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page 1 Narrative Time Travel Stimulus 5 Planning notes 6 Final Written Work 7 How a Creature Came to Be Stimulus 8 Planning notes 9 Final Written Work 10 The Fairground Stimulus 11 Planning notes 12 Final Written Work 13 Play Script The Argument Stimulus 14 Planning notes 15 Final Written Work 16 The Birthday Party Stimulus 17 Planning notes 18 Final Written Work 19 Instructions Directions From the School Gate to Your Table Stimulus 20 Planning notes 21 Final Written Work 22 How to Play a Favourite Game Stimulus 23 Planning notes 24 Final Written Work 25 Reports The Inter-School Sports Competition Stimulus 26 Planning notes 27 Final Written Work 28 School Book Day Stimulus 29 Planning notes 30 Final Written Work 31 Explanation School Rules Stimulus 32 Planning notes 33 Final Written Work 34 A Day in the Life of a Zoo Keeper Stimulus 35 Planning notes 36 Final Written Work 37 Persuasion Join Our Club Stimulus 38 Planning notes 39 Final Written Work 40 The Electric Skateboard Stimulus 41 Planning notes 42 Final Written Work 43 Poetry Who Am I? Stimulus 44 Planning notes 45 Final Written Work 46 Sports Day Stimulus 47 Planning notes 48 Final Written Work 49 Introduction This book of ‘Independent Writing Activities’ covers the genres for the 9 to 10 year old age group. It has been written to the UK National Strategy Primary Framework for Literacy. It contains at least two independent writing activities for each genre type and is an ideal vehicle for assessing pupil progress in writing when used with the different Levels found in the Writing Assessment Guidelines, which accompany the Primary Framework for Literacy. (The appropriate levels for this age group have been reproduced under licence at the beginning of this book.) The author has also used this approach successfully with children to embed the features of each genre. This was achieved by re-visiting a previously studied genre later in the term, so that the children practised it once again. This ensured that the features of that particular type of writing remained firmly embedded in the children’s memory. Thus when the children were tested or came to write in that particular genre at a later date it was not just a distant memory. There are six similar books in this series covering the work of pupils from Year 1 through to Year 6 (ages 5 to 11). PDF or Download versions are also available of these books for use on Interactive Whiteboards. Topical Resources publishes a range of Educational Materials for use in Primary Schools and Pre-School Nurseries and Playgroups. Copyright © 2009 Heather Bell First Published September 2009. ISBN: 978-1-907269-01-1 Illustrated by John Hutchinson, Art Works, Fairhaven, 69 Worden Lane, Leyland, Preston Designed by Paul Sealey, PS3 Creative, 3 Wentworth Drive, Thornton, Lancashire. Printed in the UK for ‘Topical Resources’ by T. Snape and Co Ltd., Boltons Court, Preston, Lancashire. For the latest catalogue Tel 01772 863158 Fax 01772 866153 email: [email protected] Visit our Website at: www.topical-resources.co.uk Index Year 5 - Independent Writing Activities

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NarrativeTime TravelStimulus 5Planning notes 6Final Written Work 7

How a Creature Came to BeStimulus 8Planning notes 9Final Written Work 10

The FairgroundStimulus 11Planning notes 12Final Written Work 13

Play ScriptThe ArgumentStimulus 14Planning notes 15Final Written Work 16

The Birthday PartyStimulus 17Planning notes 18Final Written Work 19

InstructionsDirections From the SchoolGate to Your TableStimulus 20Planning notes 21Final Written Work 22

How to Play a Favourite GameStimulus 23Planning notes 24Final Written Work 25

ReportsThe Inter-School SportsCompetitionStimulus 26Planning notes 27Final Written Work 28

School Book DayStimulus 29Planning notes 30Final Written Work 31

ExplanationSchool RulesStimulus 32Planning notes 33Final Written Work 34

A Day in the Life of a Zoo KeeperStimulus 35Planning notes 36Final Written Work 37

PersuasionJoin Our ClubStimulus 38Planning notes 39Final Written Work 40

The Electric SkateboardStimulus 41Planning notes 42Final Written Work 43

PoetryWho Am I?Stimulus 44Planning notes 45Final Written Work 46

Sports DayStimulus 47Planning notes 48Final Written Work 49

IntroductionThis book of ‘Independent WritingActivities’ covers the genres for the9 to 10 year old age group. It hasbeen written to the UK NationalStrategy Primary Framework forLiteracy.

It contains at least two independentwriting activities for each genre typeand is an ideal vehicle for assessingpupil progress in writing when usedwith the different Levels found in theWriting Assessment Guidelines,which accompany the PrimaryFramework for Literacy. (Theappropriate levels for this age grouphave been reproduced under licenceat the beginning of this book.)

