PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION I completely disagree with the argument that the public transportation will no longer be existing in the future because it has positive impact on this world. The greatest advantage of traveling by train or bus is financial financially benefit profitable . Apart from private cars, public transport transportation costs almost no money for buying, insurance, tax, and parking as well. Besides, it also offers significant environmental advantages that contribute to a better quality of life. The mass transit could reduce the number of vehicles in the street which causes traffic jam in rush hour. Moreover, traveling by bus or train can reduce pollution because the more people using public
I completely disagree with the argument that the public transportation will no longer be existing in the future because it has positive impact on this world. The greatest advantage of traveling by train or bus is financialfinancially benefitprofitable. Apart from private cars, public transport transportation costs almost no money for buying, insurance, tax, and parking as well. Besides, it also offers significant environmental advantages that contribute to a better quality of life. The mass transit could reduce the number of vehicles in the street which causes traffic jam in rush hour. Moreover, traveling by bus or train can reduce pollution because the more people using public transportbecause that time more people will be using public transpiration, the fewer cars on the road is the great benefit which because more cars are is the major factor for causing the air pollution. Last but not least, using this mean of transport would be less stress. Rather than driving in traffic or wasting time looking for an elusive car park, public transport passengers can relax and listen to music, play computer video games, read a book or even sleeptaking a nap. Although car is convenient to travel, I strongly believe
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
You can use prespective or aspect or point of view instead of argument.
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
Not really sleep ,, you can use nap ,, taking a nap
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
Better to say video games ,, cuz mmm you are using phone or ipad …etc for playing a game not just computer and in public transportations phone games and tablet games are more popular and used so use video games
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
Not tress ……….. stress
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
Because that time more people will be using public transportation
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
Transport is a verb change it to the noun transportation
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
I changed financial to financially ,,, cuz financially is adverb that describe the travelling.
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
I think you should use preposition to instead of on ,, I don’t think on is wrong here but I believe to is better here :P
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
Instead of impact you can use profit or advantage it is better .
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
Exist existing
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
Use be ,, this feature Is not really exist in Vietnamese it exist as form of la,,, but you should use it here to be exist or not to be exist ,,,, and you are talking about future continuous here so you should use this structure = will + be + v,ing …. Cuz you are talking about something that will be happening in the future will usually used for making decision at the time of the speaking.
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
kamo kamo, 11/04/15,
Transport = transportation make it noun
that public transportation cannot be replaced because of huge benefits it brings to our life.
