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Interim Online ReviewUnit 4: Storytelling- Presentation 1

2/14/2012

Joey Ku

y Story Premise

y Story Log line

y Story Outline

y Script

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Contents:

Story Premise: 3

Story log line: 3

Story outline: 3

Script: 4

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Story Premise:

A pompous fish goes on to experience the new Elevator of Dreams in a luxurious hotel, but all

is revealed when he makes his wish that the elevator is the fishermans trap for sealing the

fishs fate.

Story Log Line:

A pompous fish tries out The Elevator of Dreams in a luxurious hotel af ter a status battle

with a smaller fish, but his dreams are shattered when he sees that the elevator of dreams is the

elevator of his nightmares as he becomes the fishermans dinner.

Story outline:

Scene 1:

A group of fish is huddled around together causing a big commotion. Footsteps are heard in thebackground and the group disperses to form a pathway for the footsteps which belongs to a

bulky large fish. As the bulky large fish makes his way to where the path ends, he sees a sign that

reads, The elevator of dreams. Before he reaches the button, a cough is heard nearby and as

the bulky fish looks down it is revealed to be a small upper class fish waiting for his turn on the

elevator. The smaller fish teases the bulky fish which this angers the bulky fish. He attempts to

get rid of the small fish by either pushing him to the side or flicking him away. All the bulky fishs

attempts fail until he hangs the small fish on top of a high coat hanger using his neck collar.

Feeling as the victor the bulky fish enters the elevator.

Scene 2:

Inside the elevator, the fish begins to comb his hair, whiten his teeth and perfecting his smile as

he daydreams of his dream of being surrounded by female fishes pampering him. A sound of a

bell is heard as the elevator begins to reach a halt; the fish begins to get excited over his dream

coming true as the doors begin to open with bright lights.

Scene 3:

The fish begins to kiss forward only to realise that hes kissing something bigger than him. The

fish opens an eyelid to see his dream girl only to scream in horror. He runs around the

elevator only realising that it is a trap and at the end of this is a fishing rod held by a fishermansitting on his deckchair. The scene ends as manic laughter and cries of horror are heard as the

scene fades out to end.

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Script:

Scene 1:

Ext- Hotel Escalator

a group of fish huddled together over something that¶s causing a

big stir. Footsteps are heard walking into the scene, the group

gasps and freezes as they glance over to look where the footsteps

are coming from. A pair of fish feet is seen walking into the

scene and is revealed to be a bulky fish which all the other

fishes are scared of him. As he walks further into the scene, his

path is opened in front as the scared fishes make way for him

(apart from a few one or two fishes who stood in his way to which

he simply pushes them to one side) to reveal a luxurious looking

elevator. He sees the poster beside the elevator that reads,

³EXPERIENCE THE NEW ELEVATOR OF DREAMS!! TRY IT TODAY AND IT CANMAKE YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE!!´ He reaches for the button but gets

interrupted by a cough. He looks down to see a small but well

dressed upper class fish who¶s waiting their turn to get into the

escalator. The small fish is seen with the bulky fish behind him

as the small fish doesn¶t appeared to be scared of the bulky one

that the small fish turns round and does a raspberry on the bulky

fish. Being irritated by this, the bulky fish pushes the small

fish to the side and begins to step forward. The small fish

quickly returns, blocking the bulky fish¶s way, he flicks the

small fish away and begins to step forward. Again the smaller

fish somehow returns quickly but blocks the bulky fish. Becomingand frustrated by this, the bulky fish grabs the smaller fish and

hangs him from his collar on the top of a high coat hanger.

With the smaller fish having no way of getting down, feeling as

the victor and proud the bulky fish goes and presses the

escalator button. Fascinated by this new thingymajiggy he steps

in and presses the big ³glorious´ gold button. The doors close

slowly and begin to take him up to his destination of dreams.

Scene 2:

INT- Escalator

The fish begins to make himself look dashing by combing his hair,

teeth whitening as he daydreams of his dream of being with female

fishes surrounding over him and cooing him. However his daydreams

get shortly interrupted when the sound of the elevator bell rings

as it arrives at his destination. With eager of excitement and

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anticipation hoping that his dreams have come true and that the

females are waiting for him on the other side, the bulky begins

to go out with a kiss as the doors slowly opens with bright

light..

Scene 3:

EXT: Fisherman¶s port

The kiss goes forward- only to kiss something that has bigger

lips. He opens an eyelid to see who his dream come true to be

only to scream in horror to see that it is a face! He frantically

looks around his elevator of dreams only to realise that it is

hanging from a fishing rod with the fisherman holding the end of

the rod laughing manically while sitting on a deck chair. Cries

of horror and manic laughter are heard as the scene begins to

ends with a fade out.

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