Who, Where, When, Why and How)

• NOVELTY o MAKABAGONG PAMATNUBAY – mapangganyak na panimula upang pukawin ang interes ng mambabasa

1. What (ANO) Lead– karaniwang ginagamit

Isang lindol ang yumanig sa Timog Cotabato at Lalawigan ng Sarangani na ikinamatay ng tatlong katao at ikinasira ng mga bahay at mga gusali noong Marso 20 ng madaling araw.

2. Who (SINO) Lead

Shamcey Supsup, adjudged as 3rd Runner Up in 2011 Miss Universe, has brought honor and pride to the country recently.

A simple lady with exemplary scholastic record as known by many from her hometown in General Santos City, Shamcey became the talk-of-the-town after her impressive feat in the said pageant.

•Where (SAAN) Lead

Brazil was the host of the 2011 Miss Universe Pageant where another Filipina beauty emerged victorious as Shamcey Supsup made it to the top five.

Brazil ang nagsilbing kandungan ng isa na namang tagumpay ng mga Filipino nang tanghaling 3rd Runner Up ang pambato ng Pilipinas na si Shamcey Supsup sa 2011 Miss Universe Pageant.

•When (KAILAN) LeadSeptember 13 is indeed a day to remember for

many Filipinos. Pageant fanatics as well as the family, friends and avid supporters of Shamcey Supsup celebrated her victory with so much joy and pride.

Supsup brought honor to the country by making it to the top five in 2011 Miss Universe Pageant in Sao Paulo, Brazil.

September 13!Tunay ngang di-malilimutan ang araw na ito ng

maraming mga Filipino lalo na sa pamilya, mga kaibigan at taga-suporta ni Shamcey Supsup na naghatid ng isa na namang tagumpay sa bansa sa larangan ng pagandahan.

• Why (BAKIT) Lead

To stop all the qualms over the result of 2011 Miss Universe Pageant, Shamcey Supsup evoked her fellow Filipinos to be happy and contented with what she has achieved.

Upang matuldukan ang mga agam-agam sa resulta ng katatapos na 2011 Miss Universe Pageant, hinimok ni Shamcey Supsup ang kanyang mga kababayan na maging masaya at makuntento sa kanyang nasungkit na karangalan.

• How (PAANO) Lead By twitting, Lea Salonga has cleared out issues on the

kind of question she has thrown to Miss Angola Leila Lopez that made her win the crown of the recently concluded Miss Universe Pageant.

She said that … (Salonga says…)

Sa pamamagitan ng Twitter, tinuldukan ni Lea Salonga ang mga isyu na may kinalaman sa klase ng tanong na kanyang ibinato kay Miss Angola Leila Lopez na naging dahilan upang masungkit nito ang korona sa katatapos lamang na Miss Universe Pageant.

Kinds of Novelty Lead

1. Quotation Lead (Siniping sabi) – statement uttered by well-known person.

“You stole the presidency, not only once but twice.”

Shouted Susan Roces, widow of Fernando Poe Jr., during a gathering of opposition denouncing President Gloria Arroyo’s alleged vote rigging during the 2004 election.

2. Freak Lead (Panggulat) – uses typographical effects to enhance its appeal

Wanted: Filipino doctors and nurses.

This is the appeal of several government-owned hospitals, which face closure due to the exodus of many Filipino doctors and nurses abroad.

3. Contrast Lead (Paghahambing) – used to point out opposites or extremes

Four years ago, she fought for the installation of Gloria Macapagal- Arroyo as president of the Philippines through the EDSA II Revolution. Today, former President Corazon Aquino is calling for GMA’s resignation.

4. Staccato Lead - consists of a series of words or phrases, punctuated by periods, commas or dashes.

Neglected. Denuded. Abused. And abandoned. This is the real picture of our forest today.

Example of news article:TNHS undergoes face-lift

Much improvement in matters of physical development can be seen in Tacurong National High School these days aside from instruction. (Lead)

Major face-lift was made in most of the physical facilities of the school by way of repainting and repairs. Noticeably were the repainted front fence and gate, classroom and offices facades, and more functional comfort rooms.

These improvements were made possible through the assistance from the city government of Tacurong and donations from some stakeholders. (Body)

“I hope that these developments will inspire and encourage students to do well in their studies,” says Danilo S. Umadhay, school head. (Conclusion)

•Lead in Sports NewsLead in sports news should grab reader’s attention by

describing a scene, introducing a player, or using a quote.