The author has also used thisapproach successfully with childrento embed the features of each genre.This was achieved by re-visiting apreviously studied genre later in theterm, so that the children practised itonce again. This ensured that thefeatures of that particular type ofwriting remained firmly embedded inthe children’s memory. Thus whenthe children were tested or came towrite in that particular genre at a laterdate it was not just a distant memory.

There are six similar books in thisseries covering the work of pupilsfrom Year 1 through to Year 6 (ages5 to 11). PDF or Download versionsare also available of these books foruse on Interactive Whiteboards.

Topical Resources publishes a range ofEducational Materials for use in PrimarySchools and Pre-School Nurseries andPlaygroups.

Copyright © 2009 Heather BellFirst Published September 2009.ISBN: 978-1-907269-01-1

Illustrated by John Hutchinson,Art Works, Fairhaven, 69 Worden Lane,Leyland, Preston

Designed by Paul Sealey, PS3 Creative,3 Wentworth Drive, Thornton, Lancashire.

Printed in the UK for ‘Topical Resources’by T. Snape and Co Ltd., Boltons Court,Preston, Lancashire.

For the latest catalogueTel 01772 863158Fax 01772 866153email: [email protected]

Visit our Website at:www.topical-resources.co.uk

Index

Year 5 - Independent Writing Activities

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Task

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TTiimmee TTrraavveellOne evening you go to your computer and accidentally press one ofthe keys you have never pressed before. Suddenly you aretransported into a different time!

Your task is to write about where you travel to, what the place is like, who you meetand how you manage to get home again.

Year 5 Narrative Planning Notes

How do you manage to get back home?

Name Date

Time Travel

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Who do you meet? What are they like?

What is the place you visit like?

Where did you travel to and what form did your transport/journey take? (Remember:You can travel back or forwards in time.)

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Final Written WorkYear 5 Narrative

Name Date

Time Travel

Year 5 Narrative Stimulus

Task

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How the Lion Got His ManeThere were once two lion cubs, Tika (a girl) and Bruno (a boy). Their mother warnedthem not to go near the fuzzy wuzzy bush. If you did, the sticky fuzzy wuzzies wouldstick all over you and never come off.

Tika obeyed her mother. Bruno was more adventurous. He didn’t believe his mother’sstory, and went to see for himself. Well you can guess what happened – the fuzzywuzzies stuck to his head! No matter how much he rolled around they would not comeoff. That is how the lion got his mane!

Your task is to think of an animal that you are familiar with e.g. a pet, a zoo animal, ananimal you have seen in the wild etc. Make up a story to explain how your chosen animalobtained a particular feature that helps to identify them.

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Creature HHooww aa

Year 5 Narrative Planning Notes

Name Date

Text

How a Creature Came to Be

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How is the story resolved? Does he/she live happily now? Do other creatures accept or reject the changes?

What happens to the creature so that it gains its own distinguishing feature?

In the opening paragraph you will introduce the creature - think about what it lookslike and how it feels about itself.

Which creature is involved and what is its main distinguishing feature?

Where is the story set?

Final Written WorkYear 5 Narrative

How a Creature Came to Be

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Name Date

Year 5 Narrative Stimulus

Task

Your task is to write the story of how John and Mary manage to sneak out and visit thefairground without their parents knowing.

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This story is set in Victorian times. John and Mary have wealthy but very strictparents who believe children should spend their time reading and learning and certainlynot playing! A fairground visits their town and John and Mary are longing to go along.Their parents are strongly set against it. Here is the conversation that takes placebetween the children and their parents:

John and Mary run excitedly into the parlour.“Mother, Father, the fairground has arrived!” exclaimed John.“Might we be permitted to attend?” Mary pleaded. “All the other children in the townwill be going.”“Silence!” commanded their father, his stern face showing his great displeasure. “You will not attend and that is final! My children do not have time to waste on suchfrivolities. You have your books and so much to learn!”

The Fairground

Year 5 Narrative Planning Notes

On their return, do their parents catch them? How is the story resolved?

What happens at the fairground? What do they see? Who do they meet?

How do the children manage to leave the house secretly? How does the story begin?

Characters:Mother:___________________________________________________________Father:____________________________________________________________John:_____________________________________________________________Mary:_____________________________________________________________

Story Setting: Think about what a wealthy Victorian house would look like. Think aboutthe different rides, sounds and smells of the fairground.

Name Date

The Fairground

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Final Written WorkYear 5 Narrative

Name Date

The Fairground

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Year 5 Play Script Stimulus

Task

Your task is to continue the argument between Emma and her parents.

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(Emma and Mum are in the kitchen.)Emma: Mum! Anna and Henna are going to town on Saturday. They asked if I could go

too. Is that O.K.?

(Mum has a concerned look on her face.)Mum: I don’t think so dear, you’re much too young.

