Peer Feedback

Draft written by: _________________________________________Draft read by: ___________________________________________

After carefully reading your partner’s essay, answer the following questions:

1. Copy the writer’s man idea. Is it clear? If not, please tell the writer here.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

2. Write the main ideas/topic sentences of each paragraph in the body? Are they stated clearly? If not, please tell the writer here.

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3. Answer YES or NO

Do the paragraphs in the body support the main idea/ thesis? _____

Do they give enough supporting ideas, examples? _____

Which paragraphs need more development? _____________________________________________________________________

4. What information could the writer add to strengthen body paragraphs?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

5. Is there an introduction and conclusion? _____

6. Any other comments?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Adapter from Turkenit (1995)