Loud shouts of euphoric fans exploded after the referee whistled concurring the winning jump-shot of Blue Dragons’ ace forward Raz Reyes from down under on the last seconds of the final game snatching victory over Golden Thunders, 95-90.

Umalingawngaw ang malalakas na sigawan ng mga nagbubunying fans nang marinig ang pito ng referee matapos maibuslo mula sa ilalim ng ace forward ng Blue Dragon na si Raz Reyes ang bola sa mga huling segundo ng kampeonatong laro na nagpabagsak sa Golden Thunders, 95-90.

•Lead in EditorialStart your opening paragraph with a news peg and make sure to add opinion to imply your stand over the issue.

The Arroyo administration proudly touts the relatively high economic growth during its watch as if it were its crowning achievement.

Lubhang nakababahala ang ulat ng DepEd na isa sa bawat sampung Filipino ay ‘functionally illiterate. Ganito na ba kababa ang kalidad ng edukasyon sa Pilipinas?

Gawain: Sumulat ng Pamatnubay na Kombensyonal

Ano: Nanganganib na mabura ang Maynila at iba pang mga lunsod sa mundo

Sino: Ayon sa isang eksperto

Saan: Sa isang pagpupulong sa Estados Unidos

Kailan: kahapon

Bakit: Dahil sa mabilis na pagtaas ng lebel ng dagat dulot ng global warming

Paano: Sa pagkatunaw ng mga yelo sa Hilaga at Timog Polo, lalo pang tataas ang lebel ng dagat

Mga Sagot:Pamatnubay na Ano

Nanganganib na mabura ang Maynila at iba pang mga lunsod sa mundo ayon sa isang eksperto kahapon sa pagpupulong na ginanap sa Estados Unidos.

Pamatnubay na SinoIsang eksperto ang nagsabi kahapon sa

pagpupulong na ginanap sa Estados Unidos na nanganganib na mabura ang Maynila at iba pang lunsod sa mundo.

Pamatnubay na Saan:Sa pagpupulong na ginanap kahapon sa

Estados Unidos, sinabi ng isang eksperto na nanganganib mabura ang Maynila at iba pang mga lunsod sa mundo.

Pamatnubay na Kailan:Kahapon, sa isang pagpupulong na

ginanap sa Estados Unidos, sinabi ng isang eksperto na nanganganib na mabura ang Maynila at iba pang mga lunsod sa mundo.

Pamatnubay na Bakit:Sanhi ng mabilis na pagtaas ng lebel ng

tubig ng dagat dulot ng global warming, nanganganib na mabura ang Maynila at iba pang mga lunsod sa mundo ayon sa isang eksperto.

Pamatnubay na Paano:Sa patuloy na pagkatunaw ng mga yelo sa

Hilaga at Timog Polo dulot ng global warming, lalo pang tataas ang lebel ng dagat na ikabubura ng Maynila at iba pang mga lungsod sa mundo ayon sa isang eksperto.

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A - At least 97 people were killed with hundreds more injured from the quake that struck Bohol, Cebu and other parts of Visayas and Mindanao early Tuesday morning, according to the National Disaster Risk Reduction and Management Council’s report.

A - At least 97 people were killed with hundreds more injured from the quake that struck Bohol, Cebu and other parts of Visayas and Mindanao early Tuesday morning, according to the National Disaster Risk Reduction and Management Council’s report.

B - At least 400,000 families have been affected while 33 evacuation sites have been established in Bohol, according to the Department of Social Welfare and Development (DSWD).

B - At least 400,000 families have been affected while 33 evacuation sites have been established in Bohol, according to the Department of Social Welfare and Development (DSWD).

C - “America has always stood by the Philippines in times of need and we do so now,” it said.

C - “America has always stood by the Philippines in times of need and we do so now,” it said.

D - The United States Embassy in the Philippines extended its condolences to the families of the victims of the magnitude 7.2 earthquake in Bohol.

D - The United States Embassy in the Philippines extended its condolences to the families of the victims of the magnitude 7.2 earthquake in Bohol.

E - “The US extends our deepest condolences for the tragic loss of life and injuries as well as damage caused by the earthquake in Bohol, Philippines,” the US embassy said in a statement.