(Emma pleads.)Emma: But Mum, I’ll be fine.

(Dad enters the room.)Dad: What are you two talking about?

A group of friends, who are slightly older than you, have asked if you can come to townon Saturday. Your parents are not keen for you to go. Continue the play script followingon from the box below.

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Arguments against Emma going to town:

Arguments for Emma going to town:

Name Date

The ArgumentThink about the characters in the play. What are they like?

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Emma:

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Final Written Work

The Argument

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(Emma and Mum are in the kitchen.)Emma: Mum! Anna and Henna are going to town on Saturday. They asked if I could go

too. Is that O.K.?

(Mum has a concerned look on her face.)Mum: I don’t think so dear, you’re much too young.

(Emma pleads.)Emma: But Mum, I’ll be fine.

(Dad enters the room.)Dad: What are you two talking about?

Year 5 Play Script

Name Date

StimulusYear 5 Play Script

Three friends are planning a party to celebrate one of their birthdays.The beginning of the conversation is in the box below:

(Sophie, Sam and Sejal are having a conversation in the playground at school.)

Sophie: (Excitedly) It’s only two weeks until my birthday! I can’t wait!

Sam: What are you going to do to celebrate?

Sophie: Mum says I can have a party.

Sejal: Fantastic. Who is coming?

Sam: What will we do at the party?

Task

Your task is to write a play script continuing the conversation between the friends,explaining what will take place at the birthday party.

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The Birthday Party

Name Date

The Birthday Party

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Planning Notes

What will the children do at the party?

Who else will be there? What will they wear? Will they bring presents?

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Sam:

Sejal:

Year 5 Play Script

Play Script Final Written WorkYear 5 Play Script

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Name Date

(Sophie, Sam and Sejal are having a conversation in the playground at school.)

Sophie: (Excitedly) It’s only two weeks until my birthday! I can’t wait!

Sam: What are you going to do to celebrate?

Sophie: Mum says I can have a party.

Sejal: Fantastic. Who is coming?

Sam: What will we do at the party?

The Birthday Party

Year 5 Instructions Stimulus

Task

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As part of your Geography mapping topic your teacher has asked you to write a set ofdetailed instructions telling exactly how to get from the school gate to your table.

Your task is to write a set of exact instructions that a stranger could follow to end upat your seat at your classroom table. Remember, the stranger does not know anythingabout your school.

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Year 5 Instructions Planning Notes

Details you would include on a simple map to go with these instructions.

Step by step details:

Aim of your instructions:

Name Date

Directions From the School Gate to Your TableClear title for your instructions:

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Final Written Work

Directions From the School Gate to Your Table

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Year 5 Instructions

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StimulusYear 5 Instructions

How to Play aFavourite Game

Your school has been asked to make a book of instructions for children’s favouritegames. These might be games you play at home or school. It could be a game you enjoyplaying with your friends. It must not be a game you play on the computer.

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Task

Your task is to write a set of exact instructions to explain how to play your favouritegame. Remember, the person who will be reading your instructions will never haveplayed this game before.

Planning NotesYear 5 Instructions

Step by step details:

What is the aim of the game?

Equipment needed:

Title/Heading of a game that is very familiar to you:

Name Date

How to Play a Favourite Game

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Instructions

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Final Written Work

Name Date

Year 5 Instructions

How to Play a Favourite Game

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Year 5 Reports Stimulus

Task

The Inter-SchoolSports Competition

Your school has taken part in an Inter-Schools Sports Competition. Your teacher hasasked you to write a report about the day for the school magazine.

Your task is to write a report to include information about the different schoolstaking part, what happened at each event and the outcome of the competition.

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Year 5 Reports Planning Notes

Event winners and the outcome of the competition.

Description of each event:

Which schools took part?

Name Date

The Inter-School Sports CompetitionTitle:

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Final Written Work

The Inter-School Sports Competition

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Year 5 Reports

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StimulusYear 5 Reports

School Book DayYour school recently took part in a school book day in which the pupilsdressed up as characters from fiction, had a visit from an author andmade some special books of their own.

Task

Your task is to write a report for the school governors explaining what had taken placeduring the day and how the children reacted to the event.

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Planning Notes

Name Date

Reactions to the day:

Making special books:

Visit from the author:

The different characters the children dressed as:

Title:

School Book Day

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Year 5 Reports

Reports

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Final Written Work

Name Date

Year 5 Reports

School Book Day

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Year 5 Explanation Stimulus

Task

SScchhooooll RRuulleessA new child has joined your class and you have been given the job ofhelping them settle in. It would be useful for them to know the schoolrules and the reasons for them.

Your task is to write an explanation of the school rules and the reasons for them.When you are writing think about: • classsroom rules• playground rules• lunchtime rulesRemember to give clear reasons for these rules.

