Surverys and Peer Feedback

Name Elliot

Gender Male

Age 18

Could it be improved? Yes but there’s a limit to what you can achieve

How could it be improved? Include big name celebrities

Why would it be improved? Possibly make it less sporty and more casual

Is the target audience appropriate? Yes

How long should it be? 45-60 seconds

Name Georgina

Gender Female

Age 17

Could it be improved? It’s been done before try and do something different and out of the box.

How could it be improved? By being creative so your audience remember it

Why would it be improved? To make it noticeable and stand out

Is the target audience appropriate? The target audience is to wide and should be narrowed down

How long should it be? 45 seconds

Name Josh

Gender Male

Age 18

Could it be improved? Possibly

How could it be improved? Celebrity endorsement

Why would it be improved? To make it more appealing more appealing to viewers

Is the target audience appropriate? Yes

How long should it be? 60-90 seconds

Name Freddie

Gender Male

Age 19

Could it be improved? Add strobe lights and more colours.

How could it be improved? Above

Why would it be improved? Above above

Is the target audience appropriate? I think it should be 15-25 year olds

How long should it be? 40 seconds