E - “The US extends our deepest condolences for the tragic loss of life and injuries as well as damage caused by the earthquake in Bohol, Philippines,” the US embassy said in a statement.

A - At least 97 people were killed with hundreds more injured from the quake that struck Bohol, Cebu and other parts of Visayas and Mindanao early Tuesday morning, according to the National Disaster Risk Reduction and Management Council’s report.

A - At least 97 people were killed with hundreds more injured from the quake that struck Bohol, Cebu and other parts of Visayas and Mindanao early Tuesday morning, according to the National Disaster Risk Reduction and Management Council’s report.

B - At least 400,000 families have been affected while 33 evacuation sites have been established in Bohol, according to the Department of Social Welfare and Development (DSWD).

B - At least 400,000 families have been affected while 33 evacuation sites have been established in Bohol, according to the Department of Social Welfare and Development (DSWD).

C - “America has always stood by the Philippines in times of need and we do so now,” it said.

C - “America has always stood by the Philippines in times of need and we do so now,” it said.

D - The United States Embassy in the Philippines extended its condolences to the families of the victims of the magnitude 7.2 earthquake in Bohol.

D - The United States Embassy in the Philippines extended its condolences to the families of the victims of the magnitude 7.2 earthquake in Bohol.

E - “The US extends our deepest condolences for the tragic loss of life and injuries as well as damage caused by the earthquake in Bohol, Philippines,” the US embassy said in a statement.

E - “The US extends our deepest condolences for the tragic loss of life and injuries as well as damage caused by the earthquake in Bohol, Philippines,” the US embassy said in a statement.

HEADLINE WRITING (Pag-uulo ng Balita)

Tips in Writing a good Headline• Tell and sell the story.• Aim for complete thought. • Be accurate.• Use the active voice of the verb if possible.

Use passive voice only if the subject is the receiver of the action.

• Use kicker if the Headline is too long

Mga Dapat Tandaan sa Pag-uulo ng Balita• Basahin ang istorya upang makuha ang

pangkalahatang kaisipan.• Ang mga salitang gagamitin sa pag-uulo ay

karaniwang makikita sa pamatnubay. Gumamit ng maiikling salita.

• Huwag maglagay ng tuldok sa katapusan ng ulo ng balita. Iwasang gumamit ng mga panipi ( “Talakudong“).

• Dapat may simuno at pandiwa ang ulo ng balita. Simulan sa simuno at huwag sa pandiwa.

• Huwag paghiwalayin ang mga tambalan o mga salitang magkakaugnay o ang pang-ukol sa layon.

• Mali: (1) Bayaning taxidriver, pinarangalan

Tama: Bayaning taxi driver, pinarangalan

• Gamitin ang kuwit (,) bilang pamalit sa at. Mali: P-noy at Roxas magkasama sa US state visit

• Tama: P-noy, Roxas, magkasama sa US state visit

• Huwag magtapos sa pang-angkop, pantukoy o pang-ugnay sa dulo ng unang linya.

• Mali: TNHS, magbubukas ng ekstensyon sa Upper Katungal

Activits vigil for murdered pal

• Tama: TNHS, magbubukas ng ekstensyon sa Upper Katungal

Activists hold vigil for murdered pal

• Mga paraan ng paggamit ng tahasang sabi sa ulo.

(1) Ceasefire muna sa bangayan sa bagong buwis - Pimentel (2) Pimentel: Ceasefire muna sa bangayan sa bagong buwis (3) Ceasefire muna sa bangayan sa bagong buwis, ayon kay Pimentel

• Huwag bumanggit ng pangalan maliban kung ang tao ay kilala

Mali: Bilbao, kampeon sa Natl PopDev QuizTama: Estudyanteng Metrian, kampeon sa Natl PopDev Quiz• Iwasan ang opinyon sa ulo ng balitaMali: Red Python, naglaro nang mahusay sa balibol• Gumamit ng makatawag-pansing pandiwaMahina: Alaska, tinalo ng SMB, 74-103Mabisa: Alaska, nilasing ng SMB, 74-103

Never begin headline with a verb

Don’t use names unless well-known

Common Errors:Wooden Head: “To hold UN Day” (Verb)Label Head: “Talakudong Festival!” Mandatory Head: “Conducts Presscon” 2014 CTAA Meet

Freshman grabs gold in athletics

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