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Year 5 Explanation Planning Notes

Concluding paragraph:

Name Date

School Rules

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Lunchtime rules and reasons for them:

Playground rules and reasons for them:

Classroom rules and reasons for them:

Introduction welcoming the new pupil to school:

Final Written Work

School Rules

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Year 5 Explanation

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StimulusYear 5 Explanation

Here is the timetable for a Zoo Keeper in charge of the seals:

7.00 - 8.00 Food preparation in the Zoo kitchen.

8.00 - 9.00 Feeding the seals and checking they are healthy.

9.00 - 10.00 Cleaning the area surrounding the pool.

10.00 - 10.30 Break

10.30 - 12.00 Accompanying the vet on his rounds.

12.00 - 1.00 Lunch

1.00 - 2.00 Preparation of food and equipment for display to visitors.

2.00 - 3.00 Display for visitors

3.00 - 4.00 Clearing up after visitors and making final checks on the animals.

Task

Your task is to use the information above to write a clear explanation of a zookeeper’sday looking after an animal of your choice.

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Planning Notes

Name Date

Conclusion:

Preparation for display and meeting visitors:

Helping the vet to check the animals:

Food preparation, feeding and cleaning:

Introduction:

Title:

A Day in the Life of a Zoo Keeper

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Year 5 Explanation

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Final Written Work

Name Date

Year 5 Explanation

A Day in the Life of a Zoo Keeper

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Year 5 Persuasion Stimulus

Task

Join Our ClubYou have decided to set up a new Youth Club for children aged 7 to 11. Activitiescould include sport, craft, competitions and visits.

Your task is to write a leaflet to parents to persuade them to allow their children tojoin your club. Remember, parents will want to make sure their children are safe andthe activities are of educational value as well as being fun. Make your leaflet aspersuasive as possible.

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PersuasionYear 5 Persuasion Planning Notes

Name Date

Collect words and phrases to help you persuade parents that this is a good idea.

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Activities for the children to do:

Club– when and where? Safety measures:

Cost and how it isorganised:

What makes it fun?

Join Our Club

Final Written Work

Join Our Club

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Year 5 Persuasion

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StimulusYear 5 Persuasion

Skateboard

Task

Your task is to write a persuasive article for a parent’s magazine explaining thefunctions and advantages of the electric skateboard. You need to make it sound like the best Christmas present any child could ever want!

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You have been asked to promote a new type of skateboard.It is powered by an electric motor and has rechargeablebatteries. It is operated from a wireless hand controller.

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Planning Notes

Name Date

Collect words and phrases to help you persuade parents to buy this skateboard.

Main features of the electric skateboard:

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What are its uses? How is it unique?

Why is it fun? Cost

and maintenance?

Year 5 Persuasion

The Electric Skateboard

Persuasion

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Final Written Work

Name Date

Year 5 Persuasion

The Electric Skateboard

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Year 5 Poetry Stimulus

Task

Your task is to write a poem in the same style about either a fictional character or acelebrity. It could be about a character from a book or film. It could be a celebrityfrom sport, the music industry, the film industry or even the Royal family.

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Here is a poem using metaphors about James Bond.

He is a bar of dark chocolate,A smooth black cat’s coat,An exotic fruit cocktail,A silver Porsche disappearing into the distance.He is a plate of caviar,A blade on a knife,A frothy cappuccino,A piece of black silk.He is a midnight alarm,A tiger disguised as a pussycat,A jet plane,A perfect day.

Who Am I?

PoetryYear 5 Poetry Planning Notes

Name Date

Think about the above and collect interesting metaphors.

Who Am I?

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Choice of character:

What do they do? What are theyfamous for?

What do they look like?

What is theircharacter like?

Final Written Work

Who Am I?

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Year 5 Poetry

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StimulusYear 5 Poetry

Task

Sports DayHere is a poem about running a race on sports day.

Heart beats,Body still,Legs stretched,Muscles tense.Gun fires,Race begins,Heart races,Body pounds.Someone passes,Throat is dry,Legs are moving,Onward on!Out in front,Must keep going,Finish in sight,Chest aches.Throat dry,One more push,Almost there,Opposition closer.End looms,Final burst,Without warning,It is over!

By Sam (aged 10)

Task

Your task is to write a poem in the same style about a sporting activity e.g. a swimming race, a cross-country run, a relay race or another sport of your choice.

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Planning Notes

Name Date

Poem title:

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What takes placeduring the event?

How does theactivity begin?

Make a collection of interesting wordsor phrases to use in your poem.

How do you feel atdifferent stages of the event?

Year 5 Poetry

Sports Day

Poetry

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Final Written Work

Name Date

Year 5 Poetry

Sports Day

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